Chiyoko - Baby Fantastic! -Short ver.- [Osu|Taiko]

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Zweib

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here is the M4M as requested.

[General]

Tags: Add "Visual Novel" , "Hanayome to Maou ~ Oushitu no Harem wa Gekokujou ~" (capitalization)
AIMod: Tags conflict with hvick225's Harem diff.

  • [Muzukashii]

    Disable widescreen support.

  1. 00:04:973 (12,13) - consider swapping these notes to d k ? This could follow the increasing pitch in a way better.
  2. 00:06:473 - this timing point could be removed since it is not in use.
  3. 00:06:806 (19) - this finish stands rather alone since you don't use big note at similar places like 00:08:139 (26,33) - . Consider using K as well for consistency ?
  4. 00:10:723 (39) - moving this note to 00:10:556 - would follow the beat better.
  5. 00:10:806 (40,41,43) - you may add finish as you did at 00:11:806 (42) - for emphasizing the stressed sounds.
  6. 00:18:139 (22) - k would be better since the vocal pitch is the same as 00:18:473 (24) -
  7. 00:19:139 (27) - consider deleting this note for a 2/1 break as this part is relatively calm ?
  8. 00:19:473 (28) - k would be better for the snare there.
  9. 00:22:306 (41,42) - swapping these notes to k d would follow the drop in vocal pitch.
  10. 00:23:639 (47,48) - similar to 00:04:973 (12,13) - , d K would be better.
  11. 00:24:139 (49) - D would mark the start of new stanza nicely imo.
  12. 00:24:306 (50) - move to 00:24:473 - and change to k for the snare ? I followed guitar here which I think sounds cool
  13. 00:28:973 (71) - d would result in a smoother flow since the higher-pitched vocal at 00:29:139 (72) - could be highlighted.
  14. 00:29:806 (74) - same as 00:19:473 (28) -
  15. 00:31:639 - maybe add d for the beat there ?
  16. 00:32:139 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89) - try to change this pattern from dkkddkkK to K kkddkD to accompany the pitch drop ?
  17. 00:33:806 (91,95) - same as 00:19:473 (28) -
  18. 00:34:806 - It would be better to use constant SV in lower difficulties since beginners may find it hard to adapt SV changes.
  19. From 00:34:806 to 00:45:473 - As the music is rather soft, note density should be lowered considerably. Here is an example: (cursor at 00:39:806 - )
  20. 00:51:973 (166) - K would fit both the higher-pitched vocal and the stressed sound.
  21. 00:53:473 (173,178) - similar to ^ , big don would be nice.
  22. 00:57:473 (1) - same as ^
  23. 00:59:056 (9) - moving this note to 00:58:723 - would result in a smoother flow.
  24. 01:02:139 (25) - move to 01:02:639 - and add k at 01:02:389 - for the beat ? keep this, I feel it goes more naturally
  25. 01:03:806 (32,33,34,35) - try kd dk instead of kkd d ? This could help emphasize the vocal there. Then, you may change 01:04:806 (36) - to d since the pitch is lower.
  26. 01:06:806 (46,47,48) - d d k would match the snare at 01:07:139 -
  27. 01:09:722 (9) - same as 00:59:056 (9) -
  28. 01:12:472 (23) - k would be better for pattern consistency as 01:01:806 (23) -
  29. 01:13:805 (29) - same as 00:19:473 (28) -
  30. 01:14:639 (33) - deleting this note would make the vocal at 01:14:472 (32) - clearer.
  31. 01:15:805 (38,39) - swapping these notes to k d would fit the snare well.
  32. 01:16:306 (41) - move to 01:16:639 - so that it would cohere with 01:13:972 (30) -
  33. 01:19:139 (1) - this note could be deleted for a 2/1 break after the dense kiai.
  34. From 01:18:806 to 01:26:806 - the patterns here are rather loose imo. You may take this as an example: (cursor at 01:24:139 - , which is a big note) partially fixed, still follow the inst


That's all and good luck~ :D
all other not mentioned are fixed, thanks for modding!
Topic Starter
Zweib

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here is the M4M as requested.

[General]

Tags: Add "Visual Novel" , "Hanayome to Maou ~ Oushitu no Harem wa Gekokujou ~" (capitalization)
AIMod: Tags conflict with hvick225's Harem diff.

  • [Muzukashii]

    Disable widescreen support.

  1. 00:04:973 (12,13) - consider swapping these notes to d k ? This could follow the increasing pitch in a way better.
  2. 00:06:473 - this timing point could be removed since it is not in use.
  3. 00:06:806 (19) - this finish stands rather alone since you don't use big note at similar places like 00:08:139 (26,33) - . Consider using K as well for consistency ?
  4. 00:10:723 (39) - moving this note to 00:10:556 - would follow the beat better.
  5. 00:10:806 (40,41,43) - you may add finish as you did at 00:11:806 (42) - for emphasizing the stressed sounds.
  6. 00:18:139 (22) - k would be better since the vocal pitch is the same as 00:18:473 (24) -
  7. 00:19:139 (27) - consider deleting this note for a 2/1 break as this part is relatively calm ?
  8. 00:19:473 (28) - k would be better for the snare there.
  9. 00:22:306 (41,42) - swapping these notes to k d would follow the drop in vocal pitch.
  10. 00:23:639 (47,48) - similar to 00:04:973 (12,13) - , d K would be better.
  11. 00:24:139 (49) - D would mark the start of new stanza nicely imo.
  12. 00:24:306 (50) - move to 00:24:473 - and change to k for the snare ? I followed guitar here which I think sounds cool
  13. 00:28:973 (71) - d would result in a smoother flow since the higher-pitched vocal at 00:29:139 (72) - could be highlighted.
  14. 00:29:806 (74) - same as 00:19:473 (28) -
  15. 00:31:639 - maybe add d for the beat there ?
  16. 00:32:139 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89) - try to change this pattern from dkkddkkK to K kkddkD to accompany the pitch drop ?
  17. 00:33:806 (91,95) - same as 00:19:473 (28) -
  18. 00:34:806 - It would be better to use constant SV in lower difficulties since beginners may find it hard to adapt SV changes.
  19. From 00:34:806 to 00:45:473 - As the music is rather soft, note density should be lowered considerably. Here is an example: (cursor at 00:39:806 - )
  20. 00:51:973 (166) - K would fit both the higher-pitched vocal and the stressed sound.
  21. 00:53:473 (173,178) - similar to ^ , big don would be nice.
  22. 00:57:473 (1) - same as ^
  23. 00:59:056 (9) - moving this note to 00:58:723 - would result in a smoother flow.
  24. 01:02:139 (25) - move to 01:02:639 - and add k at 01:02:389 - for the beat ? keep this, I feel it goes more naturally
  25. 01:03:806 (32,33,34,35) - try kd dk instead of kkd d ? This could help emphasize the vocal there. Then, you may change 01:04:806 (36) - to d since the pitch is lower.
  26. 01:06:806 (46,47,48) - d d k would match the snare at 01:07:139 -
  27. 01:09:722 (9) - same as 00:59:056 (9) -
  28. 01:12:472 (23) - k would be better for pattern consistency as 01:01:806 (23) -
  29. 01:13:805 (29) - same as 00:19:473 (28) -
  30. 01:14:639 (33) - deleting this note would make the vocal at 01:14:472 (32) - clearer.
  31. 01:15:805 (38,39) - swapping these notes to k d would fit the snare well.
  32. 01:16:306 (41) - move to 01:16:639 - so that it would cohere with 01:13:972 (30) -
  33. 01:19:139 (1) - this note could be deleted for a 2/1 break after the dense kiai.
  34. From 01:18:806 to 01:26:806 - the patterns here are rather loose imo. You may take this as an example: (cursor at 01:24:139 - , which is a big note) partially fixed, still follow the inst


That's all and good luck~ :D
all other not mentioned are fixed, thanks for modding!
Nardoxyribonucleic
剛剛寫好了w (no kd)
Please add "Nardoxyribonucleic" to tags, thanks.

http://puu.sh/iUcav.rar
Topic Starter
Zweib

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

剛剛寫好了w (no kd)
Please add "Nardoxyribonucleic" to tags, thanks.

http://puu.sh/iUcav.rar
神速;w;
Surono
`L_` ugh me here again.. dont kd meh

[Oni]
00:06:139 (29,30) - why not don? @_@ hmm imo.. this like to down pitch.. so well for me.... *violin low like some here.. 00:02:973 -
00:55:306 (287) - don? consistency with here 01:17:973 (450) - hmm? XD
okay start from kiai until end.. nice weehhehh =w= Gluck~
ak74
hi~棒哥,我来献上我的屎摸
[Muzukashii]
00:16:473 (17,18) - ctrl+g? 这样听起来和乐曲更契合
00:21:806 - 这里加两个1/2note? 听着挺空,可以考虑一下改成●●●●●●
00:27:806 (67,68,69,70) - 这里跟vocal会比较好吧,改成● ●
00:28:973 (72) - 这个改成k?
00:29:473 (74) - 建议改成D
00:30:639 (78,79) - ctrl+g
00:36:139 (102) - 总感觉这个note有点多余...
00:42:806 (119) - d
00:45:306 (129) - delete,这里的音好像不太重要
01:06:639 - 加个k 然后删掉01:06:806 (46) -
01:13:306 (27) , 01:15:472 (37) - 改成d
01:18:305 (51,52,1) - 这里还是跟一下vocal改成d?
01:21:806 (1) - 音高还是k

[Nardo's Oni]
00:12:139 (73) - 听instrument,这个强烈建议改成d
00:56:306 —— 00:57:139 这里我觉得加个转盘没问题
01:02:473 (333) - k?
01:04:639 (348) - d
01:05:889 (358) - delete,还是凸显一下vocal
01:19:306 (459) - 加个d,这里有音
01:21:973 (470) - ^

Good luck! :)
Nardoxyribonucleic

Surono wrote:

`L_` ugh me here again.. dont kd meh

[Oni]
00:06:139 (29,30) - why not don? @_@ hmm imo.. this like to down pitch.. so well for me.... *violin low like some here.. 00:02:973 - It seems that k would result in a smoother flow.
00:55:306 (287) - don? consistency with here 01:17:973 (450) - hmm? XD A high-pitched sound occurs at 00:55:306 - , so k would be better.
okay start from kiai until end.. nice weehhehh =w= Gluck~
Thanks for your mod and comment~ :)

ak74qbz95xm8 wrote:

hi~棒哥,我来献上我的屎摸

[Nardo's Oni]
00:12:139 (73) - 听instrument,这个强烈建议改成d I think k would fit the strong cymbal more.
00:56:306 —— 00:57:139 这里我觉得加个转盘没问题 Yes, but it would be better to keep the break consistent with Muzukashii.
01:02:473 (333) - k? d would result in a smoother flow imo.
01:04:639 (348) - d Retained to fit the pitch of background instrument there.
01:05:889 (358) - delete,还是凸显一下vocal I think a triplet here would help cohere with the pattern at 01:01:139 -
01:19:306 (459) - 加个d,这里有音 You are right, but a 2/1 break would fit the calm music more imo.
01:21:973 (470) - ^ same as ^

Good luck! :)
Thanks for your mod~ :)
bananannian

I am pretty thorough, so don't be annoyed if I point out a lot of issues. A lot of times they are just my opinions, so feel free to object to them. :3

d = don
k = katsu
D = big don
K = big katsu


[General]
... Kinda regret taking this request now, I have pretty much nothing to say. Mapset's very polished, especially the Oni. :3

[Muzukashii]
00:01:473 (1) - You sure you don't want this to be K? To me, it sounds kinda weird without the finish, but up to you.
00:23:639 (48) - change to d for better emphasis on 00:23:806 (49), vocal's high note
00:35:806 (100,101,102) - I would not map this part to the bells synth in the background, but to the vocals instead (since you've been mapping to the vocals a lot so far); I suggest changing this to dd
00:53:306 (161) - change to d for better emphasis on 00:53:473 (162), as well as distinguishing between vocals' different pitch at 00:53:139 (160)
01:15:889 (40) - I would personally add d here to lead in to 01:15:973 (40) for the vocals, as well as add a bit more intensity towards the end of the kiai

[Nardo's Oni]
00:01:473 (1) - like Muzu, you sure you don't want this to be K?
00:22:306 (126,127,128,129,130,131) - I would actually prefer this to be ddd ddk for two reasons:
1. 00:22:806 (131) would then be k, matching vocal's high note as well as being consistent with 00:23:139 (134,136,140)
2. The entire phrase starting from 00:21:806 would have increasing density of k notes, leading into 00:24:139 (142), the start of the next phrase.
01:01:639 (327,328) - reverse, change to kd; k would match vocals, while d would match the slight pause in the guitar
01:12:305 (409,410) - ^
[]

And that's about it! Nicely done, I like both your difficulties a lot. Hope you find this mod helpful, and good luck beatmapping! :3
Nardoxyribonucleic

bananannian wrote:


I am pretty thorough, so don't be annoyed if I point out a lot of issues. A lot of times they are just my opinions, so feel free to object to them. :3

d = don
k = katsu
D = big don
K = big katsu


[General]
... Kinda regret taking this request now, I have pretty much nothing to say. Mapset's very polished, especially the Oni. :3

[Nardo's Oni]
00:01:473 (1) - like Muzu, you sure you don't want this to be K? It is not as stressed as 00:04:139 (15) - , so k would be enough imo.
00:22:306 (126,127,128,129,130,131) - I would actually prefer this to be ddd ddk for two reasons: changed to ddd kdk instead.
1. 00:22:806 (131) would then be k, matching vocal's high note as well as being consistent with 00:23:139 (134,136,140)
2. The entire phrase starting from 00:21:806 would have increasing density of k notes, leading into 00:24:139 (142), the start of the next phrase.
01:01:639 (327,328) - reverse, change to kd; k would match vocals, while d would match the slight pause in the guitar I think d k would result in a smoother flow since the distribution of kats is more even.
01:12:305 (409,410) - ^ same as ^
[]

And that's about it! Nicely done, I like both your difficulties a lot. Hope you find this mod helpful, and good luck beatmapping! :3
Thanks for your mod~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/j0av3.rar
Topic Starter
Zweib
@ak74qbz95xm8 bananannian and Nardo
I'm so sorry for late replying orzzzzz

I don't know why I didn't receive any reminder in my mailbox.

I'll give a feedback asap. Thank you all!
Topic Starter
Zweib
枪哥真神也,all fixed
01:15:889 (40) - I would personally add d here to lead in to 01:15:973 (40) for the vocals, as well as add a bit more intensity towards the end of the kiai - finally I choose to add a k at 01:13:056 (26) to make intense, which I think is more sensible.

the other all fixed xD

Thanks for modding!

and updated Nardo's Oni
Kofja
I would move the first timing points offset to 119 and move everything accordingly back, just seems a bit off to me. tho i do love the map :D
shionelove
from PM
metadata:i don't think it needs "-Short Ver.- because there's no -Short Ver.- in official site(short size) and CD(Full size) both...
CD:http://cosmic.surpara.com/1507_baby_come.html
official site; (i can't put official URL because of NSFW haha)
if you have any confirm with some pro staff it is ok

delete Widescreen support thing
idk about letterbox thing(because i'm newbie),if it mustn't be used it's ok
[Muzukashii]
OD5 too hard...4~4.5 plz
00:24:139 (50) - add finish,00:24:306 (51) - move to 00:24:473
that's all almost complete
[Nardo's Oni]
00:03:639 (12,13,14) - dkd for hand kK is too difficult for player especially DT
00:12:889 (79,80) - dk

 RIP ACC

end
Topic Starter
Zweib

shionelove wrote:

from PM
metadata:i don't think it needs "-Short Ver.- because there's no -Short Ver.- in official site(short size) and CD(Full size) both...
CD:http://cosmic.surpara.com/1507_baby_come.html
official site; (i can't put official URL because of NSFW haha)
if you have any confirm with some pro staff it is ok

delete Widescreen support thing fixed
idk about letterbox thing(because i'm newbie),if it mustn't be used it's ok I checkout this box for std diffs too
[Muzukashii]
OD5 too hard...4~4.5 plz changed to 4.5
00:24:139 (50) - add finish,00:24:306 (51) - move to 00:24:473 fixed
that's all almost complete
I'm not very sure about the title but according to the OST, it writes Baby Fantastic! -Short ver.-

Thanks for mod! :)
shionelove

Zweib wrote:

I'm not very sure about the title but according to the OST, it writes Baby Fantastic! -Short ver.-

Thanks for mod! :)
ouch...i hate official site...plz consistent info plz plz plz hhh it's ok next BN feel easy about metadata
Nardoxyribonucleic

shionelove wrote:

from PM
metadata:i don't think it needs "-Short Ver.- because there's no -Short Ver.- in official site(short size) and CD(Full size) both...
CD:http://cosmic.surpara.com/1507_baby_come.html
official site; (i can't put official URL because of NSFW haha)
if you have any confirm with some pro staff it is ok

delete Widescreen support thing
idk about letterbox thing(because i'm newbie),if it mustn't be used it's ok

[Nardo's Oni]
00:03:639 (12,13,14) - dkd for hand kK is too difficult for player especially DT I would prefer following the pitch of violin by using k d k there.
00:12:889 (79,80) - dk kd would be better as the sounds are pretty similar.

 RIP ACC

end
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Topic Starter
Zweib
ok all fixed and updated now 0.0
shionelove
fk i can't find even Short "v"er not "V"er RIPRIP

anyway come on icon
Topic Starter
Zweib
Thank you shionelove~ mua :)
Koiyuki
  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General
  1. 这是op吗?是的话加个opening到tag里面去
  2. iMage-- changed his username to Meg, so add "Meg" to tags.


12q's Easy
  1. 00:06:473 (4) - 尾finish
  2. 00:07:306 (1) - finish
  3. 00:08:139 (2) - 头尾finish
  4. 00:09:473 (3) - 头折返finish
  5. 00:10:806 (4) - 头finish
  6. 00:18:806 (1) - 头finish
  7. 00:22:806 (2) - 头finish
  8. 00:24:139 (1) - 头finish
  9. 00:57:473 (1) - finish
  10. 01:08:139 (1) - 头finish
  11. 01:18:139 (4) - 这尾巴用finish比whistle好
  12. 01:24:139 - 这里我建议加点东西,最后插个break只为了放个转盘没啥意思


Normal
  1. 00:01:473 (2) - 这里加个nc就很有感觉
  2. 00:23:473 (2) - 头上clap或finish
  3. 01:18:806 (1) - finish
  4. 01:29:639 - 转盘和其他diff一样end在这里


Hard
  1. 00:01:473 (2,1) - swap nc?
  2. 00:23:473 (3) - 头上clap或finish
  3. 00:24:139 (1,2) - 把2,3间距拉大点,这样怎么样:http://puu.sh/jaVA6/c6ca0abe9a.jpg


iMage's Insane
  1. fine


hvick225's Harem
  1. For the ranking rule, you should change your diff name to something like "hvick225's Insane/Another/Extra". (rip 小维维's harem 另外能不能求小维维的mu啊
  2. 00:06:806 (6) - nc? and finish
  3. 00:07:306 (1) - 头上finish或clap
  4. 00:08:139 (4,7) - finish
  5. 00:09:472 (4) - 00:09:972 (6) - 头finish
  6. 00:10:806 (1,3) - 头finish
  7. 00:11:806 (5) - clap/finish
  8. 00:12:472 (2,4) - clap
  9. 00:21:472 (1) - finish
  10. 00:22:806 (1,3,4,6) - 白线都可以加finish
  11. 00:45:472 (3) - nc? 头改用finish?
  12. 00:51:806 (4) - 尾finish
  13. 00:53:472 (1) - finish
  14. 00:54:639 (1) - 头finish
  15. 01:18:806 (4) - nc?
  16. 01:24:139 (1) - 头finish
  17. 01:26:472 (1) - 尾finish


Fantastic
  1. 00:18:306 (3) - 这里用drum sound?
  2. 00:23:473 (1) - clap/finish
  3. 00:59:806 (6) - 这个弧度抬高一点,我个人打的时候很容易断尾,毕竟是3/4slider
  4. 01:15:139 (1,1,1,1) - 说真的我听不出来是1/3,我听了几遍觉得还是1/4,类似xxx x的节奏


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这游戏好玩吗?
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