Golden City Factory - Twilight Chronicle ~ I Am Sister (Remi · forum

yeahyeahyeahhh

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2010-03-29T02:07:38+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, April 08, 2010 at 1:10:55 AM

Artist: Golden City Factory
Title: Twilight Chronicle ~ I Am Sister (Remix Edition)
Source: Touhou
Tags: Flandre Embodiment of Scarlet Devil Koumakyou U.N. Owen was her? Nexy
BPM: 139
Filesize: 8147kb
Play Time: 03:55
Difficulties Available:

Collab (4.92 stars, 708 notes)
Relax (4.47 stars, 439 notes)
Soft (2.52 stars, 167 notes)

Download: Golden City Factory - Twilight Chronicle ~ I Am Sister (Remix Edition)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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...and then there will be none.

Credits:
Starrodkirby86 - Storyboard
Shinxyn - Spinner graphic
Nexy - Collab and Difficulty

Yeah Nexy collab!

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mosluv

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mosluv 2010-03-30T02:05:03+00:00

grawr ';..;'

yeahyeahyeahhh

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2010-03-30T02:17:51+00:00

Nexy wrote:
grawr ';..;'

Kudo for collabing and stuff like that wut.

Cillu

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Cillu 2010-03-30T04:34:40+00:00

"Go Kirby, use Swift!"

（／￣つ￣）／~☆

simplistiC

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simplistiC 2010-03-30T04:44:40+00:00

^ LOL HOW U DO THAT?

*uses swift*

yeahyeahyeahhh is 20 and lives under Nexy's covers...and Nexy is 3 years old and lives in Pluto..

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yeahyeahyeahhh

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2010-03-30T04:45:42+00:00

simplistiC wrote:
^ LOL HOW U DO THAT?

*uses swift*

ROFL

satek

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satek 2010-03-30T04:54:27+00:00

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

H1ko

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H1ko 2010-03-30T05:07:12+00:00

sweeeeeeeeeeet

Garven

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Garven 2010-03-30T06:00:26+00:00

01:52:884 [2] Add a clap to the end of this slider? It was really hard to hear the regular beat, and the clap seems to fit the way you've done the hit sounds.

Eh, I've got nothin' here. Looks/sounds great!

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-03-30T13:59:05+00:00

flan flan flan flan ~

jockeytiyan

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jockeytiyan 2010-03-30T14:02:18+00:00

Posted by request of YYY on Nexy's part.

03:23:964 (7) - This is just a suggestion. I think it'll look better that the new combo is here.

And yeah, I'd like it better when in the tags, there's an entry saying "Nexy is Sexy" :3 *runs*

SteRRuM

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SteRRuM 2010-03-30T14:18:48+00:00

Hi!

[General]

Maybe make a small SB, ~~because i don't know which part is made by you and which is made by Nexy~~ Ok, I know, but it might be very useful

[Collab]

(Suggestion) 02:15:762 (1) - New combo?
03:39:503 (5) - Re-stack manually with (4)s beginning?

I wish that every map would be like that

yeahyeahyeahhh

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2010-03-30T14:39:49+00:00

SteRRuM wrote:
Hi!
[General]
Maybe make a small SB, ~~because i don't know which part is made by you and which is made by Nexy~~ Ok, I know, but it might be very useful its on the way ^^
[Collab]
(Suggestion) 02:15:762 (1) - New combo? ok
03:39:503 (5) - Re-stack manually with (4)s beginning?
I wish that every map would be like that <3 glad you enjoyed!

EEeee

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EEeee 2010-03-30T15:11:21+00:00

*star for now, if i get around i'll mod it

RandomJibberish

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RandomJibberish 2010-03-30T15:50:37+00:00

Who doesn't love a good collab 8D

00:21:158 (2,3) - Hard to tell at first which is the slider
01:54:179 (9,10,1,2,3,4) - Spread these out or move them so they don't overlap the last few notes. I don't like how it looks atm

I don't really like a silenced notes, but that's just personal preference.

Why not make another diff? There's no other reason I can see for this to be unrankable :/

Nice map, starred~

yeahyeahyeahhh

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2010-03-30T17:42:40+00:00

RandomJibberish wrote:
Who doesn't love a good collab 8D

00:21:158 (2,3) - Hard to tell at first which is the slider
01:54:179 (9,10,1,2,3,4) - Spread these out or move them so they don't overlap the last few notes. I don't like how it looks atm

I don't really like a silenced notes, but that's just personal preference.

Why not make another diff? There's no other reason I can see for this to be unrankable :/

Nice map, starred~

simply because the score. I wanted the whole thing mapped and I don't want to add anymore breaks, I already don't like the second one I added lol. Idk I'll still think more on it but how it stands now, approval.

mosluv

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mosluv 2010-03-31T03:54:49+00:00

RandomJibberish wrote:
00:21:158 (2,3) - Hard to tell at first which is the slider If more people complain about this, I'll change it.
01:54:179 (9,10,1,2,3,4) - Spread these out or move them so they don't overlap the last few notes. I don't like how it looks atm Nuu, I like the way it is now.

Glad you enjoyed it!

Nachy

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Nachy 2010-03-31T07:07:37+00:00

deliciously awesome collab

pretty much just tiny suggestions here

[Soft]
02:11:014 (2,3) - Can you make it like this?

[Collab]
01:09:935 (4,5) - Can you make it like this (a bit more central)? Just a humble suggestion

yeah no problems pretty much lol

star~

yeahyeahyeahhh

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2010-03-31T14:37:35+00:00

NachoPiggy wrote:
deliciously awesome collab yummmy!

pretty much just tiny suggestions here

[Soft]
02:11:014 (2,3) - Can you make it like this? changed

[Collab]
01:09:935 (4,5) - Can you make it like this (a bit more central)? Just a humble suggestion ok! :>

yeah no problems pretty much lol

star~ty!

Mismagius

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Mismagius 2010-03-31T18:41:38+00:00

I don't think green color fits the BG...

Soft
Nothing

Collab
Nothing

Yay star.

Dusty

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Dusty 2010-04-01T03:55:59+00:00

[Soft]
Could do for some more OD

[Collab]
02:07:992 (1,2,3,4,5) - unexpected

Nice stuff here!

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Starrodkirby86 2010-04-01T07:40:24+00:00

Phew...All in a day's work.

Download: extract-in-song-folder.rar

Don't forget to delete the .osb on your next Full Submission. oxo

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-04-01T19:25:38+00:00

Forgot to star >_<

sexy map

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DeathxShinigami

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DeathxShinigami 2010-04-02T16:09:36+00:00

[Overall] Could use a [Relax] type diff but its not needed if you feel the mapset is already complete. Oh and...I hope Shinxyn doesn't get jealous for you collabing with Nexy. x:

[Soft]
02:16:625 - Find it funny how you used kiai on 01:12:740 - which is a similar point of the song to here but you didn't put any kiai at the end.

Agreeing with Dusty that this diff could use +1 OD.

[Collab]
02:16:625 - Same as what I said for [Soft]
02:30:438 (1) - Kinda hard to read.. but its duable.

yeahyeahyeahhh

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2010-04-02T19:46:52+00:00

DeathxShinigami wrote:
[Overall] Could use a [Relax] type diff but its not needed if you feel the mapset is already complete. Oh and...I hope Shinxyn doesn't get jealous for you collabing with Nexy. x: should be up today, nexy will be done then. Nexy is all mine rawr!

[Soft]
02:16:625 - Find it funny how you used kiai on 01:12:740 - which is a similar point of the song to here but you didn't put any kiai at the end. didnt want too much kiai ;< maybe ill add

Agreeing with Dusty that this diff could use +1 OD. added but havent update yet, waiting for nexy so I can fix the SB

[Collab]
02:16:625 - Same as what I said for [Soft]
02:30:438 (1) - Kinda hard to read.. but its duable.

-Xero-

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-Xero- 2010-04-02T19:47:45+00:00

Hi there,

[Overall]
I dont get the Combo colours. Even if they are used in the wings of the character, it doesn't fit the bg cause you barely see those colours.

[Soft]
01:12:740 (1-3) Nothing for new players if you ask me..
01:14:467 (1-3)^
01:19:647 (1-3)^

Many breaks, but still an awesome diff!

[Collab]

Nothing non-nazi found, great work here as well!

star~

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orioncomet 2010-04-03T04:33:25+00:00

Flan Flan!! >[]<

Sound great to me really #.# nice collab etc etc. I really love SB ohhhh >////<
/me crazy

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Starrodkirby86 2010-04-03T05:07:57+00:00

You need 'em credit BGs?

eee

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eee 2010-04-03T19:34:01+00:00

Awesome map guys
Kirby makes awesome visuals
Nexy and YYY have awesome patterns
Great Job
01:26:553 (Storyboard) - shouldn't the "nexy-blur" be upside down because that's where the rotating "nexy" left off

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Starrodkirby86 2010-04-03T19:37:18+00:00

eee wrote:
01:26:553 (Storyboard) - shouldn't the "nexy-blur" be upside down because that's where the rotating "nexy" left off

Nice observation. This was intentional though, as I wanted the player to see that the name went back to its original rotation angle in an instant. So yeah. x:

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ignorethis 2010-04-04T04:28:02+00:00

Great collab work!

pubble

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Shinxyn 2010-04-05T08:23:50+00:00

>-< you still want me to mod this eh?

Buncha nazi >_>

Soft-
00:26:877 - its very slight and instant, but I hear the soft -> normal slider slide changing here... shift this timing panel directly on end of slider please
01:04:107 (1,2,3) - ^ same "issue"... though its a bit more complex here... v.v
01:37:776 (2,3,4) - would think this would sound better matching 01:35:618 (2) v-v
01:55:042 (2,3,4) - ^
rest sounds fine, plays fair too

Relax-
00:12:740 (2) - ... remove whistle imo, let it start getting quiet here
00:34:755 (5) - picky: move this right a tick or slant this a bit more so it makes a line with 7? it looks... off as it is
00:42:740 (1,2) - sounds weird @.@... ahh... move (1) to where (8) is please? (of course remove 8 and respace)
01:10:798 (8) - imo, I think the double finish hitsound should be here instead (and leave next two notes blank while adjusting the normal volume after that?)
~~01:57:201 (3) - this whole part has unique hitsound patterns, but this clap sound odd...?~~ okay, nvm, this whole section sounds "unique" ._.
02:09:719 (3) - kill out slider slide sound earlier? or move the timing panel to end of slider so you don't hear the slider slide change?
03:10:582 (4) - arrrgh, sounds sooo odd, just don't use the 1/4 slider D:
03:24:827 (6) - remove clap
rawr, I keep playing those 1/4 notes as 1/2 jumps ;-;
why do I keep getting the feeling the claps are on the wrong white ticks..... .... w/e...

Collab- saw this while it was WIP~
... mm, I still think this should be aimed towards approved... its a good map, but I don't think its hard enough (though long) for 17.9mil...
00:42:093 (5) - ... it sounds like its a 1/4 around here, make this like Relax's? (or was it just me testing Relax first and messing up this part)
01:10:798 (8) - same comment as Relax
01:26:338 (8) - another normal clap instead? x.x (same goes to Relax to then.. maybe.. w/e)
03:32:165 (4,5) - stack properly? (randomly saw this)
03:49:647 (7) - ^ (doesn't matter)

eww the spinner is sooo ugly *cough cough* (the center of the spinner-circle is at least ;-;)
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jockeytiyan 2010-04-05T08:28:29+00:00

Collab's too playable to be approved, IMO. I think score ain't too high against the length and the map's too fun for anybody to care about it.

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2010-04-05T15:30:10+00:00

Shinxyn wrote:
>-< you still want me to mod this eh?

Buncha nazi >_> ewww Nazi

Soft-
00:26:877 - its very slight and instant, but I hear the soft -> normal slider slide changing here... shift this timing panel directly on end of slider please nuuuu
01:04:107 (1,2,3) - ^ same "issue"... though its a bit more complex here... v.v
01:37:776 (2,3,4) - would think this would sound better matching 01:35:618 (2) v-v nuuuu
01:55:042 (2,3,4) - ^
rest sounds fine, plays fair too

Relax-
00:12:740 (2) - ... remove whistle imo, let it start getting quiet here
00:34:755 (5) - picky: move this right a tick or slant this a bit more so it makes a line with 7? it looks... off as it is
00:42:740 (1,2) - sounds weird @.@... ahh... move (1) to where (8) is please? (of course remove 8 and respace)
01:10:798 (8) - imo, I think the double finish hitsound should be here instead (and leave next two notes blank while adjusting the normal volume after that?)
~~01:57:201 (3) - this whole part has unique hitsound patterns, but this clap sound odd...?~~ okay, nvm, this whole section sounds "unique" ._.
02:09:719 (3) - kill out slider slide sound earlier? or move the timing panel to end of slider so you don't hear the slider slide change?
03:10:582 (4) - arrrgh, sounds sooo odd, just don't use the 1/4 slider D:
03:24:827 (6) - remove clap
rawr, I keep playing those 1/4 notes as 1/2 jumps ;-;
why do I keep getting the feeling the claps are on the wrong white ticks..... .... w/e...

Collab- saw this while it was WIP~
... mm, I still think this should be aimed towards approved... its a good map, but I don't think its hard enough (though long) for 17.9mil... ehh WHATEVER
00:42:093 (5) - ... it sounds like its a 1/4 around here, make this like Relax's? (or was it just me testing Relax first and messing up this part) just you!!!!
01:10:798 (8) - same comment as Relax but I like how it is T_T
01:26:338 (8) - another normal clap instead? x.x (same goes to Relax to then.. maybe.. w/e)
03:32:165 (4,5) - stack properly? (randomly saw this) Noo wut :<
03:49:647 (7) - ^ (doesn't matter)

eww the spinner is sooo ugly *cough cough* (the center of the spinner-circle is at least ;-;)
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