no kds for nowThanks for this partial mod, hope to see the rest of it tomorrow!
Mainly pointing out stuff that I felt uncomfortable with, it's mainly pattern transition issues here I suppose:
00:04:481 (4481|2,4570|2,4658|2) - trill to jack here is slightly uncomfortable especially with the triplet jack on 3, think it's more comfortable if it's on 4 imo, something like this would be good: Accepted.
00:06:952 (6952|3,6996|1,7040|3,7040|0,7084|1) - Not sure why you decided to omit notes on 00:06:864 - 00:06:908 -, I'm quite certain the pattern would feel much better with more 1/8 lead in here towards the jump + trill Added notes/Fixed.
00:07:658 (7658|2,7746|2,7746|0,7746|1,7834|2) - Quite the uncomfortable and I'd add that this is a bit too difficult to execute and unfitting to the intensity of the music here, I would suggest something easier like: Fixed.
or you can just not jack at all, in which i feel that it's more fitting (?)
00:08:099 (8099|2,8099|1,8099|0,8452|2,8452|1,8452|0,8805|0,8805|2,8805|1) - Think you can have the same chord combination for the 2nd and 3rd here but I would suggest to have the first one different as it doesn't have the vocals here Changed/Accepted.
00:13:040 - One thing quite bothering me is the layering mainly, I would say that it's fine in how well it plays but looking at the note counts for each instrument, they are either not diverse or a bit too heavy Changed to single note jacks except for the 3-note jumps (triplet jump???).
something happened to my right hand while i was modding it so i might continue tomorrow hope you don't mind
Aye, all goods.