1. Okuu (4.89 stars, 409 notes)
2. Orin (4.8 stars, 465 notes)
3. Satori (1.82 stars, 229 notes)

ddrddr125 wrote:

Slider tick rate 2로
앞쪽보다 뒤쪽이 더 쉽다는 것만 지적할게요

Kim Jin Seok wrote:

Star☆

arumina wrote:

완성 기념~축하드려요~☆

sonnyc wrote:

ZUN 이라고 다들 되있는데, 그거 아닌가요?
맵을 안봤으므로 스타는 안줌 ><

1. 전체적으로 히트사운드가 없고요. 슬라이더 복사하고 붙여넣기 회전을 많이 했어요.

1. Slider Tick Rate = 1

1. 원크기 한칸 늘리세요. Normal과 Large사이 (F4)

lRasl wrote:

[General]

1. 전체적으로 히트사운드가 없고요. 슬라이더 복사하고 붙여넣기 회전을 많이 했어요.

[Easy]

1. Slider Tick Rate = 1

00:36:562 (1) - 박자 안맞음
00:44:249 (1) - Repeat는 그대로 놔두고 끝지점이 00:45:937에 끝나도록 맞추고 00:46:312에 노트 추가
00:48:562 (x) - 여기에 노트 들어가고 피니쉬 사운드도 들어가야하는데 박자가 안맞음
00:51:374 (8) - 박자 안맞음
00:53:249 (9) - ^
01:04:687 (6) - 밑으로 한칸
02:08:437 (1) - 02:09:187에 끝나도록 슬라이더를 줄이고 02:09:562에 노트 추가
03:24:187 (4,5) - 밑으로 한칸
03:36:187 (1) - 03:36:937로 끝나도록 슬라이더 줄이고 03:37:312에 노트 추가
03:39:937 (1) - 지우세요, 이거 오토로 돌리면 3천점 짜리인데 이지에서 오토3천점 짜리는 말도 안되는데다가 박자도 파란선에 끝나서 맞지도 않음.

[Insane]

1. 원크기 한칸 늘리세요. Normal과 Large사이 (F4)

SV가 2.6이라니...

00:48:562 (x) - 노트를 추가한다음에 피니쉬 넣으세요.
00:53:250 (1) - 00:53:062로 옮기세요.
01:01:312 (5) - 슬라이더 시작지점에 피니쉬
01:53:155 (7) - 지우세요
02:03:280 (7) - ^
02:12:374 (1) - 02:12:562로 옮기세요.
02:45:937 (6,7) - 왼쪽으로 한칸 이동
03:49:312 (1) - 지우세요

Vikon wrote:

nice song, therefore I am here to give a few suggestions~

[General]

no hitsound?
hitsound must be added if you want to get ranked
you may add whistle on every two white tick (e.g. on [insane] 00:02:812 (1,3,5...), for 1,3 add on the beginning of the slider )
Also, may add finish on the last note of a part (e.g. [insane] 00:16:312 )
or just use your own style, but remember those hitsound should not be too loud which may not match with this soft song.

set a preview point :
choose the climax of the song, and go to [timing] -> [set current position as preview point]
(the preview point should be the same in every difficulty)

get my star~

• • Delete the osb file, then "Full submission"
  • 00:18:280 - Timing --> Set current position as preview point.
  • Disable countdown, since it isn't used.
  • Artist: ZUN
  • Tags: Toho Project dōjin

• • 00:02:812 (5) - New combo
  • 00:11:812 (5) - ^
  • 00:22:687 (9) - ^
  • 00:36:562 (1) - Move the slider repetition here 00:36:937 {this slider should end here 00:37:312}
  • 00:43:874 (8) - New combo
  • 00:44:249 (1) - Remove New combo
  • 00:46:874 (3) - New combo
  • 00:48:749 (8) - ^
  • 00:55:874 (11) - ^
  • 01:14:437 (7) - ^
  • 01:18:187 (x) - Add a circle
  • 01:19:312 (8) - New combo
  • 01:20:812 (1) - Remove New combo
  • 01:23:437 (2) - New combo
  • 01:59:437 (7) - ^
  • 02:38:062 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 02:13:312
  • 02:42:187 (7) - New combo

• • 02:37:499 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 02:13:312
  • 00:31:687 (5) - New combo
  • 01:10:312 (7) - ^
  • 03:25:312 (5) - ^

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
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[General]

• • Delete the osb file, then "Full submission"
  • 00:18:280 - Timing --> Set current position as preview point.
  • Disable countdown, since it isn't used.
  • Artist: ZUN
  • Tags: Toho Project dōjin

[Satori]

• • 00:02:812 (5) - New combo
  • 00:11:812 (5) - ^
  • 00:22:687 (9) - ^
  • 00:36:562 (1) - Move the slider repetition here 00:36:937 {this slider should end here 00:37:312}
  • 00:43:874 (8) - New combo
  • 00:44:249 (1) - Remove New combo
  • 00:46:874 (3) - New combo
  • 00:48:749 (8) - ^
  • 00:55:874 (11) - ^
  • 01:14:437 (7) - ^
  • 01:18:187 (x) - Add a circle
  • 01:19:312 (8) - New combo
  • 01:20:812 (1) - Remove New combo
  • 01:23:437 (2) - New combo
  • 01:59:437 (7) - ^
  • 02:38:062 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 02:13:312
  • 02:42:187 (7) - New combo

[Orin]

• • 02:37:499 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 02:13:312
  • 00:31:687 (5) - New combo
  • 01:10:312 (7) - ^
  • 03:25:312 (5) - ^

wmfchris wrote:

[overall]
I don't know why... but the clap seems a bit loud >.<
gradually soften the sound at the last combo?

[Orin]
0:03:937 (6) spacing...?
0:10:874 (6) spacing different from (4,5).
0:43:312 (12,13) spacing -- (12) up 1 grid, (13), up 2 grid
1:10:312 (1,4) suggestion: add finish?
2:12~2:36 break that a bit too long, maybe add a few notes in it?

[Oku]
Both Orin and Oku are insane?
0:06:837 (3,4,5) down 1 grid?
0:09:187 (1) spacing
0:47:718 (2) spacing different from (1,2,3,4) before and (3,4) afterwards, left 1 grid

[saton] ok

star~

Leorda wrote:

Annyeonghaseyo

[General]
Your difficulty spread is E-I-I, the difficulty spread must be E-H-I. So you must remap [Orin]

[File]
1) Some bg are unrankable, find another bg or resize it to 640x480, 800x600, or 1024x768
Satori.jpg (738x676)
Oku.jpg (476x589)
Orin.jpg (532x657)

2) Is main.jpg is unused?? If unused, please delete it

[Satori]
00:21:937 (8) - Mix it up with finish and clap it's looks awful, remove finish or clap??
00:30:937 (8) - ^
00:35:437 (7) - ^
00:36:562 (1,2) - Too close together
00:43:874 (8,1) - Do it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10242
01:00:374 (5) - Mix it up with finish and clap it's looks awful, remove finish or clap??
01:04:687 (6) - Move 1 grid up??
01:08:062 (8) - New combo, it's very long for easy diff
01:08:437 (9,10,11) - Please! I don't want to stack with 8! Because it's boring to see
01:09:187 (11) - Mix it up with finish and clap it's looks awful, remove finish or clap??
01:13:687 (6) - ^
01:26:062 (8) - Mix it up with finish and clap at the end it's looks bad, remove finish or clap??
01:29:812 (5) - Make parallel?
01:35:062 (8) - New combo, it's very long for easy diff
01:36:187 (11) - Mix it up with finish and clap it's looks awful, remove finish or clap??
01:40:312 (4,5,6,7) - Move 1 grid down??
01:48:562 (5) - New combo
01:53:062 (7) - Mix it up with finish and clap it's looks awful, remove finish or clap??
02:03:187 (5) - ^
02:07:687 (6) - ^
02:41:437 (6) - ^
02:45:937 (6) - ^
02:45:937 (6) - ^
03:03:937 (6) - ^
03:08:437 (6) - ^
03:11:812 (8) - New combo, it's very long for easy diff
03:39:937 (7) - Mix it up with finish and clap it's looks awful, remove finish or clap??

[Oku]
Some object are mixed it up with clap and finish or whistle or finish, but that is awful, remove one of them

03:45:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - PLEASE set the volume down

[Orin]
Some object are mixed it up with clap and finish or whistle or finish, but that is awful, remove one of them

00:42:749 (9) - New combo
03:45:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - PLEASE set the volume down

Good song
STAR

[MuNyeom] wrote:

별을 원하는가?!!

0989596108 wrote:

BPM is too fast
i dont like fast BPM maps
could you please BPM divided by 2 or lower it? (in fact, changed or not personal opinions can be ... can not listen it does not matter
and ... may i have a taiko??

brikel wrote:

0989596108 wrote:

BPM is too fast
i dont like fast BPM maps
could you please BPM divided by 2 or lower it? (in fact, changed or not personal opinions can be ... can not listen it does not matter
and ... may i have a taiko??

Sorry. this map's bpm was already fast.
your suggestion is thanks, but i don't know taiko well and i don't have many time.
please your suggestion next time...

kino77 wrote:

Nice map~

[Satori]
Too loud...
00:00:562 (1) - 00:15:187 (4) volume 60%
All kiai time volume 80%
00:36:562 (1) - 01:18:187 (2) volume 70%
01:37:312 (1) - 01:53:062 (7) volume 60%
02:38:062 (1) - 02:53:812 (5) volume 80%
03:14:062 (1) - 03:27:562 (1) volume 60%
03:32:062 (1) - 03:39:937 (7) volume 80% KIAI plz
03:41:062 (1) - 03:44:437 (6) volume 50%
03:45:187 (1) - end volume 30%

[Orin]
01:27:187 - Add note aroud here?
03:00:562 (2) - Put right under end of 1?
03:32:062 (1) - Start KIAI here?
03:45:187 - Volume 50%

-Hitsound suggestion
00:02:062 (6,7) - whistle?
00:10:312 (3),00:11:437 (7) - Clap here and position like theirs?
00:18:749(1),00:19:124 (3),00:19:499(4) - Clap here and position like theirs?
00:45:374 (1) - Remove whistle and finish?
00:52:499 (5) - whistle?
00:55:874 (1) - Remove whistle and finish?
00:56:624 (3,4,5) - Whistle?
00:57:374 (1) - Finish?
00:58:124 (3) - Whistle?
01:00:749 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle?
01:01:312 (5),01:01:687 (6),01:02:062 (8),01:02:437 (9) - whistle here and position like theirs?
01:49:312 (4) - 01:50:249 (7) - 01:51:562 (11) - 01:52:687 (16) - Clap?
01:49:312 (4),01:50:437 (8),01:51:562 (11),01:52:687 (16) - Clap?
01:56:999 (5),01:57:374 (7),01:57:749 (1),01:58:124 (3) - Clap here and position like theirs?
03:26:062 (3),03:27:187 (7),03:28:312 (3),03:29:437 (7) - Clap?
If you do so,low the whole volume except the end?

[Oku]
00:21:937 (7) - End with next white tick?
03:32:062 - Start KIAI here?
03:45:187 - Volume 50%

Have a star~

ykcarrot wrote:

Good map for your 1st map.
I feel better when offset 547ms. (-15ms from yours)

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Must
Should
Suggestion


[Satori]
00:31:672 - distance
01:10:297 - ^
01:19:297 - ^
03:36:172 - fix distance
03:45:172 - i think you should put many timing sections with low volume.it sounds more better

[Orin]
00:14:047 - new combo
01:24:547 - ^
01:26:047 - ^
03:40:672 - trick with low volume starts end extend the end

[Oku]
Seems good to me. But do same as in Orin and Satori with low volume trick

Also you need easy difficulty

Star ;; )

Astom wrote:

hi =9

I feel some random mapping xD well nothing important I think.

Star

SadKangaroo wrote:

Hello brikel.

[Satori]
It's so long...
01:39:547 (2) - New combo?
01:41:797 (8) - ^
03:25:297 (5) - ^

[Orin]
00:46:859 (6) - New combo?
01:01:297 (5) - ^
03:16:297 (5) - ^

[Oku]
Well,I bet there're some moments you need to allign better.
00:22:672 (1) - Like this one and others as well.


Good luck,star~