Hanatan - Senbonzakura · forum

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2015-02-07T06:28:45+00:00

mostly fixed and remapped something thanks to guys

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Sakura.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57224
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.799999

[Metadata]
Title:Senbonzakura
TitleUnicode:千本桜
Artist:Hanatan
ArtistUnicode:花たん
Creator:Kagamine Ren
Version:yf's Hard
Source:
Tags:hatsune miku 初音ミク yf_bmp rakuen short version
BeatmapID:622209
BeatmapSetID:248173

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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116,76,68815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2015-02-07T10:32:23+00:00

something here

[General]

Fine.

[Easy]

Disable Widescreen.
00:20:309 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个最好整体下移一点跟血条太近了

[Rakuen's Normal]

00:28:101 (5,6,7) - spacing
01:21:478 (4) - 这里还是调一下音量这里的fin比前面明显小了听起来有点明显

[yf's Hard]

02:19:530 (3,5) - Stack perfectly
00:31:997 (1) - 变速NC下比较好

[Insane]

00:02:192 (3,3) - Stack perfectly
00:03:945 (1,2) - 其实blanket这么做比较美
SPOILER
00:04:335 (1) - 变速NC下比较好
00:31:218 (1) - Finish
00:55:179 (3) - 这里应该加个clap
01:01:900 (3) - Stack perfectly
01:19:919 (2,4) - 最好加clap
01:40:179 (1) - head clap 加whistle也不要丢了原曲里的clap
01:40:958 (1) - ^
01:46:413 (2,4) - ^
01:52:646 (3) - Clap.
01:57:711 (1,1) - 我建议这两个都NC一下我看了全图觉得这种分隔的3/4slider不多最好提醒一下
02:05:114 (3) - 这里有个Finish的音
02:09:789 (2) - 放个clap在这里比较好
02:10:569 (5) - Clap.
02:22:257 (1,1) - 这两个也头加个clap啊也不会破坏whistle的效果

Good Luck for you to get ranked soon~

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2015-02-08T12:18:17+00:00

ken2010123 wrote:
From qq群
General
終於看見千本櫻的remap了，雖然是花姐唱的XD
音效我不太會，就摸節奏和排版了，希望不要介意;w;

Rakuen's Normal
根本找不出要改的地方啦x2
00:05:504 (2,3) - 移左一點
00:13:685 (7,1) - 不要碰到

Fixed all! Thanks!

AliomLoung wrote:
hello Ren m4m!!!

[Rakuen's Normal]
02:28:099 - 這條綠線好像沒用到，刪除??

差不多就這樣www 我渣摸請多多見諒>.<
祝早日Rank :3

Fixed all! Thanks!

SoGa wrote:
M4M request

[Rakuen's Normal]
00:51:478 (1,2) - Why is this one jump from ds1.2 to 1.4
01:57:711 (3,4) - ^
00:07:841 (1,4) - i would like to move 00:09:400 (4) - to the left side of the slider 00:08:620 (3,4) - ,more ez for newby to read (Personal Opinion)
00:28:685 (6,1) - Nazi , dislike this kind of Overlap >_>
01:22:646- Unnecessary Green Line Delete
02:28:099 ^
Fine
End

Fixed all! Thanks!

imoutosan wrote:
From queue
好久没写mod了有小问题不要在意

[Normal]

00:49:919 (3) - 前後都是弧線滑條這裡放個折線感覺有點突兀

大致就是这样 flow基本没问题排列上多注意做不到美观也至少前后细节保持一致

Fixed all! Thanks!

Awaken wrote:
something here

[Rakuen's Normal]
00:28:101 (5,6,7) - spacing Fixed
01:21:478 (4) - 这里还是调一下音量这里的fin比前面明显小了听起来有点明显这里还好，不调

Good Luck for you to get ranked soon~

Thanks for mods!

My update (made to 2.41 star as requested to be harder):

Rakuen's Normal

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Sakura.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57224
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 7827,20295
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Senbonzakura
TitleUnicode:千本桜
Artist:Hanatan
ArtistUnicode:花たん
Creator:Kagamine Ren
Version:Rakuen's Normal
Source:
Tags:hatsune miku 初音ミク yf_bmp rakuen short version
BeatmapID:598911
BeatmapSetID:248173

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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120,192,108361,2,0,L|250:192,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,316,109140,2,0,P|408:257|405:193,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,108,109724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,132,109919,2,0,P|256:191|259:255,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,348,110698,5,2,0:0:0:0:
384,168,111088,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,232,111478,2,0,B|108:232|108:232|128:208,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,96,112257,2,0,L|344:96,1,65,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,168,112646,2,0,L|464:168,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,256,113036,2,0,L|340:256,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,264,113815,6,0,B|120:264|120:264|80:284|80:284|39:284,1,130,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,100,114595,2,0,B|80:100|80:100|120:120|120:120|164:120,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,72,115374,2,0,L|408:72,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,160,115763,2,0,L|371:160,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,232,116153,2,0,P|252:225|188:233,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,340,116932,5,10,0:0:0:0:
20,252,117127,2,0,L|108:144,1,130,14|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,92,117711,2,0,P|236:92|299:109,1,130,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,200,118491,2,0,P|425:207|395:220,1,65,14|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,300,118880,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,300,119075,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,288,119659,2,0,L|36:232,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,144,120049,6,0,P|103:110|165:92,1,130,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,120633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,91,120828,2,0,P|408:109|464:144,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,121608,2,0,L|352:348,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,288,121997,2,0,L|222:262,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,196,122387,2,0,B|128:212|88:272|88:272|83:251,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,68,123166,6,0,B|164:44|164:44|198:61,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,132,123750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,61,123945,2,0,B|348:44|348:44|436:68,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,236,124724,2,0,P|334:247|307:265,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,220,125114,2,0,P|196:214|166:200,1,65,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,192,125504,2,0,P|36:242|11:302,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,336,126283,6,0,L|332:336,1,130,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,260,126867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,204,127062,2,0,L|300:74,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,32,127841,2,0,P|113:62|112:94,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,164,128231,2,0,P|170:196|159:226,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,296,128620,2,0,P|156:284|232:300,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,324,129400,6,0,B|472:264|472:264|475:224,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,76,130179,2,0,B|300:136|300:136|296:175,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,328,130958,2,0,P|156:336|124:336,1,65,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,256,131348,2,0,P|54:233|31:210,1,65,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,124,131737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,24,132127,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,88,132322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,48,132517,6,0,P|399:35|462:49,1,130,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,132,133101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,196,133296,2,0,L|436:332,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,336,134075,2,0,L|256:264,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,240,134465,2,0,L|344:168,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,88,134854,2,0,L|244:88,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,188,135633,6,0,P|153:219|203:261,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,336,136218,1,0,0:0:0:0:
309,260,136413,2,0,P|358:219|416:188,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,32,137192,2,0,P|475:27|445:17,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,32,137582,2,0,P|327:46|300:65,1,65,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,120,137971,2,0,B|152:72|152:72|108:88,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,228,138750,6,0,B|56:232|108:208|108:208|108:236,1,130,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,320,139335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,352,139530,2,0,P|228:320|172:272,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,88,140309,2,0,P|196:83|228:86,1,65,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,164,140698,2,0,P|297:183|318:208,1,65,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,272,141088,2,0,P|446:256|496:215,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,96,141867,6,0,B|320:68|296:16|296:16|282:38,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,160,142646,2,0,B|99:168|46:148|46:148|52:174,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,324,143426,2,0,P|183:306|212:291,1,65,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,291,143815,2,0,P|328:305|356:324,1,65,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,268,144205,2,0,P|440:208|432:128,1,130,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144984,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145179,12,2,148101,0:0:0:0:

Nathan

Beatmap Nominator

2,144 posts

Joined August 2014

Nathan 2015-02-08T17:26:55+00:00

hi small mod from #modreq

[yf's hard]

00:35:017 (3,4) - I recommend turning some doubles like these into 1/4 sliders to improve polarity a bit, it'll make the rhythm a bit easier since the doubles start on blue ticks
00:31:997 (4) - NC with sv change?
01:22:452 (2) - Slider ends on a downbeat with a finish, maybe just turn the end into a circle?
01:53:036 (9) - Slider also ends on a downbeat with a finish, try splitting it into 2 1/2 sliders and a circle so the downbeat is emphasized a bit more
01:59:075 (1) - Don't think the whistles fit here, remove or lower the volume even more, also since the momentum is going up it should be on the bottom half on the head of 02:00:049 (1)
SPOILER
02:02:776 (9) - This kind of disrupts the flow, once the player finishes 02:02:387 (8) they will just be stopping on the reverse slider waiting for it to finish then they have to jump onto 02:03:166 (1), my recommendation is to make 02:02:387 (8) a 1/2 slider so you can increase the spacing
Like this

cool map o.o

Adol Christin

875 posts

Joined October 2012

Adol Christin 2015-02-09T01:05:34+00:00

花碳千本樱啊，感觉好man。。。如果是完整版就更好了【轮不到你说

SPOILER

刚好在正中间，连续两个miss。。。悲伤。。。

打了两三pc，随手写写。似乎离rank不远了，目测也没什么好改的。不用在意。

Insane

00:19:919 - 这里为什么突然用40%音量呢？感觉有些莫名。
00:32:776 - 00:43:491 感觉这里就可以开始在2、4拍用clap，而不是whistle了。原曲到这里伴奏跟01:35:114 - 01:47:192 一样的。那音效也用基本一样的呗。
01:19:140 (1,2,1) - 这梗厉害。。。两pc都漏了这里。。。
01:41:640 (2,2) - 看起来，前面相同节奏的地方都跟了人声，这里也可以继续跟呗。（意思就是：这两个圈可以考虑删了）
02:08:620 (5,6,7) - 这个空拍是真的有点难读。（当然也可以不管，毕竟前面都留了空拍，也能预判到了）

yf's Hard

00:18:166 (4,5,6,7) - Hard里来个切指梗真的没问题么。。。
00:32:776 - 00:43:491 跟I一样，我觉得这里可以开始在2、4拍开始用clap取代whistle。原曲这里的鼓点强度和伴奏跟01:35:114 - 01:47:192 就完全一致。音效也基本保持一致呗。
01:59:075 (1) - 就是这根滑条！我第一pc觉得是只有总共半拍的折返，自信松手，瞬间爆炸！（当然，不是说要改掉它，发个牢骚啦）。

Karen

2,860 posts

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Topic Starter

Karen 2015-02-09T06:12:58+00:00

To Awaken： All fixed except

Awaken wrote:
01:57:711 (1,1) - 我建议这两个都NC一下我看了全图觉得这种分隔的3/4slider不多最好提醒一下这你指的两个是有NC的，我猜你说的是前面两个3/4？我觉得还好，先不改

thanks for mod!

To Adol Christin

Adol Christin wrote:
00:19:919 - 这里为什么突然用40%音量呢？感觉有些莫名。因为我觉得这个音量太大了而已
00:32:776 - 00:43:491 感觉这里就可以开始在2、4拍用clap，而不是whistle了。原曲到这里伴奏跟01:35:114 - 01:47:192 一样的。那音效也用基本一样的呗。好的
01:19:140 (1,2,1) - 这梗厉害。。。两pc都漏了这里。。。汗
01:41:640 (2,2) - 看起来，前面相同节奏的地方都跟了人声，这里也可以继续跟呗。（意思就是：这两个圈可以考虑删了） hmm..这里是个人觉得这样很爽
02:08:620 (5,6,7) - 这个空拍是真的有点难读。（当然也可以不管，毕竟前面都留了空拍，也能预判到了）嗯这个说的好，改掉了，这样确实难读

thanks for mod and testplay!

tutuhaha

3,000 posts

Joined October 2010

tutuhaha 2015-02-11T04:30:49+00:00

~~_(:зゝ∠)_占位置~~
[Insane]
00:10:471 (x) - 这块就我来说绝对有音啊，没有音的话至少别靠这么近读起来跟1/4一样
00:13:101 (4,5) - 跟音乐的话这边的跳绝对比较大一点
00:16:705 (x) - 有音加1
00:18:750 (1) - 这块的节奏我觉得应该是这样的(下图见89
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2740155
00:20:698 (2,1) - 00:21:478 (2,1) - 间距搞一样
00:25:374 (2,1) - 这俩搞大一点，间距
00:26:348 (1) - ....这边加NC你还不如别搞覆盖得了
00:26:543 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 因为这边的节奏和前面并没有这么大的区别所以不建议这么跳，还是和前面一样花点心思摆摆造型
00:30:439 (1) - 这货能不能摆在正中央...强迫症
00:33:166 (2) - ctrl+g？
00:34:725 (2) - ^
00:35:115 (3,4,5,6) - 这边跟歌词的话摆的稍微交错一点别这么光滑感觉会更好，因为和前面那句的语气不同
00:38:231 (1,1) - 鉴于这俩我觉得搞个跳更好玩，所以要不然1这条ctrl+g一下？
00:38:231 (1) - 然后这个的blanket可以稍微再调一下
00:39:010 (1,2) - ...这个停顿对我来说蛮奇怪的....要是我的话这俩直接搞slider
00:39:887 (6,7) - 这俩都加whistle
00:42:127 (1,2) - 相比之下这个停顿倒是不怎么奇怪但是前面这跳有点太大了说好的善良呢
00:42:906 (4,5,6,7) - 这个跳感觉是渐渐变大的
00:44:075 (1) - 00:44:854 (1) - 这俩都ctrl+g一下会比较好
00:48:361 (1,2) - 这俩稍微摆的好看点好不咯............还有尾巴靠太近了
00:51:478 (1,2,3) - 前面同样的节奏你还用的1.1x呢...怎么这里1.0x了
01:03:556 (8,1) - 这里的跳可以搞大一点
01:04:530 (4,5,6,7,8) - 我希望你能把这个间距搞一样..
01:08:815 (2) - 为什么..要用1/6
01:13:296 (1) - 丑哭了.....
01:45:244 (3) - 这个拉到蓝线结尾比较好我觉得
01:46:413 (2) - 这边我觉得光跟人声满不带感的所以试试这个节奏？
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2740285
01:51:478 (3) - 这个扭曲的幅度再大一点会比较好
02:09:205 (7) - 这个放到像是x384 y360的地方会比较好玩一点
02:21:088 (3,4) - 还不如搞成前面那种一顿的那个...

~~昨天丫在床上躺了整整5个小时死活没睡着！！！！！！让我先去睡会回来补orz~~

[yf's Hard]
00:07:452 (4,5,1) - 反正就我来说这个读不出来，前面这么简单突然这里这么一下.....能不能用正常间距...
00:07:452 (4,5,1,2) - 然后这几个放在一起就更读不懂了
00:12:517 (1,2) - 你不觉得这里应该搞个跳强调一下么？要不然2这个ctrl+g一下？
00:24:984 (1,2) - ^
00:29:659 (1,2,3,4,5) - 前面节奏处理的这么细后面跟个slider感觉被漏节奏了，建议是123这三个note删掉然后换成个1/2的slider
00:39:302 (5) - NC
KIAI这边统一说一下我就不一一搞出来了
00:59:270 (5,6) - 像是这样的地方slider和slider之间隔得这么近感觉非常的....放不开，用note或者说加大slider之间的间距会比较好一点
01:17:971 (5,6) - 像是这里我就觉得挺不错的，玩起来
然后KIAI这边这种同样的问题我就不重复了
01:41:640 (1) - 从这里开始的复制
反正就我来说..........歌词的停顿处变了啊.....不可以这么直接复制过来的啊...
01:41:640 (1) - 删掉
01:41:932 (3) - 删掉
01:42:030 (x) - +note
01:42:906 (1,2,3,4,1) - 同上
01:44:465 (1,2,3,4,1) - 同上
这三组的4这个note从我这里来听的话完全没占到任何的音啊...
01:55:763 (6) - ctrl+g，总而言之这里搞个跳
两分多钟还复制黏贴啊..

[Rauken's Normal]
01:17:192 (3) - 这个我觉得搞弯的比较好玩儿
01:21:867 (1) - 这里俩节奏类型建议给你，第一个是这里放一个note，然后spinner和Insane一样，或者说delete掉01:21:867 (5) - 然后在01:21:867 (5) - 放一个note就行了
01:34:724 (1) - 这里的这个音没有强到要特地放一个note..我觉得还是删掉比较好
02:19:335 (2,3) - ....能把2放到3中间不咯..

[Easy]
00:06:672 (2,1,2) - 个人极度讨厌这种靠的特别近特别近的滑条特别是靠的近完了后00:08:620 (2,3,4) - 这里的滑条的间距突然变得辣么大...........get到point了么..
00:14:075 (1,2,3) - ^与上面的这个对比这仨的好接受多了
01:05:504 (3) - 在红点之前用两个白点可以更好地调节blanket
01:13:296 (1) - you too (σ‘д′)σ

继续加油吧

Karen

2,860 posts

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Topic Starter

Karen 2015-02-13T14:58:49+00:00

tutuhaha wrote:
~~_(:зゝ∠)_占位置~~
[Insane]
00:10:471 (x) - 这块就我来说绝对有音啊，没有音的话至少别靠这么近读起来跟1/4一样加了note
00:13:101 (4,5) - 跟音乐的话这边的跳绝对比较大一点嗯
00:16:705 (x) - 有音加1 加了
00:18:750 (1) - 这块的节奏我觉得应该是这样的(下图见89 嗯，改了
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2740155
00:20:698 (2,1) - 00:21:478 (2,1) - 间距搞一样嗯
00:25:374 (2,1) - 这俩搞大一点，间距嗯
00:26:348 (1) - ....这边加NC你还不如别搞覆盖得了嗯换了摆法
00:26:543 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 因为这边的节奏和前面并没有这么大的区别所以不建议这么跳，还是和前面一样花点心思摆摆造型这个其实不跳吧，小折返跟圈不一样
00:30:439 (1) - 这货能不能摆在正中央...强迫症好
00:33:166 (2) - ctrl+g？有道理
00:34:725 (2) - ^
00:35:115 (3,4,5,6) - 这边跟歌词的话摆的稍微交错一点别这么光滑感觉会更好，因为和前面那句的语气不同交错一点..是什么...这个跟前面如果不一样感觉挺奇怪的
00:38:231 (1,1) - 鉴于这俩我觉得搞个跳更好玩，所以要不然1这条ctrl+g一下？嗯有道理
00:38:231 (1) - 然后这个的blanket可以稍微再调一下嗯
00:39:010 (1,2) - ...这个停顿对我来说蛮奇怪的....要是我的话这俩直接搞slider 我觉得挺爽
00:39:887 (6,7) - 这俩都加whistle 好
00:42:127 (1,2) - 相比之下这个停顿倒是不怎么奇怪但是前面这跳有点太大了说好的善良呢改小了
00:42:906 (4,5,6,7) - 这个跳感觉是渐渐变大的好
00:44:075 (1) - 00:44:854 (1) - 这俩都ctrl+g一下会比较好嗯有道理
00:48:361 (1,2) - 这俩稍微摆的好看点好不咯............还有尾巴靠太近了好的咯
00:51:478 (1,2,3) - 前面同样的节奏你还用的1.1x呢...怎么这里1.0x了手滑了吧..改了
01:03:556 (8,1) - 这里的跳可以搞大一点没地方搞了.-.
01:04:530 (4,5,6,7,8) - 我希望你能把这个间距搞一样.. 好
01:08:815 (2) - 为什么..要用1/6 ...应该是手滑
01:13:296 (1) - 丑哭了..... 啊/w\
01:45:244 (3) - 这个拉到蓝线结尾比较好我觉得嗯
01:46:413 (2) - 这边我觉得光跟人声满不带感的所以试试这个节奏？行
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2740285
01:51:478 (3) - 这个扭曲的幅度再大一点会比较好 ..行吧
02:09:205 (7) - 这个放到像是x384 y360的地方会比较好玩一点好的
02:21:088 (3,4) - 还不如搞成前面那种一顿的那个... 好.-.

[Easy]
00:06:672 (2,1,2) - 个人极度讨厌这种靠的特别近特别近的滑条特别是靠的近完了后00:08:620 (2,3,4) - 这里的滑条的间距突然变得辣么大...........get到point了么..
00:14:075 (1,2,3) - ^与上面的这个对比这仨的好接受多了
01:05:504 (3) - 在红点之前用两个白点可以更好地调节blanket
01:13:296 (1) - you too (σ‘д′)σ
all fixed
继续加油吧 =.=

thanks for mod~

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2015-02-14T18:12:16+00:00

from my q
[Easy]

00:04:724 (1,2) - blanket
01:48:750 (2,3) - 没直
节奏比较单调,建议多用2/1

[Rakuen's Normal]

2.42怀疑太高
其他没什么

[yf's Hard]

01:41:640 (1,2) - 前面可以用二连因为前面是真的有二连vocal，这里往后就是overmap惹，不建议

[Insane]

~~dt兼职人玩~~
00:36:672 (3,4,5,6) - 前面都是钝角梗然后这里突然来回跳
01:17:971 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^前面都是双滑条这里突然大跳，要不把前面也跳要不把这里改了
01:35:698 (3,4,5,6,7) - 跟vocal就要跟到底，至少把这一段跟完，这里又不是没有vocal干嘛跟钢琴
01:38:620 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:05:698 - 然后这里ins丰富你又突然空了
02:24:302 (1) - whistle

没啥能摸，gl

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2015-02-15T06:14:50+00:00

Alex Li wrote:
from my q
[Easy]
00:04:724 (1,2) - blanket 好
01:48:750 (2,3) - 没直为何要直.-.
节奏比较单调,建议多用2/1 你书的很队，但是我只会1/2 spam
[Rakuen's Normal]
2.42怀疑太高因为hard比较难，所以nm必须难一点
其他没什么
[Insane]
~~dt兼职人玩这是none图啊你们怎么都想着DT~~
00:36:672 (3,4,5,6) - 前面都是钝角梗然后这里突然来回跳想了想还是改成了另一种来回跳
01:17:971 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^前面都是双滑条这里突然大跳，要不把前面也跳要不把这里改了
01:35:698 (3,4,5,6,7) - 跟vocal就要跟到底，至少把这一段跟完，这里又不是没有vocal干嘛跟钢琴因为我觉得这里钢琴里的串很明显的说.-.先不改
01:38:620 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:05:698 - 然后这里ins丰富你又突然空了加了个note
02:24:302 (1) - whistle
没啥能摸，gl

thanks！

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2015-02-21T13:18:56+00:00

irc

20:51 Kagamine Ren: 大号哇
20:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
20:54 Kagamine Ren: 唉 有没有M4M啊
20:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
20:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 可以啊
20:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 你要磨砂
20:54 Kagamine Ren: 等等 你好象摸了我的图
20:54 Kagamine Ren: 啊 王杰了
20:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
20:54 Kagamine Ren: 忘记了
20:54 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: uccu
20:55 Kagamine Ren: 唉
20:55 Kagamine Ren: 哭了
20:55 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 找chloe摸啊
20:55 Kagamine Ren: 那要不摸千本樱
20:55 *Kagamine Ren is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/570975 Hanatan - Senbonzakura]
20:55 Kagamine Ren: 臭了才不摸
20:55 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 花本樱
20:56 Kagamine Ren: 233
20:56 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 声线好奇怪233
20:56 Kagamine Ren: 听了一万遍，现在一遍都不想听了
20:56 *Kagamine Ren is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/631859 Hatsuki Yura - Nanka Ii Koto]
20:57 Kagamine Ren: 还是叶月好啊
20:57 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 叶月
20:57 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 不想听你还怎么rabk...
20:57 Kagamine Ren: 不想听也得听
20:57 Kagamine Ren: 带了GD 不能坟啊
20:57 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233 至于吗
20:57 Kagamine Ren: rabk得下辈子了
20:57 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:39:692 (4,5,6,7) - 这个不好听
20:58 Kagamine Ren: 01:45:633 (4) -
20:58 Kagamine Ren: 这个赞啊
20:58 Kagamine Ren: kawaii
20:58 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: kawaii
20:59 Kagamine Ren: 你有啥图要摸哇
21:00 *[CSGA]Ar3sgice is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/632027 BiBi - Trouble Busters]
21:00 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 来
21:01 Kagamine Ren: 好好
21:01 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:16:705 (4) - 你怎么不放1/6
21:02 Kagamine Ren: 啊
21:03 Kagamine Ren: 这个也挺合适吧
21:03 Kagamine Ren: 算了还是改一下
21:03 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 1/6好玩啊
21:03 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:18:945 (2) - 这也是
21:05 Kagamine Ren: 这要1/6就只能放圈了，好坑人
21:05 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 也是, 别放了
21:06 Kagamine Ren: 该1/6还是1/6吧，用折返跟一下好了
21:07 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 啊
21:07 Kagamine Ren: 想了一下还是坑一点
21:09 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 00:54:595 (1,2,3,4) - 这个往右边放一点比较好看
21:10 Kagamine Ren: 嗯..有道理
21:11 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:21:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - 用polygon tool啊
21:12 Kagamine Ren: 啊
21:12 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: create polygon circles 用那个做多好
21:12 Kagamine Ren: 那是什么
21:12 Kagamine Ren: ctrl + D吗
21:12 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: compose下面那个
21:12 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: ctrl+shift+D
21:13 Kagamine Ren: .-.
21:13 Kagamine Ren: 好哇
21:14 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:47:387 (6) - 我觉得这个去掉比较好
21:15 Kagamine Ren: 有道理
21:15 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 换声线了...
21:15 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 02:12:127 (9) - 换两个短滑条怎么样
21:16 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 这样衔接显得更加有力
21:16 Kagamine Ren: 嗯 好
21:16 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 02:18:263 - add
21:17 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 好 美丽
21:17 Kagamine Ren: 行
21:17 Kagamine Ren: 谢了.-.,
21:17 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 好 我贴论坛

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2015-02-21T13:22:15+00:00

大号哇

hehe

1,961 posts

Joined November 2012

hehe 2015-02-21T15:22:50+00:00

here bcos hanatan

General

the mp3 bitrate :p

Insane

00:03:945 (1) - i think you should curve this some more so that the blanket is nicer, and the 1/4 spacing is easier to play
00:12:711 (2) - blanket 00:11:737 (1) - . if you move there, the flow is better because of the repeat slider before: http://i.imgur.com/M6DJos2.png
00:15:633 (1,3) - maybe move so no overlap and good blanket?
00:16:672 (4,5,6) - i think there is no good indication that this is 1/6 note, try to lower spacing. if not, turn 00:16:413 (3,4,5) - into 00:18:750 (1,2) - which is more playable for the diff.
00:26:153 (5,6) - do bigger spacing, it is not nice to play like this now
00:29:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ctrl+g for good flow!
00:41:348 (3,4,5,6) - 00:42:906 (4,5,6,7) - don't you think the jumps here are not as intense as the intro(00:12:711 (2,3,4) - ), so why is it bigger spacing? :/
00:52:062 (2) - spacing is too low here i feel, i played as 1/4 spacing orz
00:57:322 (5) - try this shape+pattern? i think the spacing after is not good now, because its buildup part. to show the increase in SV, the two sldiers must be space closer together for better feeling. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2805619
01:12:906 (4,1) - is this mistake.. it doesnt look correct since 4 is a 1/2 slider. maybe you can increase to 3/4 slider?
01:15:244 (2) - try a soft finish on sliderhead?
01:19:530 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - maybe do perfect symmetry? (use ctrl+h)
01:21:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can try ctrl+H too, i think it is more readable.
01:21:965 (1) - end spinner here? i think it is more suitable although you are follow vocal.
01:43:880 (5,6) - i dont think stack pattern suits here
01:46:413 (2,3) - this spacing too far
02:03:750 (3) - split to 2 circle, or use slider at 02:03:945 - , the sound there is very loud and i don't think sliderend is suitable.
02:10:958 (1,3) - i think both clap+whistle is good. or whistle+finish.

yf's Hard

00:13:296 (3,4) - 00:25:763 (3,4) - space this more so that the 1/2 spacing is easier to read. can be confusing now. a little space is okay since it is slider.
00:30:926 - add note and do regular 5 note stack?
01:09:400 (1,2) - are you sure about this?

beautiful map

Rakuen's Normal

01:22:841 (1) - spinner don't seem necessary.

Easy

01:57:517 - 00:55:179 - add note? i don't think 3/2 spacing is good in easy.

good luck

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2015-02-24T13:17:54+00:00

m4m

NO KD

General

mp3文件需要128-192kbps，换个。

Insane

00:10:179 (1,2,3) - 这边是四连。你在00:16:413 (3,4,5,6) - 放四连了这里为何是三连。
00:26:932 (2,1) - 跳太大了，知道你是为了做00:26:543 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 的梗，但还是要考虑到和整张图ds设定的问题。别的地方都普通，这边很突兀的1/4大跳不太适合。
00:57:322 (5) - 音量太轻了，这里至少调到30%
01:06:867 (2,1) - 感觉位置换下比较好
01:19:335 (2,1) - 同上，然后跳放小一点。（对称要不要保持就随意了
01:45:244 (3,4) - 这个跳也是略大，稍微小点，大概3.00差不多就够了。
整个图排版还有待加强，初期别为了摆些形状强行作梗，等你对节奏和跳把握比较好的时候再这么做比较好。另外，用那么多3/4很容易被各种人狂喷，我个人是没什么意见，看你的了。

yf's Hard

复制粘贴差评。

normal and easy diff are fine to me.

good luck.

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2015-02-24T16:10:36+00:00

handsome wrote:
here bcos hanatan

General
the mp3 bitrate :p fixed
Insane
00:03:945 (1) - i think you should curve this some more so that the blanket is nicer, and the 1/4 spacing is easier to play changed the patterm
00:12:711 (2) - blanket 00:11:737 (1) - . if you move there, the flow is better because of the repeat slider before: http://i.imgur.com/M6DJos2.png ok
00:15:633 (1,3) - maybe move so no overlap and good blanket? ok
00:16:672 (4,5,6) - i think there is no good indication that this is 1/6 note, try to lower spacing. if not, turn 00:16:413 (3,4,5) - into 00:18:750 (1,2) - which is more playable for the diff. changed this to a repeat slider:3
00:26:153 (5,6) - do bigger spacing, it is not nice to play like this now ok
00:29:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ctrl+g for good flow! wow nice idea
00:41:348 (3,4,5,6) - 00:42:906 (4,5,6,7) - don't you think the jumps here are not as intense as the intro(00:12:711 (2,3,4) - ), so why is it bigger spacing? :/ hmm..ok
00:52:062 (2) - spacing is too low here i feel, i played as 1/4 spacing orz ok changed
00:57:322 (5) - try this shape+pattern? i think the spacing after is not good now, because its buildup part. to show the increase in SV, the two sldiers must be space closer together for better feeling. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2805619 ok
01:12:906 (4,1) - is this mistake.. it doesnt look correct since 4 is a 1/2 slider. maybe you can increase to 3/4 slider? it's on purpose because it follows the vocal.but i change it 2 notes instead of a slider
01:15:244 (2) - try a soft finish on sliderhead? i think it's no need but still changed it
01:19:530 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - maybe do perfect symmetry? (use ctrl+h) ok
01:21:088 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can try ctrl+H too, i think it is more readable. i don't know what's your mean... this is perfect imo...
01:21:965 (1) - end spinner here? i think it is more suitable although you are follow vocal. ...where?
01:43:880 (5,6) - i dont think stack pattern suits here changed
01:46:413 (2,3) - this spacing too far ok
02:03:750 (3) - split to 2 circle, or use slider at 02:03:945 - , the sound there is very loud and i don't think sliderend is suitable. hmm,added a slider
02:10:958 (1,3) - i think both clap+whistle is good. or whistle+finish. ah,i don't think so x.x
Easy
01:57:517 - 00:55:179 - add note? i don't think 3/2 spacing is good in easy. ok

good luck

changed a lot,thanks for mod~

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2015-02-25T05:27:26+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
m4m

NO KD

General
mp3文件需要128-192kbps，换个。唉，怎么剪mp3还会降比特率，跳楼了，fix
Insane
00:10:179 (1,2,3) - 这边是四连。你在00:16:413 (3,4,5,6) - 放四连了这里为何是三连。改了
00:26:932 (2,1) - 跳太大了，知道你是为了做00:26:543 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 的梗，但还是要考虑到和整张图ds设定的问题。别的地方都普通，这边很突兀的1/4大跳不太适合。好，减小了间距
00:57:322 (5) - 音量太轻了，这里至少调到30% 感觉20，30没什么区别啊，我只想营造一个静音的效果，不过还是改了
01:06:867 (2,1) - 感觉位置换下比较好好
01:19:335 (2,1) - 同上，然后跳放小一点。（对称要不要保持就随意了这里就算了.感觉不需要这样改
01:45:244 (3,4) - 这个跳也是略大，稍微小点，大概3.00差不多就够了。好
整个图排版还有待加强，初期别为了摆些形状强行作梗，等你对节奏和跳把握比较好的时候再这么做比较好。另外，用那么多3/4很容易被各种人狂喷，我个人是没什么意见，看你的了。嗯我会重新做一部分，3/4滑条的话感觉很适合音乐，其他人喷就喷吧，我无所谓
yf's Hard
复制粘贴差评。
normal and easy diff are fine to me.

good luck.

感谢=.=

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2015-02-25T06:04:56+00:00

http://puu.sh/gbJb8/e9a5351cad.zip 大改以及音效

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2015-02-25T06:34:25+00:00

好更新了，我也用你这个soft finish好了.-.

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-02-27T21:33:27+00:00

From

Here's my mod

asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - important

General

Add 黒うさ in tags
The timing looks weird to me =/ Maybe add a red line on 00:45:244 with 154.02 BPM ? I'm not sure

Easy

00:04:724(1)- Remove whistle and add finish instead cuz here I heard a cymbal sound
00:09:400(3,4)- This pattern looks weird to me =/ and it can ruin the flow . Try this : http://puu.sh/gfjlq/25c96f8d6b.jpg
00:24:205(2)- Move the last gap to 197|228 to the pattern look great
00:29:659(1)- Move the slider's tail to 00:30:049()- and then on 00:30:439()- add a note to follow the piano well
00:31:218(3)- Add NC cuz new vocals
00:32:776(1)- I think this slider is not so curved =/ Move the middle gap to 443|123 to make it curve ;D
00:35:114(4)- imo the placement of this slider makes the current pattern look weird =/ Place the last gap to 414|239 . It should be like here : http://puu.sh/gfkuP/7c21a34ed3.jpg
00:39:789(2,3,4)- You tried to make an acute angle ? D: It doesn't look so nice imo . Here's the best ;3 : http://puu.sh/gflAK/69365c4aa2.jpg
00:57:711(1)- I think this slider touch the HP bar =/
01:00:439(4)- Move it to 361|285 cuz the current placement of the note creating an nazi blanket with the previous note D:
01:14:854(3,4)- imo the pattern looks weird =/ Try this instead : http://puu.sh/gfmus/ee30d56615.jpg
01:35:893(1,2,3)- An imperfect angle pattern =/ Move (3)- to 397|322 to the angle pattern look perfect o3o

Rakuen's Normal

00:01:608(1,2,3)- Are you sure that the linear pattern looks fine ? In my mind it looks not so perfectly =/ I tried and here it's the pic : http://puu.sh/gfnBO/fec15787ca.jpg
```
20,284,1608,6,0,L|215:284,1,195,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,192,2387,2,0,L|20:192,1,195,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,100,3166,2,0,L|215:100,1,195,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
00:07:841(1)- Unsnapped blue line
00:10:763(7)- I think this note touch the HP bar @.@
00:13:296(6)- Move the first gap to 208|53 and then the middle gap to 173|51 for a perfectly pattern with the next note and here's the code :
```
204,56,13296,2,0,P|172:53|140:54,1,65
```
I hope it's the correct code
00:20:309(1)- Unsnaped blue line
00:31:023(4)- Place this note to 133|325 cuz placed under previous slider's tail is unreadable =/ I guess
00:35:504(2)- Move the last gap to 266|164 for a perfectly pattern
00:37:452(4,5)- Dunno these sliders make the flow unbalanced =/ Try this : http://puu.sh/ggT3p/3b9f2871ad.jpg
00:56:348(6)- Instead putting here a repeat , why you not remove the reverse and add then a circle after the slider ? It will fit the vocals much better ;3
01:09:010(4)- Remove finish from slider's head cuz I don't hear a cymbal sound here =/
01:21:478(4)- Same as above
02:11:348(4)- Remove finish . No cymbal sound
02:23:815(4)- Same as above

yf's Hard

00:18:166(4,5,6)- Instead putting 3 notes , why you not replace them with a 1/6 slider ?
00:19:919(1)- Move the last gap to 365|104 cuz the current placement of this slider makes the current pattern look weird =/
00:29:659(1,2,3,4)- I think instead 4 notes works an 1/8 slider ( 1/4 with two reverses ) also to catch perfectly the instruments , snap the next slider from 1/6 to 1/8
01:00:439(8)- I think here a 1/6 slider heard very weird . Maybe replace it with 2 notes like here : http://puu.sh/ggW5U/0d2a13129f.jpg
01:59:075(1)- Wow a 1/4 slider with a lot of reverse ! Why you not put here a 1/4 slider without reverses how you did at 00:56:737(1)- ?
02:02:776(9)- A 1/6 slider again here ~ It heard weird . In my opinion , I choose putting 2 notes instead a 1/6 slider here =/
02:15:244(9)- Same as above

Insane

00:39:692(1,2,3,4)- Hmmm delete (1)- and (3)- cuz these notes doesn't fit good the vocals and instruments =/
01:00:828(1)- Maybe remove the repeat from slider and add 2 notes instead like here : http://puu.sh/ggYkW/92ba75a921.jpg
01:09:789(1)- Pls improve this slider ~ It looks unnestetic imo =/

Meeh That's all from me :3

Good Luck ~

z1085684963

327 posts

Joined August 2012

z1085684963 2015-03-06T05:09:59+00:00

[Insane]
00:25:783 (1) - 去nc
01:13:316 (1) - 什么鬼
01:35:718 (3,4,5,6,7) - blanket
01:36:303 (8,9) - ctrl+g
01:47:017 (4) - 删了
01:53:056 (7) - blanket

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2015-03-07T15:59:27+00:00

兹磁

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2015-03-11T14:41:24+00:00

Crystal wrote:
兹磁

兹磁也没有用，我在思考怎么填上这个史前巨坑owo

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2015-03-15T06:27:25+00:00

tutuhaha wrote:
[Rauken's Normal]
01:17:192 (3) - 这个我觉得搞弯的比较好玩儿都行w
01:21:867 (1) - 这里俩节奏类型建议给你，第一个是这里放一个note，然后spinner和Insane一样，或者说delete掉01:21:867 (5) - 然后在01:21:867 (5) - 放一个note就行了小小overmap w
01:34:724 (1) - 这里的这个音没有强到要特地放一个note..我觉得还是删掉比较好 orz先放着，有人提再改
02:19:335 (2,3) - ....能把2放到3中间不咯..换梗了

继续加油吧

Thanks for the mods!

handsome wrote:
Rakuen's Normal
01:22:841 (1) - spinner don't seem necessary.

good luck

No fix, spinner is for vocal drag

Thanks for the mods!

ByBy_ChAn wrote:
Rakuen's Normal
00:01:608(1,2,3)- Are you sure that the linear pattern looks fine ? In my mind it looks not so perfectly =/ I tried and here it's the pic : Used Ctrl+J...http://puu.sh/gfnBO/fec15787ca.jpg
20,284,1608,6,0,L|215:284,1,195,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,192,2387,2,0,L|20:192,1,195,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,100,3166,2,0,L|215:100,1,195,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:07:841(1)- Unsnapped blue line Thank you
00:10:763(7)- I think this note touch the HP bar @.@ Fixed
00:13:296(6)- Move the first gap to 208|53 and then the middle gap to 173|51 for a perfectly pattern with the next note and here's the code : Cool, but maybe next time use a picture, coding is hard for me
204,56,13296,2,0,P|172:53|140:54,1,65
I hope it's the correct code
00:20:309(1)- Unsnaped blue line Thank you
00:31:023(4)- Place this note to 133|325 cuz placed under previous slider's tail is unreadable =/ I guess It gives a 'jump' effect altho it's on DS
00:35:504(2)- Move the last gap to 266|164 for a perfectly pattern Keep for nazi, use a picture instead
00:37:452(4,5)- Dunno these sliders make the flow unbalanced =/ Try this : http://puu.sh/ggT3p/3b9f2871ad.jpg As long as the flow goes correctly, no reduced speed
00:56:348(6)- Instead putting here a repeat , why you not remove the reverse and add then a circle after the slider ? It will fit the vocals much better ;3 Drum sounds quite loud
01:09:010(4)- Remove finish from slider's head cuz I don't hear a cymbal sound here =/
01:21:478(4)- Same as above
02:11:348(4)- Remove finish . No cymbal sound
02:23:815(4)- Same as above Keep for the hitsound, there are actually cymbal sound, if you listen closely

Thanks for the mods!

Update: http://puu.sh/gAUCs/627c6bf8d7.osu

Kodora

Kodora 2015-03-15T06:40:58+00:00

Hanatan's ver is just amazing <33

Karen

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Karen 2015-03-15T06:41:38+00:00

Kodora wrote:
Hanatan's ver is just amazing <33

<3

liangv587

472 posts

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liangv587 2015-03-18T13:55:08+00:00

[Easy]
滑条过短不用拘泥于blanket
01:43:705 (4) - 闷声作大死

[Normal]
00:10:783 (7) - 这个不该有，删掉。00:10:199 (6,1) - 删了之后注意间距
00:31:043 (4) - 1/2太快了不要叠在滑条尾
00:44:485 (5) - overlap，下来点
01:41:173 (6) - 这里不明显，删了吧
02:25:004 (1) - 转盘从这里开始就行了

[Hrad]
ar-1
00:46:628 (5,6) -
00:52:861 (4,5) - 不爽的overmap，建议都删了
01:03:868 (9) - 删了
01:16:335 (9) - 删了
01:48:965 (5,6) -
01:52:082 (4,5) - 不爽的overmap，建议都删了
02:01:530 (5) -
02:04:647 (5) -
02:06:205 (10) -
02:13:998 (5) -
02:17:115 (5) - hard里面放这么多3连并不合适

[Insane]
00:19:939 (6,7,8,9) - 试试两个1/4滑条
01:13:316 (1) - 这个滑条是怎么回事
01:15:264 (2) - 1/2滑条+圈
01:35:718 (3,4,5,6,7) - 3连就够了
01:39:128 (5) - 删了或者01:39:030 (4) - 变1/4滑条
01:39:809 (1) - 不变速吗
01:42:244 (5) - 奇葩节奏，这个删了
01:47:212 (5) - 血条擦边
01:59:679 (1) - nc
02:05:718 (8) - 换气，这里空出来
02:16:335 (4) - 删了节奏好些
02:20:231 (6) - 删了，02:21:011 - 这里加3连

Ayachi-

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Ayachi- 2015-03-19T05:18:34+00:00

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Yumeno Himiko

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Yumeno Himiko 2015-03-20T13:43:55+00:00

exam’s Overdose

http://puu.sh/gI4bP/77d66420b6.rar

Karen

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Karen 2015-03-20T15:04:29+00:00

updated

DragonSlayer96

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DragonSlayer96 2015-03-20T22:35:26+00:00

o/
Poke mod from Examination (first overdose i have modded, orz)

General

Please add examination to the tags also
Disable widescreen support (it is enabled on overdose, don't know about the other difficulties)

Overdose

00:06:303 (1,2,3) - the slider ends are mapped to blank spots
00:07:764 - you can add a note here
00:19:550 (4) - shorten the slilder by one tick so it ends on 00:19:744 -
00:25:783 (1,2,3,4,5) - straight line on these are kinda bleh from how the music sounds like that they are mapped to
00:39:322 - you can add a note here to go along with the vocals (sounds better to me too)
00:40:881 - ^
00:42:439 - ^
00:42:537 (2) - shorten the slider by one tick so it ends on 00:42:731 - to follow the rhythm of the song better
00:45:848 (3) - note sounds blank underneath to me
00:47:699 (2,3) - ^
00:50:134 (2) - ^
00:50:426 - add note here
00:50:621 - ^
00:50:816 - ^
00:52:082 (3) - note sounds blank underneath to me
01:16:822 - add a note here
01:21:985 (1) - ends at 01:24:420 - not at 01:24:225 -
though they are soft, you can add notes to the sounds on 01:34:550 - and 01:34:939 -
01:35:816 - you can add a note here to go along with the vocals (sounds better to me too)
01:37:374 - ^
01:38:933 - ^
01:42:050 - ^
01:43:608 - ^
01:45:166 - ^
01:50:037 (2,3) - notes sounds blank underneath to me
01:54:420 (3) - ^
why did you end the map at 02:25:004 - when there is music playing until the end of the song?

There were a few things I did question (like 00:37:472 (1,2,3,4,1) - don't sit well with me, but I don't know if it is ok in an overdose). I could not testplay because Overdose is above my skill level to play so you will want to get a few more people to try to help you out (people like ZiRoX, alienflybot, newtoniorock8 and Negri_sk are good modders that can further help). Hope it can get ranked soon. Hope this all helps.

Yumeno Himiko

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Yumeno Himiko 2015-03-21T02:18:03+00:00

DragonSlayer96 wrote:
o/
Poke mod from Examination (first overdose i have modded, orz)

General
Please add examination to the tags also
Disable widescreen support (it is enabled on overdose, don't know about the other difficulties)

Overdose
00:06:303 (1,2,3) - the slider ends are mapped to blank spots So the slider ends are silenced, the instrument lasts for 1/1 beats, I think it's fine to use sliders here
00:07:764 - you can add a note here nice idea, added
00:19:550 (4) - shorten the slilder by one tick so it ends on 00:19:744 - shortened, and add a note at 00:19:842
00:25:783 (1,2,3,4,5) - straight line on these are kinda bleh from how the music sounds like that they are mapped to I think it goes fine here, it's also followed by HDash
00:39:322 - you can add a note here to go along with the vocals (sounds better to me too) Sure
00:40:881 - ^ ^
00:42:439 - ^ ^
00:42:537 (2) - shorten the slider by one tick so it ends on 00:42:731 - to follow the rhythm of the song better Yep
00:45:848 (3) - note sounds blank underneath to me It follows the song
00:47:699 (2,3) - ^ remove these notes will feel worse with the next 1/1 slider
00:50:134 (2) - ^ follows the song and my patterns
00:50:426 - add note here changed with my patterns
00:50:621 - ^ ^
00:50:816 - ^ ^
00:52:082 (3) - note sounds blank underneath to me I think it's ok
01:16:822 - add a note here sure
01:21:985 (1) - ends at 01:24:420 - not at 01:24:225 - no, it stops on the white line and it also ends with the vocal disappear
though they are soft, you can add notes to the sounds on 01:34:550 - and 01:34:939 - hmm, no
01:35:816 - you can add a note here to go along with the vocals (sounds better to me too) Well, it will feel bad with 2 3/4 sliders go together, so no change
01:37:374 - ^ ^
01:38:933 - ^ ^
01:42:050 - ^ ^
01:43:608 - ^ ^
01:45:166 - ^ ^
01:50:037 (2,3) - notes sounds blank underneath to me Like what I mentioned above
01:54:420 (3) - ^ It follows my patterns and work well
why did you end the map at 02:25:004 - when there is music playing until the end of the song? OK, make this spin longer now lol

There were a few things I did question (like 00:37:472 (1,2,3,4,1) - don't sit well with me, but I don't know if it is ok in an overdose). I think it's fine and go wellI could not testplay because Overdose is above my skill level to play so you will want to get a few more people to try to help you out (people like ZiRoX, alienflybot, newtoniorock8 and Negri_sk are good modders that can further help). Hope it can get ranked soon. Hope this all helps.

Thank you for the nice mod XD~ Also thx for the recommend modders~ will find them later ww

To ren: update the tags and widescreen support
update

Him3con

Him3con 2015-03-22T12:23:55+00:00

[yf's Hard]
01:09:809 (2,3,1) - 坑人系列.(~~我tm让你目压.~~
01:21:887 (1,2) - 虽然没毛病但是我觉得如果这样更好.

图.

http://puu.sh/gKISV/643eb83e59.jpg

[Insane]
00:39:030 (1,2,3) - 来坑个痛快!
01:03:381 (6,7,8) -

原来

http://puu.sh/gKJcv/0a8faf63aa.jpg

改

建议

http://puu.sh/gKJdV/8fd90a34b7.jpg

不管是听起来还是打起来都蛮舒服.
01:09:809 (1) -

原来

http://puu.sh/gKJlm/f85811ebb7.jpg

改

建议

http://puu.sh/gKJmK/d3d3a3b3e1.jpg

抓人声么? 笑
01:13:316 (1) - 前面blanket很好.但是这个我觉得你在逗打图的player.Player: nice nice ..... What this shit?! Nice nice... finished ~~真难看~~
01:21:985 (1) - 看到这里我知道你是抓人声的.但是我还是建议你在这里01:22:666 (1) - 结尾.

[Rakuen's Normal]
星级一定在逗我..

[Easy]

Nico~ ~~nice~~

SPOILER

我发表言论仅出于我个人观点

Karen

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Karen 2015-03-23T03:03:06+00:00

liangv587 wrote:
[Easy]
滑条过短不用拘泥于blanket
01:43:705 (4) - 闷声作大死

[Insane]
00:19:939 (6,7,8,9) - 试试两个1/4滑条
01:13:316 (1) - 这个滑条是怎么回事
01:15:264 (2) - 1/2滑条+圈
01:35:718 (3,4,5,6,7) - 3连就够了
01:39:128 (5) - 删了或者01:39:030 (4) - 变1/4滑条
01:39:809 (1) - 不变速吗不了，怕被喷
01:42:244 (5) - 奇葩节奏，这个删了
01:47:212 (5) - 血条擦边
01:59:679 (1) - nc
02:05:718 (8) - 换气，这里空出来
02:16:335 (4) - 删了节奏好些不吧，本来就没几个三连
02:20:231 (6) - 删了，02:21:011 - 这里加3连节奏强烈，还是跳好

Meconopsis wrote:
[Insane]
00:39:030 (1,2,3) - 来坑个痛快!
01:03:381 (6,7,8) -
原来
http://puu.sh/gKJcv/0a8faf63aa.jpg
改
建议
http://puu.sh/gKJdV/8fd90a34b7.jpg
不管是听起来还是打起来都蛮舒服. 不了
01:09:809 (1) -
原来
http://puu.sh/gKJlm/f85811ebb7.jpg
改
建议
http://puu.sh/gKJmK/d3d3a3b3e1.jpg
抓人声么? 笑
01:13:316 (1) - 前面blanket很好.但是这个我觉得你在逗打图的player.Player: nice nice ..... What this shit?! Nice nice... finished ~~真难看~~
01:21:985 (1) - 看到这里我知道你是抓人声的.但是我还是建议你在这里01:22:666 (1) - 结尾. 还是人声好

no reply = fixed thanks for mod

-Nanaka-

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-Nanaka- 2015-03-23T10:43:23+00:00

hi Ren chan

from My Modding Queues

red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue,Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.

General

[quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]Hitsounds must have an acceptable range of delay under 5ms, unless there's a special purpose. Every hitsound file should start in time, preferrably at 0ms. This is to ensure that every map doesn't sound mistimed, and therefore could provide acceptably synchronized rhythm feedback to players.soft-hitnormal3
SPOILER
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/gM79f/b3c473ddec.wav
try this instead

Insane

00:04:355 (1,1) - I think it is too far, also Distance gap between 00:03:965 (1,1) - & 00:04:355 (1,1) -
00:06:303 (1,2,3) - hm...Spacing is a tiny bit off, move over to the left.
SPOILER
00:07:861 (1) - Remove body whistle plz ;; Vol100% also Very noisy...80% better
00:16:628 (4,5) - Weird bad flow here, try moving (4) like this
SPOILER
00:19:939 (7,8) - Make these symmetrical
00:29:095 (2) - same as 00:16:628 (4,5) -
00:29:679 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Put it in the centre of playing field.
SPOILER
00:54:615 (1,2,3) - mmmm, how about this?? you can try
SPOILER
01:00:069 (5,6) - ^ Make these symmetrical,Bad appearance
01:03:186 (5,6,7) - This Stack hate....I want to change
01:06:303 (5,1) - Hmm stack fully or space apart, since this can be confused for 1/4.
01:09:809 (1) - Here is really meaningless lower the volume 00:57:342 (5) - Unification and here
01:09:809 (1,2) - Swap NC,00:57:342 (5,1) - for consistency
01:11:563 (10,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Put it in the centre of playing field.
01:12:537 (3,4) - Stack plz,I look strange in play
SPOILER
01:15:264 - Remove Finish. If you want with, add whistle
01:21:887 (5) - Missing Finish
01:59:679 (1) - Rem NC. for consistency
02:05:134 (3) - ^ Remove Finish. If you want with, add whistle
02:17:212 (1) - add Finish
02:17:602 (3) - Rem Finish
02:19:160 (2,3,4) - Oh...Weird bad flow here. this Overlap do not like
02:24:225 (5) - Missing Finish

nice map

加油！

-Nya-

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-Nya- 2015-03-24T09:08:19+00:00

Placeholder for my mod.
Will get to it later today.

Karen

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Topic Starter

Karen 2015-03-24T10:14:06+00:00

-Nanaka- wrote:
hi Ren chan
from My Modding Queues

red: unrankable issue.
blue: maybe unrankable issue,Highly recommended.
bold: should fix.

General
[quote="Ranking Criteria":1337]Hitsounds must have an acceptable range of delay under 5ms, unless there's a special purpose. Every hitsound file should start in time, preferrably at 0ms. This is to ensure that every map doesn't sound mistimed, and therefore could provide acceptably synchronized rhythm feedback to players.soft-hitnormal3
SPOILER
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/gM79f/b3c473ddec.wav
try this instead ok,thank you>3

Insane
00:04:355 (1,1) - I think it is too far, also Distance gap between 00:03:965 (1,1) - & 00:04:355 (1,1) - ok
00:06:303 (1,2,3) - hm...Spacing is a tiny bit off, move over to the left. nice idea:3
SPOILER
00:07:861 (1) - Remove body whistle plz ;; Vol100% also Very noisy...80% betterfixed
00:16:628 (4,5) - Weird bad flow here, try moving (4) like this okay
SPOILER
00:19:939 (7,8) - Make these symmetrical okay
00:29:095 (2) - same as 00:16:628 (4,5) - okay
00:29:679 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Put it in the centre of playing field. ok
SPOILER
00:54:615 (1,2,3) - mmmm, how about this?? you can try changed on my way.
SPOILER
01:00:069 (5,6) - ^ Make these symmetrical,Bad appearance okay
01:03:186 (5,6,7) - This Stack hate....I want to change it's very funny to see someone play with HD and miss here
01:06:303 (5,1) - Hmm stack fully or space apart, since this can be confused for 1/4. hmm...i dong't want to change here because i want to keep 01:05:329 (8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - it's looking
01:09:809 (1,2) - Swap NC,00:57:342 (5,1) - for consistency ok
01:11:563 (10,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Put it in the centre of playing field. hmm,only two sliders..no need here imo.
01:12:537 (3,4) - Stack plz,I look strange in play ok
SPOILER
01:15:264 - Remove Finish. If you want with, add whistle removed
01:21:887 (5) - Missing Finish
01:59:679 (1) - Rem NC. for consistency
02:05:134 (3) - ^ Remove Finish. If you want with, add whistle
02:17:212 (1) - add Finish
02:17:602 (3) - Rem Finish all fixed above
02:19:160 (2,3,4) - Oh...Weird bad flow here. this Overlap do not like hmm.keep this
02:24:225 (5) - Missing Finish k

nice map
加油！

really helpful>3.thank you~

-Nya-

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-Nya- 2015-03-24T20:08:33+00:00

Heya~
Responding to your request via PM.

General:

Rather, just to be safe, change your audio lead-in to 2000ms.

Insane:

00:07:082 (3) –Why not rather add a finish here?
00:30:459 (1) –Rather space this slider normally. Try something like this:
Picture
Something like the above pic.
00:39:322 (2,3) –Rather space these notes like you spaced these ones: 00:42:439 (2,3) – It’s much more readable imo.
01:03:381 (6,7,8) –Rather unstack these. I think it will help with the flow and prevent confusion.
01:12:926 (4,5,1) -^ This is more my opinion, since I don’t really like stacked notes that doesn’t follow the same rhythm.
01:36:985 (2,3) –Same as here: 00:39:322 (2,3) – To improve the flow and also improve readability, I suggest spacing these out normally.
01:38:640 (2) -^
01:41:660 (2,3) -^
01:43:218 (2,3) –Stacking those notes like this is more exceptable than the anti-jump imo. But this is also just my opinion.
01:40:978 (1) –Place this slider here: X:288 Y:104. To make that linear pattern look better and consistent.
Picture
01:51:498 (3) –This slidershape can be improved. Try to make the wave shape more fluent. Like this:
Picture
02:05:718 –Add a note here?

yf’s Hard:

00:06:303 (3) –Why not add a finish on the tail as well?
00:33:478 (3,4) –Just space these out a little more so it’s similar to these spacings: 00:35:037 (3,4) - 00:36:595 (3,4) –

Rakuen’s Normal:

00:07:082 (4) –Why not add a finish on the tail of this slider?
01:09:420 (5) -^
01:21:887 (5) -^, on the head.
02:11:757 (5) -^
02:24:225 (5) -^, on the head.

Easy:

Follow my hitsounding advice like in Rakuen’s Normal.

Just look through every diff again and try to see if you can add that hitsounding advice like I said in Rakuen’s Normal.
Very nice mapset.
Call me back~

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,019 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2015-03-25T02:15:20+00:00

Mod requested~

00:10:296 (1) - I can't hear any beat here on the blue ticks (yeah, there's is a held sound in the background, but it's a continous sound, not a triplet). Replace this with a circle.
00:16:043 (2,3,4,5) - If I move this ONE grid space right it turns into a hyperdash, so yeah, currently it's a timing jump and that will be really annoying to play. Increase the distance so the hyperdash is triggered
00:16:433 (1,2) - I know this distance isn't large, but after the 6,80x hyperdash it may be a bit hard to catch for some players. I think reducing it a tiiiiny bit will make this more enjoyable.
00:18:186 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should ask some QAT about this. This is kind of a bugged pattern. For example, click on (2) and check previous and next object distance: previous is larger than next, but the hyperdash is to the next note (that shouldn't make sense, as the larger distance should have the hyperdash). If you move (1) to the right, then the hyperdash is moved to (3), even though distance (2,3) remains the same and that's where the hyperdash was. Move (1) to x:88, (2) to x:192 and (3) to x:296 to prevent this situation, anything higher will trigger a random hyperdash as soon as the ryuuta can't keep up with normal dashing.
00:31:238 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can try this positions: (2) x:400, (3) x:96, (4) x:384. Sometimes a pattern with large jumps, somewhat close to hyperdashes gives a good emphasis too.
00:47:699 (2) - Nothing on the song here, the triplets feels forced into the map for simmetry sake.
00:58:705 (4,5,6) - One grid space to the left (to x:288) makes this waaaaaaaay more friendly.
00:59:679 (2) - Again, this is kind of a timing jump, as one grid space to the right triggers the hyperdash. Reduce it or put the slider tail on x:512 to be able to move it to the right to trigger the hyperdash.
01:02:796 (4) - ^Same, too close to timing jump. Move this to x:256 to make it easier
01:08:640 (1,2,3,4) - The pattern is ok as it is, but I just wanted to point out that this still allows for something jumpier.
01:12:731 (4) - [b]Move this to x:320. This note lands on a red tick, so it's a bit weird to have a hyperdash to it.
01:35:524 (2) - Move to x:272 to make this a little easier, let's create some contrast between Kiai Time and the rest.
01:37:861 (4) - Move to x:176, same reason as ^
01:38:640 (2) - Move to x:320, same reason
Same applies for 01:41:368 (1,2) - , 01:43:706 (3,4) - and 01:44:485 (1,2) -
01:51:108 (2) - Move to x:224 to make it easier to catch, it's too close to triggering the hyperdash
01:53:056 (1) - x:288 for same reason
01:53:445 (3) - Move to x:160 to make it easier to catch after hyperdash

I think that's it. It's a nice diff, but I think it resorts too much on almost-timed jumps, which may be a bit annoying for not so pro players. Take that into account considering this is the only ctb-specific diff in the mapset.

Good luck!

Yumeno Himiko

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Yumeno Himiko 2015-03-25T14:23:19+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Mod requested~

00:10:296 (1) - I can't hear any beat here on the blue ticks (yeah, there's is a held sound in the background, but it's a continous sound, not a triplet). Replace this with a circle. Ahh yep you are right here~ Changed~
00:16:043 (2,3,4,5) - If I move this ONE grid space right it turns into a hyperdash, so yeah, currently it's a timing jump and that will be really annoying to play. Increase the distance so the hyperdash is triggered Done!
00:16:433 (1,2) - I know this distance isn't large, but after the 6,80x hyperdash it may be a bit hard to catch for some players. I think reducing it a tiiiiny bit will make this more enjoyable. XD ok cut down a tiiiiiny lol
00:18:186 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should ask some QAT about this. This is kind of a bugged pattern. For example, click on (2) and check previous and next object distance: previous is larger than next, but the hyperdash is to the next note (that shouldn't make sense, as the larger distance should have the hyperdash). If you move (1) to the right, then the hyperdash is moved to (3), even though distance (2,3) remains the same and that's where the hyperdash was. Move (1) to x:88, (2) to x:192 and (3) to x:296 to prevent this situation, anything higher will trigger a random hyperdash as soon as the ryuuta can't keep up with normal dashing. Remapped this part now ~
00:31:238 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can try this positions: (2) x:400, (3) x:96, (4) x:384. Sometimes a pattern with large jumps, somewhat close to hyperdashes gives a good emphasis too. looking nice~
00:47:699 (2) - Nothing on the song here, the triplets feels forced into the map for simmetry sake. Fixed
00:58:705 (4,5,6) - One grid space to the left (to x:288) makes this waaaaaaaay more friendly. Ok
00:59:679 (2) - Again, this is kind of a timing jump, as one grid space to the right triggers the hyperdash. Reduce it or put the slider tail on x:512 to be able to move it to the right to trigger the hyperdash. Fixed this timing jump
01:02:796 (4) - ^Same, too close to timing jump. Move this to x:256 to make it easier ok
01:08:640 (1,2,3,4) - The pattern is ok as it is, but I just wanted to point out that this still allows for something jumpier. ahh ok
01:12:731 (4) - [b]Move this to x:320. This note lands on a red tick, so it's a bit weird to have a hyperdash to it. ok
01:35:524 (2) - Move to x:272 to make this a little easier, let's create some contrast between Kiai Time and the rest. done
01:37:861 (4) - Move to x:176, same reason as ^ ^
01:38:640 (2) - Move to x:320, same reason ^
Same applies for 01:41:368 (1,2) - , 01:43:706 (3,4) - and 01:44:485 (1,2) - ^
01:51:108 (2) - Move to x:224 to make it easier to catch, it's too close to triggering the hyperdash ok
01:53:056 (1) - x:288 for same reason fixed
01:53:445 (3) - Move to x:160 to make it easier to catch after hyperdash fixed
I think that's it. It's a nice diff, but I think it resorts too much on almost-timed jumps, which may be a bit annoying for not so pro players. Take that into account considering this is the only ctb-specific diff in the mapset.

Good luck!

Thank you so much ZiRox! All fixed

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Karen

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Karen 2015-03-26T08:31:24+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
Heya~
Responding to your request via PM.

General:
Rather, just to be safe, change your audio lead-in to 2000ms. ok

Insane:
00:07:082 (3) –Why not rather add a finish here? good idea
00:30:459 (1) –Rather space this slider normally. Try something like this: hmm changed this on my own way.i think it's better.
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Something like the above pic.
00:39:322 (2,3) –Rather space these notes like you spaced these ones: 00:42:439 (2,3) – It’s much more readable imo. ok
01:03:381 (6,7,8) –Rather unstack these. I think it will help with the flow and prevent confusion. changed the patterns here.
01:12:926 (4,5,1) -^ This is more my opinion, since I don’t really like stacked notes that doesn’t follow the same rhythm. ok changed
01:36:985 (2,3) –Same as here: 00:39:322 (2,3) – To improve the flow and also improve readability, I suggest spacing these out normally.
01:38:640 (2) -^
01:41:660 (2,3) -^ all fixed above
01:43:218 (2,3) –Stacking those notes like this is more exceptable than the anti-jump imo. But this is also just my opinion. hm.don't want to change here,it's fun imo..
01:40:978 (1) –Place this slider here: X:288 Y:104. To make that linear pattern look better and consistent. wow nice idea!
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01:51:498 (3) –This slidershape can be improved. Try to make the wave shape more fluent. Like this: OK
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02:05:718 –Add a note here?

Easy:
Follow my hitsounding advice like in Rakuen’s Normal.

Just look through every diff again and try to see if you can add that hitsounding advice like I said in Rakuen’s Normal. ah about the hitsounding.The song itself has many Finish hitsounds and i add finish on all of them so i want to aviod more Finishs on vocal because they may make it a bit noisy.;_;
Very nice mapset.
Call me back~

thank you so much!!

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