Gamu wrote:

hello~ Request from in-game

thank you for request!

[ General]

1. AudioLeadIn: Change to 500. I think 500 is enough. reduced to 500
2. Found unused .wav files: normal-sliderslide.wav deleted
   It is unnecessary file. Must be removed.

[ Easy]

1. 01:24:394 (2) - Strange feeling at the end point. I'd like to recommend that it extend to 01:25:011. i did something else here
   
   image

   
2. 01:25:627 (1) - I think the start of spinner is too early. 1:25:627 is suitable. Also, it will fit to vocal. fixed

[ Normal]

1. HP+1 and OD+1 in order to balance the difficulty.
2. 00:04:257 (5) - Add a whistle at the start point. It will make a really good sound.
3. 00:04:668 (6) - ^
4. 00:07:339 (4) - ^ at the middle point.
5. 00:07:956 (5) - ^ at the start point.
6. 00:50:285 (5) - Clap is missing at the end point.
7. 01:11:655 (4) - ^
8. 01:12:065 (5) - ^ at the start point.
   
   all fixed

[ Insane]

1. 00:04:668 (6) - The same as Normal diff.
2. 00:07:956 (6) - ^
3. 00:50:285 (3) - Clap is missing at the end point.
4. 00:50:696 (4) - Add a drum-finish at the start point in order to match the back sound
5. 01:11:860 (6) - Clap is missing.
6. 01:12:065 (7) - ^ at the start point.
   
   all fixed as well

good mapset and song

trammiexo wrote:

Hi Umi ~ from my modding queue.

Easy:
00:34:668 (1) - Move the third/last tick of the slider to y:188 coordinate? It didn't look like equal spacing to me with 00:33:024 (3) k fixed
00:52:956 (1) - starting from red tick? I know there is the percussion corresponding at this part, but it was kinda confusing to me when I looked at it lol k i changed a bit the rythm here
01:15:764 (1) - Doesn't feel even to me compared to the rest of the combo 01:16:997 (2,3) ; ~ ; i don't really get what u mean here

Normal:
00:40:833 (6,1) - Blanket? Not a major issue here but for object at 00:41:244 (1) I'd move that last slider tick x:344 y:208 coordinates and probably move that that whole slider to x:320 y:320 coordinate the blanket is already good enough as you can see with this picture

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Fumika's Hard and Insane difficulty looks really good. Sorry for short mod, but this mapset is amazing *^* (along with your other ones too c: ) pls take my star ☆

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Coucou Umi. Coucou CB

Easy

1. 01:19:052 (1,2) - this polarity issue disturbs me a bit because this is the only polarity issue of this map, i know you want to follow this tick with a clap hitsound 01:20:901, but you can use a reversed slider as you did for 00:52:750 (2) - to avoid this polarity issue. Try this instead je i prefer keep this rythm i'm following the voice here
   
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Normal

1. 00:38:572 (2,3) - it may be better if you stack these objects as you did here 00:35:285 (2,3) - or 00:31:175 (7,1) - to be consistent. k stacked

Fumika's Hard

1. 00:21:107 (8,1) - this jumps is a bit extreme and not really expectable because there are not jumps before, i recommend a lower distance between these objects, like 1.80 - 2.00 reduced to 1,6
2. 00:28:709 (2,3) - is the higher distance here intentional ? or did you just misplaced 00:28:915 (3) - because of SV change ? if not, you should fix that distance issue.seems it was because of the SV change, fixed this

Insane

1. 00:04:052 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - copieuse va !!!!!!! c'est beau ;w; copieur* plz
2. 00:15:045 (1) - why are you starting this spinner here ? you didnt start here in Easy and Normal. It may be better if you make things consistent throughout this set. k done ><

Call me back.

1. The II in the tags is already in the source, remove it from the tags.

1. 01:03:846 (4) - Kinda weird to read this, thought this was regular 1/2 on first play, how about stacking this with 3?
2. 01:07:956 (2) - Remove the repeat and add an 1/2 Slider to follow the vocals? Seems cool as she sings シルシ.
3. 01:09:189 (1) - Add a finish to the start to follow the cymbals?
4. 01:25:730 (1) - Mute the Spinner as it sounds out of place and too noisy.

1. 01:01:791 (1) - I don't see a need for this single NC here.
2. 01:14:942 (1) - Same here, even though it's consistent, I don't get why it's there.

1. 00:15:148 (1) - Having two Spinners in a row is a bit much for an Easy difficulty, also it's kinda short.

Konei wrote:

As you requested.

[General]

1. The II in the tags is already in the source, remove it from the tags. deleted

[Insane]

1. 01:03:846 (4) - Kinda weird to read this, thought this was regular 1/2 on first play, how about stacking this with 3? not that weird to me, pretty easy to notice with AR imo
2. 01:07:956 (2) - Remove the repeat and add an 1/2 Slider to follow the vocals? Seems cool as she sings シルシ. i did something else here
3. 01:09:189 (1) - Add a finish to the start to follow the cymbals? added
4. 01:25:730 (1) - Mute the Spinner as it sounds out of place and too noisy. muted

[Fumika's Hard]

1. 01:01:791 (1) - I don't see a need for this single NC here.
2. 01:14:942 (1) - Same here, even though it's consistent, I don't get why it's there.
   both deleted

[Easy]

1. 00:15:148 (1) - Having two Spinners in a row is a bit much for an Easy difficulty, also it's kinda short. turned this into one spinner

Call me back.

Natsu wrote:

Congrats, seems that I'm Late, btw shouldn't be the source SWORD ART ONLINE II instead of Sword Art Online II like the web shows:

http://www.swordart-online.net/

Also the OP video:

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Natsu wrote:

mmmm taking other ranked maps as source, is not ok you know.

Natsu wrote:

mmmm taking other ranked maps as source, is not ok you know.

1. 00:57:682 (1,1,2,1,2) - this is confusing and poorly readable, mostly due to 00:58:093 (1)

CDFA wrote:

lmao

just to say

1. 00:23:161 (5) - NC here due to a new phase?
2. 00:44:531 (1) - maybe need a finish at sliderhead to emphasize the slider after speed-up sliders, if you feel it too nosiy, try reduce the volume a bit. (Otherwise, 00:44:531 - 's volume being not as large as 00:44:120 - feels strange)
3. 01:03:846 (4) - NC is needed here as I misread it when I play with dt. The spacing between 01:03:435 (3,4) - and01:03:846 (4,5) - are really confusing.

1. sliderticks like 00:02:202 - 00:02:613 - 00:05:490 - 00:05:901 - etc, which you use 5% volume is unrankable. You can't mute both sliderslide and slidertick as it's written in ranking criteria. You should at lease raise the volume to 20% to make it audiable.

Fycho wrote:

As your reuqest, some minor things need to be considered.

[Insane]

1. 00:23:161 (5) - NC here due to a new phase? ops miss
2. 00:44:531 (1) - maybe need a finish at sliderhead to emphasize the slider after speed-up sliders, if you feel it too nosiy, try reduce the volume a bit. (Otherwise, 00:44:531 - 's volume being not as large as 00:44:120 - feels strange) Edit: finally decided to not add one, feel akward to me ~
3. 01:03:846 (4) - NC is needed here as I misread it when I play with dt. The spacing between 01:03:435 (3,4) - and01:03:846 (4,5) - are really confusing. i remade a bit the pattern it should be better with the DS now, so no need nc anymore

[Hard]

1. sliderticks like 00:02:202 - 00:02:613 - 00:05:490 - 00:05:901 - etc, which you use 5% volume is unrankable. You can't mute both sliderslide and slidertick as it's written in ranking criteria. You should at lease raise the volume to 20% to make it audiable. up to 20%

1. 00:44:531 (1) - if you don't plan to add finish, at least raise the volume to 80% or more, 30% is really really low. Beat at 00:44:531 - is stronger than 00:44:120 - , pitch of00:44:531 - is higher too.

xxdeathx wrote:

Sad episode.

xxdeathx wrote:

Sad episode.