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Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

Rakuen wrote:

Hi！

normal做完了！

http://puu.sh/eworp/9396856db7.osu

排列做得比较简单，希望还可以w
谢谢乐园酱=w=
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
刘明

Done
http://puu.sh/fe7hj/bb227379a2.zip
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
updated!
mod mod mod
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
From qq群

General

  1. 終於看見千本櫻的remap了，雖然是花姐唱的XD
    音效我不太會，就摸節奏和排版了，希望不要介意;w;

Easy

  1. 根本找不出要改的地方啦qwq

  2. 00:18:750 (3) - 移左一點和前面成一條直線
    00:18:750 (3,1) - 疊
    00:49:140 (2,3) - 不要碰到
    02:16:802 (3,1) - 疊

Rakuen's Normal

  1. 根本找不出要改的地方啦x2

  2. 00:05:504 (2,3) - 移左一點
    00:13:685 (7,1) - 不要碰到

yf's Hard

  1. 感覺好多切指

  2. 00:07:452 (4,5) - 換成兩個1/4滑條比較好
    00:19:530 (4,1) - 要不就疊在一起，要不就移遠一點吧
    00:56:348 - 加一個圓圈
    01:58:685 - 同上

Insane

  1. 用了很多不同的梗

  2. 00:18:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 這個正常人會當做8個的串，切指會很難，應該把00:18:750 (7) - 刪掉，然後00:18:848 (1) - 移到00:18:750 - 再拉成2/4的滑條
    00:19:724 (5) - 刪掉？
    00:25:763 (1,2,3,4,5) - 間距小一點，然後00:26:348 (1) - 移遠一點
    01:19:530 (1,2,3,4) - 可以放遠一點
    01:43:880 (5,6) - 由於前面有些1/4的切指，這個2/4會讓人容易誤認，建議不要疊
    01:51:478 (3) - 換成彎滑條？
    02:11:835 (6) - 刪掉？然後02:11:932 (7,8,9) - 移遠一點
基本上就這樣美麗，順便能求個mu嗎;w;
Kuuhaku
104 posts
Joined October 2011
Kuuhaku
后排占坑防忘记（这好像是什么flag？
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

ken2010123 wrote:

From qq群

General

  1. 終於看見千本櫻的remap了，雖然是花姐唱的XD
    音效我不太會，就摸節奏和排版了，希望不要介意;w;

Easy

  1. 根本找不出要改的地方啦qwq

  2. 00:18:750 (3) - 移左一點和前面成一條直線 k
    00:18:750 (3,1) - 疊 .-.不明白叠啥 这么远呢
    00:49:140 (2,3) - 不要碰到 故意的
    02:16:802 (3,1) - 疊 ^


Insane

  1. 用了很多不同的梗 xD

  2. 00:18:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 這個正常人會當做8個的串，切指會很難，應該把00:18:750 (7) - 刪掉，然後00:18:848 (1) - 移到00:18:750 - 再拉成2/4的滑條 这里节奏错了，我的错，改掉了
    00:19:724 (5) - 刪掉？ 这里这音这么强为什么删掉
    00:25:763 (1,2,3,4,5) - 間距小一點，然後00:26:348 (1) - 移遠一點 这样挺好的，我干脆把那个note移到五连最后一个note下面当梗了
    01:19:530 (1,2,3,4) - 可以放遠一點 好吧
    01:43:880 (5,6) - 由於前面有些1/4的切指，這個2/4會讓人容易誤認，建議不要疊 感觉还好吧 先不改了
    01:51:478 (3) - 換成彎滑條？ 行
    02:11:835 (6) - 刪掉？然後02:11:932 (7,8,9) - 移遠一點 这先不改了，本来这图小串就没几个
基本上就這樣美麗，順便能求個mu嗎;w; 好呀ww
Maboyu
373 posts
Joined November 2011
Maboyu
hello Ren m4m!!!
[Easy]
00:07:841 (1) - 這個頭感覺可以加個finish
00:55:179 (2,3) - EASY難度最好不要疊...
01:57:517 (2,3) - ^
01:03:945 (1) - 這個頭用finish?
01:53:815 (1) - ^

[Rakuen's Normal]
02:28:099 - 這條綠線好像沒用到，刪除??

[yf's Hard]
00:59:172 - 這邊+個note吧就跟02:01:413 (4,5,6) - 這段一樣
01:02:289 - 這邊也是+個note吧
02:07:841 - NC
02:11:737 (5) - ^
01:11:640 - note
01:14:757 - ^
02:24:205 - NC?

[Insane]
00:39:010 (1) - Finish
00:49:919 (1) - ^
00:56:153 (1) - ^
01:52:257 (1) - ^
01:15:244 - 跟後面那段一樣+個finish


差不多就這樣www 我渣摸請多多見諒>.<
祝早日Rank :3
SoGa
236 posts
Joined June 2013
SoGa
M4M request

[General]
[Easy]
  1. 00:41:348 (4,1) - 这2个都移下一点，别overlap ovo
  2. 00:55:179 (2,3,4,5) - 其实我觉得这个对newb有点难，00:55:179 (2,3) - 最好不stack
  3. 01:40:569 (5,2) - Nazi Stack .
  4. 01:42:127 (2,4) - ^
  5. 01:56:543 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - 和上面提的一样，有点难
  6. 01:22:646 这条绿线实际上没起作用，要不就是换下volume
[Rakuen's Normal]
  1. 00:51:478 (1,2) - Why is this one jump from ds1.2 to 1.4
  2. 01:57:711 (3,4) - ^
  3. 00:07:841 (1,4) - i would like to move 00:09:400 (4) - to the left side of the slider 00:08:620 (3,4) - ,more ez for newby to read (Personal Opinion)
  4. 00:28:685 (6,1) - Nazi , dislike this kind of Overlap >_>
  5. 01:22:646- Unnecessary Green Line Delete
  6. 02:28:099 ^
    Fine :)
[Yf's Hard]
  1. 01:09:789 (2,3,1) - 我觉得这个可能会，希望分开摆
  2. 01:40:763 (2,3,4) - 这个移到 x369 y243 ，我觉得现在的没blanket好
    Fine
[Insane]
  1. 00:01:608 其实第一条绿线没什么用处，直接把红线的sample set 换成N:C1不就好了？
  2. 01:22:646 其实这里停kiai真的好么，话说把break段 map掉啊
End
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
TO AliomLoung
all fixed!>.<我居然漏了这么多finish

To SoGa

SoGa wrote:

01:22:646 其实这里停kiai真的好么，话说把break段 map掉啊 这里break不是挺好的嘛.-. kiai的话我也不知道哪里停好 先放着
其他 all fixed
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
From queue
好久没写mod了 有小问题不要在意

[General]
none. 或者说我也不会查

[Easy]

00:15:633 (3,1) - 叠上了 看着不舒服
试试这样
http://puu.sh/fp0I7/ef7a154953.jpg
00:37:841 (3,1) - blanket都修一修 其他blanket都是正好或者弧度偏小 这两个显得比较突出 后面还有这样的懒得找了
00:55:179 - 看了一下第二段 这里可以加个note
01:03:945 (1) - ^, 歪了
01:14:465 (2) - 往下

[Normal]

00:49:919 (3) - 前後都是弧線滑條 這裡放個折線感覺有點突兀

[Hard]
这真不是light insane？
00:07:452 (4,5) - 意义不明 不过也能接受 我更喜欢往前移一格让4放到蓝线上
00:30:828 (7) - 右移一点 和后面的1/4间距区分开

[Insane]

00:12:127 (2,1) - 看了一下后面的摆法 这里不要叠着看起来更干净一些
00:16:023 (2,3,4) - 可以把3移到2的blanket位 毕竟没有特殊的位置要求
00:30:341 (8,1) - 这超卡手……别这么摆
00:33:166 (2,3) - 不好看 不要blanket或者增加2的弧度做个blanket都好 这个梗本身就不太好用
00:36:672 (3) - 老问题 叠上了 看得见的最好要避免 连sjoy都不这么弄（咦
00:42:127 (1) - 往右 antijump也和前面保持间距一致
00:42:906 (4) - 粘个边的摆法我个人不喜欢 多压点或者干脆摆开都好
00:44:075 (1,1) - 这两个还是明显做歪了 再调调
01:21:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然我不知道是不是 但如果要摆五边形还是摆好看点

大致就是这样 flow基本没问题 排列上多注意 做不到美观也至少前后细节保持一致
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
bg 大小 目前是1366*767 ……

[insane]

00:01:900 (2,2,2) - 建議去掉finish ，這個連著太吵了……

00:08:620 - 默認的哨子我覺得很蠢……

00:51:088 (7,8,1) - 等間隔會好看點

00:56:348 (2) - 建議去掉

00:59:659 (3,1) - 原則上是unrank …… 雖然間隔比較久我覺得沒問題 ……

01:21:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - 正五角？

02:24:302 (1) - 紅線開始

[easy]

1/1折返數量氾濫成災 ……

01:58:491 (4) - 單個圈

[hard]

重做前奏，減少切紙，連打和掉頭疊導致的讀圖壓力以保證前奏的難度低於副歌

01:02:192 (4,5) - 副歌取消所有1/2堆疊

hrad need meor wrok

Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

imoutosan wrote:

From queue
好久没写mod了 有小问题不要在意

[General]
none. 或者说我也不会查

[Easy]

00:15:633 (3,1) - 叠上了 看着不舒服 换了位置
试试这样
http://puu.sh/fp0I7/ef7a154953.jpg
00:37:841 (3,1) - blanket都修一修 其他blanket都是正好或者弧度偏小 这两个显得比较突出 后面还有这样的懒得找了 好吧，blanket没什么意思啊，而且我眼力不行，看不大出，差不多就算了
00:55:179 - 看了一下第二段 这里可以加个note 第二段这里也没note...不知道你说的是什么意思..
01:03:945 (1) - ^, 歪了 k
01:14:465 (2) - 往下 k

[Insane]

00:12:127 (2,1) - 看了一下后面的摆法 这里不要叠着看起来更干净一些 好
00:16:023 (2,3,4) - 可以把3移到2的blanket位 毕竟没有特殊的位置要求 我觉得你说的是1...我放1下面了
00:30:341 (8,1) - 这超卡手……别这么摆 感觉挺好玩的啊，而且要改就要改一片，懒比了
00:33:166 (2,3) - 不好看 不要blanket或者增加2的弧度做个blanket都好 这个梗本身就不太好用 blanket了
00:36:672 (3) - 老问题 叠上了 看得见的最好要避免 连sjoy都不这么弄（咦 k
00:42:127 (1) - 往右 antijump也和前面保持间距一致 k
00:42:906 (4) - 粘个边的摆法我个人不喜欢 多压点或者干脆摆开都好 移了一点位置，我觉得挺爽的
00:44:075 (1,1) - 这两个还是明显做歪了 再调调 好
01:21:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然我不知道是不是 但如果要摆五边形还是摆好看点 好

大致就是这样 flow基本没问题 排列上多注意 做不到美观也至少前后细节保持一致
感谢mod :)
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

Narcissu wrote:

bg 大小 目前是1366*767 …… ........

[insane]

00:01:900 (2,2,2) - 建議去掉finish ，這個連著太吵了…… 要的就是吵

00:08:620 - 默認的哨子我覺得很蠢…… 我也讨厌默认的哨子但是我找不到其他好用的音效

00:51:088 (7,8,1) - 等間隔會好看點 k

00:56:348 (2) - 建議去掉 这还是算了

00:59:659 (3,1) - 原則上是unrank …… 雖然間隔比較久我覺得沒問題 …… 打的时候没挡住我觉得没问题

01:21:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - 正五角？ 之前改掉了

02:24:302 (1) - 紅線開始 为什么呢.?

[easy]

1/1折返數量氾濫成災 ……

01:58:491 (4) - 單個圈 好

Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
怎么double post了Orz
Last edited by Karen , edited 2 times in total.
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
lol 切指是切指，问题图才多少bpm啊
AnOzi Changle
119 posts
Joined July 2014
AnOzi Changle
[Insane]
00:02:192 (3,1) - 00:02:971 (3,1) - 00:03:750 (3,1) - 统一一下间距
00:04:724 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 把1,3做成四方 2就放在中心吧
00:12:517 (1,2,3,4) - 不美
00:16:802 (4) - 反过来
00:19:335 (3,4,5,6) - 成平行四边形更好看
自作主张的修改
http://puu.sh/fqm15/4ea6d7062d.jpg
00:20:309 (1,2) - 没包好 2换一头比较好
00:22:646 (1,2,3) - 歪了
00:26:543 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 角度没选好以至于没包好 然后2没有重叠好
00:28:880 (1,2,4,5) - 1,2,5或者1,4,5小三角
00:37:841 (1) - 不太对头
00:38:620 (2) - NC
00:39:692 (4,5,6,7) - copy 00:40:569 (1) 滑条转成连打 ctrl+shift+F
00:40:958 (2,3,4,5,6) - 丑
00:45:828 (2) - 00:46:608 - 不明
00:46:802 (1,2,3,4,5) - 没摆好 建议在网络格上摆好后调整角度
00:46:802 (1,6,1) - 重叠问题 没对准
00:48:361 (1,2,3,4) - flow不好
00:54:595 (1,4) - 没对准 然后滑条建议重做一下
00:59:659 (3,1) - 没对准
01:03:945 (1) - ^
01:11:543 (9,1) - ^
01:20:309 (3,4,1,2) - ^
01:13:296 (1) - ^ x=283
01:05:504 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不好看
01:06:672 (6) - NC
01:08:815 (2) - 音不对
01:18:361 (3,4,5) - 不好 建议使用缩放
01:19:140 (6) - NC并且建议不这么放
02:05:893 (8,1) - 没包好


[yf's Hard]
神图摸不动


[Rakuen's Normal]
节奏看不懂
感觉好乱 摸不动


[Easy]
填白线好评
我来抓虫

00:26:543 (1,3) - 没对准 貌似不能重叠？
01:55:374 (3,1) - 一样的弧度更好看吧
02:08:620 (4,5,1) - 这里不应该三角么？
02:16:802 (3,1) - 没对准
折返略多



就这样吧
AIR
1,577 posts
Joined November 2012
AIR
为啥听起来像个男人？

[Easy]
  1. 00:31:218 (3) - 你有没有觉得拉一个条比用折返顺耳
  2. 01:41:348 (1) - ctrl+g
[Rakuen's Normal]
  • 没问题
[yf's Hard]
  1. 00:19:043 (2) - 1/6不好下的话空一下也行
  2. 01:05:504 (1,2) - 分别调头
  3. 01:09:789 (2,3) - 刻意加了重音，跳一下？
[Insane]
  1. 00:18:945 (2) - 00:29:075 - 压1/6吧
  2. 00:22:939 (2) - 同hard
  3. 00:57:322 (5) - 可以多拉1/4到蓝线，01:09:789 (1) - 01:59:659 (5) - 这里挺像的，建议搞一样的梗
  4. 01:13:296 (1) - 多了个点
  5. 01:21:965 (1) - ez里的转盘可以学这个，那个听着有点奇怪
看不动，shoot一个
gl
1476816523
2 posts
Joined April 2013
1476816523
DT后有点难（正常
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

ctpsky wrote:

[Insane]
00:02:192 (3,1) - 00:02:971 (3,1) - 00:03:750 (3,1) - 统一一下间距
00:04:724 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 把1,3做成四方 2就放在中心吧
00:12:517 (1,2,3,4) - 不美
00:16:802 (4) - 反过来
00:19:335 (3,4,5,6) - 成平行四边形更好看 好
自作主张的修改
http://puu.sh/fqm15/4ea6d7062d.jpg
00:20:309 (1,2) - 没包好 2换一头比较好 修了blanket
00:22:646 (1,2,3) - 歪了 k
00:26:543 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 角度没选好以至于没包好 然后2没有重叠好 没有blanket的目的，修了stack
00:28:880 (1,2,4,5) - 1,2,5或者1,4,5小三角 换了排列
00:37:841 (1) - 不太对头 k
00:38:620 (2) - NC k
00:39:692 (4,5,6,7) - copy 00:40:569 (1) 滑条转成连打 ctrl+shift+F
00:40:958 (2,3,4,5,6) - 丑
00:45:828 (2) - 00:46:608 - 不明
00:46:802 (1,2,3,4,5) - 没摆好 建议在网络格上摆好后调整角度
00:46:802 (1,6,1) - 重叠问题 没对准 k
00:48:361 (1,2,3,4) - flow不好
00:54:595 (1,4) - 没对准 然后滑条建议重做一下 K
00:59:659 (3,1) - 没对准 K
01:03:945 (1) - ^ K
01:11:543 (9,1) - ^ K
01:20:309 (3,4,1,2) - ^ K
01:13:296 (1) - ^ x=283 K
01:05:504 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不好看
01:06:672 (6) - NC K
01:08:815 (2) - 音不对
01:18:361 (3,4,5) - 不好 建议使用缩放
01:19:140 (6) - NC并且建议不这么放 NC了
02:05:893 (8,1) - 没包好 K

[Easy]
填白线好评
我来抓虫

00:26:543 (1,3) - 没对准 貌似不能重叠？ 修了stack，为什么不能重叠
01:55:374 (3,1) - 一样的弧度更好看吧
02:08:620 (4,5,1) - 这里不应该三角么？ K
02:16:802 (3,1) - 没对准 K
折返略多



就这样吧
感谢nazi mod no comment = no fix


AIR wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:31:218 (3) - 你有没有觉得拉一个条比用折返顺耳 有道理
  2. 01:41:348 (1) - ctrl+g

    AIR wrote:

    为啥听起来像个男人？

    [Easy]
    1. 00:31:218 (3) - 你有没有觉得拉一个条比用折返顺耳
    2. 01:41:348 (1) - ctrl+g k
    [Insane]
    1. 00:18:945 (2) - 00:29:075 - 压1/6吧 好
    2. 00:22:939 (2) - 同hard 好
    3. 00:57:322 (5) - 可以多拉1/4到蓝线，01:09:789 (1) - 01:59:659 (5) - 这里挺像的，建议搞一样的梗 行吧
    4. 01:13:296 (1) - 多了个点 这个无所谓的啦.-.
    5. 01:21:965 (1) - ez里的转盘可以学这个，那个听着有点奇怪 easy转盘不能放蓝线，我放红线好了
看不动，shoot一个
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yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
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Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
mostly fixed and remapped something thanks to guys

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248,40,67062,6,0,B|200:60|200:60|168:44|134:50,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,76,67452,2,0,B|136:124|136:124|120:156|126:189,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,208,67841,2,0,B|200:188|200:188|232:204|265:197,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,172,68231,2,0,B|264:124|264:124|280:92|273:58,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,40,68620,5,4,0:0:0:0:
116,76,68815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,208,69010,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,172,69205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,128,69400,5,2,0:0:0:0:
112,160,69789,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,152,69984,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,144,70179,6,0,B|188:132|188:132|267:151,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,172,70569,2,0,L|368:160,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,308,70958,2,0,B|380:264|380:264|272:280,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,244,71543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,344,71737,2,0,P|152:332|100:348,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,244,72127,2,0,P|148:207|100:181,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,147,72517,2,0,P|264:80|236:0,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,68,73101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,148,73296,6,0,B|300:128|300:128|331:141,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,73685,2,0,L|340:244,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,236,74075,2,0,B|166:258|166:258|223:312,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,348,74659,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,348,74854,2,0,P|352:360|404:352,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,264,75244,2,0,P|400:255|442:222,1,80,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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308,96,76217,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,96,76315,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,96,76413,6,0,B|260:108|224:77|224:77|193:82,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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11,146,77971,2,0,P|3:107|8:68,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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208,176,79335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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360,176,81478,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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220,288,95893,2,0,P|220:328|212:368,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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300,244,97062,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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224,196,97646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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200,232,103198,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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284,260,103491,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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124,280,104270,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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440,172,105244,5,2,0:0:0:0:
488,244,105439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,252,105633,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,44,106023,2,0,B|512:60|512:60|460:100,2,160,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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260,136,107387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,144,107484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,152,107582,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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268,232,108361,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,288,108945,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,288,109043,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,289,109140,2,0,P|177:325|183:364,1,80
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334,300,111867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,308,112062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,308,112159,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,308,112257,2,0,P|256:345|250:384,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,340,112646,2,0,P|118:302|134:265,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,252,112939,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,252,113036,2,0,B|184:180|141:165|164:95,2,160,10|8|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,136,114205,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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260,224,114984,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,236,115179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,152,115374,2,0,P|161:109|176:70,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,115763,2,0,P|296:56|335:54,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,89,116153,2,0,P|390:128|396:186,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,204,116543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
508,108,116737,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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324,192,117711,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,12,118101,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,184,118491,2,0,B|112:192|112:192|64:172,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,196,118880,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,284,119075,6,0,L|256:272,18,20,8|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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368,24,120828,2,0,P|319:82|345:154,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,256,121413,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,256,121510,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,256,121608,2,0,P|424:295|416:348,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,304,121997,2,0,P|319:343|286:385,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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368,375,123945,2,0,P|319:317|345:245,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,144,124530,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,144,124627,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,144,124724,2,0,P|424:104|416:52,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,96,125114,2,0,P|319:56|286:14,1,80,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,95,125504,2,0,P|176:60|80:88,1,160,2|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,156,126088,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,156,126185,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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216,336,127062,2,0,P|282:295|356:320,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,364,127646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,248,127841,2,0,L|420:260,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,164,128231,2,0,L|396:176,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,96,128620,2,0,B|444:68|444:68|356:84,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,72,129010,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,164,129205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,104,129400,6,0,P|178:114|127:85,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,60,129789,2,0,P|118:117|89:168,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,188,130179,2,0,P|121:177|172:206,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,232,130568,2,0,P|181:174|210:123,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,104,130958,5,4,0:0:0:0:
108,60,131153,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,188,131348,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,232,131543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,148,131737,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,96,132127,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,96,132322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,96,132517,6,0,B|316:132|316:132|297:211,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,228,132906,2,0,L|288:312,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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100,144,133880,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,144,133978,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,144,134075,2,0,P|88:105|96:52,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,24,134465,2,0,P|192:57|184:96,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,96,134854,2,0,P|330:65|389:60,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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396,192,135633,6,0,B|317:211|317:211|281:199,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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412,288,138458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,264,138556,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,252,138653,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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236,280,143425,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Awaken
something here

[General]
  1. Fine.

[Easy]
  1. Disable Widescreen.
  2. 00:20:309 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个最好整体下移一点 跟血条太近了

[Rakuen's Normal]
  1. 00:28:101 (5,6,7) - spacing
  2. 01:21:478 (4) - 这里还是调一下音量 这里的fin比前面明显小了 听起来有点明显

[yf's Hard]
  1. 02:19:530 (3,5) - Stack perfectly
  2. 00:31:997 (1) - 变速NC下比较好

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:192 (3,3) - Stack perfectly
  2. 00:03:945 (1,2) - 其实blanket这么做比较美
    SPOILER
  3. 00:04:335 (1) - 变速NC下比较好
  4. 00:31:218 (1) - Finish
  5. 00:55:179 (3) - 这里应该加个clap
  6. 01:01:900 (3) - Stack perfectly
  7. 01:19:919 (2,4) - 最好加clap
  8. 01:40:179 (1) - head clap 加whistle也不要丢了原曲里的clap
  9. 01:40:958 (1) - ^
  10. 01:46:413 (2,4) - ^
  11. 01:52:646 (3) - Clap.
  12. 01:57:711 (1,1) - 我建议这两个都NC一下 我看了全图觉得这种分隔的3/4slider不多 最好提醒一下
  13. 02:05:114 (3) - 这里有个Finish的音
  14. 02:09:789 (2) - 放个clap在这里比较好
  15. 02:10:569 (5) - Clap.
  16. 02:22:257 (1,1) - 这两个也头加个clap啊 也不会破坏whistle的效果

Good Luck for you to get ranked soon~
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen

ken2010123 wrote:

From qq群

General

  1. 終於看見千本櫻的remap了，雖然是花姐唱的XD
    音效我不太會，就摸節奏和排版了，希望不要介意;w;

Rakuen's Normal

  1. 根本找不出要改的地方啦x2
  2. 00:05:504 (2,3) - 移左一點
    00:13:685 (7,1) - 不要碰到
Fixed all! Thanks!

AliomLoung wrote:

hello Ren m4m!!!

[Rakuen's Normal]
02:28:099 - 這條綠線好像沒用到，刪除??

差不多就這樣www 我渣摸請多多見諒>.<
祝早日Rank :3
Fixed all! Thanks!

SoGa wrote:

M4M request

[Rakuen's Normal]
  1. 00:51:478 (1,2) - Why is this one jump from ds1.2 to 1.4
  2. 01:57:711 (3,4) - ^
  3. 00:07:841 (1,4) - i would like to move 00:09:400 (4) - to the left side of the slider 00:08:620 (3,4) - ,more ez for newby to read (Personal Opinion)
  4. 00:28:685 (6,1) - Nazi , dislike this kind of Overlap >_>
  5. 01:22:646- Unnecessary Green Line Delete
  6. 02:28:099 ^
    Fine :)
End
Fixed all! Thanks!

imoutosan wrote:

From queue
好久没写mod了 有小问题不要在意

[Normal]

00:49:919 (3) - 前後都是弧線滑條 這裡放個折線感覺有點突兀

大致就是这样 flow基本没问题 排列上多注意 做不到美观也至少前后细节保持一致
Fixed all! Thanks!

Awaken wrote:

something here

[Rakuen's Normal]
  1. 00:28:101 (5,6,7) - spacing Fixed
  2. 01:21:478 (4) - 这里还是调一下音量 这里的fin比前面明显小了 听起来有点明显 这里还好，不调

Good Luck for you to get ranked soon~
Thanks for mods!

My update (made to 2.41 star as requested to be harder):
Rakuen's Normal
osu file format v14

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480,116,103685,2,0,P|448:120|416:116,1,65
344,176,104075,2,0,P|311:180|279:176,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,236,104465,6,0,B|164:224|108:244|108:244|117:221,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,40,105244,2,0,P|122:48|151:65,1,65
200,144,105633,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,144,106023,5,2,0:0:0:0:
258,318,106413,1,8,0:0:0:0:
439,317,106802,1,2,0:0:0:0:
495,144,107192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,38,107582,6,0,L|200:38,1,130,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,192,108361,2,0,L|250:192,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,316,109140,2,0,P|408:257|405:193,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,108,109724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,132,109919,2,0,P|256:191|259:255,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,348,110698,5,2,0:0:0:0:
384,168,111088,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,232,111478,2,0,B|108:232|108:232|128:208,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,96,112257,2,0,L|344:96,1,65,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,168,112646,2,0,L|464:168,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,256,113036,2,0,L|340:256,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,264,113815,6,0,B|120:264|120:264|80:284|80:284|39:284,1,130,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,100,114595,2,0,B|80:100|80:100|120:120|120:120|164:120,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,72,115374,2,0,L|408:72,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,160,115763,2,0,L|371:160,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,232,116153,2,0,P|252:225|188:233,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,340,116932,5,10,0:0:0:0:
20,252,117127,2,0,L|108:144,1,130,14|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,92,117711,2,0,P|236:92|299:109,1,130,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,200,118491,2,0,P|425:207|395:220,1,65,14|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,300,118880,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,300,119075,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,288,119659,2,0,L|36:232,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,144,120049,6,0,P|103:110|165:92,1,130,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,120633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,91,120828,2,0,P|408:109|464:144,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,121608,2,0,L|352:348,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,288,121997,2,0,L|222:262,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,196,122387,2,0,B|128:212|88:272|88:272|83:251,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,68,123166,6,0,B|164:44|164:44|198:61,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,132,123750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,61,123945,2,0,B|348:44|348:44|436:68,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,236,124724,2,0,P|334:247|307:265,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,220,125114,2,0,P|196:214|166:200,1,65,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,192,125504,2,0,P|36:242|11:302,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,336,126283,6,0,L|332:336,1,130,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,260,126867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,204,127062,2,0,L|300:74,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,32,127841,2,0,P|113:62|112:94,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,164,128231,2,0,P|170:196|159:226,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,296,128620,2,0,P|156:284|232:300,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,324,129400,6,0,B|472:264|472:264|475:224,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,76,130179,2,0,B|300:136|300:136|296:175,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,328,130958,2,0,P|156:336|124:336,1,65,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,256,131348,2,0,P|54:233|31:210,1,65,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,124,131737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,24,132127,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,88,132322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,48,132517,6,0,P|399:35|462:49,1,130,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,132,133101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,196,133296,2,0,L|436:332,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,336,134075,2,0,L|256:264,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,240,134465,2,0,L|344:168,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,88,134854,2,0,L|244:88,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,188,135633,6,0,P|153:219|203:261,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,336,136218,1,0,0:0:0:0:
309,260,136413,2,0,P|358:219|416:188,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,32,137192,2,0,P|475:27|445:17,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,32,137582,2,0,P|327:46|300:65,1,65,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,120,137971,2,0,B|152:72|152:72|108:88,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,228,138750,6,0,B|56:232|108:208|108:208|108:236,1,130,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,320,139335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,352,139530,2,0,P|228:320|172:272,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,88,140309,2,0,P|196:83|228:86,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,164,140698,2,0,P|297:183|318:208,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,272,141088,2,0,P|446:256|496:215,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,96,141867,6,0,B|320:68|296:16|296:16|282:38,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,160,142646,2,0,B|99:168|46:148|46:148|52:174,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,324,143426,2,0,P|183:306|212:291,1,65,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,291,143815,2,0,P|328:305|356:324,1,65,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,268,144205,2,0,P|440:208|432:128,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144984,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145179,12,2,148101,0:0:0:0:
Nathan
Beatmap Nominator
2,144 posts
Joined August 2014
Nathan
hi small mod from #modreq

[yf's hard]
  1. 00:35:017 (3,4) - I recommend turning some doubles like these into 1/4 sliders to improve polarity a bit, it'll make the rhythm a bit easier since the doubles start on blue ticks
  2. 00:31:997 (4) - NC with sv change?
  3. 01:22:452 (2) - Slider ends on a downbeat with a finish, maybe just turn the end into a circle?
  4. 01:53:036 (9) - Slider also ends on a downbeat with a finish, try splitting it into 2 1/2 sliders and a circle so the downbeat is emphasized a bit more
  5. 01:59:075 (1) - Don't think the whistles fit here, remove or lower the volume even more, also since the momentum is going up it should be on the bottom half on the head of 02:00:049 (1)
    SPOILER
  6. 02:02:776 (9) - This kind of disrupts the flow, once the player finishes 02:02:387 (8) they will just be stopping on the reverse slider waiting for it to finish then they have to jump onto 02:03:166 (1), my recommendation is to make 02:02:387 (8) a 1/2 slider so you can increase the spacing
    Like this
cool map o.o
Adol Christin
875 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
花碳千本樱啊，感觉好man。。。如果是完整版就更好了【轮不到你说

SPOILER
刚好在正中间，连续两个miss。。。悲伤。。。

打了两三pc，随手写写。似乎离rank不远了，目测也没什么好改的。不用在意。

Insane


  1. 00:19:919 - 这里为什么突然用40%音量呢？感觉有些莫名。
  2. 00:32:776 - 00:43:491 感觉这里就可以开始在2、4拍用clap，而不是whistle了。原曲到这里伴奏跟01:35:114 - 01:47:192 一样的。那音效也用基本一样的呗。
  3. 01:19:140 (1,2,1) - 这梗厉害。。。两pc都漏了这里。。。
  4. 01:41:640 (2,2) - 看起来，前面相同节奏的地方都跟了人声，这里也可以继续跟呗。（意思就是：这两个圈可以考虑删了）
  5. 02:08:620 (5,6,7) - 这个空拍是真的有点难读。（当然也可以不管，毕竟前面都留了空拍，也能预判到了）

yf's Hard

  1. 00:18:166 (4,5,6,7) - Hard里来个切指梗真的没问题么。。。
  2. 00:32:776 - 00:43:491 跟I一样，我觉得这里可以开始在2、4拍开始用clap取代whistle。原曲这里的鼓点强度和伴奏跟01:35:114 - 01:47:192 就完全一致。音效也基本保持一致呗。
  3. 01:59:075 (1) - 就是这根滑条！我第一pc觉得是只有总共半拍的折返，自信松手，瞬间爆炸！（当然，不是说要改掉它，发个牢骚啦）。
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
To Awaken： All fixed except

Awaken wrote:

01:57:711 (1,1) - 我建议这两个都NC一下 我看了全图觉得这种分隔的3/4slider不多 最好提醒一下 这你指的两个是有NC的，我猜你说的是前面两个3/4？我觉得还好，先不改
thanks for mod! :)

To Adol Christin

Adol Christin wrote:

00:19:919 - 这里为什么突然用40%音量呢？感觉有些莫名。 因为我觉得这个音量太大了而已
00:32:776 - 00:43:491 感觉这里就可以开始在2、4拍用clap，而不是whistle了。原曲到这里伴奏跟01:35:114 - 01:47:192 一样的。那音效也用基本一样的呗。 好的
01:19:140 (1,2,1) - 这梗厉害。。。两pc都漏了这里。。。 汗
01:41:640 (2,2) - 看起来，前面相同节奏的地方都跟了人声，这里也可以继续跟呗。（意思就是：这两个圈可以考虑删了） hmm..这里是个人觉得这样很爽
02:08:620 (5,6,7) - 这个空拍是真的有点难读。（当然也可以不管，毕竟前面都留了空拍，也能预判到了） 嗯这个说的好，改掉了，这样确实难读
thanks for mod and testplay! :)
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
_(:зゝ∠)_占位置
[Insane]
00:10:471 (x) - 这块就我来说绝对有音啊，没有音的话至少别靠这么近读起来跟1/4一样
00:13:101 (4,5) - 跟音乐的话这边的跳绝对比较大一点
00:16:705 (x) - 有音加1
00:18:750 (1) - 这块的节奏我觉得应该是这样的(下图见89
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2740155
00:20:698 (2,1) - 00:21:478 (2,1) - 间距搞一样
00:25:374 (2,1) - 这俩搞大一点，间距
00:26:348 (1) - ....这边加NC你还不如别搞覆盖得了
00:26:543 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 因为这边的节奏和前面并没有这么大的区别所以不建议这么跳，还是和前面一样花点心思摆摆造型
00:30:439 (1) - 这货能不能摆在正中央...强迫症
00:33:166 (2) - ctrl+g？
00:34:725 (2) - ^
00:35:115 (3,4,5,6) - 这边跟歌词的话摆的稍微交错一点别这么光滑感觉会更好，因为和前面那句的语气不同
00:38:231 (1,1) - 鉴于这俩我觉得搞个跳更好玩，所以要不然1这条ctrl+g一下？
00:38:231 (1) - 然后这个的blanket可以稍微再调一下
00:39:010 (1,2) - ...这个停顿对我来说蛮奇怪的....要是我的话这俩直接搞slider
00:39:887 (6,7) - 这俩都加whistle
00:42:127 (1,2) - 相比之下这个停顿倒是不怎么奇怪但是前面这跳有点太大了说好的善良呢
00:42:906 (4,5,6,7) - 这个跳感觉是渐渐变大的
00:44:075 (1) - 00:44:854 (1) - 这俩都ctrl+g一下会比较好
00:48:361 (1,2) - 这俩稍微摆的好看点好不咯............还有尾巴靠太近了
00:51:478 (1,2,3) - 前面同样的节奏你还用的1.1x呢...怎么这里1.0x了
01:03:556 (8,1) - 这里的跳可以搞大一点
01:04:530 (4,5,6,7,8) - 我希望你能把这个间距搞一样..
01:08:815 (2) - 为什么..要用1/6
01:13:296 (1) - 丑哭了.....
01:45:244 (3) - 这个拉到蓝线结尾比较好我觉得
01:46:413 (2) - 这边我觉得光跟人声满不带感的所以试试这个节奏？
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2740285
01:51:478 (3) - 这个扭曲的幅度再大一点会比较好
02:09:205 (7) - 这个放到像是x384 y360的地方会比较好玩一点
02:21:088 (3,4) - 还不如搞成前面那种一顿的那个...

昨天丫在床上躺了整整5个小时死活没睡着！！！！！！让我先去睡会回来补orz

[yf's Hard]
00:07:452 (4,5,1) - 反正就我来说这个读不出来，前面这么简单突然这里这么一下.....能不能用正常间距...
00:07:452 (4,5,1,2) - 然后这几个放在一起就更读不懂了
00:12:517 (1,2) - 你不觉得这里应该搞个跳强调一下么？要不然2这个ctrl+g一下？
00:24:984 (1,2) - ^
00:29:659 (1,2,3,4,5) - 前面节奏处理的这么细后面跟个slider感觉被漏节奏了，建议是123这三个note删掉然后换成个1/2的slider
00:39:302 (5) - NC
KIAI这边统一说一下我就不一一搞出来了
00:59:270 (5,6) - 像是这样的地方slider和slider之间隔得这么近感觉非常的....放不开，用note或者说加大slider之间的间距会比较好一点
01:17:971 (5,6) - 像是这里我就觉得挺不错的，玩起来
然后KIAI这边这种同样的问题我就不重复了
01:41:640 (1) - 从这里开始的复制
反正就我来说..........歌词的停顿处变了啊.....不可以这么直接复制过来的啊...
01:41:640 (1) - 删掉
01:41:932 (3) - 删掉
01:42:030 (x) - +note
01:42:906 (1,2,3,4,1) - 同上
01:44:465 (1,2,3,4,1) - 同上
这三组的4这个note从我这里来听的话完全没占到任何的音啊...
01:55:763 (6) - ctrl+g，总而言之这里搞个跳
两分多钟还复制黏贴啊..

[Rauken's Normal]
01:17:192 (3) - 这个我觉得搞弯的比较好玩儿
01:21:867 (1) - 这里俩节奏类型建议给你，第一个是这里放一个note，然后spinner和Insane一样，或者说delete掉01:21:867 (5) - 然后在01:21:867 (5) - 放一个note就行了
01:34:724 (1) - 这里的这个音没有强到要特地放一个note..我觉得还是删掉比较好
02:19:335 (2,3) - ....能把2放到3中间不咯..

[Easy]
00:06:672 (2,1,2) - 个人极度讨厌这种靠的特别近特别近的滑条特别是靠的近完了后00:08:620 (2,3,4) - 这里的滑条的间距突然变得辣么大...........get到point了么..
00:14:075 (1,2,3) - ^与上面的这个对比这仨的好接受多了
01:05:504 (3) - 在红点之前用两个白点可以更好地调节blanket
01:13:296 (1) - you too (σ‘д′)σ

继续加油吧
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

tutuhaha wrote:

_(:зゝ∠)_占位置
[Insane]
00:10:471 (x) - 这块就我来说绝对有音啊，没有音的话至少别靠这么近读起来跟1/4一样 :arrow: 加了note
00:13:101 (4,5) - 跟音乐的话这边的跳绝对比较大一点 :arrow: 嗯
00:16:705 (x) - 有音加1 :arrow: 加了
00:18:750 (1) - 这块的节奏我觉得应该是这样的(下图见89 :arrow: 嗯，改了
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2740155
00:20:698 (2,1) - 00:21:478 (2,1) - 间距搞一样 :arrow: 嗯
00:25:374 (2,1) - 这俩搞大一点，间距 :arrow: 嗯
00:26:348 (1) - ....这边加NC你还不如别搞覆盖得了 :arrow: 嗯 换了摆法
00:26:543 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 因为这边的节奏和前面并没有这么大的区别所以不建议这么跳，还是和前面一样花点心思摆摆造型 :arrow: 这个其实不跳吧，小折返跟圈不一样
00:30:439 (1) - 这货能不能摆在正中央...强迫症 :arrow: 好
00:33:166 (2) - ctrl+g？ :arrow: 有道理
00:34:725 (2) - ^
00:35:115 (3,4,5,6) - 这边跟歌词的话摆的稍微交错一点别这么光滑感觉会更好，因为和前面那句的语气不同 :arrow: 交错一点..是什么...这个跟前面如果不一样感觉挺奇怪的
00:38:231 (1,1) - 鉴于这俩我觉得搞个跳更好玩，所以要不然1这条ctrl+g一下？ :arrow: 嗯 有道理
00:38:231 (1) - 然后这个的blanket可以稍微再调一下 :arrow: 嗯
00:39:010 (1,2) - ...这个停顿对我来说蛮奇怪的....要是我的话这俩直接搞slider :arrow: 我觉得挺爽
00:39:887 (6,7) - 这俩都加whistle :arrow: 好
00:42:127 (1,2) - 相比之下这个停顿倒是不怎么奇怪但是前面这跳有点太大了说好的善良呢 :arrow: 改小了
00:42:906 (4,5,6,7) - 这个跳感觉是渐渐变大的 :arrow: 好
00:44:075 (1) - 00:44:854 (1) - 这俩都ctrl+g一下会比较好 :arrow: 嗯 有道理
00:48:361 (1,2) - 这俩稍微摆的好看点好不咯............还有尾巴靠太近了 :arrow: 好的咯
00:51:478 (1,2,3) - 前面同样的节奏你还用的1.1x呢...怎么这里1.0x了 :arrow: 手滑了吧..改了
01:03:556 (8,1) - 这里的跳可以搞大一点 :arrow: 没地方搞了.-.
01:04:530 (4,5,6,7,8) - 我希望你能把这个间距搞一样.. :arrow: 好
01:08:815 (2) - 为什么..要用1/6 :arrow: ...应该是手滑
01:13:296 (1) - 丑哭了..... :arrow: 啊/w\
01:45:244 (3) - 这个拉到蓝线结尾比较好我觉得 :arrow: 嗯
01:46:413 (2) - 这边我觉得光跟人声满不带感的所以试试这个节奏？ :arrow: 行
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2740285
01:51:478 (3) - 这个扭曲的幅度再大一点会比较好 :arrow: ..行吧
02:09:205 (7) - 这个放到像是x384 y360的地方会比较好玩一点 :arrow: 好的
02:21:088 (3,4) - 还不如搞成前面那种一顿的那个... :arrow: 好.-.

[Easy]
00:06:672 (2,1,2) - 个人极度讨厌这种靠的特别近特别近的滑条特别是靠的近完了后00:08:620 (2,3,4) - 这里的滑条的间距突然变得辣么大...........get到point了么..
00:14:075 (1,2,3) - ^与上面的这个对比这仨的好接受多了
01:05:504 (3) - 在红点之前用两个白点可以更好地调节blanket
01:13:296 (1) - you too (σ‘д′)σ
:arrow: all fixed
继续加油吧 :arrow: =.=
thanks for mod~
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
MirinH
from my q
[Easy]
  1. 00:04:724 (1,2) - blanket
  2. 01:48:750 (2,3) - 没直
  3. 节奏比较单调,建议多用2/1
[Rakuen's Normal]
  1. 2.42怀疑太高
  2. 其他没什么
[yf's Hard]
  1. 01:41:640 (1,2) - 前面可以用二连因为前面是真的有二连vocal，这里往后就是overmap惹，不建议
[Insane]
  1. dt兼职人玩
  2. 00:36:672 (3,4,5,6) - 前面都是钝角梗然后这里突然来回跳
  3. 01:17:971 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^前面都是双滑条这里突然大跳，要不把前面也跳要不把这里改了
  4. 01:35:698 (3,4,5,6,7) - 跟vocal就要跟到底，至少把这一段跟完，这里又不是没有vocal干嘛跟钢琴
  5. 01:38:620 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  6. 02:05:698 - 然后这里ins丰富你又突然空了
  7. 02:24:302 (1) - whistle
没啥能摸，gl
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

Alex Li wrote:

from my q
[Easy]
  1. 00:04:724 (1,2) - blanket :arrow: 好
  2. 01:48:750 (2,3) - 没直 :arrow: 为何要直.-.
  3. 节奏比较单调,建议多用2/1 :arrow: 你书的很队，但是我只会1/2 spam
[Rakuen's Normal]
  1. 2.42怀疑太高 :arrow: 因为hard比较难，所以nm必须难一点
  2. 其他没什么
[Insane]
  1. dt兼职人玩 :arrow: 这是none图啊你们怎么都想着DT
  2. 00:36:672 (3,4,5,6) - 前面都是钝角梗然后这里突然来回跳 :arrow: 想了想还是改成了另一种来回跳
  3. 01:17:971 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^前面都是双滑条这里突然大跳，要不把前面也跳要不把这里改了
  4. 01:35:698 (3,4,5,6,7) - 跟vocal就要跟到底，至少把这一段跟完，这里又不是没有vocal干嘛跟钢琴 :arrow: 因为我觉得这里钢琴里的串很明显的说.-.先不改
  5. 01:38:620 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  6. 02:05:698 - 然后这里ins丰富你又突然空了 :arrow: 加了个note
  7. 02:24:302 (1) - whistle
没啥能摸，gl
thanks！
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
irc
20:51 Kagamine Ren: 大号哇
20:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
20:54 Kagamine Ren: 唉 有没有M4M啊
20:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
20:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 可以啊
20:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 你要磨砂
20:54 Kagamine Ren: 等等 你好象摸了我的图
20:54 Kagamine Ren: 啊 王杰了
20:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
20:54 Kagamine Ren: 忘记了
20:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: uccu
20:55 Kagamine Ren: 唉
20:55 Kagamine Ren: 哭了
20:55 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 找chloe摸啊
20:55 Kagamine Ren: 那要不摸千本樱
20:55 *Kagamine Ren is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/570975 Hanatan - Senbonzakura]
20:55 Kagamine Ren: 臭了才不摸
20:55 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 花本樱
20:56 Kagamine Ren: 233
20:56 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 声线好奇怪233
20:56 Kagamine Ren: 听了一万遍，现在一遍都不想听了
20:56 *Kagamine Ren is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/631859 Hatsuki Yura - Nanka Ii Koto]
20:57 Kagamine Ren: 还是叶月好啊
20:57 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 叶月
20:57 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 不想听你还怎么rabk...
20:57 Kagamine Ren: 不想听也得听
20:57 Kagamine Ren: 带了GD 不能坟啊
20:57 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233 至于吗
20:57 Kagamine Ren: rabk得下辈子了
20:57 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:39:692 (4,5,6,7) - 这个不好听
20:58 Kagamine Ren: 01:45:633 (4) -
20:58 Kagamine Ren: 这个赞啊
20:58 Kagamine Ren: kawaii
20:58 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: kawaii
20:59 Kagamine Ren: 你有啥图要摸哇
21:00 *[CSGA]Ar3sgice is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/632027 BiBi - Trouble Busters]
21:00 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 来
21:01 Kagamine Ren: 好好
21:01 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:16:705 (4) - 你怎么不放1/6
21:02 Kagamine Ren: 啊
21:03 Kagamine Ren: 这个也挺合适吧
21:03 Kagamine Ren: 算了还是改一下
21:03 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 1/6好玩啊
21:03 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:18:945 (2) - 这也是
21:05 Kagamine Ren: 这要1/6就只能放圈了，好坑人
21:05 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 也是, 别放了
21:06 Kagamine Ren: 该1/6还是1/6吧，用折返跟一下好了
21:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
21:07 Kagamine Ren: 想了一下还是坑一点
21:09 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:54:595 (1,2,3,4) - 这个往右边放一点比较好看
21:10 Kagamine Ren: 嗯..有道理
21:11 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:21:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - 用polygon tool啊
21:12 Kagamine Ren: 啊
21:12 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: create polygon circles 用那个做多好
21:12 Kagamine Ren: 那是什么
21:12 Kagamine Ren: ctrl + D吗
21:12 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: compose下面那个
21:12 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: ctrl+shift+D
21:13 Kagamine Ren: .-.
21:13 Kagamine Ren: 好哇
21:14 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:47:387 (6) - 我觉得这个去掉比较好
21:15 Kagamine Ren: 有道理
21:15 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 换声线了...
21:15 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 02:12:127 (9) - 换两个短滑条怎么样
21:16 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这样衔接显得更加有力
21:16 Kagamine Ren: 嗯 好
21:16 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 02:18:263 - add
21:17 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 好 美丽
21:17 Kagamine Ren: 行
21:17 Kagamine Ren: 谢了.-.,
21:17 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 好 我贴论坛
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
大号哇
hehe
1,960 posts
Joined November 2012
hehe
here bcos hanatan

General

  1. the mp3 bitrate :p

Insane

  1. 00:03:945 (1) - i think you should curve this some more so that the blanket is nicer, and the 1/4 spacing is easier to play
  2. 00:12:711 (2) - blanket 00:11:737 (1) - . if you move there, the flow is better because of the repeat slider before: http://i.imgur.com/M6DJos2.png
  3. 00:15:633 (1,3) - maybe move so no overlap and good blanket? :D
  4. 00:16:672 (4,5,6) - i think there is no good indication that this is 1/6 note, try to lower spacing. if not, turn 00:16:413 (3,4,5) - into 00:18:750 (1,2) - which is more playable for the diff.
  5. 00:26:153 (5,6) - do bigger spacing, it is not nice to play like this now
  6. 00:29:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ctrl+g for good flow!
  7. 00:41:348 (3,4,5,6) - 00:42:906 (4,5,6,7) - don't you think the jumps here are not as intense as the intro(00:12:711 (2,3,4) - ), so why is it bigger spacing? :/
  8. 00:52:062 (2) - spacing is too low here i feel, i played as 1/4 spacing orz
  9. 00:57:322 (5) - try this shape+pattern? i think the spacing after is not good now, because its buildup part. to show the increase in SV, the two sldiers must be space closer together for better feeling. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2805619
  10. 01:12:906 (4,1) - is this mistake.. it doesnt look correct since 4 is a 1/2 slider. maybe you can increase to 3/4 slider?
  11. 01:15:244 (2) - try a soft finish on sliderhead?
  12. 01:19:530 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - maybe do perfect symmetry? (use ctrl+h)
  13. 01:21:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can try ctrl+H too, i think it is more readable.
  14. 01:21:965 (1) - end spinner here? i think it is more suitable although you are follow vocal.
  15. 01:43:880 (5,6) - i dont think stack pattern suits here
  16. 01:46:413 (2,3) - this spacing too far :x
  17. 02:03:750 (3) - split to 2 circle, or use slider at 02:03:945 - , the sound there is very loud and i don't think sliderend is suitable.
  18. 02:10:958 (1,3) - i think both clap+whistle is good. or whistle+finish.

yf's Hard

  1. 00:13:296 (3,4) - 00:25:763 (3,4) - space this more so that the 1/2 spacing is easier to read. can be confusing now. a little space is okay since it is slider.
  2. 00:30:926 - add note and do regular 5 note stack?
  3. 01:09:400 (1,2) - are you sure about this?

    beautiful map

Rakuen's Normal

  1. 01:22:841 (1) - spinner don't seem necessary.

Easy

  1. 01:57:517 - 00:55:179 - add note? i don't think 3/2 spacing is good in easy.

good luck
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
m4m

NO KD

General

  1. mp3文件需要128-192kbps，换个。

Insane

  1. 00:10:179 (1,2,3) - 这边是四连。你在00:16:413 (3,4,5,6) - 放四连了这里为何是三连。
  2. 00:26:932 (2,1) - 跳太大了，知道你是为了做00:26:543 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 的梗，但还是要考虑到和整张图ds设定的问题。别的地方都普通，这边很突兀的1/4大跳不太适合。
  3. 00:57:322 (5) - 音量太轻了，这里至少调到30%
  4. 01:06:867 (2,1) - 感觉位置换下比较好
  5. 01:19:335 (2,1) - 同上，然后跳放小一点。（对称要不要保持就随意了
  6. 01:45:244 (3,4) - 这个跳也是略大，稍微小点，大概3.00差不多就够了。
  7. 整个图排版还有待加强，初期别为了摆些形状强行作梗，等你对节奏和跳把握比较好的时候再这么做比较好。另外，用那么多3/4很容易被各种人狂喷，我个人是没什么意见，看你的了。

yf's Hard

  1. 复制粘贴差评。
normal and easy diff are fine to me.

good luck.
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

handsome wrote:

here bcos hanatan

General

  1. the mp3 bitrate :p fixed

Insane

  1. 00:03:945 (1) - i think you should curve this some more so that the blanket is nicer, and the 1/4 spacing is easier to play changed the patterm
  2. 00:12:711 (2) - blanket 00:11:737 (1) - . if you move there, the flow is better because of the repeat slider before: http://i.imgur.com/M6DJos2.png ok
  3. 00:15:633 (1,3) - maybe move so no overlap and good blanket? :D ok
  4. 00:16:672 (4,5,6) - i think there is no good indication that this is 1/6 note, try to lower spacing. if not, turn 00:16:413 (3,4,5) - into 00:18:750 (1,2) - which is more playable for the diff. changed this to a repeat slider:3
  5. 00:26:153 (5,6) - do bigger spacing, it is not nice to play like this now ok
  6. 00:29:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ctrl+g for good flow! wow nice idea
  7. 00:41:348 (3,4,5,6) - 00:42:906 (4,5,6,7) - don't you think the jumps here are not as intense as the intro(00:12:711 (2,3,4) - ), so why is it bigger spacing? :/ hmm..ok
  8. 00:52:062 (2) - spacing is too low here i feel, i played as 1/4 spacing orz ok changed
  9. 00:57:322 (5) - try this shape+pattern? i think the spacing after is not good now, because its buildup part. to show the increase in SV, the two sldiers must be space closer together for better feeling. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2805619 ok
  10. 01:12:906 (4,1) - is this mistake.. it doesnt look correct since 4 is a 1/2 slider. maybe you can increase to 3/4 slider? it's on purpose because it follows the vocal.but i change it 2 notes instead of a slider
  11. 01:15:244 (2) - try a soft finish on sliderhead? i think it's no need but still changed it
  12. 01:19:530 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - maybe do perfect symmetry? (use ctrl+h) ok
  13. 01:21:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can try ctrl+H too, i think it is more readable. i don't know what's your mean... this is perfect imo...
  14. 01:21:965 (1) - end spinner here? i think it is more suitable although you are follow vocal. ...where?
  15. 01:43:880 (5,6) - i dont think stack pattern suits here changed
  16. 01:46:413 (2,3) - this spacing too far :x ok
  17. 02:03:750 (3) - split to 2 circle, or use slider at 02:03:945 - , the sound there is very loud and i don't think sliderend is suitable. hmm,added a slider
  18. 02:10:958 (1,3) - i think both clap+whistle is good. or whistle+finish. ah,i don't think so x.x

Easy

  1. 01:57:517 - 00:55:179 - add note? i don't think 3/2 spacing is good in easy. ok

good luck
changed a lot,thanks for mod~
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

NO KD

General

  1. mp3文件需要128-192kbps，换个。唉，怎么剪mp3还会降比特率，跳楼了，fix

Insane

  1. 00:10:179 (1,2,3) - 这边是四连。你在00:16:413 (3,4,5,6) - 放四连了这里为何是三连。 改了
  2. 00:26:932 (2,1) - 跳太大了，知道你是为了做00:26:543 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 的梗，但还是要考虑到和整张图ds设定的问题。别的地方都普通，这边很突兀的1/4大跳不太适合。 好，减小了间距
  3. 00:57:322 (5) - 音量太轻了，这里至少调到30% 感觉20，30没什么区别啊，我只想营造一个静音的效果，不过还是改了
  4. 01:06:867 (2,1) - 感觉位置换下比较好 好
  5. 01:19:335 (2,1) - 同上，然后跳放小一点。（对称要不要保持就随意了 这里就算了.感觉不需要这样改
  6. 01:45:244 (3,4) - 这个跳也是略大，稍微小点，大概3.00差不多就够了。 好
  7. 整个图排版还有待加强，初期别为了摆些形状强行作梗，等你对节奏和跳把握比较好的时候再这么做比较好。另外，用那么多3/4很容易被各种人狂喷，我个人是没什么意见，看你的了。 嗯我会重新做一部分，3/4滑条的话感觉很适合音乐，其他人喷就喷吧，我无所谓

yf's Hard

  1. 复制粘贴差评。
normal and easy diff are fine to me.

good luck.
感谢=.=
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
http://puu.sh/gbJb8/e9a5351cad.zip 大改 以及音效
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
好 更新了，我也用你这个soft finish好了.-.
meii18
3,577 posts
Joined October 2013
meii18
From


Here's my mod
asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - important

General
  1. Add 黒うさ in tags
  2. The timing looks weird to me =/ Maybe add a red line on 00:45:244 with 154.02 BPM ? I'm not sure

Easy
  1. 00:04:724(1)- Remove whistle and add finish instead cuz here I heard a cymbal sound
  2. 00:09:400(3,4)- This pattern looks weird to me =/ and it can ruin the flow . Try this : http://puu.sh/gfjlq/25c96f8d6b.jpg
  3. 00:24:205(2)- Move the last gap to 197|228 to the pattern look great ;)
  4. 00:29:659(1)- Move the slider's tail to 00:30:049()- and then on 00:30:439()- add a note to follow the piano well
  5. 00:31:218(3)- Add NC cuz new vocals
  6. 00:32:776(1)- I think this slider is not so curved =/ Move the middle gap to 443|123 to make it curve ;D
  7. 00:35:114(4)- imo the placement of this slider makes the current pattern look weird =/ Place the last gap to 414|239 . It should be like here : http://puu.sh/gfkuP/7c21a34ed3.jpg
  8. 00:39:789(2,3,4)- You tried to make an acute angle ? D: It doesn't look so nice imo . Here's the best ;3 : http://puu.sh/gflAK/69365c4aa2.jpg
  9. 00:57:711(1)- I think this slider touch the HP bar =/
  10. 01:00:439(4)- Move it to 361|285 cuz the current placement of the note creating an nazi blanket with the previous note D:
  11. 01:14:854(3,4)- imo the pattern looks weird =/ Try this instead : http://puu.sh/gfmus/ee30d56615.jpg
  12. 01:35:893(1,2,3)- An imperfect angle pattern =/ Move (3)- to 397|322 to the angle pattern look perfect o3o

Rakuen's Normal
  1. 00:01:608(1,2,3)- Are you sure that the linear pattern looks fine ? In my mind it looks not so perfectly =/ I tried and here it's the pic : http://puu.sh/gfnBO/fec15787ca.jpg
    20,284,1608,6,0,L|215:284,1,195,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    215,192,2387,2,0,L|20:192,1,195,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    20,100,3166,2,0,L|215:100,1,195,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:07:841(1)- Unsnapped blue line
  3. 00:10:763(7)- I think this note touch the HP bar @.@
  4. 00:13:296(6)- Move the first gap to 208|53 and then the middle gap to 173|51 for a perfectly pattern with the next note and here's the code :
    204,56,13296,2,0,P|172:53|140:54,1,65
    I hope it's the correct code
  5. 00:20:309(1)- Unsnaped blue line
  6. 00:31:023(4)- Place this note to 133|325 cuz placed under previous slider's tail is unreadable =/ I guess
  7. 00:35:504(2)- Move the last gap to 266|164 for a perfectly pattern
  8. 00:37:452(4,5)- Dunno these sliders make the flow unbalanced =/ Try this : http://puu.sh/ggT3p/3b9f2871ad.jpg
  9. 00:56:348(6)- Instead putting here a repeat , why you not remove the reverse and add then a circle after the slider ? It will fit the vocals much better ;3
  10. 01:09:010(4)- Remove finish from slider's head cuz I don't hear a cymbal sound here =/
  11. 01:21:478(4)- Same as above
  12. 02:11:348(4)- Remove finish . No cymbal sound
  13. 02:23:815(4)- Same as above

yf's Hard
  1. 00:18:166(4,5,6)- Instead putting 3 notes , why you not replace them with a 1/6 slider ?
  2. 00:19:919(1)- Move the last gap to 365|104 cuz the current placement of this slider makes the current pattern look weird =/
  3. 00:29:659(1,2,3,4)- I think instead 4 notes works an 1/8 slider ( 1/4 with two reverses ) also to catch perfectly the instruments , snap the next slider from 1/6 to 1/8
  4. 01:00:439(8)- I think here a 1/6 slider heard very weird . Maybe replace it with 2 notes like here : http://puu.sh/ggW5U/0d2a13129f.jpg
  5. 01:59:075(1)- Wow a 1/4 slider with a lot of reverse ! Why you not put here a 1/4 slider without reverses how you did at 00:56:737(1)- ?
  6. 02:02:776(9)- A 1/6 slider again here ~ It heard weird . In my opinion , I choose putting 2 notes instead a 1/6 slider here =/
  7. 02:15:244(9)- Same as above

Insane
  1. 00:39:692(1,2,3,4)- Hmmm delete (1)- and (3)- cuz these notes doesn't fit good the vocals and instruments =/
  2. 01:00:828(1)- Maybe remove the repeat from slider and add 2 notes instead like here : http://puu.sh/ggYkW/92ba75a921.jpg
  3. 01:09:789(1)- Pls improve this slider ~ It looks unnestetic imo =/

Meeh That's all from me :3

Good Luck ~
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