This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, March 22, 2010 at 10:53:42 PM

Artist: Mimu
Title: Tears
Source: NicoNicoDouga
Tags: Vocaloid simplistiC x3ns0r FuukoLover EvilOonsta
BPM: 128
Filesize: 5237kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:

1. EyeDrops (2.79 stars, 123 notes)
2. Fuuko's Tears (4.61 stars, 191 notes)
3. Naite Iru (3.72 stars, 138 notes)
4. simplistiC's Chi no Namida (4.79 stars, 266 notes)
5. x3ns0r's Namida Ga Tomaranai (3.93 stars, 151 notes)

Download: Mimu - Tears
Download: Mimu - Tears (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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-EyeDrop-
03/16/10
*Started Beatmap*
*Finished 30 Seconds
*Finished Easy
*Added Rito's Mod

-Namidaga Tomaranai-
03/16/10
*Added x3ns0r's Guest Diff
*Added Rito's Md

-Naite Iru-
03/16/10
*Finished 1:31:990
*Added Teta's Mod
*Added x3ns0r's Mod
*Added Rito's Mod
*Added Fuuko's Timing,Bg changes for all modes

*Added new hit circle overlay, added new video, re mapped Naite iru

03/18/10
*Added leorda's fixes
*changed things around made spacing better used distance snap, upped the velocity
*Added Ray's Mod
*Added saymun's Mod
*Added Ignorethis Mod
*Added Suck's Mod
*Added simplistiC's Guest Difficulty

03/19/10
*Re Mapped Naite Iru
*Added Fixes to all modes
*Added Killers Fixes
*Added Rays And Ztrot's Skins
*Added Hit Sounds to Naite, EyeDrops
*Added fartownik Mod's
*Added Fuuko's Namida
*Added Beuchi's Mod
*Updated simplistiC's difficulty
*Added Agent Spins Mod
*Added Astom's Mod
*Added CDFA's Fixes

03/20/10
*Added Killers Difficulty
*Added Shulin's fixes
*Added Sonny's fixes
*Added xierbaliti's hit sound fixes

03/22/10
*Added gens fixes

I got 16 985 as the offset
The BPM seems fine

Star'd

hmm

first
place this as background

[Naite Iru]
00:16:531(*) place a hitcircle with clap here
place a clap sound on every hitcircle that that has also a clap in the song

00:32:000(*) start mapping on vocals here

[Eyedrops]
looks alot like Naite Iru
try different patterns

i will mod again when u applied these few mods

>my diff so far<
Download: Mimu - Tears (AtemiskKun) [x3ns0r's Tears].osu

General:

- Timing sounds off to me... I would try to get a timing by myself of this map if i were good at it... Lol
- Why is naite iru snapped to 1/4 and eye drops and x3nsor's to 1/6?
- Im going to suppose that naite ire and eye drops were made by the same person so... Why the dont have the same break timers? -__-
- Im going to suppose that eye drops and x3nsor's difficult is not done yet so... Either map the whole song, or cut the mp3
- I can see some slight spacing problems in all the difficulties. Not worth mentioning them unless you want them to be perfect. Of course, i have already considered the obvious jumps before saying this.

Naite iru:

- 00:18:640 (9,10,1,2,3,4) - Dont make them so chaotic please
- 00:33:171 (2) - Kinda too unexpected for the easiest difficulty, use distance snap here please
- 00:42:078 (1) - Move it farther away from previous circle
- 00:49:578 (10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6) - sounds horrible, dont really know to what they are snapped
- 01:18:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Quite horrible pattern

Eye drops:

- 00:15:578 (1) - >_>.... no comments here, but seriously?
- 00:18:860 (1) - This mega huge jump is kinda too uncalled for... maybe make it a simple jump instead of a mega huge one Lol
- 00:49:331 (1) - Okay... im starting to feel that you are just trying to cheat AImod by using new combos... And i dont like it >=o


x3nsor's:

No big problems here, and most of them are not worth mentioning it except for a few such as

- 00:10:187 (2) - This jump is too much, i would forgive it if i were to see more of these kinds of jumps in the map, but since i dont...
- 00:13:703 (1) - Extend it to the next red tick please

Storyboard:

- Storyboard is kinda weird... I dont understand your storyboard at all, Also the image you are using is... Sighs, if i were you i would of just crop the image
- 01:15:828 - No background here? Please note that not everyone is willing to download a map with video neither to play maps with video. And im one of those people

[EyeDrops]
00:18:859 (1) - Too far from the previous note.
00:19:093 (x) - Add a note here
00:21:203 (x) - ^
00:21:906 (x) - ^
00:24:953 (x) - ^
00:26:594 (x) - ^
00:28:469 (x) - Feels empty.
00:34:563 (5,6) - Move these to 00:34:329 respectively, make sure you get the spacing right.
00:35:735 (10,11) - Move these to 00:35:970 respectively, make sure you get the spacing right.
00:35:970 (10) - New combo
00:36:673 (1) - Move this to 00:36:439, make sure you get the spacing right.
00:36:439 (1) - Remove new combo
00:39:251 (3) - New combo
00:39:954 (x) - Add a note here
00:40:892 (x) - ^
00:41:830 (x) - ^
00:43:705 (x) - ^
00:43:939 (x) - ^
00:44:408 (8,9) - Change this set into a slider
00:46:049 (1) - End this spinner on 00:46:986
00:48:393 (5) - Overmapped, remove this note
00:49:330 (1) - Too far from the previous note
00:49:330 (1) - Remove new combo
00:49:565 (x) - Add a note here
00:49:799 (3,4) - Overmapped, remove these notes
00:50:268 (5) - New combo
00:52:377 (x) - Add a note here
00:52:612 (9,10) - Overmapped, remove these notes
00:55:190 (2) - Move this to 00:55:424
00:55:659 (3) - Fix spacing
00:55:893 (4) - Overmapped, remove this note
00:57:065 (x) - Add a note here
00:57:300 (6) - Remove this
00:57:534 (8,9) - Change this set into a slider, and then make it a new combo
00:58:237 (2) - Remove this note
00:58:472 (3) - Move this to 00:58:706
00:59:643 (1) - This slider doesn't synch with anything, it seems.
It ends too suddenly too.

[Naite Iru]
00:06:202 (1,2) - Spacing?
00:14:405 (3) - Too close to the previous note
00:21:202 (4) - New combo
00:21:905 (6) - Too close to the previous note
00:40:420 (3,4,5) - Spacing should be larger between these
00:42:061 (6) - Delete this note
00:48:623 (4) - Too close to the previous note
00:56:123 (4) - Too close to the previous note
00:59:405 (1,2,3) - Spacing should be larger between these
01:09:483 (1,2) - Spacing should be larger between these
01:10:420 (3,4) - ^
01:12:295 (6,7) - ^
I'll stop here for now, there's still many spacing mistakes that could've been easily avoided


Examples of correct spacings, note how the notes are placed on the timeline:



Example of incorrect spacings:


Please review your map.

Ok lets get started, some notes you should remember:

• 
  -Most players on osu! dislike small circles, so the smallest circle size i suggest you use is Normal
  -You should stick with one constant distant spacing in a combo. For example, if you have 8 circles in a combo, they should all be the same distance apart (Use Distance snap + smallest grid size) (When you get more experienced in mapping, you can slightly bend this rule and use different spacings)
  -The distance spacing from an end of a combo to a start of a combo can follow distance spacing, but does not necessarily. It's up to you to decide what makes it more fun
  -For easier difficulties, when you use a spinner, it would be better to leave at least 2 white ticks gap to let the player recover on easy difficulties. For normal 1 white tick is fine. For Hard and Insane, go wild xD but keep it rankable
  -Also, don't put a ridiculously short spinner.. Be sure that the AI gets at least 2000 points on its spin

[EyeDrops]
Suggested difficulty settings

• 
  -HP Drain = 1~3
  -Circle Size = Largest
  -Overall Diff = 1~3
  -Distance Snap = 1.0x
  -Slider Velocity = 1.2

For an easy difficulty, this is way too hard. Its so hard i have to emphasis this point. You could either: rename it to normal, or make it easier. Since x3ns0r seems to be doing a Normal, then i suggest making it easier
Important:

• 
  -You don't have to add a circle to every single distinct sound you hear. For example, 00:02:497 (1,2,3,4) - this part is fine, however 00:04:137 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - is much too hard for easy (in my opinion). I would suggest deleting all the circles on red ticks, and leaving the white ones
  -Try getting rid of most of the circles on the red ticks, though you can leave some in. If you really must have a whole line of circles, replace it with a 1/2repeating slider
  -Combo's on easy diff usually do not exceed 8 (for me anyway)
  -Finish the song off lol
  -Don't draw tear drop shapes with circles lol 00:33:903 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - .... If you really must draw teardrops, do it with a slider lol

[Naite Iru]
Suggested Difficulty Settings:

• -Circle Size: Normal, or 1 bigger than normal
  HP Drain: 6
  OD: 7
  Slider Velocity: 1.6
  Distance Snap: 1.0x

This difficulty is much better than EyeDrops, since it's spacing is kind of consistent. For Hard, you could use more circles if you wish since the difficulty is still only around 4. Suitable Difficulties for Hard range from 4.5~5.0. Don't make it too hard though. You can use 1/4snap (Blue ticks) too for triples. They are nice to listen to and fun to play if done correctly. Do not over use them though.

I'll do actual modding and stuff when all the spacing is fixed

Try an offset of 2519

The .osb file says something about Tears.png, yet I don't see anything in the song folder. If you are going to abandon storyboard please delete the .osb file.

I'll mod the individual difficulties later after you fix offset.

Will mod after NoHItter's mod.

Better do that offset fix because it's also the same that I got the last time I modded your map.

Hi

[EyeDrops]
1) This diff need more hitsound
2) Disable the countdown please (Stroyboarding -> Unmark the Enable Countdown)

[Naite Iru]
1) This diff need more hitsound
2) Disable the countdown please (Stroyboarding -> Unmark the Enable Countdown)
01:00:622 (B) - The breaks are too short, remove it?
01:04:372 (B) - ^
01:08:122 (B) - ^

[x3ns0r's Namidaga Tomaranai]
Move all object to previous white tick

GREAT SONG
STAR

alright here is v2 of my diff

Download: Mimu - Tears (AtemiskKun) [x3ns0r's Namidaga Tomaranai].osu

also

here is a fixed OSB cuz your not using any SBing (emptied it)

Download: Mimu - Tears (AtemiskKun).osb

[General]
Use more hitsounds >_>

[EyeDrops]
Circle size -1
00:41:358 (4) - a little too close to 3
00:41:523 (5,6) - stacked wrong
00:42:024 (7) - just a suggestion, make the slider a bit longer so that it fits the music
00:49:422 (1,2) - too far from 7
00:51:933 (8) - stacked wrong
00:57:806 > 01:00:589 - err, just saying, but it's kinda hard even on an easy diff

[Naite Iru]
Circle size -1

well that's it
beautiful song, too :3

here's an example of what i would do in easy. You don;t have to follow it exactly, but something similar should make a good difficulty

Download: Mimu - Tears (AtemiskKun) [example].osu

since u insist...not done yet heres a star for now

edit: doneeeeeeee oh and unzip then put in folder :3
edit2: should be fine now.

Download: muted.zip

Download: Mimu - Tears (AtemiskKun) [test].osu

irc modded.

star'd

delete osb file in folder
use ctrl+shift+A to check for spacing errors
add x3ns0r and simplistiC to tags on all difficulties (and show on map details which map simplistiC created?)

Eyedrops:
I would go through and see where you can add some more notes which sound good
00:04:140 (5) - add note
00:04:843 (7) - add note
00:05:312 (10) - ^
00:05:546 (11) - ^
00:09:296 (4) - ^
00:14:453 (8) - ^
00:18:437 (4,5,1) - spacing
00:22:187 - map something here
00:28:046 (11) - add note
00:38:593 (1) - ^
00:38:828 (2) - ^
00:39:296 (4) - delete
00:40:937 (3,4) - spacing
00:41:640 (5,6,7) - spacing
00:48:671 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - spacing
00:55:703 (3,4) - spacing
00:57:578 (7,1) - spacing

Naite Iru:
I don't think I need to point out all the spacing errors (just check on ctrl+shift+A and try to fix everything listed there..distance snap can help too)
00:38:593 (1) - extend by 1/2
00:46:093 (1) - extend by 1/2
00:53:593 (1) - extend by 1/2
01:23:593 (1) - extend by 1/2
01:38:593 (1) - extend by 1/2

x3ns0r:
remove countdown like others
00:12:343 (4,5,6,7) - spacing
00:20:781 (1,3) - align
00:25:000 (5) - new combo
00:26:406 (1) - remove new combo
00:27:109 (2) - stack on the endpoint of 1 and move rest of combo around
00:36:171 (4) - start on nearest red tick, shorten by 1/4 and add a note at 00:36:484
00:43:984 (1) - remove new combo
00:49:609 (1) - remove new combo
00:50:312 (12) - new combo
00:51:718 (1) - remove new combo
00:53:125 (4,5,6) - make the line straight
00:56:406 (5,6,7,8) - spacing
break is too long for a song of this length..map some of it
01:19:375 (1) - remove new combo
01:20:078 (3) - new combo
01:27:578 (6) - new combo

Chi no Namida:
00:42:578 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - odd spacing?

*star*

OK, I fix Eyedrops diff, hope it can help you.

I quit like the song, map seems still need lots of works, but I hope you wont give it up, and get this rank

Star

Download: Mimu - Tears (AtemiskKun) [EyeDrops fix].osu

really good, a few things though

chi no namida

00:42:578 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - spacing?

naite iru

00:54:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - space 4 5 and 6 further away from 1 2 and 3

eyedrops

this is WAY too hard for an easy difficulty. and the spacing is further than in naite iru. this needs some fixing.

its star-worthy though!

star

Only following the syllables instead of the whole beat makes it kinda boring. Make it blend more with the beat of the song and add more hit sounds and it'll be more fun.

[EyeDrops]
Add hitsounds~
00:04:843 (4) - shorten
(00:05:546 (x) - add a beat)
00:14:687 (3,4) - move back to the red tick (j twice)
00:14:687 (4) - remove the repeat
00:27:109 (6) - spacing
(00:27:578 (7) - align with 6)

[x3ns0r's Namida Ga Tomaranai]
00:12:812 (6) - remove grid snap and make it look neater.
00:16:093 (5) - This slider (and the others like it) look ugly. D:
00:19:375 (6) - spacing
00:31:796 (3) - I don't like where this is placed D:
00:32:500 (4) - spacing
00:36:093 (4) - move back to the white, shorten and repeat.
00:36:171 (4) - spacing
00:36:953 (5) - spacing
00:48:437 (6,3,4) - spacing
00:56:640 (6,7,8) - spacing
00:48:437 (6) - spacing
00:56:640 (6) - spacing
01:00:625 - What's with this huge break? Map it. D:

[Naite Iru]
Add hitsounds~
Fix the patterns AIMod shows as spacing errors.
Maybe like this: Click
00:49:375 (5) - Move it on top of the 3 after fixing the pattern spacing.
01:38:593 (1) - shorten to 01:39:531.

[Chi no Namida]
00:19:140 (11) - move on top of 9
00:26:640 (11) - same again move on top of 9
00:43:281 (4) - spacing
00:43:983 (3) - spacing

Nice map.

Fix the patterns AIMod shows as spacing errors.

These were placed without the distance snap purposely to reduce the clutter of closely places circles in that area, which caused the area to become too busy and annoyingly block the sight of the next note. If you play map you will see that they are well placed to be easily visible and are no trouble to reach despite whatever AIMod might say.

00:49:375 (5) - Move it on top of the 3 after fixing the pattern spacing.

2 notes stacked directly over each other, even after a short amount of time as in this is something I refuse to do in a beatmap, it obscures the vision on the notes making a first play through of a map frustrating, reducing the interest in a repeat play. Add to the fact I don't agree with changing the notes AIMod says are in the wrong place, this mod becomes unnecessary

01:38:593 (1) - shorten to 01:39:531.

This would make the spin a black sheep, it would differ the spin time and ending note compared to all the other spinners in the beatmap. If the original MP3 is ever restored and I continue to map this song, it would be completely out of place.

from a person thats helping me complete it

general
offest=2494

James2250 wrote:

add x3ns0r and simplistiC to tags on all difficulties (and show on map details which map simplistiC created?)

EyeDrops

Look my hitsound suggestion first

1.you should add clap in rhythm

2.Use a silent "soft-sliderslide.wav" will be better imo

[00:17:96] clap
[00:19:84] remove all the slider's whistle
[00:21:71] clap
[00:24:53] no clap on slider's end
[00:25:46] add a circle and clap
[00:29:21] clap here
[00:46:32] ^
[00:46:56] ^
[00:53:59] ^
[00:55:46] ^
[01:16:32] ^
[01:16:56] ^
[01:17;96] ^
[01:23:59] add a circle and clap
[01:25:46] add clap

`````````````````````````````````````````````

[00:14:68] (3,4) there have no melody for set notes . i gave you 2 ways to sovle the problem

• way 1 : move (3,4) to [00:14:45] (3) and [00:14:68] (4) . add finish on slider4's end
  
  way 2 : move (3,4) to [00:14:45] (3) and [00:14:68] (4) . and stop slider at [00:14:92]

[01:30:85] start the spinner at [01:30:39]. stop at [01:32:50] and add finish

Naite Iru

Use a silent "soft-sliderslide.wav" will be better imo

[00:06:95] move 2 grids doen
[00:13:75] (1,2,3) use a "Flip Vertically" on the three notes and fix spacing after you do it
[00:30:15] too short break, remove
[00:51:01] (1,2,3) spacing is wrong
[01:00:62] too short break, remove
[01:04:37] ^
[01:30:15] ^
[01:36:25] new combo or fix spacing
[01:38:59] spinner stop at [01:39:53]
[01:29:92] stop kiai here

x3ns0r's Namida Ga Tomaranai

[00:27:10] (2,3,4) move them 4 grids right
[00:31:32] (1,2) cover them on slider(3)'s end (you can do it better
[00:34:37] move 1 grid up and 1 grid right
[00:36:01] add a note
[00:36:17] start at [00:36;25] , and stop at [00:36:48]
[00:49:60] (1,2) move 1 grid right
[00:56:64] new combo or fix spacing
[01:20:70] (3,5) make Parallel
[01:28:51] move right a bit for better cover

Hitsound mod
[00:04:60] (3,4,5,6,7) spacing need be set all the same
[00:12:57] (5,6,7) bad spacing ,fix it
[00:17:96] clap
[00:21:71] ^
[00:23:59] ^
[00:25:46] ^
[00:27:10] (2,3,4) and add clap
[00:27:65] add finish
[00:31:32] clap
[00:31:56] ^
[00:47:96] ^
[00:49:60] ^
[00:49:84] ^
[00:51:71] ^
[00:53:59] ^
[00:55:46] ^
[01:25:46] ^

Chi no Namida

[00:06:25] add whistle?
[00:13:75] ^
[00:26:64] maybe move 8 grids down?
so good placement and hitsound

star

[General]

1. osb.file seem useless, you should delete it
2. Naite Iru and x3ns0r's Namida Ga Tomaranai had turned on countdown while other 2 diff. didn't, you'd better unify them
3. Are you sure NicoNicoDouga is the source, in most case I saw mapper put it as artist. I know nothing about NicoNicoDouga, just wonder.
4. I suggest you use a blank soft-sliderslide sound,, it sounds too loud in such a soft song

[EyeDrops]

• The clao you used not so good, this song is easy to add clap, just to hear where the song has clap then add at same place, for example:

1. 01:16:328 (9,10) - Add clap
   and other same places you could add clap, I didn't point out them all
2. 01:24:531 (1) - A note here instead

[Naite Iru]

1. 01:23:593 (S) - Too short spinner, auto play should at least could get 2000 bonus

Just take a general look at it, I will do a full mod later days
star for now

here ya go

Download: Mimu - Tears (AtemiskKun) [x3ns0r's Namida Ga Tomaranai].osu

offset needs to be the same on all difficulties (its 2494 on all but x3ns0r's
you don't need comma's in tags just put a space between each one

Eyedrops:
I have to agree that this difficulty could use some hitsound work with claps, try to make a better rhythm out of them
00:03:431 (1) - remove new combo
00:24:994 (2,3,4) - spacing
00:45:619 (10,11) - align
01:05:540 (7) - new combo
01:07:415 (5,6) - align
01:18:431 (1) - remove new combo
01:20:306 (7) - new combo
01:25:931 (1) - remove new combo
01:27:572 (6) - new combo

x3nsor:
add whistles to some of the beginning parts
make tags the same as the other difficulty
00:43:978 (1) - remove new combo
01:06:244 (2) - extend by 1/1

Naite Iru:
in general increase the spacing by alot and redo the map (it just doesn't look good with all the notes being so close together)
00:47:494 (2,3,4) - spacing
go through and try and make the claps sound more organized (and remove some)
01:38:587 (1) - end at 01:39:525

simplistiC:
might sound better with some more whistles at the start
00:42:572 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - spacing

(I would move this to pending by now)
ok school for me now~

[Naite Iru]

in general increase the spacing by alot and redo the map (it just doesn't look good with all the notes being so close together)

Most of the notes follow the distance snap of 1/4 except a few exceptions I used to clear up notes that couldn't be seen properly at this default spacing. I don't profess any great skill at this game, but I have had no troubles following the spacing or order used in this beatmap. That, more than anything, says to me it's fine.

00:47:494 (2,3,4) - spacing

I disagree about the spacing, but it has brought to my attention the timing issue between 3 and 4 for this combo. Soon to be fixed.

go through and try and make the claps sound more organized (and remove some)

This would be an area Atemisk is working on, I agree with you on this.

01:38:587 (1) - end at 01:39:525

This would make the spin a black sheep, it would differ the spin time and ending note compared to all the other spinners in the beatmap. If the original MP3 is ever restored and I continue to map this song, it would be completely out of place.

Looks like I'm repeating myself >.> basicly the spinners all follow a theme of running the same amount of time because they only turn up when a certain sound is used in the song. I would only change the length of the spinner if for some unknown reason the length of the sound it follows was different. It's not. The spinner is fine.

Delete all commas from tags. The tags should be separated by spaces.

What's the point of having custom countdown images while the map hasn't enabled the countdown in any difficulty? Please delete "count2.png" and "count3.png" from the folder and do full submit.

[EyeDrops]

Why no kiai mode enabled?

00:25:462 (4,5) - Spacing.
00:42:337 (7) - Expand this slider by 1/4. It sounds better.

[x3ns0r]

Poverty of hitsounds~

00:14:915 (4) - Move a bit right.
01:06:244 (2) - End it on the next white tick.
01:21:947 (1) - ^
01:29:447 (8) - End it on the previous white tick and map the remaining time of the refrain.

[Naite Iru]

Could you map the last 3 seconds of the map?

[01:32:025] - End the kiai here?
01:24:994 (2,3,4) - It's a spacing issue. Distance spacing in 01:24:525 (1,2) is the same, but the distance in the timeline is different.

[Simplistic]

00:26:634 (11) - Hidden slider repeat. I prefer Edit -> Flip Vertically.

Nice. I like this map. Call me back for a proto-bubble when fixed.

[Naite Iru]

Could you map the last 3 seconds of the map?

Done. Good idea ;D looks alot better and will probly reduce the "slider end at" comments

[01:32:025] - End the kiai here?

A job for Atemisk.

01:24:994 (2,3,4) - It's a spacing issue. Distance spacing in 01:24:525 (1,2) is the same, but the distance in the timeline is different.

I think I already fixed this earlier.

EyeDrops
00:05:540 (7) - move it a square down
00:11:634 (5) - this slider'0s shape is pretty ugly... change it, please...
00:21:244 (4,5) - move them 8 squares down and some squares right
00:24:994 (2,3) - move 1st a square left and a square down, move 2nd and 3rd a square down...
00:25:931 (5,6,7,8) - ...and move these ones 2 squares up and 11-12 squares right!
00:42:337 (7) - slider ugly to listen. Change its shape, make it shorter and set 2-3 repeats on it! (or maybe change it wit a new-combo beat or two.)
00:50:306 (7) - new combo
01:02:962 (3) - move it a square up and 3 squares right
01:12:806 (6) - new combo
01:25:931 (1,3) - new combo on 3rd, remove previous new combo
01:30:853 (spinner) - start it on 01:30:619 and end it on 01:32:025

x3ns0r's Namida Ga Tomaranai
01:25:462 (3) - remove claps from this slider's 1st and 3rd repeat

Naite Iru
00:23:587 (spinner) finish instead of clap here

simplicistiC's Chi no Namida
00:14:681 (3) - whistle here
01:43:040 (spinner) - silence its end!

You had better to check AIMod's suggestions about all the modes to see good improvements... (just press Ctrl+Shift+A on Edit mode)
I can see anyway potential on this map, so let's star it!

Boom. <3

An awesome *cough**not so awesome but oh well**cough* diff~

And I changed the spinner a bit, hope you like it.

Download: Fuuko's Stuff.rar

[Eyedrops]
00:44:447 (3) - Waayyyy too near to previous note.

[Naite Iru]
00:30:384 - Remove break?
01:00:853 - ^
01:04:486 - ^
01:30:970 - Kiai in a break looks very weird. End kiai at 01:30:150.


Starred...?

You messed again. ):



Download: Mimu - Tears (AtemiskKun) [Fuuko's Tears].osu

Hi hi!

Here are some suggestions for your map~ You don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Source: NicoNicoDouga? Really? Wow, it doesn't sound like the typical NicoNicoDouga song...
- Tags: Vocaloid? I really don't think this song has something related to Vocaloid...
- All the difficulties need to have the same combocolours. Also, I don't think you need that many colours, some are hard to see sometimes because of the backgound (specially grey and white)

~EyeDrops~
- Decrease HP Drain Rate a bit.

00:04:134 (5) - Fix Spacing.
00:06:244 (1) - ^
00:14:447 (3) - ^
00:24:994 (2) - ^
00:25:931 (5) - ^
00:26:869 (6) - New Combo. 8 is a bit too long for easy diffs.
00:27:103 (7) - Fix Spacing.
00:44:447 (3) - ^
01:02:494 (2,3) - ^
01:13:744 (2) - ^
01:24:290 (6) - New Combo.
01:25:931 (1) - Delete New Combo.

~x3ns0r's Namida Ga Tomaranai~
- Decrease Hp Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty and increase Circle Size, this diff looks harder than the "harder" one ._.
- Why 1/6 Snap Divisor? Resnap to 1/4.

00:14:915 (4) - Move it between (2,3)?
00:36:244 (4) - Fix spacing.
00:49:134 (8) - ^
01:06:244 (2) - ^?
01:29:447 (8) - Compare the spacing between (6,7), it makes (8) feel to be later, even having a correct spacing

~Naite Iru~
- This diff abuses of copypaste imo, you have the same pattern a lot of times along the map. Also, almost all the patterns on the map are going in an only direction (up-down). Try to be more creative and add more patters to make the map funner

00:02:494 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - And this is the pattern I said before... owo
00:38:587 (1) - This spinner is too short, even being "legal". I'd delete it :/
00:53:587 (1) - ^
01:08:587 (1) - ^
01:23:587 (1) - ^

~Fuuko's Tears~
- Wtf? Why all those Timing Sections? e_e Okay nvm... e_e'
- Resnap all notes, AIMod gave a lot of unsnapped notes~

01:02:493 (x) - Add a note here? Or add a repeat to (2).
01:06:712 (x) - Add a note here? Or add a repeat to (3).
01:09:994 (1,2,3,4,5) - Add a note after all these, or add a repeat, if feels empty oxo
01:15:150 (1) - Uhhh... Ninja spinner imo, delete it? oxo

~simplistiC's Chi no Namida~
- I'd decrease HP Drain Rate a bit, in the slow down section the HPbar goes down to the middle on Auto mode :/

00:18:665 (10,11) - Those are a bit hard to see. Move them away?
00:34:134 (6,7) - Uhhh.. I'm not sure if this is legal or not... but it's really confusing @w@...
00:35:072 (1,2,3,4) - Personally I hate this part, it feels like a random huge spacing, specially with the pattern after it.
00:42:572 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Really really ugly spacing :/
01:35:540 (1) - Ninja Spinner... Delete it?
01:43:040 (1) - ^

Good Luck!! *star*

[quote="Beuchi-chan"]~All Diffs~
- Source: NicoNicoDouga? Really? Wow, it doesn't sound like the typical NicoNicoDouga song... Do you hate em, Beu? =o I pretty much like most things they do.
- Tags: Vocaloid? I really don't think this song has something related to Vocaloid... Indeed, Mimu is the username of a singer on the Japanese nicovideo website. I love her voice so much.

- All the difficulties need to have the same combocolours. Also, I don't think you need that many colours, some are hard to see sometimes because of the backgound (specially grey and white) I don't think it's that bad, except for the dark blue, which seems pretty hard to read sometimes.



~Fuuko's Tears~
- Wtf? Why all those Timing Sections? e_e Okay nvm... e_e' Yeah, Atemis messed em up. ;_;'
- Resnap all notes, AIMod gave a lot of unsnapped notes~ I don't see any unsnapped note. o_o Maybe it was because you had to change the red sections to green? ):
01:02:493 (x) - Add a note here? Or add a repeat to (2). You forgot to make this 0,5x, blame it on Atemis who messed it. XD
01:06:712 (x) - Add a note here? Or add a repeat to (3). ^
01:09:994 (1,2,3,4,5) - Add a note after all these, or add a repeat, if feels empty oxo ^
01:15:150 (1) - Uhhh... Ninja spinner imo, delete it? oxo I agree with it being ninja. XD But a spinner really fits there. ): And auto can 2000 it, so yeah...

with changes. dont change stuff without asking me D; i wont forget about my diff and if i do, u can always remind me to check...just not every single post.

Download: Mimu - Tears (AtemiskKun) [simplistiC's Chi no Namida].osu

EyeDrops
00:25:931 (5,1,2,3) - Incorrect spacing

x3ns0r
Fine

Naite Eru
01:26:869 (5,6) - Also incorrect spacing

Fuuko's Tears
00:16:322 (1,2) - This jump is really quite unintuitive :

simplistiC
00:35:072 (1,2,3) - Unintuitive and really quite pointless spacing change
00:36:712 (4) - ^
00:37:650 (4) - ^
01:07:884 (1,2,3) - ^
01:09:759 (1,2,3) - ^
You can tell I really don't like these types of jumps.

[Naite Iru]

This diff abuses of copypaste imo, you have the same pattern a lot of times along the map. Also, almost all the patterns on the map are going in an only direction (up-down). Try to be more creative and add more patters to make the map funner

Copy paste wasn't used a single time, the recurring combos was a theme I decided to use to keep the song familiar from start to finish to make the beatmaps overall difficulty easier. As for using the downwards direction for the majority of the map, the songs called Tears, there's a girl holding an umbrella in the rain for a background, the hit circles have a water drop in them. I decided to play on this theme by having the notes cascade downwards as if they were rain as well. If you think that makes things too repetitive, that's fine. I can't please everyone so I generally aim to please myself and let like-minded people enjoy my work.

00:02:494 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - And this is the pattern I said before... owo

Intentional, as I said before. I like the familiarity it brings throughout the song when it appears. It's repeated in the same way the notes they follow are repeated in the song. Sure it's used a lot but this wasn't intended as a hard difficulty. I like relaxed, easy to follow and clearly placed beatmaps myself and that's what I've mapped.

00:38:587 (1) - This spinner is too short, even being "legal". I'd delete it :/
00:53:587 (1) - ^
01:08:587 (1) - ^
01:23:587 (1) - ^

I wouldn't. They follow the music for their placement and length. They are hittable. They add a bit of difficulty in an otherwise simplistic beatmap. Nuff said.

01:26:869 (5,6) - Also incorrect spacing

I hate the fact that I had to go back on what I originally said about never overlapping notes like this, but I see nothing wrong with the spacing. Its distance snapped for crying out loud. It is slightly obscured by the previous note though, so I decided to make it a new combo to help make it visible.

Hi

In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[General]
-Mimu - Tears (AtemiskKun) [Fuuko's Tears].osb u don't use this... kill it :3
-Resize u BG to 1024x768

Nice star :3

EyeDrops:
General: Fix spacing. Just go through the song and double-check your spacing. There's no giant mistakes, but it's all just little stuff that makes the map look better ~.
00:42:337 (1) - Add clap on second repeat (Suggestion.)
01:30:619 (1) - Add finish

Naite Iru:
General: This might also need a spacing double-check.

x3ns0r's:
General: I don't like the drumroll sounds in the beginning when there are sliders ;-;.
This is pretty much going to be one of my infamous clap mods since there's nothing else I see wrong ~.
00:19:603 (1,2) - Add claps
00:35:306 (2) - Add clap
00:39:994 (1) - ^
00:41:869 (5) - ^
01:24:994 (2) - ^
01:27:103 (5) - ^

Fuuko:
ilu

simplistiC:
01:03:900 (2) - Boring slider.
01:10:462 (1) - ^
01:43:040 (1) - Uneccesary spinner

Overall pretty sexy map. Star

I would have kiai time the same on all the difficulties but at least make it the same on the ones you created

Eyedrops:
go on shift+ctrl+A and fix *Everything* on this difficulty (for an easy there really shouldn't be any problems with AIMod)
personally I would just go through the entire map with 1.0 distance snap (or whatever you want to use) and make sure it allllll makes sense
00:30:853 (2) - move left to align with 1 (then align rest of combo)
00:38:587 (8) - move left to align with 7
(if I mod this again after for pubble I would expect to see AIMod say this map has no problems)

Naite Iru:
again not a fan of spacing on this one...I guess its correct but its mapped to a 0.5 distance snap and it just makes it play strangely...can't you redo it with a highly distance snap?
01:38:587 (1) - shorten by 1/2

x3ns0r:
00:22:650 (3) - move down 1 tiny grid
00:36:009 (4) - add note
I still think it could use some more hitsounds

Fuuko:
00:31:790 (3) - new combo
00:46:790 (3) - new combo
01:07:181 (4) - shorten by 1/2

simplistiC:
looks fine

EvilOonsta wrote:

They are hittable.

Hittable doesn't mean rankable. Also, you said you made a relaxing map, right? those sudden spinners ruin the relaxing ambient =(, but whatever x3

Oh btw, if you made the diff, you should put your name on the diff as well, and tell AtemiskKun to put your name on the Tags :3

General:

-- Add "Kagamine Rin" and "Ren" to tags. And "EvilOonsta" if he/she made a diff.
-- Delete .osb and full submit.

EyeDrops:

-- Your combo colors look all the same imo you only need 1, 2 and 5. (Maybe 4 to)

00:05:540 (7,1) - Spacing too close.
00:08:587 (3) - New combo?
00:08:587 (3,1) - Spacing too close.
00:14:447 (3) - Move this so it's directly beneath 00:13:744 (1) -
00:18:900 (1,2) - Spacing too close.
00:30:853 (2,3,4) - Align properly.
00:32:025 (1,2,3) - Spacing is too close, space it properly.
00:36:244 (5,6,7) - ^
00:46:087 (6,1) - Spacing...
01:14:681 (3,1) - Spacing! (Too close)
01:21:947 (3,4) - ^

Well yeah the spacing is all over, admittedly some are more noticeable then others but there are a lot of anti-jumps here. Go over and recheck your spacing, use a consistent distance snap what you like or make the spacing more intuitive ^_^

Naite Iru

-- Difficulty name doesn't make much sense.
-- James suggestion of using a higher distance snap would work well imo, considering the easier difficulty had higher spacing!

00:02:494 to 00:14:915 - Is all clustered in the center of the map, maybe spread it out a little?
00:37:650 (x) - Note?
00:38:119 (x) - ^
00:45:150 (x) - ^
00:45:619 (x) - ^ - The sudden gap before the short spinner doesn't flow too well imo.
00:52:650 (x) - ^
00:53:119 (x) - ^ - You get the idea.
01:00:619 -- Empty, spinner might work well.
01:14:447 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:30:150 to 01:32:025 -- Empty, it feels like something should be here (spinner?), if you want a break then put in a break.
01:36:244 (7) - New combo.

Overall spacing is low... it plays kind of clustered, I'd recommend increasing it a little especially so the 1/2's don't overlap. Also those short spinners are rather sudden and nothing leading up to them, suggested new notes are just suggestions, ^_^

x3ns0r:

00:13:744 (1) - Use the custom slide.
01:09:290 (1) - Lower the volume on this spinner.

You could probably use a custom slide in the soft sections, other than that the map is good.

Fuuko's Tears:

00:31:790 (3) - New combo.
00:46:790 (3) - New combo. (Repeating mods ftw!)

Really nice difficulty.

simplistiC's Chi no Namida:

-- Difficulty name??

00:22:650 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:35:072 (1,2,3,4) - Jump here wasn't intuitive.
01:24:525 (4) - New combo?
01:43:040 (1) - Silence all of the spinner.

Good map set overall, though I did repeat some of the things that have already been said lol... ~ Star

Heres my difficulty... WHAT THE F***!? +27!? how the hell do you do that so fast!?

Download: Mimu - Tears (AtemiskKun) [TheKillerhjkhjk no Namida].osu

Hello

Eyedrops

• 00:38:587 (8) None at the middle
  00:43:744 (2) Clap
  00:46:087 (6) Distance Problem & 1 Gird left

Naite Iru

• 00:08:822 (2) None
  00:29:447 (3) Clap at middle?
  00:40:931 (4) Whistle
  01:30:150 (x) Insert Spinner?

x3n0r

1. IMO, Lack of hit sound
   
   00:32:494 (4) Clap?
   00:49:603 (1,2) Distance
   00:53:587 (6) 1 left, 1 down

Fuuko

• 00:30:384 (4) Symmetry
  00:32:962 (5) Whistle
  01:04:134 (5) 1 down, 1 left

simplistiC

• 01:08:353 (3) Whistle

Star~

Okay then, Proto Bubble

i really like this song~

starstarstar

try using this ^.^ I'll mod it later