Silent Siren - Koi Yuki · forum

Gaia

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-10T05:32:26+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, December 19, 2014 at 3:41:27 PM

Artist: Silent Siren
Title: Koi Yuki
Tags: Knotts Kibbleru Kinshara Snow in Love short ver. cut version サイレントサイレン
BPM: 110
Filesize: 4207kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:

Hard (2.52 stars, 231 notes)
Kibbleru's Insane (3.14 stars, 263 notes)
Kinshara's Easy (1.31 stars, 95 notes)
Knotts' Normal (1.66 stars, 167 notes)
Melting (3.22 stars, 271 notes)

Download: Silent Siren - Koi Yuki
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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~ Happy Holidays! ~
Koi Yuki feat. Kinshara, Knotts & Kibbleru

PV : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O1Ei8yKYoW4

Thanks!!

Ringating for new mp3~
Tari for checking metadata~
pishibat for timing!~
Aka & Garven for Bub/Re-Bub
Konei for Qualify!

and also Zero__wind and Rakuen :3

Last edited by Gaia 2014-12-20T04:48:48+00:00, edited 73 times in total.

Knotts

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Knotts 2014-11-10T14:59:48+00:00

First :3

incoming sht normal

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-11-10T21:02:09+00:00

Knotts wrote:
First :3

incoming sht normal

incoming hot easy

Gaia

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Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-10T23:15:23+00:00

hot ez sht nm where >:

Knotts

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Knotts 2014-11-11T06:36:53+00:00

http://puu.sh/cM3Dv/f42f99bbfc.zip

NcrzX

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NcrzX 2014-11-11T10:41:49+00:00

Knoot's Normal :
00:15:624(4) weird slider :v , I think .. better use spinner
00:49:711(1) weird slider too :v
01:04:711(1) ^
01:50:179 add spinner end

Hard :
00:15:624(1) Use Slider.. or spinner
01:13:851(1) , 01:14:320(1) 01:14:789(1) I think, better not to close as the distance
01:15:140 fill the circle or slider there
01:47:836(1) weird slider :v
01:50:062 add spinner end

Melting :
00:06:406(4) end of slider slightly be changed
00:15:624(1) Use Slider.. or spinner
01:08:461(1) i think ctrl + g ,because slightly bit farther the distance
01:13:851(1) , 01:14:320(1) 01:14:789(1) I think, better not to close as the distance ,same as Hard diff
01:45:961(1) you can change it be slider
01:50:062 add spinner end

sorry if not much help ..

Gaia

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Gaia 2014-11-11T18:25:55+00:00

NcrzX wrote:
Hard :
00:15:624(1) Use Slider.. or spinner not my intentions here
01:13:851(1) , 01:14:320(1) 01:14:789(1) I think, better not to close as the distance it's fine as is, i like the antijump
01:15:140 fill the circle or slider there nah no need
01:47:836(1) weird slider :v s: slight adjustment
01:50:062 add spinner end doesnt fit imo

Melting :
00:06:406(4) end of slider slightly be changed how so?
00:15:624(1) Use Slider.. or spinner
01:08:461(1) i think ctrl + g ,because slightly bit farther the distance then it's too close, it's a jump so meh
01:13:851(1) , 01:14:320(1) 01:14:789(1) I think, better not to close as the distance ,same as Hard diff
01:45:961(1) you can change it be slider
01:50:062 add spinner end

rest is same as hard
sorry if not much help ..

thanks for checking

Knotts

712 posts

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Knotts 2014-11-11T18:39:15+00:00

NcrzX wrote:
Knoot's Normal :
00:15:624(4) weird slider :v , I think .. better use spinner Doesn't really seem weird to me, and spinner doesn't really fit
00:49:711(1) weird slider too :v ^
01:04:711(1) ^ ^
01:50:179 add spinner end Spinner doesn't fit here because the vocals continue :3

No changes, but thanks for the mod

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-11-11T23:32:39+00:00

I should probably start mapping this...

Ringating

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Ringating 2014-11-12T09:40:26+00:00

mp3 (and possible bg things you didn't ask for) from pm

I couldn't find any better quality versions available around the web, so I instead took the HD version of that youtube video (audio quality is best on the higher quality videos) and directly ripped the raw 194ish kbps aac from it. I used that to make an mp3 that has a more appealing (imo) fade out at the end. Here is the mp3.

thing you didn't ask for

your bg is already good for a 4:3 bg, but this data ~~that is probably unreliable due to its tiny sample size~~ shows that 16:9 is the more preferred osu aspect ratio (it is basically the modern standard, after all). So, I made this image that letterboxes so that 16:9 players still see the whole original image, and 4:3 players still see what they see with your current bg.

also, that image won't change the thumbnail for the map either (since the letterboxed bit will just be cropped off).

I understand if you don't want to use it though

also regarding timing you mentioned, I'm pretty crap at timing things (I can't even get an offset correct) so I suggest you ask pishi

no kudosu

Gaia

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Gaia 2014-11-12T11:31:38+00:00

ahhh thanks so much for the mp3 C:
as for the bg, cool i'll take it :3 though it did spark an idea in me so i might play around with my original bg a bit and maybe i'll come up with something myself

oh and that poll i voted this morning haha (i chose 16:9 even tho my bg is 4:3 cuz i thought it looked better like this when cropped :p otherwise i like my 1366x768 dimensions)

thanks a ton again!!

now i just need timing...
pls pishi halp me too orz

Rizen

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Joined August 2013

Rizen 2014-11-13T03:38:48+00:00

Ok first off, I have to say that this is probably one of the best pending maps I have ever seen (bar the timing)

SPOILER

[General]

Add Knott as a tag to the mapset. This says so
Timing: I got an offset of 18264 instead of 18312 for the 128BPM Timing point. Double check timing?

[Knott's Normal]

You have a few things in AiMod you should check up on

[Hard]

01:44:327 (1) - Either Blanket the slider or make sure both ends of the slider are the same distance from the circle 2 same combo

[Melting]

Widescreen Support is unchecked but other diffs have this checked
Check AiMod for the unsnapped object

Summary: Just touch up on the timing and it's all sweet :3

Have a Kudosu

Knotts

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Knotts 2014-11-13T04:51:27+00:00

[ Rizen ] wrote:
[Knott's Normal]
You have a few things in AiMod you should check up on All I see is this one DS error even though there isn't a problem at the time it gives me :3

I'll let Gaia do the other shiz. Didn't change anything

Gaia

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Gaia 2014-11-13T06:07:54+00:00

[ Rizen ] wrote:
Ok first off, I have to say that this is probably one of the best pending maps I have ever seen (bar the timing)

SPOILER
[General]
Add Knott as a tag to the mapset. This says so oops forgot lol
Timing: I got an offset of 18264 instead of 18312 for the 128BPM Timing point. Double check timing? yeah hopefully that'll happen in the near future
[Knott's Normal]
You have a few things in AiMod you should check up on actually i checked this too and there were no problems so i think u gotta re dl or something
[Hard]
01:44:327 (1) - Either Blanket the slider or make sure both ends of the slider are the same distance from the circle 2 same combo ok
[Melting]
Widescreen Support is unchecked but other diffs have this checked uhh i actually forgot to remove on the other diffs so its all removed now lol
Check AiMod for the unsnapped object same as normal
Summary: Just touch up on the timing and it's all sweet :3

Have a Kudosu

cool stuffs, thanks for the check and star!

guineaQ

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Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-11-13T07:40:46+00:00

I'm here to eat your limbs

[Knott's Normal]
Check AImod ples

00:01:974 (2) - whistle
00:04:701 (1) - the fk put whistle at reverse end
00:06:883 (3) - ffs put whistle at the reverse itself
00:07:701 (4) - i think u should put whistle at end as well
00:09:065 (1) - son put whistle at reverse or i eat your head as well (and end as well)
00:16:100 (4) - tbh i like this slider but ppl might qq that the slider path is not entirely visible, so think about that
00:29:562 (1,2,3) - hitsounds are missing here, change the audio set to soft 3 and put whistles at every white tick ffs
00:35:187 - i think you missed VERY stronk beat here
00:50:187 (1) - slider art ftw, but i think u should try to put red joint at the slider tick
00:57:687 - stronk beat here again as well (u pls the consistency sama)
01:07:062 (4) - slider beginning has a clap that is so wrong in my ears

only hitsound issues right off the bat

[Hardu]
00:01:156 (1,2,3) - i think you can try thix

SPOILER

00:19:718 (5) - err the clap sounds off for somewhat reason here, maybe editor bug on my side
00:23:468 (4) - annnnd here as well
00:29:562 (1,1) - this nc spam though
00:30:968 (1) - you think this is funneh what are you mapping the slider end to
01:00:030 (2) - oooo better curve this
01:23:468 (4) - u did not blanket perfectly, i am disappointed
01:25:812 (1) - rawr curve thix
01:28:390 (2) - lolo why didn't u make double blanket with (3)
01:38:468 (4,1) - I think it would have flowed better if you swapped 4 and 1 around, but if you do you will have to rearrange B)
01:45:030 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - mmmm I don't see why u make jump here
01:48:312 (1) - babe lemme kiss you
some minor issues with aesthetics but nothing biggy

[Melting]
00:01:156 (1,2,3) - same as hard
00:05:791 (4) - OOOOOOO PRETTY have you considered making the slider path blanket it's own beginning circle
00:09:609 (3,4) - nuuu why kibbleru style
00:19:718 (5) - god why does clap sound so off here
00:23:468 (5) - err im having same issue with hard here, the clap doesn't sound right for me, need check with other people whether its just me
00:38:468 (4) - tiny thing but you can try to curve it towards the left to give some general direction where the next pattern is gonna be at
00:52:062 (1,2,3,4) - really wtf is this supposed to be, looks like somebody squashed a star cookie
01:05:187 (1) - ehh i dont really like how its flowing here, maybe curve it the other way?
01:48:312 (1) - kopy pasta
tsk why i no find much at insane level diffs idk

Final words:
Recheck timing, hitsound, object snap and timing node snap

30 minutes again wow

I might recheck more seriously later

EDIT: I ALMOST FKING FORGOT
NO KDS OR I EAT YOU AS WHOLE

Gaia

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Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-13T08:01:55+00:00

guineaQ wrote:
I'm here to eat your limbs

[Hardu]
00:01:156 (1,2,3) - i think you can try thix not going for manual stacking here gg
SPOILER
00:19:718 (5) - err the clap sounds off for somewhat reason here, maybe editor bug on my side ill redo hitsound stuff after new timing
00:23:468 (4) - annnnd here as well
00:29:562 (1,1) - this nc spam though problem? -3-
00:30:968 (1) - you think this is funneh what are you mapping the slider end to oops, inherited was off from changing mp3, fixed
01:00:030 (2) - oooo better curve this eh ok slightly
01:23:468 (4) - u did not blanket perfectly, i am disappointed lol its soooo far apart ok fine
01:25:812 (1) - rawr curve thix naw
01:28:390 (2) - lolo why didn't u make double blanket with (3) wasnt really going for that but why not
01:38:468 (4,1) - I think it would have flowed better if you swapped 4 and 1 around, but if you do you will have to rearrange B) naah flows fine to me
01:45:030 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - mmmm I don't see why u make jump here the only jumps were at 01:45:499 (4,5,6) - and that's to emphasize the triple (drums)
01:48:312 (1) - babe lemme kiss you ty <3
some minor issues with aesthetics but nothing biggy

[Melting]
00:01:156 (1,2,3) - same as hard me too here, i only like manual stacking when it's 1/1 apart
00:05:791 (4) - OOOOOOO PRETTY have you considered making the slider path blanket it's own beginning circle its supposed to make a heart with 00:10:155 (4) - haha
00:09:609 (3,4) - nuuu why kibbleru style wot
00:19:718 (5) - god why does clap sound so off here all hitsounds ill check in the future
00:23:468 (5) - err im having same issue with hard here, the clap doesn't sound right for me, need check with other people whether its just me
00:38:468 (4) - tiny thing but you can try to curve it towards the left to give some general direction where the next pattern is gonna be at i moved the circle+sliders down if thats any better
00:52:062 (1,2,3,4) - really wtf is this supposed to be, looks like somebody squashed a star cookie not really supposed to be a star ahhhh but moved 5 a bit to the left
01:05:187 (1) - ehh i dont really like how its flowing here, maybe curve it the other way? then the flow following this would suck s:
01:48:312 (1) - kopy pasta nein it looks different kinda -3-
tsk why i no find much at insane level diffs idk

Final words:
Recheck timing, hitsound, object snap and timing node snap

30 minutes again wow

I might recheck more seriously later

EDIT: I ALMOST FKING FORGOT
NO KDS OR I EAT YOU AS WHOLE

eat me as whole

thanks bb<3

guineaQ

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guineaQ 2014-11-13T09:17:30+00:00

try reading the first letters only and get rekt

EDIT: fk im running out of things to eat\

On a serious note, would you mind if I mapped futsuu, muzu taiko diffs for you set?
me like dis song (after timing is more refined ofc)

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2014-11-13T15:18:44+00:00

guineaQ wrote:
I'm here to eat your limbs

[Knott's Normal]
Check AImod ples Gaia pls my tags

00:01:974 (2) - whistle
00:04:701 (1) - the fk put whistle at reverse end
00:06:883 (3) - ffs put whistle at the reverse itself
00:07:701 (4) - i think u should put whistle at end as well
00:09:065 (1) - son put whistle at reverse or i eat your head as well (and end as well)
00:16:100 (4) - tbh i like this slider but ppl might qq that the slider path is not entirely visible, so think about that psh, it cant be that hard
00:29:562 (1,2,3) - hitsounds are missing here, change the audio set to soft 3 and put whistles at every white tick ffs
00:35:187 - i think you missed VERY stronk beat here yeah, but i wanted to simplify it and just follow the vocals cause y not
00:50:187 (1) - slider art ftw, but i think u should try to put red joint at the slider tick ehh, maybe i'll change later
00:57:687 - stronk beat here again as well (u pls the consistency sama) same as last time. i might consider changing it.. maybe...
01:07:062 (4) - slider beginning has a clap that is so wrong in my ears

only hitsound issues right off the bat

thx

Knotts' Normal

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Snow in Love.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75030
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Koi Yuki short ver.
TitleUnicode:恋い雪
Artist:Silent Siren
ArtistUnicode:Silent Siren
Creator:Gaia
Version:Knotts' Normal
Source:
Tags:Knotts Snow in Love サイレント サイレン
BeatmapID:538302
BeatmapSetID:231476

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
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Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-14T00:41:55+00:00

guineaQ wrote:
try reading the first letters only and get rekt

EDIT: fk im running out of things to eat\

On a serious note, would you mind if I mapped futsuu, muzu taiko diffs for you set?
me like dis song (after timing is more refined ofc)

i c wtf is this sso i eat your limbs son get rekt fr3ien

wtf.

uhh im trying for rank hopefully around december so making a hybrid set would only make the ranking process longer, so i'd have to decline
sorrryyyyyyyyy :C

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2014-11-14T11:24:08+00:00

From my queue

[General]

about the timing, current timing set seems really inapproriate (you may already know this), so i recommend moving last timing line by -25 ~ - 27, it quite fits nicely with the song imo

[Knott's Normal]

since having consistent NC pattern is recommended on low diffs, you'd rather adjust some NCs on front part of the song
check this
00:04:156 (5,1) - swap NC
00:06:883 (3) - add NC
00:08:520 (5,1) - swap NC
00:11:247 (4) - add NC
00:07:701 (4) - remove whistle on the slider's starting point,this feels better
01:14:327 (4,5,6) - what about emphaszing these notes by adding NC on (4) note? it sounds ironic since i already said about consistency but this would be much better than current
01:36:124 (3) - this finish hears really awkward, how about deleting it?

[Hard]

00:01:974 (4) - try deleting this whistle for both consistency and better sound
00:29:562 (1,1,1) - same whistle suggestion with Melting diff
00:34:483 (3) - same as Melting diff
00:41:983 (3) - ^
00:44:562 (1) - too high placement? i'd rather lower the location to avoid touching HP bar and potential off screen problem
00:52:999 (3,4) - i think giving jump pattern between these objects isn't good because it doesn't fit with the music well how about giving jump between 00:53:702 (4,1) - thses instead?

[Melting]

00:29:537 (1,1,1) - what about adding default soft whistle on these? this works nicely with the piano sound in the song
00:35:187 (1) - try this NC pattern instead of current one, this fits much better with the vocal imo
can't understand what i mean? then check this
00:33:312 (1) - remove NC
00:34:483 (3) - add NC
00:35:187 (1) - remove NC
00:36:124 (4) - add NC
00:37:062 (1) - remove NC
00:41:983 (3) - ^
00:54:874 (3) - since most of objects that you placed have quite nice flow but this part has little bit uncomfortable flow , what about rotating this slider like this?, this has nice flow with both the previous slider and the next note
01:48:052 (2,1) - swap NC to fit with the vocal

nice map! good luck (:

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-15T00:28:45+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
From my queue

[General]
about the timing, current timing set seems really inapproriate (you may already know this), so i recommend moving last timing line by -25 ~ - 27, it quite fits nicely with the song imo yaaa i know so ive got someone to check so ill change it later (:
[Hard]
00:01:974 (4) - try deleting this whistle for both consistency and better sound changed it around , sounds good
00:29:562 (1,1,1) - same whistle suggestion with Melting diff cool stuffs
00:34:483 (3) - same as Melting diff yeah, keeping my NCs here too s:
00:41:983 (3) - ^
00:44:562 (1) - too high placement? i'd rather lower the location to avoid touching HP bar and potential off screen problem it looks like this in game so i think it should be ok? correct me if im wrong though
00:52:999 (3,4) - i think giving jump pattern between these objects isn't good because it doesn't fit with the music well how about giving jump between 00:53:702 (4,1) - thses instead? hmmmm maybe... I'll keep for now and see what modders say

[Melting]
00:29:537 (1,1,1) - what about adding default soft whistle on these? this works nicely with the piano sound in the song nice
00:35:187 (1) - try this NC pattern instead of current one, this fits much better with the vocal imo actually I think my current NC pattern is better, i prefer to stay consistent and just NC every measure, sorry \:
can't understand what i mean? then check this
00:33:312 (1) - remove NC
00:34:483 (3) - add NC
00:35:187 (1) - remove NC
00:36:124 (4) - add NC
00:37:062 (1) - remove NC
00:41:983 (3) - ^
00:54:874 (3) - since most of objects that you placed have quite nice flow but this part has little bit uncomfortable flow , what about rotating this slider like this?, this has nice flow with both the previous slider and the next note a little flow variation for this strong note is nice i think
01:48:052 (2,1) - swap NC to fit with the vocal
nice map! good luck (:

Thanks for modding! C:

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2014-11-15T00:36:56+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
[Knott's Normal]
since having consistent NC pattern is recommended on low diffs, you'd rather adjust some NCs on front part of the song I NC every two stanzas because it's a normal so I think it's consistent
check this
00:04:156 (5,1) - swap NC
00:06:883 (3) - add NC
00:08:520 (5,1) - swap NC
00:11:247 (4) - add NC
00:07:701 (4) - remove whistle on the slider's starting point,this feels better
01:14:327 (4,5,6) - what about emphaszing these notes by adding NC on (4) note? it sounds ironic since i already said about consistency but this would be much better than current
01:36:124 (3) - this finish hears really awkward, how about deleting it?

Changed everything else but the first NC suggestion. Thanks for the mod! i love you scv

Knotts' Normal

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Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-11-15T03:36:04+00:00

m4m from ur queue ur gunna mod a full length song cuz u didnt state any rules for it :>

u know which map alrdy prob

nice song

love live bg always works right

[General]

Are you sure the "short ver" is from an official source? if u cut it yourself better remove it
00:18:312 - offset sounds VERY VERY late. call pishi back.
this mp3 is cut so weirdly. u can hear the vocals start at the end lol... makes it so obvious it was cut

[Melting]

U can increase od a bit, bpm very low, would be sorta boring otherwise.
00:09:609 (3) - overlap is kinda weird how bout this
SPOILER
00:12:337 (3) - nazi how bout space this more evenly between 00:12:882 (4,5) -
00:51:358 (4) - how bout ctrl g or something and rearrange a bit, linear movement weird .-.
try using some more straight 1/1 sliders .-. looks boring atm
01:11:280 (2,4) - blanket this?
01:25:577 (5,1) - imo swap nc, the (5) is a stronger sound as for combos etc (idk how to explain)
01:40:812 (1,2,3,4) - use some copy paste here pls, doesn't look very neat
yeah get ur timing fixed, even i can tell its wrong

[Hard]

00:24:640 - uhgg i prefer mapping this out
00:29:562 - how bout slowing sv here
00:32:374 (3) - so curved .-.
00:34:718 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - questionable for hard diff idk how easy this is to read with this ar
01:45:499 (4,5,6) - imo sort of harsh to end a jump with a triplet. try avoiding this

[Faggot's Normal]

00:02:519 - so weird to not map this out. at least put some kinks in the slider to sorta emphasize it?
01:41:749 (5,1) - no blanket?
01:48:312 (3,4) - no slider art reported. (look at gaia's diffs)

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2014-11-15T03:40:48+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
[Faggot's Normal]
00:02:519 - so weird to not map this out. at least put some kinks in the slider to sorta emphasize it? bleh
01:41:749 (5,1) - no blanket? blankets are for chumps
01:48:312 (3,4) - no slider art reported. (look at gaia's diffs) slider art is for creative people

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-15T03:56:00+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
m4m from ur queue ur gunna mod a full length song cuz u didnt state any rules for it :>
i cri evertim

u know which map alrdy prob

nice song

love live bg always works right its not LL :U

[General]
Are you sure the "short ver" is from an official source? if u cut it yourself better remove it no i have no idea wtf i'm doing with the metadata but I used the official youtube cut version and the title looks like this
00:18:312 - offset sounds VERY VERY late. call pishi back. no he never came i timed it myself welp ;w;
this mp3 is cut so weirdly. u can hear the vocals start at the end lol... makes it so obvious it was cut well the full ver isnt even released yet lol orz
[Melting]
U can increase od a bit, bpm very low, would be sorta boring otherwise. OD6.9 just the way pk likes it
00:09:609 (3) - overlap is kinda weird how bout this everything looks weird af idek
SPOILER
00:12:337 (3) - nazi how bout space this more evenly between 00:12:882 (4,5) - sure
00:51:358 (4) - how bout ctrl g or something and rearrange a bit, linear movement weird .-. i liek dis :u
try using some more straight 1/1 sliders .-. looks boring atm gg
01:11:280 (2,4) - blanket this? r u the blanket nazi this is already blanketed o-o redid it just incase tho
01:25:577 (5,1) - imo swap nc, the (5) is a stronger sound as for combos etc (idk how to explain) okey
01:40:812 (1,2,3,4) - use some copy paste here pls, doesn't look very neat okie
yeah get ur timing fixed, even i can tell its wrong ik
[Hard]
00:24:640 - uhgg i prefer mapping this out gunna get more opinions i guess edit: mapped it out after debating with myself
00:29:562 - how bout slowing sv here ^
00:32:374 (3) - so curved .-. i know u dont like this
00:34:718 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - questionable for hard diff idk how easy this is to read with this ar rip
01:45:499 (4,5,6) - imo sort of harsh to end a jump with a triplet. try avoiding this rip
[Faggot's Normal] nice name

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rip me ur drain makes me cri

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2014-11-17T08:08:42+00:00

short ver 一般帶括號……就是Koi Yuki （short ver.）

00:00:882 - 前奏是弱起小節……所以直接設置offest在這裡就行了……可能左手鋼琴有點誤導作用……實際上的開頭是我給的時間才對……按這個時間每節一次NC應該能感受的出來……

00:18:283 - 雖然我timing不太行……不過應該是這個附近……比如把時間切到00:19:718 - 這種音长較短的鼓點開始，去掉note按下播放就聽不到鼓了所以offest肯定遲了……

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-17T08:28:43+00:00

:3

恩我知道timing有問題所以我已經找人了
(希望他早點來orz)

short ver. 是照official Youtube的所以我應該是對的

話說回來Narcissu也蠻萌的嘛～

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2014-11-17T21:00:44+00:00

From my modding queue ~

[General]

You should definitely have a recheck on your offsets again, the last one is pretty much off. Offset 18286 should be right, but have someone recheck.

[Knotts' Normal]

Hmm, patterns look a bit cluttered, but I guess you don't wanna increase DS anyway.
00:02:246 (3) - Split this into a slider+circle so it fits better to the leading piano you are putting emphasis on: http://puu.sh/cUS1W/eb14620eac.jpg
00:21:358 (7,1) - Would be nice if you could arrange it such that it does not overlap: http://puu.sh/cUShZ/57bbd17402.jpg
01:41:723 (5,1) - Preference: Would look neater if you blanket here: http://puu.sh/cUSTl/6fa7961a34.jpg (kdsplzthx)
01:45:499 (7) - Add drum-whistles at the sliderstart maybe.
01:50:187 (1) - That finish HS is not really needed in here, maybe delete it.

[Hard]

00:13:428 - Delete the whistle here to emphasize the lead piano better.
00:27:426 (4,1) - Add a small jump here for better emphasis on the cymbal.
00:35:655 (3,4) - Meh, the distance here is higher than between 00:34:718 (4,1) - although the music is noticeable weaker. Placethem between the slider 3 and the previous stack instead: http://puu.sh/cUTV6/6315e5617e.jpg
00:43:155 (3,4,5,6) - Same as above.
00:57:921 (2,3) - Same, i don't see a reason for such a big jump happen here, the drum snare is pretty weak.
01:04:952 (4,1) - Maybe add a jump here, the vocal is strong at this part.
01:12:218 (3,1) - Same as above.
01:14:327 (1,1,1) - I see the intention here, but I don't think you have to NC spam this part. Delete the last two maybe. Same in your Melting diff
01:40:343 (5,1) - Jump for the strong vocal?
01:44:093 (4,1) - Jump for the cymbal?
01:48:312 (1) - To be honest, that heart shape looks a bit crushed to me

[Melting]

00:09:609 (3,4) - That doesn't look so good, maybe parallel sliders is better: http://puu.sh/cUV3o/13e3a3b873.jpg
00:35:655 (3,4) - Unreasonable high jump here, same as in hard.
00:43:155 (3,4) - Same as above.
00:52:062 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can form a pentagon here, plays the same but looks better imo: http://puu.sh/cUVou/df2d72ba5d.jpg
00:57:921 (2,3) - Decrease the DS here, same as in hard.
01:26:749 (4,5,1) - Decrease the DS between 4-5, puts a better emphasis on the vocal: http://puu.sh/cUVEi/7e1e1e7091.jpg
01:45:030 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Star-shape for better aesthetics <3 http://puu.sh/cUVRm/c301273e8d.jpg
01:48:312 (1) - Still think it is crushed. xD

Allright, not much to complain about here. Everyone seems to have his own sense of how to setup jumps, so feel free to deny any issue i point out concerning that here. Good luck with this mapset!

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2014-11-17T22:22:03+00:00

Pho wrote:
From my modding queue ~

[Knotts' Normal]
Hmm, patterns look a bit cluttered, but I guess you don't wanna increase DS anyway.
00:02:246 (3) - Split this into a slider+circle so it fits better to the leading piano you are putting emphasis on: http://puu.sh/cUS1W/eb14620eac.jpg
00:21:358 (7,1) - Would be nice if you could arrange it such that it does not overlap: http://puu.sh/cUShZ/57bbd17402.jpg meh, i overlapped on purpose
01:41:723 (5,1) - Preference: Would look neater if you blanket here: http://puu.sh/cUSTl/6fa7961a34.jpg (kdsplzthx)
01:45:499 (7) - Add drum-whistles at the sliderstart maybe. i did drum whistle instead
01:50:187 (1) - That finish HS is not really needed in here, maybe delete it.

Ty for mod

Knotts' Normal

osu file format v13

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Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-18T00:37:19+00:00

Pho wrote:
From my modding queue ~

[General]
You should definitely have a recheck on your offsets again, the last one is pretty much off. Offset 18286 should be right, but have someone recheck. orz all these timings; ill try to fix asap
[Hard]
00:13:428 - Delete the whistle here to emphasize the lead piano better. nice
00:27:426 (4,1) - Add a small jump here for better emphasis on the cymbal. >small jump lol okey
00:35:655 (3,4) - Meh, the distance here is higher than between 00:34:718 (4,1) - although the music is noticeable weaker. Placethem between the slider 3 and the previous stack instead: http://puu.sh/cUTV6/6315e5617e.jpg
00:43:155 (3,4,5,6) - Same as above.
00:57:921 (2,3) - Same, i don't see a reason for such a big jump happen here, the drum snare is pretty weak. keeping these 3 cuz i like the idea of repetition s:
01:04:952 (4,1) - Maybe add a jump here, the vocal is strong at this part. i think the flow variation here is good enough emphasis
01:12:218 (3,1) - Same as above. why not sure
01:14:327 (1,1,1) - I see the intention here, but I don't think you have to NC spam this part. Delete the last two maybe. Same in your Melting diff maaaybe
01:40:343 (5,1) - Jump for the strong vocal?
01:44:093 (4,1) - Jump for the cymbal? i was focusing on instruments here and u can tell the note density is quite high, so by itself is hard already, keep both for now
01:48:312 (1) - To be honest, that heart shape looks a bit crushed to me riiiiiiiiiiip
[Melting]
00:09:609 (3,4) - That doesn't look so good, maybe parallel sliders is better: http://puu.sh/cUV3o/13e3a3b873.jpg ehhh then the jump becomes really big.. i know mine isnt the best but it's ok i guess, if u have other ideas i'm all ears
00:35:655 (3,4) - Unreasonable high jump here, same as in hard.
00:43:155 (3,4) - Same as above. same reasoning as hard for both
00:52:062 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can form a pentagon here, plays the same but looks better imo: http://puu.sh/cUVou/df2d72ba5d.jpg ughhh i dont like perfect geometric shapes x( sorrryy it's just preference
00:57:921 (2,3) - Decrease the DS here, same as in hard. same for me too
01:26:749 (4,5,1) - Decrease the DS between 4-5, puts a better emphasis on the vocal: http://puu.sh/cUVEi/7e1e1e7091.jpg i'd rather have even spacing that's relatively larger than a small spacing and then a big one, just something i've always hated when i was a player i guess :b
01:45:030 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Star-shape for better aesthetics <3 http://puu.sh/cUVRm/c301273e8d.jpg same as above s:
01:48:312 (1) - Still think it is crushed. xD loooool yeah i guess i'll fix this one up a bit to differ from hard
Allright, not much to complain about here. Everyone seems to have his own sense of how to setup jumps, so feel free to deny any issue i point out concerning that here. Good luck with this mapset!

thanks for modding! C:

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,811 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2014-11-18T00:42:12+00:00

i like how no modders notice that you're waiting for timing from previous posts and mention it's wrong
every
single
time

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-18T00:50:37+00:00

i cri evertim

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2014-11-20T17:16:35+00:00

from Xmas queue

[General]
original title and romanised one are not the same
I feel that the timing is a bit off somewhere(like 01:14:327 - ). you'd better to find some timing pro to check it

[Knotts' Normal]
AR is a bit too high imo, AR4 is enough
00:02:519 - I don't think ignoring the heavy piano sound here is a nice idea, it sounds a bit empty to me in the middle of the slider

[Hard]
00:44:562 (1) - this one touches the scores, hope you can move it down a bit or change its direction

[Melting]
00:05:791 (4) - half of a heart shape? or question mark? the current shape isn't like either of them so maybe you can make the shape better
00:10:155 (4) - after seeing this one, I think you want to make half of heart shape here right? if so you really need to fix ^, the end of that slider looks weird
00:31:437 - how about moving the NC to 00:31:905 - ? too keep each 3 notes in the same color from 00:29:562 - to 00:31:437 - . it would look better
01:45:030 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make them a prefec pentagon?

kinda nice map, no much to point out
good luck

Aldwych

2,831 posts

Joined February 2012

Aldwych 2014-11-20T19:47:41+00:00

Hi bra, from modding queue.

[General]

You must have a diff with under 2.0 stars to get this ranked. :<
Maybe decrease the volume to ~30%, i think it will be better since the hitsound vol is too high for me.

[Knotts' Norma]

00:09:064 : I've nothing against overlapping, but this one is ugly, a rework of the slider might be a good solution.
00:22:062 : Same problem about overlapping, curving the slider can resolve this problem
01:29:093 : Fail on overlapping with the previous slider (y = 80 or 81)

Really good normal i've nothng to say more, gj.

[Hard]

00:11:246 : Imo, i will found better if you not stacking the circle with the slider, it makes it strange to read and play.
00:24:874 : How about use the same slider as the next one.
00:34:718 : I've nothing against the pattern and i found it interesting, but this is the case where we need some NC, moreover when the current combo is really "white" (if you know what i mean)
00:42:218 : ^
00:45:968 : Same thing as 00:11:246.
01:00:030 : Try to be consistent with the other sliders around.
01:29:913 : Blabla placement, blabla same as 00:11:246.

Nice hard.

[Melting]

00:11:246 : Oh, i not gonna say the next, you already know i will mention them.
00:23:937 : Use the same slider during the whole pattern imo.
00:38:468 : Same slider as the previous one?
Well, i will say the same thing as hard, which accoring me to say that i'm a bit disapointed about this diff, cause i'm seeing a copy of the Hard diff some the same problems are on the hard.

Btw gl hf for rank

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2014-11-21T00:54:36+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
[Knotts' Normal]
AR is a bit too high imo, AR4 is enough
00:02:519 - I don't think ignoring the heavy piano sound here is a nice idea, it sounds a bit empty to me in the middle of the slider

fixed everything

Aldwych wrote:
[Knotts' Norma]

00:09:064 : I've nothing against overlapping, but this one is ugly, a rework of the slider might be a good solution. ehh, doesn't really look too odd to me
00:22:062 : Same problem about overlapping, curving the slider can resolve this problem ^
01:29:093 : Fail on overlapping with the previous slider (y = 80 or 81)

Really good normal i've nothng to say more, gj.

Thanks for the mod guys

Knotts' Normal

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Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-11-21T00:56:42+00:00

yo did u do the side of the bg urself? thats pretty cool

why cant u do that for mine D:<

pishifat wrote:
i like how no modders notice that you're waiting for timing from previous posts and mention it's wrong
every
single
time

who even reads previous posts

heres ur insane GD as requested
(change the diff name if u add it)

edit: added slider art.

SPOILER

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Tags:Knotts Snow in Love サイレント サイレン
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148,172,33077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,92,33312,6,0,L|292:92,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,148,33780,2,0,P|324:168|300:244,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,164,34483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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156,164,35187,5,2,0:0:0:0:
232,88,35421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,188,35655,2,0,L|304:268,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,88,36124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,32,36358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,119,36593,2,0,P|430:131|396:131,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,108,37062,6,0,P|249:96|283:96,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,256,37530,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,196,37765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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88,104,40343,2,0,P|108:136|140:152,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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200,96,41046,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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232,88,42921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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232,88,43624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,20,43858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,152,44093,2,0,P|104:156|144:148,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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312,300,45265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,60,45851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,59,45968,2,0,P|253:56|220:68,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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156,328,48312,6,0,P|166:278|176:216,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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332,176,49718,2,0,P|300:185|260:196,1,52.5000020027161,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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268,256,50890,2,0,B|260:202|252:152|252:152|205:128,1,157.500006008148,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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220,244,60733,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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408,244,64483,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,124,64718,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,244,64952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,76,65187,6,0,P|288:83|235:89,1,105.000004005432,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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264,152,71749,2,0,P|298:155|333:159,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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72,236,73390,1,2,0:0:0:0:
36,68,73624,2,0,P|41:109|48:148,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,204,74093,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,36,74327,5,4,0:0:0:0:
88,152,74796,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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264,280,76671,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,196,76905,2,0,P|327:191|280:188,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,288,77374,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,196,77608,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,300,77843,2,0,P|280:340|252:364,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,180,78312,6,0,P|210:183|245:186,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,104,78780,2,0,P|143:173|96:232,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,96,79483,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,124,79718,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,192,79952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,260,80187,6,0,P|293:255|258:252,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,60,80655,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,140,80890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,168,81124,2,0,P|165:163|130:160,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,316,81593,2,0,P|242:284|246:249,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,256,82062,5,2,0:0:0:0:
332,296,82296,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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160,68,83233,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,132,83468,2,0,P|280:84|280:48,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,332,84405,2,0,P|290:336|325:339,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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208,232,86046,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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188,216,86983,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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88,204,87921,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,216,88155,2,0,P|241:217|206:219,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,80,88624,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,160,88858,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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280,176,89562,6,0,L|200:184,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,120,90030,2,0,L|64:128,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,276,90499,5,2,0:0:0:0:
80,273,90616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,270,90733,1,2,0:0:0:0:
129,268,90850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,292,90968,5,8,0:0:0:0:
176,289,91085,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,286,91202,1,8,0:0:0:0:
225,284,91319,1,2,0:0:0:0:
255,300,91437,6,0,P|287:285|322:282,1,70,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,120,91905,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,196,92140,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,100,94483,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Last edited by Kibbleru 2014-11-21T03:41:40+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Gaia

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Gaia 2014-11-21T02:57:22+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
from Xmas queue

[General]
original title and romanised one are not the same oooops
I feel that the timing is a bit off somewhere(like 01:14:327 - ). you'd better to find some timing pro to check it yaaaaaaaaaa ik ;w;

[Hard]
00:44:562 (1) - this one touches the scores, hope you can move it down a bit or change its direction fixed!

[Melting]
00:05:791 (4) - half of a heart shape? or question mark? the current shape isn't like either of them so maybe you can make the shape better
00:10:155 (4) - after seeing this one, I think you want to make half of heart shape here right? if so you really need to fix ^, the end of that slider looks weird lol yeah I'll look into making these 2 prettier
00:31:437 - how about moving the NC to 00:31:905 - ? too keep each 3 notes in the same color from 00:29:562 - to 00:31:437 - . it would look better maaaaybe but that note has a reallly strong note that i want to emphasize more, s:
01:45:030 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make them a prefec pentagon? i dont like perfect shapes ><

kinda nice map, no much to point out
good luck

thanks wcx C:

Aldwych wrote:
Hi bra, from modding queue. yo! :3

[General]

You must have a diff with under 2.0 stars to get this ranked. :< Normal is 1.6 stars o_o
Maybe decrease the volume to ~30%, i think it will be better since the hitsound vol is too high for me. Maybe at the beginning.. I'll play around with them later

[Hard]

00:11:246 : Imo, i will found better if you not stacking the circle with the slider, it makes it strange to read and play. I actually like this stack pattern a lot ><
00:24:874 : How about use the same slider as the next one. i prefer keeping my sliders diverse owo
00:34:718 : I've nothing against the pattern and i found it interesting, but this is the case where we need some NC, moreover when the current combo is really "white" (if you know what i mean) uhhh sorry idk what "white" means :c as for the NC's maybe.. but i've already got so many nc spams in other places so i dont wanna do it too much LOL
00:42:218 : ^ ^
00:45:968 : Same thing as 00:11:246.
01:00:030 : Try to be consistent with the other sliders around. I double blanketed this one ^^
01:29:913 : Blabla placement, blabla same as 00:11:246.
rest is the same response as above
Nice hard. yay o/

[Melting]

00:11:246 : Oh, i not gonna say the next, you already know i will mention them. i still like these kinds of stacks :c
00:23:937 : Use the same slider during the whole pattern imo.
00:38:468 : Same slider as the previous one?(for both ^) I prefer to have a variety of sliders, idk call me weird but i think it's funner to play that way ><
Well, i will say the same thing as hard, which accoring me to say that i'm a bit disapointed about this diff, cause i'm seeing a copy of the Hard diff some the same problems are on the hard. ahhhhhhh asdf yeah Melting is basically Hard but more jumps lol... but that's just the way i map my hards tbh orz sorry for disappointing ):

Btw gl hf for rank

Thanksssssssssss Aldwych xD

Kibbleru wrote:
yo did u do the side of the bg urself? thats pretty cool

why cant u do that for mine D:<

I'll redo ur bg once i find time
godbless me for keeping all my psd's
c:

VINXIS

Featured Artist

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VINXIS 2014-11-21T03:25:05+00:00

i was gunna mod this but hav a star instead~

Gaia

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Gaia 2014-11-21T03:36:18+00:00

lol, thanks for the star! xD

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2014-11-21T08:19:05+00:00

oh no why short ver. OAQ I can't get enough
and why is the timing so bad x.x (just testplayed)

Gaia

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Gaia 2014-11-21T08:32:30+00:00

because album is released dec 3rd asdf

...

.!summon pishi ;w;

Little

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Joined November 2012

Little 2014-11-21T08:32:54+00:00

From my queue.

[General]

Fix unicode title in Kibb's diff.
Knotts' Normal is too rhythmically complex for a lowest diff. I recommend adding an Easy difficulty to have a proper difficulty spread.
It's totally unnecessary to have SC:4 since it is exactly the same as SC:1. Just change all the SC:4 sections in Knotts' Normal to SC:1 and remove the SC:4 files.

The map lags behind the song as we get later in the song, indicating that bpm is higher than you think. In this case, the BPM is not exactly 128. It's closer to 128.01.. yeah. Here's all the timing points with (what I think are) the correct offsets:

Timing

[TimingPoints]
1146,545.454545454546,4,2,3,50,1,0
2509,545.454545454546,4,2,3,50,1,0
13418,645.161290322581,4,2,3,45,1,0
14385,666.666666666667,4,2,3,40,1,0
15385,697.674418604651,4,2,3,40,1,0
16082,659.340659340659,4,2,3,30,1,0
18064,437.956204379562,4,2,1,70,1,0
18282,468.71338176705,4,2,1,70,1,0

[Knotts' Normal]

I think the AR is way too low, considering that you use a lot of 1/2 beat spacing, and low DS. This causes a lot of overlapping which makes the map look really busy, and can be overwhelming or difficult to read. I strongly recommend using AR5 for this map.
00:01:974 (2) - Add a whistle? It's the same musical idea as 00:07:701 (4) and you used a whistle there.
00:02:519 (3) - Since the music leaves it quite ambiguous, how about adding a new combo here to clearly show the player where the downbeat is?
00:20:187 (5) - Whistle on end, since there's clearly drum here.
00:26:983 - This has the same sound in the music as 00:23:233 so give them the same hitsounds?
01:44:327 (5,6) - I think this rhythm will be better since (5) has a strong sound in the song, and this rhythm will emphasize it more: http://puu.sh/cZpBk/26a347a501.jpg

[Hard]

00:08:791 (3,2) - Personally, I think all the stuff in this part would flow better if these circles were moved together like this: http://puu.sh/cZrTO/082a24dcdf.jpg
00:22:061 (1) - Add whistle on end?
00:24:874 (3,4) - Putting more space between these would help the flow: http://puu.sh/cZrZ6/e2906aebcb.jpg
00:25:811 (1) - Add whistle on end?
00:27:452 (4) - Flows much better if you stack this on (2): http://puu.sh/cZrZX/cef6ea4639.jpg
01:23:937 (1,2,3) - I think this would be more fun to play: http://puu.sh/cZs4O/7b11d0369d.jpg

[Kibbleru's Insane]

00:30:265 (3) - Maybe you can curve this a bit too for a nice pattern of straight, slightly curved, curved.
00:22:062 (1) - Whistle on end?
00:25:108 (3) - Current placement makes the pattern feel stiff. This placement would be much more fluid: http://puu.sh/cZsBi/458bb69de6.jpg
00:35:655 (3) - If you agreed for 00:30:265 (3) then maybe you could do that here too. It'd be a cool little theme to have throughout the map.
00:38:937 (1) - Is this supposed to be curved...? You have 3 slider points, but it's basically a straight line... if you look, the x-coordinate change only differs by 1 between the first two points and the second two points. So maybe if you intended to make a curve, you could make it more noticeable?
00:41:280 (3) - That^
00:43:155 (3) - Oh hey, you actually did it here.
00:45:851 (4,5) - Stack lel.
01:07:062 (1) - ^

[Melting]

00:10:155 (4) - Personally, I think this would be much better flipped because of the slider shape's end, hinting to the opposite direction of the slider's curve: http://puu.sh/cZtvA/f3387f74be.jpg
00:59:562 (1,2,3,4) - I think a round flow would be nicer here: http://puu.sh/cZtHl/47f38e0f5a.jpg

Good luck!

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-21T08:48:17+00:00

CloudSplash16 wrote:
From my queue.

[General]
Fix unicode title in Kibb's diff. goddammit kibb
Knotts' Normal is too rhythmically complex for a lowest diff. I recommend adding an Easy difficulty to have a proper difficulty spread. .!summon Kinsharabae
It's totally unnecessary to have SC:4 since it is exactly the same as SC:1. Just change all the SC:4 sections in Knotts' Normal to SC:1 and remove the SC:4 files. I'll let Knotts decide on this but tbh i have no idea wtf he's doing too
The map lags behind the song as we get later in the song, indicating that bpm is higher than you think. In this case, the BPM is not exactly 128. It's closer to 128.01.. yeah. Here's all the timing points with (what I think are) the correct offsets: woah I'll see if this works tomorrow 12:42 right now i got school tmr riiiip
Timing
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[Hard]
00:08:791 (3,2) - Personally, I think all the stuff in this part would flow better if these circles were moved together like this: http://puu.sh/cZrTO/082a24dcdf.jpg cool
00:22:061 (1) - Add whistle on end? oops
00:24:874 (3,4) - Putting more space between these would help the flow: http://puu.sh/cZrZ6/e2906aebcb.jpg i agree!
00:25:811 (1) - Add whistle on end? oops
00:27:452 (4) - Flows much better if you stack this on (2): http://puu.sh/cZrZX/cef6ea4639.jpg ehh not what i was looking for s:
01:23:937 (1,2,3) - I think this would be more fun to play: http://puu.sh/cZs4O/7b11d0369d.jpg aa i like my back and forth patterns owo
[Melting]
00:10:155 (4) - Personally, I think this would be much better flipped because of the slider shape's end, hinting to the opposite direction of the slider's curve: http://puu.sh/cZtvA/f3387f74be.jpg this was supposed to be the other half of the heart ;w;
00:59:562 (1,2,3,4) - I think a round flow would be nicer here: http://puu.sh/cZtHl/47f38e0f5a.jpg not what I was going for here, srry
Good luck!

Thaaaaaanks CS16 C:

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2014-11-21T15:05:42+00:00

CloudSplash16 wrote:
From my queue.

[Knotts' Normal]
I think the AR is way too low, considering that you use a lot of 1/2 beat spacing, and low DS. This causes a lot of overlapping which makes the map look really busy, and can be overwhelming or difficult to read. I strongly recommend using AR5 for this map. The mod before you literally just told me it was too fast and I lowered... But I guess i'll change it again lmao
00:01:974 (2) - Add a whistle? It's the same musical idea as 00:07:701 (4) and you used a whistle there.
00:02:519 (3) - Since the music leaves it quite ambiguous, how about adding a new combo here to clearly show the player where the downbeat is?
00:20:187 (5) - Whistle on end, since there's clearly drum here.
00:26:983 - This has the same sound in the music as 00:23:233 so give them the same hitsounds? I'm not sure if you gave me the wrong time or I'm just not seeing what you want me to do with the objects i have.
01:44:327 (5,6) - I think this rhythm will be better since (5) has a strong sound in the song, and this rhythm will emphasize it more: Looks pretty hard for a normal :3http://puu.sh/cZpBk/26a347a501.jpg

Ty for mod! I'll fix hitsounds later today

Knotts' Normal

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Gaia

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Topic Starter

Gaia 2014-11-22T02:36:06+00:00

updated everything with cs16's timing.............. lets see what happens from here owo!

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2014-11-22T03:24:47+00:00

Knotts' Normal

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Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-11-22T06:39:00+00:00

CloudSplash16 wrote:
From my queue.

[Kibbleru's Insane]
00:30:265 (3) - Maybe you can curve this a bit too for a nice pattern of straight, slightly curved, curved. k
00:22:062 (1) - Whistle on end? k
00:25:108 (3) - Current placement makes the pattern feel stiff. This placement would be much more fluid: http://puu.sh/cZsBi/458bb69de6.jpg meh i like this
00:35:655 (3) - If you agreed for 00:30:265 (3) then maybe you could do that here too. It'd be a cool little theme to have throughout the map.
00:38:937 (1) - Is this supposed to be curved...? You have 3 slider points, but it's basically a straight line... if you look, the x-coordinate change only differs by 1 between the first two points and the second two points. So maybe if you intended to make a curve, you could make it more noticeable? its just something i do lol, my style
00:41:280 (3) - That^
00:43:155 (3) - Oh hey, you actually did it here.
00:45:851 (4,5) - Stack lel. fix both
01:07:062 (1) - ^

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Kinomi

1,229 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2014-11-22T16:29:16+00:00

General

Knotts' Normal
kinda hard
00:13:145 (6,1) - swap whistle will be better, since you add whistle 00:11:236 00:12:327 00:13:740, same piano same hitsound, and piano 00:13:418 is not the track you followed before.
00:16:741-00:17:400 10% is enough
01:41:712 (5) - add finish will better

Hard
00:34:452 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this hidden pattern is too hard, i think you can rotate each part of the pattern to avoid.

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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AudioFilename: Snow in Love.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74996
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Koi Yuki short ver.
TitleUnicode:恋い雪 short ver.
Artist:Silent Siren
ArtistUnicode:Silent Siren
Creator:Gaia
Version:Hard
Source:
Tags:Knotts Kibbleru Snow in Love サイレント サイレン
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00:41:952 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:53:669 (4) - →x248y184, keep moving 00:52:966 (3,4,1) - here has better flow than a jumping

Kibbleru's Insane
Verse is better than kiai
00:01:964 (4,5) - ctrl g, piano told me
00:07:145 (2,3,4,5) - same here decrease the spacing between 2,3 increase the spacing between 3,4
00:22:031 (1) - ctrl g, downbeat with finish and jump feels better.
01:29:877 add a note here to show the buleline vocal
01:48:274 i think you should map this finish
01:40:775 (1,2,3,4) - i will swap 1,2 amd 3,4's placement on timeline to show the most exciting part in the song.

SPOILER

Melting
没有什么特别大的问题，不过排列在整齐美观和前后物件的联系方面还可以提高
有想法之后，还得花时间想想怎么让梗一个接一个流畅地衔接，而现在这个diff给我的感觉pattern还是比较零碎。
除了可以的pattern以外，短时间滑条的弧度变化不宜过多，不然容易让人感觉杂乱
kiai和前面的主歌，最好能做出不同，让人一打就知道，啊这是kiai了
00:04:690 (1,2,3) - 听音调，这里应该是1,2音调升高，2,3音调降低，spacing按照音调变化比较有逻辑
其他几处也注意一下
00:09:599 (3,4) - a bit ugly, avoid this overlap
01:40:775 (1,2,3,4) - 我更倾向于这四个都ctrl g一下，由外向内，间距拉大，由此形成跳跃感来强调整首歌最高潮的部分

that's all.

Last edited by Kinomi 2014-11-22T18:49:13+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Knotts

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Knotts 2014-11-22T18:34:58+00:00

Tsukuyomi wrote:
Knotts' Normal
kinda hard
00:13:145 (6,1) - swap whistle will be better, since you add whistle 00:11:236 00:12:327 00:13:740, same piano same hitsound, and piano 00:13:418 is not the track you followed before.
00:16:741-00:17:400 - 10% is enough
01:41:712 (5) - add finish will better

fixed everything i think, ty

Knotts' Normal

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Tsukuyomi wrote:
General

Hard
00:34:452 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this hidden pattern is too hard, i think you can rotate each part of the pattern to avoid. slight change to yours, fixed
00:41:952 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
00:53:669 (4) - →x248y184, keep moving 00:52:966 (3,4,1) - here has better flow than a jumping fine imo

Melting
没有什么特别大的问题，不过排列在整齐美观和前后物件的联系方面还可以提高
有想法之后，还得花时间想想怎么让梗一个接一个流畅地衔接，而现在这个diff给我的感觉pattern还是比较零碎。
除了可以的pattern以外，短时间滑条的弧度变化不宜过多，不然容易让人感觉杂乱
kiai和前面的主歌，最好能做出不同，让人一打就知道，啊这是kiai了 hmmm 我覺得提高SV就夠提出kiai了
00:04:690 (1,2,3) - 听音调，这里应该是1,2音调升高，2,3音调降低，spacing按照音调变化比较有逻辑有道理但我喜歡我現在這樣 ><
其他几处也注意一下
00:09:599 (3,4) - a bit ugly, avoid this overlap 這裡我也感覺傷腦筋..... 不知道應該怎樣修
01:40:775 (1,2,3,4) - 我更倾向于这四个都ctrl g一下，由外向内，间距拉大，由此形成跳跃感来强调整首歌最高潮的部分這樣的話flow就一蹋糊塗拉 ;w; 我覺得還好

that's all.

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