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Tsuji Ayano - Become the Wind

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Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

  • • Sample Volume: 5
    • You should make another diff
    • Delete the osb file, then "Full submission"
    • Remove countdown

[Easy]

  • • 00:54:007 (1) - End this slider here 00:54:930 (white tick) and move this circle 00:54:930 (2) here 00:55:391 (white tick)
    • 00:55:853 (3) - End this slider here 00:56:776 (white tick) and move this circle 00:56:776 (4) here 00:57:237 (white tick)
[Normal]

  • • 01:10:161 (3,1) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)
    • 02:19:391 (5) - This slider is hidden; make it visible
    • 02:20:084 (6) - The end-slider is hidden; make it visible
    • 02:34:160 (5) - This slider is hidden; make it visible
    • 02:34:853 (6) - The end-slider is hidden; make it visible
Derfas13
62 posts
Joined February 2008
Derfas13
I love this song ^_^
-star-
Real1
968 posts
Joined September 2008
Real1
[General]
  1. Remove countdown! It really doesn't fit this song.
    View -> Song Setup -> Storyboarding ->Disable countdown by unchecking the box.
  2. Disable Letterbox during breaks as it covers that girl. You do that on the same page as you disable countdown!
[Easy]
  1. Too repetetive, expecially in the beginnning with the repeating slow sliders. Try to spice it up a bit. Also, try to avoid stacks as much as possible in Easy because it's hard for noobs to read.
  2. The spinners are too short for Easy. People who play easy often have problems with spinners, maybe you should replace the spinners with notes and stuff, at least some of them!
[Normal]
  1. No complaints here. A bit repetetive maybe, but it's alright.
A star for you. Nice job!
vivicat
618 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
vivicat
thanks for above all ∩_∩
fixed already
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[easy]
0:09:699 (1) Maybe this jump is too far for beginners?
good.

[normal]
*distance between slider and the next note varies in this map, need re-snapping
0:13:853 (2) spacing
1:16:853 (2) maybe up/right 1 grid to parallel with the slider (1)?
2:01:622 (4) spacing
2:27:237 (x) seems strange if there's nothing here...
3:07:391 (2,3,1) spacing

nice song, but try to loud it up by sounding software like Audacity?

star~
vivicat
618 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
vivicat
thanks!Fixed already.
Sekuyi
181 posts
Joined December 2009
Sekuyi
[Normal]
- 03:23:545 Slider (3) is under the end of (2). Thats too close for the beat distance - suggest to use distance snap here
- 03:30:930 same here

Have a star~ ^^
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

-- Preview point is different on both difficulties, make them the same. "Timing" --> "Set Current Position as Preview Point" --> Choose a part in the song you think is best ^_^
-- Add "Studio Ghibli" to tags.
-- Add a silent slider slide?
-- Try and find a 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768 BG, it will look better.
-- Maybe add another difficulty?

Easy:

00:15:237 (4,5,1) - Move left 1 square.
00:54:007 (1) - Start kiai here?
00:57:699 (1) - Up one square.
01:19:861 (1) - Add finish?

Normal:

-- You might want to consider increasing the distance snap a little to reduce clustered notes. (Hold in alt + scroll)

02:09:468 -- "Normal" hitsounds don't fit the song imo, make this soft? If you keep normal, then reduce the volume to make it sound better.
02:09:699 (1) - Start kiai here.
02:18:237 (3,4,5,6) - Try and reduce overlap here it's a little confusing.
02:18:930 (4) - New combo?
02:22:737 (1) - Move this back to the white tick (02:22:622), end in the same place.
02:31:853 (1) - Hidden by kiai, make this more visible.
02:33:006 (3,4,5,6) - Again try and reduce overlap here.
02:33:699 (4) - New combo?
02:37:507 (1) - Move this back to the white tick (02:37:391) , end in the same place.
03:03:237 (1) - The end is covered by the hit300, maybe start the slider in a different direction?
03:14:314 (1) - "Normal" hitsounds don't suit the song imo.

Nice work on your first map, keep at it :D
~ Star.
kodomonoyume
243 posts
Joined June 2009
kodomonoyume
Nice song :)
Star~
vivicat
618 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
vivicat
Thanks for all above :)
fixed already~
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
nice map :)

star~
xierbaliti
osu! Alumni
999 posts
Joined August 2008
xierbaliti
-General-
图本身没什么毛病 如果能再用心点弄下排列就好了 ._.
Soft-clap不适合这个歌 最好是不要用 ，用whistle足够了。

-Easy-
01:23:545 - Kiai time 结束在这里

-Normal-
作为normal，7的HP有些高了 5以内比较
01:21:699 (1) - 结束在01:23:084好一些 同时让kiai time在这里结束
01:50:545 (4,5) - 这个jump出现得很突然 前面相同的地方全都是一样的间距 到这里突然出现jump了 有一些难读
02:38:776 - 这段kiai结束在这里

*star*
vivicat
618 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
vivicat
感谢>_<
排列的话 有空我重新弄一下好了。。。
其他的fixed already
Senbon
480 posts
Joined September 2008
Senbon
Feel free to take or leave any suggestions. :D

[General]

Delete .osb and full submit

[Easy]

00:35:545 (1) - Remove slider whistle noise?
00:57:699 (1) - Finish?
01:10:622 (1) - ^

[Normal]

01:18:699 (2) - Stack more directly under.
02:17:084 (1) - Replace with whistle?

Good map. :)
vivicat
618 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
vivicat
thanks :)
fixed already.
acethical
52 posts
Joined October 2008
acethical
star
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Easy
nice..

Normal
00:06:007~00:09:237 这些circle建议重排下~
00:09:699(1) - clap
00:13:391(1) - ^
00:15:237(1) - finish
00:17:084(1) - clap
00:20:776(1) - ^
00:28:161(1) - finish
00:31:853(1) - ^
01:25:391(1) - clap
01:32:776(1) - finish
01:36:468(1) - clap
01:40:161(1) - finish
01:47:545(1) - ^
03:18:007(1) - 加finish在开始处

Starrr~
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
Hi~
[Easy]
Fine.

[Normal]
Fine.

Hu... I love lthat ♥ Double Star~
Selee
1,556 posts
Joined February 2010
Selee
咳 可以用中文么...
恩 :D
[General] 音效可以考虑下么...尤其是easy 感觉好乱..

另外为什么不考虑做做看演唱部分..感觉光打节伴奏有些无聊...
非搬走的话..例子: [normal]
2:59:314 黄5往前挪1/2拍
3:00:500 补个note
3:01:161 ^
3:02:314 ^
这样子 会不会好打一些..
vivicat
618 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
vivicat
thanks for above all :)
Eirene
577 posts
Joined December 2008
Eirene
first, you may set custom colors, it's a bit bright

[Normal] :
03:01:161 (9) - whistle sounds odd

[Easy] :
00:55:853 (1) - finish, not clap

it's hard to find mistakes with such a calm timeline :3
STAR
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Easy~
00:35:545 (1) - remove new combo (optional)

~Normal~
01:13:391 (1) - remove new combo (optional)
01:20:776 (1) - ^
01:27:699 (4) - new combo
01:35:084 (4) - ^
01:42:468 (4) - ^
01:46:160 (4) - ^
01:52:160 (1) - remove new combo (optional)
02:36:468 (1) - ^
02:59:314 (5) - new combo
03:10:622 (5) - ^
03:28:391 (1,2,3,1) - move closer (optional)
03:29:776 (2) - stack on the end of sliders
03:31:622 (4) - ^


+Star
vivicat
618 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
vivicat
fixed already,thanks. :)
i use a new picture as the background.
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
Umm i dont know if my osu! is being weird or what, but everytime i download there's an update availaible that kills the BG :<

[General]
Why isnt Easy completely mapped?

[Normal]
00:13:853 (2,3,4) - Are theese intentionally misaligned?
00:15:699 (2) - ^
00:18:237 (4) - ^

Ok that's all i could find, unfortunately i was told to not Star maps with half mapped difficulties so, sorry :< no star
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
NI HAO

[Skin]
The scorebar-kidanger, and scorebar-kidanger2 is missing

[File]
Your bg (BG.jpg) need to resize to 1024x768 (current 960x767)

[Easy]
00:13:391 (2) - New combo??
00:20:776 (2) - ^
00:51:237 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo??
00:56:776 (2) - This object is not stack perfectly with 1 at the end of slider, please stack it
01:03:237 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:10:622 (1) - ^
01:18:007 (1) - ^
03:05:084 (1) - ^
03:06:930 (3) - New combo??
03:18:007 (5) - ^
03:34:737 (1) - Move backward to white tick and extend??

[Normal]
01:21:699 (1) - Move backward to red tick and extend?
03:22:391 (2) - Stack with 1 at the end of slider is not perfectly, stack it?
03:24:237 (4) - Stack with 3 at the end of slider is not perfectly, stack it?

Good song
STAR
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
[General]
Delete .osb file in folder, then full submit (unless you plan on making a Story Board for this song). Make sure you check the folder each time you update your map, otherwise it will sneak back in there. It's annoying to keep track of. :( Geh, nevermind my ramblings.

[Easy]
00:17:084 (1) - On this slider, take out the red anchor in the middle. When you have the slider selected, right click on the control point. This will make it so it doesn't have that sharp angle that makes it stick out from the other sliders.
00:35:545 (6) - Same with this one - also as a general rule, I wouldn't use a red control point on the end of a slider.
01:05:084 (1,2) - Remove the whistle from the slider slides. They just sound bad.
01:06:930 (2) - Make this a bezier slider. Sharp angled sliders wouldn't really fit well with this song.
02:21:237 (2) - Remove red anchor on this slider.
No real issues with the difficulty - it's just nice to see some smooth sliders for this type of song.

[Normal]
The hit sounds feel a little too loud - especially in comparison to Easy's volume levels. Set Normal's to the same levels that Easy has. The claps stick out really bad, otherwise.
Same thing about the sliders in this difficulty - make them smooth. :D
03:21:699 (1,2,3,4) - I'd remove the claps from the ends of all these sliders. Too many claps otherwise.

Some nice and relaxing difficulties for a great song. Great job!
Last edited by Garven , edited 1 time in total.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
General
The song is variable-BPM, or at least variable-offset. Please have someone good at timing time this map. Ask awp or Rolled, for example.

Easy
00:54:007 (1,2) - Too hard for an Easy. Remove the 1/2.
00:55:853 (1,2) - ^

I don't like any of the stacks like 02:18:468 (3,4). Just harms readability.

Normal
Rename to Hard.
I don't like the spinners for the most part. Too many of them. =X

01:23:545 - Break, please.

Otherwise, pretty nice.
[DBF]
1,827 posts
Joined January 2009
[DBF]
[Easy]

00:09:699 (1) - add finish in end.
00:17:084 (1) - ^
00:30:930 (4) - ^
01:53:084 (6) - ^
02:07:853 (3,4) - spacing.
02:35:545 (1) - add finish.
03:34:622 (1) - ^

[Hard]

01:00:693 (3,4) - add whistles.
01:06:231 (5,6) - ^
01:06:924 (1) - ^
01:15:462 (4,5) - ^
02:37:385 (1) - finish.
03:08:078 (3) - whistle.
03:24:924 (6) - ^
03:32:770 (1) - finish.

Star~
dvorak_old
294 posts
Joined February 2010
dvorak_old
Ghibli　yeahhhh

can't find any variable-bpm or wrong offset.
chibi-lucky
22 posts
Joined April 2010
chibi-lucky
Positive Feedback- Yay! You did something I liked.
Suggestions- You can fix em or leave em.
Map Error: FIX THIS NOW!

Overall:
You have a beautiful beatmap here! I'm looking forward to it's approval so I can play it again. :)

Easy:
01:25:391 - 02:35:084 - I can see that your AI Mod tells you otherwise, but all up in here, it's veeeeeeerrrryyyyy smooshed feeling. Noobs can't read notes this close together, keep in mind. ... Just saying.
00:38:314 - Add a hit circle right in the middle of the board here.
Other than these, I couldn't find anything at all wrong with it! Good job!

Hard:
Awww, This one was so GREAT!
I tried so hard to find something wrong with it for you too... T_T
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Nice one for the first map~ :3

[General]
offset 4190 resnap all notes and timing section
Move all timing section (volume changing) before note a little bit?

[Easy]
All fine~

[Hard]
Hitsound mod
SPOILER
00:58:847 , 00:59:078 - Whistle?
01:05:308 (2,3) - Remove whistle?
01:13:616 , 01:13:847 - Whistle?
01:20:078 (2,3) - Remove whistle?
01:27:924 (2,3) - ^
01:31:616 (3,4) - ^
01:35:308 (2,3) - ^
01:39:001 (3,4) - ^
01:42:693 (2,3) - ^
01:46:385 (2,3) - ^
01:50:078 (3,4) - ^
01:54:924 (1) - Whistle at start and end?
01:57:462 (3,4) - Remove whistle?
01:58:616 (1) - Whistle at start and end?
02:01:154 (3,4) - Remove whistle?
--Same as others 02:08:308 (2,3) - Why clap only here?
02:21:231 (3,6) - Remove whistle?
02:22:616 (1) - Whistle?
02:36:001 (3,6) - Remove whistle?
03:25:385 (1) - Whistle?
02:38:770 - Volume 35% and move it after spin little bit?
03:14:308 - Start KIAI here?
03:29:078 - Volume 25%?
03:38:424 - What's this timging section for?

Star~
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Kiddo-Kun
[Easy]

00:35:545 (6) - New combo
01:03:237 (4) - ^
01:46:622 (1) - Remove new combo so it's the same as the rest
01:47:545 (3) - NC
01:50:314 (1) - Same for 01:46:622
01:51:237 (3) - NC
02:35:084 (5) - I grid left

[Hard]

00:42:231 (4) - Spacing
01:53:078 (3) - Ugly

Good job~
Star
Hiiragi_kagami_old
14 posts
Joined February 2009
Hiiragi_kagami_old
:lol:
star
swiftcat_old
2 posts
Joined February 2010
swiftcat_old
nice song ,nice map~
aesopl19193
572 posts
Joined March 2009
aesopl19193
Hey~ Good map=]

Delete the .osb file then full submit plx

Suggestion only:
[Hard]
03:16:616 (X) - add note to fit the music?
03:29:078 (4) - add whistle at start?
03:30:924 (1) - ^

[Normal]
03:32:776 (4) - new combo?

Star. :)
Kasen
37 posts
Joined April 2009
Kasen
Nice song! i like it ;)
Star
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja
+10 offset?

[easy]

00:04:160 (1) - unsnapped
01:53:555 - try to remove this small break if possible? (imo)

[hard]

~all good
01:12:308 - small break again, try to remove (imo)

nice map ;)
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
All

Lead-in 設置為0 (按F4 => Audio)
.osu文件 還是沒刪掉:< (刪掉以後 用Full Submission!!)

Hard

00:19:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 5和6的間距不同?!
00:38:088 (1,2,3,4) - 貌似因為這個跳 很多人不能DT了吧XD
00:49:626 (4,5) - 間距怎麼突然變大了..
01:54:934 (1) - 因為中間的小點點..感覺這個slider看起來有點奇怪._.(從這開始的後面幾個slide 看起來一個比一個奇怪lol 改下造型?一般slider只要3個點就够了 如果要漂亮點的slider 可以去看下別人的map是怎麼弄的:3 雖然玩起來是沒差 但是美觀點更好XD
01:57:934 (4,5) - 和之前一樣 間距突然變大了D: (之前的一些3 4 都是正常間距 這裡突然變大了D: 可以的話 這裡在一些排列上改下 讓人感覺不會那麼突然
02:19:395 (1) - 稍微移開點 或者slider朝向改下 (這樣容易搶拍
02:20:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 123 和 456 這2組的間距怎麼突然又變小了..
02:32:318 (2,3) - 這2個是不是靠的有點近了(1和2 , 2和3 之間)
02:34:164 (1) - 和之前一樣
02:35:549 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 和之前一樣
02:38:780 - 這段break time太長了:< (一般最多只能15秒)
02:58:395 - 這一段的音量太低了....
03:08:088 (3) - slider上的whistle去掉
03:18:703 (2) - 對準之前(1)的尾端 (一般可以這樣:把2給取消掉 然後重新下 鼠標移到slider的尾端附近時 會自動對準尾端:3
感覺在第一段kiai里 newcombo貌似太多了D:

Normal

00:55:857 (1) - 去掉newcombo
01:05:088 (1) - 去掉slider上的whistle
01:31:857 (5,1) - 互換newcombo
02:39:241 - 和hard一樣
03:15:703 (2,3) - 間距變大了?!

圖本身沒什麽大問題 不過有些地方間距有點亂(newcombo的使用也是)

star =w=
KEMONO_old
19 posts
Joined January 2010
KEMONO_old
:) STAR
chocolate5215
7 posts
Joined December 2009
chocolate5215
给星给星


好可爱的歌 :lol:
打起来也很舒服~
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