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Mahou Sensei Negima Cast - Happy Material (31 person ver. TV

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Topic Starter
Astom
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martes, 30 de marzo de 2010 at 7:37:18

Artist: The Class of 2-A
Title: Happy Material (31 person ver. TV Size)
Source: Mahou Sensei Negima
Tags: Negi Ignacio Aizawa Mai Bandou Ai Deguchi Mami Horie Yui Inoue Naomi Ishige Sawa Itou Shizuka Inokuchi Yuka Kadowaki Kanda Akemi Kanou Mari Kimura Madoka Kobayashi Misa Yu Koyama Kimiko Kuwatani Natsuko Matsuoka Yuki Minagawa Junko Nonoka Noto Mamiko Omae Akane Osawa Chiaki Sakuma Miho Sasagawa Ayana Shimura Yumi Shiraishi Ryoko Shiratori Yuri Tanaka Hazuki Watanabe Akeno Yamakawa Kotomi Yamamoto Azumi
BPM: 163
Filesize: 7939kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ignacio's Incapacity (4,57 stars, 195 notes)
  2. Insane (4,97 stars, 291 notes)
  3. Normal (3,42 stars, 120 notes)
Download: The Class of 2-A - Happy Material (31 person ver. TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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SKIN 100%
BG 100%
Normal - 100% <-- looking for suggestions x3
Hard - 100%
Insane - 100%

MOD
25/3/2010
-xxheroxx mod rdy
-Teara mod rdy x3
-Auto mod rdy x3

26/3/2010
-Breeze mod rdy
-automod rdy
-Beuchi-chan mod rdy
-Shulin mod rdy
-sonnyc mod rdy
-alvisto mod rdy
-Sallad4ever mod rdy

27/3/2010
-Chacha17 mod rdy
-xxheroxx mod rdy

28/3/2010
-gdeath mod rdy
-Shulin mod rdy
-yaya mod rdy =)
-Derekku Chan mod rdy ...

29/3/2010
-automod rdy
-Breeze mod rdy u_u sry for that <_<

30/3/2010
-Leorda rdy
-Real1
Ignacio_old
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

  • • Add Ignacio into tags
    • Source should be "Mahou Sensei Negima!" :U
    • Artist should be "The Class of 2-A" and title "Happy Material (TV Size)" (I'm not sure :S)
Topic Starter
Astom

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

  • • Add Ignacio into tags ok
    • Source should be "Mahou Sensei Negima!" :U no x3, that's another temp. (negima!?)
    • Artist should be "The Class of 2-A" and title "Happy Material (TV Size)" (I'm not sure :S)
no, artist is "Aizawa Mai, Bandou Ai, Deguchi Mami, Horie Yui, Inoue Naomi, Ishige Sawa, Itou Shizuka, Inokuchi Yuka, Kadowaki Mai, Kanda Akemi, Kanou Mari, Kimura Madoka, Kobayashi Misa, Kobayashi Yu, Koyama Kimiko, Kuwatani Natsuko, Matsuoka Yuki, Minagawa Junko, Nonoka Ai, Noto Mamiko, Omae Akane, Osawa Chiaki, Sakuma Miho, Sasagawa Ayana, Shimura Yumi, Shiraishi Ryoko, Shiratori Yuri, Tanaka Hazuki, Watanabe Akeno, Yamakawa Kotomi, Yamamoto Azumi" xDDD! and the original name of the song is "02 - Happy Material (31 person ver. TV Size)" >:3!
Thx xxheroxx x3
Teara
IRC Mod


Great beatmap, decent skin =p

Also, map a easy =p

Star

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Skin Elements ( 50 hit, 100 hit, 300 hit ) are to big IMO

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[Normal]

Raise OD by 2

[Insane]


01:20:557 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hard to hit, hard to read and doesn't look to nice IMO.
Topic Starter
Astom

Teara wrote:

IRC Mod


Great beatmap, decent skin =p

Also, map a easy =p

Star

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Skin Elements ( 50 hit, 100 hit, 300 hit ) are to big IMO

~


[Normal]

Raise OD by 2

[Insane]


01:20:557 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hard to hit, hard to read and doesn't look to nice IMO.
RDY X3
Entozer
@Normal
00:13:563 (4) -> Feels odd. You might be able to move it two beats to the left.
00:37:674 (5) -> Same as above

Some slider feels a bit early to me. Those vocals one, but I guess that's just me.
Breeze
Timing sounds fine

[General]
  1. I just want to tell you, you'd better don't submit a map first time with a background which with only one colour. That would make you map's preview image looked boring, now say that is too late, take care of it when submit maps later days ^ ^
  2. If it didn't trouble you, you could add all singer's name to tags
[SB]
  1. You can put all SB sprites in "foreground layer, so that when break time they still could be seen
  2. I still see the fade out code like 0.003105581, well, it didn't take long time to fix
    I fixed this for you
    Download: The Class of 2-A - Happy Material (31 person ver. TV Size) (Astom).osb
[Skin]
  1. Comboburst too small IMO
  2. Lighting.png fell too big, when KIAI time, it's eye dazlling
[Normal]
  1. 00:52:950 - 00:56:631 - I don't think here suit KIAI
  2. 01:00:680 (x) - KIAI starts here better
[Ignacio's Incapacity]
  1. OD 1 tick higher than insane? Maybe lower 1-2 tick
  2. 00:10:987 (6,7) - no clap, normal hitsound is fine enough
  3. 00:15:588 (9) - ^
  4. 00:52:950 - 00:56:631 - I don't think here suit KIAI
  5. 01:00:680 (x) - KIAI starts here better
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:434 (1) - This spacing a little werid, why here jump?
  2. 00:52:950 (1) - Nice slider, but I'm afraid that it's a little hard to tell which side sliderball to go, maybe put it like this, save some space, and, I feel it starts at 00:53:134 better
  3. 00:52:950 - 00:56:631 - I don't think here suit KIAI
  4. 01:00:680 (x) - KIAI starts here better
Other are fine
nice skin and SB as usual

Topic Starter
Astom

Breeze wrote:

Timing sounds fine

[General]
  1. I just want to tell you, you'd better don't submit a map first time with a background which with only one colour. That would make you map's preview image looked boring, now say that is too late, take care of it when submit maps later days ^ ^ yea my error x_x
  2. If it didn't trouble you, you could add all singer's name to tags o_o rdy
[SB]
  1. You can put all SB sprites in "foreground layer, so that when break time they still could be seenrdy
  2. I still see the fade out code like 0.003105581, well, it didn't take long time to fix
    I fixed this for you ups, dam editor D: i think what i fix that this time D:
    [attachment=1:0bc16]The Class of 2-A - Happy Material (31 person ver. TV Size) (Astom).osb[/attachment:0bc16] thx
[Skin]
  1. Comboburst too small IMOrdy
  2. Lighting.png fell too big, when KIAI time, it's eye dazlling rdy
[Normal]
  1. 00:52:950 - 00:56:631 - I don't think here suit KIAI rdy
  2. 01:00:680 (x) - KIAI starts here better rdy
[Ignacio's Incapacity]
  1. OD 1 tick higher than insane? Maybe lower 1-2 tick rdy
  2. 00:10:987 (6,7) - no clap, normal hitsound is fine enough rdy
  3. 00:15:588 (9) - ^ rdy
  4. 00:52:950 - 00:56:631 - I don't think here suit KIAI rdy
  5. 01:00:680 (x) - KIAI starts here better rdy
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:434 (1) - This spacing a little werid, why here jump? a! eru! ne!xD and it's a funny jump
  2. 00:52:950 (1) - Nice slider, but I'm afraid that it's a little hard to tell which side sliderball to go, maybe put it like this, save some space, and, I feel it starts at 00:53:134 better
    [attachment=0:0bc16]0.jpg[/attachment:0bc16] I work in this later
  3. 00:52:950 - 00:56:631 - I don't think here suit KIAI rdy
  4. 01:00:680 (x) - KIAI starts here better rdy
Other are fine
nice skin and SB as usual
Thx Breeze x3
Breeze
lol good job on tags
wait, what's wrong with the title
shouldn't it be Mahou Sensei Negima Cast - Happy Material (31 person TV ver.)?
EDIT : saw blow post, my fault lol title is too long, I just see some part
Topic Starter
Astom

Breeze wrote:

lol good job on tags
wait, what's wrong with the title
shouldn't it be Mahou Sensei Negima Cast - Happy Material (31 person TV ver.)?
no kds for this post
Artist: The Class of 2-A
Title: Happy Material (31 person ver. TV Size) <----
Source: Mahou Sensei Negima
Tags: Negi Ignacio Aizawa Mai Bandou Ai Deguchi Mami Horie Yui Inoue Naomi Ishige Sawa Itou Shizuka Inokuchi Yuka Kadowaki Mai Kanda Akemi Kanou Mari Kimura Madoka Kobayashi Misa Kobayashi Yu Koyama Kimiko Kuwatani Natsuko Matsuoka Yuki Minagawa Junko Nonoka Ai Noto Mamiko Omae Akane Osawa Chiaki Sakuma Miho Sasagawa Ayana Shimura Yumi Shiraishi Ryoko Shiratori Yuri Tanaka Hazuki Watanabe Akeno Yamakawa Kotomi Yamamoto Azumi
BPM: 163
Filesize: 8651kb
Play Time: 01:28
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But, Board index » Beatmaps » Pending Beatmaps » Mahou Sensei Negima Cast - Happy Material (31 person ver. TV <---

Yea... lol xDD!
well i fix slider 00:52:950 (1)

>:3!

Thx for u help x3
Beuchi
Hi hi! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- I think having "The Class of 2-A" as artist is enough to know there's a lot of people singing here, so maybe delete "31 person ver." from title? o.o
- Lyrics are really hard to see with those images behind them, why don't you use the free part of the other side of the book? You can make the lyrics appear and dissapear there so it will be so much easier to read :P
- Why aren't the images again on second chorus? o.o

~Normal~
00:32:704 (2) - Stack endpoint with (2)?
00:37:858 (5) - I think it sounds better on 00:37:684 (I accidentally clicked it on that point when I played XD)
00:46:140 (3) - Put between (1,2). Try to set the same distance as (1,2)
00:53:318 (2) - Maybe this slider could be a bit confusing if you try to guess where is it going. (Maybe try something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5689)

~Ignacio's Incapacity~
00:27:735 (1,2,3,4,5) - That curve is a bit weird and ugly imo, try something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5691
01:12:091 (x) - Add a note here? owo
01:17:980 (1,2) - Sounds a bit weird.


~Insane~
00:04:729 (1,2,3) - Is this spacing change on purpose?
00:10:250 (5,1) - Unexpected jump o.O
00:38:042 (7) - Stack under (1)?
00:46:508 (x) - Add a note here? I started clicking the stream accidentally on there when I played XD

Good luck~ *star*
Topic Starter
Astom

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- I think having "The Class of 2-A" as artist is enough to know there's a lot of people singing here, so maybe delete "31 person ver." from title? o.o it's the original name of the song D:
- Lyrics are really hard to see with those images behind them, why don't you use the free part of the other side of the book? You can make the lyrics appear and dissapear there so it will be so much easier to read :Pu want to read it when u are playing D:? and i add some time before the final :3
- Why aren't the images again on second chorus? o.o --^ xD

~Normal~
00:32:704 (2) - Stack endpoint with (2)? mmm no they don't fit perfectly
00:37:858 (5) - I think it sounds better on 00:37:684 (I accidentally clicked it on that point when I played XD) ok xD
00:46:140 (3) - Put between (1,2). Try to set the same distance as (1,2) rdy
00:53:318 (2) - Maybe this slider could be a bit confusing if you try to guess where is it going.rdy (Maybe try something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5689)

~Ignacio's Incapacity~
00:27:735 (1,2,3,4,5) - That curve is a bit weird and ugly imo, try something like this rdy http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5691
01:12:091 (x) - Add a note here? owo no xDD
01:17:980 (1,2) - Sounds a bit weird. rdy
[attachment=0:8f210]asd.jpg[/attachment:8f210]

~Insane~
00:04:729 (1,2,3) - Is this spacing change on purpose? Yea x3!
00:10:250 (5,1) - Unexpected jump o.O a! eru! ne! xDD
00:38:042 (7) - Stack under (1)? rdy
00:46:508 (x) - Add a note here? I started clicking the stream accidentally on there when I played XDI add two notes =)

Good luck~ *star* thx =)
Thx beu x3
Shulin
Normal:

00:13:011 (3) - Maybe move this to 00:13:195 it's easier to hit 00:13:563 (4) - that way. Or maybe add notes at 00:13:379 and 00:13:747 to follow the vocal.
00:24:238 (x) - Note?
00:24:790 (4) - Delete imo, you expect to follow the rest of the vocal.
00:24:974 (x) - Note if you do ^
00:25:710 (x) - Note? (You could also map this section like earlier (following vocal), it was easier to follow)
00:59:391 (1) - Hmm I don't like this note straight after a spinner on the easiest difficulty... Maybe extend the spinner for longer to about 00:59:760?
01:27:919 (x) - Note?

Ignacio's Incapacity:

00:33:993 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:59:391 (1,2,3) - Maybe stack all of these in the center, it makes it easier to play.
01:12:091 (x) - Note? + New combo
01:12:275 (5) - Delete if you did ^
01:12:459 (6) - New combo.

Insane:

00:04:729 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing? Looks bad compared to 00:03:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - If you want to make a jump imo make it bigger ^_^
00:10:434 (1) - Spacing? This jump didn't make much sense to me :o
00:50:189 (2) - ^ Jump is hard to follow, needs a new combo.
00:50:189 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Idk... the spacing is really hard to follow here, just my opinion.
00:56:907 (1) - Move back to 00:56:815 imo and adjust spacing.
01:26:171 (x) - Add a note.

All suggestions take whichever ones you want. Nice maps and SB :D
~ Star.
Beuchi

Astom wrote:

u want to read it when u are playing D:?
Uhhh...
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/13079
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/14018
You've been doing it all this time ._, Why not now? xDDD
Sonnyc
Hi
OMG tags

Normal
  • Good
Ignacio
  • 00:36:385 (5) 1 Grid left, up
    00:51:845 (4) Finish
Insane
  • Good
Star
alvisto
OMG HAPPY MATERIAL ! My 1st map ever. Can you let me make a difficulty please ? :3 :3 :3 :3

Some mod points for ya

INSANE
00:47:796 (1) - What is this note synched to ? coz the vocal starts at 00:47:980, and I always miss this note because this note is not mapped to anything, unless you intend to map it according to the background violin. Well, it's up to you.
00:46:784 - 00:52:858 -> too silent. I thought I was hitting nothing. Could you raise the volume a bit ?
00:51:845 (1,2,3,4) - You can keep the same volume for these notes though.
01:06:385 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Move the whole thing up just a little bit so that 01:07:858 (2) can stay on scrren. Never mind the distance, no one would ever notice it. LOL
01:22:582 (1) - remove clap on this spinner ? Just a little suggestion

IGNACIO'S INCAPACITY
Sorry but I don't like your usage of whistles. However, beatmap is really nice !
Sallad4ever
Well here's my mod Astom :D
Impressive slider art as always :)
That's a very very very long tags

SB mod
a little suggestion, I think SB1 should start to come in the screen as soon as the lyric start, not along the SBbook

Normal
00:05:649 (1,2) - switch 1 to circle and 2 into slider like in ignacio's incapacity
00:13:011 (3) - change into slider until red tick
00:13:563 (4) - ^
00:23:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - just like Shulin said add more note to follow the lyric
00:37:306 (x) - add repeat slider ?
00:39:146 (3) - change to slider until red tick
00:39:330 (4) - remove this and add circle in 00:39:882
00:41:539 (1,2) - add more note to fit the lyric?
00:53:134 (1) - stack this with 2
01:18:164 (1,2) - switch 1 to circle and 2 to slider ?

Ignacio's Incapacity
00:10:987 (6,7) - it'll be great if you chould use more hitsound like this
00:24:974 (4) - remove this?
00:26:815 (2,1) - start the jump from here
00:36:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm not sure about this one, maybe delete 1?
01:11:907 (X) - I'm so tempted to add slider here
01:17:980 (1) - this is confusing, remove it or try putting it in red tick, move the slider to withe tick, and delete 3

Insane
00:05:649 (1,2) - switch these like before
00:16:692 (1) - start this spinner on the white tick before 10
00:23:318 (10,11,12) - well I personally like triplet so maybe you can use more of this like in this combo ?
00:23:870 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try mixing slider into these ?
00:26:263 (7) - make this into triplet/repeat until 00:26:447
00:32:520 (1) - change into circle then make a slider in 00:32:704 until 00:32:888
00:47:796 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - one of my favorite pattern :)
00:50:005 (1,2,3,4,5) - this jumps really surprise me

That's all I can suggest you Astom :)
Next time you make an anime map could you let me make a guest diff?
Sorry if it's too long :o
Good luck for another ranked map :D
Fuuko
Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

Oh God, I love this song.

General:

Why so many tags? orz
Isn't the name of the song "Happy Material Medley 31 Girl Plus"? I, for one, always thought it was that.
01:12:459 - IMO, adding a Kiai here would make the map prettier.
Normal:

00:13:563 (4) - Move this back 1/2 beat and make it a 1 beat slider. ( That is, a slider that goes from 00:13:379 till 00:13:747)
01:27:367 - Add a note. ( It won't be that hard for a normal. )
01:27:919 - ^
Insane:

I personally dislike the map, it have many nonsense streams...but oh well. That ugly slider is...fun, though.
That's it, have your star for an awesome song and storyboard.

Ps: It's a shame you aim for fast ranks, or else I could map a diff.
Topic Starter
Astom

Shulin wrote:

Normal:

00:13:011 (3) - Maybe move this to 00:13:195 it's easier to hit 00:13:563 (4) - that way. Or maybe add notes at 00:13:379 and 00:13:747 to follow the vocal. rdy
00:24:238 (x) - Note? rdy
00:24:790 (4) - Delete imo, you expect to follow the rest of the vocal. rdy
00:24:974 (x) - Note if you do ^ rdy
00:25:710 (x) - Note? (You could also map this section like earlier (following vocal), it was easier to follow) I know but "stars" gou up D:
00:59:391 (1) - Hmm I don't like this note straight after a spinner on the easiest difficulty... Maybe extend the spinner for longer to about 00:59:760? rdy
01:27:919 (x) - Note?rdy

Ignacio's Incapacity:

00:33:993 (1) - Remove new combo.rdy
00:59:391 (1,2,3) - Maybe stack all of these in the center, it makes it easier to play.rdy
01:12:091 (x) - Note? + New combommm no
01:12:275 (5) - Delete if you did ^
01:12:459 (6) - New combo. fixed in another way x3

Insane:

00:04:729 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing? Looks bad compared to 00:03:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - If you want to make a jump imo make it bigger ^_^ okey okey xD
00:10:434 (1) - Spacing? This jump didn't make much sense to me :o=/ makes sense to me =( but okey...
00:50:189 (2) - ^ Jump is hard to follow, needs a new combo.I fix this with 2 new combos, I think.. xD
00:50:189 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Idk... the spacing is really hard to follow here, just my opinion. :twisted:
00:56:907 (1) - Move back to 00:56:815 imo and adjust spacing.don't exist a note in 00:56:815, listen music in 25%, batery starts in 00:56:907 (
01:26:171 (x) - Add a note.x3 no

All suggestions take whichever ones you want. Nice maps and SB :D
~ Star.
Topic Starter
Astom

sonnyc wrote:

Hi
OMG tags

Normal
  • Good
Ignacio
  • 00:36:385 (5) 1 Grid left, up rdy
    00:51:845 (4) Finish rdy


Insane
  • Good
Star
Topic Starter
Astom

alvisto wrote:

OMG HAPPY MATERIAL ! My 1st map ever. Can you let me make a difficulty please ? :3 :3 :3 :3 Sry i have already a guest diff in this map =(

Some mod points for ya

INSANE
00:47:796 (1) - What is this note synched to ? coz the vocal starts at 00:47:980, and I always miss this note because this note is not mapped to anything, unless you intend to map it according to the background violin. Well, it's up to you.o_o batery and it sounds really strong
00:46:784 - 00:52:858 -> too silent. I thought I was hitting nothing. Could you raise the volume a bit ?no D:
00:51:845 (1,2,3,4) - You can keep the same volume for these notes though.
01:06:385 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Move the whole thing up just a little bit so that 01:07:858 (2) can stay on scrren. Never mind the distance, no one would ever notice it. LOL rdy
01:22:582 (1) - remove clap on this spinner ? Just a little suggestion mm no

IGNACIO'S INCAPACITY
Sorry but I don't like your usage of whistles. However, beatmap is really nice ! I don't use it, my friend use them XDDD well i fix that i don't like whistles in this song
Topic Starter
Astom

Sallad4ever wrote:

Well here's my mod Astom :D
Impressive slider art as always :)
That's a very very very long tags

SB mod
a little suggestion, I think SB1 should start to come in the screen as soon as the lyric start, not along the SBbook

Normal
00:05:649 (1,2) - switch 1 to circle and 2 into slider like in ignacio's incapacity rdy
00:13:011 (3) - change into slider until red tick rdy
00:13:563 (4) - ^
00:23:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - just like Shulin said add more note to follow the lyric
00:37:306 (x) - add repeat slider ?rdy
00:39:146 (3) - change to slider until red tickrdy
00:39:330 (4) - remove this and add circle in 00:39:882
00:41:539 (1,2) - add more note to fit the lyric? rdy
00:53:134 (1) - stack this with 2 rdy
01:18:164 (1,2) - switch 1 to circle and 2 to slider ? rdy

Ignacio's Incapacity
00:10:987 (6,7) - it'll be great if you chould use more hitsound like this
00:24:974 (4) - remove this? mm no
00:26:815 (2,1) - start the jump from here mm no
00:36:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm not sure about this one, maybe delete 1? no
01:11:907 (X) - I'm so tempted to add slider here I add circles =P
01:17:980 (1) - this is confusing, remove it or try putting it in red tick, move the slider to withe tick, and delete 3no xD

Insane
00:05:649 (1,2) - switch these like before this time no XD
00:16:692 (1) - start this spinner on the white tick before 10 rdy
00:23:318 (10,11,12) - well I personally like triplet so maybe you can use more of this like in this combo ? it's hard found spots like this xD
00:23:870 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try mixing slider into these ?It's negi staff XD
00:26:263 (7) - make this into triplet/repeat until 00:26:447 fixed in another way x3
00:32:520 (1) - change into circle then make a slider in 00:32:704 until 00:32:888 fixed in another way x3
00:47:796 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - one of my favorite pattern :) ;)
00:50:005 (1,2,3,4,5) - this jumps really surprise me :twisted:

That's all I can suggest you Astom :) Thx for u mod Sallad x3
Next time you make an anime map could you let me make a guest diff? I send u a pm with my next song, maybe I start tomorrow to map
Sorry if it's too long :o haha no problem
Good luck for another ranked map :D =)
Thx again Sallad u are welcome =)
Topic Starter
Astom

FuukoLover wrote:

Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

Oh God, I love this song.

General:

Why so many tags? orz
Isn't the name of the song "Happy Material Medley 31 Girl Plus"? I, for one, always thought it was that. no that's not the name, I already download the OST cd
01:12:459 - IMO, adding a Kiai here would make the map prettier. map have kiai time here =o
Normal:

00:13:563 (4) - Move this back 1/2 beat and make it a 1 beat slider. ( That is, a slider that goes from 00:13:379 till 00:13:747)I fix this in another mod
01:27:367 - Add a note. ( It won't be that hard for a normal. )yea but stars gou up <-<
01:27:919 - ^ I fix this in another mod
Insane:

I personally dislike the map, it have many nonsense streams...but oh well. That ugly slider is...fun, though. I don't use nonsense streams =( maybe nonsense jumps x3 but i always search for spots where i can found sounds for streams =(
That's it, have your star for an awesome song and storyboard.

Ps: It's a shame you aim for fast ranks, or else I could map a diff.[/color] I make public request next time xD
Topic Starter
Astom
Okey here last check point =)

[Easy]



[Hard]



[Insane]




Well if i get something better i post a img, but the song is playable =P
onigiri-lol
aqui su estrelladora reportándose Sr >:D
:|
Topic Starter
Astom

onigiri-lol wrote:

aqui su estrelladora reportándose Sr >:D
:|
haha gracias =)
Chacha17
General

Shouldn't the title be only Happy Material (TV Size)? I think the 31 person ver. is not needed anymore, since it's pretty obvious in the Artist section.)

Normal
00:16:324 (1) - remove clap
00:23:134 (5) - move two grids to the left
00:43:379 (3,4) - move one grid to the right
00:57:735 (1) - remove clap
00:57:735 (1) - ^

Ignacio's Incapacity - Diff name seems irrelevant :o Maybe rename to Ignacio's Hard? Just a suggestion.
00:10:250 (4,5) - move one grid up and then right. resnap the other beats.
00:16:324 (1) - remove clap
00:23:134 (9) - finish
00:59:760 (3) - ^

Insane
00:16:508 (1) - remove clap
00:16:508 (1) - ^

Here you go :3
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Normal
00:16:324(1) - remove clap
00:57:735(1) - ^

Ignacio's Incapacity
00:16:324(1) - remove clap

Insane
00:16:508(1) - remove clap

star~
Diasios
[Normal]

  • • 01:27:367 (x) - Add a circle

[Ignacio's Incapacity]


  • • 01:17:060 (1,2,3) - Spacing
Topic Starter
Astom

Chacha17 wrote:

General

Shouldn't the title be only Happy Material (TV Size)? I think the 31 person ver. is not needed anymore, since it's pretty obvious in the Artist section.)

Normal
00:16:324 (1) - remove clap no =(
00:23:134 (5) - move two grids to the left rdy
00:43:379 (3,4) - move one grid to the right rdy
00:57:735 (1) - remove clap no D:
00:57:735 (1) - ^

Ignacio's Incapacity - Diff name seems irrelevant :o Maybe rename to Ignacio's Hard? Just a suggestion.
00:10:250 (4,5) - move one grid up and then right. resnap the other beats. rdy
00:16:324 (1) - remove clap
00:23:134 (9) - finishrdy
00:59:760 (3) - ^rdy

Insane
00:16:508 (1) - remove clapno D:
00:16:508 (1) - ^=(

Here you go :3
Topic Starter
Astom

xxheroxx wrote:

[Normal]

  • • 01:27:367 (x) - Add a circle rdy

[Ignacio's Incapacity]


  • • 01:17:060 (1,2,3) - Spacing rdy
orioncomet
:P
Topic Starter
Astom

orioncomet wrote:

:P
X3
Raha_old
Buen mapa
darkpriest_old
:D
Gens
[General]
  1. Are those tags necessary...? No seriously, you should delete them because I don't think someone would search for any of those tags...
  2. There's something iffy with the title... "31 person ver.", though I don't know if you already explained it in the thread.
That's all I have... pretty good map as always. I see your mapping abilities have been improving. :)
Topic Starter
Astom

Gens wrote:

[General]
  1. Are those tags necessary...? No seriously, you should delete them because I don't think someone would search for any of those tags... It's a breeze suggestion xD
  2. There's something iffy with the title... "31 person ver.", though I don't know if you already explained it in the thread. Yea I explain this
That's all I have... pretty good map as always. I see your mapping abilities have been improving. :) thx x3
Lilac
Once again, you've done it. And this time, with even better mapping than before.

So many tags though... I don't know what to say about that.

And also rage on the difficulty spread. Your easiest difficulty is a H. (H I I)

[SB]
I think the spacing between the lyrics is inconsistent with each other. You might want to alter that in the .osb so that they are evenly spaced apart. Also, please turn off Letterbox during breaks. Your breaks are short anyway.

[Normal]
Along with Insane, the only hitsounds that are used is Finishes. There are a lot of great places where you can use claps. At least I don't have to yell at you about spacing.

00:23:87 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Kinda boring, don't you think?
00:27:73 (1) - Remove New Combo.

[Ignacio's Incapacity]

00:29:57 (1.2) - Don't like those claps.

[Insane]

00:26:07 (7) - AIMod was picking up on that about how the spacing was a bit too far. Distance Snap should get that back.

I might pubble it once you do that at put more claps in good areas.
Topic Starter
Astom

MarioBros777 wrote:

Once again, you've done it. And this time, with even better mapping than before.

So many tags though... I don't know what to say about that.:p

And also rage on the difficulty spread. Your easiest difficulty is a H. (H I I)rdy

[SB]
I think the spacing between the lyrics is inconsistent with each other. You might want to alter that in the .osb so that they are evenly spaced apart. Also, please turn off Letterbox during breaks. Your breaks are short anyway.D:

[Normal]
Along with Insane, the only hitsounds that are used is Finishes. There are a lot of great places where you can use claps. At least I don't have to yell at you about spacing.

00:23:87 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Kinda boring, don't you think? rdy
00:27:73 (1) - Remove New Combo. rdy

[Ignacio's Incapacity]

00:29:57 (1.2) - Don't like those claps. rdy

[Insane]

00:26:07 (7) - AIMod was picking up on that about how the spacing was a bit too far. Distance Snap should get that back.rdy

I might pubble it once you do that at put more claps in good areas.
gdeath
[Insane]
00:52:950 (x) - add a note?

Dont give kds for this post

Star!
Shulin
~ Recheck ~

General

-- Remove all the unnecessary duplicates in your tags "Ai" appears three times so delete two, same for "mai", "kobayashi".
-- I think you should add an Easy. (Especially if this is a popular series XD)

Iganacio's Incapacity:

-- Reduce HP drain by 1.

00:59:391 (1,2,3) - The notes straight after the spinner are a slightly annoying =.=

Insane:

00:53:134 (1) - Put this in the same position as 00:51:661 (4) - it looks neater.
01:26:263 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream is really awkward to play...

Not sure if MB777 is going to pubble this or not, I can if he doesn't lol.
Topic Starter
Astom

gdeath wrote:

[Insane]
00:52:950 (x) - add a note? rdy

Dont give kds for this post

Star!
;)
Topic Starter
Astom

Shulin wrote:

~ Recheck ~

General

-- Remove all the unnecessary duplicates in your tags "Ai" appears three times so delete two, same for "mai", "kobayashi".rdy
-- I think you should add an Easy. (Especially if this is a popular series XD)xD

Iganacio's Incapacity:

-- Reduce HP drain by 1.rdy

00:59:391 (1,2,3) - The notes straight after the spinner are a slightly annoying =.= okey okey rdy xD

Insane:

00:53:134 (1) - Put this in the same position as 00:51:661 (4) - it looks neater.mm fixed?
01:26:263 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream is really awkward to play...rdy

Not sure if MB777 is going to pubble this or not, I can if he doesn't lol. D:
Shulin
Proto Bubble :D
Topic Starter
Astom

Shulin wrote:

Proto Bubble :D
;) thx
yaya
[Insane]
00:50:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this jump doesnt fit music
00:51:293 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
00:52:582 (4,1) - hard to read
Topic Starter
Astom

yaya wrote:

[Insane]
00:50:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this jump doesnt fit music okey fixed
00:51:293 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^ rdy
00:52:582 (4,1) - hard to read rdy
Derekku
*pop*

[General]
*SB images are too large. The max allowed is 800x600, so book.jpg, negixasuna.png, and its shadow are all too large. Also, the recommended size for fullscreen SB images like book.jpg is 640x480, so it would be better to resize it to 320x480 or less since it will be on half of the screen two times.
*kiai should start on 01:00:680, not 1/4 before.

[Normal]
Looks nice~ A bit tricky to be the easiest diff, but... xp

[Ignacio's Incapacity]
01:11:171 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nazi; the spacing is a little sloppy... some notes are touching while others have gaps between them
01:17:980 (1) - this note sounds awkward, and after deleting it myself, I thought that the phrase sounded better.

[Insane]
00:29:576 (1) - thought that this was earlier because of the previous jumps, and ended up 50ing it. Could you put it on the other side of the slider? :S
00:41:355 (1) - ^, but kinda expected it this time since it happened the previous time xp
00:52:950 (1) - this note sounds awkward, and after deleting it myself, I thought that the phrase sounded better.
00:53:134 (2) - coooooool!

Call me back for a repubble when things are fixed o:
Topic Starter
Astom

Derekku Chan wrote:

*pop*

[General]
*SB images are too large. The max allowed is 800x600, so book.jpg, negixasuna.png, and its shadow are all too large. Also, the recommended size for fullscreen SB images like book.jpg is 640x480, so it would be better to resize it to 320x480 or less since it will be on half of the screen two times.>=( rdy
*kiai should start on 01:00:680, not 1/4 before.rdy

[Normal]
Looks nice~ A bit tricky to be the easiest diff, but... xp

[Ignacio's Incapacity]
01:11:171 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nazi; the spacing is a little sloppy... some notes are touching while others have gaps between themrdy
01:17:980 (1) - this note sounds awkward, and after deleting it myself, I thought that the phrase sounded better.

[Insane]
00:29:576 (1) - thought that this was earlier because of the previous jumps, and ended up 50ing it. Could you put it on the other side of the slider? :S rdy =/
00:41:355 (1) - ^, but kinda expected it this time since it happened the previous time xp =P
00:52:950 (1) - this note sounds awkward, and after deleting it myself, I thought that the phrase sounded better.
00:53:134 (2) - coooooool!

Call me back for a repubble when things are fixed o:
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