00:53:677 (2) - Move 1 grid left
00:58:206 (2) - ^

Odd song. To be honest, it doesn't fit osu very well.

4:12:667: un-necessary kiai?

General
End Kiai at the end
I don't like how you mapped into the fadeout, I'd end the map around 04:03:610

Normal
02:49:165 (1), 03:07:281 (1) - I don't like the spinners like this one, they're just filling space and are pretty short for a normal. Just delete both of them.
all fixed

Why does only this diff have a different name to the defaults?

-I think the map would look nicer if the hitcircles were a bit more greyed out - the default colours kind of clash with the video. Not saying to make the hitcircles monochromatic, just fade the colours a bit. It would look cool imo. ok
-The catmull sliders are kind of ugleh, but w/e. it's not catmull, it's ugly bezier!

Normal
03:16:905 (1,1) - The spinner length combined with the next note coming so shortly after it makes this very tricky for the easiest diff. May I suggest starting the spinner where the previous slider starts (deleting it of course), then removing the next circle? It'll give the player more time to spin as well as more recovery after the spinner. I made spinner longer, but I don't want delete circle.
03:26:246 (1) - Same problem as above, but it's even tougher I would just delete this spinner and do something else here. ok
03:38:417 (1) - Maybe arrange it like this?
I feel like I should be clicking on the spot where the spinner starts now, but if an extra note is added then the spinner would be too short. This solution solves both of those problems. (This also goes for the next part just like this) I don't feel it. I map voice more than beats

04:01:062 (6,1) - Maybe arrange like the above? The spinner IS still a bit short. "Normal criteria: Shortest spinner length 1416ms is less than 1500ms." 84ms?


Relaxing
03:10:394 - Make the new combos in this section consistent with Normal no
03:36:436 (1) - Remove new combo? yes
03:38:417 (1) - Same as Normal perhaps? Same with the next spinner. no

Hard
Seems fine to me.

Have a star, sir.

Derekku wrote:

[General]
*When a map ends a bit before the song does, I usually suggest adding a single kiai fountain to the last note as a "finishing touch" to the map. :p OK, I made it again, but some people in this thread don't very like this
*BPM is surprisingly fine, but the offset feels just a tiny bit early. 8,110 should work better (remember to resnap on all diffs). OK, thanks

[Normal]
01:36:702 (1) - expected this to end on the next white tick. no change

[Relaxing]
*I found it strange that this is the only diff with a non-standard (Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane) name It's definitely not Hard for me. And I don't like "Normal+", when usual "Normal" here.
01:38:683 - expected a note here no change

[Hard]
00:54:243 (3,4,5,6) - Each of these ending on a blue tick sounds a little bit strange, but it plays fine (also found in other spots in this difficulty) add low sound sections
01:38:683 - expected a note here no change

Nothing looks unrankable, and I see a nice use of patterns and hitsounds. However, I'm a little concerned about the names of the difficulties and the difficulty spread as a whole. Normal plays like a Normal, Relaxing feels like a hard Normal or just a Hard, and Hard plays like an Insane (albeit a bit easy due to the low bpm).

Most of Normal would be fine as the easiest map in this set, but some parts would still be too tricky for new players. You could dumb down the difficulty with a larger circle size, more sliders (especially for the large number of red tick offbeat notes), and some smaller spacing in parts OR you could make a real Easy for the song (I suggest doing this). If you have any questions, feel free to ask me.
no change, sorry. I'm lazy

Great job! thanks!

Mustaash wrote:

Hii~

[Insane]

01:06:986 - What this Break? add Circles likes ok
00:48:587 - ^ add a Spinner no, it's in symmetry with 00:39:812. I don't want delete all breaks here

The Overall is Perfect...

RANK THAT!

Star~

Dangaard wrote:

Ok, I forgot to mention that your video still got the audio track enabled, you should reconvert it with disabled audio.

Xgor wrote:

Note that I'm slightly worried over the video as it gives me quite some lag and I wished that you rather took the video from youtube. :/
I would be glad if the BAT/MAT that checks this map after me looks closely on the video if it's okey to be ranked as it is

Unspecified (Other)

gyt wrote:

Thanks for bubble, Xgor!
If video is a problem, please check this file (replace old video). I used XviD codec instead h264. So it looks horribly, but should not cause lags.