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easy
・00:33:576 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - tooo many reverse sliders in one short part.. most of your reverse sliders end on the downbeat so it doesnt give a proper natural response of beats. and its a pretty important thing, especially for easiest diffs tbh. if possible, i'd like to recommend changing the objects here. from here 00:32:796 - like this:
・01:00:848 (1,2,3,4,1) - same about reverses ;w; starting from here 01:03:965 (1) - there is a new couplet and would be nice if you had there more intense pattern, for example, 2 1/1 sliders instead. what do you think?
・02:12:537 (1,2,3,4) - try to make this pattern less cramped. the transition into 4 slider here 02:13:705 (3,4) - is broken, if you could make it flow straightly into the slider, would be cool. something like this should work here:
yf's
・what about AR7.8? to make AR settings progression more slight through the set
just a random mod `_`
・00:33:576 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - tooo many reverse sliders in one short part.. most of your reverse sliders end on the downbeat so it doesnt give a proper natural response of beats. and its a pretty important thing, especially for easiest diffs tbh. if possible, i'd like to recommend changing the objects here. from here 00:32:796 - like this:
・01:00:848 (1,2,3,4,1) - same about reverses ;w; starting from here 01:03:965 (1) - there is a new couplet and would be nice if you had there more intense pattern, for example, 2 1/1 sliders instead. what do you think?
・02:12:537 (1,2,3,4) - try to make this pattern less cramped. the transition into 4 slider here 02:13:705 (3,4) - is broken, if you could make it flow straightly into the slider, would be cool. something like this should work here:
yf's
・what about AR7.8? to make AR settings progression more slight through the set
just a random mod `_`
Topic Starter
ty.Aka wrote:
easy
・00:33:576 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - tooo many reverse sliders in one short part.. most of your reverse sliders end on the downbeat so it doesnt give a proper natural response of beats. and its a pretty important thing, especially for easiest diffs tbh. if possible, i'd like to recommend changing the objects here. from here 00:32:796 - like this: ok,reworked this
・01:00:848 (1,2,3,4,1) - same about reverses ;w; starting from here 01:03:965 (1) - there is a new couplet and would be nice if you had there more intense pattern, for example, 2 1/1 sliders instead. what do you think? reworked this
・02:12:537 (1,2,3,4) - try to make this pattern less cramped. the transition into 4 slider here 02:13:705 (3,4) - is broken, if you could make it flow straightly into the slider, would be cool. something like this should work here: reworked this
yf's
・what about AR7.8? to make AR settings progression more slight through the set i'll asl yf later.
just a random mod `_`
Rebubbled again~
where is the CTB diff?
Topic Starter
deleted as exam's request.
Sorry no change, CS3 is nice for normal imoKodora wrote:
Please change CS to 4.0 at Normal for better spread
Let me know~
Players feel free to add mods
Update: http://puu.sh/hi8AG/7b974d0770.osu
Topic Starter
no change on Normal as Rakuen said.
and change Hard to ar7 as yf's request. EDIT: 7.5
and change Hard to ar7 as yf's request. EDIT: 7.5
Get this ranked~!
I want to qualify it /w\
Topic Starter
ty byby i'll call you when i.need your heart.
I was summoned here by ByBy. After a quick discussion I've decided to drop a few suggestion about the Normal diff.
[Normal]
Firs of all, due to the amount of 1/2s and the way your rhythm works I'd recommend to rename the diff to Advanced. Which means that the diff is somewhat Normal+ like.
[Normal]
Firs of all, due to the amount of 1/2s and the way your rhythm works I'd recommend to rename the diff to Advanced. Which means that the diff is somewhat Normal+ like.
- Try higher AR, 6 or at least 5,5 should do fine. Lowering CS to 3,5 would result in a better balance and readability too, by the way.
- The diff is already at it's peak. There are a lot of intense parts like 00:27:731. That is why, using sliders like 00:48:381 (1,2,3) - will be an overkill for the players. Sudden change of slider's direction feels out of place here. Same applies formost of the sliders with similar shape. In addition, those sliders go off music/vocals, oh hardly follow it, so I see no reason to keep them.
Note: 00:20:329 (1) - an obvious example. The curve is snapped to 1/12, which makes no sense. - 00:01:628 (1,2,3) - 3/4 sliders with repeats would work much better here, if you ask me. Same applies to 00:04:744 (1,2).
Note: if you want to keep the agressive curves, at least make them match with the music, so that they'd land on the blue ticks, so that the sliders would make sense with the music. Same applies to 00:31:238 (5).
Please, re-consider this diff as a whole. We believe it needs some changes before it can go into the Qualified section.
100th post
Hi ~ Unfortunately I have to pop the bubble because the hard diff have some streams and triplets which can make a spread gap between normal and hard but I think the streams can be replaced
I'll give some suggestions :
[yf's Hard]
Hi ~ Unfortunately I have to pop the bubble because the hard diff have some streams and triplets which can make a spread gap between normal and hard but I think the streams can be replaced
I'll give some suggestions :
[yf's Hard]
- 00:29:679(1,2,3,4)- I really prefer to change this little stream with 2 1/4 sliders do not destroy the spread and to be a bit easier for player
- 00:38:446(2,3)- I recommend to remove those 2 notes because clearly I hear the small break of vocal
- 00:46:628(5,6)- There's no reason to put those notes when here's the same lyric from 00:46:433(4)-
- 00:49:744(4,5)- ^ because here's the same lyric from 00:49:550(3)-
- 00:52:861(4,5)- ^ same lyric from 00:52:666(3)-
- 00:58:511(3,4)- Seems here's a unnatural flow because the cursor doesn't arrive on next note perfectly ;_; Considering moving the last gap to 252|126 for a better flow
- 01:40:783(2,3)- Same reason as 00:38:446(2,3)- I really prefer to remove those 2 notes while there's a small break of the vocal
- 01:48:965(5,6)- I suggest to remove those 2 notes while there's same lyric from 01:48:770(4)-
- 01:52:082(4,5)- ^ because same lyric from 01:51:887(3)-
- 02:01:433(3,4)- Unnatural flow as 00:58:511(3,4)- Considering moving (4)- (5)- and (6)- to 433|220 for a better flow than before but be careful with DS spacing
- 02:18:381(1,2,3,4)- I would like to replace this little stream with 2 1/4 sliders to be a bit easier for player and do not destroy the spread I guess
Don't really get the sense you mean tho, but it's a good mod-Bakari- wrote:
I was summoned here by ByBy. After a quick discussion I've decided to drop a few suggestion about the Normal diff.
[Normal]
Firs of all, due to the amount of 1/2s and the way your rhythm works I'd recommend to rename the diff to Advanced. Which means that the diff is somewhat Normal+ like.I've also dropped a few ideas for other diffs via in-game chat.
- Try higher AR, 6 or at least 5,5 should do fine. Lowering CS to 3,5 would result in a better balance and readability too, by the way. Nothing different when you play with DT. Higher AR might cause pressure for new players to read. Like when you're new you can't read high AR like AR9, and sort
- The diff is already at it's peak. There are a lot of intense parts like 00:27:731. That is why, using sliders like 00:48:381 (1,2,3) - will be an overkill for the players. Sudden change of slider's direction feels out of place here. Same applies formost of the sliders with similar shape. In addition, those sliders go off music/vocals, oh hardly follow it, so I see no reason to keep them.
Note: 00:20:329 (1) - an obvious example. The curve is snapped to 1/12, which makes no sense. Hmm, kinda agree with this, but it's kinda my style to map shapes like that, altho it might be shitty for you.
Shapes won't cause to "kill" players, as the sharp is only a small part. Don't fly your cursor here and there and it'll fit in the slider ball area (it's quite big tho ;3)- 00:01:628 (1,2,3) - 3/4 sliders with repeats would work much better here, if you ask me. Same applies to 00:04:744 (1,2). Hard did that so I'm thinking something easier. It's a good suggestion tho, will try to change it
Note: if you want to keep the agressive curves, at least make them match with the music, so that they'd land on the blue ticks, so that the sliders would make sense with the music. Same applies to 00:31:238 (5). imo as long as the flow is not too bad, it's okay to play. Shapes are just like our faces, you can't ask someone who has ugly face to just turn to what you like (make up or something else)
Please, re-consider this diff as a whole. We believe it needs some changes before it can go into the Qualified section. I'm 100% sure my diff wont get DQ for the shapes
Thanks very much!
ByBy_ChAn wrote:
100th post
Hi ~ Unfortunately I have to pop the bubble because the hard diff have some streams and triplets which can make a spread gap between normal and hard but I think the streams can be replaced
I'll give some suggestions :
[yf's Hard]That's all ~ Feel free to poke me back for recheck :3
- 00:29:679(1,2,3,4)- I really prefer to change this little stream with 2 1/4 sliders do not destroy the spread and to be a bit easier for player Spread is ok I think. Let us see the Normal diff.
- 00:38:446(2,3)- I recommend to remove those 2 notes because clearly I hear the small break of vocal Fixed Anyway
- 00:46:628(5,6)- There's no reason to put those notes when here's the same lyric from 00:46:433(4)- ^
- 00:49:744(4,5)- ^ because here's the same lyric from 00:49:550(3)- won't change this
- 00:52:861(4,5)- ^ same lyric from 00:52:666(3)- OK
- 00:58:511(3,4)- Seems here's a unnatural flow because the cursor doesn't arrive on next note perfectly ;_; Considering moving the last gap to 252|126 for a better flow Maybe
- 01:40:783(2,3)- Same reason as 00:38:446(2,3)- I really prefer to remove those 2 notes while there's a small break of the vocal OK
- 01:48:965(5,6)- I suggest to remove those 2 notes while there's same lyric from 01:48:770(4)- ^
- 01:52:082(4,5)- ^ because same lyric from 01:51:887(3)- won't change this
- 02:01:433(3,4)- Unnatural flow as 00:58:511(3,4)- Considering moving (4)- (5)- and (6)- to 433|220 for a better flow than before but be careful with DS spacing Umh, will break the style
- 02:18:381(1,2,3,4)- I would like to replace this little stream with 2 1/4 sliders to be a bit easier for player and do not destroy the spread I guess
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216,336,127082,2,0,P|282:295|356:320,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,364,127666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,248,127861,2,0,L|420:260,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,164,128251,2,0,L|396:176,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,96,128640,2,0,B|444:68|444:68|356:84,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,72,129030,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,164,129225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,104,129420,6,0,P|178:114|127:85,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,60,129809,2,0,P|118:117|89:168,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,188,130199,2,0,P|121:177|172:206,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,232,130589,2,0,P|181:174|210:123,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,104,130978,5,4,0:0:0:0:
108,60,131173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,188,131368,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,232,131563,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,148,131757,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,96,132147,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,96,132342,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,96,132537,6,0,B|316:132|316:132|297:211,1,120,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,228,132926,2,0,L|288:312,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,376,133316,2,0,P|193:318|167:246,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,160,133900,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,160,133998,1,2,0:0:0:0:
71,159,134095,2,0,P|39:137|0:133,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,100,134485,2,0,P|167:60|151:24,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,96,134874,2,0,P|348:92|389:60,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,72,135264,2,0,L|428:112,2,40,8|8|4,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
396,192,135653,6,0,B|317:211|317:211|281:199,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,176,136043,2,0,L|280:92,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,25,136433,2,0,P|193:83|167:155,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,224,137017,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,224,137115,1,2,0:0:0:0:
71,224,137212,2,0,P|39:246|0:250,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,284,137602,2,0,P|167:323|151:359,1,80,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,288,137991,2,0,P|348:296|380:332,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,316,138381,5,8,0:0:0:0:
412,288,138478,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,264,138576,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,252,138673,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,252,138770,6,0,B|340:204|370:168|370:168|365:137,1,120,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,116,139160,2,0,L|344:32,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,88,139550,2,0,B|189:133|189:133|201:173|245:185|276:159,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,37,140134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,160,140329,2,0,L|272:256,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,248,140718,2,0,L|420:152,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,300,141108,2,0,B|404:352|404:352|325:376,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,279,141692,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,279,141887,6,0,P|178:269|127:298,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,324,142277,2,0,P|118:266|89:215,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,196,142666,2,0,P|121:206|172:177,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,152,143056,2,0,P|181:209|210:260,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,280,143446,5,4,0:0:0:0:
108,324,143640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,196,143835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,152,144030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,236,144225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144420,12,2,148121,0:0:0:0:
To Kagamine Ren : I received the kudos from this map 2months ago so I denied my kudos from my bubble pop post ;w;
btw update yf's diff and let me know (:
btw update yf's diff and let me know (:
Topic Starter
l？
i have updated it already。
i have updated it already。
Ok (:
ReBubbled
ReBubbled
Quick recheck
Call me back~
Forum PM me please.
- 01:46:043 (1) - In Hard, potentially off-screen slider. Please, just to be safe, move the bump of the slider or the entire slider a bit to the left.
- 00:15:653 (1) - In the Insane, I think the clap on the head of this slider might be a mistake, cuz it sounds a bit out of place. If I'm wrong, then just ignore this.
Call me back~
Forum PM me please.
Everything seems fine now.
Have my heart, ren-san~!
Qualified~
Have my heart, ren-san~!
Topic Starter
thank you nya~
good
时隔这么久终于rank了，gj
just noticed that it's already qualified when i'm going to check the ctb........ i think im too late to check the ctb ;___; huft..
anyway congrats!
anyway congrats!
飞！
grats！
grats！
Congrats Kagamine Ren :3 lol rhythm incarnate now
Greetings, your map has to be taken away from the Qualified section.
Insane
Hard
Normal
Mods are of course highly appreciated.
Good luck with the requalification.
###C
- Several wrongly snapped objects in the prelude:
- 00:10:394 - this isn't 1/6 snapped, should be http://puu.sh/hzP3I/cbcacb9b03.jpg instead.
- 00:16:628 (4) - ^
- 00:18:965 (2) - ^
- 00:29:095 (2) - ^
- Several wrongly snapped objects in the prelude:
- 00:10:394 - this isn't 1/6 snapped, should be http://puu.sh/hzP3I/cbcacb9b03.jpg instead.
- 00:16:628 (4) - ^
- 00:18:965 (2) - ^
- 00:29:095 (2) - ^
- 01:59:095 (1) - The way of interpreting the background music for this slider is quite incomprehensible. The snare at 01:59:095 - gives the esthesis of halting instead of ongoing, starting the 1/8 slider at 01:59:679 - makes more sense with the vocal and synthesizer as adjuvant.
- 00:31:043 (4) - Although we understand the intention of normal being harder than the average level, this circle stacking behind of a slider tail is still way too confusing as a novoice difficulty. Most importantly, the high distance snap over objects are solely enough for the spread purpose.
Good luck with the requalification.
###C
Fixed, thanks for mods!IamKwaN wrote:
Normal
- 00:31:043 (4) - Although we understand the intention of normal being harder than the average level, this circle stacking behind of a slider tail is still way too confusing as a novoice difficulty. Most importantly, the high distance snap over objects are solely enough for the spread purpose.
Update #2: http://puu.sh/hBNWr/88d38c3c82.osu (Increased AR 5 > 5.5)
Topic Starter
all fixed!
and changed Insane's AR from 8.5 to 9 as some players' request. oh okay still 8.5.
- Just some complaints.
- My personal suggestions.
- Highly recommended.
- Unrankable, you have to fix it.
Easy
- 00:42:147 (5) - nc
- 00:20:329 (1,2,3) - 感觉这里的节奏对新人有点难抓吧，我还是建议换成和前面一样的，或者后面00:23:446 (1,2,3) - 那样的也行
- 00:26:563 (1,2,3) - ^
- 00:10:394 (2,3) - 这种梗我不建议放在hard里面，索性就不要去跟比较好
- 00:30:069 (5) - 延长一拍？
- 00:43:705 (1,1,1,1) - 这梗我比较喜欢，相比00:37:472 (1,1,1,1) - 这个就我了个草了
- 00:51:108 (7,8,1) - 1应该再拉远一点
- 01:36:985 (2,3) - stack
- 01:53:056 (7,8) - 这俩滑条能长得差不多一点吗
normal sv有点大，别的还行
yf的hard单看质量的确不错，但是我个人认为难度有些偏高，有一些对hard来说并不是好读好处理的梗；
insane打起来应该还行，但是看起来排列是有点乱的，另外感觉节奏的空档比较多，打击感不是很好，可以多用一些滑条来补充的，具体可以参照铃爷的千本樱的节奏下法
目前在我看来这图还是不太适合rebubble，抱歉。
Topic Starter
那个3/4滑条不知道咋改就算了。Minakami Yuki wrote:
- Just some complaints.
- My personal suggestions.
- Highly recommended.
- Unrankable, you have to fix it.
EasyInsane
- 00:42:147 (5) - nc
说一下总体感受吧……
- 00:43:705 (1,1,1,1) - 这梗我比较喜欢，相比00:37:472 (1,1,1,1) - 这个就我了个草了
- 00:51:108 (7,8,1) - 1应该再拉远一点
- 01:36:985 (2,3) - stack
- 01:53:056 (7,8) - 这俩滑条能长得差不多一点吗
normal sv有点大，别的还行
yf的hard单看质量的确不错，但是我个人认为难度有些偏高，有一些对hard来说并不是好读好处理的梗；
insane打起来应该还行，但是看起来排列是有点乱的，另外感觉节奏的空档比较多，打击感不是很好，可以多用一些滑条来补充的，具体可以参照铃爷的千本樱的节奏下法
目前在我看来这图还是不太适合rebubble，抱歉。
去年捣鼓的图了= =现在大概知道这图要这么改了，但是听了几万遍这歌，耳朵都长茧，啥时候有兴趣了再改吧
Kagamine Ren wrote:
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年6月2日 at 16:42:30
Artist: Hanatan
Title: Senbonzakura
Tags: hatsune miku 初音ミク yf_bmp rakuen KurousaP Vocaloid 黒うさP 百狐千樂
BPM: 154
Filesize: 6174kb
Play Time: 02:28
Difficulties Available:Download: Hanatan - Senbonzakura
- Easy (1.53 stars, 172 notes)
- Insane (4.31 stars, 524 notes)
- Rakuen's Normal (2.43 stars, 275 notes)
- yf's Hard (3.53 stars, 405 notes)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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= =
Mod[General]
+- Suggestion:
- I still think a normal mapset have a hard icon (since the difficult more than 2.25 stars) is unsuitable. Maybe this problem will become one of the QAT's (again) dis-quality reason.I suggest that make it easier that around 2.3 stars at least.
+- Comment(just some chatting):
- 以后接mod前打死也要先听一下歌，看到人哥做的和花碳唱的头一昏我就接了。这歌声唱的也忒爷们了。
[Easy]
+- Opinion:
- 00:01:628 (1) This slider's former part is ok but the latter part's drum sound seemed not catch correctly. To tell you the truch, i don't know how to solve it, maybe give up catch 00:02:212's downbeat, let this slider's ball change direction at 00:02:163 (1/8 snap division) is a little better?
- 01:05:524 (3) Whether you want catch "na" or "no" words there, this slider's red point is still not correct.let the ball change direction at 01:06:108 is better.
- 01:16:433 (1) I believe that follow voice there is better, because the background music is not obvious. In this part, the singer sings 4 words, respectively in 01:16:433, 01:16:725, 01:17:017 and 01:17:212.so try to use slider's red point to proformance that.
- 02:04:744 (3) The voice's pitch relevancy is simply down here. so i think this slider is a little weird.
[Rakuen's Normal]
+- Suggestion:
- 00:23:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) So when i play this part, i think there is in a mess. I really don't know how to play this part.I consider this part should be remap. you may have a clearly defination about what note you should catch and what you shouldn't.
+- Opinion:
- 00:01:628 (1,2,3) I will point out the problem in the first slider as a example. Firstly, i think the drum sound in 00:01:920 is as same important the before one and the later one,since you have picked them up.no reason not to pick this one. Secondly, the slider shaped with a line looks too simple, maybe reshape it slinky to let the beatmap looks more clearly and beautiful is a good choice, or you can let the slider turn back at 00:01:920.
- 00:04:744 (1,2) The latter one's truck is understandable, but the former one let me confused. I don't know what sound is your red point following.
- 00:09:225 you have followed this kind of sound in 00:08:446 (2,5), It's strange that now following this sound. (or delete note in 00:08:446 (2,5)), 00:15:495 have the same problem.
- 00:13:121 (5,6,7) I don't know if it's a little hard for just a normal diff...(00:16:238 (5,6,7) is same)
- 00:17:796 (2,3) The slider in 00:17:212 (1) begin in a downbeat so it's ok, but the slider in 00:17:991 (3) begin in a normal sound (relative to 00:17:796 (2)) semmed a little weird. You can replace them to a long slider.
- 00:21:108 (3,4) When test playing, i feel strange about gap between these two note,add a circle in 00:21:303 to follow main piano sound is better i think.
- 00:37:472 (4,5) So the voice's PR in 00:37:472 (4) is nearly same; 00:38:251 (5) 's "ko","ka" is divided clearly. Yet you can keep 00:37:472 (4)'s slider but reshape to a curve shape. 00:38:251 (5) must be divided to two circle.
- 00:45:069 (7) I think give up this note is better so you can emphasize "I","C","B","M".keep it as it was is also fine.
- 00:56:173 (5,6) this cover is a little hard...? It require a higher skills to read map, maybe it's too hard for just beginner player?
- 00:59:290 (5,6) Change direation like that is better. (screenshot). the voice's pitch relevancy change is become higher and higher in 00:59:290 (5), lower and lower in 00:59:679 (6).
- 01:03:186 (7) It's easily to know that the sound in 01:03:186 have end up at 01:03:381, and the durm sound not only have a more closely related to 01:03:965 (1) this part not former part, but also same as 01:03:770. so in order to keep balance,I have a idea:(screenshot) (02:17:991 (7) is similar.)
- 01:22:861 (1) a weird Spinner that i totally don't know what it's following, and why it's end up suddenly.
- 02:03:186 (1,2,3) When test playing i notice that there maybe a little hard for beginner player, but i don't know how to solve it. ;w;
[yf's Hard]
+- Opinion:
- 00:30:361 leave there in a gap on purpose? I perfer add a circle in (272,100) to following this stream piano sound.
- 00:38:640 (3) like normal diff, i think these two sound have no logical combination. break them to two circle here.
- 00:52:861 (4) delete this note in more suit for voice's rhythm.
- 00:56:757 (1) have a slider when no sound in 00:56:952 ~ 00:57:342 is strange. I perfer not blanket there,turn to use a circle in (407,352) at 00:56:757 (to keep balance with 00:56:563 (7)) and a slider in 00:57:342 ~ 00:57:634 is better.
- 01:06:303 (7) break it to two circle at (prv.) start location and end location is better. It seemed that 01:06:887 (8) is same as sound in 01:06:629, and they are all start part of next sentence. Moreover，the voice in 01:06:303 is stop at 01:06:498 very clearly. so break can proformance the part division more clearly.
- 01:37:472 (5,6,7,8) Keep it as it was is fine enough but i believe you can arrange them better.(a ideascreenshot)
- 01:53:056 (9) NC here? To show this part is a gap filling part.
[Insane]
+- Opinion:
- OD can increasing to 8 or higher since it's already top diff.
- 00:03:965 (1,1) I think these two sound are same (at least they are all downbeat). so keep same SV plz.
- 00:05:037 (2,3) Umm.. I think you can swap these two note's location there. keep it as it was is also fine. (00:05:816 (2,3) are same)
- 00:13:316 (5,6,7,8,9,10) rearrangement a little to let it more suit for pitch relevancy change. screenshot
- 00:14:485 (2,3,4,5,2,3,4,5) a little weird that just let mouse move by a straight line. reshape it's to a fold line or curve line is better?
- 00:18:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) There's pitch relevancy is change in a regular range. so i have a idea to reshape like this (screenshot) or this (screenshot)
- 00:22:666 (6) NC here since this is new part's begin.
- 00:23:835 (2,3,4,5) reshape to a curve since you use a curve truck in the same rhythm(00:24:615 (2,3,4,5)).
- 01:15:848 (4,5,6,7,8,9) This part's background sound is too slightly. especially 01:15:946 (5,7,9), these sound a coverd by just a soft hit sound. so it isn't necessary to follow these sound. Followed voice in this part is better.If you still want to follow background music,delete 01:15:946 (5,7,9) at least, they are really too slightly that i can't even heard in 25% playback rate.
- 01:35:718 (3) I think you can ignore this hi-hit sound to make sure the whole beatmap proformance main rhythm perfectly.(Delete this note)
- 01:47:017 (4) Only follow voice there is better, because the voice is much more obvious than background music.(Delete this note)
- 01:54:615 (2) Reverse(Ctrl + G)? the pitch relevancy is lower there.(but that cause the mouse truck weird...i'm not sure)
+- Suggestion:
- I still think a normal mapset have a hard icon (since the difficult more than 2.25 stars) is unsuitable. Maybe this problem will become one of the QAT's (again) dis-quality reason.I suggest that make it easier that around 2.3 stars at least.
+- Comment(just some chatting):
- 以后接mod前打死也要先听一下歌，看到人哥做的和花碳唱的头一昏我就接了。这歌声唱的也忒爷们了。
+- Opinion:
- 00:01:628 (1) This slider's former part is ok but the latter part's drum sound seemed not catch correctly. To tell you the truch, i don't know how to solve it, maybe give up catch 00:02:212's downbeat, let this slider's ball change direction at 00:02:163 (1/8 snap division) is a little better?
- 01:05:524 (3) Whether you want catch "na" or "no" words there, this slider's red point is still not correct.let the ball change direction at 01:06:108 is better.
- 01:16:433 (1) I believe that follow voice there is better, because the background music is not obvious. In this part, the singer sings 4 words, respectively in 01:16:433, 01:16:725, 01:17:017 and 01:17:212.so try to use slider's red point to proformance that.
- 02:04:744 (3) The voice's pitch relevancy is simply down here. so i think this slider is a little weird.
+- Suggestion:
- 00:23:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) So when i play this part, i think there is in a mess. I really don't know how to play this part.I consider this part should be remap. you may have a clearly defination about what note you should catch and what you shouldn't.
+- Opinion:
- 00:01:628 (1,2,3) I will point out the problem in the first slider as a example. Firstly, i think the drum sound in 00:01:920 is as same important the before one and the later one,since you have picked them up.no reason not to pick this one. Secondly, the slider shaped with a line looks too simple, maybe reshape it slinky to let the beatmap looks more clearly and beautiful is a good choice, or you can let the slider turn back at 00:01:920.
- 00:04:744 (1,2) The latter one's truck is understandable, but the former one let me confused. I don't know what sound is your red point following.
- 00:09:225 you have followed this kind of sound in 00:08:446 (2,5), It's strange that now following this sound. (or delete note in 00:08:446 (2,5)), 00:15:495 have the same problem.
- 00:13:121 (5,6,7) I don't know if it's a little hard for just a normal diff...(00:16:238 (5,6,7) is same)
- 00:17:796 (2,3) The slider in 00:17:212 (1) begin in a downbeat so it's ok, but the slider in 00:17:991 (3) begin in a normal sound (relative to 00:17:796 (2)) semmed a little weird. You can replace them to a long slider.
- 00:21:108 (3,4) When test playing, i feel strange about gap between these two note,add a circle in 00:21:303 to follow main piano sound is better i think.
- 00:37:472 (4,5) So the voice's PR in 00:37:472 (4) is nearly same; 00:38:251 (5) 's "ko","ka" is divided clearly. Yet you can keep 00:37:472 (4)'s slider but reshape to a curve shape. 00:38:251 (5) must be divided to two circle.
- 00:45:069 (7) I think give up this note is better so you can emphasize "I","C","B","M".keep it as it was is also fine.
- 00:56:173 (5,6) this cover is a little hard...? It require a higher skills to read map, maybe it's too hard for just beginner player?
- 00:59:290 (5,6) Change direation like that is better. (screenshot). the voice's pitch relevancy change is become higher and higher in 00:59:290 (5), lower and lower in 00:59:679 (6).
- 01:03:186 (7) It's easily to know that the sound in 01:03:186 have end up at 01:03:381, and the durm sound not only have a more closely related to 01:03:965 (1) this part not former part, but also same as 01:03:770. so in order to keep balance,I have a idea:(screenshot) (02:17:991 (7) is similar.)
- 01:22:861 (1) a weird Spinner that i totally don't know what it's following, and why it's end up suddenly.
- 02:03:186 (1,2,3) When test playing i notice that there maybe a little hard for beginner player, but i don't know how to solve it. ;w;
+- Opinion:
- 00:30:361 leave there in a gap on purpose? I perfer add a circle in (272,100) to following this stream piano sound.
- 00:38:640 (3) like normal diff, i think these two sound have no logical combination. break them to two circle here.
- 00:52:861 (4) delete this note in more suit for voice's rhythm.
- 00:56:757 (1) have a slider when no sound in 00:56:952 ~ 00:57:342 is strange. I perfer not blanket there,turn to use a circle in (407,352) at 00:56:757 (to keep balance with 00:56:563 (7)) and a slider in 00:57:342 ~ 00:57:634 is better.
- 01:06:303 (7) break it to two circle at (prv.) start location and end location is better. It seemed that 01:06:887 (8) is same as sound in 01:06:629, and they are all start part of next sentence. Moreover，the voice in 01:06:303 is stop at 01:06:498 very clearly. so break can proformance the part division more clearly.
- 01:37:472 (5,6,7,8) Keep it as it was is fine enough but i believe you can arrange them better.(a ideascreenshot)
- 01:53:056 (9) NC here? To show this part is a gap filling part.
+- Opinion:
- OD can increasing to 8 or higher since it's already top diff.
- 00:03:965 (1,1) I think these two sound are same (at least they are all downbeat). so keep same SV plz.
- 00:05:037 (2,3) Umm.. I think you can swap these two note's location there. keep it as it was is also fine. (00:05:816 (2,3) are same)
- 00:13:316 (5,6,7,8,9,10) rearrangement a little to let it more suit for pitch relevancy change. screenshot
- 00:14:485 (2,3,4,5,2,3,4,5) a little weird that just let mouse move by a straight line. reshape it's to a fold line or curve line is better?
- 00:18:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) There's pitch relevancy is change in a regular range. so i have a idea to reshape like this (screenshot) or this (screenshot)
- 00:22:666 (6) NC here since this is new part's begin.
- 00:23:835 (2,3,4,5) reshape to a curve since you use a curve truck in the same rhythm(00:24:615 (2,3,4,5)).
- 01:15:848 (4,5,6,7,8,9) This part's background sound is too slightly. especially 01:15:946 (5,7,9), these sound a coverd by just a soft hit sound. so it isn't necessary to follow these sound. Followed voice in this part is better.If you still want to follow background music,delete 01:15:946 (5,7,9) at least, they are really too slightly that i can't even heard in 25% playback rate.
- 01:35:718 (3) I think you can ignore this hi-hit sound to make sure the whole beatmap proformance main rhythm perfectly.(Delete this note)
- 01:47:017 (4) Only follow voice there is better, because the voice is much more obvious than background music.(Delete this note)
- 01:54:615 (2) Reverse(Ctrl + G)? the pitch relevancy is lower there.(but that cause the mouse truck weird...i'm not sure)
osu need more Hanatan ~>.<~
Hope your ranked soon. but semmed still need a long way to go.
Good Luck and thanks to bring so classical music to osuer
Easy :
00:49:939 (3) - 加finish吧，音乐声音是cymbal
01:52:277 (3) - 同上
01:53:835 (1) - 漏掉了finish
Rakuen :
00:10:783 (7) - i dont hear a strong drum 00:10:004 - like here so i can suggest to remove this circle
00:13:316 - add whistle? piano sounds strong, also can add clap for 00:13:511 - because the drum
00:25:783 (6) - same as above
first, im thinking that this diff has a huge spread from Easy because much of 1/2 notes + big spacing, i would suggest to remove more 1/2 that can be removed example 00:59:095 (4) - 01:17:796 (4) - 01:41:173 (6) - etc, im sure you can find it by yourself because im worrying to touch your style
yf :
00:38:640 (3) - dont map cymbal with slider's tail,we know already it mostly makes DQ so you can change with 1/2 slider and circle to replace it
00:50:718 (9) - literally same as above, can remove repeat and then add 2 circles
01:22:472 (2) - same as above
01:00:459 (8) - drum clap at repeat sounds no really good for me because the music is weak so no need strong hitsound for that. i would say remove clap and let it sounds with sampleset drum
02:02:796 (9) - 02:15:264 (9) - same as above
01:09:809 (2) - NC for anti jump pls
01:40:978 (3) - same as 00:38:640 (3) -
01:59:679 (1) - a bit worrying with this snap since the music is so ambiguous to follow, what i hear starts from 01:59:777 - , well i think if we want safer way, just make slider like Karen did in his Insane
02:18:478 (2,4) - hard to hear musics sound in here. i almost think these are overmap, i would say to remove or make triplet. to keep spread with Karen as well
Insane :
00:07:472 - just think transtition from 40% to 80% sounds a bit loud for me. i think use 50% better here
00:31:238 (1) - 漏掉了finish
00:36:887 (4,5,6) - 我觉得flow不太好滑,请试试这个https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3602937
01:06:692 (1) - 去掉NC,没什么作用
01:11:757 (1,1) - 这里为什么用SV changes？我个人感觉不太好，没什么强的声音
01:14:874 (1) - overlap看到不好，可以动到 384，152
01:49:939 (6) - 为了anti jump NC
01:57:731 - 为什么用绿线 0,80x? 00:55:394 (4) - 用 1,0x的，跟 00:55:394 (4) -不一样
00:49:939 (3) - 加finish吧，音乐声音是cymbal
01:52:277 (3) - 同上
01:53:835 (1) - 漏掉了finish
Rakuen :
00:10:783 (7) - i dont hear a strong drum 00:10:004 - like here so i can suggest to remove this circle
00:13:316 - add whistle? piano sounds strong, also can add clap for 00:13:511 - because the drum
00:25:783 (6) - same as above
first, im thinking that this diff has a huge spread from Easy because much of 1/2 notes + big spacing, i would suggest to remove more 1/2 that can be removed example 00:59:095 (4) - 01:17:796 (4) - 01:41:173 (6) - etc, im sure you can find it by yourself because im worrying to touch your style
yf :
00:38:640 (3) - dont map cymbal with slider's tail,we know already it mostly makes DQ so you can change with 1/2 slider and circle to replace it
00:50:718 (9) - literally same as above, can remove repeat and then add 2 circles
01:22:472 (2) - same as above
01:00:459 (8) - drum clap at repeat sounds no really good for me because the music is weak so no need strong hitsound for that. i would say remove clap and let it sounds with sampleset drum
02:02:796 (9) - 02:15:264 (9) - same as above
01:09:809 (2) - NC for anti jump pls
01:40:978 (3) - same as 00:38:640 (3) -
01:59:679 (1) - a bit worrying with this snap since the music is so ambiguous to follow, what i hear starts from 01:59:777 - , well i think if we want safer way, just make slider like Karen did in his Insane
02:18:478 (2,4) - hard to hear musics sound in here. i almost think these are overmap, i would say to remove or make triplet. to keep spread with Karen as well
Insane :
00:07:472 - just think transtition from 40% to 80% sounds a bit loud for me. i think use 50% better here
00:31:238 (1) - 漏掉了finish
00:36:887 (4,5,6) - 我觉得flow不太好滑,请试试这个https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3602937
01:06:692 (1) - 去掉NC,没什么作用
01:11:757 (1,1) - 这里为什么用SV changes？我个人感觉不太好，没什么强的声音
01:14:874 (1) - overlap看到不好，可以动到 384，152
01:49:939 (6) - 为了anti jump NC
01:57:731 - 为什么用绿线 0,80x? 00:55:394 (4) - 用 1,0x的，跟 00:55:394 (4) -不一样
all fixed
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71,224,137212,2,0,P|39:246|0:250,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,284,137602,2,0,P|167:323|151:359,1,80,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,348,137991,2,0,P|368:336|448:380,1,160,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
352,252,138576,1,0,1:0:0:0:
352,252,138673,1,0,1:0:0:0:
352,252,138770,6,0,B|340:204|370:168|370:168|365:137,1,120,4|0,1:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
352,116,139160,2,0,L|344:32,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,88,139550,2,0,B|189:133|189:133|201:173|245:185|276:159,1,160,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
344,37,140134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,160,140329,2,0,L|272:256,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,248,140718,2,0,L|420:152,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,300,141108,2,0,B|404:352|404:352|325:376,1,160,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
235,279,141692,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,279,141887,6,0,P|178:269|127:298,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,324,142277,2,0,P|118:266|89:215,1,120,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,196,142666,2,0,P|121:206|172:177,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,152,143056,2,0,P|181:209|210:260,1,120,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,280,143446,5,4,0:0:0:0:
108,324,143640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,196,143835,1,0,1:0:0:0:
192,152,144030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,236,144225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144420,12,2,148121,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
no reply=fixedRush_FTK wrote:
[Easy]
+- Opinion:
- 00:01:628 (1) This slider's former part is ok but the latter part's drum sound seemed not catch correctly. To tell you the truch, i don't know how to solve it, maybe give up catch 00:02:212's downbeat, let this slider's ball change direction at 00:02:163 (1/8 snap division) is a little better? Slider ball's direction doesnt make much sense...
- 01:05:524 (3) Whether you want catch "na" or "no" words there, this slider's red point is still not correct.let the ball change direction at 01:06:108 is better.^
- 01:16:433 (1) I believe that follow voice there is better, because the background music is not obvious. In this part, the singer sings 4 words, respectively in 01:16:433, 01:16:725, 01:17:017 and 01:17:212.so try to use slider's red point to proformance that. Following vocal here will make the rhythm harder, it's not suitable for an Easy
- 02:04:744 (3) The voice's pitch relevancy is simply down here. so i think this slider is a little weird. im not following vocal here[Insane]
+- Opinion:
- OD can increasing to 8 or higher since it's already top diff. High OD kills players
- 00:03:965 (1,1) I think these two sound are same (at least they are all downbeat). so keep same SV plz. they are obviously different.
- 00:05:037 (2,3) Umm.. I think you can swap these two note's location there. keep it as it was is also fine. (00:05:816 (2,3) are same) different spacing will make the pattern confusing
- 00:13:316 (5,6,7,8,9,10) rearrangement a little to let it more suit for pitch relevancy change. screenshot your suggestion is not suitable for this diff's difficulty
- 00:14:485 (2,3,4,5,2,3,4,5) a little weird that just let mouse move by a straight line. reshape it's to a fold line or curve line is better? sometimes straight streams are also fun
- 00:18:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) There's pitch relevancy is change in a regular range. so i have a idea to reshape like this (screenshot) or this (screenshot) your suggestion is not suitable for this diff's difficulty
- 00:22:666 (6) NC here since this is new part's begin.
- 00:23:835 (2,3,4,5) reshape to a curve since you use a curve truck in the same rhythm(00:24:615 (2,3,4,5)). reworked here when remapping
- 01:15:848 (4,5,6,7,8,9) This part's background sound is too slightly. especially 01:15:946 (5,7,9), these sound a coverd by just a soft hit sound. so it isn't necessary to follow these sound. Followed voice in this part is better.If you still want to follow background music,delete 01:15:946 (5,7,9) at least, they are really too slightly that i can't even heard in 25% playback rate.
- 01:35:718 (3) I think you can ignore this hi-hit sound to make sure the whole beatmap proformance main rhythm perfectly.(Delete this note) i prefer my rhythm.
- 01:47:017 (4) Only follow voice there is better, because the voice is much more obvious than background music.(Delete this note) i want this feeling.(dunno how to explain)
- 01:54:615 (2) Reverse(Ctrl + G)? the pitch relevancy is lower there.(but that cause the mouse truck weird...i'm not sure) not sure what did you mean here, keep [/notice]
about normal:（lazy to use english so using chinese instead
00:23:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里没发现有什么问题，既然是Normal，节奏不能太满，所以该忽略的音要忽略，这里的处理是可以接受的
00:01:628 (1,2,3) - 即使我知道你什么意思，但是我觉得节奏和排列都没有什么问题，直不直是个人喜好问题。
00:04:744 (1,2) - 没看懂你说什么o.o 红线上不是好好的音么。。
00:09:225 - 都填太挤，都不填太简单，所以取舍了一下
00:16:238 (5,6,7) - 不难，滑条比圈简单很多
00:17:991 - 这里是normal sound?，并不是把
00:21:108 (3,4) - 还是音的取舍的问题
00:37:472 (4,5) - 看不懂你想表达什么，声音不一样就不能用一个形状的话那复制粘贴就没意义了
00:56:173 (5,6) - 这不难，光标都不用动
00:59:290 (5,6) - 这flow挺好的，改动没什么意义
01:03:186 - 这长音适合滑条
02:03:186 (1,2,3) - 不难，很基础的flow
Xinely's mods all fixed, Normal里删掉了很多note
thanks! ><
blab
Topic Starter
waa thanks, i love you!
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01:13:316 (1) - 这个滑条的代码是不是有什么不对啊 重新拉过好像没什么问题了
02:12:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里不应该是对称的吗
01:13:316 (1) - 这个滑条的代码是不是有什么不对啊 重新拉过好像没什么问题了
02:12:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里不应该是对称的吗
Topic Starter
all fixed
Reblab
Ranked.
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Gratz Karen~!