General
Knotts' Normal
kinda hard
00:13:145 (6,1) - swap whistle will be better, since you add whistle 00:11:236 00:12:327 00:13:740, same piano same hitsound, and piano 00:13:418 is not the track you followed before.
00:16:741-00:17:400 10% is enough
01:41:712 (5) - add finish will better
Hard
00:34:452 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this hidden pattern is too hard, i think you can rotate each part of the pattern to avoid.
00:53:669 (4) - →x248y184, keep moving 00:52:966 (3,4,1) - here has better flow than a jumping
Kibbleru's Insane
Verse is better than kiai
00:01:964 (4,5) - ctrl g, piano told me
00:07:145 (2,3,4,5) - same here decrease the spacing between 2,3 increase the spacing between 3,4
00:22:031 (1) - ctrl g, downbeat with finish and jump feels better.
01:29:877 add a note here to show the buleline vocal
01:48:274 i think you should map this finish
01:40:775 (1,2,3,4) - i will swap 1,2 amd 3,4's placement on timeline to show the most exciting part in the song.
Melting
没有什么特别大的问题,不过排列在整齐美观和前后物件的联系方面还可以提高
有想法之后,还得花时间想想怎么让梗一个接一个流畅地衔接,而现在这个diff给我的感觉pattern还是比较零碎。
除了可以的pattern以外,短时间滑条的弧度变化不宜过多,不然容易让人感觉杂乱
kiai和前面的主歌,最好能做出不同,让人一打就知道,啊这是kiai了
00:04:690 (1,2,3) - 听音调,这里应该是1,2音调升高,2,3音调降低,spacing按照音调变化比较有逻辑
其他几处也注意一下
00:09:599 (3,4) - a bit ugly, avoid this overlap
01:40:775 (1,2,3,4) - 我更倾向于这四个都ctrl g一下,由外向内,间距拉大,由此形成跳跃感来强调整首歌最高潮的部分
that's all.
Knotts' Normal
kinda hard
00:13:145 (6,1) - swap whistle will be better, since you add whistle 00:11:236 00:12:327 00:13:740, same piano same hitsound, and piano 00:13:418 is not the track you followed before.
00:16:741-00:17:400 10% is enough
01:41:712 (5) - add finish will better
Hard
00:34:452 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this hidden pattern is too hard, i think you can rotate each part of the pattern to avoid.
SPOILER
00:41:952 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^osu file format v13
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00:53:669 (4) - →x248y184, keep moving 00:52:966 (3,4,1) - here has better flow than a jumping
Kibbleru's Insane
Verse is better than kiai
00:01:964 (4,5) - ctrl g, piano told me
00:07:145 (2,3,4,5) - same here decrease the spacing between 2,3 increase the spacing between 3,4
00:22:031 (1) - ctrl g, downbeat with finish and jump feels better.
01:29:877 add a note here to show the buleline vocal
01:48:274 i think you should map this finish
01:40:775 (1,2,3,4) - i will swap 1,2 amd 3,4's placement on timeline to show the most exciting part in the song.
Melting
没有什么特别大的问题,不过排列在整齐美观和前后物件的联系方面还可以提高
有想法之后,还得花时间想想怎么让梗一个接一个流畅地衔接,而现在这个diff给我的感觉pattern还是比较零碎。
除了可以的pattern以外,短时间滑条的弧度变化不宜过多,不然容易让人感觉杂乱
kiai和前面的主歌,最好能做出不同,让人一打就知道,啊这是kiai了
00:04:690 (1,2,3) - 听音调,这里应该是1,2音调升高,2,3音调降低,spacing按照音调变化比较有逻辑
其他几处也注意一下
00:09:599 (3,4) - a bit ugly, avoid this overlap
01:40:775 (1,2,3,4) - 我更倾向于这四个都ctrl g一下,由外向内,间距拉大,由此形成跳跃感来强调整首歌最高潮的部分
that's all.