pieguy1372
pieguy1372 wrote:
[Normal]
00:03:760 (2) - whistle on end to match piano?ok.
00:07:025 (2) - ^ok.
01:04:579 (1,2,3) - curve more similarly to this? http://puu.sh/cWpEs/5c53354d92.txt more smoothkay~68,248,63757,2,0,L|149:189,1,99.9999952316285,0|10,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:01:07:045 (4) - position it more similarly to this? http://puu.sh/cWput/b7d40cf1e6.jpg better flow imokay kk
176,104,64579,6,0,L|216:133,1,49.9999976158143,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,148,64990,2,0,L|272:196,1,49.9999976158143,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,239,65401,2,0,P|344:256|404:212,2,149.999992847443,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:328,164,67045,2,0,P|256:147|197:189,1,149.999992847443,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:don't forget to fix spacing after I moved around this slider's tail so that I don't have to fix spacing....lol I'm being a lazy ass
01:08:688 (1) - imo make a 3/8 slider instead is fine here. it fits song better and is readable enough http://puu.sh/cWpmd/6d570df38d.jpgwhoa, yeah that sounds awesome
01:19:784 (2) - remove finish from end, it's not there in other diffsno, I think i'll keep this for now
01:21:839 (1) - NC for new section? I thought this was NC'd. Or if you meant remove NC, I like the NC here so will keep.
01:23:072 (7) - i'm not sure if this kind of slider is recommended in [Normal] diff. i think move 3rd point on top of red point is fine enoughme neither. I removed the red point.
[Hard]
00:07:025 (1,2) - spacing too close i think it's fine. DS will be kept at 1.8x
00:25:127 (1,2) - spacing^1.4x
00:32:524 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
00:39:510 (7,8) - spacing. this diff seems have a lot of spacing issues... i won't go through pointing any more out, but plz go through the map and check this. I'm not sure what to do with spacing (e.g. too close) when I tried to keep the DS constant. So I'll ask other people for more opinions.
00:48:962 (5) - add NC? u start a jump pattern here, so u might as well add NC to distinguish it ah! gotcha
01:07:456 (9) - imo make it curve in the other direction is more natural. just move 2nd point 3 grids rightok!
01:07:867 (10,11) - move to x152 y276? it might make sense to make jump here to fit vocal. just an ideatried, but this doesn't become a jump but a spacing issue D: (or am i doing it wrong? orz)
01:08:688 (1,2) - try this rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/cWqhh/1c528029c3.jpg seems u map to violin here, but it feels awkward bc the rhythm is wrong.[b]owo yeah that's much better! thanks![/b]
01:11:976 (5) - add NC? downbeat + jumpok!
[Insane]
00:17:730 - imo this part would sound really beautiful with soft whistle. u were using it before to fit piano, but then u stopped. (e.g. u could make it at 00:17:730 - , 00:18:551 - , 00:19:373 - , etc. and it'd be compatible with current hitsounds) if u accept, change on other diffs too the custom clap hitsound, fits what's in the background music, so I'll keep it.
00:26:565 (3) - how about making a jump here? fits the strong feeling from the vocal better, and u tend to use 1.5x in this section anyway moved 00:26:565 (3) - to 276,280 and made this vertical
00:28:825 (3) - end it 1/8 later? maybe it fits hold feeling from piano better and u used this rhythm previously. it would also take care of the overlap here. just an ideakay
00:44:647 (2,3) - try this rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/cVB6h/0f7fbb0573.jpg imo fits vocal better
00:50:606 (6,7,8) - imo soft finish is better to emphasize these. there's a cymbal in the song if u listen hard enough, and imo current hitsounds feel too quiet (u also used it for cymbal at 01:18:551 - ). also on other diffschanged to finish+clap
01:13:620 (7) - NC? this combo seems very long compared to othersno--NC here seems random
01:14:853 (11,12) - i think this jump should actually be bigger. this is a very strong part of the song so i feel the current jump is too weak.I think you modded the older version--but I increased distance between 01:14:852 (2,3) -
01:15:264 (12) - soft clap instead? imo whistle isn't enough to emphasize this part. this is a very strong part of the song, but ur soft whistle is very quiet. it also fits with 01:16:086 (1) - i thinknope, there's no clap sound in the music
01:16:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - imo making jump + 0.6x stream fits better here. seems u use jumps to match vocal, so u might as well make jump at 01:16:086 (1,2) - .Fixed. I never noticed that my jumps matched the vocal. XD
01:16:908 (6) - soft finish on start maybe? there's a lot of emphasis herenope, I do lots of finish at 01:18:551 (1,4) -01:19:784 (5) -
cool diff
nice map ty
hope it helps, gl >w<
no comment = fixed
Edit: comment for insane (cuz I forgot to comment on insane mod)
Thanks for mod ><