Gamu wrote:

hello~!
Request from Christmas☆Queue 2014
Thank you for request!
[ General]

1. PreviewTime: 79502 Fixed on every difficulty.
   It isn't snapped, so must be fixed.
2. Would you like to add a new combo (green) color? Since it is Xmas color, it will fit with the BG =w= Really cool idea, added.
   
   image

   
3. I confirmed that there are no problems with the metadata~ >w< That's great!

[ Normal]

1. 00:13:484 (2) - Add a drum-hitwhistle (Additions:Drum) in order to match with the back sound. Fixed.
2. 02:28:214 (3) - At the end point, soft-hitnormal (Sampleset:Soft) is would be better than the normal-hitnormal. I like the current one more here, sorry.
3. 02:28:933 (4) - It would be good to add a whistle in the same way as 02:29:292 (5). Fixed.
4. 02:49:771 (6) - Hmm...I think this appearance is not a good, so would you like to change this? I like the current shape for now, but I'll change it if someone else points it out.
   
   image & code

   188,192,169771,2,0,B|192:140|256:100|320:140|324:192,1,200,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   

[ Hard]

1. 00:03:065 ~00:14:562 - I think consistency of new combos are broken. So make the following suggestions in order to fix it.
   -00:04:681 (6,1) - Swap these new combos.
   -00:06:118 (5) - Add a new combo.
   -00:07:017 (1,2) - Swap these new combos.
   -00:08:633 (1,2) - ^
   -00:09:891 (1,2) - ^
   -00:11:328 (1,2) - ^ All fixed.
   
   code

   88,112,3065,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   148,56,3244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   176,136,3424,2,0,B|244:136|244:168|312:168,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   388,204,3963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   316,248,4142,2,0,B|248:248|248:280|180:280,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   100,300,4681,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   80,220,4861,2,0,L|48:80,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   132,64,5400,2,0,L|200:48,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   333,103,5759,2,0,L|265:119,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   184,136,6118,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   216,212,6298,2,0,P|288:212|340:252,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   424,252,6837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   424,252,7017,2,0,L|308:332,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   232,368,7556,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   156,332,7735,2,0,P|100:288|100:224,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   160,164,8274,2,0,L|208:112,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   332,96,8633,2,0,L|284:148,1,70,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   344,208,8993,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   404,268,9172,2,0,P|376:336|320:368,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,316,9711,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   191,367,9891,2,0,P|132:332|108:268,1,140,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   88,188,10430,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   148,132,10609,2,0,B|220:132|220:132|276:92,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   260,12,11148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   260,12,11328,2,0,L|356:120,1,140,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   408,180,11867,6,0,L|452:236,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   432,344,12226,2,0,L|388:288,1,70,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   316,332,12585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   256,272,12765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   196,332,12945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   123,291,13124,6,0,P|77:247|123:206,2,140,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   196,332,14023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   256,272,14202,2,0,L|256:128,1,140,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:13:124 (1) - The same as Normal diff~ Fixed.
3. 02:28:214 (6) - ^ Same as above.
4. 02:28:933 (1) - whistle is missing at the start and end points? Added on slider start.

[ Insane]

1. 00:13:484 (4) - The same as other diffs. Fixed.
2. 02:28:214 (1) - ^ Same as above.
3. 02:28:753 (2) - Here is also, soft-hitnormal (Sampleset:Soft) is better~ Like I said, I prefer normal hitsound here.
4. 02:28:933 (3) - Add a whistle~ Fixed.

good mapset :3

-Bakari- wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:33:244 (2) - instead of a slider, place a circle. Just like you did it with 00:36:118 (2). This would sound better. A rough example Well, in 00:36:118 - I didn't make a slider because there is no more music xD So slider fits good for me.
2. 00:44:741 (3,1) - it might be just me, but you could make their shapes similar. It will improve appearance of the pattern a little.
3. 01:10:250 (1,2) - swapping them on timeline (Ctrl+G) will give you perfect rhythm and will stress the important downbeat. Give it a try and don't forget to fix the DS if you like the suggested rhythm! Example
   Note: 01:08:813 (1,2) - same here. Please apply/reject both in order to be more consistent.
4. 01:41:148 (1,2) - this is the only 1/2 pattern in the whole diff. It feels a bit out of place, so I would recommend you to avoid it.
5. 02:16:358 (2) - it will fit much better if you replace the slider with two circles. So, the downbeat will be stressed and rhythm will become more intuitively-understandable. Nah, because this is the easiest diff I guess, so I want to keep the slider. Simple notes in another cases are ok though.
   
   As always, clean and well-done!

Momochikun wrote:

01:24:981 (3) - I'd divide this into 1/1 slider and note, seems not necessary to skip 01:25:340 - that the important sound of this song imo I know what you are saying, but I'll do something different
01:31:448 (3) - Missing whistle ? I guess ;w;

1. 00:04:502 (5,5) - I perfectly know that you have your combo style, but there should be a NC for consistency if you notice.

1. I'd make title appear in 00:14:921 - basically in the break, because the map starts a bit early and looks better for me if title is showed clearly where is the break.
2. Where did you find the song? I've tried to look for genre, because I don't know if it's convenient adding "techno" or "trance" in tags... Feel free to ignore this.
3. Normal and Hard are collabs, so maybe you have to add collab and collaboration in tags.

1. 01:05:939 (1) - I suggest to add a simple note here, then add a slider in 01:06:298 - I'm sure you'd like something like this since my example keeps the same position and symmetry. I think it's better clicking this stanza, the rhythm I'm suggesting fits better imo.
2. 01:10:609 (1,2,3) - Maybe a bit nazi, but you've been adding NC each two stanzas, as I see, so this NC is unnecessary. Ignore this if I'm wrong or something. don't slap me please
3. 01:12:047 (1,2,3) - I'd remove these notes and make spinner starting there, music doesn't change so much to start spinner later.
4. 01:39:711 (1,2) - Move these to x:192, doesn't it make a better flow for you?

1. 00:26:777 (3) - You have some sliders at the beginning like this: the end doesn't follow any music... It's a nice pattern, but I'd change it in all cases (Not all of them are like this, for example 00:27:496 (1) - it's fine).
2. 00:33:244 (4,1) - Swap NC because fits better added in stanza.
3. 01:07:735 (5,1) - Same as above, do it in all cases because I won't repeat it anymore.
4. 02:08:094 (1) - You can improve this type of slider a bit, curving it even a bit more (Yeah maybe it's nazi, but will look better for me, so it's just a little suggestion).

Andrea wrote:

@lit120: Hard had AR8 before but then it was changed because considered too high.

bbj0920 wrote:

If it's collaborative map, it'd be better to write credits

Sonnyc wrote:

ps.

bbj0920 wrote:

If it's collaborative map, it'd be better to write credits

Andrea wrote:

bbj0920 wrote:

If it's collaborative map, it'd be better to write credits

Normal and Hard are going to have SB Names, don't worry!

Insane is made by myself~

Sakura wrote:

Hi Andrea!
[General]
You have a really large portion of the mp3 unused i suggest cutting it out with a nice fade out or something Since 83% of it is used, I would prefer to keep the outro for a nicer effect when you finish the map.
Would be cool if you used colorhaxing to use different colors for each person taking part in your collabs I like this idea, done.

[Storyboard]
Is it really necessary to have the names fading in and out all the time? Guess Gero wanted them to fit with the SB effects.
Ring.png has about 38 pixels of unused transparencies of all sides Will ask Gero about this.
SnowFlakeBlue.png has about 20 pixels of unused transparencies on top of bottom, while SnowFlakeWhite.png doesn't. Will ask him for this as well.

[Insane]
02:18:873 (5,1) - Why is the comboing different here than 02:15:999 (5,6) and 02:13:124 (5,6) Nice catch, fixed.

[Hard]
Why not just rename to "Hard Collab" or "Collab Hard" or something. There are SB names, no need to do that.

Gero:
00:58:035 (2,3) - These overlaps don't really look good.
02:12:945 (2,3) - ^
02:30:370 (6) - Why not blanket a bit instead of overlap :<
02:35:400 (1) - Don't see the reason for having such a short sharp turn when there are sliders like: 02:22:466 (1) that look better. Gonna leave all of these suggestions to Gero.

Andrea:
01:09:172 (1,2,3,4) - How about ending the sliders closer to the center? Changed the pattern positioning a bit.

[Normal]
Same naming suggestion as Hard. Like I said in Hard, SB names are already enough.
Andrea:
00:47:975 (4,1) - <Nazi> The sliderticks on both sliders don't seem to be symmetrical to each other (the left slider has the slidertick slightly off) Tried to copy the slider again, should be fine now.

Good Luck! o/

1. 00:40:789 (2) - Why don't you change its form to give this a better flow? Have a screenshot and a code to show you what I've done
   
   Screenshoot + Code

   
   

   140,280,40789,2,0,P|240:280|308:208,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:47:256 (2,3) - If you make this pattern ''not that stright xD'' will provide a better transition imo. Is a simple thing, I tried something like this
3. 02:49:771 (6) - What about a new combo here? It'll be consistent with the rest of the map, this with 6 notes became a bit long xD.

1. 01:25:340 (3) - It could be a bit nazi, but I'm sure the transition will be better if you curve this slider like this
2. 01:29:292 (1,2,3,1) - Please symetric mapper, make this completely symetric . Have a check what I've done, I'm not just move the pattern into the middle of the screen, I've moved the end of (3) to make it completely symetric with the beginning of the first (1), plus moved the second (1) to keep the spacing consistent.
   
   Screenshot + Code

   
   

   156,356,89292,6,0,B|92:276|92:276|92:168,2,200,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,364,91088,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   355,355,91448,2,0,L|418:277,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   432,180,92166,21,2,0:0:0:0:

3. 02:29:651 (1) - I would move this slider some grids up for a natural flow. I tried moving it to x:216 y:120, after that you won't have too much problems to fix the spacing between the following notes.

1. 00:46:538 (3) - Plays better if you change this slider position. Is pretty simple, try something like this instead.
2. 00:50:669 (5,6) - Why don't you try something like this or similar? Definetly works better during the gameplay
3. 02:02:885 (2,3,4) - Would flow much better if you do something as I told you in the previous suggestion. I'll give you a code because I definetly like how this will play xD (make sure to move the follow the next (1,2,3) a bit to the right and boila)
   
   Screenshot + Code

   
   

   276,308,122885,2,0,P|244:292|210:294,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   60,276,123244,2,0,P|91:291|125:289,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   172,220,123603,1,0,0:0:0:0:

4. 02:48:334 (8,1) - Reduce the spacing length between these objects pls! Is the first time you've did that in the set and it's a bit unpredictable if you ask me. Seriously, I prefer a little jump between the next (1,2,3) instead of this jump.

1. 02:17:795 (3,1,2,3) - Even if this provide a little jump, will be better if you stack (2) with the last (3), instead to stack it with the 1st (3). I really prefer this little jump instead of this pattern that break the flow :/

1. 00:35:041 (6,7,8) - I can learn the previous jumps, is a slow section but it doesn't affect that much the gameplay, but this one pls.. The music is really slow and you have this jump that it's pretty weird :/. Try ctrl+g'ing between (7,8) or use a symetric jump that won't be that weird imo.
2. 00:56:597 (1,2,3) - BLANKET! D: /caps off.
   
   Screenshot + Code

   
   

   180,144,56597,6,0,P|256:102|331:144,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,192,57136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   256,192,57316,1,8,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:06:298 (1) - The music pitch is similar as before, so removing the New Combo to avoid this little combo would be nice.
4. 02:52:645 (8) - Hmm.. Maybe you'd like to add a New Combo here.. Maybe not xD

mancuso_JM_ wrote:

Hey Andrea! Such a long time without modding one of your maps xDD.. Modding from the Christmas Queue.

[Normal]

• Andrea:

1. 00:40:789 (2) - Why don't you change its form to give this a better flow? Have a screenshot and a code to show you what I've done I prefer my current pattern actually ><
   
   Screenshoot + Code

   
   

   140,280,40789,2,0,P|240:280|308:208,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:47:256 (2,3) - If you make this pattern ''not that stright xD'' will provide a better transition imo. Is a simple thing, I tried something like this I did the same as yours before, but I didn't liked it since it doesn't align perfectly, and I'm pretty nazi about that xD
3. 02:49:771 (6) - What about a new combo here? It'll be consistent with the rest of the map, this with 6 notes became a bit long xD. I dislike single combos, that's why I would prefer to not add any here.

• Inyus:

1. 01:25:340 (3) - It could be a bit nazi, but I'm sure the transition will be better if you curve this slider like this This is a pretty good suggestion, fixed it.
2. 01:29:292 (1,2,3,1) - Please symetric mapper, make this completely symetric . Have a check what I've done, I'm not just move the pattern into the middle of the screen, I've moved the end of (3) to make it completely symetric with the beginning of the first (1), plus moved the second (1) to keep the spacing consistent. I see what it's your idea, but not having some symmetry sometimes doesn't hurt in my opinion so I'll keep this one here :3
   
   Screenshot + Code

   
   

   156,356,89292,6,0,B|92:276|92:276|92:168,2,200,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,364,91088,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   355,355,91448,2,0,L|418:277,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   432,180,92166,21,2,0:0:0:0:

3. 02:29:651 (1) - I would move this slider some grids up for a natural flow. I tried moving it to x:216 y:120, after that you won't have too much problems to fix the spacing between the following notes. That slider was actually placed by me at first, since it's made for finishing the square pattern with the previous circles, so I would like to not move it, or the square will break. ;w;

- Omg.. Your mapping are so similar D:. Nice job tho. You're not the first who says this xD

[Hard]

• Andrea:

1. 00:46:538 (3) - Plays better if you change this slider position. Is pretty simple, try something like this instead. Yeah I like this suggestion, fixed it.
2. 00:50:669 (5,6) - Why don't you try something like this or similar? Definetly works better during the gameplay I also agree with this, fixed.
3. 02:02:885 (2,3,4) - Would flow much better if you do something as I told you in the previous suggestion. I'll give you a code because I definetly like how this will play xD (make sure to move the follow the next (1,2,3) a bit to the right and boila) Hmm... I prefer my current pattern here actually ><
   
   Screenshot + Code

   
   

   276,308,122885,2,0,P|244:292|210:294,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   60,276,123244,2,0,P|91:291|125:289,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   172,220,123603,1,0,0:0:0:0:

4. 02:48:334 (8,1) - Reduce the spacing length between these objects pls! Is the first time you've did that in the set and it's a bit unpredictable if you ask me. Seriously, I prefer a little jump between the next (1,2,3) instead of this jump. The jump is really really little and making them even more closer would look really bad, so I'll keep this for now.

• Gero:

1. 02:17:795 (3,1,2,3) - Even if this provide a little jump, will be better if you stack (2) with the last (3), instead to stack it with the 1st (3). I really prefer this little jump instead of this pattern that break the flow :/ Gero already replied this.

[Insane]

1. 00:35:041 (6,7,8) - I can learn the previous jumps, is a slow section but it doesn't affect that much the gameplay, but this one pls.. The music is really slow and you have this jump that it's pretty weird :/. Try ctrl+g'ing between (7,8) or use a symetric jump that won't be that weird imo. Reworked this jump a bit, should be better now.
2. 00:56:597 (1,2,3) - BLANKET! D: /caps off. Used your code, thanks! :3
   
   Screenshot + Code

   
   

   180,144,56597,6,0,P|256:102|331:144,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,192,57136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   256,192,57316,1,8,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:06:298 (1) - The music pitch is similar as before, so removing the New Combo to avoid this little combo would be nice. I prefer to keep it since it's a new jumpy pattern.
4. 02:52:645 (8) - Hmm.. Maybe you'd like to add a New Combo here.. Maybe not xD Like I said before, I dislike having single combos. :<

- Nice one, just some jumps are weird in the slow section, keep that in mind for the future. Thanks, I will :3

Very well done! When I start to modding, this was not bubbled . Anyway I think you can always ask for a rebubble, so yeah.
I hope this can help you!
Good Luck!