Sekai-nyan wrote
Hard:
◾00:01:056 (3) - how about fixing the stick between this note and this slider 00:01:204 (4) - , it's looking kinda bad right now ><
◾00:01:947 (2) - I think the clap fits here, so how about removing the clap on slider's start, it don't really fit with music imo ;w; OK
◾00:03:135 (6) - ^ but on slider's tail, the clap should be here imo 00:03:432 - , so how about giving this slider 1 repeat to cover the clap here :3
◾00:07:887 (3) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle on slider's start, because i really can hear whistle there, so i think it's kinda bad to skip that o.o OK
◾00:08:481 (1) - ^
◾00:30:462 (3) - how about moving this slider a bit grids up, to avoid touch this slider's head 00:29:719 (1) - , because it's looking kinda bad right now. That's why, if you did that, don't forget to remove the clap on slider's head. It don't really fit with music imo ></
OK
◾00:35:214 (6) - remove finish on slider's head, i don't see a reason to add, because it don't really follows anything in music OK
◾00:35:660 (1) - making this a linear slider kinda bad here, since you made a linear sliders here 00:34:323 (3,4,5,6) - , so how about giving this slider a bit more curve to it, to fix that :3 OK
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◾00:36:402 (4,1) - how about removing the clap on (4)'s slider's tail and (1) and then replacing them with finishes instead, it'll fit much better imo. Since i can hear a finish sound here not clap tbh ></ OK
◾00:37:887 (5) - how about giving this slider a ctrl+g, since you kinda did this on all your rhythm, on this diff, so i suggest you to do the same here OK
◾00:38:630 (2) - I think slider's start kinda missing a finish there. So how about adding it :3
◾00:39:224 (4) - ^
◾00:42:194 (2) - I highly suggest you to move this slider few grids up, to avoid it from touching this slider 00:41:749 (1) - , it's looking kinda bad right now >< OK
◾00:44:719 (8) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle to slider's start and 00:44:867 - here and to the slider's end too, it'll fit with the piano sound in the music :3 OK
◾00:45:907 (3,4) - I don't think these two kinda looking bad right, so how about doing it like this instead. It'll fit much better with your style here on this diff o.o
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◾01:07:739 (1) - This slider kinda missing a finish on slider's start, so how about adding it there o.o OK
Insane:
◾00:07:887 (3) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle to slider's start, it'll follow the piano sound in the music :3 OK~
◾00:08:481 (1) - ^
◾00:12:640 (3) - how about spacing this slider a bit more, since it's too close with this slider right now 00:12:343 (2) - and it don't really look so well ;w;
◾00:20:957 (7) - I think this slider would look much better if you just remove the 3rd slider's point, i don't really think it's needed here..so yeah ></ OK~
◾00:28:234 (4) - it'll be more fun if you made this slider with ctrl+g, it'll give some fun flow to it, and people will enjoy it much more :3
◾00:30:759 (5) - this slider is way too close to this slider 00:30:462 (4) - , i really suggest you to move it a bit away from it, it'll give it a bit of bad play imo
OK~
◾00:37:887 (7,8,1) - what's with the spacing here? o.o looks kinda weird to me, i really don't suggest you doing something like. It'll confuse some players when playing this map. i really don't know how to fix this one, but i know you can do it, :3
◾00:49:991 (7) - I honestly don't hear anything here, and it's just overmapped to me, so how about removing this note
mod thanks ~
Hard:
◾00:01:056 (3) - how about fixing the stick between this note and this slider 00:01:204 (4) - , it's looking kinda bad right now ><
◾00:01:947 (2) - I think the clap fits here, so how about removing the clap on slider's start, it don't really fit with music imo ;w; OK
◾00:03:135 (6) - ^ but on slider's tail, the clap should be here imo 00:03:432 - , so how about giving this slider 1 repeat to cover the clap here :3
◾00:07:887 (3) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle on slider's start, because i really can hear whistle there, so i think it's kinda bad to skip that o.o OK
◾00:08:481 (1) - ^
◾00:30:462 (3) - how about moving this slider a bit grids up, to avoid touch this slider's head 00:29:719 (1) - , because it's looking kinda bad right now. That's why, if you did that, don't forget to remove the clap on slider's head. It don't really fit with music imo ></
OK
◾00:35:214 (6) - remove finish on slider's head, i don't see a reason to add, because it don't really follows anything in music OK
◾00:35:660 (1) - making this a linear slider kinda bad here, since you made a linear sliders here 00:34:323 (3,4,5,6) - , so how about giving this slider a bit more curve to it, to fix that :3 OK
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◾00:36:402 (4,1) - how about removing the clap on (4)'s slider's tail and (1) and then replacing them with finishes instead, it'll fit much better imo. Since i can hear a finish sound here not clap tbh ></ OK
◾00:37:887 (5) - how about giving this slider a ctrl+g, since you kinda did this on all your rhythm, on this diff, so i suggest you to do the same here OK
◾00:38:630 (2) - I think slider's start kinda missing a finish there. So how about adding it :3
◾00:39:224 (4) - ^
◾00:42:194 (2) - I highly suggest you to move this slider few grids up, to avoid it from touching this slider 00:41:749 (1) - , it's looking kinda bad right now >< OK
◾00:44:719 (8) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle to slider's start and 00:44:867 - here and to the slider's end too, it'll fit with the piano sound in the music :3 OK
◾00:45:907 (3,4) - I don't think these two kinda looking bad right, so how about doing it like this instead. It'll fit much better with your style here on this diff o.o
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◾01:07:739 (1) - This slider kinda missing a finish on slider's start, so how about adding it there o.o OK
Insane:
◾00:07:887 (3) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle to slider's start, it'll follow the piano sound in the music :3 OK~
◾00:08:481 (1) - ^
◾00:12:640 (3) - how about spacing this slider a bit more, since it's too close with this slider right now 00:12:343 (2) - and it don't really look so well ;w;
◾00:20:957 (7) - I think this slider would look much better if you just remove the 3rd slider's point, i don't really think it's needed here..so yeah ></ OK~
◾00:28:234 (4) - it'll be more fun if you made this slider with ctrl+g, it'll give some fun flow to it, and people will enjoy it much more :3
◾00:30:759 (5) - this slider is way too close to this slider 00:30:462 (4) - , i really suggest you to move it a bit away from it, it'll give it a bit of bad play imo
OK~
◾00:37:887 (7,8,1) - what's with the spacing here? o.o looks kinda weird to me, i really don't suggest you doing something like. It'll confuse some players when playing this map. i really don't know how to fix this one, but i know you can do it, :3
◾00:49:991 (7) - I honestly don't hear anything here, and it's just overmapped to me, so how about removing this note
mod thanks ~