LiSA - Shirushi -TV ver.- · forum

Umi

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Umi 2014-11-08T21:27:11+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on vendredi 5 décembre 2014 at 01:19:41

Artist: LiSA
Title: Shirushi -TV ver.-
Source: ソードアート・オンラインⅡ
Tags: ending Sword Art Online sao kirito asuna Fumika size Mother's Rosario yuuki
BPM: 146
Filesize: 16326kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1,29 stars, 75 notes)
Fumika's Hard (2,86 stars, 159 notes)
Insane (3,44 stars, 191 notes)
Normal (1,83 stars, 130 notes)

Download: LiSA - Shirushi -TV ver.-
Download: LiSA - Shirushi -TV ver.- (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#23 SAO II ED3 | ED1 | ED2 | OP1 | OP2

Yuuki ;w;

E/N/I by me
H by Fumika

thx pishifat for mp3

Last edited by Umi 2014-12-06T23:34:09+00:00, edited 44 times in total.

Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Kinshara 2014-11-09T00:58:14+00:00

~~Can I make a gd please? :3~~

~~It's war time.~~

Jk, i'll back out.

Go, Umi-sama~

Knotts

712 posts

Joined May 2013

Knotts 2014-11-09T04:09:32+00:00

Kinshara wrote:
~~Can I make a gd please? :3~~

~~It's war time.~~

Jk, i'll back out.

Go, Umi-sama~

LOL xD

Skyhmer

372 posts

Joined November 2013

Skyhmer 2014-11-12T00:28:46+00:00

My dream is to be able to map similar to these two difficulties
Hard
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00:49:463 - This sounds amazing but I could barely hear the music for the rest of that part with that volume. I really think after that you should build the volume up to that again from 00:49:668 to 00:51:109.

Insane
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Insane has OD 6. Hard also has OD 6 and insane is pretty easy. why not raise to OD 7?

00:02:408 (2) - Why not a Ctrl +H and Ctrl +J of 00:01:792 (1) ?

00:30:970 (5) - If you were aiming for a triangle, this would look be much better at X:120 Y:200

00:52:134 (4) - Add clap here and remove clap at 00:52:339 (5) Sounds much more consistent with background instruments IMO

00:43:298 (1,1,1,1) - - Why do these 4 slider speed up? If anything I would expect a volume change around here instead.

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Umi 2014-11-12T01:50:08+00:00

Gleipnir wrote:
My dream is to be able to map similar to these two difficulties that's nice to hear
Insane
------------------------------------------------

Insane has OD 6. Hard also has OD 6 and insane is pretty easy. why not raise to OD 7? yup increased

00:02:408 (2) - Why not a Ctrl +H and Ctrl +J of 00:01:792 (1) ? cuz it's flow better this way

00:30:970 (5) - If you were aiming for a triangle, this would look be much better at X:120 Y:200

00:52:134 (4) - Add clap here and remove clap at 00:52:339 (5) Sounds much more consistent with background instruments IMO yep not bad

00:43:298 (1,1,1,1) - - Why do these 4 slider speed up? If anything I would expect a volume change around here instead.i increased the volum here.

thx for mod :3/

Dispel

26 posts

Joined August 2014

Dispel 2014-11-12T03:23:10+00:00

Another excellent map Umi! Great work.

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Fumika 2014-11-12T03:44:30+00:00

colonelkickass1 wrote:
Another excellent map Umi! Great work.

Umi and Fumika!

/me runs

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Umi 2014-11-12T04:09:02+00:00

colonelkickass1 wrote:
Another excellent map Umi! Great work.

thx =w=b

/me slap fumika

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Fumika 2014-11-12T10:36:37+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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TitleUnicode:シルシ -TV edit-
Artist:LiSA
ArtistUnicode:LiSA
Creator:Umi
Version:Fumika's Hard
Source:Sword Art Online II
Tags:ending ソードアート・オンラインⅡ sao kirito asuna Fumika
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Umi wrote:
colonelkickass1 wrote:
Another excellent map Umi! Great work.
thx =w=b

/me slap fumika

*/me Explodes*

Mint

1,611 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2014-11-12T16:09:30+00:00

fumika

Kinshara

823 posts

Joined November 2013

Kinshara 2014-11-12T18:31:38+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
fumika

Umi

2,478 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Umi 2014-11-12T21:55:50+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
fumika

Lol i never thought about it x), thx for star anyways! :3

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2014-11-13T23:47:41+00:00

from my queue

[General]

am i the only person that piano sounds on first part are quite fast? i think there needs special offset to fit perfectly ~~i suck at this, sorry :<~~

[Easy]

00:12:476 (1) - same whistle suggestion with Normal diff
00:52:956 (2) - missed clap on the starting point and i think you had a mistake that you placed clap hitsound on the slider's body
01:24:394 (2) - hmm according to the vocal current rhythm hears little bit off, what about using 3/2 slider with a repeat? like this. Oh and you have to adjust next spinner as well

[Normal]

00:12:476 (2) - adding a whistle on the ending point fits nicely (like Fumika did)
00:39:600 (4) - since you tried to fit with the vocal mostly, i have a better idea about rhythm on this part try adding a note and a 1/1 slider with a repeat fits better with the vocal imo. Check this
check this too if you don't have a good idea about new pattern
01:19:052 (1,2) - i guess that there is a missed clap on each slider's ending point

[Fumika's Hard]

i found this diff has different preview time with other diffs as AIMat
00:40:428 (1) - i'm not sure if this NC is really necessary because this note has no special distance (like anti-jump) and sound
00:43:716 (5) - consider adding a clap on the starting point, current sound hears little bit awkward since the drum sound also exists on starting point as well
00:50:702 (1) - i think splitting this slider into 2 sliders would be better rather than current one, something like this fits much better with the vocal imo
00:51:729 (2,3) - using soft sampleset instead of normal gives better sounds and feelings, it plays a role as highlighting the finish sounds so players may feel them much stronger. But you have to add normal sampleset on 00:51:524 this slider's ending point so that make it fit with the song
00:55:839 (1) - what about adjusting this part? reducing the spinner's length by 00:57:277 - here with soft sampleset and no clap, and add 2 notes with normal sampleset on the next part (the result should be like this. This works nicely for emphaszing kiai start part and quite fits well with the music as well
01:10:839 (6,1) - swapping NC fits better with the song, but if it was intentional because of new pattern it's ok to leave it
01:12:072 (5) - it's just a little thing which players may not notice about this, but whistle on redtick hears quite weird since you only added whistles on white ticks, you'd better remove it or replace it with normal sampleset

good luck

Shad0w1and

1,586 posts

Joined April 2011

Shad0w1and 2014-11-14T03:32:25+00:00

feel free to grab a better video here. encoded by me, K-value and Karaoke script by me.
VBR @ crf 21
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mgHqR6g
if you do not want the karaoke effect or subs, just ask me

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Fumika 2014-11-14T09:28:20+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
from my queue

[General]
[Fumika's Hard]
i found this diff has different preview time with other diffs as AIMat ok
00:40:428 (1) - i'm not sure if this NC is really necessary because this note has no special distance (like anti-jump) and sound nah
00:43:716 (5) - consider adding a clap on the starting point, current sound hears little bit awkward since the drum sound also exists on starting point as well nope
00:50:702 (1) - i think splitting this slider into 2 sliders would be better rather than current one, something like this fits much better with the vocal imo no
00:51:729 (2,3) - using soft sampleset instead of normal gives better sounds and feelings, it plays a role as highlighting the finish sounds so players may feel them much stronger. But you have to add normal sampleset on 00:51:524 this slider's ending point so that make it fit with the song It's fine.
00:55:839 (1) - what about adjusting this part? reducing the spinner's length by 00:57:277 - here with soft sampleset and no clap, and add 2 notes with normal sampleset on the next part (the result should be like this. This works nicely for emphaszing kiai start part and quite fits well with the music as well well, ok
01:10:839 (6,1) - swapping NC fits better with the song, but if it was intentional because of new pattern it's ok to leave it k
01:12:072 (5) - it's just a little thing which players may not notice about this, but whistle on redtick hears quite weird since you only added whistles on white ticks, you'd better remove it or replace it with normal sampleset There is a drum here
good luck

Thanks!

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352,312,77819,1,2,1:2:0:0:
364,320,78230,6,0,P|400:328|436:312,1,72.5,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,204,78641,1,8,1:2:0:0:
436,92,78846,1,8,1:2:0:0:
436,92,79052,2,0,P|368:72|300:104,1,145,4|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
208,36,79668,2,0,L|208:184,1,145,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
96,148,80285,6,0,L|96:72,2,72.5,8|2|0,1:2|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
28,244,80901,1,8,1:2:0:0:
88,344,81107,2,0,P|144:360|196:332,1,108.75,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
208,316,81518,2,0,L|280:324,1,72.5,8|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
320,216,81928,2,0,L|384:248,1,72.5,8|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
488,300,82339,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,136,82956,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,300,83572,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,300,84394,6,0,P|72:320|124:300,1,108.750004148483,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,85011,2,0,P|232:212|284:232,1,108.750004148483,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,304,85627,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85833,12,0,88709,0:0:0:0:

Umi, Should we add an Audio Lead-in ?

Umi

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Topic Starter

Umi 2014-11-14T14:24:57+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
from my queue

[General]
am i the only person that piano sounds on first part are quite fast? i think there needs special offset to fit perfectly ~~i suck at this, sorry :<~~ i know don't worry that's why i'm awaiting pishifat's timing~
[Easy]
00:12:476 (1) - same whistle suggestion with Normal diff added
00:52:956 (2) - missed clap on the starting point and i think you had a mistake that you placed clap hitsound on the slider's body yup fixed
01:24:394 (2) - hmm according to the vocal current rhythm hears little bit off, what about using 3/2 slider with a repeat? like this. Oh and you have to adjust next spinner as well prefer the current rythm
[Normal]
00:12:476 (2) - adding a whistle on the ending point fits nicely (like Fumika did) added
00:39:600 (4) - since you tried to fit with the vocal mostly, i have a better idea about rhythm on this part try adding a note and a 1/1 slider with a repeat fits better with the vocal imo. Check this i'm following the piano mostly
check this too if you don't have a good idea about new pattern
01:19:052 (1,2) - i guess that there is a missed clap on each slider's ending point added
good luck

ty for mod :3

Fumika wrote:
Umi, Should we add an Audio Lead-in ?

yeah i added 1000

Shad0w1and wrote:
feel free to grab a better video here. encoded by me, K-value and Karaoke script by me.
VBR @ crf 21
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mgHqR6g
if you do not want the karaoke effect or subs, just ask me

video is good enough to me but still thx for the offer

pishifat

osu! Paragon

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pishifat 2014-11-15T10:17:57+00:00

timing is stupid. decided to manually fix the song instead so people don't get random 100s while tapping inconsistent rhythms

replace your mp3 with this one and all your timing issues will disappear. same offset so you dont have to do anything

Umi

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Topic Starter

Umi 2014-11-15T11:15:14+00:00

feel way better, thx pishifat ~

Artavia

454 posts

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Artavia 2014-11-16T05:09:57+00:00

From My Modding Queue

Easy

00:12:476 (1,1) - These are too near for an easy diff.
00:23:161 (3) - NC here?
00:54:394 (1,1) - same as 00:12:476 -
01:21:928 (3,1) - stack?

Normal

01:00:970 (3) - Remove one reverse and add circle 01:00:970 -
01:20:696 (4) - NC here~
01:25:627 (3) - Remove

Fumika's Hard

Can't find big problems.

Insane

00:25:627 (2) - Ctrl+H?
00:32:202 (3) - Move to x307 y148
01:25:627 (3) - Remove and 01:25:730 (1) - Move to 01:25:627. It is better timing.

Best wishes for ranked. good luck and shoot star.

Umi

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Umi 2014-11-16T08:37:57+00:00

Artavia wrote:
From My Modding Queue

Easy
00:12:476 (1,1) - These are too near for an easy diff.Nop it's fine, if it was the note after the spinner, yeah it would be too near
00:23:161 (3) - NC here?it'd break my NC consistency
00:54:394 (1,1) - same as 00:12:476 - same as before
01:21:928 (3,1) - stack? better to avoid stack in easy diff

Normal
01:00:970 (3) - Remove one reverse and add circle 01:00:970 - fixed
01:20:696 (4) - NC here~ same as easy diff
01:25:627 (3) - Remove i don't wanna skip the piano here~

Fumika's Hard
Can't find big problems.

Insane
00:25:627 (2) - Ctrl+H? bad flow imo
00:32:202 (3) - Move to x307 y148 k
01:25:627 (3) - Remove and 01:25:730 (1) - Move to 01:25:627. It is better timing.same as normal

Best wishes for ranked. good luck and shoot star.

thx for mod and star

Aldwych

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Joined February 2012

Aldwych 2014-11-18T00:35:38+00:00

Hi! From sandwych's queue.

Ahyaya SAO *_*

[General]
Check for AI mod's hard about stack leniency + kiai time, check with Umi for this point if you want to chane.

|Izi]
00:01:792 : Essaie de garder une consistance dans tes hitsounds volumes (cf normal à 15% au même endroit).
00:04:257 : Ce slider est assez discret en terme de notes par rapport au reste, mais tu peux le garder afin d'avoir une cohérence avec le reste de la 1ere partie. Par contre le flow est un peu dégeulasse, le rapprocher vers la gauche ne serait-il pas mieux?
01:19:052 : N'aurais tu pas moyen de faire ton pattern ansi? Tu as juste a faire un Ctrl + J et déplacer le slider. (cc shina) http://puu.sh/cVawk/6cdedaa953.PNG

01:22:339 : Idem qu'au dessus.

[Normal]

00:24:805 : Je trouve ce slider pas très bien placé en terme de flow, le placer a droite de slider précédent serait une bonne solution, mais ca te forcera a changer une partie du pattern suivant.
01:11:449 : Auditivement, ca manque d'une note ici. :>

[Hard]

00:10:011 : Is these NC are really important, imo i found no. :<
00:31:997 : I'm not nazi about blanket, but this one.
00:37:545 : Ctrl+h this one makes the flow better, but maybe you will have to move + rotate a little bit the pattern to make this better.
00:38:572 : I don't find the reason of this jump, there's no really reason imo.
00:44:942 : Ctrl+j for the flow, same reason as above.
00:53:572 : I found this pattern confuse, cause you're "stacking circles", then you do a 2x jump. I'm voting for a rework. :<
00:54:394 : Nazi blanket
00:58:093 : Imo, i found this slow weird and the following pattern confuse, i'm also voting for a rework here. :<

[Insane]

00:12:990 : Une raison pour laquelle tes spinners sont différent de la ez/normal/hard?
00:42:887 : Je trouve ces NC un peu trop kitsch et sans raison pour les garder. :>
00:45:353 : Afin de garder une cohérence en terme de DS et un meilleur (un peu) flow, Ctrl-g ce slider + le prochain.
00:48:230 : J'aime ce pattern, garde-le! *_*

Solid mapset, gg wp. Hope i could help you!

Umi

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Umi 2014-11-18T02:29:49+00:00

Aldwych wrote:
Hi! From sandwych's queue.

Ahyaya SAO *_*

[General]
Check for AI mod's hard about stack leniency + kiai time, check with Umi for this point if you want to chane.

|Izi]
00:01:792 : Essaie de garder une consistance dans tes hitsounds volumes (cf normal à 15% au même endroit). fixed
00:04:257 : Ce slider est assez discret en terme de notes par rapport au reste, mais tu peux le garder afin d'avoir une cohérence avec le reste de la 1ere partie. Par contre le flow est un peu dégeulasse, le rapprocher vers la gauche ne serait-il pas mieux? yup je l'ai bougé un peu
01:19:052 : N'aurais tu pas moyen de faire ton pattern ansi? Tu as juste a faire un Ctrl + J et déplacer le slider. (cc shina) http://puu.sh/cVawk/6cdedaa953.PNG mon pattern flow better imo

01:22:339 : Idem qu'au dessus. ^

[Normal]

00:24:805 : Je trouve ce slider pas très bien placé en terme de flow, le placer a droite de slider précédent serait une bonne solution, mais ca te forcera a changer une partie du pattern suivant. pas de probleme pour moi
01:11:449 : Auditivement, ca manque d'une note ici. :> je sais mais ça ferait trp de 1/2 d'affilé imo

[Insane]

00:12:990 : Une raison pour laquelle tes spinners sont différent de la ez/normal/hard? ouep j'évite d'utiliser le blue tick en easy/normal c'pour ça~
00:42:887 : Je trouve ces NC un peu trop kitsch et sans raison pour les garder. :> je prefere les garder car ça rend la lecture du pattern plus facile
00:45:353 : Afin de garder une cohérence en terme de DS et un meilleur (un peu) flow, Ctrl-g ce slider + le prochain. yup nice! j'ai changer le pattern suivant
00:48:230 : J'aime ce pattern, garde-le! *_* ok :3

Solid mapset, gg wp. Hope i could help you!

Merci pour le mod aldwych :3/

Gamu

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Gamu 2014-11-19T04:17:54+00:00

hello~ Request from in-game

thank you for request!

[

General]

AudioLeadIn: Change to 500. I think 500 is enough.
Found unused .wav files: normal-sliderslide.wav
It is unnecessary file. Must be removed.

[

Easy]

01:24:394 (2) - Strange feeling at the end point. I'd like to recommend that it extend to 01:25:011.
image
01:25:627 (1) - I think the start of spinner is too early. 1:25:627 is suitable. Also, it will fit to vocal.

[

Normal]

HP+1 and OD+1 in order to balance the difficulty.
00:04:257 (5) - Add a whistle at the start point. It will make a really good sound.
00:04:668 (6) - ^
00:07:339 (4) - ^ at the middle point.
00:07:956 (5) - ^ at the start point.
00:50:285 (5) - Clap is missing at the end point.
01:11:655 (4) - ^
01:12:065 (5) - ^ at the start point.

[

Fumika's Hard]

Stack Leniency is too small. That doesn't really make sense, and it does not adversely affect if you set the default.
00:53:572 (1) - You should make perfectly stack if you look at your style.
00:58:709 (2) - Mistake the rhythm for slows down in slider. So, I'd like to swap these objects. > 00:58:709 (2,1)
00:58:915 (1) - Also, new combo is unnecessary.
01:12:065 (4) - CTRL+J. I prefer this flow, but what do you think?
image

[

Insane]

00:04:668 (6) - The same as Normal diff.
00:07:956 (6) - ^
00:50:285 (3) - Clap is missing at the end point.
00:50:696 (4) - Add a drum-finish at the start point in order to match the back sound
01:11:860 (6) - Clap is missing.
01:12:065 (7) - ^ at the start point.

good mapset and song

Umi

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Umi 2014-11-19T13:32:33+00:00

Gamu wrote:
hello~ Request from in-game

thank you for request!

[ General]
AudioLeadIn: Change to 500. I think 500 is enough. reduced to 500
Found unused .wav files: normal-sliderslide.wav deleted
It is unnecessary file. Must be removed.

[ Easy]
01:24:394 (2) - Strange feeling at the end point. I'd like to recommend that it extend to 01:25:011. i did something else here
image
01:25:627 (1) - I think the start of spinner is too early. 1:25:627 is suitable. Also, it will fit to vocal. fixed

[ Normal]
HP+1 and OD+1 in order to balance the difficulty.
00:04:257 (5) - Add a whistle at the start point. It will make a really good sound.
00:04:668 (6) - ^
00:07:339 (4) - ^ at the middle point.
00:07:956 (5) - ^ at the start point.
00:50:285 (5) - Clap is missing at the end point.
01:11:655 (4) - ^
01:12:065 (5) - ^ at the start point.

all fixed

[ Insane]
00:04:668 (6) - The same as Normal diff.
00:07:956 (6) - ^
00:50:285 (3) - Clap is missing at the end point.
00:50:696 (4) - Add a drum-finish at the start point in order to match the back sound
01:11:860 (6) - Clap is missing.
01:12:065 (7) - ^ at the start point.

all fixed as well

good mapset and song

ty for mod gamu ~

Everything

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Everything 2014-11-20T05:04:32+00:00

Hi Umi ~ from my modding queue.

Easy:
00:34:668 (1) - Move the third/last tick of the slider to y:188 coordinate? It didn't look like equal spacing to me with 00:33:024 (3)
00:52:956 (1) - starting from red tick? I know there is the percussion corresponding at this part, but it was kinda confusing to me when I looked at it lol
01:15:764 (1) - Doesn't feel even to me compared to the rest of the combo 01:16:997 (2,3) ; ~ ;

Normal:
00:40:833 (6,1) - Blanket? Not a major issue here but for object at 00:41:244 (1) I'd move that last slider tick x:344 y:208 coordinates and probably move that that whole slider to x:320 y:320 coordinate

Fumika's Hard and Insane difficulty looks really good. Sorry for short mod, but this mapset is amazing *^* (along with your other ones too c: ) pls take my star ☆

Umi

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Umi 2014-11-20T12:23:52+00:00

trammiexo wrote:
Hi Umi ~ from my modding queue.

Easy:
00:34:668 (1) - Move the third/last tick of the slider to y:188 coordinate? It didn't look like equal spacing to me with 00:33:024 (3) k fixed
00:52:956 (1) - starting from red tick? I know there is the percussion corresponding at this part, but it was kinda confusing to me when I looked at it lol k i changed a bit the rythm here
01:15:764 (1) - Doesn't feel even to me compared to the rest of the combo 01:16:997 (2,3) ; ~ ; i don't really get what u mean here

Normal:
00:40:833 (6,1) - Blanket? Not a major issue here but for object at 00:41:244 (1) I'd move that last slider tick x:344 y:208 coordinates and probably move that that whole slider to x:320 y:320 coordinate the blanket is already good enough as you can see with this picture
SPOILER

Fumika's Hard and Insane difficulty looks really good. Sorry for short mod, but this mapset is amazing *^* (along with your other ones too c: ) pls take my star ☆

thx for the and star

Gamu

Elite Mapper

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Gamu 2014-11-22T01:23:22+00:00

<About Title>
Where did you find -TV edit-?
I didn't find it

Title:シルシ -TV ver.-
Romanised Title: Shirushi -TV ver.-
from LiSA official website http://www.lxixsxa.com/info/archive/?446917

Maybe, I think -TV ver.- is correct~

EDIT: changed the image and link.

Last edited by Gamu 2014-11-22T21:36:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Umi

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Umi 2014-11-22T03:01:39+00:00

it seems that you're right, i searched on amazon.jp and it was marked as -TV edit- that's why ~ thx gamu

Cherry Blossom

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Cherry Blossom 2014-11-22T14:25:20+00:00

Coucou Umi.

Easy

01:19:052 (1,2) - this polarity issue disturbs me a bit because this is the only polarity issue of this map, i know you want to follow this tick with a clap hitsound 01:20:901, but you can use a reversed slider as you did for 00:52:750 (2) - to avoid this polarity issue. Try this instead
SPOILER

Normal

00:38:572 (2,3) - it may be better if you stack these objects as you did here 00:35:285 (2,3) - or 00:31:175 (7,1) - to be consistent.

Fumika's Hard

00:21:107 (8,1) - this jumps is a bit extreme and not really expectable because there are not jumps before, i recommend a lower distance between these objects, like 1.80 - 2.00
00:28:709 (2,3) - is the higher distance here intentional ? or did you just misplaced 00:28:915 (3) - because of SV change ? if not, you should fix that distance issue.

Insane

00:04:052 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - copieuse va !!!!!!! c'est beau ;w;
00:15:045 (1) - why are you starting this spinner here ? you didnt start here in Easy and Normal. It may be better if you make things consistent throughout this set.

Call me back.

Umi

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Umi 2014-11-22T14:49:46+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
Coucou Umi. Coucou CB

Easy
01:19:052 (1,2) - this polarity issue disturbs me a bit because this is the only polarity issue of this map, i know you want to follow this tick with a clap hitsound 01:20:901, but you can use a reversed slider as you did for 00:52:750 (2) - to avoid this polarity issue. Try this instead je i prefer keep this rythm i'm following the voice here
SPOILER

Normal
00:38:572 (2,3) - it may be better if you stack these objects as you did here 00:35:285 (2,3) - or 00:31:175 (7,1) - to be consistent. k stacked

Fumika's Hard
00:21:107 (8,1) - this jumps is a bit extreme and not really expectable because there are not jumps before, i recommend a lower distance between these objects, like 1.80 - 2.00 reduced to 1,6
00:28:709 (2,3) - is the higher distance here intentional ? or did you just misplaced 00:28:915 (3) - because of SV change ? if not, you should fix that distance issue.seems it was because of the SV change, fixed this

Insane
00:04:052 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - copieuse va !!!!!!! c'est beau ;w; copieur* plz
00:15:045 (1) - why are you starting this spinner here ? you didnt start here in Easy and Normal. It may be better if you make things consistent throughout this set. k done ><

Call me back.

Kiss kiss

Cherry Blossom

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Cherry Blossom 2014-11-22T15:21:03+00:00

Well, Good luck.
Bubbled.

Konei

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Konei 2014-11-24T15:10:22+00:00

As you requested.

[General]

The II in the tags is already in the source, remove it from the tags.

[Insane]

01:03:846 (4) - Kinda weird to read this, thought this was regular 1/2 on first play, how about stacking this with 3?
01:07:956 (2) - Remove the repeat and add an 1/2 Slider to follow the vocals? Seems cool as she sings シルシ.
01:09:189 (1) - Add a finish to the start to follow the cymbals?
01:25:730 (1) - Mute the Spinner as it sounds out of place and too noisy.

[Fumika's Hard]

01:01:791 (1) - I don't see a need for this single NC here.
01:14:942 (1) - Same here, even though it's consistent, I don't get why it's there.

[Easy]

00:15:148 (1) - Having two Spinners in a row is a bit much for an Easy difficulty, also it's kinda short.

Call me back.

Umi

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Umi 2014-11-24T15:24:49+00:00

Konei wrote:
As you requested.

[General]

The II in the tags is already in the source, remove it from the tags. deleted

[Insane]

01:03:846 (4) - Kinda weird to read this, thought this was regular 1/2 on first play, how about stacking this with 3? not that weird to me, pretty easy to notice with AR imo
01:07:956 (2) - Remove the repeat and add an 1/2 Slider to follow the vocals? Seems cool as she sings シルシ. i did something else here
01:09:189 (1) - Add a finish to the start to follow the cymbals? added
01:25:730 (1) - Mute the Spinner as it sounds out of place and too noisy. muted

[Fumika's Hard]

01:01:791 (1) - I don't see a need for this single NC here.
01:14:942 (1) - Same here, even though it's consistent, I don't get why it's there.
both deleted

[Easy]

00:15:148 (1) - Having two Spinners in a row is a bit much for an Easy difficulty, also it's kinda short. turned this into one spinner

Call me back.

ty konei ~

Konei

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Konei 2014-11-24T15:29:55+00:00

Qualified.

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

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Lanturn 2014-11-24T15:35:25+00:00

Yay. Congrats Umi!

Artavia

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Artavia 2014-11-24T15:54:02+00:00

Gratz, Umi!

Mint

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Mint 2014-11-24T17:14:01+00:00

Congrats

Gamu

Elite Mapper

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Gamu 2014-11-24T17:22:18+00:00

Congrats~!

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-11-24T18:38:57+00:00

aw i told you to ask me for a mod D:

Congrats though!!!

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2014-11-24T22:08:58+00:00

fast

Natsu

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Natsu 2014-11-25T03:40:38+00:00

Congrats, seems that I'm Late, btw shouldn't be the source SWORD ART ONLINE II instead of Sword Art Online II like the web shows:

http://www.swordart-online.net/

Also the OP video:

SPOILER

Oyatsu

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Oyatsu 2014-11-25T05:17:36+00:00

Gratz! Umi

Fumika

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Fumika 2014-11-25T15:21:13+00:00

Grats!

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Andrea 2014-11-25T17:08:46+00:00

Congrats honey <3

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2014-11-25T17:16:34+00:00

Congrats ^_^

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-11-25T20:09:45+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Congrats, seems that I'm Late, btw shouldn't be the source SWORD ART ONLINE II instead of Sword Art Online II like the web shows:

http://www.swordart-online.net/

Also the OP video:

SPOILER

Natsu, if you check the other ranked SAO maps, you'll see that most are ranked with "Sword Art Online" not "SWORD ART ONLINE". So, this should be fine.

Natsu

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Natsu 2014-11-25T23:39:09+00:00

mmmm taking other ranked maps as source, is not ok you know.

Konei

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Konei 2014-11-26T00:14:40+00:00

Natsu wrote:
mmmm taking other ranked maps as source, is not ok you know.

Either way, I think it's just regular stuff for japanese people to write romanized stuff in capital letters, it's just usual for them.

Also it's not really important since the original japanese anime name is in the tags.

Kinshara

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Kinshara 2014-11-26T00:33:10+00:00

Natsu wrote:
mmmm taking other ranked maps as source, is not ok you know.

Maybe not when there are only a few ranked maps from the source. But for SAO, there are tons of ranked maps, and the odds that the source is wrong on all of them is really small.

Umi

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Umi 2014-11-26T00:58:02+00:00

here i am o/

thx guys for trying to deal with it, i kinda agree with konei's post, anyways does this really worth an unqualification? if i added the japanse tittle in the source and "Swort Art Online II" in tags, no one would have complain though ~

PatZar

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PatZar 2014-12-01T05:48:18+00:00

congrazt ~~Netsukawa~~ Umi

TicClick

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TicClick 2014-12-01T06:10:22+00:00

Hi. Sorry, I have to disqualify this due to:
[Fumika's Hard]

00:57:682 (1,1,2,1,2) - this is confusing and poorly readable, mostly due to 00:58:093 (1)

Also, stack leniency on Fumika's Hard is way too low; objects that are 1/2 apart should be stacking, but they aren't.
Please also fix the source when you have time.

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-12-01T06:13:10+00:00

lmao

pishifat

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pishifat 2014-12-01T06:15:34+00:00

oh

maybe now you could change my name's P the description to a p kthankz

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PatZar 2014-12-01T06:45:29+00:00

well, i just want to play this, lel
rip fumika

Umi

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Umi 2014-12-01T10:53:05+00:00

CDFA wrote:
lmao

Go disqualify the last one o/

turned the source in japanese, moved stack leniency to 7 increased a bit the SV of 00:58:093 (1) but that's all cuz the rest of pattern is readable enough, i don't get why it got disqualify for this.

just to say

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Winnie 2014-12-02T02:27:14+00:00

RIP

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Fycho 2014-12-02T06:58:48+00:00

As your reuqest, some minor things need to be considered.

[Insane]

00:23:161 (5) - NC here due to a new phase?
00:44:531 (1) - maybe need a finish at sliderhead to emphasize the slider after speed-up sliders, if you feel it too nosiy, try reduce the volume a bit. (Otherwise, 00:44:531 - 's volume being not as large as 00:44:120 - feels strange)
01:03:846 (4) - NC is needed here as I misread it when I play with dt. The spacing between 01:03:435 (3,4) - and01:03:846 (4,5) - are really confusing.

[Hard]

sliderticks like 00:02:202 - 00:02:613 - 00:05:490 - 00:05:901 - etc, which you use 5% volume is unrankable. You can't mute both sliderslide and slidertick as it's written in ranking criteria. You should at lease raise the volume to 20% to make it audiable.

Umi

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Umi 2014-12-02T14:16:06+00:00

Fycho wrote:
As your reuqest, some minor things need to be considered.

[Insane]
00:23:161 (5) - NC here due to a new phase? ops miss
00:44:531 (1) - maybe need a finish at sliderhead to emphasize the slider after speed-up sliders, if you feel it too nosiy, try reduce the volume a bit. (Otherwise, 00:44:531 - 's volume being not as large as 00:44:120 - feels strange) Edit: finally decided to not add one, feel akward to me ~
01:03:846 (4) - NC is needed here as I misread it when I play with dt. The spacing between 01:03:435 (3,4) - and01:03:846 (4,5) - are really confusing. i remade a bit the pattern it should be better with the DS now, so no need nc anymore
[Hard]
sliderticks like 00:02:202 - 00:02:613 - 00:05:490 - 00:05:901 - etc, which you use 5% volume is unrankable. You can't mute both sliderslide and slidertick as it's written in ranking criteria. You should at lease raise the volume to 20% to make it audiable. up to 20%

thx fycho :3

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xxdeathx 2014-12-03T07:29:16+00:00

i wanna rerank the SAO map when fycho's done

Umi

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Umi 2014-12-03T12:45:57+00:00

hue cool =w=b

gratz on becoming BAT btw !

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Fycho 2014-12-04T11:22:22+00:00

[Insane]

00:44:531 (1) - if you don't plan to add finish, at least raise the volume to 80% or more, 30% is really really low. Beat at 00:44:531 - is stronger than 00:44:120 - , pitch of00:44:531 - is higher too.

Umi

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Umi 2014-12-04T14:09:57+00:00

up to 90% o/

Updated ~

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Fycho 2014-12-04T15:10:41+00:00

Rebubbled.

xxdeathx

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xxdeathx 2014-12-05T00:27:42+00:00

Added some tags and fixed some blankets:

SPOILER

15:16 xxdeathx: :O shirushi is rebubbled
15:17 Umi: yup it's \:D/
15:17 xxdeathx: i got dibs on it right
15:17 Umi: ugyuuu >///<
15:17 xxdeathx: i'll check after this ignite map xD
15:18 Umi: alright call me if u want irc :3
15:21 Umi: u SAO hype btw lol
15:23 xxdeathx: lol

15:51 *xxdeathx is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/545389 LiSA - Shirushi -TV ver.- [Insane]]
15:52 Umi: huehue
15:52 xxdeathx: QAQ yuuki
15:52 xxdeathx: i think something bad is gonna happen soon
15:52 Umi: i love her *-*
15:53 Umi: don't say this ;w;
15:53 xxdeathx: i don't know either ;w;
15:54 xxdeathx: but i want to find out .-.
15:54 Umi: we'll see soon imo
15:54 xxdeathx: can't wait orz
15:54 xxdeathx: 00:05:079 (1) - move to the left 2 grids to fix blanket
15:55 xxdeathx: dont need to move 00:05:696 (2) - though, that looks fine after moving (1)
15:57 Umi: k 'im here!
15:57 Umi: fixed the blanket
15:57 xxdeathx: good
15:57 xxdeathx: 01:18:024 (3) - might be overmapped because i can't hear anything on its tick
15:58 Umi: piano

15:58 xxdeathx: okay fine
16:01 xxdeathx: can you also fix 00:53:983 (1,1) - blanket for fumika?
16:02 Umi: done ~
16:06 xxdeathx: nice
16:09 xxdeathx: maybe add the "size" in tv size to tags
16:10 Umi: xD
16:10 Umi: well why not
16:11 Umi: oh
16:11 Umi: i added mother's Rosario
16:11 xxdeathx: yeah that too would be good
16:11 Umi: since it's the arc's name
16:12 xxdeathx: what about yuuki
16:12 xxdeathx: since i think the arc is about her as much as asuna and kirito
16:12 Umi: ah yeah also
16:13 Umi: everything added
16:18 xxdeathx: did you update
16:18 Umi: nop was waiting u xD
16:18 xxdeathx: yeah update
16:19 Umi: roger
16:20 Umi: updated o/

Everything looks good to me. Re-qualified!