1. Easy (2.49 stars, 157 notes)
2. Hard (4.44 stars, 397 notes)
3. MoNky's Flag! (4.97 stars, 505 notes)
4. Normal (3.89 stars, 388 notes)
5. Sallad's Flag! (4.8 stars, 366 notes)
6. Shuna's Flag! (4.95 stars, 443 notes)

noneed wrote:

So, finally done!

-Fix Timing
-Use Distance Snap
-Maybe, remake it

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Uhhh... finish Hard ._.
- Delete these unneeded files: The 3 Album art images, Folder image and desktop file.(X)
- You have 2 .osb files, please delete the one you don't need.(X)
- Delete the "( )" on Source.(X)
- Delete "fifa world cup" from Tags, they're already on Source so they're unnecesary.(X)
- Add Epilepsy Warning to this map (Go to Song Setup - Storyboarding - Display Epilepsy Warning)(X)
- Use 1/4 Beat Snap divisor for this song and resnap all the notes.(X)
Timing:
BPM: 152,00. (,03 sounds faster at the end)(X)
Skin:
- Add a hit50 image.(X)
- Delete the shadow of the soccer ball image on the sliderball.png.(X)
Storyboard:
- The max size allowed to Storyboard images is 800x600px. You need to resize every image you're using for the storyboard.(X)
- "glows" and "glows - copia" have a lot of blank space around the image you're using, please crop them, this could cause lag on some people.(X)
- You should really change the "Difficulty by Gonzvlo" thing if you're going to keep that guest diff xP(I was testing That )
(Added Fail-Background )

~Easy~
- Delete the timing sections here: 01:00:454 - 01:14:650 - 01:49:379. If you want them just for changing voluma or hitsound samples, use Inheriting Timing Sections (green)(X)
- Resnap all the notes (Go to Timing - Resnap All Notes).(X)
- Decrease HP Drain a bit.

00:20:978 (2,3) - Fix spacing. (X)
00:21:767 (1) - Make it finish at 00:22:954. (X)
00:30:844 (1) - Delete New Combo. (X)
00:34:001 (1) - ^ (X)
00:39:921 (3) - Looks a bit... messy? Here's a suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8402 (X)
00:56:102 (1) - Fix spacing. (X)
00:57:680 (1) - ^ (X)
00:59:653 (1,1) - Delete New Combo. (X)
01:09:520 (1) - Fix spacing. (X)
01:12:414 (1) - Move 1 tick before and make it end at 01:14:255. (X)
01:22:938 (1) - You don't know where is this slider going when you play. Move the endpoint away, please. (X)
01:41:618 (1) - Move 1 tick before and make it end at 01:43:064. (X)
01:51:352 (x) - Add a note here. (X)

~Normal~
00:10:717 (2) - Fix spacing. (X)
00:14:664 (3) - ^ (X)
00:36:370 (3) - ^ (X)
00:58:470 (3) - ^ (X)
01:05:969 (2,3) - Don't use this kind of jumps on Normal diffs. Fix spacing. (X)
01:07:942 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (X)
01:28:464 (1) - Delete New Combo. (X)
01:57:669 (1) - Shorten it until 02:02:405. (X)
02:06:351 (3,4) - Fix spacing. (X)
02:34:766 (2) - ^ (X)
02:53:019 (4) - Move to white tick. (X)
03:00:419 (1) - Fix spacing. Also delete New Combo. (X)
03:05:944 (1) - Too short spinner. (X)
03:32:428 (7) - I suggest to change this slider to a spinner o.o (X)

~Octopod_Squad Hard~
- Not going to mod it because it has only around 30 seconds mapped, but just two things, use the same timing as the other two diffs and use Distance Snap to place the notes on the map. EDIT: And add a background ._.
(This will probably get deleted , Because Octopod is inactive, Anybody want's to help me with that ? :)
Good luck with this~

(Thank You )

ErufenRito wrote:

El timing....
Mejor usa:
Offset: 221 Bpm: 151,98
Es mucho mejor que el que tienes, y otra cosa... como ya te dije, este map tiene otro timing section uninherited, yo no te puedo ayudar con eso.
Got Offset: 3395 BMP: 152.0 , No Uninherited Timing points

Cuando el timing esta tan malo, no se puede modear nada, asi que mejor arreglalo primero, y con esto quiero decir que busques a alguien que sepa buscar timing bien, no como yo que solo soy un novato en eso. El timing que te di orita es para que tuvieras algo de por momento. (Fixed)
Y otra cosa, tendras que poner tu storyboard alineados con el timing.
Y aun tienes el archivo desktop >_>(Can't Find it)

• Checking...
  1. BPM 152 , Offset 3395 OK!

Gonzvlo wrote:

ErufenRito wrote:

El timing....
Mejor usa:
Offset: 221 Bpm: 151,98
Es mucho mejor que el que tienes, y otra cosa... como ya te dije, este map tiene otro timing section uninherited, yo no te puedo ayudar con eso.
Got Offset: 3395 BMP: 152.0 , No Uninherited Timing points

Cuando el timing esta tan malo, no se puede modear nada, asi que mejor arreglalo primero, y con esto quiero decir que busques a alguien que sepa buscar timing bien, no como yo que solo soy un novato en eso. El timing que te di orita es para que tuvieras algo de por momento. (FIXED)
Y otra cosa, tendras que poner tu storyboard alineados con el timing.
Y aun tienes el archivo desktop >_>(FIXED)

soradg123 wrote:

OSU! Timing Help!

• Checking...
  1. BPM 152 , Offset 3395 OK!

Starred~!

Sallad4ever wrote:

This is my Most Favorite World Cup Song
And your SB is AWESOME

Please let me make a hard diff for this No,sorry =( ,Lol just kidding, sure !
Star for now~

Sallad4ever wrote:

Done

[attachment=0:cdb5c]K'naan - Wavin' Flag (Gonzvlo) [Hard Sallad].osu[/attachment:cdb5c]
Please let me update it myself


VIVA WORLD CUP

wmfchris wrote:

Suggestion: rank it at the same date when World Cup starts? lol That would be kewl
Also it seems the difficulty order is hard>flag>normal>easy, so exchange difficulty name between flag and hard?
Changed Hard to Hard+ , Sallad's Flag stayed as it
[flag]
0:10:105 (2,3,4) Spacing different from the triples later?
1:50:763 (4) seem thi is not in the grid...moreover up 1 grid looks more comfortable.
3:30:237 (5) put it on the y-axis, left 1 grid
Sallad will update this soon
[hard]
0:17:210 (3) spacing, up 1 grid
0:24:315 (2,4) spacing redice 1 grid
1:05:171 (2) left 1 grid
1:27:868 (7) new combo?
2:08:131 (5) 1/2 beat backward?
2:39:513 (4) stright line - right 1 grid?
3:03:394 (3) uniqueness - left 1 grid?
Everything FIXED
other diff ok

curiously ask: you've included all the team in the final? XD What do u mean ?

Star~

Sallad4ever wrote:

My update
Thanks wmfchris you're great

[attachment=0:fb482]K'naan - Wavin' Flag (Gonzvlo) [Sallad's Flag !].osu[/attachment:fb482]

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Wow amazing~
Later I'll mod it~

Ty

JessycaR wrote:

star~~For world cup~~ no reason

DiamondCrash wrote:

JessycaR wrote:

star~~For world cup~~ no reason

This is why the priority system doesn't work.

General;
Suggestion for the skin - change the colour of the spinner approach circle, it's really hard to see. (Fixed)

Easy;
Resnap all objects. (Fixed)
01:31:816 (1,2,1) - For this bit, I suggest you break spacing; put the 1 of each of the combos on the center line. Put the 2 on the very center.
I'm not sure if this is what u mean :

SPOILER

• • 00:53:000 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders
  • 03:30:631 (1) - End this spinner here 03:36:355 (red tick)

• • 02:40:302 (1) - This spinner is unrankable (Auto should get at least 2000 bonus points)
  • 03:36:552 (1) - Delete this circle and end this spinner 03:30:631 (1) here 03:36:355 (red tick)

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[Normal]

• • 00:53:000 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders
  • 03:30:631 (1) - End this spinner here 03:36:355 (red tick)

[Hard+]

• • 02:40:302 (1) - This spinner is unrankable (Auto should get at least 2000 bonus points)
  • 03:36:552 (1) - Delete this circle and end this spinner 03:30:631 (1) here 03:36:355 (red tick)

Dxtr17 wrote:

OMW! This rocks dude... nicely done.... cant wait for it to be ranked...

I Live in South Africa and this will definately go down well in the South African Osu! Community!!!!!
CHEERS!

Dankie!

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- comboburst is too big, resize it so it doesn't exceed 500 px width. (X)
-- Make your hitcircle 128 x 128.(X)
-- Your hit50, hit100 etc, are slightly different sizes, make then the same size.(X)
-- "sliderb" are all different sizes, would probably look better if you made them all the same size.
This Will Get Fixed Soon
-- The Source "FIFA World Cup South Africa 2010 Official Theme Song" is kinda long, maybe just rename it "FIFA World Cup 2010"? (X)
-- Lots of alignment issues, you might want to have a look through and make sure stuff is aligned XD(X)

Easy:

-- Delete the unused inheriting sections after 02:16:026 (X)
-- "Normal" sections are too loud, reduce 1-2 ticks? (X)

00:10:894 (1) - Remove new combo. (X)
00:22:342 (1) - Clap? (following your pattern) (X)
01:04:973 -- Too loud. (X)
01:34:184 (1) - Clap second return? (X)

Normal:

-- Overall volume is too loud, reduce by 1-2 ticks. (X)
-- Preview point. (X)

00:42:276 (4) - Down 1 square. Looks messy otherwise. (X)
01:00:237 -- Too loud. (X)
01:00:237 (1) - Unsilence the return. (X)
02:21:552 (2) - Make the return more visible. (X)
03:30:631 (1) - Remove finish. (X)

Sallad's Flag !

-- Remove the space between "Flag" and "!"
-- Preview point.
00:16:618 (2) - End on 1/1 not 1/8.

Thank You Sallad, Updated(X)

Hard +:

-- Name it either Hard or Insane imo. Still Hard+
-- Preview point. (X)

00:59:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not following music so it plays a bit weird imo. (X)
01:00:237 -- Lower the volume of this inheriting section by 1 or 2 ticks, it's too loud atm. (X)
02:16:026 -- ^ (X)
02:52:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Add volume, there is no reason for these beats to be silent. (X)
03:05:368 (1) - Start this at 03:05:566 and remove a return? (X)
03:30:631 (1) - Remove finish. (X)

Make sure to look out for some alignment issues, and some of those curved sliders are slightly ugly. It doesn't effect gameplay much, so it's up to you whether you fix XD
Fixed All the Alignment Issues , It's totally diferent now , because everything was too messy

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Request Accepted

Easy
00:19:973 (5,6) - move 1 tiny grid right (X)
00:20:763 (7) - move 2 tiny grid right (X)
02:16:026 (2) - remove the timing section here, since it'sused for kiai time OR remove only the kiai time (X)
Normal
01:55:500 (5) - new combo? (X)
03:27:079 (9) - ^ to cut off the combo (X)
Sallad's Flag!
Cool!
Hard+
00:43:658 (5) - this circle seems out of place, fix this (No Change)
Awesome!

Awesome beatmap!
STAR!!

P.S. can i take the insane diff? Why Not ?

blissfulyoshi wrote:

... The tags "coca" "cola" "sponsor." Did Coca-Cola sponsor this map or something? I really doubt that anyone would Coca-Cola or sponsor, so please remove them from the tags since I don't think I recall seeing anything in the map that suggest that these words belong in the tags.
This song is Coca-Cola's song as sponsor for this World Cup
Easy:
Normal mod:
00:34:973 (1,2,3,4) - it looks sort of ugly right now with the sliders not being symmetric Having some thing like the 1 in the picture would be better:

SPOILER

Couldn't make them perfectly symmetric , so I figured out another way to fix it (*)
01:07:342 (1,2,1) - overlapping sliders look terrible, esp if the sliders are not symmetric (X)
01:25:895 (1) - This jump was sort of random (X)
01:44:447 (1,1,1,1) - same as 00:34:973 (1,2,3,4) (*)

Combo mod:
00:36:552 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 00:30:237 (1) (X)
00:39:710 (3) - ^ (X)
00:42:868 (4) - ^ (X)

Timing section mod:
00:09:710 - move back a quarter note (X)
01:00:237 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with no kiai (this is for the change in hitsound type between this and the previous section) (X)

Normal:
Normal mod:
01:57:079 - this break is really randomly placed (the break's start does not follow anything) (X)

Combo mod: (The key to combos is consistency, so I am trying to make the combos consistent based off what I see a majority of your map follows, but you are free to make it consistent in another way
00:30:237 (3) - new combo to make 2 combos 4 whole notes long like the previous few combos (X)
00:36:552 (5) - new combo to make 2 combos 4 whole notes long like combos before the spinner (X)
00:39:710 (3) - ^ (X)
01:46:026 (4) - new combo to make 2 combos 4 whole notes long like the previous few combos (X)
01:52:342 (4) - new combo to make 2 combos 4 whole notes long like combos before the spinner (X)
01:55:500 (5) - ^ (X)
03:23:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - add some new combos to this set (X)

Timing section mod:
00:09:710 - move back a quarter note (X)
01:00:237 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with no kiai (X)
02:16:026 - ^ (X)

Sallad's Flag!: (This diff is really weird with it being the hardest diff but only worth slightly more than Normal)
Normal mod:
01:19:184 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - the back and forth pattern got boring the second time through, so can you think of a different pattern pls
02:34:973 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - seeing the combo a fourth time.... (I guess you can just copy and paste whatever you did the fix the previous suggestion)

Timing section mod:
00:09:908 - There are 2 timing sections at the same place here, so please remove one of them
01:00:138 - just wondering y is this a custom hitsound section when I don't see any custom hitsounds
03:19:184 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with kiai
03:36:552 - unneeded timing section, please remove

Hard+:
Normal mod: (similar to Easy, there are a lot of sliders that need to be made symmetric such as 00:18:000 (1) and 01:25:500 (1), so please fix them) (X)
00:26:289 (4,1) - the partial overlap of these sliders look bad Fixed with new sliders
00:34:579 (7,1) - This shortened spacing is disorienting Fixed with new sliders
01:09:513 (4) - probably will look nicer if it was parallel to 1 (X)
01:52:342 (5) - align with 4 (sort of a nazi thing, but it is noticeable while playing) (X)
02:09:316 (1,2,3,4,5) - the stacking makes this part look pretty bad so lower the stack leniency enough to make this part look nicer (also, stack the ends of sliders directly on top (not a few pixels off) of the next slider) (X)

Timing section mod:
00:09:908 - unneeded timing section, please remove (same hitsound settings as the previous section) (X)
01:00:237 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with no kiai (X)
01:25:500 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with kiai (X)
02:16:026 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with no kiai (X)
02:41:289 - align the end of the kiai section with the end of the corresponding kiai section in normal (you can adjust normal or this diff depending on what you feel is better) (X)
02:53:921 - unneeded timing section, please remove (same hitsound settings as the previous section) (X)

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Nice map and storyboard. I really wish you mapped the easier diffs with lvl 3 grid (tiny). There are a lot of the points where you can see blatant spacing inconsistencies that could have been avoided using a higher lvl grid. Other than that, focus on making the map more aesthetically appealing. Star.

Wow dude,Thanks I think I've fixed all the things that u pointed out

strager wrote:

Storyboard
Cool. =]

The flash at the bottom of the screen needs to be moved up so it aligns with the BG. (X)

Remove letterboxing during breaks. (X)

Skin
Really good skin.

For the spinner, ehh ... It's hard for spinners who spin small to read thier cursor while spinning with that huge thing flying around.
Made some changes here (Cursor.png) I hope u can see it clearly now.
The slider repeats don't look too good. Make them smaller and make the border thicker?
Changes here (Reversearrow.png)

Sallad's Flag!
Your kick sliders are shit. The ones in the middle of longer sliders are bad, and the rest mostly should be 1/3, not 1/2. Resnap them and respace them accordingly.

I really liked the hitsounds in the beginning. Very nice.

I had fun playing this, except at the shit kickslider parts. Reminds me of Rolled mapping.

Hard+
Awesome!

I suggest increasing the spacing during the kiai parts (+0.3x?). That'd add to the awesomeness, and constitute the bump to Insane. No changes here

You need to fix some sliders ... Most aren't perfect, e.g. 00:18:000 (1) I think I fixed it in the last post, anyways re-checked and 00:27:868 (2). (X)

00:33:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Weird spacing(X)

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
your skin is so awesome!!!

[Easy]
00:25:105 (3) - maybe stack with (1)? (X)
00:38:131 (1) - align with (2) before? (X)
00:57:868 (2,1) - spacing? (X)
01:49:184 (1,1) - ^ (X)
02:12:473 (1) - align with (2)?

[Normal]
why grid level 1? No changes here
00:25:500 (1,2,3) - and some other places.... it's weird in a normal imo. No changes here
01:05:368 (2,3,4) - what's this... (X) Also Fixed the same issue with the next chorus
...think you can use grid level 3 and change some of the spacing. Tried to fix some stuff with the same grid level

[Sallad's Flag]
01:06:552 (4) - kind of random placed...
there's not some really important problems since this is a I

[Hard+]
don't think this is Hard+, just Hard.
00:14:644 - 00:16:026 too short a break ,remove plz. (X)
the second part's new combo is a bit strange. No changes here
01:48:000 (2,3,4,5,6) - need a better shape. (X)
01:54:908 (3) - exactly stacked with (1)... don't know if it's fine. No changes here
02:20:170 (4) - ^ (X)
02:40:105 (1) - 3 spinners in a row..? (X)

Astom wrote:

[General]
-Los BG deben ser 800x600 o 1024x768, asi que hasle resize o busca algunos del tamaño. All the backgrounds are 1024x640
-Recorta la transparencia innecesaria a los nombres de los paises I'll Fix this later , Thx I didn't notice that

Excelente cancion, map, SB y skin xD
STAR ~