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honestly with the way you mapped this OD 8.5 or OD 9 would work better since it's pretty jumpy throughout
also drain -1 cuz idk if this is passable with HR because of the spinners / slow part after the break imma check (edit: apparently it is and doesn't drain much at all but the suggestion still stands i guess)
01:43:143 (6) - curve this slider maybe so it flows better from 01:42:970 (5)
02:05:212 (9) - same thing here, flows a bit better even if it's CTRL+H'd and stays in the same spot
02:14:037 - useless green lines ew
02:16:246 (6) - move the sliderend upwards a bit so the flow is straight maybe?
02:30:470 (9,1) - not really a fan of how 02:30:556 (1) - isn't completely straight like the rest of the stream
02:40:212 (9) - NC this instead of the slider after it cuz downbeat
02:52:539 (9,1) - same thing as 02:30:470 (9,1)
02:58:143 - add a note here maybe? there's a soft sound here and it might be better with it there (you did it here 05:10:556 (6) - so idk)
03:38:143 (1,2) - you overlapped all the notes prior to these two with the notes before it and idk if it was intentional or not to not do these two but ehhh
03:47:625 (10,11,1) - stream looks ugly cuz 03:47:712 (11) - isn't straight like the rest of the notes aaa
03:47:970 (1) - remove NC since I don't really see a point in this being there
03:55:556 (6) - CTRL+H to make the note flow into the slider better
03:59:005 (1) - same thing as 03:47:970 (1)
04:11:246 (3) - this might be better with a NC here instead of 04:10:901 (1) - because downbeats
04:16:246 (3) - NC this for consistency with 02:03:832 (1) - also because the stop-and-go thing and readability and stuff
05:04:781 (4,5,6,1) - idk if I just have really crappy vision but from that note onwards the stream shifts left idk if you intended to do that or
these fucking jumps are so good holy shit