1. Hard (4,32 stars, 170 notes)
2. Insane (4,56 stars, 196 notes)
3. Normal (2,85 stars, 110 notes)

ErufenRito wrote:

Woah well done map.

Just some minor suggestions. Although map is fine the way it is already

Hard:

00:58:658 - Add a circle here Rdy and added more of one circle x3

Storyboard/skin:

- I think it would be cooler if those pentagons were to increase its scale for every syllab said, instead of the first syllab of the word this take a lot of time <.<
- I dont see the point of having the word .hack in the spinner, if the spinner meter is going to block it anyways yea but is part of my Spinner-BG (what i make x3) and realy haven't importance
- Lol the spinner ball, it looks funny at 0.5x sliders (this is just a comment) yea i know :3

Also, if youre not going to use any of my suggestions, dont give me kudosu. And please, dont say sorry if youre not going to give me kudosu, it will just make me mad

orioncomet wrote:

I don't know why I really like your SB style

[General]
delete the useless Thumbs.db file in /SB and full submit it again rdy, maybe.... xd

SPOILER

awp wrote:

Thumbs.db is still popping up - it's possible you can't see it if you're somehow restricted, so I think a workaround for this is to go again into Tools > Folder Options, and from there, Files and Folders > Make sure "Do not cache thumbnails" is checked. Once it is, select "Apply to All Folders", then hit OK. Then, hopefully, when you delete and re-create the folder, Windows doesn't create another Thumbs.db

I see the rest of the SB has been fixed, though.

So let's kill that Thumbs.db file. Worst comes to worst, try

Run > cmd.exe

del %path-to-song-directory%SBThumbs.db

though I strongly suspect, if you can't see it, it's a permissions error.

peppy from Modding/Ranking Guide wrote:

No unused/unnecessary files in the package

[Normal]
fine ~ thx

[Hard]
- OD +1 plz.. Orz.. abit easy to read more rdy
01:10:523 - this timing selection seem useless? I just ask for maybe you for got to change about volume or something else.fixed

+ starr

Sallad4ever wrote:

Halo Astom

did some irc modding, hope it help you yea thx sallad :3
Ok this is the best I can come out with, you may want to make sure of it though okey I test it, thx
Offset :2514 I like it but i think what is not good enought <.<

good luck Astom thx =)
see you again cya later sallad :3

• • Why don't you make another diff?

• • 01:00:449 (1) - This spinner should start here 01:02:911

• • 00:37:171 (1) - End this spinner here 00:38:570 (yellow tick)

xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

• • Why don't you make another diff? T_T why all ask for that xD? I'm thinking about it D:

[Normal]

• • 01:00:449 (1) - This spinner should start here 01:02:911 I divide it in 2 spinner

[Hard]

• • 00:37:171 (1) - End this spinner here 00:38:570 (yellow tick) omg.. yea

I really like this map

NoHItter wrote:

Skin
I can see some white along the edges of some elements (prominently the spinner-circle) rdy

Overall
00:39:202 (1) - Timing sections that change volume (like the one on this note - on both diffs too) must be put at least 1/4 backward. rdy

Easy:

00:51:963 (1) - I think it's a shame covering the lyrics for almost 4 seconds, can't you reshape this?

Hard:

01:14:127 - Add a spinner ( or something else, though spinner fits it better. )

FuukoLover wrote:

Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

When I first tried the map, the first thing I said when came the "Astom" out is "Okay guy, have a star." lol

Easy:

00:51:963 (1) - I think it's a shame covering the lyrics for almost 4 seconds, can't you reshape this? [/color]

Hard:

01:14:127 - Add a spinner ( or something else, though spinner fits it better. ) Sry I erase this for accident <.< thx

Star for the awesome SB.[/color]

• • 00:46:814 (3,4,1,2,3) - Spacing here could confuse people
  • 01:01:143 (3,4,1,2,3) - ^

AngelHoney wrote:

Insane

OA 7 feels good rdy

Hard

00:54:426 (5) - new combo ? mm no


nice map :3

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

If you want I've uploaded the video.
http://up.ppy.sh/files/hackdusk.avi i take a look

I've tried the map with the video and it seems to not interfere with the SB, so try it

Anyway, starred*

P.S. Can I make a diff? sry I already have a request for that =(

xxheroxx wrote:

[Insane]

• • 00:46:814 (3,4,1,2,3) - Spacing here could confuse people rdy
  • 01:01:143 (3,4,1,2,3) - ^ rdy

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Even though I got 98% + acc the timing feels a bit off, though it's hard to tell with the current .mp3.

Normal:

00:46:150 (1) - Feels too close to previous note.I heard that 25% and the battery fits perfectly, obviously not the voice xD
00:54:658 (2) - You could add a few more returns imo to fill gap in the music. I add one more :3

Hard:

00:37:187 (1) - End spinner on red tick or blue tick, don't end on 1/8. that was a xxheroxx suggestion XD but well ok i haven't problem
00:54:650 (6) - Add two more returns imo, adjust spacing if you do this. I add 1 more
00:59:799 (x) - Add a note? mmm no, it's a pause what i made
00:59:692 (x) - ^ same
01:09:202 (1) - Add two returns imo. rdy

Insane:

-- Increase circle size by 1.rdy
-- Increase difficulty by 1.rdy

00:10:769 (x) - Note? I made that pause, i don't like much make long streams and don't give time for a mini break
00:37:187 (1) - End on red or blue tick.rdy
00:54:650 (7) - Add more returns imo. I add 1 more
01:19:948 (x) - Add a note?I like my perfect sword D: but well, ok

Map was fine but the small circles and low OD weren't very fun X3

Nice maps and SB as usual. ~ Star thx again for u time *-*

onigiri-lol wrote:

Lindísimo mapa, y para qué decir el skin Tío Ast
sabes que tienes una estrellota asegurada conmigo
*aún así tener que haberme bajado el mapa por lo menos unas 30 veces al día ^^U*

Espero ser su mejor asistente por el resto de mi laaarga vida en Hoshu! : )

"Clan Osu! Rangers!"

CDFA wrote:

Normal:
00:14:799 (1,2,3,4) - A bit confusing for a normal. Keep it in if you want to, just saying :3~I keep it
00:26:441 (2,3,4) - ^same

Hard:
01:17:709 (2) - Spacing =o?
01:19:500 (1) - ^ mmm rdy

Insane
Desu ~ hehe

Overall, very nice job on this! Starred .

Dusty wrote:

Nice stuff.

[Hard]
01:20:620 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is the only stream in [Hard]. Maybe turn it into a slider and save the streams for [Insane]?I need something "hard" in hard xD

James2250 wrote:

Normal:
looks fine

Hard:
00:32:933 (5) - new combo rdy
00:33:381 (1) - remove new combo rdy
00:37:187 (1) - shorten by 1/4 rdy, again (original position xD)

Insane:
00:37:187 (1) - shorten by 1/4 rdy, again (original position xD)

*star*
you will have to get a better timer to double check timing for you~ yea i'm looking for someone but nobody can get something better =(

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
*o_o cool sb. I actually thought that it was part of the video o___o
*spinner-circle.png has some stuff around it (making it a big square), but it's not noticeable in gameplay. Is this on purpose? :/ xD rdy?
*Offset is on the wrong tick (aka the upbeat). 2,709 would've been correct, but I think that 2,706 is a tiny tiny bit better.okey rdy, and time bars rdy too

[Normal]
00:14:799 (1,2,3,4) - a tiny bit confusing. Try moving 3/4 up a bit.<.<, okey rdy
00:26:217 (1,2,3,4) - again, confusing <.<, okey rdy
00:29:127 (1) - Too far away from the center of the spinnero_o, well rdy
00:54:650 (2) - too far from previous rdy

[Hard]
00:29:351 (1) - perhaps end this on 00:30:471? rdy
00:37:187 (1) - ending on the blue tick? o-o Try ending it on 00:38:306 instead. I think it sounds much better.rdy
00:47:933 (2,3,1) - spacing from 2 to 3 and 3 to 1 is the same even though there's a pause between 3 and 1.mmm rdy, I take off the jumps
01:02:262 (2,3,1) - ^mmm rdy, I take off the jumps
01:19:500 (1) - looks sloppy under the previous slider rdy in another fix

[Insane]
00:37:187 (1) - same comment as on Hard. rdy
01:06:515 (2,3,4,5,6) - a bit hidden under the hitburst from 01:05:620 (1,2). rdy

The 0.5x bpm sliders are kind of unpredictable, so I'm not sure what to say about them. After one playthrough, though, they're easy enough to notice and I liked them. :S muhahaha :3

Also, I didn't notice much of a difficulty increase from Hard to Insane. :X with u offset is a lot more easy but i don't like make realy insane dif, i preffer funny and nice songs =)

Hmmm... I kinda feel like Normal is a bit too hard for the easiest diff. The slider velocity and distance spacing a big higher than I'd like to see as "easy", but it's a nice Normal, nonetheless. Do you think you could whip up a nice easy for this? I'm realy bad making easy dif, so no xD

Call me back after everything and I'll see about a pubble. o-o

EDIT: I see that someone before me mentioned the spinners in hard/insane ending on the blue tick. Normal's spinner at the same place ends on 00:38:306, so I think that it would sound better to keep it the same for hard/insane.

YGOkid8 wrote:

Normal:
Fine.

Hard:
Increase Circle Size by 1. Maybe also decrease HP Drain Rate by 1? o_o no

Combo Mod~
00:58:899 (3) - New Combo. rdy

Normal Mod~
00:58:899 (3 ~ 7) - Stack no D:
01:20:616 (1 ~ 7) - ^no

Insane:

Combo Mod~
00:56:213 (1) - No New Combo rdy

Normal Mod~
00:15:690 (4) - This is an Insane diff. Change this into a stream.I don't like a diff full of streams
00:30:019 (3) - ^same

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!

Here are some suggestions for your map~ You don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Cool storyboard, but the problem is... if you have videos on the storyboard overlaps with video. I don't know if it matters a lot or not so... nevermind? xDSB is for people who plays without video :3
- Fix your spinnercircle image, it has some grey marks around the circle.now realy fixed D:

~Normal~
- It feels a bit hard for the easiest diff... Try making an Easy? Up to you though, I've seen worse normals xDhuhu no

01:24:646 (1) - Stack under the previous (1). rdy

~Hard~
00:29:123 (5) - New Combo.rdy
00:29:347 (1) - Delete New Combo.rdy
01:13:228 (3) - Stack under (5).rdy
01:13:676 (4) - Put it between (1,2)no, it's not the same distance if i do that, I use distance snap for this
01:22:855 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Centre this on the grid? o.o:o?

~Insane~
00:05:840 (1,2) - Filp horizontally too. It looks a bot ugly like that oxofixed in another way
00:13:004 (1,2) - ^same rdy
00:23:974 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Compare the spacing between (1,2,3,4,5) and (1,2,3,4). When I played it I got a bit confused with this :/
00:37:183 (1) - Extend it to 00:38:300. okey.... changed again
01:17:481 (1,2) - Flip horizontally too. It looks a bit ugly like that.okey okey

Cool map!! And I love the song x3 *star* Good luck!!

Hikato wrote:

[General]
Having the vid kind of messes up the look of the SB compared to how it looks on the BG but it's fine.

[Normal]
00:54:645 (2) - Remove a repeat.no
(00:55:540 - Add a beat.)mm nop
00:56:212 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Sounds better like: ClickI like how sound now sry

[Hard]
00:56:212 (1) - Remove 2 repeats. no
00:57:107 (x) - Add a beat.no
00:57:331 (2) - Remove.no...
00:58:227 (2) - This doesn't sound good. Try moving it forward by 1/2
00:58:898 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think this fits well. Try removing 00:59:010 (2,3,4) and see how it sounds.

[Insane]
00:53:748 (3) - Remove.I follow instruments
00:54:196 (5) - Remove.same
00:54:644 (7) - Add a repeat.mini break D:
00:55:987 (3) - Maybe move this forward by 1/4mm no
or
00:55:875 (2) - Move this to 00:56:099.o_o?
01:07:629 (1) - Move this forward by 1/2D:
(01:07:629 (x) - Add a beat here.)
01:07:629 (7) - Spacing
01:09:196 (1) - Add a repeat.
(01:10:091 (1) - remove new combookey
01:10:539 (4) - New combo rdy
01:11:435 (1) - Remove new combo rdy
01:12:330 (3) - New combo rdy)

Suggestions followed by suggestions in brackets are to be done together. Don't follow the ones in brackets if you didn't follow the previous suggestion not in backets.

Nice map.