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TWO-FORMULA - Taiyou to Tsuki no CROSS (TV Size)

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2024年9月22日 at 20:47:45

Artist: TWO-FORMULA
Title: Taiyou to Tsuki no CROSS (TV Size)
Source: 俺の脳内選択肢が、学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
Tags: ore no nounai sentakushi ga gakuen lovecome o zenryoku de jama shiteiru noucome my mental choices are completely interfering with my school romantic comedy gaia aerous pkk dream117er ending anime japanese pop jpop j-pop
BPM: 202
Filesize: 4023kb
Play Time: 01:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. 117's Normal (2.21 stars, 151 notes)
  2. Aerous' Easy (1.59 stars, 79 notes)
  3. Extra (5.39 stars, 367 notes)
  4. Gaia's Hard (3.67 stars, 258 notes)
  5. Hard (3.49 stars, 242 notes)
  6. pk's Insane (4.33 stars, 279 notes)
Download: TWO-FORMULA - Taiyou to Tsuki no CROSS (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Gest Easy by Aerous
Gest Normal by DreaM117er
Hard by me
Gest Hard by  Gaia
Gest insane by pkk
Insane by me

Gest thanks!!
All done


BN(Resona / Chaoslitz )ty
Aerous
First :)

edit : I'll finish Easy diff. around Dec.30
DreaM117er
Normal Done :)

SPOILER
osu file format v13

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TitleUnicode:太陽と月のCROSS (TV Size)
Artist:TWO-FORMULA
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Creator:-Yuzuriha-inori-
Version:117's Normal
Source:俺の脳内選択肢が、学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
Tags:ore no nounai sentakushi ga gakuen lovecome o zenryoku de jama shiteiru noucome my mental choices are completely gamu
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Topic Starter
-Yuzuriha
thanks~♥
Aerous
Finished my Easy Diff. :D

http://puu.sh/dRQh5/e8749dfcb9.osu

my bad i forgot combo colors , please add that for me
Topic Starter
-Yuzuriha
Star thank you~
byfar
mod as requested

[Insane]
- the SV for the insane is abnormally slow i feel.. 1.6 > 1.65 maybe
- 00:00:165 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this entire beginning part is really cluttered.. consider using grid space effectively..
not a very pleasant playing experience here
- 00:05:363 (2) - get rid of circle
- 00:05:511 (3) - start slider @ 00:05:363 (2)
red tick is where the guitar starts playing and the white ticks have no real emphasized sound.. so making that part clickable is very very unpleasant
00:05:660 - add another slider here
00:06:105 - make this white tick clickable
sorry that the sliders are faded out but take a look at the highlighted sliders.
the picture above follows this slider 00:04:917 (1) -
additional images If you're wondering how i did it, I created a slider by placing the first slider anchor point at x:102 y:155, second slider anchor point on x:116 y:118 and third slider anchor point at x:143 y:89. I then copied the slider and CTRL+H

00:18:135 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make a better pattern please
00:27:194 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is very difficult to read. i almost thought this note 00:27:788 (5) - was still 1/1
solution: 00:26:155 (1) - remove nc + make better pattern
00:27:491 (3) - add nc here (because start of drums)
00:37:442 (3,4,5) - 4 is overmapped. i dont hear the triplet pattern (just use 2 1/2's)
00:41:674 (5,1,2,3) - ?? ^
00:46:427 (6) - ??
00:53:259 (3) - nc
00:51:402 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kinda bad looking :(
00:51:402 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - overrrrrrrmappppepdepepdepp
01:06:922 (2,3,4) - ^^^^
01:14:496 (4,5,6) - overmapped

ok i think u are overusing 1/4 sliders and notes in this map.. i don't know the rankability of this issue but keep in mind that these parts were not fun to play at all. overall aesthetics are lacking, a lot of the notes are cluttered and hard to read. a few patterns are nice, but please touch them up a little bit.

[Gaia's Hard]

00:04:323 (7,8) - flow this?
00:07:887 (2) - should increase DS tbh
00:07:293 (1) - delete NC
00:07:887 (2) - NC
00:25:709 (6,7,8) - watch out for aesthetics
00:28:085 (3,4,5,1) - use ds 1.4x? i want this section to be a bit farther spaced than the previous section of the map because of the 1/4s in the music
00:33:135 (7,1) - stacking this on the slider feels unnatural for me
00:44:719 (8) - nc
01:04:026 (7) - curve this slider a little maybe? minor aesthetic improvement. because you seem to not want to align the slider perfectly with the previous slider so.

pretty good hard. just some minor flow issues.

[Hard]

00:03:135 (6) - move to red tick here 00:03:283 - & add note on white tick here 00:03:135 -
00:05:957 (1) - move to white tick here 00:06:105 - and add note on red tick 00:05:957 - I suggest stacking two notes on that return slider

your hard flows really well

try to touch up on aesthetics some parts look really raw
byfar
also u still have GD slots open? I wanna try and see if I can meet your expectations ^^
Momovely
[General]

オーディオリードイン 入れませんか? 

[callin's Easy]


00:00:165 (1) - reverse add whistle sc1

00:01:947 (2) - ^

00:02:541 (4) - slider head add finish and slider end addwhistle sc1

00:03:729 (5) - slider end add whistle

00:04:917 (1) - ^

00:05:957 (2) - slider head add whistle

00:06:699 (3) - ^

00:09:669 (1) - reverse add whistle

00:11:155 (2) - slider end add whistle


I thought that there was considerably much hitsound omission

I confirm the sound charge account of the latter half in reference to mod mentioned above and please look

[117's Normal]

good diff!

but it was the same as normal and thought that there were many parts which whistle came out of

[gaia's Hard]

00:44:719 (8) -  There is the sound of the piano, and do you want add whistle?

00:53:630 (5) - slider head add whistle

[Hard]

00:00:165 (1) - slider end add clap

00:00:610 (2) - slider end add whistle

00:01:204 (4) - slider head and end add whistle

00:01:650 (1) - slider add clap

00:01:947 (2) - slider end add whistle

00:02:244 (3) - slider head add clap

00:02:541 (4) - slider end add clap

00:03:135 (6) - slider head and end add whistle

00:03:580 (1) - ^

00:04:026 (2) - slider head add clap and end add whistle

00:04:471 (3) - add whislte

00:04:620 (4) - slider head add clap

00:04:917 (1) - slider end add clap

00:05:511 (3) - slider head and end add whistle

00:05:808 (4) - add clap

00:05:957 (1) - slider head and reverse add whistle

00:06:699 (2) - slider head and end add whistle

00:06:996 (3) - slider head add clap

00:07:590 (2) - ^

00:07:887 (3) - slider head add whistle

00:07:887 (3) - slider end add clap

00:08:481 (1) - slider head add whistle and finish

00:08:778 (2) - add clap

00:09:075 (4,5) - このreverse 全部add clapじゃない?

00:09:966 (2) - slider head add clap

00:10:264 (3) - slider head and end add whislte

00:10:561 (4) - slider head add clap and end add whistle

00:10:858 (1) - slider reverse add whistle and end add clap

00:11:452 (3) - slider head and end add whistle

00:11:749 (4) - slider head add clap

00:12:343 (2) - ^

00:12:640 (3) - slier head and end add whistle

00:12:937 (4) - add clap

00:13:085 (1) - slider end add whistle

00:13:531 (2) - slider head add clap

00:13:828 (3) - add whistle

00:13:976 (4) - slider head add whistle and reverse add clap

00:14:719 (2) - slider head add clap

00:15:016 (3) - slider head and end add whistle

00:15:313 (4) - slider head add clap and end add whistle

00:15:759 (2) - add whistle

00:15:907 (3) - add clap

00:16:056 (4) - slider head add whistle

00:16:501 (5) - slider head add clap and end add whistle

00:16:947 (2) - add whislte

00:17:095 (3) - slider head add clap and end add whislte

00:17:541 (5) - add whistle

ドラムの音がハッキリしてる曲なので音付け 難しくないと思うので もうちょっとがんばって whistleとclapをつけてみてください

一度ヒットサウンドをちゃんと付けた方がいいかなって思いました

後半も前半と同じ指摘なので省かせてもらいます。

[INSANE]

00:01:650 (2) - slier end remove whistle

00:02:392 (5,6) - remove clap add whistle

00:03:135 (4,5) - ^  

00:04:026 (2) - slider end remove clap

00:04:471 (4) - remove clap

00:06:699 (3) - ^

00:07:887 (3) - slider head remove clap

00:10:858 (1) - ^

00:11:303 (3) - slider head remove clap

00:13:234 (1) - ^

whislteのとこにclapがついてたりとバラバラなので 見直した方がいいかなと思います

音付けはhard diff のmodを参考にして付けてみてください
Topic Starter
-Yuzuriha

byfar wrote:

mod as requested

[Insane]
- the SV for the insane is abnormally slow i feel.. 1.6 > 1.65 maybe
- 00:00:165 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this entire beginning part is really cluttered.. consider using grid space effectively..
not a very pleasant playing experience here
- 00:05:363 (2) - get rid of circle
- 00:05:511 (3) - start slider @ 00:05:363 (2)
red tick is where the guitar starts playing and the white ticks have no real emphasized sound.. so making that part clickable is very very unpleasant
00:05:660 - add another slider here
00:06:105 - make this white tick clickable
sorry that the sliders are faded out but take a look at the highlighted sliders.
the picture above follows this slider 00:04:917 (1) -
additional images If you're wondering how i did it, I created a slider by placing the first slider anchor point at x:102 y:155, second slider anchor point on x:116 y:118 and third slider anchor point at x:143 y:89. I then copied the slider and CTRL+H

00:18:135 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make a better pattern please OK~
00:27:194 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is very difficult to read. i almost thought this note 00:27:788 (5) - was still 1/1
solution: 00:26:155 (1) - remove nc + make better pattern
00:27:491 (3) - add nc here (because start of drums) OK~
00:37:442 (3,4,5) - 4 is overmapped. i dont hear the triplet pattern (just use 2 1/2's)
00:41:674 (5,1,2,3) - ?? ^ OK~
00:46:427 (6) - ??
00:53:259 (3) - nc
00:51:402 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kinda bad looking :(
00:51:402 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - overrrrrrrmappppepdepepdepp
01:06:922 (2,3,4) - ^^^^
01:14:496 (4,5,6) - overmapped

ok i think u are overusing 1/4 sliders and notes in this map.. i don't know the rankability of this issue but keep in mind that these parts were not fun to play at all. overall aesthetics are lacking, a lot of the notes are cluttered and hard to read. a few patterns are nice, but please touch them up a little bit.


[Hard]

00:03:135 (6) - move to red tick here 00:03:283 - & add note on white tick here 00:03:135 -
00:05:957 (1) - move to white tick here 00:06:105 - and add note on red tick 00:05:957 - I suggest stacking two notes on that return slider

OK~ chenge


your hard flows really well

try to touch up on aesthetics some parts look really raw
mod thanks~
Topic Starter
-Yuzuriha

Momovely wrote:

[General]

オーディオリードイン 入れませんか? 

1500入ってますね
少ないという指摘がさらにでれば2000にします



[Hard]

00:00:165 (1) - slider end add clap

00:00:610 (2) - slider end add whistle

00:01:204 (4) - slider head and end add whistle

00:01:650 (1) - slider add clap

00:01:947 (2) - slider end add whistle

00:02:244 (3) - slider head add clap

00:02:541 (4) - slider end add clap

00:03:135 (6) - slider head and end add whistle

00:03:580 (1) - ^

00:04:026 (2) - slider head add clap and end add whistle

00:04:471 (3) - add whislte

00:04:620 (4) - slider head add clap

00:04:917 (1) - slider end add clap

00:05:511 (3) - slider head and end add whistle

00:05:808 (4) - add clap

00:05:957 (1) - slider head and reverse add whistle

00:06:699 (2) - slider head and end add whistle

00:06:996 (3) - slider head add clap

00:07:590 (2) - ^

00:07:887 (3) - slider head add whistle

00:07:887 (3) - slider end add clap

00:08:481 (1) - slider head add whistle and finish

00:08:778 (2) - add clap

00:09:075 (4,5) - このreverse 全部add clapじゃない?

00:09:966 (2) - slider head add clap

00:10:264 (3) - slider head and end add whislte

00:10:561 (4) - slider head add clap and end add whistle

00:10:858 (1) - slider reverse add whistle and end add clap

00:11:452 (3) - slider head and end add whistle

00:11:749 (4) - slider head add clap

00:12:343 (2) - ^

00:12:640 (3) - slier head and end add whistle

00:12:937 (4) - add clap

00:13:085 (1) - slider end add whistle

00:13:531 (2) - slider head add clap

00:13:828 (3) - add whistle

00:13:976 (4) - slider head add whistle and reverse add clap

00:14:719 (2) - slider head add clap

00:15:016 (3) - slider head and end add whistle

00:15:313 (4) - slider head add clap and end add whistle

00:15:759 (2) - add whistle

00:15:907 (3) - add clap

00:16:056 (4) - slider head add whistle

00:16:501 (5) - slider head add clap and end add whistle

00:16:947 (2) - add whislte

00:17:095 (3) - slider head add clap and end add whislte

00:17:541 (5) - add whistle

ドラムの音がハッキリしてる曲なので音付け 難しくないと思うので もうちょっとがんばって whistleとclapをつけてみてください

一度ヒットサウンドをちゃんと付けた方がいいかなって思いました

後半も前半と同じ指摘なので省かせてもらいます。

すみません 音付けをやっていなかったです。
参考にして音付けをします


[INSANE]

00:01:650 (2) - slier end remove whistle OK

00:02:392 (5,6) - remove clap add whistle OK

00:03:135 (4,5) - ^  

00:04:026 (2) - slider end remove clap OK

00:04:471 (4) - remove clapOK

00:06:699 (3) - ^

00:07:887 (3) - slider head remove clapOK

00:10:858 (1) - ^

00:11:303 (3) - slider head remove clap OK

00:13:234 (1) - ^ OK

whislteのとこにclapがついてたりとバラバラなので 見直した方がいいかなと思います

音付けはhard diff のmodを参考にして付けてみてください
modありがとうございましたー
Zweib
hi~最近忙しかったので、遅れてすみません; ;

[Insane]
00:04:917 (1) - slider end stack?
00:09:075 (3) - move to 376,52?
00:18:135 (2,3,4,5,6) - use soft sample for these circles?
00:13:679 (3) - 252,160
00:47:541 (1,2) - swap NC
00:57:491 (2) - add finish?
00:57:640 (3) - remove finish
01:07:293 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream is overmap because there are no audible note here. But it's okay if you use triples to overmap. for example, remove 01:07:516 (4)

[Gaia's Hard]
This diff cool, but it might be weird that there is 2 hards of same difficulty in one set, while the gap between Insane and Hard is quite large. I'd suggest to lower the star of Insane or switch one hard into a light Insane.

00:34:323 (4) - move up by 1 grid? The arrow was placed too close to the bottom
00:43:976 (6,7) - make a blanket?
00:44:719 (8) - use 1/8?
01:07:590 (4,5) - this jump uhhh... maybe curve 01:07:739 (5) more and decrease the distance, because no NC here.
01:13:234 (6,1) - swap NC?

[Hard]
00:08:927 (3) - remove this?
00:44:719 (8) - use 1/8?

[117's Normal]
I would suggest AR5.5 and CS3.5, to make the approach circle easier to catch.
The patterns are cool and well arranged. But the rhythm may be too complicated for newbies lol. Try to use more 1/1 beatsnap.

[Callin's Easy]
It's fun tho, but really needs much work with this diff ;w;
00:00:165 (1) - don't use slider art like this in the easiest diff. Stretch it.
00:07:293 (1,1) - the slider is too close to the spinner, which is not permit in Easy. You shouldn't put any object until 00:10:264
00:19:768 (1) - ^
00:38:184 (1) - ^
00:47:689 (1) - this spinner is too short, use a slider to replace it
01:01:947 (1,2,1) - make better blanket
01:09:075 (4) - add NC for consistency
Topic Starter
-Yuzuriha

Zweib wrote:

hi~最近忙しかったので、遅れてすみません; ;

[Insane]
00:04:917 (1) - slider end stack?  OK
00:09:075 (3) - move to 376,52? OK
00:18:135 (2,3,4,5,6) - use soft sample for these circles? OK
00:13:679 (3) - 252,160 OK
00:47:541 (1,2) - swap NC OK
00:57:491 (2) - add finish? う~ん
00:57:640 (3) - remove finish  う~ん
01:07:293 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream is overmap because there are no audible note here. But it's okay if you use triples to overmap. for example, remove 01:07:516 (4)   少し変えてみました


[Hard]
00:08:927 (3) - remove this? スライダーを2つ連続に変更しました
00:44:719 (8) - use 1/8?  OKです
 
忙しい中modに来てくれてありがとうございますー

呼ばれたらmod行きますね~ :)
Sekai
Hey :3 just random mod here, because i really love this song <3


General:
  1. where's the video, you can totally ask xChippy to use his video, since he already mapped the same song o3o/

Callin's Easy:
  1. 00:00:165 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's repeat, it'll follow the song perfectly imo :3
  2. 00:02:541 (4,5) - how about adding finish to (4)'s slider's head and whistle to (5)'s head, it'll follow the finish sounds in the song o.o
  3. 00:05:957 (2) - I think whistle kinda missing at slider's head, it'll follow the guitar sound in the music, so how about adding it :3
  4. 00:09:669 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's tail, it'll follow the music perfectly imo
  5. 00:12:046 (4,1) - ^ but at slider's repeat, will fit awesome :3
  6. 00:15:610 (4) - ^
  7. 00:31:056 (4) - this slider feels kinda empty without any hitsounds, how about adding finish to slider's head, it'll fit great
  8. 00:33:432 (2) - ^
  9. 00:46:501 (3) - ^
  10. 01:01:947 (1,2) - ^ and be sure to fix the blanket on 01:01:947 (1) - , atm it's looking kinda bad ></
  11. 01:05:511 (2) - finish on repeat, the beat was the same as this one 01:04:323 (1) - , i highly suggest you to do the same here
This diff kinda lacking of hitsounds, so i really suggest you to go over it again, and check it and it's lacking of whistles, and finishes



117's Normal:
  1. 00:02:541 (1) - finish on slider's head would fits awesome, and it'll follow the finish sound in the music imo :3
  2. 00:06:996 (1,2) - switch the nc, from the (1) to the (2), the music kinda changed at the (2) not at the (1). If you did that don't forget to add finish at 00:07:293 (1) - slider's head, it'll follow the finish sound in the music
  3. 00:15:610 (4) - how about making a bit of curve for this slider, to give it some better flow. Like this owo
  4. 00:17:392 (3) - I really don't think this middle slider's point is really needed, how about removing it, it'll make a totally better shape o3o/
  5. 00:23:927 (3) - I think if you removed the middle point at this slider it'll follow the your style on this diff much better, and it'll play much better as well.
  6. 00:43:382 (2) - how about giving this slider a bit curve, to give it some better flow to it, and it'll be more fun to play imo
    [box=][/box]
  7. 00:44:719 (5) - how about adding a whistle to slider's start, to follow the piano sound in the music :3
  8. 00:45:907 (2) - finish at slider's tail would fit awesome, since i can clearly hear a finish on the tail
  9. 00:54:818 (4) - how about giving this slider a better flow by making some curve to it, it'll be much better like this o.o
  10. 00:58:679 (3) - I think you missed a clap here, i highly suggest you to add it :3
  11. 00:58:976 (4) - how about adding a finish or a whistle to slider's start, to follow the sound in the music o.o/
  12. 01:01:947 (5) - ^ but at slider's head this time
  13. 01:02:838 - here should be a clap, and you kinda missed it, by adding this 2/1 slider, how about doing something like this, to follow the music better o.o
  14. 01:14:570 (6) - how about removing the middle slider's point, i think it'll follow your patterns in this diff better o.o


Hard:
  1. 00:01:056 (3) - how about fixing the stick between this note and this slider 00:01:204 (4) - , it's looking kinda bad right now ><
  2. 00:01:947 (2) - I think the clap fits here, so how about removing the clap on slider's start, it don't really fit with music imo ;w;
  3. 00:03:135 (6) - ^ but on slider's tail, the clap should be here imo 00:03:432 - , so how about giving this slider 1 repeat to cover the clap here :3
  4. 00:07:887 (3) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle on slider's start, because i really can hear whistle there, so i think it's kinda bad to skip that o.o
  5. 00:08:481 (1) - ^
  6. 00:30:462 (3) - how about moving this slider a bit grids up, to avoid touch this slider's head 00:29:719 (1) - , because it's looking kinda bad right now. That's why, if you did that, don't forget to remove the clap on slider's head. It don't really fit with music imo ></
  7. 00:35:214 (6) - remove finish on slider's head, i don't see a reason to add, because it don't really follows anything in music
  8. 00:35:660 (1) - making this a linear slider kinda bad here, since you made a linear sliders here 00:34:323 (3,4,5,6) - , so how about giving this slider a bit more curve to it, to fix that :3
  9. 00:36:402 (4,1) - how about removing the clap on (4)'s slider's tail and (1) and then replacing them with finishes instead, it'll fit much better imo. Since i can hear a finish sound here not clap tbh ></
  10. 00:37:887 (5) - how about giving this slider a ctrl+g, since you kinda did this on all your rhythm, on this diff, so i suggest you to do the same here
  11. 00:38:630 (2) - I think slider's start kinda missing a finish there. So how about adding it :3
  12. 00:39:224 (4) - ^
  13. 00:42:194 (2) - I highly suggest you to move this slider few grids up, to avoid it from touching this slider 00:41:749 (1) - , it's looking kinda bad right now ><
  14. 00:44:719 (8) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle to slider's start and 00:44:867 - here and to the slider's end too, it'll fit with the piano sound in the music :3
  15. 00:45:907 (3,4) - I don't think these two kinda looking bad right, so how about doing it like this instead. It'll fit much better with your style here on this diff o.o
  16. 01:07:739 (1) - This slider kinda missing a finish on slider's start, so how about adding it there o.o


Gaia's baka Hard:
Gaia pls, so hentai =w=/
  1. 00:07:887 (2) - I think this note will fit better with SC:2 whistle instead of a finish here, since i can clearly hear a piano sound there o3o/
  2. 00:08:481 (5) - ^ but at slider's start
  3. 00:12:046 (1) - I think it's gonna flow much better if you do this slider like this, right now this slider kinda broke your slider flow here
  4. 00:15:610 (1) - how about adding a nc here, since there is a jump here, and i think it'll fit great here o.o
  5. 00:24:521 (3) - I kinda dislike how you did this slider with middle point, i totally don't think it fits, I think it'll fit much better if you remove it
  6. 00:36:105 (2) - I really think you should move this slider few grids to the left to avoid it being too close to this slider's tail 00:35:808 (1) - , if you did this don't forget to move this slider as well 00:36:402 (3) - few grids to the right, would do for this one. There too close right, and it don't really look too great, that's why i'm saying this ><
  7. 00:44:719 (8) - well, how about adding SC:2 whistle to slider's start and here 00:44:867 - and to slider's end as well, it'll fit with piano sound in the music that's why :3
  8. 00:58:085 (4) - I think this slider will flow much better if you did a ctrl+g to it, and it'll play much better too o3o/
  9. 01:14:422 (3) - this slider kinda giving the end a weird flow, and i honestly didn't like how you did it, so how about fixing it with ctrl+g for this one, i really think it'll flow much better then how it is right now ></


Insane:
  1. 00:07:887 (3) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle to slider's start, it'll follow the piano sound in the music :3
  2. 00:08:481 (1) - ^
  3. 00:12:640 (3) - how about spacing this slider a bit more, since it's too close with this slider right now 00:12:343 (2) - and it don't really look so well ;w;
  4. 00:20:957 (7) - I think this slider would look much better if you just remove the 3rd slider's point, i don't really think it's needed here..so yeah ></
  5. 00:28:234 (4) - it'll be more fun if you made this slider with ctrl+g, it'll give some fun flow to it, and people will enjoy it much more :3
  6. 00:30:759 (5) - this slider is way too close to this slider 00:30:462 (4) - , i really suggest you to move it a bit away from it, it'll give it a bit of bad play imo
  7. 00:37:887 (7,8,1) - what's with the spacing here? o.o looks kinda weird to me, i really don't suggest you doing something like. It'll confuse some players when playing this map. i really don't know how to fix this one, but i know you can do it, :3
  8. 00:49:991 (7) - I honestly don't hear anything here, and it's just overmapped to me, so how about removing this note


Good Job on your map Yuzuriha, and good song choice to map <3

Good luck getting this map ranked owo/
Sekai
Hey :3 just random mod here, because i really love this song <3


General:
  1. where's the video, you can totally ask xChippy to use his video, since he already mapped the same song o3o/

Callin's Easy:
  1. 00:00:165 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's repeat, it'll follow the song perfectly imo :3
  2. 00:02:541 (4,5) - how about adding finish to (4)'s slider's head and whistle to (5)'s head, it'll follow the finish sounds in the song o.o
  3. 00:05:957 (2) - I think whistle kinda missing at slider's head, it'll follow the guitar sound in the music, so how about adding it :3
  4. 00:09:669 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's tail, it'll follow the music perfectly imo
  5. 00:12:046 (4,1) - ^ but at slider's repeat, will fit awesome :3
  6. 00:15:610 (4) - ^
  7. 00:31:056 (4) - this slider feels kinda empty without any hitsounds, how about adding finish to slider's head, it'll fit great
  8. 00:33:432 (2) - ^
  9. 00:46:501 (3) - ^
  10. 01:01:947 (1,2) - ^ and be sure to fix the blanket on 01:01:947 (1) - , atm it's looking kinda bad ></
  11. 01:05:511 (2) - finish on repeat, the beat was the same as this one 01:04:323 (1) - , i highly suggest you to do the same here
This diff kinda lacking of hitsounds, so i really suggest you to go over it again, and check it and it's lacking of whistles, and finishes



117's Normal:
  1. 00:02:541 (1) - finish on slider's head would fits awesome, and it'll follow the finish sound in the music imo :3
  2. 00:06:996 (1,2) - switch the nc, from the (1) to the (2), the music kinda changed at the (2) not at the (1). If you did that don't forget to add finish at 00:07:293 (1) - slider's head, it'll follow the finish sound in the music
  3. 00:15:610 (4) - how about making a bit of curve for this slider, to give it some better flow. Like this owo
  4. 00:17:392 (3) - I really don't think this middle slider's point is really needed, how about removing it, it'll make a totally better shape o3o/
  5. 00:23:927 (3) - I think if you removed the middle point at this slider it'll follow the your style on this diff much better, and it'll play much better as well.
  6. 00:43:382 (2) - how about giving this slider a bit curve, to give it some better flow to it, and it'll be more fun to play imo
    [box=][/box]
  7. 00:44:719 (5) - how about adding a whistle to slider's start, to follow the piano sound in the music :3
  8. 00:45:907 (2) - finish at slider's tail would fit awesome, since i can clearly hear a finish on the tail
  9. 00:54:818 (4) - how about giving this slider a better flow by making some curve to it, it'll be much better like this o.o
  10. 00:58:679 (3) - I think you missed a clap here, i highly suggest you to add it :3
  11. 00:58:976 (4) - how about adding a finish or a whistle to slider's start, to follow the sound in the music o.o/
  12. 01:01:947 (5) - ^ but at slider's head this time
  13. 01:02:838 - here should be a clap, and you kinda missed it, by adding this 2/1 slider, how about doing something like this, to follow the music better o.o
  14. 01:14:570 (6) - how about removing the middle slider's point, i think it'll follow your patterns in this diff better o.o


Hard:
  1. 00:01:056 (3) - how about fixing the stick between this note and this slider 00:01:204 (4) - , it's looking kinda bad right now ><
  2. 00:01:947 (2) - I think the clap fits here, so how about removing the clap on slider's start, it don't really fit with music imo ;w;
  3. 00:03:135 (6) - ^ but on slider's tail, the clap should be here imo 00:03:432 - , so how about giving this slider 1 repeat to cover the clap here :3
  4. 00:07:887 (3) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle on slider's start, because i really can hear whistle there, so i think it's kinda bad to skip that o.o
  5. 00:08:481 (1) - ^
  6. 00:30:462 (3) - how about moving this slider a bit grids up, to avoid touch this slider's head 00:29:719 (1) - , because it's looking kinda bad right now. That's why, if you did that, don't forget to remove the clap on slider's head. It don't really fit with music imo ></
  7. 00:35:214 (6) - remove finish on slider's head, i don't see a reason to add, because it don't really follows anything in music
  8. 00:35:660 (1) - making this a linear slider kinda bad here, since you made a linear sliders here 00:34:323 (3,4,5,6) - , so how about giving this slider a bit more curve to it, to fix that :3
  9. 00:36:402 (4,1) - how about removing the clap on (4)'s slider's tail and (1) and then replacing them with finishes instead, it'll fit much better imo. Since i can hear a finish sound here not clap tbh ></
  10. 00:37:887 (5) - how about giving this slider a ctrl+g, since you kinda did this on all your rhythm, on this diff, so i suggest you to do the same here
  11. 00:38:630 (2) - I think slider's start kinda missing a finish there. So how about adding it :3
  12. 00:39:224 (4) - ^
  13. 00:42:194 (2) - I highly suggest you to move this slider few grids up, to avoid it from touching this slider 00:41:749 (1) - , it's looking kinda bad right now ><
  14. 00:44:719 (8) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle to slider's start and 00:44:867 - here and to the slider's end too, it'll fit with the piano sound in the music :3
  15. 00:45:907 (3,4) - I don't think these two kinda looking bad right, so how about doing it like this instead. It'll fit much better with your style here on this diff o.o
  16. 01:07:739 (1) - This slider kinda missing a finish on slider's start, so how about adding it there o.o


Gaia's baka Hard:
Gaia pls, so hentai =w=/
  1. 00:07:887 (2) - I think this note will fit better with SC:2 whistle instead of a finish here, since i can clearly hear a piano sound there o3o/
  2. 00:08:481 (5) - ^ but at slider's start
  3. 00:12:046 (1) - I think it's gonna flow much better if you do this slider like this, right now this slider kinda broke your slider flow here
  4. 00:15:610 (1) - how about adding a nc here, since there is a jump here, and i think it'll fit great here o.o
  5. 00:24:521 (3) - I kinda dislike how you did this slider with middle point, i totally don't think it fits, I think it'll fit much better if you remove it
  6. 00:36:105 (2) - I really think you should move this slider few grids to the left to avoid it being too close to this slider's tail 00:35:808 (1) - , if you did this don't forget to move this slider as well 00:36:402 (3) - few grids to the right, would do for this one. There too close right, and it don't really look too great, that's why i'm saying this ><
  7. 00:44:719 (8) - well, how about adding SC:2 whistle to slider's start and here 00:44:867 - and to slider's end as well, it'll fit with piano sound in the music that's why :3
  8. 00:58:085 (4) - I think this slider will flow much better if you did a ctrl+g to it, and it'll play much better too o3o/
  9. 01:14:422 (3) - this slider kinda giving the end a weird flow, and i honestly didn't like how you did it, so how about fixing it with ctrl+g for this one, i really think it'll flow much better then how it is right now ></


Insane:
  1. 00:07:887 (3) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle to slider's start, it'll follow the piano sound in the music :3
  2. 00:08:481 (1) - ^
  3. 00:12:640 (3) - how about spacing this slider a bit more, since it's too close with this slider right now 00:12:343 (2) - and it don't really look so well ;w;
  4. 00:20:957 (7) - I think this slider would look much better if you just remove the 3rd slider's point, i don't really think it's needed here..so yeah ></
  5. 00:28:234 (4) - it'll be more fun if you made this slider with ctrl+g, it'll give some fun flow to it, and people will enjoy it much more :3
  6. 00:30:759 (5) - this slider is way too close to this slider 00:30:462 (4) - , i really suggest you to move it a bit away from it, it'll give it a bit of bad play imo
  7. 00:37:887 (7,8,1) - what's with the spacing here? o.o looks kinda weird to me, i really don't suggest you doing something like. It'll confuse some players when playing this map. i really don't know how to fix this one, but i know you can do it, :3
  8. 00:49:991 (7) - I honestly don't hear anything here, and it's just overmapped to me, so how about removing this note


Good Job on your map Yuzuriha, and good song choice to map <3

Good luck getting this map ranked owo/
Aerous
Rechecked all my hitsounds !
For the hitsound mods , I added them.

Momovely wrote:

[notice][General]

オーディオリードイン 入れませんか? 

[callin's Easy]


00:00:165 (1) - reverse add whistle sc1

00:01:947 (2) - ^

00:02:541 (4) - slider head add finish and slider end addwhistle sc1

00:03:729 (5) - slider end add whistle

00:04:917 (1) - ^

00:05:957 (2) - slider head add whistle

00:06:699 (3) - ^

00:09:669 (1) - reverse add whistle

00:11:155 (2) - slider end add whistle


I thought that there was considerably much hitsound omission

I confirm the sound charge account of the latter half in reference to mod mentioned above and please look
Done

Zweib wrote:

hi~最近忙しかったので、遅れてすみません; ;

[Callin's Easy]
really needs much work with this diff ;w;
00:00:165 (1) - don't use slider art like this in the easiest diff. Stretch it. Sure
00:07:293 (1,1) - the slider is too close to the spinner, which is not permit in Easy. You shouldn't put any object until 00:10:264 Should be okay , since I checked with other ranked Taiyou to Tsuki
00:19:768 (1) - ^ ^
00:38:184 (1) - ^^
00:47:689 (1) - this spinner is too short, use a slider to replace it Extended to white tick
01:01:947 (1,2,1) - make better blanket Ok, I'll do it
01:09:075 (4) - add NC for consistencyNc'ed

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Callin's Easy:
00:00:165 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's repeat, it'll follow the song perfectly imo :3
00:02:541 (4,5) - how about adding finish to (4)'s slider's head and whistle to (5)'s head, it'll follow the finish sounds in the song o.o
00:05:957 (2) - I think whistle kinda missing at slider's head, it'll follow the guitar sound in the music, so how about adding it :3
00:09:669 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's tail, it'll follow the music perfectly imo
00:12:046 (4,1) - ^ but at slider's repeat, will fit awesome :3
00:15:610 (4) - ^
00:31:056 (4) - this slider feels kinda empty without any hitsounds, how about adding finish to slider's head, it'll fit great
00:33:432 (2) - ^
00:46:501 (3) - ^
01:01:947 (1,2) - ^ and be sure to fix the blanket on 01:01:947 (1) - , atm it's looking kinda bad ></
01:05:511 (2) - finish on repeat, the beat was the same as this one 01:04:323 (1) - , i highly suggest you to do the same here
This diff kinda lacking of hitsounds, so i really suggest you to go over it again, and check it and it's lacking of whistles, and finishes
Added hitsounds + rechecks
Thanks for the mod!


@inori : check spread again , another easier insane? Also include callin to the tags if possible !
Here you go Yuzu : http://puu.sh/e7RZX/65f60d2427.osu :)
Gaia

byfar wrote:

mod as requested
[Gaia's Hard]

00:04:323 (7,8) - flow this? flow break on purpose
00:07:887 (2) - should increase DS tbh not big enough of a note to jump
00:07:293 (1) - delete NC i'm ncing on the beginnings of every measure, its fine
00:07:887 (2) - NC ^
00:25:709 (6,7,8) - watch out for aesthetics looks fine to me
00:28:085 (3,4,5,1) - use ds 1.4x? i want this section to be a bit farther spaced than the previous section of the map because of the 1/4s in the music nah
00:33:135 (7,1) - stacking this on the slider feels unnatural for me anti jump o3o
00:44:719 (8) - nc same as earlier
01:04:026 (7) - curve this slider a little maybe? minor aesthetic improvement. because you seem to not want to align the slider perfectly with the previous slider so. sure

pretty good hard. just some minor flow issues.
Thanks 4 mod !

Momovely wrote:

[gaia's Hard]

00:44:719 (8) -  There is the sound of the piano, and do you want add whistle? oops fixed

00:53:630 (5) - slider head add whistle haihai
arigatou Momovely >w<

Zweib wrote:

[Gaia's Hard]
This diff cool, but it might be weird that there is 2 hards of same difficulty in one set, while the gap between Insane and Hard is quite large. I'd suggest to lower the star of Insane or switch one hard into a light Insane. i agree tbh this spread is ugh >.>

00:34:323 (4) - move up by 1 grid? The arrow was placed too close to the bottom ok
00:43:976 (6,7) - make a blanket? i guess i will
00:44:719 (8) - use 1/8? nah too hard for hard imo
01:07:590 (4,5) - this jump uhhh... maybe curve 01:07:739 (5) more and decrease the distance, because no NC here. change my entire NC pattern o3o
01:13:234 (6,1) - swap NC? i dont even know why there's an NC there, removed o3o
Thanks Zweib~

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Hey :3 just random mod here, because i really love this song <3

Gaia's baka Hard:
Gaia pls, so hentai =w=/ n-nani?? =3=/
  1. 00:07:887 (2) - I think this note will fit better with SC:2 whistle instead of a finish here, since i can clearly hear a piano sound there o3o/ same as below
  2. 00:08:481 (5) - ^ but at slider's start gg i would but then i'd be ignoring the drums which i dont wanna do orz
  3. 00:12:046 (1) - I think it's gonna flow much better if you do this slider like this, right now this slider kinda broke your slider flow here okie owo
  4. 00:15:610 (1) - how about adding a nc here, since there is a jump here, and i think it'll fit great here o.o changed my entire nc pattern lol
  5. 00:24:521 (3) - I kinda dislike how you did this slider with middle point, i totally don't think it fits, I think it'll fit much better if you remove it and make it a straight slider? hmm its like a double blanket i wanna keep ><
  6. 00:36:105 (2) - I really think you should move this slider few grids to the left to avoid it being too close to this slider's tail 00:35:808 (1) - , if you did this don't forget to move this slider as well 00:36:402 (3) - few grids to the right, would do for this one. There too close right, and it don't really look too great, that's why i'm saying this >< i think as long as its not touching it looks great lol
  7. 00:44:719 (8) - well, how about adding SC:2 whistle to slider's start and here 00:44:867 - and to slider's end as well, it'll fit with piano sound in the music that's why :3 I WOULD BUT DRUMS orz
  8. 00:58:085 (4) - I think this slider will flow much better if you did a ctrl+g to it, and it'll play much better too o3o/ i think i've abused this pattern too much LOL, might consider orz
  9. 01:14:422 (3) - this slider kinda giving the end a weird flow, and i honestly didn't like how you did it, so how about fixing it with ctrl+g for this one, i really think it'll flow much better then how it is right now ></ MAYBE? ill get more opinions o3o/
Good Job on your map Yuzuriha, and good song choice to map <3

Good luck getting this map ranked owo/
Thanks Baka-nyan =w=/

@inori, Zweib is right, the spread is broken.. I thought there would be another easier Insane so i didnt say it before but it looks like its not coming o.o
3.7 -> 5.1 is way too big especially when the 2nd highest diff is a hard and ur insane is like extra orz
You're gunna need another Insane imo


code
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PreviewTime: 48803
Countdown: 0
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Title:Taiyou to Tsuki no CROSS (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:太陽と月のCROSS (TV Size)
Artist:TWO-FORMULA
ArtistUnicode:TWO-FORMULA
Creator:-Yuzuriha-inori-
Version:Gaia's Hard
Source:俺の脳内選択肢が、学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
Tags:ore no nounai sentakushi ga gakuen lovecome o zenryoku de jama shiteiru noucome my mental choices are completely m1223961117 gaia aerous
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DreaM117er

Zweib wrote:

[117's Normal]
I would suggest AR5.5 and CS3.5, to make the approach circle easier to catch. >all no fix, I change Snap Space now. AR No fix because Normal's AR difficulty no over 5
The patterns are cool and well arranged. But the rhythm may be too complicated for newbies lol. Try to use more 1/1 beatsnap.

Sekai-nyan wrote:

...Why I miss the Quote button?? :shock:

Fine...Your mod all fix :)
Thanks all your mod :)
Sorry I'm late :(

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TitleUnicode:太陽と月のCROSS (TV Size)
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Creator:-Yuzuriha-inori-
Version:117's Normal
Source:俺の脳内選択肢が、学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
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384,28,14422,6,0,P|341:51|280:60,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,56,14867,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,40,15016,2,0,P|156:28|84:44,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,92,15610,2,0,P|12:144|16:212,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,280,16204,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,300,16501,5,8,0:0:0:0:
228,244,16798,2,0,L|220:168,2,50,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,308,17392,2,0,L|372:320,1,50,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,280,17838,1,6,0:0:0:0:
116,56,19174,5,4,0:0:0:0:
28,112,19471,2,0,P|12:172|20:240,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,304,20065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,304,20214,2,0,L|224:320,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,260,20957,2,0,P|340:248|404:260,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,296,21551,2,0,P|496:236|464:84,1,200,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,48,22442,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,48,22590,2,0,P|332:80|244:76,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,32,23333,5,2,0:0:0:0:
88,92,23630,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,188,23927,2,0,L|104:308,2,100,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,128,24818,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,208,25115,2,0,P|301:233|359:242,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,224,25709,2,0,L|460:116,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,80,26155,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,44,26303,6,0,B|352:36|352:36|300:48|300:48|204:36,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,92,27194,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,40,27491,2,0,L|-8:48,2,50,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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176,356,28976,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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400,308,29719,2,0,P|440:256|444:164,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,80,30462,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,60,30759,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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60,216,32244,5,2,0:0:0:0:
116,300,32541,2,0,L|184:308,1,50,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,340,32838,2,0,L|291:329,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,312,33432,2,0,P|444:324|504:316,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,34323,5,8,0:0:0:0:
292,144,34620,2,0,L|308:20,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,212,35511,2,0,L|148:220,1,50,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,248,35808,6,0,L|4:228,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,132,36402,2,0,L|40:64,1,50,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,32,36848,1,6,0:0:0:0:
384,344,38184,6,0,P|309:353|237:337,2,150,6|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,288,39372,1,2,0:0:0:0:
504,196,39669,2,0,L|488:72,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,32,40264,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,120,40561,6,0,P|308:148|164:124,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,64,41452,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,140,41749,2,0,P|20:200|36:264,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,276,42194,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,300,42343,2,0,L|204:292,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,324,42937,6,0,L|388:316,1,100,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,304,43382,2,0,P|456:240|448:148,1,150,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,124,43976,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,60,44273,2,0,L|292:52,1,50,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,116,44719,2,0,P|176:124|100:100,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,160,45313,6,0,P|20:228|28:280,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,340,45907,2,0,P|136:352|200:332,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,288,46501,2,0,P|336:272|380:284,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,316,47095,2,0,P|488:240|476:156,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,136,47689,2,0,L|396:128,1,50,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,48,48135,2,0,L|288:56,1,50,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,128,48580,2,0,L|176:120,1,50,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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236,44,49768,2,0,L|300:52,1,50,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,88,50065,6,0,L|428:80,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,92,50511,2,0,P|500:148|500:256,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,316,51254,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,348,51551,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,304,51848,2,0,L|224:296,1,50,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,272,52145,2,0,P|140:292|68:288,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,236,52739,1,8,0:0:0:0:
15,235,52887,2,0,P|0:162|18:90,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,32,53630,6,0,L|216:44,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
18,91,54521,2,0,L|24:160,1,50,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,184,54818,2,0,P|20:244|28:300,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,360,55412,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,292,55709,2,0,P|206:276|280:280,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,312,56303,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,248,56600,2,0,P|448:200|449:138,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,112,57046,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,80,57194,6,0,L|292:68,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,48,57788,2,0,L|84:60,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,70,58679,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,144,58976,2,0,P|396:192|384:260,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,280,59422,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,304,59570,6,0,L|208:292,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,252,60165,2,0,L|20:260,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,200,61056,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,272,61353,2,0,P|348:292|408:288,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,248,61947,2,0,P|500:196|488:124,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,108,62392,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,56,62689,2,0,L|312:48,1,50,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,68,62986,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,104,63135,6,0,L|288:224,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,300,63729,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,356,64026,2,0,P|127:361|68:340,1,100,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,280,64620,1,8,0:0:0:0:
12,280,64768,2,0,P|-4:208|28:116,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,68,65511,6,0,L|196:64,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,104,66105,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,40,66402,2,0,L|420:32,1,50,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,48,66699,2,0,B|472:92|472:92|468:164,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,204,67293,2,0,L|400:312,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,348,67739,2,0,P|287:322|204:333,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,332,68481,2,0,L|64:344,2,50,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,244,69075,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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392,64,70412,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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104,96,73531,2,0,L|116:220,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,244,73976,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,316,74273,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,74867,12,0,77392,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
-Yuzuriha
Sekai-nyan wrote

Hard:

◾00:01:056 (3) - how about fixing the stick between this note and this slider 00:01:204 (4) - , it's looking kinda bad right now ><
◾00:01:947 (2) - I think the clap fits here, so how about removing the clap on slider's start, it don't really fit with music imo ;w; OK
◾00:03:135 (6) - ^ but on slider's tail, the clap should be here imo 00:03:432 - , so how about giving this slider 1 repeat to cover the clap here :3
◾00:07:887 (3) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle on slider's start, because i really can hear whistle there, so i think it's kinda bad to skip that o.o OK
◾00:08:481 (1) - ^
◾00:30:462 (3) - how about moving this slider a bit grids up, to avoid touch this slider's head 00:29:719 (1) - , because it's looking kinda bad right now. That's why, if you did that, don't forget to remove the clap on slider's head. It don't really fit with music imo ></
OK
◾00:35:214 (6) - remove finish on slider's head, i don't see a reason to add, because it don't really follows anything in music OK
◾00:35:660 (1) - making this a linear slider kinda bad here, since you made a linear sliders here 00:34:323 (3,4,5,6) - , so how about giving this slider a bit more curve to it, to fix that :3 OK



Image

◾00:36:402 (4,1) - how about removing the clap on (4)'s slider's tail and (1) and then replacing them with finishes instead, it'll fit much better imo. Since i can hear a finish sound here not clap tbh ></ OK
◾00:37:887 (5) - how about giving this slider a ctrl+g, since you kinda did this on all your rhythm, on this diff, so i suggest you to do the same here OK
◾00:38:630 (2) - I think slider's start kinda missing a finish there. So how about adding it :3
◾00:39:224 (4) - ^
◾00:42:194 (2) - I highly suggest you to move this slider few grids up, to avoid it from touching this slider 00:41:749 (1) - , it's looking kinda bad right now >< OK
◾00:44:719 (8) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle to slider's start and 00:44:867 - here and to the slider's end too, it'll fit with the piano sound in the music :3 OK
◾00:45:907 (3,4) - I don't think these two kinda looking bad right, so how about doing it like this instead. It'll fit much better with your style here on this diff o.o



Image

◾01:07:739 (1) - This slider kinda missing a finish on slider's start, so how about adding it there o.o OK


Insane:
◾00:07:887 (3) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle to slider's start, it'll follow the piano sound in the music :3 OK~
◾00:08:481 (1) - ^
◾00:12:640 (3) - how about spacing this slider a bit more, since it's too close with this slider right now 00:12:343 (2) - and it don't really look so well ;w;
◾00:20:957 (7) - I think this slider would look much better if you just remove the 3rd slider's point, i don't really think it's needed here..so yeah ></ OK~
◾00:28:234 (4) - it'll be more fun if you made this slider with ctrl+g, it'll give some fun flow to it, and people will enjoy it much more :3
◾00:30:759 (5) - this slider is way too close to this slider 00:30:462 (4) - , i really suggest you to move it a bit away from it, it'll give it a bit of bad play imo
OK~
◾00:37:887 (7,8,1) - what's with the spacing here? o.o looks kinda weird to me, i really don't suggest you doing something like. It'll confuse some players when playing this map. i really don't know how to fix this one, but i know you can do it, :3
◾00:49:991 (7) - I honestly don't hear anything here, and it's just overmapped to me, so how about removing this note

mod thanks ~ :)
Monstrata


From Astral Horizon modding queue~ Hope this is of help :). The patterns on the Insane were really fun to play!

[Insane]

00:09:075 (3) - Reduce repeat by 1 and add another circle.
00:11:303 (3,4) - Try making swapping these two in time line so 3 is a circle and 4 is a slider starting at 00:11:452 - . Rhythm is better like this imo.

I noticed on this difficulty you would sometimes have triplets unevenly spaced. I think for 00:37:887 (7,8,1) - this is good, because there is a musical shift that warrants the jump, but consider making them evenly spaced on these parts of the song because there isn't a shift. I think it will make the flow better too, but of course, this problem is miniscule to begin with :P. I'm just going to list the other 2 instances where i feel the spacing could be fixed right here. Sorry if this is out of order (you can skip and come back to this later if you want).

00:41:452 (4,5,1) - ^
00:57:640 (3,4,1) - ^

00:30:759 (5,6,1) - Make 6 evenly spaced between 5, and 1?
00:43:531 (4,6) - Not perfectly stacked.
00:47:689 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Considering the rest of the map has some big jumps, I was surprised that you stacked these notes rather than making them jumps like in the Hard.
01:04:323 (1,2) - ^

(Sorry again for getting out of order)

[Gaia's Hard]

00:18:135 (5) - NC
00:25:115 (5,6,7,8) - 7 is not in the middle of 5, 6. Also, consider moving 8 more to the left for a neater triangle pattern.
00:47:689 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Comparing this with the Insane, this seems more difficult because the jumps are on 1/2's rather than 1/1's. This is purely a mapset issue between Hard/Insane difficulties though, I have no problems with the jumps themselves.
00:48:877 - You should map this part :P.
01:14:273 (2,3,1) - This rhythm doesn't really work because there is a longer beat at 01:14:273 - . Swap 2 and 3 on the timeline so you end the song with two circles + spinner.

[Hard]

00:10:264 (3,4) - The flow here isn't great because of the sharp angle the cursor has to move coming out of 3.
00:27:788 (1,2,3,1) - Make these evenly spaced.
00:58:382 (1,2) - This blanket could be improved.
01:13:828 (1,2) - ^

[117's Normal]

00:51:848 (5) - I don't see why this needs to be a slider. The music doesn't suggest it. Make this a circle?
01:13:531 (3,4) - Try remapping this part. You want to have a slider beginning on 01:13:828 - not a slider-end because that is a stronger beat.

[Callin's Easy]

00:00:165 (1) - The repeat of this slider doesn't capture anything. The repeat should be on 00:00:759 -
00:05:957 (2) - Switching polarity isn't recommended on lower difficulties. Move to 00:06:105 - please.
00:12:046 (4) - The repeat also doesn't capture anything because it's on a red-tick not white. Either make slider shorter so repeat is at 00:12:343 - or increase length and take out the repeat.
00:13:234 (1) - ^ You could try a pattern like this.
00:42:937 (1,2) - Blanket better.
00:52:442 (1) - Same issue. Repeat is on a red-tick.
01:01:947 (1) - ^
01:04:323 (1,2) - Now these and all the later ones work!!




Good luck~
Topic Starter
-Yuzuriha

monstrata wrote:



From Astral Horizon modding queue~ Hope this is of help :). The patterns on the Insane were really fun to play!

[Insane]

00:09:075 (3) - Reduce repeat by 1 and add another circle.
00:11:303 (3,4) - Try making swapping these two in time line so 3 is a circle and 4 is a slider starting at 00:11:452 - . Rhythm is better like this imo.

I noticed on this difficulty you would sometimes have triplets unevenly spaced. I think for 00:37:887 (7,8,1) - this is good, because there is a musical shift that warrants the jump, but consider making them evenly spaced on these parts of the song because there isn't a shift. I think it will make the flow better too, but of course, this problem is miniscule to begin with :P. I'm just going to list the other 2 instances where i feel the spacing could be fixed right here. Sorry if this is out of order (you can skip and come back to this later if you want).

00:41:452 (4,5,1) - ^
00:57:640 (3,4,1) - ^

00:30:759 (5,6,1) - Make 6 evenly spaced between 5, and 1?
00:43:531 (4,6) - Not perfectly stacked.
00:47:689 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Considering the rest of the map has some big jumps, I was surprised that you stacked these notes rather than making them jumps like in the Hard. OK~
01:04:323 (1,2) - ^

(Sorry again for getting out of order)

[Hard]

00:10:264 (3,4) - The flow here isn't great because of the sharp angle the cursor has to move coming out of 3.
00:27:788 (1,2,3,1) - Make these evenly spaced.
00:58:382 (1,2) - This blanket could be improved.
01:13:828 (1,2) - ^

All OK ~


Good luck~
mod thanks~
Chirony
from M4M

[Insane]
  1. 00:01:947 - 00:02:392 (5,6) -00:03:135 (4,5) - 00:04:768 (6) - 音楽に特に強調するような音もないので、clapを削除したほうがいいかと
  2. 00:03:432 (6) - add clap
  3. 00:07:887 - whistleを使わずにfinishを少し音量を下げて使ってみるのはどうですか?
  4. 00:31:056 - 00:32:244 - 00:33:432 - 00:34:620 - あまり盛り上がるパートではないのであんまりfinish使わないほうがいいかも。音楽にも合った音はありませんでした
  5. 00:36:848 (7) - add finish
  6. 00:38:481 - 00:38:778 - remove clap
  7. 00:38:630 - 00:39:075 - add finish 音楽に明確なリズムがあるのでそれに合わせるべきだと思います。00:39:075 - 00:38:184 - にもclapを付けてみるのもいいかもしれないです
  8. 00:40:264 - 1/4スライダーを追加してみるのはどうですか?clapの音も拾えるしvocalもフォロー出来ていると思います
  9. 00:42:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:38:184 (1,2,3,4) - と同じ
  10. 00:44:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 連打を作るならピアノに合わせて作るべきかと思います。このパターンを試してみて :3
  11. 00:59:273 (3) - add clap
[Gaia's Hard]
  1. 00:12:046 (1,2,3,4) - how about same shapes? It is more better pattern if you follow the guitar sound. try this
  2. 00:13:234 (5,6,7,8,9) - please try this if you have accepted above.
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/eh67r/88008e78c5.jpg
  3. 00:16:947 - remove clap?
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:363 (2,3) - スタックしないほうがいいと思います
  2. 00:07:887 (3,4) - ここもスタック外したほうがいいかも。流れを止めているような気がします
  3. 00:38:184 (1,2,3,4) - 00:42:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - Insaneと同じ
  4. 01:06:551 - remove finish
  5. 01:09:075 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 音楽と合ってないように感じました。こっちのほうがあってるかな
  6. 01:10:412 - add clap
  7. 01:09:669 - ^
  8. 01:11:155 - ^
[117's Normal]
  1. 00:42:937 (1,2,3) - i think not fit to music. please try this
good luck! :)
Laurier
modとか8か月ぶりぐらいなんだけど

General
問題なさそう

Insane
前半にCS:1のホイッスル混ぜてないのはわざと?使わない理由もないと思うんだけど入れてみては?

00:03:283 (5) - ここsliderにしよ。00:00:165 (1,1,1) - ここらの伸びる音の時全部sliderにしてあるし、ここが単発ってのは不自然
00:03:580 (1) - clapじゃなくてホイッスルにしよ
00:04:397 (3) - これ消そう。何の音も拾ってないし。3連打配置するなら00:04:694 - こっちにnote追加したほうがbetter
00:05:363 (2,3) - 直感だけど、sliderと単発の音の取り方逆にしたほうがしっくりくる
00:06:402 (2,3) - この2つでジャンプ作るのは音に合わないし、sliderのほうCtrl+Gしてあげよう
00:06:996 (5,1) - stackさせないで、微妙にずらしてあげたほうが読みやすいし最近のmapっぽくなるからどうかな? http://puu.sh/ehpd9/6aa48881b1.jpg
00:07:887 (3) - 急に登場するホイッスルがなんか違和感あるんだけど、こういうのは同じようなパターン数か所でやったほうがいいと思う。たとえば00:06:699 (3) - ここも同じようにしてあげるとか
00:09:372 (1) - NCいらないと思う
00:10:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - この辺が直前のパートと音の取り方変わってて変な感じになってる。http://puu.sh/ehpwj/b780a36823.jpg こんな風に統一させて
配置はこう http://puu.sh/ehpAt/77d46bfb68.jpg
00:13:679 (3,4) - ここも同じ。曲にあんま合ってない
00:15:610 (1) - clapとfinish一緒に着けるとすごくうるさいしホイッスルにしよう。BGMが実際にそんな感じならアリだけどここはそうじゃない。
00:16:427 (1) - NCいらないと思う。
00:17:838 (1) - ここにアンチジャンプは合わないと思うのでその前のとこの音取りを http://puu.sh/ehpZL/efc0ee66c1.jpgこんな風に変えてあげるのはどう?
00:18:135 (2,3,4,5,6) - ホイッスルの音全く曲に合ってないので消そう。どうしてもつけたいなら音量は下げましょう
00:28:679 (1) - blanket汚いので x169y368ぐらいになるように調整しよう
00:38:110 (8) - こういう分かりにくいジャンプ作るパートじゃないと思う。
00:43:234 (2) - stackさせるとほんと読みにくいからx0.8ぐらいずらそう
00:53:259 (3) - \なんだこれは/
01:00:090 (5) - clapいらないとおもう
00:58:902 (7) - こういうKIAIの見せ場に使うのはアリだと思う
01:02:244 (2) - 何回か同じ内容で書いたけどずらそう
01:11:897 (3) - ここはclapの音に合わせてジャンプさせるべき
01:14:496 (4,5,6) - BGMもっとよく聞いて音に合わせて音取りやってこ

全体的に画面の中心でぐるぐるしてる感が強かったから、以降譜面作るときはもう少しいろんな場所使うの意識して1回やってみてほしい。

Hard
00:00:610 (2) - なんでいきなりここでジャンプ作ったんだろう。00:00:165 (1) - これを反転させた状態でもいいぐらいの音だと思うんだけど。
00:15:313 (4) - もう少し下にずらして1~4のsliderの間隔統一しよう。
00:41:749 (1) - http://puu.sh/ehtgJ/1321470c76.jpg こんな感じにずらしてしたのsliderの形に沿って配置するのはどうでしょ
00:45:313 (1,2,3) - こういう場所の形すごく気になる。もっときれいに配置できるはず http://puu.sh/ehvrF/f368de3cc8.jpg
00:49:917 (3) - これは(2)とstackさせたほうがいい

117's Normal
00:01:056 (3,4) - please don't stack these notes. hard to read for beginners like me.
00:05:957 (4,5) - same as adove
00:20:065 (3,4) - ^
00:22:442 (7,8) - ^
00:52:739 (7,8) - ^
01:04:620 (4,5) - ^
01:09:075 (1,2) - ^
00:04:323 (5,6,1) - this flow is not good to play. try to change for like this. http://puu.sh/ehwEt/b104873e06.jpg
00:12:046 (1) - make a curve ? http://puu.sh/ehwKN/ab5e2aa16d.jpg

Callin's Easy
00:00:165 (1) - dont fit the song. please try this http://puu.sh/ehx9L/67a233968b.jpg
00:03:729 (5) - try Ctrl+J it will maks more good flow.
00:04:917 (1) - if you changed above try same thing.
00:12:046 (4) - remove whistle on reverse
00:14:422 (2) - move to more right. now this flow is not well.
00:21:551 (3,4) - try blanket like this http://puu.sh/ehy6H/601614aadb.jpg
00:42:937 (1,2) - same as above http://puu.sh/ehyiL/f4b570c81c.jpg

That's it
Topic Starter
-Yuzuriha

Chirony wrote:

from M4M

[Insane]
  1. 00:01:947 - 00:02:392 (5,6) -00:03:135 (4,5) - 00:04:768 (6) - 音楽に特に強調するような音もないので、clapを削除したほうがいいかと fix
  2. 00:03:432 (6) - add clap fix
  3. 00:07:887 - whistleを使わずにfinishを少し音量を下げて使ってみるのはどうですか? sorry
  4. 00:31:056 - 00:32:244 - 00:33:432 - 00:34:620 - あまり盛り上がるパートではないのであんまりfinish使わないほうがいいかも。音楽にも合った音はありませんでした 考えてみます
  5. 00:36:848 (7) - add finish  fix
  6. 00:38:481 - 00:38:778 - remove clap fix
  7. 00:38:630 - 00:39:075 - add finish 音楽に明確なリズムがあるのでそれに合わせるべきだと思います。00:39:075 - 00:38:184 - にもclapを付けてみるのもいいかもしれないです
  8. 00:40:264 - 1/4スライダーを追加してみるのはどうですか?clapの音も拾えるしvocalもフォロー出来ていると思います
  9. 00:42:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:38:184 (1,2,3,4) - と同じ
  10. 00:44:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 連打を作るならピアノに合わせて作るべきかと思います。このパターンを試してみて :3
  11. 00:59:273 (3) - add clap fix~
[Hard]
  •  
  1. 00:05:363 (2,3) - スタックしないほうがいいと思います  fix
  2. 00:07:887 (3,4) - ここもスタック外したほうがいいかも。流れを止めているような気がします fix
  3. 00:38:184 (1,2,3,4) - 00:42:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - Insaneと同じ 配置を変えてみます
  4. 01:06:551 - remove finish  fix
  5. 01:09:075 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 音楽と合ってないように感じました。こっちのほうがあってるかな
    う~ん 今のとこはそのままでいきます
  6. 01:10:412 - add clap no
  7. 01:09:669 - ^ no
  8. 01:11:155 - ^ no
good luck! :)
mod ありがとうございました~
DreaM117er

monstrata wrote:

[117's Normal]

00:51:848 (5) - I don't see why this needs to be a slider. The music doesn't suggest it. Make this a circle? >No fix
01:13:531 (3,4) - Try remapping this part. You want to have a slider beginning on 01:13:828 - not a slider-end because that is a stronger beat. >OK, change

Chirony wrote:

[117's Normal]
  1. 00:42:937 (1,2,3) - i think not fit to music. please try this >I change other look, more better now
Thanks your mod

SPOILER
osu file format v13

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PreviewTime: 48803
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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TitleUnicode:太陽と月のCROSS (TV Size)
Artist:TWO-FORMULA
ArtistUnicode:TWO-FORMULA
Creator:-Yuzuriha-inori-
Version:117's Normal
Source:俺の脳内選択肢が、学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
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Topic Starter
-Yuzuriha

Laurier wrote:

modとか8か月ぶりぐらいなんだけど おかえり~

General
問題なさそう

Insane
前半にCS:1のホイッスル混ぜてないのはわざと?使わない理由もないと思うんだけど入れてみては?

00:03:283 (5) - ここsliderにしよ。00:00:165 (1,1,1) - ここらの伸びる音の時全部sliderにしてあるし、ここが単発ってのは不自然 ok~00:03:580 (1) - clapじゃなくてホイッスルにしよ 音を消しました
00:04:397 (3) - これ消そう。何の音も拾ってないし。3連打配置するなら00:04:694 - こっちにnote追加したほうがbetter  ok~
00:05:363 (2,3) - 直感だけど、sliderと単発の音の取り方逆にしたほうがしっくりくる  ok~
00:06:402 (2,3) - この2つでジャンプ作るのは音に合わないし、sliderのほうCtrl+Gしてあげよう  ok~
00:06:996 (5,1) - stackさせないで、微妙にずらしてあげたほうが読みやすいし最近のmapっぽくなるからどうかな? http://puu.sh/ehpd9/6aa48881b1.jpg
ok~
00:07:887 (3) - 急に登場するホイッスルがなんか違和感あるんだけど、こういうのは同じようなパターン数か所でやったほうがいいと思う。たとえば00:06:699 (3) - ここも同じようにしてあげるとか  ok~
00:09:372 (1) - NCいらないと思う  ok~
00:10:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - この辺が直前のパートと音の取り方変わってて変な感じになってる。http://puu.sh/ehpwj/b780a36823.jpg こんな風に統一させて
配置はこう http://puu.sh/ehpAt/77d46bfb68.jpg
00:13:679 (3,4) - ここも同じ。曲にあんま合ってない  ok~
00:15:610 (1) - clapとfinish一緒に着けるとすごくうるさいしホイッスルにしよう。BGMが実際にそんな感じならアリだけどここはそうじゃない。  ok~
00:16:427 (1) - NCいらないと思う。  ok~
00:17:838 (1) - ここにアンチジャンプは合わないと思うのでその前のとこの音取りを http://puu.sh/ehpZL/efc0ee66c1.jpgこんな風に変えてあげるのはどう? ok~  
00:18:135 (2,3,4,5,6) - ホイッスルの音全く曲に合ってないので消そう。どうしてもつけたいなら音量は下げましょう  ok~
00:28:679 (1) - blanket汚いので x169y368ぐらいになるように調整しよう  ok~
00:38:110 (8) - こういう分かりにくいジャンプ作るパートじゃないと思う。 けっこう気にってる形なので、そのままで
00:43:234 (2) - stackさせるとほんと読みにくいからx0.8ぐらいずらそう  ok~
00:53:259 (3) - \なんだこれは/  ok~
01:00:090 (5) - clapいらないとおもう  ok~
00:58:902 (7) - こういうKIAIの見せ場に使うのはアリだと思う
01:02:244 (2) - 何回か同じ内容で書いたけどずらそう  ok~
01:11:897 (3) - ここはclapの音に合わせてジャンプさせるべき  ok~
01:14:496 (4,5,6) - BGMもっとよく聞いて音に合わせて音取りやってこ  ok~ 

全体的に画面の中心でぐるぐるしてる感が強かったから、以降譜面作るときはもう少しいろんな場所使うの意識して1回やってみてほしい。

Hard
00:00:610 (2) - なんでいきなりここでジャンプ作ったんだろう。00:00:165 (1) - これを反転させた状態でもいいぐらいの音だと思うんだけど。
00:15:313 (4) - もう少し下にずらして1~4のsliderの間隔統一しよう。
00:41:749 (1) - http://puu.sh/ehtgJ/1321470c76.jpg こんな感じにずらしてしたのsliderの形に沿って配置するのはどうでしょ
00:45:313 (1,2,3) - こういう場所の形すごく気になる。もっときれいに配置できるはず http://puu.sh/ehvrF/f368de3cc8.jpg
00:49:917 (3) - これは(2)とstackさせたほうがいい

All oK~



That's it
modありがとうございました~  :)
Aerous

monstrata wrote:



From Astral Horizon modding queue~ Hope this is of help :). The patterns on the Insane were really fun to play!


[Callin's Easy]

00:00:165 (1) - The repeat of this slider doesn't capture anything. The repeat should be on 00:00:759 - Changed it a bit , not like yours. repeated on 00:01:056
00:05:957 (2) - Switching polarity isn't recommended on lower difficulties. Move to 00:06:105 - please. Its fine
00:12:046 (4) - The repeat also doesn't capture anything because it's on a red-tick not white. Either make slider shorter so repeat is at 00:12:343 - or increase length and take out the repeat. Its fine
00:13:234 (1) - ^ You could try a pattern like this. Its fine
00:42:937 (1,2) - Blanket better. Yup , nice catch
00:52:442 (1) - Same issue. Repeat is on a red-tick. Its fine
01:01:947 (1) - ^ Its fine
01:04:323 (1,2) - Now these and all the later ones work!! :)




Good luck~

Laurier wrote:

modとか8か月ぶりぐらいなんだけど

Callin's Easy
00:00:165 (1) - dont fit the song. please try this http://puu.sh/ehx9L/67a233968b.jpg Changed
00:03:729 (5) - try Ctrl+J it will maks more good flow. Changed, but not like yours
00:04:917 (1) - if you changed above try same thing. Changed, but not like yours
00:12:046 (4) - remove whistle on reverse Ok , removed
00:14:422 (2) - move to more right. now this flow is not well. moved for better flooow
00:21:551 (3,4) - try blanket like this http://puu.sh/ehy6H/601614aadb.jpg Changed
00:42:937 (1,2) - same as above http://puu.sh/ehyiL/f4b570c81c.jpg ^

That's it

Thanks for the mods <3

Here you go , http://puu.sh/eiYqj/c1a0e35bda.osu :D
Gaia
@Chirony, I think my patterns are better >.< gomen

@inori: please add a clap at 00:17:244 -

arigatou!~

Edit:

VINXIS wrote:

kk finally got to be able 2 mod
pm m4m lma o

Gaia
ayy lmao yo
OD7 this is a hard.....
00:07:739 - add note there's nothing in the music here...
00:09:075 (2,3) - vol 50% eh
00:14:422 (1) - x:232 y:228 breaks my spacing
00:16:650 (5) - x:48 y:144 ^
00:36:848 (4,1) - stack under slider tbh not what im going for
00:47:392 (4) - Ctrl+G ^
00:58:976 (4) - ^ ^
01:03:580 (2) - curve less n
01:14:422 (3) - Ctrl+G lma o t
01:13:828 (1,3) - actually imo it'd be better if it was perfectly vertical but ye a y

happy mappign
sorry for no changes there was just no need to change imo
VINXIS
kk finally got to be able 2 mod
pm m4m lma o

general
lol y no combo colours tho
Aerous
did u not bow down to jmmxp today im dissapointed in u son
00:06:699 (3) - make it completely horizontal or x:268 y:264 (for the second point)
00:09:669 (1) - curve this less
00:12:046 (4,1) - make them congruent if they aren't already
00:12:046 (4) - nc
00:13:234 (1) - remove nc
00:14:422 (2) - nc
00:16:798 (1,1) - inb4 2soon4circle
00:22:739 (5,1) - blanket this m8
00:26:303 (1) - remove nc
00:27:491 (2) - nc
00:31:056 (4) - nc
00:32:838 (1) - remove nc
00:33:432 (2) - nc
00:40:264 (1) - remove nc
00:40:561 (2) - nc
00:42:937 (1,2) - y u do dis (make them same slider pls)
00:56:006 (2) - make it str8
00:57:194 (1) - remove nc
00:58:382 (2) - nc
01:03:135 (2) - >3 points >2015
01:05:511 (2,1) - blanketo
m1223961117
bak in may 2014 if i played this i'd die and call those slider spams. boy was i a dumas C:
00:23:333 (1) - remove nc
00:23:927 (3) - nc
01:02:689 (7,8) - stuff like this comes alot in the map. I'd leave this if i were u but to make it easier I'd change it to a repeat slider instead of a slider-note
ye a
Hard
00:05:511 (3,2) - yuzu pls
00:22:590 (4,5) - imperfect stack
00:31:056 (1,2) - ^
00:46:501 (5,1) - not too fond about this buti can't think of anything better so ye a (I'd just make this one new combo slider instead though)
00:54:224 (4,5,2) - slider doesn't stack perfectly with hte 2 circles lmao
00:56:600 (7,1) - same slider if they aren't already
01:06:551 (5) - nc for combo consistency
01:11:155 (3,3) - imperfect stack
Gaia
ayy lmao
OD7
00:07:739 - add note
00:09:075 (2,3) - vol 50%
00:14:422 (1) - x:232 y:228
00:16:650 (5) - x:48 y:144
00:36:848 (4,1) - stack under slider tbh
00:47:392 (4) - Ctrl+G
00:58:976 (4) - ^
01:03:580 (2) - curve less
01:14:422 (3) - Ctrl+G lma o
01:13:828 (1,3) - actually imo it'd be better if it was perfectly vertical but ye a
insane
00:00:165 (1,5) - imperfect stack
00:04:026 (2) - Ctrl+G tbh
00:05:511 (3,1) - imperfect stack
00:05:957 (1,4) - ^ lmao
00:20:957 (7,1,2,3) - ^
00:26:155 (1,2) - ^
00:29:867 (1,3) - ^
00:34:471 (5,3) - ^
00:35:660 (1,2,3) - ^
00:38:110 (8,1) - stack
00:38:184 (1,2) - imperfect stack
00:45:016 (7,2) - stack/no overlap
00:48:877 (1,2,3,4) - i can't tell if this is a bent square or not, but if u didn't use create polygon circles instead pls
00:52:887 (2) - doesn't perfectly stack with the bunch of circles before this
01:04:323 (1,4) - impefect stack
01:12:343 (1,2,3) - ^
01:14:570 (4,5) - I'd make the distance of this 2x longer than 01:13:976 (1,2) - but yea
01:14:719 (5) - nc

happy mappign
Topic Starter
-Yuzuriha

VINXIS wrote:

kk finally got to be able 2 mod
pm m4m lma o

general
lol y no combo colours tho
Aerous
did u not bow down to jmmxp today im dissapointed in u son
00:06:699 (3) - make it completely horizontal or x:268 y:264 (for the second point)
00:09:669 (1) - curve this less
00:12:046 (4,1) - make them congruent if they aren't already
00:12:046 (4) - nc
00:13:234 (1) - remove nc
00:14:422 (2) - nc
00:16:798 (1,1) - inb4 2soon4circle
00:22:739 (5,1) - blanket this m8
00:26:303 (1) - remove nc
00:27:491 (2) - nc
00:31:056 (4) - nc
00:32:838 (1) - remove nc
00:33:432 (2) - nc
00:40:264 (1) - remove nc
00:40:561 (2) - nc
00:42:937 (1,2) - y u do dis (make them same slider pls)
00:56:006 (2) - make it str8
00:57:194 (1) - remove nc
00:58:382 (2) - nc
01:03:135 (2) - >3 points >2015
01:05:511 (2,1) - blanketo
m1223961117
bak in may 2014 if i played this i'd die and call those slider spams. boy was i a dumas C:
00:23:333 (1) - remove nc
00:23:927 (3) - nc
01:02:689 (7,8) - stuff like this comes alot in the map. I'd leave this if i were u but to make it easier I'd change it to a repeat slider instead of a slider-note
ye a
Hard
00:05:511 (3,2) - yuzu pls
00:22:590 (4,5) - imperfect stack OK~
00:31:056 (1,2) - ^ OK~
00:46:501 (5,1) - not too fond about this buti can't think of anything better so ye a (I'd just make this one new combo slider instead though) OK~
00:54:224 (4,5,2) - slider doesn't stack perfectly with hte 2 circles lmao OK~
00:56:600 (7,1) - same slider if they aren't already OK~
01:06:551 (5) - nc for combo consistency OK~
01:11:155 (3,3) - imperfect stack
Gaia
ayy lmao
OD7
00:07:739 - add note
00:09:075 (2,3) - vol 50%
00:14:422 (1) - x:232 y:228
00:16:650 (5) - x:48 y:144
00:36:848 (4,1) - stack under slider tbh
00:47:392 (4) - Ctrl+G
00:58:976 (4) - ^
01:03:580 (2) - curve less
01:14:422 (3) - Ctrl+G lma o
01:13:828 (1,3) - actually imo it'd be better if it was perfectly vertical but ye a
insane
00:00:165 (1,5) - imperfect stack OK~
00:04:026 (2) - Ctrl+G tbh
00:05:511 (3,1) - imperfect stack OK~
00:05:957 (1,4) - ^ lmao OK~
00:20:957 (7,1,2,3) - ^ OK~
00:26:155 (1,2) - ^ OK~
00:29:867 (1,3) - ^ OK~
00:34:471 (5,3) - ^ OK~
00:35:660 (1,2,3) - ^ OK~
00:38:110 (8,1) - stack OK~
00:38:184 (1,2) - imperfect stack OK~
00:45:016 (7,2) - stack/no overlap OK~
00:48:877 (1,2,3,4) - i can't tell if this is a bent square or not, but if u didn't use create polygon circles instead pls
00:52:887 (2) - doesn't perfectly stack with the bunch of circles before this
01:04:323 (1,4) - impefect stack
01:12:343 (1,2,3) - ^
01:14:570 (4,5) - I'd make the distance of this 2x longer than 01:13:976 (1,2) - but yea
01:14:719 (5) - nc

happy mappign
DreaM117er

VINXIS wrote:

kk finally got to be able 2 mod
pm m4m lma o

m1223961117
bak in may 2014 if i played this i'd die and call those slider spams. boy was i a dumas C: >Maybe you don't like my style, I don't care about this :) Because it is not my feeling, it's yours ;)
00:23:333 (1) - remove nc
00:23:927 (3) - nc >Fix all
01:02:689 (7,8) - stuff like this comes alot in the map. I'd leave this if i were u but to make it easier I'd change it to a repeat slider instead of a slider-note
ye a >Sure, fix now

happy mappign
Thanks your mod :)

SPOILER
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Sh1raYuKi
Hello.
[Callin's Easy]

00:00:165 (1) - Change sound up
 
 00:02:541 (3,4) -To use it to copy either the slider?

 00:12:046 (4) - NC

 00:13:234 (1) - NC revocation
 
 00:31:056 (4) - clap

 00:39:075 (2,1) - follow

 01:07:739 (2,1) - Slider is unbalanced

 I think that it should be the spacing constant.  Good luck!

[117's Normal]

 I think that it should be the spacing constant.
I think it's a good map.  Good luck!

[Gaia's Hard]

 00:50:065 (1) - kiai time

 01:03:580 (2,3) - blanket

 01:07:739 (1) - Ctrl G
 
 I think it's a good map. Good luck!

[Hard&Insane]
 None
 
It is a good map set. Good luck! I support you

Aerous

sumomo301 wrote:

こんにちわ。さっそくですが見ていきたいと思います。難易度多くて大変そうだけど一生懸命したいと思います。
[Callin's Easy]

 00:02:541 (3,4) - スライダーをどちらかコピーしてつかってもいいのでは?CTRL + G 似ている

 01:07:739 (2,1) - ここもなんかアンバランスな気がする。

 あとは、スペーシングを同じにしたほうがいいと思います。若干ですが、ずれてるところあるので それは結構です , 変化なし


 Callin's Easy~Gaia's HardまでとHard、Insaneが選択画面の時別れてるのが気になります。

Good thing Yuzu was on when I was looking through the mod ~ Didn't need to use google translte :P

http://puu.sh/eoFWp/57f4950c4a.osu
Owntrolf
Insane
00:03:135 (4) - Theres no sound here
00:01:056 (4,1) - I think its a bit too close to the hp bar
00:22:590 (2,3) - Nazistack
00:24:521 (2,4,5) - Maybe make these straight
00:25:709 (6,1) - Probably can shorten 6 by 2 ticks and put a circle on the white tick
00:26:155 (1,2) - Nazistack
00:27:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the stream should end earlier because I hear the sound end around 00:28:457
00:45:016 - I think it would be better to just keep going with the stream to to next slider
00:48:877 (1,2) - This is tricky because it looks similar to the things before which similar distance, maybe stack or something?
01:04:323 (1,2) - Nazistack

Gaia's Hard
00:12:640 (3) - Maybe just keep using the curves
00:19:174 (1,2) - Nazistack
00:36:402 (3,4,1) - Maybe space 4 and 1 further from 3
01:11:155 (4,2) - Is really hard to see with default skin since 4 is overlapping it

Hard
00:04:026 (2,4) - Maybe copy 2 and just ctrl+h and make it shorter for 4
00:39:224 (4,1) - Its a bit hard to press

Normal
Not really sure if there should really be that many kicksliders
Some combos seem a bit long
Other than that its fine to me

Easy
00:05:957 (2) - You dont need to try that hard for easy to map guitar the beats are strong enough that you can just take out the slider and put a circle on the large white tick because
as it is now it feels really awkward because of the time difference
00:42:937 (1,2) - Replace the 1 slider with a copy of the 2
01:01:947 (1,2) - Blanket better also 2 looks weird because theres too many points
Topic Starter
-Yuzuriha

Owntrolf wrote:

Insane
00:03:135 (4) - Theres no sound here ok~
00:01:056 (4,1) - I think its a bit too close to the hp bar ok~
00:22:590 (2,3) - Nazistack ok~
00:24:521 (2,4,5) - Maybe make t hese straight ok~
00:25:709 (6,1) - Probably can shorten 6 by 2 ticks and put a circle on the white tick
00:26:155 (1,2) - Nazistack ok~
00:27:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the stream should end earlier because I hear the sound end around 00:28:457
00:45:016 - I think it would be better to just keep going with the stream to to next slider
00:48:877 (1,2) - This is tricky because it looks similar to the things before which similar distance, maybe stack or something?
01:04:323 (1,2) - Nazistack ok~


Hard
00:04:026 (2,4) - Maybe copy 2 and just ctrl+h and make it shorter for 4 ok
00:39:224 (4,1) - Its a bit hard to press
mod thanks ~ :)
VINXIS

m1223961117 wrote:

>Maybe you don't like my style, I don't care about this :) Because it is not my feeling, it's yours ;)
rip I liked ur map lmao I was just talking about how I was a shit player lol

good map though
DreaM117er

VINXIS wrote:

m1223961117 wrote:

>Maybe you don't like my style, I don't care about this :) Because it is not my feeling, it's yours ;)
rip I liked ur map lmao I was just talking about how I was a shit player lol >Oh...bad play its not your fault :?

good map though
Re-mod a little part...
00:51:848 (5) - It's strange after playing by my hand

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Aerous

Owntrolf wrote:

Insane
Easy
00:05:957 (2) - You dont need to try that hard for easy to map guitar the beats are strong enough that you can just take out the slider and put a circle on the large white tick because
as it is now it feels really awkward because of the time difference
Its fine here , in my opinion . Might change if other mods talk about this
00:42:937 (1,2) - Replace the 1 slider with a copy of the 2 Copied , and replaced
01:01:947 (1,2) - Blanket better also 2 looks weird because theres too many points
Yup nice catch on the blanket and changed the next slider
http://puu.sh/eBPK5/191cd4fbaa.osu

Yuzu update please and add callin to the tags !

onegai ~
Chaoslitz

^The first mod with new banner www
As requested o/

[Callin's Easy]
  1. 5 spinners is too many imo
  2. 00:02:541 (3) - this is not necessary to use finish here
  3. 00:21:551 (3,4) - Fix blanket
  4. 00:23:927 (1) - rotate this since players may hit the tail of the slider
  5. 00:27:491 (2) - Try to have whistle at head and clap at tail
  6. 00:32:838 (1) - clap
  7. 00:33:432 (2) - remove clap at head at use at tail
  8. 00:34:323 (3,4) - remove clap at 00:34:323 (3) and use clap at 00:34:620 (4) tail
  9. 00:38:184 (1) - End your slider at 00:38:630
  10. 00:42:937 (1) - End at 00:43:382
  11. 00:52:442 (1) - you can try to place your slider tail higher

    well hitsound is kinda messy...
[117's Normal]
  1. 00:14:867 (2) - Remove this note
  2. 00:21:551 (1) - NC
  3. 00:23:927 (1) - whistle at reverse instead?
  4. 00:26:155 (5) - remove
  5. 00:42:194 (4,5) - I suggest to use 1 slider only instead of this pattern
  6. 00:50:511 (2) - start this slider at 00:50:660
  7. 00:51:848 (5,6) - exchange the place in timeline, which is more follow to the vocal I think
  8. 01:09:224 (2) - how about a pattern same as 01:09:966 (4,5)?
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:679 (1) - curve slider higher
  2. 00:38:630 (2) 00:43:382 (3) - you can try to add finish at this two slider head also
  3. 01:06:551 (1) - use a note at 01:07:293 (4) and 1/2 slider at 01:07:293 (4)
[Gaia's Hard]

  • Gaia o/
  1. 00:05:957 (1,2) - exchange in timezone? that electric guitar is better to use a slider to represent
  2. 00:58:828 (3) - whistle instead?
  3. 01:09:521 (2,3) - another exchange in timezone, I think this is more suitable to the rhythm
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:392 (9,10,1) - I think a triplet is not needed in here
  2. 00:03:135 (4) - remove clap
  3. 00:09:372 (4) - a clap would be nice here
  4. 00:30:462 (4) - remove clap
  5. 00:32:838 (3) - ^
  6. 00:35:214 (3) - ^
  7. 00:39:892 (4) - delete this note
  8. 00:58:976 (8) - add clap?
  9. 01:01:947 (1,2,3,4,5) - feel empty in this part >_>
  10. 01:05:808 (2) - ctrl+g?

noucome <33
nice mapset \:D/~
shoot star o/
Aerous

Chaoslitz wrote:


^The first mod with new banner www
As requested o/

[notice][Callin's Easy]
  1. 5 spinners is too many imo
  2. 00:02:541 (3) - this is not necessary to use finish here
  3. 00:21:551 (3,4) - Fix blanket
  4. 00:23:927 (1) - rotate this since players may hit the tail of the slider
  5. 00:27:491 (2) - Try to have whistle at head and clap at tail
  6. 00:32:838 (1) - clap
  7. 00:33:432 (2) - remove clap at head at use at tail
  8. 00:34:323 (3,4) - remove clap at 00:34:323 (3) and use clap at 00:34:620 (4) tail
  9. 00:38:184 (1) - End your slider at 00:38:630
  10. 00:42:937 (1) - End at 00:43:382
  11. 00:52:442 (1) - you can try to place your slider tail higher

    well hitsound is kinda messy...
noucome <33
nice mapset \:D/~
shoot star o/
I didnt fix the finish at [*]00:02:541 (3) - this is not necessary to use finish here
Fixxed my hitsounds and fixed some spacing !

Here you go Yuzu ! : http://puu.sh/eHQrT/a74c295d72.osu
DreaM117er

Chaoslitz wrote:

[117's Normal]
  1. 00:14:867 (2) - Remove this note >OK
  2. 00:21:551 (1) - NC >Fix
  3. 00:23:927 (1) - whistle at reverse instead? >OK
  4. 00:26:155 (5) - remove >No
  5. 00:42:194 (4,5) - I suggest to use 1 slider only instead of this pattern >Nice :)
  6. 00:50:511 (2) - start this slider at 00:50:660 >No fix, strange
  7. 00:51:848 (5,6) - exchange the place in timeline, which is more follow to the vocal I think >OK, better now
  8. 01:09:224 (2) - how about a pattern same as 01:09:966 (4,5)? >I think no change better
noucome <33
nice mapset \:D/~
shoot star o/
Thanks your mod :)

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Topic Starter
-Yuzuriha

Chaoslitz wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:28:679 (1) - curve slider higher
  2. 00:38:630 (2) 00:43:382 (3) - you can try to add finish at this two slider head also sorry... no chenge
  3. 01:06:551 (1) - use a note at 01:07:293 (4) and 1/2 slider at 01:07:293 (4) ?
[[Insane]
  1. 00:02:392 (9,10,1) - I think a triplet is not needed in here
  2. 00:03:135 (4) - remove clap
  3. 00:09:372 (4) - a clap would be nice here
  4. 00:30:462 (4) - remove clap
  5. 00:32:838 (3) - ^
  6. 00:35:214 (3) - ^
  7. 00:39:892 (4) - delete this note
  8. 00:58:976 (8) - add clap?
  9. 01:01:947 (1,2,3,4,5) - feel empty in this part >_> uh...
  10. 01:05:808 (2) - ctrl+g? again say another person , i Fix
[/notice]



noucome <33
nice mapset \:D/~
shoot star o/
thanks ~ :)
Frey
M4M~

[Callin's Easy]

· 00:11:749 (3) - Add clap

· 00:15:313 (4) - Add clap

· 00:29:570 - Add clap ?

· 01:06:699 (1) - For a better blanket, move it to x240 y164

· 01:06:699 (1) - Add finish

· 01:07:739 (2) - Add finish

· 01:11:452 (1) - Soft-hitfinish sounds better I think

[117's Normal]

· 既然不是固定DS的作圖方式,看來我也沒必要挑DS的問題。

· 00:47:689 (5) - 這裡應該放個NC,因為音樂裡面能感覺出很明顯的這裡的前後區別

· 00:52:739 (7,8) - 沒疊好,稍微挪動一下(8)就好

[Hard]

· 00:03:580 (1) - It's weird to hear a finish-hitsound at a red line in 1/4 tempo, you should remove it

· 00:44:719 (8) - I don't know the rules, but I think it's risky to use 1/8 tempo here

[Gaia's Hard]

· Ah, you forgot to set the KIAI

· 00:13:976 - Add finish

· 00:22:145 - Add whistle ?

· 01:00:164 (3) - Add drum-hitfinish

· 01:14:422 (3) - This is very misleading, you should Ctrl+G. Besides, it's reasonable to jump between 01:14:422 (3) and 01:14:719 (1), because you used NC there.

[Insane]

· 00:18:877 (7) - the flow would better if you move it to x217 y113

· 00:33:135 (4) - Don't care about the blanket, move it to x216 y168 (At that moment, 00:32:244 (1) has disappeared)

· 00:33:877 (2) - you should unify the DS between 00:33:432 (1,3)

· 00:34:323 (4) - move it to x156 y332 ?

· 00:58:382 (3) - add NC

· 00:49:174 (2,4) - add whistle

· To be honest, Insane still needs some mods.

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Topic Starter
-Yuzuriha

Frey wrote:

M4M~

[Insane]

· 00:18:877 (7) - the flow would better if you move it to x217 y113 fix

· 00:33:135 (4) - Don't care about the blanket, move it to x216 y168 (At that moment, 00:32:244 (1) has disappeared)

· 00:33:877 (2) - you should unify the DS between 00:33:432 (1,3)

· 00:34:323 (4) - move it to x156 y332 ?

· 00:58:382 (3) - add NC fix

· 00:49:174 (2,4) - add whistle

· To be honest, Insane still needs some mods.

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mod thanks ~ :)
DreaM117er

Frey wrote:

M4M~

[117's Normal]

· 既然不是固定DS的作圖方式,看來我也沒必要挑DS的問題。 >恩...1/2間距0.9x,1/1間距1.0x,我從BAT那裡得知這樣是符合規定的,差距太大才會違規(雙馬尾的Normal也是這樣) :)

· 00:47:689 (5) - 這裡應該放個NC,因為音樂裡面能感覺出很明顯的這裡的前後區別 >OK

· 00:52:739 (7,8) - 沒疊好,稍微挪動一下(8)就好 >修好了

· To be honest, Insane still needs some mods.

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謝謝你的Mod,小地方都能看到 :D

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Mikagura Seisa
hi~from #modreqs


mod
Easy
01:03:135 (2,1) - these pair looks strange, try to use silder 1 round the end of slider 2.
Normal
nice map
Hard
00:18:283 (2,3,4) - I think straight is better
00:31:501 (2,3) - put the 2 on 3 as 00:32:689 (2,3) -
00:34:174 (2,3) - ^
00:52:442 (4) - you can do some change on 4 and make flow better (like use red point)
GHard
00:22:442 (2,3) - emmm,2- 3(a straight flow) is better?
00:47:689 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i think these pair is not fit the music,every 12's distance should be similar and 21's distance could decide by you(stay or jump)
Insane
I think you should use ALL space to map! Not a circle in middle
00:48:877 (1,2,3,4) - slider is better
01:01:947 (1,2,3,4) - follow lyrics? but you have follow the rhythm before. add point at 01:02:838 -

emmm, I don't think your flow of jump in kiai is fitful for the music. Have you find people try this map?

Good luck :D
Topic Starter
-Yuzuriha

MoleAkarin wrote:

hi~from #modreqs


Hard
00:18:283 (2,3,4) - I think straight is better
00:31:501 (2,3) - put the 2 on 3 as 00:32:689 (2,3) - fix~
00:34:174 (2,3) - ^
00:52:442 (4) - you can do some change on 4 and make flow better (like use red point)
Insane
I think you should use ALL space to map! Not a circle in middle
00:48:877 (1,2,3,4) - slider is better
01:01:947 (1,2,3,4) - follow lyrics? but you have follow the rhythm before. add point at 01:02:838 -

emmm, I don't think your flow of jump in kiai is fitful for the music. Have you find people try this map?

Good luck :D[/box]
mod thanks~ :)
DreaM117er
Fix useless greenline :)

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396,48,22590,2,0,P|332:80|244:76,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,32,23333,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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196,128,24818,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,208,25115,2,0,P|301:233|359:242,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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452,80,26155,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,44,26303,6,0,B|352:36|352:36|300:48|300:48|204:36,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,92,27194,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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176,356,28976,5,8,0:0:0:0:
260,300,29273,2,0,P|320:288|380:300,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,308,29719,2,0,P|440:256|444:164,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,80,30462,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,60,30759,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,136,31056,2,0,P|199:156|145:157,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,116,31650,2,0,L|52:52,2,50,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,216,32244,5,2,0:0:0:0:
116,300,32541,2,0,L|184:308,1,50,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,340,32838,2,0,L|291:329,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,312,33432,2,0,P|444:324|504:316,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,34323,5,8,0:0:0:0:
292,144,34620,2,0,L|308:20,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,212,35511,2,0,L|148:220,1,50,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,248,35808,6,0,L|4:228,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,132,36402,2,0,L|40:64,1,50,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,32,36848,1,6,0:0:0:0:
384,344,38184,6,0,P|309:353|237:337,2,150,6|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,288,39372,1,2,0:0:0:0:
504,196,39669,2,0,L|488:72,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,32,40264,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,112,40561,6,0,P|296:140|152:116,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,60,41452,1,8,0:0:0:0:
28,140,41749,2,0,L|12:264,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,284,42194,2,0,P|101:328|180:320,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,300,42937,6,0,P|317:283|388:296,1,100,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,300,43382,2,0,L|416:224,1,50,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,160,43828,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,160,43976,2,0,P|412:120|353:101,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,100,44422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,116,44719,2,0,P|176:124|100:100,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,160,45313,6,0,P|20:228|28:280,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,340,45907,2,0,P|136:352|200:332,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,288,46501,2,0,P|336:272|380:284,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,316,47095,2,0,P|488:240|476:156,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,136,47689,6,0,L|396:128,1,50,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,48,48135,2,0,L|288:56,1,50,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,128,48580,2,0,L|176:120,1,50,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,96,48877,6,0,L|32:104,2,100,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,44,49768,2,0,L|300:52,1,50,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,88,50065,6,0,L|428:80,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,92,50511,2,0,P|490:154|473:260,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,316,51254,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,348,51551,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,280,51848,2,0,P|221:265|152:268,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,312,52442,1,2,0:0:0:0:
15,235,52739,1,8,0:0:0:0:
15,235,52887,2,0,P|0:162|18:90,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,32,53630,6,0,L|216:44,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
18,91,54521,2,0,L|24:160,1,50,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,184,54818,2,0,P|20:244|28:300,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,360,55412,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,292,55709,2,0,P|206:276|280:280,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,312,56303,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,248,56600,2,0,P|448:200|449:138,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,112,57046,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,80,57194,6,0,L|292:68,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,48,57788,2,0,L|84:60,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,70,58679,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,144,58976,2,0,P|396:192|384:260,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,280,59422,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,304,59570,6,0,L|208:292,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,252,60165,2,0,L|20:260,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,200,61056,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,272,61353,2,0,P|348:292|408:288,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,248,61947,2,0,P|500:196|488:124,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,108,62392,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,64,62689,2,0,L|376:0,2,50,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,104,63135,6,0,L|356:220,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,292,63729,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,340,64026,2,0,P|171:350|110:335,1,100,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,292,64620,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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92,64,65511,6,0,L|200:60,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,104,66105,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,40,66402,2,0,L|420:32,1,50,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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180,244,69075,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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392,64,70412,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,28,70709,2,0,L|472:184,1,150,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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108,104,73531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Aerous

MoleAkarin wrote:

hi~from #modreqs


mod
Easy
01:03:135 (2,1) - these pair looks strange, try to use silder 1 round the end of slider 2.
Good luck :D
Yuzu's you can change that for me !
Also hopefully this should get ranked :3
RandF
ha~i

[General]
  1. guestのAerousをtagsに。。。
[Hard]
  1. 00:19:620 (2) - delete. SVが0.5xとかなり変わるので、1/1rhtyhmで対応する間がほしいっていうのと、vocalフォローでも良さそうっていうのが理由です
  2. 00:41:452 (6,1) - blanketずれてるのが気になりました
  3. 00:46:798- ここclapかな
  4. 00:50:065~01:11:452- kiaitimeのjumpが00:50:957 (4,1) - 1つだけだったので、もう1~2か所jumpがあってもおもしろいかなと思います
  5. 01:13:234 (5) - white-lineが強い音なので、2回たたかせる方が好みです。こんなかんじとか
[Insane]
  1. 00:46:501 (7,1) - swap NC?
  2. 00:51:105 (4,5) - どっちもclapつけるかはずすか統一した方がよいかも
  3. 00:58:976 (6,7) - blanket correctly. 見栄え良くなると思います
[Callin's Easy]
  1. I suggest to add clap at backbeat(2nd, 4th beat) as far as possible.
    for example in 00:09:669~00:16:798-, add clap at the following
    00:11:155
    00:11:749
    00:15:313
  2. 00:35:660 (1) - I recommend to add some hitsound, and increase hitsound's volume
  3. 00:42:937 (1,2) - how about moving 00:43:828 (2) - like the following for good looking and good flow?
  4. 01:05:511 (2,1) - not good flow, imo. I prefer like the following for smoother cursor moving
[117's Normal]
  1. 01:02:689 (7,1) - I prefer to follow vocal
[Gaia's Hard]

  • Good!
star~☆
たたきやすくて良いmapsetでした :) :) :)
~Good Luck~
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