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K'naan - Wavin' Flag ( FIFA World Cup Official Song)

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Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 10 de junio de 2010 at 05:05:25 p.m.

Artist: K'naan
Title: Wavin' Flag
Source: FIFA World Cup South Africa 2010
Tags: soccer coca cola trophy sponsor sallad4ever Arusha Shuna waving VanMoNky
BPM: 152
Filesize: 18430kb
Play Time: 02:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.49 stars, 157 notes)
  2. Hard (4.44 stars, 397 notes)
  3. MoNky's Flag! (4.97 stars, 505 notes)
  4. Normal (3.89 stars, 388 notes)
  5. Sallad's Flag! (4.8 stars, 366 notes)
  6. Shuna's Flag! (4.95 stars, 443 notes)
Download: K'naan - Wavin' Flag
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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~Storyboard:

The included countries are:
Spain, England, Italy, Greece, France, Slovakia, Slovenia, Netherlands, Germany, Denmark, Serbia, Switzerland, Portugal, Brazil, Argentina, Chile, Paraguay, Uruguay, Japan, Australia, N. Korea, South Korea, South Africa, Ivory Coast, Ghana, Cameroon, Nigeria, Algeria, USA, Honduras, Mexico,New Zealand


~Skin: added (Updated 05/11)

~Difficulties:

-Easy (X)
-Normal (X)
-Hard(X)
-Sallad's Flag!
(Added 05/07) HARD
-Shuna's Flag! (Added 05/16) INSANE
-MoNky's Flag! (Added 05/21) INSANE

~Modding~

(X)Beuchi-chan
(X)wmfchris
(X)DiamondCrash
(X)xxheroxx
(X)Shulin
(X)Arusha Shuna
(X)blissfulyoshi
(X)strager
(X)Shinxyn
(X)NatsumeRin
(X)Astom
(X)Leorda
(X)VanMoNky
(X) StarrodKirby
(X) Osuplayer111
(X) -SiN- (SB mod)
(X)Mafiamaster
(X) - (X)- (X)-(X)irc Gens
(X)Shinxyn
bagnz0r
[Overall]
Your offset is bad. Don't know what would be actual offset, but it's around 10,331.

[Normal]
I suggest re-do.

[Easy]
I suggest re-do.

[Octopod_Squad Hard]
Just fix the timing and turn down circle size by 1 step.


Sorry, but no star yet. PM me when you're done fixing the map.
noneed
Hey, there! :)
Gave my best to do a normal map of K'naan - Wavin' Flag ( FIFA World Cup Official Song)
It's not finished yet but I wanted to know from Gonzvlo wheter it's good.
Will give my best to complete it in the next two days.

Download: K'naan - Wavin' Flag (Gonzvlo) [noneed's normal].rar
noneed
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

noneed wrote:

So, finally done! :D
-Fix Timing
-Use Distance Snap
-Maybe, remake it :(
Beuchi
Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Uhhh... finish Hard ._.
- Delete these unneeded files: The 3 Album art images, Folder image and desktop file.
- You have 2 .osb files, please delete the one you don't need.
- Delete the "( )" on Source.
- Delete "fifa world cup" from Tags, they're already on Source so they're unnecesary.
- Add Epilepsy Warning to this map (Go to Song Setup - Storyboarding - Display Epilepsy Warning)
- Use 1/4 Beat Snap divisor for this song and resnap all the notes.
Timing:
BPM: 152,00. (,03 sounds faster at the end)
Skin:
- Add a hit50 image.
- Delete the shadow of the soccer ball image on the sliderball.png.
Storyboard:
- The max size allowed to Storyboard images is 800x600px. You need to resize every image you're using for the storyboard.
- "glows" and "glows - copia" have a lot of blank space around the image you're using, please crop them, this could cause lag on some people.
- You should really change the "Difficulty by Gonzvlo" thing if you're going to keep that guest diff xP

~Easy~
- Delete the timing sections here: 01:00:454 - 01:14:650 - 01:49:379. If you want them just for changing voluma or hitsound samples, use Inheriting Timing Sections (green)
- Resnap all the notes (Go to Timing - Resnap All Notes).
- Decrease HP Drain a bit.

00:20:978 (2,3) - Fix spacing.
00:21:767 (1) - Make it finish at 00:22:954.
00:30:844 (1) - Delete New Combo.
00:34:001 (1) - ^
00:39:921 (3) - Looks a bit... messy? Here's a suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8402
00:56:102 (1) - Fix spacing.
00:57:680 (1) - ^
00:59:653 (1,1) - Delete New Combo.
01:09:520 (1) - Fix spacing.
01:12:414 (1) - Move 1 tick before and make it end at 01:14:255.
01:22:938 (1) - You don't know where is this slider going when you play. Move the endpoint away, please.
01:41:618 (1) - Move 1 tick before and make it end at 01:43:064.
01:51:352 (x) - Add a note here.

~Normal~
00:10:717 (2) - Fix spacing.
00:14:664 (3) - ^
00:36:370 (3) - ^
00:58:470 (3) - ^
01:05:969 (2,3) - Don't use this kind of jumps on Normal diffs. Fix spacing.
01:07:942 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:28:464 (1) - Delete New Combo.
01:57:669 (1) - Shorten it until 02:02:405.
02:06:351 (3,4) - Fix spacing.
02:34:766 (2) - ^
02:53:019 (4) - Move to white tick.
03:00:419 (1) - Fix spacing. Also delete New Combo.
03:05:944 (1) - Too short spinner.
03:32:428 (7) - I suggest to change this slider to a spinner o.o

~Octopod_Squad Hard~
- Not going to mod it because it has only around 30 seconds mapped, but just two things, use the same timing as the other two diffs and use Distance Snap to place the notes on the map. EDIT: And add a background ._.

Good luck with this~
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo
(X) Done
(X) Fixing it

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Uhhh... finish Hard ._.
- Delete these unneeded files: The 3 Album art images, Folder image and desktop file.(X)
- You have 2 .osb files, please delete the one you don't need.(X)
- Delete the "( )" on Source.(X)
- Delete "fifa world cup" from Tags, they're already on Source so they're unnecesary.(X)
- Add Epilepsy Warning to this map (Go to Song Setup - Storyboarding - Display Epilepsy Warning)(X)
- Use 1/4 Beat Snap divisor for this song and resnap all the notes.(X)
Timing:
BPM: 152,00. (,03 sounds faster at the end)(X)
Skin:
- Add a hit50 image.(X)
- Delete the shadow of the soccer ball image on the sliderball.png.(X)
Storyboard:
- The max size allowed to Storyboard images is 800x600px. You need to resize every image you're using for the storyboard.(X)
- "glows" and "glows - copia" have a lot of blank space around the image you're using, please crop them, this could cause lag on some people.(X)
- You should really change the "Difficulty by Gonzvlo" thing if you're going to keep that guest diff xP(I was testing That :P)
(Added Fail-Background :))

~Easy~
- Delete the timing sections here: 01:00:454 - 01:14:650 - 01:49:379. If you want them just for changing voluma or hitsound samples, use Inheriting Timing Sections (green)(X)
- Resnap all the notes (Go to Timing - Resnap All Notes).(X)
- Decrease HP Drain a bit.

00:20:978 (2,3) - Fix spacing. (X)
00:21:767 (1) - Make it finish at 00:22:954. (X)
00:30:844 (1) - Delete New Combo. (X)
00:34:001 (1) - ^ (X)
00:39:921 (3) - Looks a bit... messy? Here's a suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8402 (X)
00:56:102 (1) - Fix spacing. (X)
00:57:680 (1) - ^ (X)
00:59:653 (1,1) - Delete New Combo. (X)
01:09:520 (1) - Fix spacing. (X)
01:12:414 (1) - Move 1 tick before and make it end at 01:14:255. (X)
01:22:938 (1) - You don't know where is this slider going when you play. Move the endpoint away, please. (X)
01:41:618 (1) - Move 1 tick before and make it end at 01:43:064. (X)
01:51:352 (x) - Add a note here. (X)

~Normal~
00:10:717 (2) - Fix spacing. (X)
00:14:664 (3) - ^ (X)
00:36:370 (3) - ^ (X)
00:58:470 (3) - ^ (X)
01:05:969 (2,3) - Don't use this kind of jumps on Normal diffs. Fix spacing. (X)
01:07:942 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (X)
01:28:464 (1) - Delete New Combo. (X)
01:57:669 (1) - Shorten it until 02:02:405. (X)
02:06:351 (3,4) - Fix spacing. (X)
02:34:766 (2) - ^ (X)
02:53:019 (4) - Move to white tick. (X)
03:00:419 (1) - Fix spacing. Also delete New Combo. (X)
03:05:944 (1) - Too short spinner. (X)
03:32:428 (7) - I suggest to change this slider to a spinner o.o (X)

~Octopod_Squad Hard~
- Not going to mod it because it has only around 30 seconds mapped, but just two things, use the same timing as the other two diffs and use Distance Snap to place the notes on the map. EDIT: And add a background ._.
(This will probably get deleted , Because Octopod is inactive, Anybody want's to help me with that ? :)
Good luck with this~
(Thank You :))
Luvdic
You havent fixed timing yet >_>
Or better said. Timing is inchoherent throughtout the 3 difficulties

Easy:
1. Offset: 10.323ms BPM: 152,00
2. Offset: 60.443ms BPM: 152,00
Normal:
1. Offset: 10.323ms BPM: 152,00
Hard:
1. Offset: 2.090ms BPM: 150,87

Notice how all of them are different? If they are using the same mp3, then they should have the same timing, at least the red uninherited sections. Unfortunately, as beuchi said, im sure it has more than 1 timing section, so i cant help you with it, but i can say that the first offset i got was 10329.

Easy:
-Resnap notes
00:39:927 (3) - I think this could be made to look more circlish? It would look better imo.
01:22:938 (1) - No please, make it clearly visible where the slider ball is going.
01:35:172 (4,1,2,3,4) - Overlapped stuff doesnt looks good on a easy

Normal:
There are sliders that doesnt looks pretty, and thats because it looks like a fail try of making a nice curved slider such as 00:40:322 (1)
As well as there are places were alignments isnt the best... such as 00:45:059 (1,2,3), and look at 3
00:21:869 (1) - Wth with this slider? Start it at 00:21:770 and end it at 00:22:559 -
00:15:849 (5) - Maybe a horizontal flip?
01:16:934 (2) - Move them 1/4 tick later? Its better to follow the rymth than the vocals in these cases imo
01:17:724 (4) - ^
01:20:092 (2) - ^
01:21:671 (2) - ^
02:24:138 (7) - Overlaps with hp bar
02:24:928 (1,3) - Same as above... okay, maybe the (1) not... but its better if you move 1 a bit down too.

Sotryboard:
There are images that doesnt convinces me well in the fact that they are not properly centered with the background such as photocopybg glows. Maybe its only me, so this may as well be totally ignored.
normal: 00:48:217 - I dont see a particullar need of this strobe in the middle of the break, so eliminate it or do it for the whole break.
Delete this file: desktop.ini. You will have to do full upload.

There are some stuffs in this mod that have already been said by beuchi and you have suposedly "done" it... so im not sure if its because you are lying, havent updated it yet or because you are not understanding what beuchi is saying.
Luvdic
El timing....
Mejor usa:
Offset: 221 Bpm: 151,98
Es mucho mejor que el que tienes, y otra cosa... como ya te dije, este map tiene otro timing section uninherited, yo no te puedo ayudar con eso.

Cuando el timing esta tan malo, no se puede modear nada, asi que mejor arreglalo primero, y con esto quiero decir que busques a alguien que sepa buscar timing bien, no como yo que solo soy un novato en eso. El timing que te di orita es para que tuvieras algo de por momento.
Y otra cosa, tendras que poner tu storyboard alineados con el timing.
Y aun tienes el archivo desktop >_>
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

ErufenRito wrote:

El timing....
Mejor usa:
Offset: 221 Bpm: 151,98
Es mucho mejor que el que tienes, y otra cosa... como ya te dije, este map tiene otro timing section uninherited, yo no te puedo ayudar con eso.
Got Offset: 3395 BMP: 152.0 , No Uninherited Timing points

Cuando el timing esta tan malo, no se puede modear nada, asi que mejor arreglalo primero, y con esto quiero decir que busques a alguien que sepa buscar timing bien, no como yo que solo soy un novato en eso. El timing que te di orita es para que tuvieras algo de por momento. (Fixed)
Y otra cosa, tendras que poner tu storyboard alineados con el timing.
Y aun tienes el archivo desktop >_>(Can't Find it)
Torran
OSU! Timing Help!
  • Checking...
    1. BPM 152 , Offset 3395 OK!
Starred~!
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Gonzvlo wrote:

ErufenRito wrote:

El timing....
Mejor usa:
Offset: 221 Bpm: 151,98
Es mucho mejor que el que tienes, y otra cosa... como ya te dije, este map tiene otro timing section uninherited, yo no te puedo ayudar con eso.
Got Offset: 3395 BMP: 152.0 , No Uninherited Timing points

Cuando el timing esta tan malo, no se puede modear nada, asi que mejor arreglalo primero, y con esto quiero decir que busques a alguien que sepa buscar timing bien, no como yo que solo soy un novato en eso. El timing que te di orita es para que tuvieras algo de por momento. (FIXED)
Y otra cosa, tendras que poner tu storyboard alineados con el timing.
Y aun tienes el archivo desktop >_>(FIXED)

soradg123 wrote:

OSU! Timing Help!
  • Checking...
    1. BPM 152 , Offset 3395 OK!
Starred~!

I found this , and I love it o.O!

Everything Fixed Ready for Modding 8-)
yeahyeahyeahhh
Hi ^^ I'll mod this later but ill leave this here for now! *
Sallad4ever
This is my Most Favorite World Cup Song :oops:
And your SB is AWESOME :)

Please let me make a hard diff for this :(
Star for now~
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Sallad4ever wrote:

This is my Most Favorite World Cup Song :oops:
And your SB is AWESOME :)

Please let me make a hard diff for this :( No,sorry =( ,Lol just kidding, sure ! :)
Star for now~
Sallad4ever
First half done, a little preview :)
Download: K'naan - Wavin' Flag (Gonzvlo) [Hard Sallad].osu
I have class this evening, so I'll finish this after that
Oh I didn't know you change some skin :o
Cool the HP bar is great ;)
Sallad4ever
Done ;)

Download: K'naan - Wavin' Flag (Gonzvlo) [Hard Sallad].osu
Please let me update it myself ;)


VIVA WORLD CUP
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Sallad4ever wrote:

Done ;)

[attachment=0:cdb5c]K'naan - Wavin' Flag (Gonzvlo) [Hard Sallad].osu[/attachment:cdb5c]
Please let me update it myself ;)


VIVA WORLD CUP

Awesome :D
I Like it
K~
wmfchris
Suggestion: rank it at the same date when World Cup starts? lol
Also it seems the difficulty order is hard>flag>normal>easy, so exchange difficulty name between flag and hard?

[flag]
0:10:105 (2,3,4) Spacing different from the triples later?
1:50:763 (4) seem thi is not in the grid...moreover up 1 grid looks more comfortable.
3:30:237 (5) put it on the y-axis, left 1 grid

[hard]
0:17:210 (3) spacing, up 1 grid
0:24:315 (2,4) spacing redice 1 grid
1:05:171 (2) left 1 grid
1:27:868 (7) new combo?
2:08:131 (5) 1/2 beat backward?
2:39:513 (4) stright line - right 1 grid?
3:03:394 (3) uniqueness - left 1 grid?

other diff ok

curiously ask: you've included all the team in the final? XD

Star~
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

wmfchris wrote:

Suggestion: rank it at the same date when World Cup starts? lol That would be kewl :P
Also it seems the difficulty order is hard>flag>normal>easy, so exchange difficulty name between flag and hard?
Changed Hard to Hard+ , Sallad's Flag stayed as it
[flag]
0:10:105 (2,3,4) Spacing different from the triples later?
1:50:763 (4) seem thi is not in the grid...moreover up 1 grid looks more comfortable.
3:30:237 (5) put it on the y-axis, left 1 grid
Sallad will update this soon
[hard]
0:17:210 (3) spacing, up 1 grid
0:24:315 (2,4) spacing redice 1 grid
1:05:171 (2) left 1 grid
1:27:868 (7) new combo?
2:08:131 (5) 1/2 beat backward?
2:39:513 (4) stright line - right 1 grid?
3:03:394 (3) uniqueness - left 1 grid?
Everything FIXED
other diff ok

curiously ask: you've included all the team in the final? XD What do u mean :D ?

Star~
Thanks for modding k~
Sallad4ever
Oops
sorry
Sallad4ever
My update
Thanks wmfchris you're great

Download: K'naan - Wavin' Flag (Gonzvlo) [Sallad's Flag !].osu
GabrielRKF
Wow amazing~
Later I'll mod it~
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Sallad4ever wrote:

My update
Thanks wmfchris you're great

[attachment=0:fb482]K'naan - Wavin' Flag (Gonzvlo) [Sallad's Flag !].osu[/attachment:fb482]
Updated ~

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Wow amazing~
Later I'll mod it~
Ty :D
JessycaR_old
star~~For world cup~~
no reason :D
aRiskOfRain

JessycaR wrote:

star~~For world cup~~ no reason :D
This is why the priority system doesn't work. :roll:

General;
Suggestion for the skin - change the colour of the spinner approach circle, it's really hard to see.

Easy;
Resnap all objects.
01:31:816 (1,2,1) - For this bit, I suggest you break spacing; put the 1 of each of the combos on the center line. Put the 2 on the very center.
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

DiamondCrash wrote:

JessycaR wrote:

star~~For world cup~~ no reason :D
This is why the priority system doesn't work. :roll:

General;
Suggestion for the skin - change the colour of the spinner approach circle, it's really hard to see. (Fixed)

Easy;
Resnap all objects. (Fixed)
01:31:816 (1,2,1) - For this bit, I suggest you break spacing; put the 1 of each of the combos on the center line. Put the 2 on the very center.
I'm not sure if this is what u mean :
Thank you :D k~
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[Normal]


  • • 00:53:000 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders
    • 03:30:631 (1) - End this spinner here 03:36:355 (red tick)

[Hard+]


  • • 02:40:302 (1) - This spinner is unrankable (Auto should get at least 2000 bonus points)
    • 03:36:552 (1) - Delete this circle and end this spinner 03:30:631 (1) here 03:36:355 (red tick)
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[Normal]


  • • 00:53:000 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders
    • 03:30:631 (1) - End this spinner here 03:36:355 (red tick)

[Hard+]


  • • 02:40:302 (1) - This spinner is unrankable (Auto should get at least 2000 bonus points)
    • 03:36:552 (1) - Delete this circle and end this spinner 03:30:631 (1) here 03:36:355 (red tick)
Everything Fixed Ty :D
k~
Dxtr17
OMW! This rocks dude... nicely done.... cant wait for it to be ranked... :lol:

I Live in South Africa and this will definately go down well in the South African Osu! Community!!!!!
CHEERS!

Dankie!
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Dxtr17 wrote:

OMW! This rocks dude... nicely done.... cant wait for it to be ranked... :lol:

I Live in South Africa and this will definately go down well in the South African Osu! Community!!!!!
CHEERS!

Dankie!
Ty :D
I'm glad u liked it
Shulin
General:

-- comboburst is too big, resize it so it doesn't exceed 500 px width.
-- Make your hitcircle 128 x 128.
-- Your hit50, hit100 etc, are slightly different sizes, make then the same size.
-- "sliderb" are all different sizes, would probably look better if you made them all the same size.
-- The Source "FIFA World Cup South Africa 2010 Official Theme Song" is kinda long, maybe just rename it "FIFA World Cup 2010"?
-- Lots of alignment issues, you might want to have a look through and make sure stuff is aligned XD

Easy:

-- Delete the unused inheriting sections after 02:16:026
-- "Normal" sections are too loud, reduce 1-2 ticks?

00:10:894 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:22:342 (1) - Clap? (following your pattern)
01:04:973 -- Too loud.
01:34:184 (1) - Clap second return?

Normal:

-- Overall volume is too loud, reduce by 1-2 ticks.
-- Preview point.

00:42:276 (4) - Down 1 square. Looks messy otherwise.
01:00:237 -- Too loud.
01:00:237 (1) - Unsilence the return.
02:21:552 (2) - Make the return more visible.
03:30:631 (1) - Remove finish.

Sallad's Flag !

-- Remove the space between "Flag" and "!"
-- Preview point.

00:16:618 (2) - End on 1/1 not 1/8.

Hard +:

-- Name it either Hard or Insane imo.
-- Preview point.

00:59:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not following music so it plays a bit weird imo.
01:00:237 -- Lower the volume of this inheriting section by 1 or 2 ticks, it's too loud atm.
02:16:026 -- ^
02:52:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Add volume, there is no reason for these beats to be silent.
03:05:368 (1) - Start this at 03:05:566 and remove a return?
03:30:631 (1) - Remove finish.

Make sure to look out for some alignment issues, and some of those curved sliders are slightly ugly. It doesn't effect gameplay much, so it's up to you whether you fix XD
Sallad4ever
:oops:
That must be because I change the slider velocity

Download: K'naan - Wavin' Flag (Gonzvlo) [Sallad's Flag!].osu

I've change the name and also set the preview point too, Thanks Shulin :)
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- comboburst is too big, resize it so it doesn't exceed 500 px width. (X)
-- Make your hitcircle 128 x 128.(X)
-- Your hit50, hit100 etc, are slightly different sizes, make then the same size.(X)
-- "sliderb" are all different sizes, would probably look better if you made them all the same size.
This Will Get Fixed Soon
-- The Source "FIFA World Cup South Africa 2010 Official Theme Song" is kinda long, maybe just rename it "FIFA World Cup 2010"? (X)
-- Lots of alignment issues, you might want to have a look through and make sure stuff is aligned XD(X)

Easy:

-- Delete the unused inheriting sections after 02:16:026 (X)
-- "Normal" sections are too loud, reduce 1-2 ticks? (X)

00:10:894 (1) - Remove new combo. (X)
00:22:342 (1) - Clap? (following your pattern) (X)
01:04:973 -- Too loud. (X)
01:34:184 (1) - Clap second return? (X)

Normal:

-- Overall volume is too loud, reduce by 1-2 ticks. (X)
-- Preview point. (X)

00:42:276 (4) - Down 1 square. Looks messy otherwise. (X)
01:00:237 -- Too loud. (X)
01:00:237 (1) - Unsilence the return. (X)
02:21:552 (2) - Make the return more visible. (X)
03:30:631 (1) - Remove finish. (X)

Sallad's Flag !

-- Remove the space between "Flag" and "!"
-- Preview point.
00:16:618 (2) - End on 1/1 not 1/8.

Thank You Sallad, Updated(X)

Hard +:

-- Name it either Hard or Insane imo. Still Hard+
-- Preview point. (X)

00:59:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not following music so it plays a bit weird imo. (X)
01:00:237 -- Lower the volume of this inheriting section by 1 or 2 ticks, it's too loud atm. (X)
02:16:026 -- ^ (X)
02:52:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Add volume, there is no reason for these beats to be silent. (X)
03:05:368 (1) - Start this at 03:05:566 and remove a return? (X)
03:30:631 (1) - Remove finish. (X)

Make sure to look out for some alignment issues, and some of those curved sliders are slightly ugly. It doesn't effect gameplay much, so it's up to you whether you fix XD
Fixed All the Alignment Issues , It's totally diferent now , because everything was too messy


Thank You ,that was really helpfull :D
Arusha Shuna
Request Accepted

Easy
00:19:973 (5,6) - move 1 tiny grid right
00:20:763 (7) - move 2 tiny grid right
02:16:026 (2) - remove the timing section here, since it'sused for kiai time OR remove only the kiai time
Normal
01:55:500 (5) - new combo?
03:27:079 (9) - ^ to cut off the combo
Sallad's Flag!
Cool! :)
Hard+
00:43:658 (5) - this circle seems out of place, fix this
Awesome! :)

Awesome beatmap!
STAR!!

P.S. can i take the insane diff?
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Request Accepted

Easy
00:19:973 (5,6) - move 1 tiny grid right (X)
00:20:763 (7) - move 2 tiny grid right (X)
02:16:026 (2) - remove the timing section here, since it'sused for kiai time OR remove only the kiai time (X)
Normal
01:55:500 (5) - new combo? (X)
03:27:079 (9) - ^ to cut off the combo (X)
Sallad's Flag!
Cool! :)
Hard+
00:43:658 (5) - this circle seems out of place, fix this (No Change)
Awesome! :)

Awesome beatmap!
STAR!!

P.S. can i take the insane diff? Why Not :D ?

Thank YOU! for modding this
K~
blissfulyoshi
... The tags "coca" "cola" "sponsor." Did Coca-Cola sponsor this map or something? I really doubt that anyone would Coca-Cola or sponsor, so please remove them from the tags since I don't think I recall seeing anything in the map that suggest that these words belong in the tags.

Easy:
Normal mod:
00:34:973 (1,2,3,4) - it looks sort of ugly right now with the sliders not being symmetric Having some thing like the 1 in the picture would be better:
01:07:342 (1,2,1) - overlapping sliders look terrible, esp if the sliders are not symmetric
01:25:895 (1) - This jump was sort of random
01:44:447 (1,1,1,1) - same as 00:34:973 (1,2,3,4)

Combo mod:
00:36:552 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 00:30:237 (1)
00:39:710 (3) - ^
00:42:868 (4) - ^

Timing section mod:
00:09:710 - move back a quarter note
01:00:237 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with no kiai (this is for the change in hitsound type between this and the previous section)

Normal:
Normal mod:
01:57:079 - this break is really randomly placed (the break's start does not follow anything)

Combo mod: (The key to combos is consistency, so I am trying to make the combos consistent based off what I see a majority of your map follows, but you are free to make it consistent in another way
00:30:237 (3) - new combo to make 2 combos 4 whole notes long like the previous few combos
00:36:552 (5) - new combo to make 2 combos 4 whole notes long like combos before the spinner
00:39:710 (3) - ^
01:46:026 (4) - new combo to make 2 combos 4 whole notes long like the previous few combos
01:52:342 (4) - new combo to make 2 combos 4 whole notes long like combos before the spinner
01:55:500 (5) - ^
03:23:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - add some new combos to this set

Timing section mod:
00:09:710 - move back a quarter note
01:00:237 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with no kiai
02:16:026 - ^

Sallad's Flag!: (This diff is really weird with it being the hardest diff but only worth slightly more than Normal)
Normal mod:
01:19:184 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - the back and forth pattern got boring the second time through, so can you think of a different pattern pls
02:34:973 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - seeing the combo a fourth time.... (I guess you can just copy and paste whatever you did the fix the previous suggestion)

Timing section mod:
00:09:908 - There are 2 timing sections at the same place here, so please remove one of them
01:00:138 - just wondering y is this a custom hitsound section when I don't see any custom hitsounds
03:19:184 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with kiai
03:36:552 - unneeded timing section, please remove

Hard+:
Normal mod: (similar to Easy, there are a lot of sliders that need to be made symmetric such as 00:18:000 (1) and 01:25:500 (1), so please fix them)
00:26:289 (4,1) - the partial overlap of these sliders look bad
00:34:579 (7,1) - This shortened spacing is disorienting
01:09:513 (4) - probably will look nicer if it was parallel to 1
01:52:342 (5) - align with 4 (sort of a nazi thing, but it is noticeable while playing)
02:09:316 (1,2,3,4,5) - the stacking makes this part look pretty bad so lower the stack leniency enough to make this part look nicer (also, stack the ends of sliders directly on top (not a few pixels off) of the next slider)

Timing section mod:
00:09:908 - unneeded timing section, please remove (same hitsound settings as the previous section)
01:00:237 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with no kiai
01:25:500 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with kiai
02:16:026 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with no kiai
02:41:289 - align the end of the kiai section with the end of the corresponding kiai section in normal (you can adjust normal or this diff depending on what you feel is better)
02:53:921 - unneeded timing section, please remove (same hitsound settings as the previous section)

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Nice map and storyboard. I really wish you mapped the easier diffs with lvl 3 grid (tiny). There are a lot of the points where you can see blatant spacing inconsistencies that could have been avoided using a higher lvl grid. Other than that, focus on making the map more aesthetically appealing. Star.
Topic Starter
Gonzvlo

blissfulyoshi wrote:

... The tags "coca" "cola" "sponsor." Did Coca-Cola sponsor this map or something? I really doubt that anyone would Coca-Cola or sponsor, so please remove them from the tags since I don't think I recall seeing anything in the map that suggest that these words belong in the tags.
This song is Coca-Cola's song as sponsor for this World Cup
Easy:
Normal mod:
00:34:973 (1,2,3,4) - it looks sort of ugly right now with the sliders not being symmetric Having some thing like the 1 in the picture would be better:
Couldn't make them perfectly symmetric , so I figured out another way to fix it (*)
01:07:342 (1,2,1) - overlapping sliders look terrible, esp if the sliders are not symmetric (X)
01:25:895 (1) - This jump was sort of random (X)
01:44:447 (1,1,1,1) - same as 00:34:973 (1,2,3,4) (*)

Combo mod:
00:36:552 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 00:30:237 (1) (X)
00:39:710 (3) - ^ (X)
00:42:868 (4) - ^ (X)

Timing section mod:
00:09:710 - move back a quarter note (X)
01:00:237 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with no kiai (this is for the change in hitsound type between this and the previous section) (X)

Normal:
Normal mod:
01:57:079 - this break is really randomly placed (the break's start does not follow anything) (X)

Combo mod: (The key to combos is consistency, so I am trying to make the combos consistent based off what I see a majority of your map follows, but you are free to make it consistent in another way
00:30:237 (3) - new combo to make 2 combos 4 whole notes long like the previous few combos (X)
00:36:552 (5) - new combo to make 2 combos 4 whole notes long like combos before the spinner (X)
00:39:710 (3) - ^ (X)
01:46:026 (4) - new combo to make 2 combos 4 whole notes long like the previous few combos (X)
01:52:342 (4) - new combo to make 2 combos 4 whole notes long like combos before the spinner (X)
01:55:500 (5) - ^ (X)
03:23:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - add some new combos to this set (X)

Timing section mod:
00:09:710 - move back a quarter note (X)
01:00:237 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with no kiai (X)
02:16:026 - ^ (X)

Sallad's Flag!: (This diff is really weird with it being the hardest diff but only worth slightly more than Normal)
Normal mod:
01:19:184 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - the back and forth pattern got boring the second time through, so can you think of a different pattern pls
02:34:973 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - seeing the combo a fourth time.... (I guess you can just copy and paste whatever you did the fix the previous suggestion)

Timing section mod:
00:09:908 - There are 2 timing sections at the same place here, so please remove one of them
01:00:138 - just wondering y is this a custom hitsound section when I don't see any custom hitsounds
03:19:184 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with kiai
03:36:552 - unneeded timing section, please remove

Hard+:
Normal mod: (similar to Easy, there are a lot of sliders that need to be made symmetric such as 00:18:000 (1) and 01:25:500 (1), so please fix them) (X)
00:26:289 (4,1) - the partial overlap of these sliders look bad Fixed with new sliders
00:34:579 (7,1) - This shortened spacing is disorienting Fixed with new sliders
01:09:513 (4) - probably will look nicer if it was parallel to 1 (X)
01:52:342 (5) - align with 4 (sort of a nazi thing, but it is noticeable while playing) (X)
02:09:316 (1,2,3,4,5) - the stacking makes this part look pretty bad so lower the stack leniency enough to make this part look nicer (also, stack the ends of sliders directly on top (not a few pixels off) of the next slider) (X)

Timing section mod:
00:09:908 - unneeded timing section, please remove (same hitsound settings as the previous section) (X)
01:00:237 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with no kiai (X)
01:25:500 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with kiai (X)
02:16:026 - a quarter note before this timing section, add an inherited timing section with the same hitsound settings (hitsound type and volume) but with no kiai (X)
02:41:289 - align the end of the kiai section with the end of the corresponding kiai section in normal (you can adjust normal or this diff depending on what you feel is better) (X)
02:53:921 - unneeded timing section, please remove (same hitsound settings as the previous section) (X)

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Nice map and storyboard. I really wish you mapped the easier diffs with lvl 3 grid (tiny). There are a lot of the points where you can see blatant spacing inconsistencies that could have been avoided using a higher lvl grid. Other than that, focus on making the map more aesthetically appealing. Star.

Wow dude,Thanks :D I think I've fixed all the things that u pointed out
K~
anonymous_old
Storyboard
Cool. =]

The flash at the bottom of the screen needs to be moved up so it aligns with the BG.

Remove letterboxing during breaks.

Skin
Really good skin.

For the spinner, ehh ... It's hard for spinners who spin small to read thier cursor while spinning with that huge thing flying around.

The slider repeats don't look too good. Make them smaller and make the border thicker?

Sallad's Flag!
Your kick sliders are shit. The ones in the middle of longer sliders are bad, and the rest mostly should be 1/3, not 1/2. Resnap them and respace them accordingly.

I really liked the hitsounds in the beginning. Very nice.

I had fun playing this, except at the shit kickslider parts. Reminds me of Rolled mapping.

Hard+
Awesome!

I suggest increasing the spacing during the kiai parts (+0.3x?). That'd add to the awesomeness, and constitute the bump to Insane.

You need to fix some sliders ... Most aren't perfect, e.g. 00:18:000 (1) and 00:27:868 (2).

00:33:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Weird spacing.
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