1. Easy (1.62 stars, 253 notes)
2. Hard (3.02 stars, 533 notes)
3. Normal (2.01 stars, 298 notes)

Thanks Phate45, Kocari (again), -Mo-, DarkVortex, Tutuhaha, Yuthuil (again), Wasabi, Milhofo, ReallyFastCat, and -Yuzuriha-inori-, neonat, Statick Noise Bird, Tochi, A Mystery, Z3R0Xx, monstrata, Neil Leo, LucyS, -Nya-, Hello SCV, sukiNathan, Litharrale, Modem, and CDFA for modding!

1. Easy and first 3/4 of Normal were done over irc, including the chat log below.
   
   IRC mod

   2014-12-09 07:15 phate45: hey
   2014-12-09 07:33 Xelasto: hi
   2014-12-09 07:33 Xelasto: You need something?
   2014-12-09 07:33 phate45: i come from Astral Horizon queue
   2014-12-09 07:33 phate45: Kruzon notified me that you want help with your map
   2014-12-09 07:33 Xelasto: Oh
   2014-12-09 07:34 Xelasto: Yes
   2014-12-09 07:34 Xelasto: Are you one of the modders?
   2014-12-09 07:34 phate45: so, do i make a mod first then we talk about it, or do we just go over it together?
   2014-12-09 07:34 phate45: yes, i'm one of the standard modders
   2014-12-09 07:35 Xelasto: hmm
   2014-12-09 07:35 Xelasto: Can you make a mod first
   2014-12-09 07:36 phate45: sure, will you be around in half a hour or so?
   2014-12-09 07:36 Xelasto: Oh wait
   2014-12-09 07:36 Xelasto: Never I have time
   2014-12-09 07:36 Xelasto: Nevermind*
   2014-12-09 07:36 Xelasto: We can go over it together
   2014-12-09 07:36 Xelasto: If you want
   2014-12-09 07:36 phate45:
   2014-12-09 07:36 phate45: depends on you
   2014-12-09 07:37 phate45: i see that it's your first map
   2014-12-09 07:37 Xelasto: Well
   2014-12-09 07:37 Xelasto: Not my FIRST
   2014-12-09 07:37 Xelasto: But The first SERIOUS one
   2014-12-09 07:37 Xelasto: But its still probably not that good XD
   2014-12-09 07:37 Xelasto: I tried my best to do timing well
   2014-12-09 07:38 phate45: ok
   2014-12-09 07:38 Xelasto: I dont know exactly whats wrong with my maps
   2014-12-09 07:38 phate45: let me testplay the easy
   2014-12-09 07:38 Xelasto: But I know that I need it modded like all others
   2014-12-09 07:38 Xelasto: XD
   2014-12-09 07:38 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 07:38 phate45: you can spec me if you want
   2014-12-09 07:38 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 07:39 Xelasto: ITs probably spacing
   2014-12-09 07:39 phate45: nothing really wrong here
   2014-12-09 07:39 phate45: yea
   2014-12-09 07:39 phate45: just the spacing
   2014-12-09 07:39 phate45: you dont have to overlap just because easy
   2014-12-09 07:39 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 07:39 phate45: make the notes touch at edges, that'll be fine
   2014-12-09 07:40 phate45: nice blankets here
   2014-12-09 07:40 phate45: that last slider felt too short
   2014-12-09 07:41 Xelasto: Which one?
   2014-12-09 07:41 Xelasto: The up arrow ?
   2014-12-09 07:41 phate45: the last small one bottom left
   2014-12-09 07:41 Xelasto: oh
   2014-12-09 07:41 phate45: i'll go over it in the editor once i finish the play
   2014-12-09 07:42 Xelasto: woops the spacing XD
   2014-12-09 07:42 phate45: the timing felt off where i broke the slider
   2014-12-09 07:42 Xelasto: Should I go over it in 25%?
   2014-12-09 07:44 phate45: 25% speed? never
   2014-12-09 07:44 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 07:44 phate45: dont use below 75%
   2014-12-09 07:44 phate45: unless very fast
   2014-12-09 07:44 phate45: which does not concern this map
   2014-12-09 07:44 Xelasto: ok
   2014-12-09 07:44 phate45: also, this kiai section felt really nice
   2014-12-09 07:44 Xelasto: Thanks
   2014-12-09 07:46 phate45: i dont see any reason for the new combos at the end tho
   2014-12-09 07:46 phate45: overall, spacing is an issue
   2014-12-09 07:46 phate45: it's inconsistent
   2014-12-09 07:46 phate45: editor time
   2014-12-09 07:46 Xelasto: So should I make the notes touch edges at the beginning?
   2014-12-09 07:46 phate45: 00:05:324 (2) - this here
   2014-12-09 07:46 phate45: too close to 1
   2014-12-09 07:47 phate45: if you move it a bit down
   2014-12-09 07:47 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 07:47 phate45: you can blanket 3 around the end point
   2014-12-09 07:47 phate45: it would look nicer too
   2014-12-09 07:47 Xelasto: Should I rotate 2 until its sideways
   2014-12-09 07:47 Xelasto: ?
   2014-12-09 07:47 phate45: i dont think thats necessary
   2014-12-09 07:47 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 07:47 phate45: just move it a bit down and bend 3 a bit more to create the blanket
   2014-12-09 07:47 Xelasto: So just drag 2 down and blanked 3
   2014-12-09 07:48 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 07:48 Xelasto: I'm just nervous about normal and hard mode
   2014-12-09 07:48 Xelasto: Oh yeah, btw sorry about this but do you have time for hard?
   2014-12-09 07:48 Xelasto: Sorry I completed hard after I posted
   2014-12-09 07:48 Xelasto: If you dont have time I understand
   2014-12-09 07:48 phate45: 00:11:688 (4) - if you space 1,2,3 here, you would need a bit more space to emphasize the 3-4 jump
   2014-12-09 07:49 phate45: i just woke up, i have about 18 hours before i go to sleep again
   2014-12-09 07:49 phate45:
   2014-12-09 07:49 Xelasto: Oh cool
   2014-12-09 07:50 phate45: 00:18:233 (3,4,1) -
   2014-12-09 07:50 phate45: make 4 a note
   2014-12-09 07:50 phate45: and start 1 earlier
   2014-12-09 07:50 phate45: make it longer
   2014-12-09 07:50 phate45: fits better with vocal
   2014-12-09 07:50 Xelasto: number 1?
   2014-12-09 07:50 phate45: 00:18:233 (3,4,1) - spacing
   2014-12-09 07:51 Xelasto: Btw with 4 should I place the note at the end or beginning of the slider?
   2014-12-09 07:51 phate45: 00:19:870 (1) - this 1
   2014-12-09 07:51 phate45: note where it begins
   2014-12-09 07:51 Xelasto: oh ok
   2014-12-09 07:51 phate45: and 1 should start at 00:19:324
   2014-12-09 07:52 Xelasto: You mean 4?
   2014-12-09 07:52 Xelasto: Cause at 324 I have 4
   2014-12-09 07:52 phate45: 4 00:18:960
   2014-12-09 07:53 Xelasto: So it should one be one note?
   2014-12-09 07:53 phate45: 00:23:870 (1,1) - this feels too fast
   2014-12-09 07:53 phate45: no, just a longer slider
   2014-12-09 07:53 Xelasto: Oh sorry I meant 4 should be 2 or 1 note?
   2014-12-09 07:54 phate45: one note
   2014-12-09 07:54 phate45: just listen to the vocal
   2014-12-09 07:54 Xelasto: oh ok so nothing should be at 19:324?
   2014-12-09 07:54 Xelasto: oh
   2014-12-09 07:55 phate45: the blue 1
   2014-12-09 07:55 phate45: should start at 324
   2014-12-09 07:55 phate45: and end where it currently ends
   2014-12-09 07:56 phate45: 00:57:688 (2) -
   2014-12-09 07:57 phate45: doesnt feel cool like it i
   2014-12-09 07:57 phate45: s
   2014-12-09 07:57 phate45: i suggest breaking it from one slider to note and short slider
   2014-12-09 07:57 phate45: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2325860
   2014-12-09 07:57 phate45: like this
   2014-12-09 07:59 phate45: 01:04:051 (2,3) - this precisely follows the vocal
   2014-12-09 08:00 phate45: yet 01:05:870 (4)- doesnt have a note before itself even though it's exactly the same vocal pattern
   2014-12-09 08:00 Xelasto: Should I place it above or to left?
   2014-12-09 08:00 Xelasto: The note
   2014-12-09 08:00 phate45: maybe make it blanket shape like 3
   2014-12-09 08:00 phate45: and place it above
   2014-12-09 08:01 phate45: take (2,3), rotate around
   2014-12-09 08:01 Xelasto: Ah so Light blue 2 and 3 should be rotate so as to not touch the other ones?
   2014-12-09 08:01 phate45: 01:12:233 (4) - this feels exactly like 00:57:688
   2014-12-09 08:02 phate45: what light blue
   2014-12-09 08:02 phate45: where are you
   2014-12-09 08:02 Xelasto: 1:04
   2014-12-09 08:03 phate45: use default skin, or at least the colors from it
   2014-12-09 08:03 phate45: for editing
   2014-12-09 08:03 Xelasto: Im using the default osu
   2014-12-09 08:03 phate45: or dont refer to the map by color if they differ
   2014-12-09 08:03 Xelasto: I see lightblue ;-;
   2014-12-09 08:03 phate45: cause i got the combo green here
   2014-12-09 08:03 phate45: maybe you added a combo somewhere
   2014-12-09 08:03 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 08:03 phate45: i meant, copy (2,3)
   2014-12-09 08:04 phate45: rotate said copy and replace 4
   2014-12-09 08:04 phate45: with (4,5)
   2014-12-09 08:04 Xelasto: Wait a minute, to think of it, I set the only colors to be pink, light blue, yellow, and white
   2014-12-09 08:04 phate45: here we go
   2014-12-09 08:05 phate45:
   2014-12-09 08:05 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 08:06 Xelasto: How do I send a screen shot to you
   2014-12-09 08:07 phate45: shift+F12
   2014-12-09 08:07 phate45: it'll make a screenshot and upload it to osu site
   2014-12-09 08:07 phate45: and open it in your browser
   2014-12-09 08:08 Xelasto: OK i wanted to show you if these are ok
   2014-12-09 08:08 phate45: 01:16:597 (1) - replace this with two notes
   2014-12-09 08:08 phate45: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2325883
   2014-12-09 08:09 Xelasto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2325882
   2014-12-09 08:09 phate45: hmm
   2014-12-09 08:09 phate45: not bad, but 3 bends out of grid
   2014-12-09 08:09 phate45: it doesnt look cool
   2014-12-09 08:10 phate45: blanket doesnt only mean in the center of the whole shape
   2014-12-09 08:10 phate45: you can make blanket with only first half of (3)
   2014-12-09 08:10 phate45: then make the rest straight
   2014-12-09 08:10 Xelasto: Could you send a screenshot?
   2014-12-09 08:10 phate45: ay
   2014-12-09 08:10 phate45: sec
   2014-12-09 08:13 phate45: hmm
   2014-12-09 08:14 phate45: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2325893
   2014-12-09 08:14 phate45: something close to this
   2014-12-09 08:14 phate45: i'm no pro shaper
   2014-12-09 08:14 Xelasto: ok
   2014-12-09 08:14 phate45: maybe adding some points before the red point would make the curve smoother
   2014-12-09 08:15 Xelasto: Also sorry but im still confused on this also
   2014-12-09 08:15 phate45: but you get the general idea
   2014-12-09 08:15 Xelasto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2325891
   2014-12-09 08:15 phate45: whats wrong here
   2014-12-09 08:16 phate45: just in case, you are in the US, right
   2014-12-09 08:16 phate45: and it's like 11pm
   2014-12-09 08:16 phate45: right
   2014-12-09 08:16 Xelasto: yeah
   2014-12-09 08:16 phate45: so, it's night
   2014-12-09 08:16 phate45: why do you have such bright colors
   2014-12-09 08:16 phate45: do you hate your eyes
   2014-12-09 08:16 Xelasto: LOL
   2014-12-09 08:16 Xelasto: IDK i set it to those
   2014-12-09 08:17 Xelasto: But you only see the defaults
   2014-12-09 08:17 Xelasto: its weir
   2014-12-09 08:17 Xelasto: weird*
   2014-12-09 08:17 phate45: make it a couple shades darker, i'd say
   2014-12-09 08:17 phate45: why did you change timing?
   2014-12-09 08:17 phate45: this section was ok
   2014-12-09 08:18 phate45: just (4) needed to be spaced evenly between 3 and 1
   2014-12-09 08:18 Xelasto: Which one?
   2014-12-09 08:18 phate45: 00:18:960 (4) -
   2014-12-09 08:18 Xelasto: OH
   2014-12-09 08:18 Xelasto: You said to make it a note
   2014-12-09 08:19 phate45: that was earlier
   2014-12-09 08:19 phate45: no
   2014-12-09 08:19 phate45: well
   2014-12-09 08:20 Xelasto: Lol ok well at least thats fixed
   2014-12-09 08:20 Xelasto: BTW you said at 23:870 it feels rushed
   2014-12-09 08:20 phate45: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2325903
   2014-12-09 08:20 phate45: i meant this
   2014-12-09 08:21 phate45: yes, just start the spinner at :870 and remove the note
   2014-12-09 08:22 phate45: 01:21:506 (3) - either make this longer or just a note, doesn't feel good with the vocals
   2014-12-09 08:23 phate45: ^ 01:23:324 (2) - the same vocal pattern repeats here, but the map doesn't reflect that at all
   2014-12-09 08:23 Xelasto: Woah theres nothing wrong before that?
   2014-12-09 08:23 phate45: scroll up a little
   2014-12-09 08:24 phate45: i'm just continuing where i left off before you popped in your screenshot
   2014-12-09 08:25 phate45: 01:25:870 (1) - 01:29:142 (2) -- this whole section needs better spacing to reflect the rhythm
   2014-12-09 08:25 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 08:26 Xelasto: They should be farther apart?
   2014-12-09 08:26 phate45: 01:31:688 (1,2,3) - this can be spaced more, stretch this across the screen, it's really slow
   2014-12-09 08:26 phate45: now you are reffering to the 1:25?
   2014-12-09 08:26 Xelasto: OH
   2014-12-09 08:26 phate45: the rhythm there is note-slider-pause-note
   2014-12-09 08:27 Xelasto: Yes I meant 1:25
   2014-12-09 08:27 phate45: in the map the slider directly connects to the next note
   2014-12-09 08:27 phate45: so that feels a little off
   2014-12-09 08:27 phate45: did you take a look at 01:16
   2014-12-09 08:28 phate45: and 0:57, 01:04/05 and 01:12?
   2014-12-09 08:28 Xelasto: Btw with 1:23 what should I do there? Just do the same note patern?
   2014-12-09 08:28 phate45: change the repeat slider into something else
   2014-12-09 08:29 phate45: to allow you to add a note/slider after it without it being too fast
   2014-12-09 08:29 phate45: the same thing as (3) in the previous combo
   2014-12-09 08:29 phate45: 01:43:688 (3,1) - this is a cool jump, me like
   2014-12-09 08:30 phate45: 02:15:688 (3,1) - feels fast
   2014-12-09 08:31 Xelasto: So once again I should space between the spinner and slider
   2014-12-09 08:32 Xelasto: For 2:15?
   2014-12-09 08:32 phate45: make 02:15:597 (3) - a note
   2014-12-09 08:32 phate45: and start the spinner at 02:16:142
   2014-12-09 08:32 phate45: 02:24:051 (1) - place this a bit higher
   2014-12-09 08:34 phate45: did you take a look at the times i mentioned a bit earlier?
   2014-12-09 08:34 phate45: before your 1:23 question
   2014-12-09 08:35 Xelasto: Yeah I fixed that
   2014-12-09 08:36 phate45: 03:23:688 (3) - feels too close (same distance as (1) before it, but different timing)
   2014-12-09 08:36 phate45: 03:26:597 (3) - ^ same thing
   2014-12-09 08:36 Xelasto: This is what I did at 1:23 btw
   2014-12-09 08:36 Xelasto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2325919
   2014-12-09 08:36 phate45: 03:36:415 (2) - overlap
   2014-12-09 08:37 phate45: what did you do before it, with the short slider (3)
   2014-12-09 08:38 phate45: 03:38:960 (1,2) - spacing spacing
   2014-12-09 08:38 phate45: 03:41:870 (1,2,3) - ^
   2014-12-09 08:38 phate45: 03:48:051 (1,2) - ^
   2014-12-09 08:38 phate45: 03:50:597 (1,2) - ^
   2014-12-09 08:39 Xelasto: There was never a short slider, do you want me to add one (1:23)
   2014-12-09 08:39 Xelasto: LOl
   2014-12-09 08:39 phate45: no, there was one, before the light blue combo
   2014-12-09 08:39 phate45: in the previous combo
   2014-12-09 08:39 phate45: 03:54:597 (2,3) - spacing
   2014-12-09 08:40 phate45: this
   2014-12-09 08:40 phate45: whole section
   2014-12-09 08:40 phate45: needs spacing
   2014-12-09 08:40 phate45: i'll just stop linking, you go over this and space things properly
   2014-12-09 08:40 Xelasto: Oh you said to get rid of the slider at 1:23 and make it a note or make it longer
   2014-12-09 08:40 Xelasto: BTW I should space them APART?
   2014-12-09 08:40 Xelasto: Right?
   2014-12-09 08:41 phate45: that was 1:21:506
   2014-12-09 08:41 phate45: the combo before that
   2014-12-09 08:41 phate45: you combined my two sentences together
   2014-12-09 08:41 phate45: scroll up and read that part again
   2014-12-09 08:43 Xelasto: It says "Either make this longer or just a note, it doesnt fell good with the vocals*
   2014-12-09 08:43 phate45: and yes, all of the spacing is that the notes are too close together
   2014-12-09 08:43 phate45: yes
   2014-12-09 08:43 phate45: and then theres the other one, remove the repeat slider and change it around
   2014-12-09 08:43 phate45: which you already did
   2014-12-09 08:44 phate45: aand thats about it for the easy diff
   2014-12-09 08:44 phate45: except the new combos at the end, does not feel necessary
   2014-12-09 08:44 phate45: unless you just want to show off a color combination
   2014-12-09 08:44 phate45: let me know when you go through all the changes up to the last time posted
   2014-12-09 08:44 Xelasto: Thats originally what I wanted to do
   2014-12-09 08:44 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 08:45 Xelasto: I feel like the normal and hard will be TRAIN WRECKS of maps
   2014-12-09 08:45 phate45:
   2014-12-09 08:45 phate45: we'll see
   2014-12-09 08:45 Xelasto: Especially hard since I added "invisible notes"
   2014-12-09 08:45 Xelasto: Well
   2014-12-09 08:45 Xelasto: Its hard to explain
   2014-12-09 08:45 Xelasto: But if you play it you will know what I mean
   2014-12-09 08:45 phate45: we'll get to it
   2014-12-09 08:46 Xelasto: kk I'll correct the notes
   2014-12-09 08:56 Xelasto: Ok It should be all fixed
   2014-12-09 08:56 Xelasto: I'll update it now
   2014-12-09 08:56 phate45: wait
   2014-12-09 08:56 phate45: let's do all diffs
   2014-12-09 08:56 Xelasto: Oh ok
   2014-12-09 08:56 Xelasto: Also btw with normal
   2014-12-09 08:56 phate45: normal time
   2014-12-09 08:57 Xelasto: I really think I should slow it down near the end
   2014-12-09 08:57 phate45: wanna spec?
   2014-12-09 08:57 phate45: we'll see
   2014-12-09 08:57 Xelasto: MABYE its just me but I think Its too fast
   2014-12-09 08:57 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 08:57 phate45: good so far
   2014-12-09 08:57 Xelasto:
   2014-12-09 08:58 phate45: that note-2sliders-note in top right miight be a bit off
   2014-12-09 08:59 phate45: the blankets here were off
   2014-12-09 08:59 phate45: i'll look at them too
   2014-12-09 09:00 Xelasto: Now that I think of spacing, I just noticed a few problems already
   2014-12-09 09:00 phate45: timing is offf
   2014-12-09 09:01 phate45: that sliderbreak is also timing
   2014-12-09 09:01 Xelasto: Sorry I proofread everything EXCEPT spacing XD
   2014-12-09 09:03 Xelasto: So I'm guessing there is some major problems with spacing once again
   2014-12-09 09:03 phate45: yes
   2014-12-09 09:03 phate45: i wont even point it out
   2014-12-09 09:03 phate45: except if you ask
   2014-12-09 09:04 phate45: you should work on that
   2014-12-09 09:04 Xelasto: And a bit of timing here and there?
   2014-12-09 09:04 phate45: yes
   2014-12-09 09:04 phate45: and some positioning
   2014-12-09 09:04 Xelasto: anything else?
   2014-12-09 09:04 phate45: i'll go over in the editor and we'll see
   2014-12-09 09:04 Xelasto: Positioning?
   2014-12-09 09:04 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 09:04 phate45: 00:06:233 (2) -
   2014-12-09 09:04 phate45: why is this in here
   2014-12-09 09:04 phate45: you follow vocals everywhere
   2014-12-09 09:05 phate45: there are no vocals on this spot
   2014-12-09 09:05 Xelasto: Should I replace it with a note?
   2014-12-09 09:05 phate45: leave it blank
   2014-12-09 09:06 phate45: 00:13:142 (1,2,3) -
   2014-12-09 09:06 phate45: remove 3, make 2 end at 00:14:233
   2014-12-09 09:06 phate45: an S-curve to connect 1 and (the new) 3 would look good here
   2014-12-09 09:07 phate45: except made from only one slider
   2014-12-09 09:07 Xelasto: How can you make an S
   2014-12-09 09:07 Xelasto: From such a small slider?
   2014-12-09 09:07 phate45: if you make it longer, so it ends at the time i specified
   2014-12-09 09:08 phate45: there'll be plenty of space
   2014-12-09 09:08 phate45: of course, it should start where it starts now
   2014-12-09 09:08 phate45: 00:17:870 (1) - this is completely off
   2014-12-09 09:09 Xelasto: Remove?
   2014-12-09 09:09 phate45: remove (2) here, move (1) to start at 00:18:233 and add repeat
   2014-12-09 09:09 phate45: ahh, the links are so broken
   2014-12-09 09:10 phate45: o well
   2014-12-09 09:10 phate45: moving on
   2014-12-09 09:10 phate45: also reposition the (1) to connect to (2) better
   2014-12-09 09:10 phate45: 00:21:142 (1,2,3,4) - 1,2,3 needs repositioning
   2014-12-09 09:11 Xelasto: WOAH
   2014-12-09 09:11 Xelasto: I just noticed
   2014-12-09 09:11 Xelasto: XD
   2014-12-09 09:11 phate45:
   2014-12-09 09:12 Xelasto: BTW thanks so much for taking time to help me
   2014-12-09 09:12 Xelasto: I really appreciate it ^.^
   2014-12-09 09:12 phate45: 00:44:415 (2) - move the end point to better fit with 3 as a blanket
   2014-12-09 09:12 phate45: maybe make it curved
   2014-12-09 09:13 phate45: yes, i like to help new mappers :
   2014-12-09 09:13 phate45:
   2014-12-09 09:13 Xelasto: Blankets dont HAVE to be wrapped around tight right?
   2014-12-09 09:13 phate45: 00:51:688 (2) - no vocals here, this feels placed to fill space
   2014-12-09 09:14 phate45: yes, they have to be centered
   2014-12-09 09:14 phate45: no need to center it 1px away
   2014-12-09 09:14 Xelasto: Haha I will admit
   2014-12-09 09:14 Xelasto: Some notes I added in as filler
   2014-12-09 09:14 Xelasto: Dont ask
   2014-12-09 09:14 phate45: i'm not asking
   2014-12-09 09:14 phate45: just pointing out
   2014-12-09 09:14 Xelasto: lol
   2014-12-09 09:15 Xelasto: So should I just delete it and do nothing else?
   2014-12-09 09:15 phate45: 00:52:779 (3,4) - replace 4 here with two notes
   2014-12-09 09:15 phate45: maybe
   2014-12-09 09:15 phate45: you decide what to do, i'm just offering advice
   2014-12-09 09:16 phate45: 00:57:142 (1) - remove repeat, add note at 00:58:233
   2014-12-09 09:17 phate45: 00:58:960 (3,4,5) - feels unnecessary
   2014-12-09 09:17 phate45: 01:11:688 (1,2) - same as 0:57
   2014-12-09 09:18 phate45: 01:14:051 (3) - suddenly point out drums? why?
   2014-12-09 09:18 phate45: 01:14:597 (1,2,3) - nice pattern
   2014-12-09 09:18 phate45: 01:20:415 (5,6) - same as 0:57
   2014-12-09 09:19 phate45: 01:27:324 (1,2) - 2 is slow note, dont hide under slider end
   2014-12-09 09:19 phate45: make a jump maybe, move it to the left
   2014-12-09 09:20 phate45: 01:33:688 (2,3) - not a nice blanket, but 3 by itself is too high
   2014-12-09 09:20 phate45: make 3 straight and move it down a bit
   2014-12-09 09:20 phate45: 01:36:597 (1) - this is good timing to show off drums
   2014-12-09 09:21 phate45: unlike 1:14 where it feels too cramped
   2014-12-09 09:21 phate45: there is a clear jump between 1 and 2 01:52:051 (1,2) -
   2014-12-09 09:21 phate45: yet they are so close together
   2014-12-09 09:22 phate45: dont always blanket because you feel like blanketing
   2014-12-09 09:22 phate45: 01:59:870 (2) - feels super randomly placed
   2014-12-09 09:23 phate45: curve (1) before it and make it blanket
   2014-12-09 09:23 phate45: that way it'll be closer to the slider as well
   2014-12-09 09:23 phate45: i'll wait until you catch up
   2014-12-09 09:26 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 09:26 Xelasto: X
   2014-12-09 09:26 Xelasto: XD
   2014-12-09 09:27 phate45: if you have any questions, fire away
   2014-12-09 09:27 Xelasto: LOL
   2014-12-09 09:28 Xelasto: 1:59 wasnt supposed to be there
   2014-12-09 09:28 phate45: but it fits the song
   2014-12-09 09:28 phate45: just the place is bad
   2014-12-09 09:28 phate45:
   2014-12-09 09:29 Xelasto: Oh
   2014-12-09 09:30 Xelasto: Ok
   2014-12-09 09:30 Xelasto: I caught up
   2014-12-09 09:30 phate45: let's move on then
   2014-12-09 09:31 phate45: o wonder
   2014-12-09 09:31 phate45: did you place the break here for the sake of break
   2014-12-09 09:31 phate45: cause the vocals are right there
   2014-12-09 09:31 phate45: there'd better not be a break here in the hard
   2014-12-09 09:31 Xelasto: I placed it there cause I thought that they would be tired by then
   2014-12-09 09:31 Xelasto: LOL
   2014-12-09 09:31 phate45: it's fine to think about rest in easy and normal
   2014-12-09 09:32 phate45: but people who play hard should expect a hard map
   2014-12-09 09:32 phate45: unless it really fits (like the singer takes a break, or there's vocal-only solo)
   2014-12-09 09:32 phate45: dont make unnecessary breaks in hard and insane
   2014-12-09 09:32 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 09:33 phate45: 02:14:233 (1,2,3) - this is a nice pattern
   2014-12-09 09:33 phate45: but dont make it any harder than this
   2014-12-09 09:33 phate45: in normal diff
   2014-12-09 09:34 phate45: 02:23:688 (2,3) - this is just like 1:14
   2014-12-09 09:34 Xelasto: Yeah thats what I thought
   2014-12-09 09:34 phate45:
   2014-12-09 09:34 phate45: 02:30:233 (1,2) - i don't like this
   2014-12-09 09:34 phate45: the vocals go differently
   2014-12-09 09:35 phate45: remove the repeat from 1 and add some notes
   2014-12-09 09:35 phate45: 02:34:597 (1) - this is drums again
   2014-12-09 09:35 phate45: suddenly
   2014-12-09 09:35 Xelasto: BTW
   2014-12-09 09:35 Xelasto: With 2:30 What do you mean they go differently?
   2014-12-09 09:36 phate45: i mean that the repeat does not fit with the vocals
   2014-12-09 09:36 phate45: there's two words
   2014-12-09 09:36 phate45: but the repeat is like one word
   2014-12-09 09:36 phate45: it needs two notes
   2014-12-09 09:37 phate45: 02:40:415 (2,3,4,5) - the (5) is at the start of another sentence
   2014-12-09 09:37 phate45: the combo is wrong heere
   2014-12-09 09:37 Xelasto: Could you show a quick screenshot btw
   2014-12-09 09:38 Xelasto: Of 2:30
   2014-12-09 09:38 phate45: sec
   2014-12-09 09:39 phate45: ay
   2014-12-09 09:39 phate45: not two notes
   2014-12-09 09:39 phate45: one is enough
   2014-12-09 09:39 phate45: 02:31:324 (2)
   2014-12-09 09:39 Xelasto: k
   2014-12-09 09:39 phate45: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2326014
   2014-12-09 09:42 Xelasto: Btw at 2:41 I did the combo thing to allow for recovery
   2014-12-09 09:42 phate45: yea
   2014-12-09 09:42 phate45: but it's off
   2014-12-09 09:42 phate45: the (5) should be (1)
   2014-12-09 09:42 phate45: and a slider
   2014-12-09 09:42 phate45: and all the subsequent sliders need to be moved back
   2014-12-09 09:43 phate45: and the last one needs to be removed in order for 02:43:506 (1) - to fit
   2014-12-09 09:43 phate45: since that is all right
   2014-12-09 09:43 Xelasto: So your saying that 5 should be the start of the first slider
   2014-12-09 09:43 Xelasto: and all the sliders should be moved back to fit?
   2014-12-09 09:44 phate45: yes
   2014-12-09 09:44 phate45: and the last before :506 needs to be removed
   2014-12-09 09:44 phate45: because it wont fit
   2014-12-09 09:45 phate45: 02:46:415 (1) - tis' good
   2014-12-09 09:45 phate45: 02:57:506 (1,1) - should be blanket
   2014-12-09 09:46 phate45: 03:22:233 (1) - you can map the break before this in the insane
   2014-12-09 09:46 phate45: to increase the difficulty a little bit more
   2014-12-09 09:47 Xelasto: 2:46 But arent they timed far apart?
   2014-12-09 09:47 Xelasto: Blanketing them would make them too close right?
   2014-12-09 09:47 phate45: i said 2:46 is good
   2014-12-09 09:47 phate45: 2:57 is bad
   2014-12-09 09:48 Xelasto: SorryI mean 257
   2014-12-09 09:48 phate45: yea
   2014-12-09 09:48 phate45: lessen the curve on the second (1)
   2014-12-09 09:48 phate45: so the blanket center is further away
   2014-12-09 09:48 phate45: and make it look nice
   2014-12-09 09:48 Xelasto: Wait
   2014-12-09 09:49 phate45: in the insane if you map the instrumental part as a whole, place a break around 03:38:960 (1)-, cause it's just relax vocals
   2014-12-09 09:49 Xelasto: Lessen the curve?
   2014-12-09 09:49 Xelasto: So like
   2014-12-09 09:49 phate45: make it bend less
   2014-12-09 09:49 phate45: that way the center of the blanket will be further away
   2014-12-09 09:49 Xelasto: Ik but Like how would that help
   2014-12-09 09:49 phate45: it will look nicer
   2014-12-09 09:49 phate45: i mean, you dont have to
   2014-12-09 09:49 phate45: but this is just like off-blanket
   2014-12-09 09:49 Xelasto: oh
   2014-12-09 09:49 phate45: a lot of people nitpick at it
   2014-12-09 09:50 phate45: if you make the first (1) end elsewhere, this wont be an issue at all
   2014-12-09 09:58 phate45: are you back?
   2014-12-09 09:58 Xelasto: Woah
   2014-12-09 09:58 Xelasto: Lol
   2014-12-09 09:58 Xelasto: I just disconnected
   2014-12-09 09:58 phate45: yeah, bunch of people disconnected at once
   2014-12-09 09:58 Xelasto: But I have to go to sleep now :l
   2014-12-09 09:58 Xelasto: Its getting a little too late
   2014-12-09 09:59 phate45: we can finish the mod tommorow if you'd like
   2014-12-09 09:59 phate45: or if you come after you wake up
   2014-12-09 09:59 phate45: in 7-9 hours
   2014-12-09 09:59 phate45: i should still be around
   2014-12-09 09:59 Xelasto: Well I have school still
   2014-12-09 09:59 phate45: then tommorow at the same time?
   2014-12-09 10:00 Xelasto: I mean if you will be around at like 3 PM tommorrow, sure.
   2014-12-09 10:00 Xelasto: But I dont know what that is in your tim
   2014-12-09 10:00 Xelasto: time*
   2014-12-09 10:00 Xelasto: But, you could just post the stuff I should change in normal and (if you want) in har
   2014-12-09 10:00 Xelasto: inside my maps thread
   2014-12-09 10:01 Xelasto: hard*
   2014-12-09 10:01 phate45: ok
   2014-12-09 10:01 phate45: that i can do
   2014-12-09 10:01 Xelasto: Ok, Thanks for everything ^.^ Sadly I cant give kudos 0-0
   2014-12-09 10:01 phate45: i'll post this chat log as an irc mod, and do the rest normally
   2014-12-09 10:01 Xelasto: Because I havent modded yet
   2014-12-09 10:01 Xelasto: k
   2014-12-09 10:01 Xelasto: Bye
   2014-12-09 10:01 phate45: you can give me kudos for the post the
   2014-12-09 10:02 phate45: then*
   2014-12-09 10:02 phate45: peace

1. 03:31:688 (1,2,3) - These 3 sliders have the same timing, yet (2) and (3) overlap, that does not feel right. Move (3) to the left so they just about touch.
2. 03:57:142 (1) - Move this one to (16, 200), no need to overlap.
3. 04:08:415 (1,2,3,4) - This is an interesting placement, but can be done better, align (1) and (2) more, make (3) and (4) into curved sliders (for blanket), and maybe end (2) where (4) starts, for nicer shape.

1. This is gonna be a long post.
2. 00:01:142 (1,2) - Just plain notes here would be enough.
3. 00:04:051 (6) - New Combo here would fit with lyrics.
4. 00:06:415 (2,3,4) - These are just wrong, why don't repeat the previous pattern(00:04:779 (3,4,5)-)? The vocals do so.
5. 00:12:233 (7) - No need to hide under slider here, move it to the right.
6. 00:13:688 (2,3) - This does not fit with the vocal at all.
7. 00:21:142 (1,2,3) - These 3 fit well with the song, all the notes before them until 00:13:688 don't feell good at all. I'd like to see that section redone.
8. 00:42:779 (7) - This one is plain extra.
9. 00:43:506 (2) - ^ feels the same.
10. 00:46:415 (6) - Making this a note would be better.
11. 00:47:870 (2) - ^ same thing.
12. 00:56:415 (6) - NC here fits better.
13. 00:56:597 (7,8,9) - Does not fit with the vocal at all.
14. 00:57:870 (3) - Feels not needed.
15. 00:59:688 (1) - Also NC here.
16. 01:01:506 (1) - Not needed.
17. 01:02:779 (4) - Feels extra.
18. 01:06:051 (5,6) - Remove (5), place (6) at 01:06:051 and start the spinner at 01:06:415, ending it at 01:08:051.
19. 01:08:960 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern tries it's best to look cool, but does not fit the vocal at all.
20. 01:17:870 (2,4) - Ctrl-G, uniform direction here is better, you can make the switch if there's such a pattern later in the song.
21. 01:27:324 (3) - Too long, end at 01:27:506 and start 01:27:870 (1)- at 01:27:597.
22. 01:31:688 (4) - This is slightly hard to read, try making it a note and moving it for example to (272, 328).
23. 01:48:779 (1) - The timing here is slightly misleading (at least for me).
24. 02:20:415 (1,2) - Nice blankets, this and this section in general.
25. 02:46:233 (1) - Remove one repeat.
26. 02:58:597 (1) - ^
27. 03:39:870 (6,7) - Feel extra.
28. 03:56:779 (1) - All the sliders up to here, cool pattern!
29. 04:08:960 (3,4) - Feel extra.
30. Overall, check for pointless stacks on sliders, hiding notes under sliders, combo placement and flow. Work hard

phate45 wrote:

[General]

1. Easy and first 3/4 of Normal were done over irc, including the chat log below.
   
   IRC mod

   2014-12-09 07:15 phate45: hey
   2014-12-09 07:33 Xelasto: hi
   2014-12-09 07:33 Xelasto: You need something?
   2014-12-09 07:33 phate45: i come from Astral Horizon queue
   2014-12-09 07:33 phate45: Kruzon notified me that you want help with your map
   2014-12-09 07:33 Xelasto: Oh
   2014-12-09 07:34 Xelasto: Yes
   2014-12-09 07:34 Xelasto: Are you one of the modders?
   2014-12-09 07:34 phate45: so, do i make a mod first then we talk about it, or do we just go over it together?
   2014-12-09 07:34 phate45: yes, i'm one of the standard modders
   2014-12-09 07:35 Xelasto: hmm
   2014-12-09 07:35 Xelasto: Can you make a mod first
   2014-12-09 07:36 phate45: sure, will you be around in half a hour or so?
   2014-12-09 07:36 Xelasto: Oh wait
   2014-12-09 07:36 Xelasto: Never I have time
   2014-12-09 07:36 Xelasto: Nevermind*
   2014-12-09 07:36 Xelasto: We can go over it together
   2014-12-09 07:36 Xelasto: If you want
   2014-12-09 07:36 phate45:
   2014-12-09 07:36 phate45: depends on you
   2014-12-09 07:37 phate45: i see that it's your first map
   2014-12-09 07:37 Xelasto: Well
   2014-12-09 07:37 Xelasto: Not my FIRST
   2014-12-09 07:37 Xelasto: But The first SERIOUS one
   2014-12-09 07:37 Xelasto: But its still probably not that good XD
   2014-12-09 07:37 Xelasto: I tried my best to do timing well
   2014-12-09 07:38 phate45: ok
   2014-12-09 07:38 Xelasto: I dont know exactly whats wrong with my maps
   2014-12-09 07:38 phate45: let me testplay the easy
   2014-12-09 07:38 Xelasto: But I know that I need it modded like all others
   2014-12-09 07:38 Xelasto: XD
   2014-12-09 07:38 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 07:38 phate45: you can spec me if you want
   2014-12-09 07:38 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 07:39 Xelasto: ITs probably spacing
   2014-12-09 07:39 phate45: nothing really wrong here
   2014-12-09 07:39 phate45: yea
   2014-12-09 07:39 phate45: just the spacing
   2014-12-09 07:39 phate45: you dont have to overlap just because easy
   2014-12-09 07:39 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 07:39 phate45: make the notes touch at edges, that'll be fine
   2014-12-09 07:40 phate45: nice blankets here
   2014-12-09 07:40 phate45: that last slider felt too short
   2014-12-09 07:41 Xelasto: Which one?
   2014-12-09 07:41 Xelasto: The up arrow ?
   2014-12-09 07:41 phate45: the last small one bottom left
   2014-12-09 07:41 Xelasto: oh
   2014-12-09 07:41 phate45: i'll go over it in the editor once i finish the play
   2014-12-09 07:42 Xelasto: woops the spacing XD
   2014-12-09 07:42 phate45: the timing felt off where i broke the slider
   2014-12-09 07:42 Xelasto: Should I go over it in 25%?
   2014-12-09 07:44 phate45: 25% speed? never
   2014-12-09 07:44 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 07:44 phate45: dont use below 75%
   2014-12-09 07:44 phate45: unless very fast
   2014-12-09 07:44 phate45: which does not concern this map
   2014-12-09 07:44 Xelasto: ok
   2014-12-09 07:44 phate45: also, this kiai section felt really nice
   2014-12-09 07:44 Xelasto: Thanks
   2014-12-09 07:46 phate45: i dont see any reason for the new combos at the end tho
   2014-12-09 07:46 phate45: overall, spacing is an issue
   2014-12-09 07:46 phate45: it's inconsistent
   2014-12-09 07:46 phate45: editor time
   2014-12-09 07:46 Xelasto: So should I make the notes touch edges at the beginning?
   2014-12-09 07:46 phate45: 00:05:324 (2) - this here
   2014-12-09 07:46 phate45: too close to 1
   2014-12-09 07:47 phate45: if you move it a bit down
   2014-12-09 07:47 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 07:47 phate45: you can blanket 3 around the end point
   2014-12-09 07:47 phate45: it would look nicer too
   2014-12-09 07:47 Xelasto: Should I rotate 2 until its sideways
   2014-12-09 07:47 Xelasto: ?
   2014-12-09 07:47 phate45: i dont think thats necessary
   2014-12-09 07:47 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 07:47 phate45: just move it a bit down and bend 3 a bit more to create the blanket
   2014-12-09 07:47 Xelasto: So just drag 2 down and blanked 3
   2014-12-09 07:48 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 07:48 Xelasto: I'm just nervous about normal and hard mode
   2014-12-09 07:48 Xelasto: Oh yeah, btw sorry about this but do you have time for hard?
   2014-12-09 07:48 Xelasto: Sorry I completed hard after I posted
   2014-12-09 07:48 Xelasto: If you dont have time I understand
   2014-12-09 07:48 phate45: 00:11:688 (4) - if you space 1,2,3 here, you would need a bit more space to emphasize the 3-4 jump
   2014-12-09 07:49 phate45: i just woke up, i have about 18 hours before i go to sleep again
   2014-12-09 07:49 phate45:
   2014-12-09 07:49 Xelasto: Oh cool
   2014-12-09 07:50 phate45: 00:18:233 (3,4,1) -
   2014-12-09 07:50 phate45: make 4 a note
   2014-12-09 07:50 phate45: and start 1 earlier
   2014-12-09 07:50 phate45: make it longer
   2014-12-09 07:50 phate45: fits better with vocal
   2014-12-09 07:50 Xelasto: number 1?
   2014-12-09 07:50 phate45: 00:18:233 (3,4,1) - spacing
   2014-12-09 07:51 Xelasto: Btw with 4 should I place the note at the end or beginning of the slider?
   2014-12-09 07:51 phate45: 00:19:870 (1) - this 1
   2014-12-09 07:51 phate45: note where it begins
   2014-12-09 07:51 Xelasto: oh ok
   2014-12-09 07:51 phate45: and 1 should start at 00:19:324
   2014-12-09 07:52 Xelasto: You mean 4?
   2014-12-09 07:52 Xelasto: Cause at 324 I have 4
   2014-12-09 07:52 phate45: 4 00:18:960
   2014-12-09 07:53 Xelasto: So it should one be one note?
   2014-12-09 07:53 phate45: 00:23:870 (1,1) - this feels too fast
   2014-12-09 07:53 phate45: no, just a longer slider
   2014-12-09 07:53 Xelasto: Oh sorry I meant 4 should be 2 or 1 note?
   2014-12-09 07:54 phate45: one note
   2014-12-09 07:54 phate45: just listen to the vocal
   2014-12-09 07:54 Xelasto: oh ok so nothing should be at 19:324?
   2014-12-09 07:54 Xelasto: oh
   2014-12-09 07:55 phate45: the blue 1
   2014-12-09 07:55 phate45: should start at 324
   2014-12-09 07:55 phate45: and end where it currently ends
   2014-12-09 07:56 phate45: 00:57:688 (2) -
   2014-12-09 07:57 phate45: doesnt feel cool like it i
   2014-12-09 07:57 phate45: s
   2014-12-09 07:57 phate45: i suggest breaking it from one slider to note and short slider
   2014-12-09 07:57 phate45: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2325860
   2014-12-09 07:57 phate45: like this
   2014-12-09 07:59 phate45: 01:04:051 (2,3) - this precisely follows the vocal
   2014-12-09 08:00 phate45: yet 01:05:870 (4)- doesnt have a note before itself even though it's exactly the same vocal pattern
   2014-12-09 08:00 Xelasto: Should I place it above or to left?
   2014-12-09 08:00 Xelasto: The note
   2014-12-09 08:00 phate45: maybe make it blanket shape like 3
   2014-12-09 08:00 phate45: and place it above
   2014-12-09 08:01 phate45: take (2,3), rotate around
   2014-12-09 08:01 Xelasto: Ah so Light blue 2 and 3 should be rotate so as to not touch the other ones?
   2014-12-09 08:01 phate45: 01:12:233 (4) - this feels exactly like 00:57:688
   2014-12-09 08:02 phate45: what light blue
   2014-12-09 08:02 phate45: where are you
   2014-12-09 08:02 Xelasto: 1:04
   2014-12-09 08:03 phate45: use default skin, or at least the colors from it
   2014-12-09 08:03 phate45: for editing
   2014-12-09 08:03 Xelasto: Im using the default osu
   2014-12-09 08:03 phate45: or dont refer to the map by color if they differ
   2014-12-09 08:03 Xelasto: I see lightblue ;-;
   2014-12-09 08:03 phate45: cause i got the combo green here
   2014-12-09 08:03 phate45: maybe you added a combo somewhere
   2014-12-09 08:03 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 08:03 phate45: i meant, copy (2,3)
   2014-12-09 08:04 phate45: rotate said copy and replace 4
   2014-12-09 08:04 phate45: with (4,5)
   2014-12-09 08:04 Xelasto: Wait a minute, to think of it, I set the only colors to be pink, light blue, yellow, and white
   2014-12-09 08:04 phate45: here we go
   2014-12-09 08:05 phate45:
   2014-12-09 08:05 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 08:06 Xelasto: How do I send a screen shot to you
   2014-12-09 08:07 phate45: shift+F12
   2014-12-09 08:07 phate45: it'll make a screenshot and upload it to osu site
   2014-12-09 08:07 phate45: and open it in your browser
   2014-12-09 08:08 Xelasto: OK i wanted to show you if these are ok
   2014-12-09 08:08 phate45: 01:16:597 (1) - replace this with two notes
   2014-12-09 08:08 phate45: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2325883
   2014-12-09 08:09 Xelasto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2325882
   2014-12-09 08:09 phate45: hmm
   2014-12-09 08:09 phate45: not bad, but 3 bends out of grid
   2014-12-09 08:09 phate45: it doesnt look cool
   2014-12-09 08:10 phate45: blanket doesnt only mean in the center of the whole shape
   2014-12-09 08:10 phate45: you can make blanket with only first half of (3)
   2014-12-09 08:10 phate45: then make the rest straight
   2014-12-09 08:10 Xelasto: Could you send a screenshot?
   2014-12-09 08:10 phate45: ay
   2014-12-09 08:10 phate45: sec
   2014-12-09 08:13 phate45: hmm
   2014-12-09 08:14 phate45: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2325893
   2014-12-09 08:14 phate45: something close to this
   2014-12-09 08:14 phate45: i'm no pro shaper
   2014-12-09 08:14 Xelasto: ok
   2014-12-09 08:14 phate45: maybe adding some points before the red point would make the curve smoother
   2014-12-09 08:15 Xelasto: Also sorry but im still confused on this also
   2014-12-09 08:15 phate45: but you get the general idea
   2014-12-09 08:15 Xelasto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2325891
   2014-12-09 08:15 phate45: whats wrong here
   2014-12-09 08:16 phate45: just in case, you are in the US, right
   2014-12-09 08:16 phate45: and it's like 11pm
   2014-12-09 08:16 phate45: right
   2014-12-09 08:16 Xelasto: yeah
   2014-12-09 08:16 phate45: so, it's night
   2014-12-09 08:16 phate45: why do you have such bright colors
   2014-12-09 08:16 phate45: do you hate your eyes
   2014-12-09 08:16 Xelasto: LOL
   2014-12-09 08:16 Xelasto: IDK i set it to those
   2014-12-09 08:17 Xelasto: But you only see the defaults
   2014-12-09 08:17 Xelasto: its weir
   2014-12-09 08:17 Xelasto: weird*
   2014-12-09 08:17 phate45: make it a couple shades darker, i'd say
   2014-12-09 08:17 phate45: why did you change timing?
   2014-12-09 08:17 phate45: this section was ok
   2014-12-09 08:18 phate45: just (4) needed to be spaced evenly between 3 and 1
   2014-12-09 08:18 Xelasto: Which one?
   2014-12-09 08:18 phate45: 00:18:960 (4) -
   2014-12-09 08:18 Xelasto: OH
   2014-12-09 08:18 Xelasto: You said to make it a note
   2014-12-09 08:19 phate45: that was earlier
   2014-12-09 08:19 phate45: no
   2014-12-09 08:19 phate45: well
   2014-12-09 08:20 Xelasto: Lol ok well at least thats fixed
   2014-12-09 08:20 Xelasto: BTW you said at 23:870 it feels rushed
   2014-12-09 08:20 phate45: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2325903
   2014-12-09 08:20 phate45: i meant this
   2014-12-09 08:21 phate45: yes, just start the spinner at :870 and remove the note
   2014-12-09 08:22 phate45: 01:21:506 (3) - either make this longer or just a note, doesn't feel good with the vocals
   2014-12-09 08:23 phate45: ^ 01:23:324 (2) - the same vocal pattern repeats here, but the map doesn't reflect that at all
   2014-12-09 08:23 Xelasto: Woah theres nothing wrong before that?
   2014-12-09 08:23 phate45: scroll up a little
   2014-12-09 08:24 phate45: i'm just continuing where i left off before you popped in your screenshot
   2014-12-09 08:25 phate45: 01:25:870 (1) - 01:29:142 (2) -- this whole section needs better spacing to reflect the rhythm
   2014-12-09 08:25 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 08:26 Xelasto: They should be farther apart?
   2014-12-09 08:26 phate45: 01:31:688 (1,2,3) - this can be spaced more, stretch this across the screen, it's really slow
   2014-12-09 08:26 phate45: now you are reffering to the 1:25?
   2014-12-09 08:26 Xelasto: OH
   2014-12-09 08:26 phate45: the rhythm there is note-slider-pause-note
   2014-12-09 08:27 Xelasto: Yes I meant 1:25
   2014-12-09 08:27 phate45: in the map the slider directly connects to the next note
   2014-12-09 08:27 phate45: so that feels a little off
   2014-12-09 08:27 phate45: did you take a look at 01:16
   2014-12-09 08:28 phate45: and 0:57, 01:04/05 and 01:12?
   2014-12-09 08:28 Xelasto: Btw with 1:23 what should I do there? Just do the same note patern?
   2014-12-09 08:28 phate45: change the repeat slider into something else
   2014-12-09 08:29 phate45: to allow you to add a note/slider after it without it being too fast
   2014-12-09 08:29 phate45: the same thing as (3) in the previous combo
   2014-12-09 08:29 phate45: 01:43:688 (3,1) - this is a cool jump, me like
   2014-12-09 08:30 phate45: 02:15:688 (3,1) - feels fast
   2014-12-09 08:31 Xelasto: So once again I should space between the spinner and slider
   2014-12-09 08:32 Xelasto: For 2:15?
   2014-12-09 08:32 phate45: make 02:15:597 (3) - a note
   2014-12-09 08:32 phate45: and start the spinner at 02:16:142
   2014-12-09 08:32 phate45: 02:24:051 (1) - place this a bit higher
   2014-12-09 08:34 phate45: did you take a look at the times i mentioned a bit earlier?
   2014-12-09 08:34 phate45: before your 1:23 question
   2014-12-09 08:35 Xelasto: Yeah I fixed that
   2014-12-09 08:36 phate45: 03:23:688 (3) - feels too close (same distance as (1) before it, but different timing)
   2014-12-09 08:36 phate45: 03:26:597 (3) - ^ same thing
   2014-12-09 08:36 Xelasto: This is what I did at 1:23 btw
   2014-12-09 08:36 Xelasto: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2325919
   2014-12-09 08:36 phate45: 03:36:415 (2) - overlap
   2014-12-09 08:37 phate45: what did you do before it, with the short slider (3)
   2014-12-09 08:38 phate45: 03:38:960 (1,2) - spacing spacing
   2014-12-09 08:38 phate45: 03:41:870 (1,2,3) - ^
   2014-12-09 08:38 phate45: 03:48:051 (1,2) - ^
   2014-12-09 08:38 phate45: 03:50:597 (1,2) - ^
   2014-12-09 08:39 Xelasto: There was never a short slider, do you want me to add one (1:23)
   2014-12-09 08:39 Xelasto: LOl
   2014-12-09 08:39 phate45: no, there was one, before the light blue combo
   2014-12-09 08:39 phate45: in the previous combo
   2014-12-09 08:39 phate45: 03:54:597 (2,3) - spacing
   2014-12-09 08:40 phate45: this
   2014-12-09 08:40 phate45: whole section
   2014-12-09 08:40 phate45: needs spacing
   2014-12-09 08:40 phate45: i'll just stop linking, you go over this and space things properly
   2014-12-09 08:40 Xelasto: Oh you said to get rid of the slider at 1:23 and make it a note or make it longer
   2014-12-09 08:40 Xelasto: BTW I should space them APART?
   2014-12-09 08:40 Xelasto: Right?
   2014-12-09 08:41 phate45: that was 1:21:506
   2014-12-09 08:41 phate45: the combo before that
   2014-12-09 08:41 phate45: you combined my two sentences together
   2014-12-09 08:41 phate45: scroll up and read that part again
   2014-12-09 08:43 Xelasto: It says "Either make this longer or just a note, it doesnt fell good with the vocals*
   2014-12-09 08:43 phate45: and yes, all of the spacing is that the notes are too close together
   2014-12-09 08:43 phate45: yes
   2014-12-09 08:43 phate45: and then theres the other one, remove the repeat slider and change it around
   2014-12-09 08:43 phate45: which you already did
   2014-12-09 08:44 phate45: aand thats about it for the easy diff
   2014-12-09 08:44 phate45: except the new combos at the end, does not feel necessary
   2014-12-09 08:44 phate45: unless you just want to show off a color combination
   2014-12-09 08:44 phate45: let me know when you go through all the changes up to the last time posted
   2014-12-09 08:44 Xelasto: Thats originally what I wanted to do
   2014-12-09 08:44 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 08:45 Xelasto: I feel like the normal and hard will be TRAIN WRECKS of maps
   2014-12-09 08:45 phate45:
   2014-12-09 08:45 phate45: we'll see
   2014-12-09 08:45 Xelasto: Especially hard since I added "invisible notes"
   2014-12-09 08:45 Xelasto: Well
   2014-12-09 08:45 Xelasto: Its hard to explain
   2014-12-09 08:45 Xelasto: But if you play it you will know what I mean
   2014-12-09 08:45 phate45: we'll get to it
   2014-12-09 08:46 Xelasto: kk I'll correct the notes
   2014-12-09 08:56 Xelasto: Ok It should be all fixed
   2014-12-09 08:56 Xelasto: I'll update it now
   2014-12-09 08:56 phate45: wait
   2014-12-09 08:56 phate45: let's do all diffs
   2014-12-09 08:56 Xelasto: Oh ok
   2014-12-09 08:56 Xelasto: Also btw with normal
   2014-12-09 08:56 phate45: normal time
   2014-12-09 08:57 Xelasto: I really think I should slow it down near the end
   2014-12-09 08:57 phate45: wanna spec?
   2014-12-09 08:57 phate45: we'll see
   2014-12-09 08:57 Xelasto: MABYE its just me but I think Its too fast
   2014-12-09 08:57 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 08:57 phate45: good so far
   2014-12-09 08:57 Xelasto:
   2014-12-09 08:58 phate45: that note-2sliders-note in top right miight be a bit off
   2014-12-09 08:59 phate45: the blankets here were off
   2014-12-09 08:59 phate45: i'll look at them too
   2014-12-09 09:00 Xelasto: Now that I think of spacing, I just noticed a few problems already
   2014-12-09 09:00 phate45: timing is offf
   2014-12-09 09:01 phate45: that sliderbreak is also timing
   2014-12-09 09:01 Xelasto: Sorry I proofread everything EXCEPT spacing XD
   2014-12-09 09:03 Xelasto: So I'm guessing there is some major problems with spacing once again
   2014-12-09 09:03 phate45: yes
   2014-12-09 09:03 phate45: i wont even point it out
   2014-12-09 09:03 phate45: except if you ask
   2014-12-09 09:04 phate45: you should work on that
   2014-12-09 09:04 Xelasto: And a bit of timing here and there?
   2014-12-09 09:04 phate45: yes
   2014-12-09 09:04 phate45: and some positioning
   2014-12-09 09:04 Xelasto: anything else?
   2014-12-09 09:04 phate45: i'll go over in the editor and we'll see
   2014-12-09 09:04 Xelasto: Positioning?
   2014-12-09 09:04 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 09:04 phate45: 00:06:233 (2) -
   2014-12-09 09:04 phate45: why is this in here
   2014-12-09 09:04 phate45: you follow vocals everywhere
   2014-12-09 09:05 phate45: there are no vocals on this spot
   2014-12-09 09:05 Xelasto: Should I replace it with a note?
   2014-12-09 09:05 phate45: leave it blank
   2014-12-09 09:06 phate45: 00:13:142 (1,2,3) -
   2014-12-09 09:06 phate45: remove 3, make 2 end at 00:14:233
   2014-12-09 09:06 phate45: an S-curve to connect 1 and (the new) 3 would look good here
   2014-12-09 09:07 phate45: except made from only one slider
   2014-12-09 09:07 Xelasto: How can you make an S
   2014-12-09 09:07 Xelasto: From such a small slider?
   2014-12-09 09:07 phate45: if you make it longer, so it ends at the time i specified
   2014-12-09 09:08 phate45: there'll be plenty of space
   2014-12-09 09:08 phate45: of course, it should start where it starts now
   2014-12-09 09:08 phate45: 00:17:870 (1) - this is completely off
   2014-12-09 09:09 Xelasto: Remove?
   2014-12-09 09:09 phate45: remove (2) here, move (1) to start at 00:18:233 and add repeat
   2014-12-09 09:09 phate45: ahh, the links are so broken
   2014-12-09 09:10 phate45: o well
   2014-12-09 09:10 phate45: moving on
   2014-12-09 09:10 phate45: also reposition the (1) to connect to (2) better
   2014-12-09 09:10 phate45: 00:21:142 (1,2,3,4) - 1,2,3 needs repositioning
   2014-12-09 09:11 Xelasto: WOAH
   2014-12-09 09:11 Xelasto: I just noticed
   2014-12-09 09:11 Xelasto: XD
   2014-12-09 09:11 phate45:
   2014-12-09 09:12 Xelasto: BTW thanks so much for taking time to help me
   2014-12-09 09:12 Xelasto: I really appreciate it ^.^
   2014-12-09 09:12 phate45: 00:44:415 (2) - move the end point to better fit with 3 as a blanket
   2014-12-09 09:12 phate45: maybe make it curved
   2014-12-09 09:13 phate45: yes, i like to help new mappers :
   2014-12-09 09:13 phate45:
   2014-12-09 09:13 Xelasto: Blankets dont HAVE to be wrapped around tight right?
   2014-12-09 09:13 phate45: 00:51:688 (2) - no vocals here, this feels placed to fill space
   2014-12-09 09:14 phate45: yes, they have to be centered
   2014-12-09 09:14 phate45: no need to center it 1px away
   2014-12-09 09:14 Xelasto: Haha I will admit
   2014-12-09 09:14 Xelasto: Some notes I added in as filler
   2014-12-09 09:14 Xelasto: Dont ask
   2014-12-09 09:14 phate45: i'm not asking
   2014-12-09 09:14 phate45: just pointing out
   2014-12-09 09:14 Xelasto: lol
   2014-12-09 09:15 Xelasto: So should I just delete it and do nothing else?
   2014-12-09 09:15 phate45: 00:52:779 (3,4) - replace 4 here with two notes
   2014-12-09 09:15 phate45: maybe
   2014-12-09 09:15 phate45: you decide what to do, i'm just offering advice
   2014-12-09 09:16 phate45: 00:57:142 (1) - remove repeat, add note at 00:58:233
   2014-12-09 09:17 phate45: 00:58:960 (3,4,5) - feels unnecessary
   2014-12-09 09:17 phate45: 01:11:688 (1,2) - same as 0:57
   2014-12-09 09:18 phate45: 01:14:051 (3) - suddenly point out drums? why?
   2014-12-09 09:18 phate45: 01:14:597 (1,2,3) - nice pattern
   2014-12-09 09:18 phate45: 01:20:415 (5,6) - same as 0:57
   2014-12-09 09:19 phate45: 01:27:324 (1,2) - 2 is slow note, dont hide under slider end
   2014-12-09 09:19 phate45: make a jump maybe, move it to the left
   2014-12-09 09:20 phate45: 01:33:688 (2,3) - not a nice blanket, but 3 by itself is too high
   2014-12-09 09:20 phate45: make 3 straight and move it down a bit
   2014-12-09 09:20 phate45: 01:36:597 (1) - this is good timing to show off drums
   2014-12-09 09:21 phate45: unlike 1:14 where it feels too cramped
   2014-12-09 09:21 phate45: there is a clear jump between 1 and 2 01:52:051 (1,2) -
   2014-12-09 09:21 phate45: yet they are so close together
   2014-12-09 09:22 phate45: dont always blanket because you feel like blanketing
   2014-12-09 09:22 phate45: 01:59:870 (2) - feels super randomly placed
   2014-12-09 09:23 phate45: curve (1) before it and make it blanket
   2014-12-09 09:23 phate45: that way it'll be closer to the slider as well
   2014-12-09 09:23 phate45: i'll wait until you catch up
   2014-12-09 09:26 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 09:26 Xelasto: X
   2014-12-09 09:26 Xelasto: XD
   2014-12-09 09:27 phate45: if you have any questions, fire away
   2014-12-09 09:27 Xelasto: LOL
   2014-12-09 09:28 Xelasto: 1:59 wasnt supposed to be there
   2014-12-09 09:28 phate45: but it fits the song
   2014-12-09 09:28 phate45: just the place is bad
   2014-12-09 09:28 phate45:
   2014-12-09 09:29 Xelasto: Oh
   2014-12-09 09:30 Xelasto: Ok
   2014-12-09 09:30 Xelasto: I caught up
   2014-12-09 09:30 phate45: let's move on then
   2014-12-09 09:31 phate45: o wonder
   2014-12-09 09:31 phate45: did you place the break here for the sake of break
   2014-12-09 09:31 phate45: cause the vocals are right there
   2014-12-09 09:31 phate45: there'd better not be a break here in the hard
   2014-12-09 09:31 Xelasto: I placed it there cause I thought that they would be tired by then
   2014-12-09 09:31 Xelasto: LOL
   2014-12-09 09:31 phate45: it's fine to think about rest in easy and normal
   2014-12-09 09:32 phate45: but people who play hard should expect a hard map
   2014-12-09 09:32 phate45: unless it really fits (like the singer takes a break, or there's vocal-only solo)
   2014-12-09 09:32 phate45: dont make unnecessary breaks in hard and insane
   2014-12-09 09:32 Xelasto: kk
   2014-12-09 09:33 phate45: 02:14:233 (1,2,3) - this is a nice pattern
   2014-12-09 09:33 phate45: but dont make it any harder than this
   2014-12-09 09:33 phate45: in normal diff
   2014-12-09 09:34 phate45: 02:23:688 (2,3) - this is just like 1:14
   2014-12-09 09:34 Xelasto: Yeah thats what I thought
   2014-12-09 09:34 phate45:
   2014-12-09 09:34 phate45: 02:30:233 (1,2) - i don't like this
   2014-12-09 09:34 phate45: the vocals go differently
   2014-12-09 09:35 phate45: remove the repeat from 1 and add some notes
   2014-12-09 09:35 phate45: 02:34:597 (1) - this is drums again
   2014-12-09 09:35 phate45: suddenly
   2014-12-09 09:35 Xelasto: BTW
   2014-12-09 09:35 Xelasto: With 2:30 What do you mean they go differently?
   2014-12-09 09:36 phate45: i mean that the repeat does not fit with the vocals
   2014-12-09 09:36 phate45: there's two words
   2014-12-09 09:36 phate45: but the repeat is like one word
   2014-12-09 09:36 phate45: it needs two notes
   2014-12-09 09:37 phate45: 02:40:415 (2,3,4,5) - the (5) is at the start of another sentence
   2014-12-09 09:37 phate45: the combo is wrong heere
   2014-12-09 09:37 Xelasto: Could you show a quick screenshot btw
   2014-12-09 09:38 Xelasto: Of 2:30
   2014-12-09 09:38 phate45: sec
   2014-12-09 09:39 phate45: ay
   2014-12-09 09:39 phate45: not two notes
   2014-12-09 09:39 phate45: one is enough
   2014-12-09 09:39 phate45: 02:31:324 (2)
   2014-12-09 09:39 Xelasto: k
   2014-12-09 09:39 phate45: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2326014
   2014-12-09 09:42 Xelasto: Btw at 2:41 I did the combo thing to allow for recovery
   2014-12-09 09:42 phate45: yea
   2014-12-09 09:42 phate45: but it's off
   2014-12-09 09:42 phate45: the (5) should be (1)
   2014-12-09 09:42 phate45: and a slider
   2014-12-09 09:42 phate45: and all the subsequent sliders need to be moved back
   2014-12-09 09:43 phate45: and the last one needs to be removed in order for 02:43:506 (1) - to fit
   2014-12-09 09:43 phate45: since that is all right
   2014-12-09 09:43 Xelasto: So your saying that 5 should be the start of the first slider
   2014-12-09 09:43 Xelasto: and all the sliders should be moved back to fit?
   2014-12-09 09:44 phate45: yes
   2014-12-09 09:44 phate45: and the last before :506 needs to be removed
   2014-12-09 09:44 phate45: because it wont fit
   2014-12-09 09:45 phate45: 02:46:415 (1) - tis' good
   2014-12-09 09:45 phate45: 02:57:506 (1,1) - should be blanket
   2014-12-09 09:46 phate45: 03:22:233 (1) - you can map the break before this in the insane
   2014-12-09 09:46 phate45: to increase the difficulty a little bit more
   2014-12-09 09:47 Xelasto: 2:46 But arent they timed far apart?
   2014-12-09 09:47 Xelasto: Blanketing them would make them too close right?
   2014-12-09 09:47 phate45: i said 2:46 is good
   2014-12-09 09:47 phate45: 2:57 is bad
   2014-12-09 09:48 Xelasto: SorryI mean 257
   2014-12-09 09:48 phate45: yea
   2014-12-09 09:48 phate45: lessen the curve on the second (1)
   2014-12-09 09:48 phate45: so the blanket center is further away
   2014-12-09 09:48 phate45: and make it look nice
   2014-12-09 09:48 Xelasto: Wait
   2014-12-09 09:49 phate45: in the insane if you map the instrumental part as a whole, place a break around 03:38:960 (1)-, cause it's just relax vocals
   2014-12-09 09:49 Xelasto: Lessen the curve?
   2014-12-09 09:49 Xelasto: So like
   2014-12-09 09:49 phate45: make it bend less
   2014-12-09 09:49 phate45: that way the center of the blanket will be further away
   2014-12-09 09:49 Xelasto: Ik but Like how would that help
   2014-12-09 09:49 phate45: it will look nicer
   2014-12-09 09:49 phate45: i mean, you dont have to
   2014-12-09 09:49 phate45: but this is just like off-blanket
   2014-12-09 09:49 Xelasto: oh
   2014-12-09 09:49 phate45: a lot of people nitpick at it
   2014-12-09 09:50 phate45: if you make the first (1) end elsewhere, this wont be an issue at all
   2014-12-09 09:58 phate45: are you back?
   2014-12-09 09:58 Xelasto: Woah
   2014-12-09 09:58 Xelasto: Lol
   2014-12-09 09:58 Xelasto: I just disconnected
   2014-12-09 09:58 phate45: yeah, bunch of people disconnected at once
   2014-12-09 09:58 Xelasto: But I have to go to sleep now :l
   2014-12-09 09:58 Xelasto: Its getting a little too late
   2014-12-09 09:59 phate45: we can finish the mod tommorow if you'd like
   2014-12-09 09:59 phate45: or if you come after you wake up
   2014-12-09 09:59 phate45: in 7-9 hours
   2014-12-09 09:59 phate45: i should still be around
   2014-12-09 09:59 Xelasto: Well I have school still
   2014-12-09 09:59 phate45: then tommorow at the same time?
   2014-12-09 10:00 Xelasto: I mean if you will be around at like 3 PM tommorrow, sure.
   2014-12-09 10:00 Xelasto: But I dont know what that is in your tim
   2014-12-09 10:00 Xelasto: time*
   2014-12-09 10:00 Xelasto: But, you could just post the stuff I should change in normal and (if you want) in har
   2014-12-09 10:00 Xelasto: inside my maps thread
   2014-12-09 10:01 Xelasto: hard*
   2014-12-09 10:01 phate45: ok
   2014-12-09 10:01 phate45: that i can do
   2014-12-09 10:01 Xelasto: Ok, Thanks for everything ^.^ Sadly I cant give kudos 0-0
   2014-12-09 10:01 phate45: i'll post this chat log as an irc mod, and do the rest normally
   2014-12-09 10:01 Xelasto: Because I havent modded yet
   2014-12-09 10:01 Xelasto: k
   2014-12-09 10:01 Xelasto: Bye
   2014-12-09 10:01 phate45: you can give me kudos for the post the
   2014-12-09 10:02 phate45: then*
   2014-12-09 10:02 phate45: peace

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1. 03:31:688 (1,2,3) - These 3 sliders have the same timing, yet (2) and (3) overlap, that does not feel right. Move (3) to the left so they just about touch. Fixed
2. 03:57:142 (1) - Move this one to (16, 200), no need to overlap. Fixed
3. 04:08:415 (1,2,3,4) - This is an interesting placement, but can be done better, align (1) and (2) more, make (3) and (4) into curved sliders (for blanket), and maybe end (2) where (4) starts, for nicer shape. Fixed
   
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   1. This is gonna be a long post.
   2. 00:01:142 (1,2) - Just plain notes here would be enough.Fixed
   3. 00:04:051 (6) - New Combo here would fit with lyrics.Added
   4. 00:06:415 (2,3,4) - These are just wrong, why don't repeat the previous pattern(00:04:779 (3,4,5)-)? The vocals do so.Fixed
   5. 00:12:233 (7) - No need to hide under slider here, move it to the right.Fixed
   6. 00:13:688 (2,3) - This does not fit with the vocal at all.Fixed. I think.
   7. 00:21:142 (1,2,3) - These 3 fit well with the song, all the notes before them until 00:13:688 don't feell good at all. I'd like to see that section redone.Redone.
   8. 00:42:779 (7) - This one is plain extra.Fixed
   9. 00:43:506 (2) - ^ feels the same.Fixed
   10. 00:46:415 (6) - Making this a note would be better.Fixed
   11. 00:47:870 (2) - ^ same thing.Fixed
   12. 00:56:415 (6) - NC here fits better.Fixed
   13. 00:56:597 (7,8,9) - Does not fit with the vocal at all.Fixed
   14. 00:57:870 (3) - Feels not needed.Fixed
   15. 00:59:688 (1) - Also NC here.Fixed
   16. 01:01:506 (1) - Not needed.Fixed
   17. 01:02:779 (4) - Feels extra.I kinda agree with you, but instead I changed it into a note.
   18. 01:06:051 (5,6) - Remove (5), place (6) at 01:06:051 and start the spinner at 01:06:415, ending it at 01:08:051.I tried it, but the new 5 seemed completely unecessary, so I removed both.
   19. 01:08:960 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern tries it's best to look cool, but does not fit the vocal at all.Fixed
   20. 01:17:870 (2,4) - Ctrl-G, uniform direction here is better, you can make the switch if there's such a pattern later in the song.Fixed
   21. 01:27:324 (3) - Too long, end at 01:27:506 and start 01:27:870 (1)- at 01:27:597.I think you might have the wrong times. Nothing vocal happens at 1:27:597. However I did change it to make it better
   22. 01:31:688 (4) - This is slightly hard to read, try making it a note and moving it for example to (272, 328).Fixed
   23. 01:48:779 (1) - The timing here is slightly misleading (at least for me).Fixed
   24. 02:20:415 (1,2) - Nice blankets, this and this section in general. Thank you!
   25. 02:46:233 (1) - Remove one repeat. Fixed
   26. 02:58:597 (1) - ^Fixed
   27. 03:39:870 (6,7) - Feel extra.Fixed
   28. 03:56:779 (1) - All the sliders up to here, cool pattern!Thanks!
   29. 04:08:960 (3,4) - Feel extra.Fixed
   30. Overall, check for pointless stacks on sliders, hiding notes under sliders, combo placement and flow. Work hard

Kocari wrote:

Hi and here as requested from modding queue.

[Easy]

I didn't think this mapset needed an easy. It could've been Normal/Hard/Insane but as we stand now there is no insane so this will do GD insane is coming soon
00:06:597 (3) - Space that a little more Fixed
00:21:142 (3) - This one is as balanced as the other sliders you had. This one is way further than the sequence compared to the others you had that were closerI didn't see much of a problem with the distance, but I brought it a tad bit closer.
01:12:688 (5) - Slider ends on 1/16 of a note. Seems crazy but for an odd reason it sounds best there Oddly, your right 0-o
02:20:051 (3) - DS this both of them touching a single slider like that doesn't look appealing; pattern like this is cool http://puu.sh/dpSyo/f678fb4fd4.jpgWhile it looks cooler, it would be hard for beginners because it's a sudden jump, but I did move it a bit farther away
02:24:051 (1,2,1,2,1,2,) - This part on an easy difficulty is a no-no When notes like that are layered and hidden it ruins the difficulty of what's called "easy" changes there are necessary because it can lead to an unrank when in reality we are look to rank yanagi songsAgreed
02:29:506 (1,2,3) - Use DS base of 1.0 and snap those correctly to look more appealingFixed
03:04:051 (1,2,3) - Same snapping here as mentioned aboveFixed
Only problem with easy was the spacing between notes. There are gaps in the timing where you had to create you own, but do so in a way that projects it smoothly. It was rough and due to lack of hitsounding there wasn't much flow to it. To maintain hitsound I would suggest using a soft-sliderslide that doesn't scratch and possible whistle/claps from another yanagi song would benefit this very well

That's basically all I can do. Once the changes has been made and revised. I will thoroughly give it another check so I'll create a ticket for you in my queue for whenever you need another mod. In the meantime the current issue still stands in most of the mapset but a simple check would benefit you. Practice makes perfect and this being beginner created you have potential to grow as a strong mapper. I'm in the same boat as you man whatever counts GL out there in the mapping world

Kocari wrote:

00:07:658 (3) - Move down a tick for straight consistency Fixed
00:13:476 (2) - Distance Snap Fixed
00:15:658 (1,2,3) - Distance Snap higher together Fixed
00:18:203 (1) - Move this to x:172 y:136 and 00:18:930 (2) - x:280 y:248 for equal spacing correction Fixed
00:24:203 (1) - Move to a red tick so it isn't right after the note into a spinner Fixed
00:46:203 (3) - No hitfinish necessary here Fixed
00:46:930 (1) - DS and here 00:51:658 (2) and here 00:55:476 (1) 0059:658 (2) Fixed
01:14:203 (1) - Keep the combo the same here but change to NC here 01:14:567 (2) http://puu.sh/dACW3/cae119211f.jpg Fixed
01:17:112 (3) - Keep NC the same but change it during here 01:17:476 (4) Fixed
01:48:203 (3) - DS and here 01:50:021 (3) Fixed
01:52:385 (1) - Move down 2 ticks so the notes can be aligned perfectly Fixed
01:53:840 (2) - Move note to x:104 y:32 and move the next two sliders accordingly so spaces can be even without having them at awkward positions Fixed
02:15:658 (5) - This slider should end at 02:16:203 and move spinner to red-white tick from 02:16:567 to 02:17:476 http://puu.sh/dADea/fa1dec5047.jpg sounds better and makes it like a true easy difficulty Fixed, but spinner MAY be too short
02:25:840 (4) - This note isn't the same as the one before it. Try using ctrl+h on 02:24:385 (3) to flip it horizontally for balance Fixed
03:03:658 (2,3,4,5) - Too many single notes; try adjusting to sliders for "easy" difficulty Fixed
04:05:840 (4) - Bad whistle slider and here 04:13:476 (3) Fixed, I actually meant to have the little jingle sound on both ends rather than the actual whistle. Thanks!

Well done with the edit. It feels a lot smoother. Double check if I did it all correctly again to get perfect spacing. Also try adjusting hitsounds to where volume matters. Some slow parts/supposed to be quiet parts tend to have a fat hitfinish that ruins the melodicness of what the song was intended for. Try using 60% volume on those to help it give the vibe and change the volume accordingly to crescendos and falsettos depending on what the song is doing instrumentally and vocally. Hope this helps you a bunch. I'm doing this mod daily so it gets finished. Otherwise it will be too long

-Mo- wrote:

Hey, Mod4Mod from my queue.

Metadata
Artist: やなぎなぎFixed
Romanized Artist: yanaginagi Couldn't. It makes a duplicate map
Title: 水の中の雲 Fixed
Romanized Title: Mizu no Naka no Kumo Fixed

You should try and use native languages in metadata where possible. Please note that 'yanaginagi' is all in lower case as this is the preferred stylisation. The English translation of the title should not be in the title metadata as that is not how the song is titled. You should put it in the tags instead.

General
- Get into the habit of using Grid Size 4 (Tiny) so that the distance snapping of notes is more accurate and consistent.
- 01:37:870 - Move the start of the first Kiai to here. Fixed
- 02:47:688 - Move the start of the second Kiai to here. Fixed
- 03:09:719 - Kiai end isn't snapped (AIMod can spot this). Move it to 03:10:960. Fixed
- 03:57:506 - Move the start of the final Kiai to here. As a rule of thumb, Kiai time should generally start on downbeats (Large white ticks). Fixed

I had to box these mods since I made quite a long list. Usually I don't have to do that, but don't let that put you off.

Easy

^

- I noticed that you limited yourself to mapping only to the vocals. I wouldn't recommend this, since the vocals for this song doesn't have a steady rhythm, and so it is kinda difficult to play to, especially for an Easy difficulty. Of course, the vocals are important, but try and map to another rhythm alongside it for a better rhythmic flow.
- 00:09:506 (1) - This note touches the health bar on my side. Please avoid this as it can hinder readability.Fixed
- 00:11:688 (4,2) - Avoid this sort of overlap, as it doesn't look good aesthetically, and it hinders readability. In fact, playing through the map I noticed a lot of these. I'll point these out but I won't give a huge explanation again just to save time, so I'll mention it once here. As a general tip from me, unecessary overlaps should generally be avoided. This is an example of one being unecessary.Fixed
- 00:21:142 (3) - I would put a new combo here personally, since it starts on a new measure.Fixed
- 00:42:597 (3,2) - Overlap; although you could get away with this, I would still avoid it.Fixed
- 00:54:233 (4) - Perhaps make this slider repeat, since the vocals holds a long note at the end of this slider, and it's a shame that there are no notes playing for it. A slider would be most suitable for vocal holds.Instead of making it repeat which sounded weird, I added a note and slider.
- 00:58:233 (3) - I wouldn't recommend sliders like this for Easy, since it defers from a basic white-tick rhythm, and because you set the SV so low, it looks faster than it should be, which would throw off beginner players.
- 01:02:597 (1) - As before about held vocals. As an example, this is how I would map this section: I avoid circles since if I were to add them, they and the sliders would land on red ticks, which aren't very nice to play on Easy.

SPOILER

I instead changed the note to a slider to account for the held vocals
- 01:12:710 (5) - What is this thing doing snapped onto a grey (1/16) tick? If you're getting notes snapped to odd ticks like this, then you should have a look at your timings rather than compensating with note placement.The last modder said that it sounds slightly more on beat (go to 25% speed). Even if I did change it to go back on the red tick it would be an unnoticeable difference, but I know what you mean (unless its unrankable ofc)
- 01:19:688 (1,2,3) - The spacing is inconsistent between these. Fixed
- 01:40:779 (1) - This touches the health bar on my end.Fixed
- 01:43:688 (3,1) - Avoid this overlap.Fixed, but I would just call that touching, not overlapping XD
- 01:46:597 (2) - The repeat point doesn't match the vocals perfectly. I would map something else here rather than a large slider like this.Fixed
- 01:46:597 (2,1) - Avoid this overlap.Fixed
- 01:59:324 (3) - A wiggle slider doesn't feel appropriate since the music doesn't suggest this sort of feel (examples of music techniques that would are guitar whammies or electronic riffs like in dubstep).Fixed
- 02:18:597 (1,2,3) - Use consistent spacing in Easy difficulties and avoid things like this.Fixed
- 02:27:324 (2) - Make this the same shape as 02:25:870 (2). Fixed
- 02:30:779 (4,1) - A white to red timing in Easy difficulties like this is fairly difficult for beginners to play, and this one comes quite suddenly given that there isn't anything like this for the previous end of the map.Fixed
- 02:41:506 (1,2,3) - Move these apart so they aren't touching.Fixed
- 02:43:506 (3,4,5) - As before about consistent spacing.Fixed
- 02:45:506 (1) - As before about wiggle slilders.Fixed
- 02:53:506 (4) - As above.Fixed
- 02:57:506 (3) - Try and make blankets circular rather than parabolic. You can reverse slider 2 with Ctrl+G to get a better view of approach circles. Also, tr y and use as little slider points as possible when making curves, including blankets. I also find that turning off grid snapping (hold Shift) really helps.

SPOILER

Fixed
- 03:01:506 (1) - Move this further away, since having it so close to the previous note implies that it is earlier in timing.Fixed
- 03:05:142 (4,1) - Avoid this overlap; this can be easily fixed by moving the red slider point of 4 up and then adjusting.Fixed
- 03:27:688 (1,2) - Avoid this overlap, and perhaps shorten the spacing between them.Fixed
- 03:30:415 (3,1,1) - Avoid these overlaps.Fixed
- 03:37:142 (3,1) - Avoid this overlap.Fixed
- 03:40:051 (2,1) - Avoid this overlap.Fixed
- 03:44:597 (3,2) - Avoid this overlap.I put them a bit farther apart, but that's not overlapping
- 03:56:233 (3,2) - Either don't overlap these, or have 3 perfectly stack the tail of 2. You can reverse slider 2 (Ctrl+G) to view it's position by its tail.Fixed, I perfectly stacked on the tail.
- 03:57:142 (1,3) - As above.Fixed ^
- 04:09:688 (2) - As before about held vocals.Fixed
- 04:14:597 (2,3) - Avoid these touching.Fixed

Normal

^

- Please stick to using distance snapping on lower difficulties, especially for a beginner mapper like yourself.
- 00:15:688 (4) - New combo here since it is a new line in the vocals, and so that it is consistent with the rest of this section of the song.Fixed
- 00:22:233 (4,5) - Why is the spacing reduced like this? I think you did this for a lot of this difficulty too. This is a bad thing to do, since having notes closer together implies shorter time, and vice versa. This article may be helpful to you.Fixed
- 00:44:415 (2,3) - Spacing, as above.Fixed
- 00:50:960 (1,3) - Try and avoid this overlap.Fixed
- 00:58:233 (2,3) - I feel as if having a double so detatched from the combo like this is tricky for beginners to play. Please aso note that 3 is a held vocal.Fixed
- 01:04:051 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing.Fixed
- 01:12:779 (2,3) - As before about detatched doubles.Fixed
- 01:18:960 (1,2,3,4) - This square looks like it's handmade, and thus is not perfect. You can create perfect regular shapes using the Create Polygon Circle (CPC) function (Ctrl+Shift+D).Fixed
- 01:22:233 (1,3) - Avoid this overlap.Fixed
- 01:30:597 (1,2,3,4) - As before about squares.Fixed
- 01:36:597 (1) - I would avoid using blue-tick repeating sliders in Normal difficulty, since they can be confusing for beginner players. Fixed
- 01:37:142 (1,3) - Avoid this overlap.Fixed
- 01:38:960 (3,4,5,1) - Inconsistent spacing.Fixed
- 02:21:506 (3,1) - Avoid this overlap.Fixed
- 02:27:324 (3,6) - Avoid this overlap, or stack them (not recommended for this difficulty).Fixed
- 02:31:506 (3) - As before about wiggle sliders.Fixed
- 02:34:415 (6) - This blanket can be improved [02:34:688]. If you look from that timestamp, you can see how the approach circle compares with the slider. As before, try to use as little slider points as possible. A blanket of this length should use about 4 points.Fixed
- 02:36:597 (3,1) - If you want these to overlap, atleast avoid them overlapping the head/tail circles of the sliders.Fixed
- 02:43:506 (1,2) - Avoid this sort of overlap.Fixed
- 02:44:779 (2,2) - Avoid this overlap.Fixed
- 02:46:415 (1) - As before about blue-tick repeaters.Fixed
- 02:47:688 (4) - This blanket could be improved [02:47:506].Fixed
- 02:57:506 (1,2) - Avoid this overlap.Fixed
- 03:00:779 (5) - This is touching the health bar on my end.Fixed
- 03:03:688 (1,3) - Avoid this overlap.Fixed
- 03:22:233 (1,3) - Stack these pefrectly.Fixed
- 03:22:597 (2,1,3) - As above.Fixed
- 03:31:688 (1,2,3,4) - As before about spacing.Fixed
- 03:34:779 (1,1) - As before about spacing.Fixed
- 03:51:688 (1,2) - This formation may be difficult for beginners to read.Fixed
- 03:53:506 (1,2,3) - As before about spacing.Fixed
- 03:56:779 (1,1,1) - As before about spacing.Fixed
- 04:03:324 (5,1,2) - Inconsistent spacing.Fixed

Hard

^

- 00:06:960 (3,1) - Avoid this overlap.Fixed
- 00:08:233 (2,3,4) - This spacing is inconsistent with the rest of this section.Fixed
- 00:16:960 (4) - This blanket could be improved [00:16:324].Fixed
- 00:50:779 (1,2,3) - For the first notes to be right after a spinner to be a triple starting on the red tick is not very good. It's kind of hard too read the timing of this.I didn't know how to map it differently, so instead i shortened the spinner to give the player more time to orient himself.
- 00:54:779 (5,6) - Avoid these touching.Fixed
- 01:08:415 (1,3) - Avoid this overlap.Fixed
- 01:16:779 (3,4) - This spacing is inconsistent with the rest of the combo.Fixed
- 01:17:142 (4,2,3) - Avoid this overlap.Fixed
- 01:20:960 (6,1) - Avoid these touching.Fixed
- 01:22:597 (3,1) - Avoid this overlap. I wouldn't recommend a stack since the next note is a new combo.Fixed
- 01:23:324 (1,3) - These aren't perfectly stacked.Fixed, just removed stack.
- 01:27:324 (3,3) - Avoid these touching.Fixed
- 01:32:051 (1,2) - Avoid these touching.Fixed
- 01:32:051 (1,3) - Stack these perfectly.Fixed
- 01:32:051 (1,3) - Avoid this overlap.Um, you just told me to stack them XD
- 02:18:597 (7) - New combo, since it is a new line in the vocals.Fixed
- 02:23:688 + - When this sort of rhythm came up before, you had a new combo every 4 sliders. Now it's at 8. Is this intentional? I would rather keep it consistent.Fixed
- 02:26:960 (1,2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing.Fixed
- 02:28:415 (5,3,4) - Avoid these overlaps.Fixed
- 02:41:506 (4,1) - Avoid this overlap.Fixed
- 02:46:233 (1,2) - Avoid these touching.Fixed
- 02:51:142 (4) - This touches the health bar on my end.Fixed
- 02:56:051 (4,6) - Stack these perfectly.Fixed
- 03:06:960 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing.Fixed
- 03:22:597 (2) - This touches the health bar on my end.Fixed
- 03:23:142 (3,5) - Avoid these touching.Fixed
- 03:57:506 (2,3) - Avoid these touching.Fixed
- 04:00:960 (9,2) - Avoid this overlap.Fixed
- 04:02:597 (3,5,1) - Avoid this overlap.I instead started the triangle on the end of the slider
- 04:16:779 (1,1,1) - This triangle looks handmade. You can use CPC to make this a better one.Fixed. I think.
- 04:18:960 (3) - This drop in slider velocity comes quite suddenly with little indication of it coming. I would not recommend doing this, since it is difficult to read SV changes and I expect many people to break on this.Fixed

I apologise that the mod felt a bit more automated towards the end, but I wanted to point all of those out since they were in my opinion the more major issues with your map. Good luck

Xelasto wrote:

Romanized Artist: yanaginagi Couldn't. It makes a duplicate map
Try changing it in the .osu txt file instead, and make sure that the beatmap set number is the same. Make sure you have a backup first though. I think what you could also do is change it for half of the difficulties in the set, then update it from a difficulty that is unchanged, and then repeat by changing the unchanged one (this method is kind of hard to explain and is a quite hacky way to fix this). If done right, it'll update instead of create a new beatmap.

- 01:12:710 (5) - What is this thing doing snapped onto a grey (1/16) tick? If you're getting notes snapped to odd ticks like this, then you should have a look at your timings rather than compensating with note placement.The last modder said that it sounds slightly more on beat (go to 25% speed). Even if I did change it to go back on the red tick it would be an unnoticeable difference, but I know what you mean (unless its unrankable ofc)
I think something like this would be unrankable, especially on Easy difficulty, since 1/16 timing is very unusual, and the editor even says in red "1/16 is not recommended for anyone ever". Even if it sounds better, try and stick to the white-red polarity. Use your imagination with sliders to see how you could cover this note.

-Mo- wrote:

Xelasto wrote:

Romanized Artist: yanaginagi Couldn't. It makes a duplicate map
Try changing it in the .osu txt file instead, and make sure that the beatmap set number is the same. Make sure you have a backup first though. I think what you could also do is change it for half of the difficulties in the set, then update it from a difficulty that is unchanged, and then repeat by changing the unchanged one (this method is kind of hard to explain and is a quite hacky way to fix this). If done right, it'll update instead of create a new beatmap.Fixed. Thanks!

- 01:12:710 (5) - What is this thing doing snapped onto a grey (1/16) tick? If you're getting notes snapped to odd ticks like this, then you should have a look at your timings rather than compensating with note placement.The last modder said that it sounds slightly more on beat (go to 25% speed). Even if I did change it to go back on the red tick it would be an unnoticeable difference, but I know what you mean (unless its unrankable ofc)
I think something like this would be unrankable, especially on Easy difficulty, since 1/16 timing is very unusual, and the editor even says in red "1/16 is not recommended for anyone ever". Even if it sounds better, try and stick to the white-red polarity. Use your imagination with sliders to see how you could cover this note.I see what you mean. Fixed.

No kudosu for this post. Thanks

DarkVortex wrote:

Heyho M4M from my queue o/

My first impression about this: Quite a few traps in all diffs which make some parts really weird to play mostly due to spacing issues. Also the rhythm could be improved at some points.

Timing point should be snapped on 01:37:142 - imo.

[Easy]

AR3 or 3,5 to make stuff like 00:19:324 (1,2,1) - clearer?
This is something BATs never want to see in both Easies and Normals
Also drastic SV changes can cause big reading issues so they are mostly unwanted in lower diffs. (Compare 00:10:233 (2,3,4) - to 01:15:688 (2,3,4,5) - and 03:07:688 (2,3,4) - for example)
Watch your spacing throughout the whole diff. Lower diffs are to learn how rhythm and spacing are connected and thus you must not switch between different spacings.

00:10:233 (2,3,4) - 2 and 3 are separated while 3 overlaps 4 slightly. They should all be separated from each other as they have the same distance in the music.
00:22:233 (2) - How about this to follow the vocals a little better?

SPOILER

00:23:870 (1) - I'd let the spinner end at 00:27:688 - as the beat there is stronger than the following one. You could make the upcoming break start at 00:28:051 - to (kinda) match that beat.
00:49:142 - Why did you leave this empty? Last break was 10 secs earlier so no need for another cursor repositioning.
00:52:779 (3,4,5) - Ugly overlaps
00:59:688 (1,2,3) - Really hard to read due to overlapping + offbeat rhythm.
01:04:051 (2,3) - While this is a good pattern you have 1,3x spacing here which is not allowed.
01:05:506 (4,5) - ^
01:49:142 - Add beat
01:49:506 (1) - Spacing issue with 3 before and 2 after
01:53:506 (4) - Spacing issue with 1
01:55:870 (3,4,1) - Feels like a trap because you have to travel across the whole slider to reach the beginning + 4-->1 is 1/2 longer than 3-->4 + Spacing
01:59:960 (1) - This spinner is too short imo. Replace with a pattern (Maybe this?)

SPOILER

02:12:779 (2,1) - Spacing
02:19:688 (2,1) - ^
02:30:233 (3,4) - This plays weird. Consider something like this:

SPOILER

02:34:597 - Weird gap with strong beats not being mapped. This would do for example

SPOILER

02:35:688 (1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2,3) - Spacing?
02:49:870 (1) - ^
02:55:324 (1,2,3) - Huge trap, makes every beginner sliderbreak because of the spacing mismatch.
03:06:960 (1,2) - Spacing
03:09:779 (1) - Like what i suggested for 01:59:960 (1) -
This goes on and on... Sadly I'd say remapping would be a good idea here because the spacing issues + SV changements need to be fixed which might break the whole difficulty.
It's been re-mapped. Check it out ^.^
[Normal]

AR5 for a better spread with AR7 in Hard diff?Fixed
As in Easies, spacing must be consistent throughout the map. Your SV changes might be kept (not sure though) but spacing is something you should always have both eyes on while mapping lower diffs.Fixed
00:23:960 (1) - I'd let the spinner end at 00:27:688 - as the beat there is stronger than the following one. You could make the upcoming break start at 00:28:051 - to (kinda) match that beat. (Like I said in Easy)Fixed, but can't adjust break.
00:56:779 - Add beatFixed
01:10:233 (3,1,2,3) - SpacingFixed
01:11:688 (1,2,3) - You have to travel across slider 3 which makes the distance between 1 and 2 hard to tell.Fixed
01:14:597 (1,2,3) - SpacingFixed
01:18:960 - Why did you switch from 0,9x spacing to ~1,1x starting here?Fixed
01:27:324 (1) - Now it's 0,8x again.Fixed
01:40:779 (1) - 0,6x o.oFixed
01:43:688 (1) - And 0,7xFixed
^^^^These parts indicate that going through the diff and fix all spacing issues is a must.Done
02:44:779 (2) - Repeat is on blue tick which sounds awkward even if the end is spot on the beat.Fixed
Can't really say much more. Fix spacing (or even remap with that advice) and you're good to go though.


[Hard]

Again watch your spacing.
00:06:415 (2,3) - This starts on the piano but follows the vocals. Make it follow one of them but not both at the same time as it sounds and plays weird.Fixed
00:08:960 (4,1,2) - Weird to read. 1 looks like it was included in the pattern while it isn't.Fixed
00:13:506 (2,3,4) - A pattern like this fits it more imo.

SPOILER

Fixed
00:42:415 - Add beat Fixed
00:42:779 (1,2,3) - Where's the 1/4 in the music? I can only hear 1/1 here.Fixed
00:50:779 (1,2,3) - This should actually be here 00:50:415 - . You'd need to shorten the spinner before as well.Fixed
00:52:051 (5) - It's just the hi-hat playing here plus a ghost note on 00:52:233 - . No need for 1/4.Fixed
00:54:597 - Add beatFixed
01:00:324 (3) - RemoveFixed
01:01:688 (6) - I don't really get why you put 1/4 repeat sliders on really minor beats while leaving out clear and strong ones like 01:02:870 - Fixed
01:04:233 - Add beatFixed
01:06:233 - ^Fixed
01:10:051 - ^Fixed
01:13:870 (3,4) - The 1/4 are here 01:14:051 - 01:14:142 - 01:14:233 - instead.Fixed
01:18:960 (1,2,3,4) - This drum pattern is way more interesting than just plain repeat sliders. The beats are basically set like this:

SPOILER

Fixed
01:22:506 - Add beatFixed
01:36:688 (6) - ^Fixed
01:37:142 (1) - How about splitting it into 2 repeat sliders to match the vocals as well?Fixed
01:39:142 (5,6,1,2) - Too much for an actually calmer part of the song. The music doesn't really support it as well.Fixed
01:45:870 (5,6,7) - Spacing trap. Either squeeze them more together or spread them out with normal spacing.Fixed
01:50:960 (4,5,6,7) - Honestly you should overthink your use of these repeat sliders... They don't really make sense.Fixed
01:53:688 - Add beatFixed
Actually this continues until the end, so my advice is the following: Check your spacing as it is really random most of the time. Also check the 1/4 repeat sliders and if you are really really really sure you want to use most of them, make sure they follow a reasonable pattern.

Whew, that's all. Good luck with further mapping and i hope to see improvements in near future

tutuhaha wrote:

[Hard]
00:08:233 (2,3,4) - space should be more close because actually this space just look like 00:04:051 (1,2,3) - Fixed
00:12:415 (x) - Did you mean to put something here?
00:12:597 (x) - those two has very strong piano, so maybe you should add circleNah. This space is empty because I'm following the vocals, not both, and to give the player a quick second to reposition.
00:13:506 (2,3,4) - weird rhythm maybe just use 00:16:415 (3,4) - some rhythm like this to instead itFixed
00:19:324 (3,4,5) - or，change the place between 4 and 5 This was meant to be a quick jump from 3, to 4, to 5
00:19:324 (3,4,5,6) - space is confusing, use more close space on 00:19:324 (3,4,5) - or use more large space on 00:20:051 (5,6) - Fixed
00:39:688 (1,2) - use the same shapeI made it more accurate, but it was always the same shape, just upside down.
00:43:688 (4,5) - I suggest to use this rhythm
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2341176
and then just add note at 00:45:506 (x) - I didn't use your rhythm exactly, but I did change it.
00:50:597 (x) - you shouldn't miss this rhythm /-\Fixed
00:53:142 (2,3) - use same space like 00:52:051 (5,1) - I changed 5 to a slider and made it earlier, so I didn't have to change it.
00:54:597 (x) - the music has stress on hereFixed
00:54:779 (6,7,1) - use same spaceFixed
00:58:779 (5,6,1) - use same space like 00:58:233 (4,5) -I changed the spacing, but IDK if I did it the way you wanted it.
00:59:688 (1,2) - 01:00:415 (4,5) - same spaceFixed
01:02:233 (7,8,9) - confusing spaceFixed
01:03:324 (1) - better review the stress on this part, is complete doesn't work I don't understand what you mean, it sounds fine.
01:04:415 (2,3,4) - same spaceFixed
01:08:960 (2) - move it to x330 y109 (turn off grid snap)Fixed
hmmmmmmmmmmmm............you doesn't make your map with distance snap right? try to use the same space on same rhythm, this is what I want to say for this diff now, need more work, that‘s it /-\......
also you may need add more finish on this diff
music complete show that where you should add finish
like
00:39:688 (1) -
00:40:415 (3) - at the end
00:42:960 (3) - at the end
00:44:051 (5) - ^
00:57:142 (2) -
01:15:688 (4) - at the end
01:17:870 (2) -
01:19:688 (3) - at the end
etc

[Normal]
like what I say in hard, more finish
00:41:870 (4) - move down litter bit and dont get touch with 00:39:688 (1) - Fixed
01:06:506 (1,1) - unrank, spinner is too short in normal diffFixed
01:09:324 (2,3,1) - spaceFixed
01:14:597 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - spaceFixed
actually, the same problem like hard, and it will be more seriously, use the same space between same rhythm, or it just make new player been confusing when they are playing Agreed
also dont use sv change on normal too /-\
02:18:233 (1) - better delete this note, or bat will said there has no enough place to let new player reaction I made the spinner shorter
I understand you try to make this diff looks more nice, but please dont use SV change and different space in normal and easy diff _(:зゝ∠)_

[Easy]
dont use different space
dont use sv change
please
I re-mapped Easy
_(:зゝ∠)_

Yuthuil wrote:

Easy:

00:10:597 (2) - I don't think you should make this veer up so much for no reason, try making it more subtle Fixed
00:54:233 (4) - fix wave shape Fixed
01:12:960 (2) - I think you should map the section around this object, the stop is random. Fixed
01:32:779 try not to skip out important beats, remember that white ticks are so much more important than red ones in most songs.I'm following the vocals, not the beat.
01:53:870 (2,3) - distance snap these two. Fixed
01:57:506 (2) - ctrl + j, then move it back to it's original position. Fixed
02:15:688 (5) - shorten to the last white tick and then move the spinner to where it's tail was. Fixed, but IDK what was wrong with it. It followed the vocals.
02:56:415 (2,3) - the turn in them is completely unpredicted, make the sudden veer to the side more noticeable. Fixed
03:52:051 (1,2,3,4) - circles don't really fit with the music. Fixed

Overall: I am sorry to say, but easy needs a whole remap, in fact, I think you need to choose an easier song to map.

Normal:

Ar 4 Fixed

Why is the distance snap so much lower than easy? I think you have to turn it up. I used a higher distance snap than 0x8, I just used 0x8 cause I went back to the beginning and re-adjusted

Hard:

why is the SV so low, normal for hards is about 1.40 to 1.60. I'm remapping hard.

I am sorry, I cannot mod this for any longer, however, If you remap this, or map another map in the future, you can call me back to look at it, you have one ticket. You may want to look at these : Making Common Sliders Neat : http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/208596
Analyzing Flow In Beatmaps : http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/86329&start=0
Making delicious sliders : http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194

For your first, I suggest you pick a low BPM easy song to map. You can ask me for more information ingame if you feel like it.

Wasabi wrote:

Sorry for the late mod, but here it is!

[General]
The timing feels off. 1,840 would be a much better offset. Thanks SO MUCH! That helped A TON!

[Easy]

00:42:822(1) - The spacing here is 0.94 which is inconsistent with previous notes, snap it to 1.00x. Fixed
01:04:415(5) - Make (5) blanket (4) better. I would suggest to copy and paste (4) and replace (5) with the copy. Fixed

SPOILER

01:11:688(1) - I'd suggest moving this down by one grid space and adjusting the end point of the slider to blanket the previous note better. Fixed

SPOILER

01:26:233(1) - Maybe make this slider a bit cleaner? Something along the lines of this would look and flow better; Fixed

SPOILER

01:30:233(3) - Remove crash? It doesn't sound needed at this part. Fixed
01:35:688(1)(2) - Use 1.00x spacing for these. Such a drastic change in spacing on Easy shouldn't be used. Suggestion; Um distance snap Put 2 farther away from the first 1 than the second 1 right after 2 because 2 is farther away from the first 1 than the second 1 on the timeline. That's a mouthful.

SPOILER

01:43:688(2) - Move the endpoint of this slider up one grid so it blankets (3) a little better. Fixed
01:50:051(3) - Maybe make this curve a bit better? Example; Fixed

SPOILER

01:52:415(1) - Remove the crash on the repeat, it sounds off since the crash in the song doesn't occur until 01:53:142. Fixed
01:58:779(1) - Same as mentioned before, there is no crash at this part in the song so it sounds weird. Fixed
02:25:870(4) - Remove the crash and the clap. Fixed
02:28:415(2) - Remove crash. Fixed
02:41:142(2) - ^ Fixed
02:51:142(1) - ^ Fixed
03:02:779(1) - ^ Fixed
03:24:051(3) - The points on this slider seem a bit unnecessary. Possibly make it like this; Fixed

SPOILER

03:24:779(4) - Make this blanket 3. Fixed

SPOILER

03:26:051(1) - Remove clap and finish. Fixed
03:43:506(3) - Remove Crash. Fixed
04:03:324(1) - Make this blanket (2) better. Fixed

SPOILER

04:18:415(4) - Remove crash. Fixed

[Normal]

A lot of the hitsounding problems I had with Easy carried over into this difficulty. So I would suggest fixing the hitsounding for this as well.
00:53:324(4) - Remove clap. Fixed
01:21:870 - I understand you're trying to follow the lyrics here, but adding a note here would improve readability. Ending on a red tick, and then starting at 01:22:233 on a white tick isn't recommended for easier difficulties. Fixed, but IDK if I did it how you wanted me to 0-0
01:45:142(2) - Move this down two grid spaces to match the placement of 01:43:324(5). Fixed
02:45:870 - Add a note here. Fixed
02:57:506(1) - As far as I know, this slider is unrankable as it goes completely off-screen. Move this slider up. Fixed
03:56:779(4) - Remove NC Fixed
03:57:142(1) - ^ Fixed

This is a nice difficulty but it has quite a few spacing inconsistencies and I would suggest going through and distance snap notes throughout the song. I already have

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Since you're remapping hard I won't be modding it. You can contact me if you wish for a mod of your Hard once it's complete.
There needs to be a bit of fine tuning here and there with Easy and Normal but overall they're nice. Good song choice btw

1. As you may know from what you saw on my map I'm not the best normal modder, don't expect a big lot from my mod ; ;

1. 00:40:385 - you could end slider here and put a note at 00:40:749
2. 00:58:203 (2) - position this better !!
3. 01:30:567 (5) - NC
4. 02:33:112 (5) - ^
5. 02:41:476 - add note !!
6. 02:41:840 (1,1,1) - why the NC's? x.x
7. 02:45:840 (4,5) - position them in the same vector as the last slider end, like:
   SPOILER

   
8. 03:29:112 (1) - slider mid point should be on 03:29:840 , you have to change SV from 03:29:840 to 03:30:385 , if you really want to keep it a slider !!
9. 03:54:567 (2) - blanket with 03:55:658 (3)
10. 03:57:476 (1) - add hitsound here (finish), I don't usually mod hitsounds though, I prob missed some xd
11. 03:57:506 - why the timing section here? should be on a 1/4 tick
12. 03:10:961 - ^
13. Basically you have the above problem in some timing sections, I could keep copy pasting them to pretend my mod is big or just tell you here :b

1. 00:14:567 (3) - make this note's distance from the slider like the one at 00:17:476 (3)
2. 00:27:112 (1) - the slider doesn't really "express" the music, imo 2 singles would be better here
3. 00:50:567 (3) - divide slider into 2 and make the second part reverse? (probably would have to change positioning too after)
4. 01:16:930 (3) - too curved
5. 01:17:476 (4) - NC
6. 01:17:476 (4) - ugly overlap
7. 02:50:567 (3) - move to x:270
8. 04:15:294 (1) - this slider's shape feels off with the rest of the combo/song
9. I thought AiMod would warn about the end not beeing mapped but I guess it's fine ^^

Milhofo wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

!! - Very Important
!! - Important

[General]

1. As you may know from what you saw on my map I'm not the best normal modder, don't expect a big lot from my mod ; ;

It's Fine

[Normal]

1. 00:40:385 - you could end slider here and put a note at 00:40:749 Fixed
2. 00:58:203 (2) - position this better !! IDK how to do it better. Picture please?
3. 01:30:567 (5) - NC Fixed
4. 02:33:112 (5) - ^ Fixed
5. 02:41:476 - add note !!
6. 02:41:840 (1,1,1) - why the NC's? x.x For some health regen for the new players after about half the song.
7. 02:45:840 (4,5) - position them in the same vector as the last slider end, like:
   SPOILER

   
   Fixed, but IDK if I did it right XD
8. 03:29:112 (1) - slider mid point should be on 03:29:840 , you have to change SV from 03:29:840 to 03:30:385 , if you really want to keep it a slider !! Fixed, I just removed repeat and added a note
9. 03:54:567 (2) - blanket with 03:55:658 (3) Not possible without completely destroying the spacing.
10. 03:57:476 (1) - add hitsound here (finish), I don't usually mod hitsounds though, I prob missed some xd Uh, it was always there.
11. 03:57:506 - why the timing section here? should be on a 1/4 tick I put it on the downbeat.
12. 03:10:961 - ^ Same thing.
13. Basically you have the above problem in some timing sections, I could keep copy pasting them to pretend my mod is big or just tell you here :b

[Hard]

1. 00:14:567 (3) - make this note's distance from the slider like the one at 00:17:476 (3) Fixed
2. 00:27:112 (1) - the slider doesn't really "express" the music, imo 2 singles would be better here Fixed
3. 00:50:567 (3) - divide slider into 2 and make the second part reverse? (probably would have to change positioning too after) I have no idea what you mean.
4. 01:16:930 (3) - too curved Fixed
5. 01:17:476 (4) - NC Fixed
6. 01:17:476 (4) - ugly overlap There is no overlap 0-0
7. 02:50:567 (3) - move to x:270 Fixed
8. 04:15:294 (1) - this slider's shape feels off with the rest of the combo/song Fixed
9. I thought AiMod would warn about the end not beeing mapped but I guess it's fine ^^

All seems pretty good since you use distance snap unlike me gl on this map!

Thanks for the mod! Have a nice day!

ReallyFastCat wrote:

Hi! From my modding queue

[General]
- Set AudioLeadIn to 1000 in every .osu file Fixed
- Set slider tick rate to 2 maybe? Seems better to me Fixed
- Both the combo colours and the kiai times are inconsistent between the diffs Well, I don't think the combos should be consistent between modes because in normal and hard they should be longer.
- All of your inherited timing points are unsnapped. Snapping may not be important at some of them, but at least the ones enabling/disabling kiai should be Fixed

[Easy]
Couldn't find anything~ 0-o Wow, interesting.

[Normal]
- All the notes in the beginning (from 00:01:112 - 00:28:021) only slightly touch each other, which doesn't look good. Increase the spacing there Fixed
00:01:142 (1) - Not snapped Fixed
01:11:658 (1,3) - Bad overlap Fixed
02:33:112 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
02:34:385 (2,2) - ^ Fixed
02:41:840 (1,1,1) - I know this has been pointed out before, but don't spam NC here. The HP drain really isn't high, and even if you miss every second note you won't get problems with it. Fixed
02:56:385 (4) - Stack this with 02:54:930 (2) Fixed

[Hard]
00:01:142 (1) - Not snapped Fixed
00:04:021 (2,3) - Doesn't look good. Blanket them both http://puu.sh/dChN1/b2bb79f20d.jpg Fixed
00:42:567 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
00:57:658 (4,5) - Bad overlapI tried to fix it, but no other way had a better flow and looked good, but I think I made it a bit better.
01:36:567 (2,5) - ^ Fixed
01:11:658 (3,4) - Blanket isn't that good here, look closely at both slidertracks I think I made it better. MAYBE.
02:29:112 (2) - Ctrl+G maybe? Flows better Fixed


Good luck with the map! ^o^

Thanks!

Yuthuil wrote:

Okay rechecking !

Hard:

Slider tick rate three? There are a lot of skipped beats in this map and two doesn't make up for them since you have some 2/1 sliders.Um, no thanks. I listened to 3 tick rate and it seems much too fast, especially in the beginning.
00:01:112 Imo you should turn down the hitsounds in this section since it gives this part an overmapped feel since the instruments are so soft Fixed from 40% to 30%
00:01:840 (3,4) - Clone four of three Fixed
00:02:930 (5) - Delete this, there is no sound here at all Fixed, including everything after
00:03:476 (6) - I think you should replace this with two stacked circles Fixed
00:04:021 (1,2) - The flow would be better here if you selected these two and pressed ctrl + g Fixed
00:07:658 (4) - Make completely straight or more curved, since I think this clashes weirdly with the object after it Fixed straight.
00:14:567 (3) - This is bad note placement, either move to x76 y172 or x8 y164 Fixed
00:16:385 (1,2) - These sliders aren't really popular with most osu players now adays, so try a more gentle approach to red node sliders Fixed, curved.
00:19:840 (4) - Ctrl + h, it overlaps with the slider before Fixed
00:20:749 (1,2) - Try rotate 90 degrees clockwise then move back so that one blankets the curvy slider since the overlap is ugly Fixed
00:46:021 (2) - This should be a 1/2 slider, the missed beat sounds awful Fixed
00:51:294 (1,2,3) - Try and make these all curved the same amount - two and three are identical yet one is not Fixed
00:53:294 (2) - ctrl +g creates better flow Fixed
01:03:658 (3) - Delete this, you shouldn't map tiny tiny sounds Um if you could show me how to map this with a picture, that would be great.
01:04:203 Missing a beat? Note: you can't only map vocals, only when necessary Fixed
01:21:840 (1,2,3,4) - Feels a bit cramped, try and space them out so that their tails form a square, subtle patterns like that are nice Fixed
01:40:930 (4) - Flow is better if you move the middle node to x232 y284 and the tail node to x264 y316 IDK what you mean. Picture please
01:47:658 (7,8,1,2) - After you made a jump with 7 and 8, 1 and 2 become confusing, consider moving the sliders before closer Fixed
01:58:203 (1,3) - Clone three of one Fixed
02:13:294 (5,1) - These two should be removed Why?
02:55:294 (1,2,3) - Flow here is weird, how about making two into a straight slider Fixed
02:57:658 (5) - bad note placement Fixed
03:32:385 (2,3) - Make these the same, three is more curved than two Fixed
04:07:294 (6,7) - Blanket properly Fixed

Overall:

The map is still ever so slightly messy and could use a bit more work, but you have improved greatly, and I really like some of the patterns you have here, I don't think you have to remap, since it's at a stage where mods can help it now. I wish you good luck with the map

Thanks! I updated it so if you could take a look and reply that would be great.

-Yuzuriha-inori- wrote:

General

Check plz
http://gyazo.com/c98ae305f2b28154b0bde09d1ef72f94 Fixed, Thanks!

slider tick rate 2→1 req Sorry, but 1 tick rate misses too many beats, and there are no rules against what I'm doing (I'm assuming req means required)

Audio Lead IN is 1500 req
http://gyazo.com/c4fed2e72db90aa227975e371229e2ba Fixed

Souse plz!!
http://gyazo.com/d32ac92bdc4d1135657d23e01a1ff998 This song doesn't come from a game.


Hard

00:06:567 req
http://gyazo.com/3354e9ef7752ef2dad98f130eb1bf29a Instead of a repeat slider, I did a triangle formation

00:43:294 req
http://gyazo.com/d2a7f72eec7fa41bd89f71987f3c9db1 Sorry, but I think a repeat slider and note fits this better, and even then it doesn't really improve my map.



Normal

Fine!!


Easy

Fine!!

---------------------------

good song!!

goos luck

Thanks for the suggestions!

neonat wrote:

General

Your uninherited timing point for Hard is different from Easy and Normal. Fixed
Normal and Easy are 1840 offset for their timing point, while it is 1112 on Hard, please make them all the same Fixed

Easy

00:39:658 (1) - finish on start of slider Fixed
00:42:567 (1) - finish on end of slider Fixed
00:46:203 (3) - finish Fixed
00:49:112 (1) - finish on start of slider Fixed
01:19:658 (6,1) - spacing error Fixed
01:22:567 (3) - this shape doesn't look good, it hides parts of the slider body, especially because of the bend in the slider which is very close to the end of the slider Fixed
01:24:749 (2) - finish on middle part of slider Fixed
02:16:567 (1) - for a spinner in Easy, this is pretty short, it doesn't really fit well in the section either, I suggest you change this to a different rhythm Fixed... I think
02:22:749 (4) - I recommend that you don't use such off-beat rhythms in Easy, it's too complicated for its own good Fixed, but IDK if its much better
02:25:840 (4,1) - spacing error Fixed
02:34:203 (2) - remove finish on the end of the slider Fixed
02:36:021 (4) - finish on start of slider Fixed
03:28:385 (2) - finish on end of slider Fixed
04:01:840 (2,3) - this pattern looks quite poor Fixed
04:03:294 (1) - remove finish on the middle part of the slider, place it at the start Fixed

The use of New Combos is really bad here, and many a times, you have a slider that ends where a new section starts, which is not good, you should have something start on those beats instead, most of these parts are also usually the start of new combos. Here are some of those parts which should be the start of new phrases and sections:

SPOILER

00:04:749
00:07:658
00:10:567
00:13:476
00:16:385
00:19:294
00:22:203
00:45:476
00:48:385
00:51:294
00:54:203
00:57:112
01:00:021
01:02:930
01:05:840
01:08:749
01:17:476
01:29:112
01:37:840
01:40:749
01:43:658
01:46:567
01:49:476
01:55:294

I've attempted to make a better combo thing, however I didn't change the beginning because I treat the first sentence part "Mizugiwa Ni" as one combo, then the next is "Ao jiroku"

Rhythm is too start-stop in Easy to be honest, have it more connecting, and following a wider general tune of the song

Normal

00:16:385 (3) - doesn't really look nice touching the health bar, the body at the top is blocked Fixed
00:45:476 (3) - this should be a NC Fixed
00:48:476 (1) - I rather you end the spinner at 00:51:294 instead, the slider is just too awkward in this rhythm, too isolated Fixed
02:21:476 (3,4,5,6) - overall, this doesn't look like a good pattern, with it's positioning Fixed
02:24:385 (1) - finish at start of slider, remove it from the end of the slider. Seeing how the difficulty has been, the finishes used have been very random to say the least, they don't even play at the same exact time as the cymbals in the song, and are just carelessly maybe 1/2 beat before or after one, which sounds very poor Fixed, attempted to make better hitsounds. Still bad ;-;
02:59:294 (2) - from here onwards NC beats on this tune, like 03:02:203 (3) - 03:05:112 (3) - 03:08:021 (5) - to follow the starting of the chorus, don't suddenly change your pattern all of a sudden without much reason, this follows the sectioning better as well

The flow is quite angular, and is not very fluid, the movement feels like it is just trying to follow a line, but the way this line moves after connecting each object with each other is not regarded with further thought.
The hitsounds, especially the finishes, can be much better, and can work better with the song. They are currently not in sync and don't sound really well.
Work on consistency in combo patterns and make sure the rhythm flows and isn't start-stop, especially when it follows super strictly to vocals, which isn't really good. Why thank you see!


Much work to be done for all difficulties, but I hope it improves and is more coherent. Hai, Senpai

Good Luck

Static Noise Bird wrote:

From my queue. Whoops.

[Easy]
Circle Size should be 3. 2 is not pretty much ever used anymore. Smaller circles also make more room so that subsequent circles in the beginning's slow part won't touch each other. Example here since my words are probably super unclear once again. Fixed, but now the star rate went even higher ;-;
00:48:021 - Add a circle. Fixed
01:19:658 (6,1) - Fix the distance snap. (Should be 1,0x, not 1,16x) Fixed
01:48:203 (3) - Move to x432 y192 for a neat blanket. Don't forget to fix the next distance snap after this. Fixed
02:00:385 (1) - Could be three circles instead. You're using sliders quite a bit too much IMO. Fixed
02:12:385 (1,2) - Curving these would look better. Fixed

Kinda like this.

02:30:203 (2,3) - Don't map this on vocals only. Really boring, and ignores completely important drum hits. Fixed
03:24:749 (4) - Move the middle point one square to the left for better blanket. Fixed
03:31:294 (1) - Shape could be improved (just try something, I'm too lazy to try it myself because it will be hard to copy sliderpoints from a screenshot anyway). Fixed luckily, now looks more like a heart and less like a squashed... thing.
03:37:658 (3) - Would flow better as reversed. Fixed
03:44:567 (1) - x308 y180 for better flow and a proper blanket. Fixed
03:57:476 (1) - Shape should be improved. Fixed

Here.

04:18:930 (1) - x432 y196 for better flow and a proper blanket. Fixed

[Normal]
Really stupid speed up sections, completely unsuitable for Normal. You might have to remap most of the map later. I CRI EVERETIM ;-;
00:10:567 (3) - x128 y256 for a proper blanket. Fixed
00:13:476 (2) - A wave slider doesn't really work here, just use a blanketing curve slider. Fixed

You know, like this.

00:16:385 (3) - Should not touch the HP bar at the top. Move it down. Fixed
01:21:476 (2,3) - This kind of rhythm would work better here:

Rhythm.

Fixed
01:32:021 (1,2) - Not quite following the distance snap here. Fixed
01:34:567 (3,4) - ^ Fixed
01:56:749 (2,3) - 90-degree sliders really give a bad design and never really play well. The placement also completely ruins the flow. Remake this part. Fixed
02:24:021 - Add a hitobject. Fixed

[Hard]
00:54:749 (1) - Unnecessary spinner. Could and should be mapped properly, to the beat, maybe with a 2-beat-slider in the beginning, but nothing longer than that. It gets boring and unsuitable for the hardest diff. Fixed
01:06:385 (1) - ^ Fixed
02:16:203 (1) - ^ Fixed
I can't really write much else, just follow what neonat said about flow. Design is mainly ok, but there's barely any flow. Doesn't make it fun to play.

I Thanks you alot

-Tochi wrote:

From my modding queue.

• 
  General

1. I suggest to change the "Hard" difficulty name to something that describes the song. IDK what to name it >.< IK that's its actually a VERY depressing song.
2. Check AiMod.For the most part, you are allowed to break AImods stuff in hard mode, for jumps and difficulty
3. Kiai isn't snapped here: 01:37:840 - 02:47:658 - 03:57:476 - 04:20:779 - Fixed

• 
  Hard

1. 00:03:112 - Add a circle here that stacks 00:02:930 (5) - It sounds better imo. Also it follows this pattern 00:03:475 (7,8) - Fixed
2. 00:41:476 (5) - Curve a little more to the left? Fixed, I think 0-0
3. 00:58:385 (5,6) - Avoid this overlap.I've told people this. I don't know how to fix it without it looking AMAZINGLY akward, please show me a picture.
4. 03:57:475 - Why is this kiai so calm? Since it's the last kiai time, you could fill it a bit more up. I thought for a second that there wasn't any kiai time, untill i looked on the timeline below.

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  Feedback
  
  Nice calm song, imo i think you should either make an Insane, or find someone who can make an Insane GD. It would be best for you to have 4 difficulties :3
  Good luck with it~ Thanks!

1. This map needs more improvement, also on the looks.

1. Only modding the hard because it's so long and I'm so tired
2. You are using a lot of offbeat sliders, and strong beats ignored by using slider ends. Some ticks feel like they need to be tappable to be better in line with the music as well. For example: when the voice starts with a new word, use a circle or a slider start, but not a slider end or return, because they wont emphasize that change in the music. Also slider ends on downbeats are used pretty common by new mappers, but I think they should be avoided as much as possible.
3. What's with the hitsounds in the kiai? They kind of ruin the music's actual rhythm. I highly suggest looking at that.

As I said, improvement is certainly needed, but definitely not a bad start

Neil Leo wrote:

Wild modding, not m4m

[General]
Use slider tick rate of 1 Sorry. At least 2 tick rate catches all the beats. 1 Misses too many

[Easy]
You should avoid SV changes on Easy. Beginners can't read that. The SV change is so small it's barely noticable. Plus there is a discernable change in the song's tempo LONG before the change happens.

[Normal]
Same as SV changes in Easy. (Or reduce it 1.2 > 1.1, 1.4 > 1.2, 1.6 > 1.3) Changed most SV to 1.4
00:48:385 (4,1) - Avoid 1/4 space between a circle and a spinner. Beginners may take some time to recognize that there is already a spinner there. Fixed
01:59:840 (2,1) - Same as above Fixed
02:15:658 (4,1) - Same as above Fixed
04:19:476 (1,1) - Same also Fixed

[Hard]
00:10:567 (4) - Too high, the HP bar blocks it. Fixed

GL on map

Thank you!

A Mystery wrote:

Hello! From my queue

General

1. This map needs more improvement, also on the looks.

Hard

1. Only modding the hard because it's so long and I'm so tired
2. You are using a lot of offbeat sliders, and strong beats ignored by using slider ends. Some ticks feel like they need to be tappable to be better in line with the music as well. For example: when the voice starts with a new word, use a circle or a slider start, but not a slider end or return, because they wont emphasize that change in the music. Also slider ends on downbeats are used pretty common by new mappers, but I think they should be avoided as much as possible. Fixed
3. What's with the hitsounds in the kiai? They kind of ruin the music's actual rhythm. I highly suggest looking at that.

Really? I'll think about removing them.

00:10:567 (4) - This slider will be going halfway through the healthbar, I highly suggest that you move it down Fixed
00:17:476 (3,4,5) - I don't really see a reason for the spacing to be inconsistent here Fixed
00:18:930 (1) - I don't think you should make a slider end on the downbeat here, especially because the chord changes and the finish is there. Fixed
00:20:749 (8,9) - They are not the same sliders Fixed
00:27:840 (3) - Same about the slider end, this downbeat is very strong Fixed
00:45:658 (1,2) - I don't really see why you would use offbeat sliders here, I think using thishttp://puu.sh/e7o8b/f8f8122190.jpg would improve the rhythm overall here. (I made 00:44:749 (5) - 1/2 shorter) Fixed
00:57:112 (1,3) - Improve the stack a bit Fixed
01:14:749 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - All the sliders are offbeat, but why? Slider starts should be used on stronger ticks, like the beats, unless you are following the voice/something else than the background music, but you're not Fixed
01:26:385 (1,2,3) - Same Fixed
01:37:840 (1) - You are really forcing a 165 1/2 rhythm here with the snare sound, and I think you should not, because the music in the kiai (and every kiai) is not meant that way. Listen carefully to the snares in the music, and use them only on those ticks. The mapping itself is better here, because you are following the voice nicely Fixed. I think
02:15:294 (3) - You shouldn't overlap this, because it doesn't look good Fixed
02:36:203 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Same about the offbeat sliders, they really don't fit Fixed
03:45:840 (1) - The snares are not in the music, consider removing them Fixed. I think (Wait snares are finishes right?)
04:10:203 (3) - Stack is off Fixed
04:18:385 (2,3,4) - These as well Fixed

As I said, improvement is certainly needed, but definitely not a bad start

Thanks! It helped a lot

Z3R0Xx wrote:

Hi! M4M from your modding queue

Leh go!

[Easy]

01:14:567 (1) - Finish instead of clap on the slider head sounds better Fixed
01:18:930 (6,7,1) - Why not rotate them by 12 degrees so that it flows a tiny bit better Fixed
01:18:930 (6) - Clap should be on slider tail not head Um no. I'm putting a clap every downbeat
01:21:840 (2) - ^ No for the same reason.
01:27:658 (3) - Make it more curved so that it flows better to (4) http://puu.sh/e7Gil/0d416c99a7.jpg Fixed
01:43:658 (2,3,1) - Moving these notes over to the right more wouldn't hurt http://puu.sh/e7GCv/0ca9058075.jpg it would also flow to 01:46:567 (2) - a bit better Fixed
02:46:930 (1) - I would suggest getting rod of the clap on the slider tail and keeping only the finish Fixed
03:02:203 (1,4) - Little picky here but stack these a bit better Fixed
03:31:294 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
03:57:476 (1) - Keep finish no clap Fixed

[Normal]

Honestly I'm not sure whether this is supposed to be 0.8x Distance spacing or 0.9x Distance spacing

01:09:294 (2,3) - Maybe blanket these Fixed
01:24:749 (1,2) - Spacing issue Fixed
02:24:021 (7) - Not spaced correctly from the previous note Fixed
02:31:476 (3) - Why straight slider? I Got no other ideas XD
02:37:476 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue Fixed
03:57:476 (1) - No clap only finish Fixed
04:00:385 (1) - Finish instead of clap maybe? No thanks
04:03:294 (5) - Remove clap Fixed
04:10:567 (3,4) - Make them the same shape Fixed
04:12:021 (1) - Finish instead Fixed
04:12:567 (2) - Remove clap Fixed

[Hard]

00:14:021 (2,3) - Stack better Fixed
00:43:294 (3) - Finish instead of clap on the slider head Fixed
00:44:749 (5) - Finish on slider tail Fixed
00:46:021 (2) - Finish on repeat instead of clap Fixed
00:52:749 (1,2) - Fix blanket a little bit Fixed
00:57:112 (1,2) - ^ I can't blanket this any better ;-;
01:59:294 (3) - Vertically flip this slider, looks better imo Fixed
02:59:840 (2,3) - Fix blanket Fixed
03:53:476 (5,1,2) - Should try to make (1) blanket (5) and (2) stack on (5) as well Fixed
04:03:294 (1,3) - Stack a little better Fixed
04:09:112 (1,3) - ^ Fixed
04:15:294 (1,2) - Spacing error? Fixed

Overall this map needs more polishing and some hit-sound checking. Keep working at it though and good luck!

Thanks for the mod! It really helped.

monstrata wrote:

Hi~ M4M from your queue! yanaginagi is one of my favourite singers~ Here's my mod

[Hard]

You seem try and pass slider-ends as beats such as 00:45:476 - . This is a pattern throughout this difficulty which needs to be addressed because strong beats should be tapped not ended on to fit the music better. All were fixed

00:44:749 (5) - Shorten this slider and start a slider/circle on 00:45:476 - Fixed
00:47:658 (6) - Consider remapping this too, with the objective of having a circle at 00:48:385 - to capture the beat. Fixed
00:57:112 (1,3) - Fix stack. Fixed
01:12:203 (2) - Make this blanket neater. Fixed
01:15:840 (4) - Remap this part so you can start a note at 01:16:021 - Don't worry, I fixed ALL offbeat sliders I think
01:25:840 (3) - ^Same idea. Start the combo on the white tick don't have a slider-end on it. Fixed
01:37:112 (5) - Consider reducing by 1 repeat since it currently finishes leftward, and the next slider (01:37:840 (1) - ) begins on the right. This doesn't flow well imo . Fixed
01:40:021 (3) - Start combo on white tick. Fixed
02:30:203 (1,3) - Fix Stack. Fixed
02:37:476 - Start combo on white tick. Fixed
02:42:385 (2,4) - Not perfectly stacked. Fixed
02:59:294 - Combo on white tick. Fixed
03:22:567 - ^ Fixed
03:54:567 (1,3) - Not perfectly stacked. Fixed
04:09:112 (1,3) - ^ Fixed
04:18:385 (2,3) - ^ Fixed

[Normal]

01:09:294 (2,3) - Fix blanket. Fixed
01:24:567 (4) - Take this out. Not necessary on a Normal. Fixed
01:27:294 (1) - Begin combo (slider?) on 01:27:658 - since 01:27:294 - isn't as strong a note i feel a circle is better here followed by slider. Fixed
01:28:749 (3) - ^ Begin combo on 01:29:112 - Fixed
02:12:749 - ^White tick. No thanks
03:33:840 (4) - ^ Sorry

[Easy]

01:06:930 (2) - Take this out. Fixed
02:12:385 (1) - Start on white tick. Sorry
02:18:203 (1) - ^ Fixed
02:58:567 (1) - ^ Fixed

Thanks darn combos ;-;

LucyS wrote:

Yo
From my Queue

[Eazy]
00:10:567 (2,3) - This objects is a little far according to the distance spacing you use. Fixed
01:06:930 - This rhythm in a Eazy isn't good, consider delete this circle 01:06:930(1) Fixed
01:41:294 - This Finish should be here 01:41:476 - Cancel the finish or if you want to keep it add a note here 01:41:476 - I prefer if you just delete the finish. Fixed
01:48:749 (1) - Add a clap. Fixed
01:49:112 - Add finish instead of a clap Fixed
01:57:476 - Add Clap Fixed
02:56:385 (2) - Increase this slider to 02:57:112 - Now the finish is in the right place, or cancel the finish in the tail. Fixed
04:00:930 - Cancel finish Fixed


[Normal]
Like said before, you should keep your spacing consistent to not have problems after, you may use 0,8x in the parts more calm of the song like 00:01:112 - to 00:23:840 - and 03:34:203 - 03:57:476 but constantly toggle the spacing between 1,0x and 0,8x in the same parts isn't good in a Normal. Fixed

[Hard]
00:25:112 - End the spinner here with finish ? Nah, no sound in the song.
You missed some finishs (This goes for all the diffs), if you prefer to add them:
00:27:294 - 00:39:657 - 00:40:748 - 00:43:294 - 00:45:475 - 00:46:203- 01:19:839 - 01:23:657 - 01:25:294 - 01:29:475 - 01:31:475 - 01:36:203 - 01:36:930 - 01:49:112 - 02:34:566 - 02:35:112 - 03:23:657 - 03:29:112 - 03:52:748 - 04:10:203 Certain ones were fixed
00:50:566 - Try this rhythm http://puu.sh/e1DWL/01ebd64115.jpg Fixed

Good luck!

-Nya- wrote:

Hey! Sorry for the delay.
Well, here's my mod:

General:
http://puu.sh/ehgAx/4cd5c3cff2.wav
Add this sound file to your map. It’s to silent the sliderslide which can get quite irritating. Fixed

Easy:
00:49:112 (5) – Maybe bend this slider a bit more. Fixed

Picture

01:01:840 (3) – Perhaps this instead? Fixed

Picture

Copy and paste 01:00:930 (2) – then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G.01:05:840 (1,2) – Make these two sliders look the same. Fixed

Picture

Copy and paste 01:05:840 (1) – then Ctrl+H and then rotate the slider till it looks like the above pic.01:11:658 (1,3) – Improve this blanket, cuz right now it looks a bit ugly. Fixed

Picture

Something like the above pic will work great.01:18:930 (6) – Rather stack this slider on this circle: 01:17:112 (4) – Fixed01:41:294 (4) – Move this slider a bit to the left and curve 01:40:021 (3) – a bit more to make a nice blanket. Fixed02:21:112 (5,1) – Make a blanket here? Fixed

Picture

02:40:021 (6) – Try to improve this wave shape. Like this: Fixed

Picture

02:42:930 (2) – That slider’s placement looks a bit crammed. I suggest rather doing this: Fixed

Picture

02:49:112 (3) – Make this slider look the same as this slider: 02:49:840 (4) – Fixed

Picture

Copy and paste 02:49:840 (4) – then rotate it 90 degrees.03:06:567 (2,3) – Make sure these two sliders are the same. Use the copy and paste option. (If they already are, ignore this) Fixed03:09:840 (1) – Whoa, this spinner is pretty quick for an Easy diff. Just to be safe, I’d say you should rather map this section. (Or you can ask a BAT if the spinner is okay) Fixed03:54:567 (1) – Rather do this? Fixed

Picture

Looks better in my opinion.03:58:930 (3,4) – Make these two sliders look the same. Use the copy and paste option. Fixed04:02:567 (3) – Do this: Fixed

Picture

Copy and paste 04:01:840 (2) – and then Ctrl+H04:12:021 (1,2) – Blanket? Fixed

Picture

04:19:658 (1) – Also a pretty short slider for an Easy. Rather map the section. Fixed

Normal:
A few DS errors, according to AiMod. Better check them This is just AImod being annoying. I've distance snapped all them.00:07:658 (3,2) – Even though it’s just a slight overlap, I really suggest to avoid it. Do this:

Picture

I'm confused. They arent touching00:22:203 (4,5) – Make sure these two sliders are the same. Use the copy and paste option. If they are, then ignore this. Fixed01:14:567 (1,2,3) – Also make sure these three sliders are the same. Fixed01:24:749 (1) – Move this slider a bit downwards to make a nice triangle shape with 01:22:930 (2,3) –

Picture

Fixed01:26:203 (2,2) – Make these two parallel. I changed it up.

Picture

Just copy and paste 01:26:203 (2) – 01:30:203 (5,1,2,3,4,1) – A sort of circle shape will look better in my opinion. Like this:

Picture

Fixed01:32:021 (1,2) – Make sure these two sliders are the same. (If they are, then ignore) Fixed01:48:749 (1) – Remove new combo and then add new combo here: 01:49:476 (2) – Fixed01:55:294 (1,2) – Please improve this blanket. Fixed02:12:385 (1,1) – Make these two sliders have the same shape. What sliders? There is only one there 0-002:14:749 (2) – I don’t really like this. Rather straighten the slider. Fixed

Picture

02:22:749 (4,5) – Blanket. Fixed

Picture

02:27:294 (3,3) – Try to avoid this tiny overlap please. Once again, what are you talking about?02:36:567 (3) – Place this slider here: X:188 Y:268 I changed this up a bit.

Picture

02:37:476 (1,2) – Make sure these two sliders look the same and place 02:38:021 (2) - here: I changed this up a bit.

Picture

02:44:749 (1) – Move this slider a bit downwards to avoid the tiny overlap with 02:43:476 (4) – and try to improve the blanket with 02:44:385 (5) – Fixed

Picture

02:45:840 (2,3) – Rather change these two circles into a slider. Fixed 02:58:567 (6) – Rather place this slider here:Fixed

Picture

It will then make a nice blanket with 02:57:476 (5) – and you will avoid an overlap with 02:56:385 (4) – 02:59:840 (2) – I suggest placing it here:Fixed

Picture

03:31:658 (1,2) – Blanket here. Fixed

Picture

03:33:112 (3,4) - ^ Fixed

Picture

03:40:567 (3,4) – Since you didn’t stack anywhere else, rather unstack Fixed03:51:658 (1,2) – Make these two sliders look the same. Use the copy and paste option. Fixed04:04:749 (1) – Remove new combo and add new combo here: 04:05:112 (2) – Sorry.04:06:203 (4) – Maybe do this:Fixed

Picture

Try to move the red square till it’s more in the middle of the slider.04:08:385 (1) – Remove new combo and add new combo here: 04:09:112 (2) – Fixed04:13:840 (4,1) – Avoid an overlap like this. Rather make a blanket. There is no overlap there

Picture

04:19:658 (1) – Why did you add a new combo here? You didn’t do it in your Hard diff. I suggest to remove it. Fixed

Hard:
00:07:658 (4,5) – A blanket here will look nice. Fixed

Picture

00:14:930 (1) – Remove new combo for consistency Fixed00:22:203 (1,2) – Also make a nice blanket here. Fixed

Picture

00:27:112 (3,1) – Make a jump here. The music suggests it in my opinion. Fixed01:30:567 (1,2,3,4) – Make sure these sliders look the same. Use the copy and paste option Fixed01:36:385 (1,2,3,4,5) – A half circle shape will look better in my opinion. I did a half circle but rotated 90 degrees from what you have

Picture

01:40:930 (2) – Ctrl+J and then rotate it 50 degrees. Fixed01:44:749 (4,6) – Avoid the overlap. Move 01:45:476 (6) – to the right. Instead I pushed 4 to the left. Makes a triangle

Picture

02:29:476 (3,4) – Make a blanket here Fixed

Picture

02:44:021 (5) – Do this: Fixed

Picture

Copy and paste 02:43:476 (4) – and then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G02:49:840 (6) – Maybe do this:Sorry, but I did fix it up

Picture

To support 02:49:112 (4) – 03:27:658 (1,3) – Make this symmetric. Fixed

Picture

Copy and paste 03:27:658 (1) – then Ctrl+J04:10:203 (3) – Ctrl+G? Sorry, but this would mess up the entire song.

Overall, nice mapset. I’d say Normal just needs more mods though.
Good Luck!

Thanks so much!

CDFA wrote:

[Contemplates meaning]

Overall:
Not a fan of the color choice for the combos. Get something more fitting with the BG Fixed

Hard:
00:46:930 (5) - clap on end of slider Fixed
00:48:385 (8) - finish or something Got a whistle, sounds better.
00:57:112 (1) - clap on end of slider Fixed
00:58:385 (3) - As good as blanket is, the overlap it causes at the end is sad sad Fixed

I didn't make a giant post for this, but please go through and make sure your claps are all matching the backing drums! Sometimes you either forget to add them, or you have a little too much. Rather than pointing them all out and making a long post, I'll let you do all of that .

Normal:
00:42:567 (1) - Remove claps here. Don't misplace claps due to a lack of action on beats 2 and 4. If you need color, whistles are my personal favorite. Apply this to the rest of the map as well. Fixed
00:57:112 (1) - *furiously cries* like no bueno slider shape. Fixed

Easy:
02:34:203 (2) - Slidershape ;ww; Fixed
02:40:021 (6) - ^. Generally, you don't want strong curves like this. Fixed
02:48:203 (2) - ^. Imagine going for ~. Right now, it's too high on one section. The overall goal is equality. Fixed

It's a pretty ok map. I'd just REALLY love you to get some work done on hitsounding. Go through the map on your own and really listen to the snare drum, and make sure your hitsounds match up. For the lower diffs, if you need color, I like using softwhistles, but don't use your snare drum hit for parts where the snare drum is not there.

Maybe get like 1-2 mods after that just to nitpick, then forum PM me once that's all fixed.

1. 00:23:294 (5) - what about removing finish on the slider's tail? it doesn't really necessary
2. 00:50:021 (6) - add clap on slider's head
3. 00:51:658 (2) - ^
4. 01:12:930 (2) - consider removing this finish, it doesn't fit with the song properly
5. 01:15:658 (2) - add clap
6. 01:16:021 (3) - remove clap on the slider's head
7. 01:17:476 (5) - add clap on slider's tail
8. 01:23:294 (1) - ^
9. 01:27:294 (2) - add clap
10. 01:40:021 (3) - add clap on slider's head
11. 01:42:203 (5) - remove this clap
12. 02:24:385 (1,2) - add clap on each slider's tail
13. 02:28:385 (4) - add clap
14. 02:31:476 (3) - remove clap on slider's tail
15. 02:32:749 (4) - add clap
16. 02:34:203 (2) - add clap on slider's head
17. 02:35:658 (3) - add clap
18. 02:37:112 (2) - ^
19. 02:40:021 (2) - add clap on slider's head
20. 02:59:840 (2) - add finish on slider's tail
21. 03:03:658 (2) - remove clap
22. 03:04:021 (3) - add clap on slider's tail
23. 03:09:112 (2) - remove finish on slider's tail
24. 03:22:567 (2) - remove clap on repeat arrow[
25. 03:29:840 (3) - ^
26. 04:07:840 (2) - remove clap

1. 01:02:930 (1) - add clap on repeat arrow
2. 01:05:840 (1) - add clap on slider's tail
3. 01:17:476 (1) - ^
4. 01:23:294 (1) - ^
5. 02:24:385 (1,2,1) - add clap on each slider's tail
6. 02:31:294 (2) - add clap
7. 02:33:112 (1) - add clap on slider's tail
8. 02:35:658 (3) - add clap
9. 02:37:476 (4) - add clap on slider's tail
10. 02:38:930 (1) - ^
11. 02:43:476 (4) - add clap on slider's head
12. 02:44:385 (5) - add clap
13. 03:37:112 (1) - i think this slider's head needs finish rather than clap
14. 03:55:658 (2) - this slider's tail needs clap rather than finish in this time
15. 04:08:385 (3) - change the clap on slider's tail to finish for consistency
    
    i'm not sure about some finishes that you used, most of them are quite nice but those are little bit weird to hear. well prorbably it will be fine

1. 01:20:021 (7) - i think you had a mistake while adding clap on this slider
2. 01:36:567 (6) - consider adding clap on this note as well
3. 01:54:930 (7) - how about adding clap on slider's tail to follow the drum sound
4. 01:57:840 (7) - ^
5. 01:59:840 (4) - missed clap
6. 02:25:840 (4) - try adding clap on slider's tail
7. 02:28:385 (3) - missed clap
8. 02:35:658 (10) - add clap on slider's head
9. 02:37:112 (4) - ^
10. 02:37:840 (6) - ^
11. 02:40:021 (3) - missed clap
12. 02:46:385 (5) - ^
13. 02:50:203 (7) - add clap on slider's tail
14. 02:58:021 (3) - missed clap
15. 03:09:658 (4) - ^
16. 03:22:203 (1) - add clap on slider's head
17. 03:25:112 (6) - add clap on slider's tail in this time
18. 03:47:294 (5) - what about adding whistle on slider head for consistency
19. 03:55:658 (3) - add clap on slider's tail
20. 03:56:749 (6) - another mistake? i mean it seems that the clap on slider's body isn't intended
21. 04:13:476 (4) - this clap isn't really necessary, consider removing it
22. 04:18:930 (3) - the clap on slider's tail also seems unnecessary

HelloSCV wrote:

before starting, please note that all of suggestions that i mentioned are based on your hitsound pattern

[Easy]

1. 00:23:294 (5) - what about removing finish on the slider's tail? it doesn't really necessary Fixed
2. 00:50:021 (6) - add clap on slider's head Fixed
3. 00:51:658 (2) - ^ Fixed
4. 01:12:930 (2) - consider removing this finish, it doesn't fit with the song properly Fixed
5. 01:15:658 (2) - add clap Fixed
6. 01:16:021 (3) - remove clap on the slider's head Fixed
7. 01:17:476 (5) - add clap on slider's tail Fixed
8. 01:23:294 (1) - ^ Fixed
9. 01:27:294 (2) - add clap Fixed
10. 01:40:021 (3) - add clap on slider's head Fixed
11. 01:42:203 (5) - remove this clap Fixed
12. 02:24:385 (1,2) - add clap on each slider's tail Fixed
13. 02:28:385 (4) - add clap Fixed
14. 02:31:476 (3) - remove clap on slider's tail Fixed
15. 02:32:749 (4) - add clap Fixed
16. 02:34:203 (2) - add clap on slider's head Fixed
17. 02:35:658 (3) - add clap Fixed
18. 02:37:112 (2) - ^ Fixed
19. 02:40:021 (2) - add clap on slider's head Fixed
20. 02:59:840 (2) - add finish on slider's tail Fixed
21. 03:03:658 (2) - remove clap Fixed
22. 03:04:021 (3) - add clap on slider's tail Fixed
23. 03:09:112 (2) - remove finish on slider's tail Fixed
24. 03:22:567 (2) - remove clap on repeat arrow Fixed
25. 03:29:840 (3) - ^ Fixed
26. 04:07:840 (2) - remove clap Fixed

[Normal]

1. 01:02:930 (1) - add clap on repeat arrow Fixed
2. 01:05:840 (1) - add clap on slider's tail Fixed
3. 01:17:476 (1) - ^ Fixed
4. 01:23:294 (1) - ^ Fixed
5. 02:24:385 (1,2,1) - add clap on each slider's tail Fixed
6. 02:31:294 (2) - add clap Fixed
7. 02:33:112 (1) - add clap on slider's tail Fixed
8. 02:35:658 (3) - add clap Fixed
9. 02:37:476 (4) - add clap on slider's tail Fixed
10. 02:38:930 (1) - ^ Fixed
11. 02:43:476 (4) - add clap on slider's head Fixed
12. 02:44:385 (5) - add clap Fixed
13. 03:37:112 (1) - i think this slider's head needs finish rather than clap Fixed
14. 03:55:658 (2) - this slider's tail needs clap rather than finish in this time Fixed
15. 04:08:385 (3) - change the clap on slider's tail to finish for consistency Fixed
    
    i'm not sure about some finishes that you used, most of them are quite nice but those are little bit weird to hear. well prorbably it will be fine

[Hard]

1. 01:20:021 (7) - i think you had a mistake while adding clap on this slider Fixed
2. 01:36:567 (6) - consider adding clap on this note as well Fixed
3. 01:54:930 (7) - how about adding clap on slider's tail to follow the drum sound Fixed
4. 01:57:840 (7) - ^ Fixed
5. 01:59:840 (4) - missed clap Fixed
6. 02:25:840 (4) - try adding clap on slider's tail Fixed
7. 02:28:385 (3) - missed clap Fixed
8. 02:35:658 (10) - add clap on slider's head Fixed
9. 02:37:112 (4) - ^ Fixed
10. 02:37:840 (6) - ^ Fixed
11. 02:40:021 (3) - missed clap Fixed
12. 02:46:385 (5) - ^ Fixed
13. 02:50:203 (7) - add clap on slider's tail Fixed
14. 02:58:021 (3) - missed clap Fixed
15. 03:09:658 (4) - ^ Fixed
16. 03:22:203 (1) - add clap on slider's head Fixed
17. 03:25:112 (6) - add clap on slider's tail in this time Fixed
18. 03:47:294 (5) - what about adding whistle on slider head for consistency Fixed
19. 03:55:658 (3) - add clap on slider's tail Fixed
20. 03:56:749 (6) - another mistake? i mean it seems that the clap on slider's body isn't intended Fixed
21. 04:13:476 (4) - this clap isn't really necessary, consider removing it Fixed
22. 04:18:930 (3) - the clap on slider's tail also seems unnecessary Fixed

will finish this by tomorrow good luck~

1. Seems to be missing a source?

1. 00:56:031 (5) - NC
2. 00:59:304 (4) - NC
3. 01:10:940 (6) - NC
4. 01:11:668 (1) - Remove NC
5. 01:14:031 (6) - NC
6. 01:17:122 (8) - NC
7. 01:17:486 (1) - Remove NC
8. 01:19:668 (6) - NC
9. 01:19:668 (6) - NC
10. 01:25:304 (5) - I would ctrl+g here because if you listen, the note here sounds slightly louder than in 01:24:759 (4) so imo it's better if they're different, up to you though doesn't really matter
11. 01:24:759 (4) - NC
12. 01:27:304 (4) - NC
13. 01:30:577 (5) - NC
14. 01:36:395 (5) - NC
15. 01:48:759 (8) - NC
16. 01:50:940 (5) - NC
17. 01:56:759 (2) - NC
18. 02:12:759 (4) - NC with the finish
19. 02:17:850 (5) - NC
20. 02:20:759 (6) - Consider rotating it like this so it's pointed towards 02:21:486 (1)
21. 02:28:759 (4) - NC
22. 02:31:668 (4) - NC
23. 02:34:577 (4) - NC with the finish
24. 02:35:122 (7) - ^
25. 02:37:486 (5) - NC
26. 02:40:395 (4) - NC
27. 02:56:395 (9) - NC
28. 03:01:486 (8) - NC with the clap?
29. 03:03:486 (4) - ^
30. 03:06:940 (6) - NC
31. 03:24:031 (3) - NC
32. 03:36:395 (2) - NC
33. 03:38:940 (4) - NC
34. 03:47:304 (5) - NC
35. 03:50:213 (5) - NC
36. 03:52:759 (3) - NC with the finish
37. 03:56:759 (6) - ^
38. 03:59:668 (8) - NC
39. 04:02:213 (6) - NC
40. 04:11:304 (6) - NC
41. 04:14:940 (6) - NC with the finish

sukiNathan wrote:

From Modding Queue

Map is very clean and simple, so I mainly just got some combo suggestions

[General]

1. Seems to be missing a source? This doesn't come from a game or a movie. Sources are only for games or movies.

[Hard]

1. 00:56:031 (5) - NC
2. 00:59:304 (4) - NC
3. 01:02:940 (1) - NC
4. 01:10:940 (6) - NC
5. 01:11:668 (1) - Remove NC
6. 01:14:031 (6) - NC
7. 01:17:122 (8) - NC
8. 01:17:486 (1) - Remove NC
9. 01:19:668 (6) - NC
10. 01:19:668 (6) - NC
11. 01:25:304 (5) - I would ctrl+g here because if you listen, the note here sounds slightly louder than in 01:24:759 (4) so imo it's better if they're different, up to you though doesn't really matter Sure!
12. 01:24:759 (4) - NC
13. 01:27:304 (4) - NC
14. 01:30:577 (5) - NC
15. 01:36:395 (5) - NC I agree
16. 01:48:759 (8) - NC
17. 01:56:759 (2) - NC
18. 02:12:759 (4) - NC with the finish Changed
19. 02:17:850 (5) - NC
20. 02:20:759 (6) - Consider rotating it like this so it's pointed towards 02:21:486 (1) Good idea
21. 02:28:759 (4) - NC
22. 02:31:668 (4) - NC
23. 02:34:577 (4) - NC with the finish Sure!
24. 02:35:122 (7) - ^
25. 02:37:486 (5) - NC
26. 02:40:395 (4) - NC
27. 02:56:395 (9) - NC Sure thing
28. 03:01:486 (8) - NC with the clap?
29. 03:03:486 (4) - ^
30. 03:06:940 (6) - NC
31. 03:24:031 (3) - NC
32. 03:36:395 (2) - NC
33. 03:38:940 (4) - NC
34. 03:47:304 (5) - NC
35. 03:50:213 (5) - NC
36. 03:52:759 (3) - NC with the finish
37. 03:56:759 (6) - ^
38. 03:59:668 (8) - NC
39. 04:02:213 (6) - NC
40. 04:11:304 (6) - NC
41. 04:14:940 (6) - NC with the finish Fixed

have a star

Xelasto wrote:

sukiNathan wrote:

From Modding Queue

Map is very clean and simple, so I mainly just got some combo suggestions

[General]

1. Seems to be missing a source? This doesn't come from a game or a movie. Sources are only for games or movies.

[Hard]

1. 00:56:031 (5) - NC
2. 00:59:304 (4) - NC
3. 01:02:940 (1) - NC
4. 01:10:940 (6) - NC
5. 01:11:668 (1) - Remove NC
6. 01:14:031 (6) - NC
7. 01:17:122 (8) - NC
8. 01:17:486 (1) - Remove NC
9. 01:19:668 (6) - NC
10. 01:19:668 (6) - NC
11. 01:25:304 (5) - I would ctrl+g here because if you listen, the note here sounds slightly louder than in 01:24:759 (4) so imo it's better if they're different, up to you though doesn't really matter Sure!
12. 01:24:759 (4) - NC
13. 01:27:304 (4) - NC
14. 01:30:577 (5) - NC
15. 01:36:395 (5) - NC I agree
16. 01:48:759 (8) - NC
17. 01:56:759 (2) - NC
18. 02:12:759 (4) - NC with the finish Changed
19. 02:17:850 (5) - NC
20. 02:20:759 (6) - Consider rotating it like this so it's pointed towards 02:21:486 (1) Good idea
21. 02:28:759 (4) - NC
22. 02:31:668 (4) - NC
23. 02:34:577 (4) - NC with the finish Sure!
24. 02:35:122 (7) - ^
25. 02:37:486 (5) - NC
26. 02:40:395 (4) - NC
27. 02:56:395 (9) - NC Sure thing
28. 03:01:486 (8) - NC with the clap?
29. 03:03:486 (4) - ^
30. 03:06:940 (6) - NC
31. 03:24:031 (3) - NC
32. 03:36:395 (2) - NC
33. 03:38:940 (4) - NC
34. 03:47:304 (5) - NC
35. 03:50:213 (5) - NC
36. 03:52:759 (3) - NC with the finish
37. 03:56:759 (6) - ^
38. 03:59:668 (8) - NC
39. 04:02:213 (6) - NC
40. 04:11:304 (6) - NC
41. 04:14:940 (6) - NC with the finish Fixed

have a star

Thanks! Everything in green is fixed. Sorry I didn't fix alot, since a lot of the suggestions made the combos too short for hard mode, but you did point out a few useful things. Thanks and don't give up being a modder