well, I've called those mistakes, but this is only my opinion, so here we go (those are all mostly suggestions):
[NM]
please remember youself when you were a noob and played easy diffs (well, it is called [NM], but basically it's an Easy, star rating, overall diff being not high, high circle size make it appear that).
Slider velocity is not that high, but places like
00:18:023 (2,1) for newbies may appear too fast. Reduce (2) repeats by 1, I suppose.
00:45:023 (7) - new combo, 10 note combos for Easy are quite long I think and others are quite short (well, they were not when I first looked at map, but now it's fixed thanks to arken)
01:20:423 (1,1,1,1) - reduse everyone by 1/4, they are slow, but reclicking them is fast, that would be unexpected
01:39:623 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'd use 0,8 snap for this and next similiar moment
01:49:373 - place a no sound spinner here, ending at 01:51:323 (and I'd think about placing same at [HD])
[HD]
that's a bit hard Hard (uh, I don't like playing with words like this)
00:23:423 (2) - (NAZI orz) push Shift and let osu move this slider a bit so you won't see any bit of slider's end under (1)
00:26:873 - add a note? Dunno.
00:27:323 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I'd add a slight volume fade in for these because of often softwhistles
00:58:823 (1,2,3,4,5) - fast D: Well, I know that's a hard, but still fast and sudden imo
01:44:723 (1) - I always miss this one. Though do not miss previous alike jump
[SC]
NINJA JUMPS et the end Love them.
Fine overall.
guest diff WIP, I think it's gonna hit 9mil points mark by how it looks now
[NM]
please remember youself when you were a noob and played easy diffs (well, it is called [NM], but basically it's an Easy, star rating, overall diff being not high, high circle size make it appear that).
Slider velocity is not that high, but places like
00:18:023 (2,1) for newbies may appear too fast. Reduce (2) repeats by 1, I suppose.
00:45:023 (7) - new combo, 10 note combos for Easy are quite long I think and others are quite short (well, they were not when I first looked at map, but now it's fixed thanks to arken)
01:20:423 (1,1,1,1) - reduse everyone by 1/4, they are slow, but reclicking them is fast, that would be unexpected
01:39:623 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'd use 0,8 snap for this and next similiar moment
01:49:373 - place a no sound spinner here, ending at 01:51:323 (and I'd think about placing same at [HD])
[HD]
that's a bit hard Hard (uh, I don't like playing with words like this)
00:23:423 (2) - (NAZI orz) push Shift and let osu move this slider a bit so you won't see any bit of slider's end under (1)
00:26:873 - add a note? Dunno.
00:27:323 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I'd add a slight volume fade in for these because of often softwhistles
00:58:823 (1,2,3,4,5) - fast D: Well, I know that's a hard, but still fast and sudden imo
01:44:723 (1) - I always miss this one. Though do not miss previous alike jump
[SC]
NINJA JUMPS et the end Love them.
Fine overall.
guest diff WIP, I think it's gonna hit 9mil points mark by how it looks now