1. Hard (4.38 stars, 371 notes)
2. Insane (4.84 stars, 449 notes)
3. Normal (2.72 stars, 236 notes)

SPOILER

05.04.10 - finish hard diff to the end. 10 millions, wow
08.04.10 - xxheroxx's fixes
11.04.10 - some Leorda's fixes
15.04.10 - some LoweH's fixes
17.04.10 - JarJarJacob's timing and mod; finish normal diff to the end
18.04.10 - spacing/style changes by Matma Rex; offset by ShaggoN
24.05.10 - adding jumps by Sallad4ever request
29.05.10 - some Real1's fixes
10.06.10 - Frill's fixes
11.06.10 - Xgor's fixes
01.07.10 - some stickmeister's fixes
24.07.10 - jericho2442's fixes
11.08.10 - roflninja's fixes
12.08.10 - some EvianBubble's changes. Video has crappy quality now (by popular demand)
15.08.10 - vivere mod and image. Thanks!
24.08.10 - RandomJibberish's fixes.
04.08.10 - Rukarioman's fixes.
15.09.10 - Faceman's fixes. Custom colors!
23.09.10 - some Derekku's fixes.
27.09.10 - after played some old maps I rename "Hard" to "Insane" and "Relaxing" to "Hard". So redownload this!
02.10.10 - two breaks deleted in Insane
04.10.10 - nice wmfchris's fixes + Jarby's mini change
05.10.10 - Jarby's offset change + some prettiness in normal

Map all difficulties to the end

00:45:193 (1) - Rediculous jump. That goes for the others in this diff.

• • Delete the osb file, then "Full submission"

• • 03:07:281 (1) - End this spinner here 03:08:697 (white tick)
  • 03:14:923 (1) - Delete this spinner 03:17:188 (1) and end this spinner here 03:18:320 (white tick)

• • 04:12:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Delete this circles/sliders/spinners

• • 04:12:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Delete this circles/sliders/spinners

Yo

[General]
1) The breaks is too much, you have to map the break section - noooo, it's a relax map
2) Your beatmap needs a easier diff - noooo, normal is below a 3-star difficulty level
3) Delete "Music_for_the_Masses" in tags. That word is little too odd - ok, I agree with you. Album name is useless in tags

[Kiai]
You set the kiai too much, delte the kiai section IF uneeds - maybe
02:05:861 ~ 02:14:069 (K) - This kiai doesn't fit at the music - changed a bit

[File]
When I download with video, it's 22MB (I want to say OMG!) You have to compress it, from video HQ (High Quality) to LQ (Low Quality) - Yes, it's a little bit higher then 20 mb, but I don't want to compress video. Maybe I will reduce mp3 bitrate instead.


[Normal]
01:20:573 (1) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
01:21:705 (2) - ^
01:32:461 (1) - Add a clap?
01:33:593 (3) - Add a clap at the start of slider?
02:06:426 (2) - Add a clap?
02:08:124 (4) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
02:33:032 (1) - ^
02:34:165 (2) - ^
02:43:788 (3) - Add a clap?

[Relaxing]
01:20:574 (1) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
01:21:706 (2) - ^
01:32:462 (1) - Add a clap?
01:49:445 (4) - ^
02:33:034 (1) - Add a clap at the end of slider?
02:34:166 (2) - ^

- I don't like your clap thing. It is redundant. I partially used it one time in 02:51:148-03:08:697.

[Hard]
00:45:193 (1) - Remove new combo - Jump here. AI mod doesn't like jumps.
00:54:250 (3,4,5,6) - This note is not follow lyric at the end of slider, IMO - maybe
01:37:839 (10) - New combo? - no
01:57:652 (1) - Remove new combo
03:44:078 (7,8) - Too far between these two - thanks
04:10:118 (6,7) - ^

Bad song - lol ok
STAR

General
02:08:125 (4) - I don't understand why here KIAI time >< ok, I delete it.

Normal
03:11:527 (3) - New combo here
03:13:791 (5) - New combo here
ok
Relaxing
01:27:933 (5,7,9,10) - Add hitsound clap here (?) noo
02:26:241 (6) - Add hitsound finish here I really like both versions! But.. yes I add finish here.
02:49:168 (6) - New combo here why?

Hard
01:38:688 (13) - Add a beat here (?) noo

[Normal]
I suggest do use largest circles. No, it's looks ugly
There's some spacing errors, maybe for symmetry, but there are still errors.

00:33:305 (4) - Spacing.
01:12:648 (3) - ^.
02:25:107 (3) - ^.
03:05:300 (1) - ^.
Yes, for symmetry. And I think, there aren't critical errors
[Relaxing]
I suggest to use larger circles. (one tick down of Normal circles) Maybe, but I don't very like it
Sweet

[Hard]
Okay, but i suggest to do symmetric sliders, some of them in this diff are very ugly D: to do symmetric sliders? I don't understand. Can you show which sliders are ugly for you?

1. Offset: 8105 (and then resnap all notes of course). I'm sure that it fits better.

00:53:677 (2) - Move 1 grid left
00:58:206 (2) - ^

Odd song. To be honest, it doesn't fit osu very well.

4:12:667: un-necessary kiai?

General
End Kiai at the end
I don't like how you mapped into the fadeout, I'd end the map around 04:03:610

Normal
02:49:165 (1), 03:07:281 (1) - I don't like the spinners like this one, they're just filling space and are pretty short for a normal. Just delete both of them.
all fixed

Why does only this diff have a different name to the defaults?

-I think the map would look nicer if the hitcircles were a bit more greyed out - the default colours kind of clash with the video. Not saying to make the hitcircles monochromatic, just fade the colours a bit. It would look cool imo. ok
-The catmull sliders are kind of ugleh, but w/e. it's not catmull, it's ugly bezier!

Normal
03:16:905 (1,1) - The spinner length combined with the next note coming so shortly after it makes this very tricky for the easiest diff. May I suggest starting the spinner where the previous slider starts (deleting it of course), then removing the next circle? It'll give the player more time to spin as well as more recovery after the spinner. I made spinner longer, but I don't want delete circle.
03:26:246 (1) - Same problem as above, but it's even tougher I would just delete this spinner and do something else here. ok
03:38:417 (1) - Maybe arrange it like this?
I feel like I should be clicking on the spot where the spinner starts now, but if an extra note is added then the spinner would be too short. This solution solves both of those problems. (This also goes for the next part just like this) I don't feel it. I map voice more than beats

04:01:062 (6,1) - Maybe arrange like the above? The spinner IS still a bit short. "Normal criteria: Shortest spinner length 1416ms is less than 1500ms." 84ms?


Relaxing
03:10:394 - Make the new combos in this section consistent with Normal no
03:36:436 (1) - Remove new combo? yes
03:38:417 (1) - Same as Normal perhaps? Same with the next spinner. no

Hard
Seems fine to me.

Have a star, sir.

Derekku wrote:

[General]
*When a map ends a bit before the song does, I usually suggest adding a single kiai fountain to the last note as a "finishing touch" to the map. :p OK, I made it again, but some people in this thread don't very like this
*BPM is surprisingly fine, but the offset feels just a tiny bit early. 8,110 should work better (remember to resnap on all diffs). OK, thanks

[Normal]
01:36:702 (1) - expected this to end on the next white tick. no change

[Relaxing]
*I found it strange that this is the only diff with a non-standard (Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane) name It's definitely not Hard for me. And I don't like "Normal+", when usual "Normal" here.
01:38:683 - expected a note here no change

[Hard]
00:54:243 (3,4,5,6) - Each of these ending on a blue tick sounds a little bit strange, but it plays fine (also found in other spots in this difficulty) add low sound sections
01:38:683 - expected a note here no change

Nothing looks unrankable, and I see a nice use of patterns and hitsounds. However, I'm a little concerned about the names of the difficulties and the difficulty spread as a whole. Normal plays like a Normal, Relaxing feels like a hard Normal or just a Hard, and Hard plays like an Insane (albeit a bit easy due to the low bpm).

Most of Normal would be fine as the easiest map in this set, but some parts would still be too tricky for new players. You could dumb down the difficulty with a larger circle size, more sliders (especially for the large number of red tick offbeat notes), and some smaller spacing in parts OR you could make a real Easy for the song (I suggest doing this). If you have any questions, feel free to ask me.
no change, sorry. I'm lazy

Great job! thanks!

Mustaash wrote:

Hii~

[Insane]

01:06:986 - What this Break? add Circles likes ok
00:48:587 - ^ add a Spinner no, it's in symmetry with 00:39:812. I don't want delete all breaks here

The Overall is Perfect...

RANK THAT!

Star~

Dangaard wrote:

Ok, I forgot to mention that your video still got the audio track enabled, you should reconvert it with disabled audio.