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Golden City Factory - Twilight Chronicle ~ I Am Sister (Remi

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mosluv
grawr ';..;'
Topic Starter
yeahyeahyeahhh

Nexy wrote:

grawr ';..;'
Kudo for collabing and stuff like that wut.
Cillu
"Go Kirby, use Swift!"

(/ ̄つ ̄)/~☆
simplistiC
^ LOL HOW U DO THAT?

*uses swift*

yeahyeahyeahhh is 20 and lives under Nexy's covers...and Nexy is 3 years old and lives in Pluto..
Topic Starter
yeahyeahyeahhh

simplistiC wrote:

^ LOL HOW U DO THAT?

*uses swift*
ROFL
satek
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
H1ko
sweeeeeeeeeeet
Garven
01:52:884 [2] Add a clap to the end of this slider? It was really hard to hear the regular beat, and the clap seems to fit the way you've done the hit sounds.

Eh, I've got nothin' here. Looks/sounds great!
Cyril Scarlet
flan flan flan flan ~
jockeytiyan
Posted by request of YYY on Nexy's part.

03:23:964 (7) - This is just a suggestion. I think it'll look better that the new combo is here.


And yeah, I'd like it better when in the tags, there's an entry saying "Nexy is Sexy" :3 *runs*
SteRRuM
Hi! 8-)
[General]
  1. Maybe make a small SB, because i don't know which part is made by you and which is made by Nexy Ok, I know, but it might be very useful :oops:
[Collab]
  1. (Suggestion) 02:15:762 (1) - New combo?
  2. 03:39:503 (5) - Re-stack manually with (4)s beginning?
I wish that every map would be like that :cry:
Topic Starter
yeahyeahyeahhh

SteRRuM wrote:

Hi! 8-)
[General]
  1. Maybe make a small SB, because i don't know which part is made by you and which is made by Nexy Ok, I know, but it might be very useful :oops: its on the way ^^
[Collab]
  1. (Suggestion) 02:15:762 (1) - New combo? ok
  2. 03:39:503 (5) - Re-stack manually with (4)s beginning?
I wish that every map would be like that :cry: <3 glad you enjoyed!
EEeee
*star for now, if i get around i'll mod it
RandomJibberish
Who doesn't love a good collab 8D

00:21:158 (2,3) - Hard to tell at first which is the slider
01:54:179 (9,10,1,2,3,4) - Spread these out or move them so they don't overlap the last few notes. I don't like how it looks atm

I don't really like a silenced notes, but that's just personal preference.

Why not make another diff? There's no other reason I can see for this to be unrankable :/

Nice map, starred~
Topic Starter
yeahyeahyeahhh

RandomJibberish wrote:

Who doesn't love a good collab 8D

00:21:158 (2,3) - Hard to tell at first which is the slider
01:54:179 (9,10,1,2,3,4) - Spread these out or move them so they don't overlap the last few notes. I don't like how it looks atm

I don't really like a silenced notes, but that's just personal preference.

Why not make another diff? There's no other reason I can see for this to be unrankable :/

Nice map, starred~
simply because the score. I wanted the whole thing mapped and I don't want to add anymore breaks, I already don't like the second one I added lol. Idk I'll still think more on it but how it stands now, approval.
mosluv

RandomJibberish wrote:

00:21:158 (2,3) - Hard to tell at first which is the slider If more people complain about this, I'll change it.
01:54:179 (9,10,1,2,3,4) - Spread these out or move them so they don't overlap the last few notes. I don't like how it looks atm Nuu, I like the way it is now.
Glad you enjoyed it! :)
Nachy
deliciously awesome collab :)

pretty much just tiny suggestions here

[Soft]
02:11:014 (2,3) - Can you make it like this?




[Collab]
01:09:935 (4,5) - Can you make it like this (a bit more central)? Just a humble suggestion




yeah no problems pretty much lol

star~
Topic Starter
yeahyeahyeahhh

NachoPiggy wrote:

deliciously awesome collab :) yummmy!

pretty much just tiny suggestions here

[Soft]
02:11:014 (2,3) - Can you make it like this? changed




[Collab]
01:09:935 (4,5) - Can you make it like this (a bit more central)? Just a humble suggestion ok! :>




yeah no problems pretty much lol

star~ty!
Mismagius
I don't think green color fits the BG...

Soft
Nothing

Collab
Nothing

Yay star.
Dusty
[Soft]
Could do for some more OD

[Collab]
02:07:992 (1,2,3,4,5) - unexpected

Nice stuff here!
Starrodkirby86
Phew...All in a day's work. :)

Download: extract-in-song-folder.rar

Don't forget to delete the .osb on your next Full Submission. oxo
Natteke
Forgot to star >_<

sexy map
DeathxShinigami
[Overall] Could use a [Relax] type diff but its not needed if you feel the mapset is already complete. Oh and...I hope Shinxyn doesn't get jealous for you collabing with Nexy. x:

[Soft]
02:16:625 - Find it funny how you used kiai on 01:12:740 - which is a similar point of the song to here but you didn't put any kiai at the end.

Agreeing with Dusty that this diff could use +1 OD.

[Collab]
02:16:625 - Same as what I said for [Soft]
02:30:438 (1) - Kinda hard to read.. but its duable.
Topic Starter
yeahyeahyeahhh

DeathxShinigami wrote:

[Overall] Could use a [Relax] type diff but its not needed if you feel the mapset is already complete. Oh and...I hope Shinxyn doesn't get jealous for you collabing with Nexy. x: should be up today, nexy will be done then. Nexy is all mine rawr!


[Soft]
02:16:625 - Find it funny how you used kiai on 01:12:740 - which is a similar point of the song to here but you didn't put any kiai at the end. didnt want too much kiai ;< maybe ill add

Agreeing with Dusty that this diff could use +1 OD. added but havent update yet, waiting for nexy so I can fix the SB

[Collab]
02:16:625 - Same as what I said for [Soft]
02:30:438 (1) - Kinda hard to read.. but its duable.
-Xero-
Hi there,

[Overall]
I dont get the Combo colours. Even if they are used in the wings of the character, it doesn't fit the bg cause you barely see those colours.

[Soft]
01:12:740 (1-3) Nothing for new players if you ask me..
01:14:467 (1-3)^
01:19:647 (1-3)^

Many breaks, but still an awesome diff!

[Collab]

Nothing non-nazi found, great work here as well!

star~
orioncomet
Flan Flan!! >[]<



Sound great to me really #.# nice collab etc etc. I really love SB ohhhh >////<
/me crazy
Starrodkirby86
You need 'em credit BGs?



eee
Awesome map guys
Kirby makes awesome visuals
Nexy and YYY have awesome patterns
Great Job
01:26:553 (Storyboard) - shouldn't the "nexy-blur" be upside down because that's where the rotating "nexy" left off
Starrodkirby86

eee wrote:

01:26:553 (Storyboard) - shouldn't the "nexy-blur" be upside down because that's where the rotating "nexy" left off
Nice observation. This was intentional though, as I wanted the player to see that the name went back to its original rotation angle in an instant. So yeah. x:
ignorethis
Great collab work!

pubble
Shinxyn
>-< you still want me to mod this eh?

Buncha nazi >_>

Soft-
00:26:877 - its very slight and instant, but I hear the soft -> normal slider slide changing here... shift this timing panel directly on end of slider please
01:04:107 (1,2,3) - ^ same "issue"... though its a bit more complex here... v.v
01:37:776 (2,3,4) - would think this would sound better matching 01:35:618 (2) v-v
01:55:042 (2,3,4) - ^
rest sounds fine, plays fair too

Relax-
00:12:740 (2) - ... remove whistle imo, let it start getting quiet here
00:34:755 (5) - picky: move this right a tick or slant this a bit more so it makes a line with 7? it looks... off as it is
00:42:740 (1,2) - sounds weird @.@... ahh... move (1) to where (8) is please? (of course remove 8 and respace)
01:10:798 (8) - imo, I think the double finish hitsound should be here instead (and leave next two notes blank while adjusting the normal volume after that?)
01:57:201 (3) - this whole part has unique hitsound patterns, but this clap sound odd...? okay, nvm, this whole section sounds "unique" ._.
02:09:719 (3) - kill out slider slide sound earlier? or move the timing panel to end of slider so you don't hear the slider slide change?
03:10:582 (4) - arrrgh, sounds sooo odd, just don't use the 1/4 slider D:
03:24:827 (6) - remove clap
rawr, I keep playing those 1/4 notes as 1/2 jumps ;-;
why do I keep getting the feeling the claps are on the wrong white ticks..... .... w/e...

Collab- saw this while it was WIP~
... mm, I still think this should be aimed towards approved... its a good map, but I don't think its hard enough (though long) for 17.9mil...
00:42:093 (5) - ... it sounds like its a 1/4 around here, make this like Relax's? (or was it just me testing Relax first and messing up this part)
01:10:798 (8) - same comment as Relax
01:26:338 (8) - another normal clap instead? x.x (same goes to Relax to then.. maybe.. w/e)
03:32:165 (4,5) - stack properly? (randomly saw this)
03:49:647 (7) - ^ (doesn't matter)

eww the spinner is sooo ugly *cough cough* (the center of the spinner-circle is at least ;-;)
-runaway-
jockeytiyan
Collab's too playable to be approved, IMO. I think score ain't too high against the length and the map's too fun for anybody to care about it. :)
Topic Starter
yeahyeahyeahhh

Shinxyn wrote:

>-< you still want me to mod this eh?

Buncha nazi >_> ewww Nazi

Soft-
00:26:877 - its very slight and instant, but I hear the soft -> normal slider slide changing here... shift this timing panel directly on end of slider please nuuuu
01:04:107 (1,2,3) - ^ same "issue"... though its a bit more complex here... v.v
01:37:776 (2,3,4) - would think this would sound better matching 01:35:618 (2) v-v nuuuu
01:55:042 (2,3,4) - ^
rest sounds fine, plays fair too

Relax-
00:12:740 (2) - ... remove whistle imo, let it start getting quiet here
00:34:755 (5) - picky: move this right a tick or slant this a bit more so it makes a line with 7? it looks... off as it is
00:42:740 (1,2) - sounds weird @.@... ahh... move (1) to where (8) is please? (of course remove 8 and respace)
01:10:798 (8) - imo, I think the double finish hitsound should be here instead (and leave next two notes blank while adjusting the normal volume after that?)
01:57:201 (3) - this whole part has unique hitsound patterns, but this clap sound odd...? okay, nvm, this whole section sounds "unique" ._.
02:09:719 (3) - kill out slider slide sound earlier? or move the timing panel to end of slider so you don't hear the slider slide change?
03:10:582 (4) - arrrgh, sounds sooo odd, just don't use the 1/4 slider D:
03:24:827 (6) - remove clap
rawr, I keep playing those 1/4 notes as 1/2 jumps ;-;
why do I keep getting the feeling the claps are on the wrong white ticks..... .... w/e...

Collab- saw this while it was WIP~
... mm, I still think this should be aimed towards approved... its a good map, but I don't think its hard enough (though long) for 17.9mil... ehh WHATEVER
00:42:093 (5) - ... it sounds like its a 1/4 around here, make this like Relax's? (or was it just me testing Relax first and messing up this part) just you!!!!
01:10:798 (8) - same comment as Relax but I like how it is T_T
01:26:338 (8) - another normal clap instead? x.x (same goes to Relax to then.. maybe.. w/e)
03:32:165 (4,5) - stack properly? (randomly saw this) Noo wut :<
03:49:647 (7) - ^ (doesn't matter)

eww the spinner is sooo ugly *cough cough* (the center of the spinner-circle is at least ;-;)
-runaway-
yaya
bubbled No.1

THIS MAP IS GOING TO APPROVAL
Topic Starter
yeahyeahyeahhh

yaya wrote:

bubbled No.1

THIS MAP IS GOING TO APPROVAL
ty

Edit:

Just a a note SOFT and RELAX are for RANK. COLLAB is for APPROVAL
Mafiamaster
Bubble #2!
Topic Starter
yeahyeahyeahhh

Mafiamaster wrote:

Bubble #2!
Thanks<3

3rd BAT, again make sure SOFT and RELAX are for RANKED and COLLAB is for APPROVAL. Thanks again.
Gabi
good stuff >.<
Beuchi
Lovely map <3

Probably the best U.N. Owen remix I've heard o.o *star*!
Topic Starter
yeahyeahyeahhh
ty guys!<3
Topic Starter
yeahyeahyeahhh
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rebub please. Pop'd due to spelling error in collab credit SB. Thanks!
yaya
bubbled.
Topic Starter
yeahyeahyeahhh
ty yaya!<3 :D
Mafiamaster
BuBbLe 2
Topic Starter
yeahyeahyeahhh

Mafiamaster wrote:

BuBbLe 2
thank you mafia<3
Ephemeral
Approved!
Starrodkirby86
Big congrats to you, boy!
Natteke
Awesomely awesome.
orioncomet
congratulation!!!!
alvisto
Too bad collab difficulty's score is too high, or else it would a good Insane difficulty.
Topic Starter
yeahyeahyeahhh

alvisto wrote:

Too bad collab difficulty's score is too high, or else it would a good Insane difficulty.
yeah =[
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