This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年2月10日 at 19:44:28

Artist: senya
Title: Iro wa Nioedo Chirinuru o(OPver.)
Source: Touhou
Tags: zun yuuhei satellite 幽閉サテライト Mayumi Morinaga 森永真由美 Iceon Kamase Tora かませ虎 Kaleidoscope 東方プロジェクト project Nardoxyribonucleic stu00608
BPM: 138
Filesize: 1871kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:

1. Kantan (1.16 stars, 91 notes)
2. Muzukashii (2.71 stars, 245 notes)
3. Nardo's Futsuu (2.07 stars, 167 notes)
4. Oni (3.34 stars, 370 notes)
5. stu's Oni (3.2 stars, 379 notes)

Download: senya - Iro wa Nioedo Chirinuru o(OPver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Kantan - Completed
Nardo's Futsuu - Completed
Muzukashii - Completed
stu's Oni - Completed
Oni - Completed

forum Pm<3

[Oni]
00:24:239 (38,39) - dk?
00:30:653 (74,75) - k? flow flow flow
00:39:566 (13,14) - kd? (13) rhythm
00:45:218 (43,44) - how about kd?
01:00:435 - d please
01:09:131 - k or K or consistent 01:10:870 - d?

i will continue this mod tomorrow <3
i waiting this!

Genocide wrote:

forum Pm<3

[Oni]
00:24:239 (38,39) - dk? fixed
00:30:653 (74,75) - k? flow flow flow fixed
00:39:566 (13,14) - kd? (13) rhythm fixed
00:45:218 (43,44) - how about kd? fixed
01:00:435 - d please d now.
01:09:131 - k or K or consistent 01:10:870 - d? fixed

i will continue this mod tomorrow <3
i waiting this!

Thank you mod

Hi Charlotte! Mod request via PM!







And that's all. Good luck for rank!

Sayaka- wrote:

Hi Charlotte! Mod request via PM!

[stu's Oni]

1. 00:35:435 (1) - this spinner is pretty weird imo, remove it?
2. 01:12:609 (161,162,163,164,165,166,167) - change to ddkkddk? it's better for playablity imo

And that's all. Good luck for rank!

Thanks ~ all change~

Sayaka- wrote:

Hi Charlotte! Mod request via PM!

[General]

1. 00:17:826 - add a timing point here to reset the timing signature fixed
2. Kiai inconsistency between stu's Oni and other diffs, fix this please

[Kantan]

1. 00:35:435 (1) - this spinner is pretty weird imo, remove it? fixed
2. 00:45:653 (16) - K? there is a cymbal here fixed
3. 01:13:913 (62) - move to 01:13:479 - ? well,changed other pattern
4. 01:15:218 (65) - K? to emphasize the first beat of the second kiai part fixed

[Nardo's Futsuu]

1. 00:01:305 - to 00:13:913 - I don't think following voice here is a good idea, try to follow something else? (the piano for example)

I won't give a full mod for this diff, since it's pretty hard. I think you should try to reduce the amount of 1/2 in general

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:35:435 (1) - this spinner is pretty weird imo, remove it? fixed
2. 00:40:109 (12) - I don't think this note is needed, remove? fixed
3. 00:42:500 (20) - move to 00:42:609 - ? there is no note at 00:42:500 - fixed
4. 00:43:370 (23) - move to 00:43:479 - ? same reason as above fixed
5. 00:44:674 (29) - I don't think this note is needed, remove? keep
6. 00:54:022 (63) - ^ fixed

[stu's Oni]

1. 00:35:435 (1) - this spinner is pretty weird imo, remove it?
2. 01:12:609 (161,162,163,164,165,166,167) - change to ddkkddk? it's better for playablity imo

[Oni]

1. 00:35:435 (1) - this spinner is pretty weird imo, remove it? fixed

And that's all. Good luck for rank!

Thank you mod

Sayaka- wrote:

Hi Charlotte! Mod request via PM!

[Nardo's Futsuu]

1. 00:01:305 - to 00:13:913 - I don't think following voice here is a good idea, try to follow something else? (the piano for example) fixed some of the patterns there.

I won't give a full mod for this diff, since it's pretty hard. I think you should try to reduce the amount of 1/2 in general I don't think this is very hard because of the BPM and the considerable amount of breaks throughout the diff.

And that's all. Good luck for rank!

Thanks for your mod~

Update: http://puu.sh/cAkV0.rar

hi Charlotte.
The Kantan looks fine to me and I don't really have anything to add but I have a few things I'd like to suggest for the Muzukashii.
[Muzukashii]
I just felt like there were some parts were it felt like it could use a bit more notes in between to give it a better feel as a Muzukashii.
00:09:239 - d
00:13:805 - k
00:19:022 - d (since using k would make it oni material)
00:20:761 - d
00:25:109 - d
00:27:718 - k
00:34:131 - d, I think it sounds nice

This is as far as I can go, sorry if it wasn't helpful.

drum drum wrote:

hi Charlotte.
The Kantan looks fine to me and I don't really have anything to add but I have a few things I'd like to suggest for the Muzukashii.
[Muzukashii]
I just felt like there were some parts were it felt like it could use a bit more notes in between to give it a better feel as a Muzukashii.
00:09:239 - d keep
00:13:805 - k ^
00:19:022 - d (since using k would make it oni material) ^
00:20:761 - d ^
00:25:109 - d ^
00:27:718 - k fixed
00:34:131 - d, I think it sounds nice fixed

This is as far as I can go, sorry if it wasn't helpful. I don't want to use too much 1/4 notes.because,I feel Muzu=Oni so keep.soory

Thank you mod

M4M ;w; My Map ---> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/225260

d = don
D = Big Don
k = kat
K = Big Kat






Good Luck ^^

Soldsaga KunG wrote:

M4M ;w; My Map ---> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/225260

d = don
D = Big Don
k = kat
K = Big Kat

Kantan

00:13:044 (16,17) - Ctrl + G fixed
00:53:044 (29,30) - ^ keep
01:01:305 (43) - K fixed
01:02:609 (45) - k fixed
01:08:261 (54) - d fixed

Nardo's Futsuu

00:18:696 (2) - k
00:20:000 (4,5) - Ctrl + G

Muzukashii

00:30:870 (48,49,50) - kkk keep
00:44:348 (26,27,28,29) - d kkk fixed
01:06:522 (104) - k fixed
01:08:044 (110,111) - Ctrl + G fixed

stu's Oni

01:00:870 - add k
01:04:783 (118) - d

Oni

00:04:783 (10) - Move to 00:04:566 - changed other pattern
00:05:000 (11,12) - Ctrl + G fixed
00:05:653 (13) - k fixed
00:06:305 (15,16) - kk keep
00:13:479 (46,47,48) - k d d fixed
01:07:609 (144,145) - kk fixed

Good Luck ^^

Thank you mod

Soldsaga KunG wrote:

M4M ;w; My Map ---> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/225260

d = don
D = Big Don
k = kat
K = Big Kat

Nardo's Futsuu

00:18:696 (2) - k Nope, the sound is similar to 00:21:305 (6) - which is mapped as d.
00:20:000 (4,5) - Ctrl + G I followed the snare sound at 00:20:000 (4) - .

Good Luck ^^

Thanks for the mod~

No change atm.

Soldsaga KunG wrote:

stu's Oni

01:00:870 - add k
01:04:783 (118) - d

Good Luck ^^

Thanks~

Hi Charlotte~ Taiko mod request by pm

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

[General]

• All seems okay

[Kantan]

• 00:20:435 (6) - change to k? i think sounds better with k here and you are using k with this sound for example 00:23:913 (11) -
  00:37:826 (2,3) - control+g? (d k d) imo follows better the vocals and you are following that i think ;w;

[Nardo's Futsuu]

• 00:20:435 (5) - change to k? same as the Kantan, i think sounds better using k in this sound

[Muzukashii]

• 00:07:392 (21) - delete for short break? and no sounds bad without note
  00:30:653 (47) - delete? i know is low bpm but for some players this long pattern can be hard xD anyway, it's your decision :3
  01:12:609 (127) - change to k? i think follows better the vocals (if you are following here ofc ;w;)

[Oni]

• 
  00:20:435 (16) - same as the other diffs, change to k? (dk) maybe you are using dd here for consistency but sounds better with dk here imo
  00:23:044 (29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - kdk kdk kdkdk is a bit weird imo.. change 00:23:587 (33) - to k? (kkk) for more variety
  00:45:979 (46,47,50,51) - change this doublets to dk? i think sounds better
  01:20:435 (218) - change to k? (dkkdk) i think sounds better

[stu's Oni]

• 00:20:435 (15) - change to k? (ddkdd) sounds good imo
  00:45:979 (20,21) - control+g? (dk) i think sounds better
  01:12:609 (161,162,163,164,165,166,167) - this stream no sounds good for me, maybe you want something easy here, how about to change to ddkkddk or ddkdddk?

This is all, good luck Charlotte! ^^

Hanjamon wrote:

Hi Charlotte~ Taiko mod request by pm

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

[Nardo's Futsuu]

• 00:20:435 (5) - change to k? same as the Kantan, i think sounds better using k in this sound fixed

This is all, good luck Charlotte! ^^

Thanks for your mod~

Update: http://puu.sh/cD5sD.zip

Hanjamon wrote:

Hi Charlotte~ Taiko mod request by pm

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

[General]

• All seems okay

[Kantan]

• 00:20:435 (6) - change to k? i think sounds better with k here and you are using k with this sound for example 00:23:913 (11) -
  00:37:826 (2,3) - control+g? (d k d) imo follows better the vocals and you are following that i think ;w;
  
  All fixed

[Nardo's Futsuu]

• 00:20:435 (5) - change to k? same as the Kantan, i think sounds better using k in this sound

[Muzukashii]

• 00:07:392 (21) - delete for short break? and no sounds bad without note
  00:30:653 (47) - delete? i know is low bpm but for some players this long pattern can be hard xD anyway, it's your decision :3
  01:12:609 (127) - change to k? i think follows better the vocals (if you are following here ofc ;w;)
  
  All fixed

[Oni]

• 
  00:20:435 (16) - same as the other diffs, change to k? (dk) maybe you are using dd here for consistency but sounds better with dk here imo
  00:23:044 (29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - kdk kdk kdkdk is a bit weird imo.. change 00:23:587 (33) - to k? (kkk) for more variety
  00:45:979 (46,47,50,51) - change this doublets to dk? i think sounds better
  01:20:435 (218) - change to k? (dkkdk) i think sounds better
  
  All fixed

[stu's Oni]

• 00:20:435 (15) - change to k? (ddkdd) sounds good imo
  00:45:979 (20,21) - control+g? (dk) i think sounds better
  01:12:609 (161,162,163,164,165,166,167) - this stream no sounds good for me, maybe you want something easy here, how about to change to ddkkddk or ddkdddk?

This is all, good luck Charlotte! ^^

Thank you mod

good map
good luck~

Icing_wind wrote:

Taiko Mod

[General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[Nardo's Futsuu]

nardo你会讲中文的对吧，对吧。 么么哒。 看见你的图就有动力mod了 呵呵 xD

00:55:653 (82) - → https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2215577 It seems good~

01:02:826 (95) - change to d As the vocal pitch is relatively high, k would be better imo.

good

good map
good luck~

Thanks for your mod~

Update: http://puu.sh/cIivb.rar

Hey' mod req via pm.
Im a bit late as usual ;_; sorry.

[Oni]

Not always sure if you follow the vocal or the instrumental but it plays okay so np.
- 00:13:913 - and - 01:27:392 - maybe start these spinner 1/2 earlier coul've been better, works for all diffs.
- 00:23:479 mm maybe try others pattern here instead of kkk kdkdk ? i think so something like ddk kkddk/ddk kkkdk could be a bit cooler to play and fit more then song, your kkk doesn't emphasize - 00:23:696 (34) - which sounds different/higher.
- del - 00:45:218 (43,44) - or only - 00:45:435 (44) -, to emphasize more - 00:45:653 (45) -?
- change - 01:10:870 (163) - to k and then del - 01:11:087 (164) - ? fits a bit more the song imo.


[stu's Oni]

^ same comment,
- 00:35:218 maybe start the incoming spinner here tho ?
- 00:52:826 (54) del this, or add d at - 00:45:870 - and - 00:47:609 - ? for more consistency (first suggestion might be better).
- 01:01:305 start the kiai here ?_? the song goes high at this moment, not at - 01:00:870 -.
- 01:08:479 why nothing here but d at - 01:10:218 - :c ? maybe del that - 01:10:218 (147) - ?

[Muzukashii]

- 00:23:261 (19) - del and then add d at - 00:23:479 - ?
- 00:32:174 (53) - move to - 00:32:392 -, also del - 00:33:913 (58) - ? better follow exactly the vocal on this part imo.
- del - 00:39:022 (8,9) - and then add something at - 00:39:131 - ? what you did sounds a bit weird 'cause it doesn't fit what you did after at - 00:40:870 -.
- 00:48:261 - 00:52:174 - mm maybe you should try to focus more on the vocal for this part as you do on the 2 parts around. You could try to :
- move - 00:49:457 (45) - to - 00:49:566 - and add d at - 00:51:631 - ?
- 01:01:739 - c/p your kd dkdd kd dkkd here like you did at - 00:02:174 -, also del -01:05:000 (97) -.
- add d at - 01:06:739 -, change - 01:06:957 (106) - to k and move - 01:07:174 (107) - to - 01:07:392 - ? sounds cooler.
- if you applied the previous suggestion, also try to change - 01:08:696 (112) - to k and move - 01:08:913 (113) - to - 01:09:131 - ?
- in the same way, move - 01:10:653 (120) - to - 01:10:870 - and change it to k. well just like you did on the 2nd part of the kiai lol (i noticed it after).
- 01:15:435 (140,141,142) - this ddk should start at - 01:15:000 - :c. If you move it, keep a k at - 01:15:653 -.
- move - 01:21:087 (163) - to - 01:21:305 - ? if you applied the other similar suggestion.

[Nardo's Futsuu]

hey Nardo o/
good diff following the vocal as usual é_è, at least the diff is not really homogeous tho (i mean there are some part with a lot of notes and some with almost nothing, vocal irregularities).
- 00:41:305 (47,49) - swap colors ?

[Kantan]

Maybe too much notes, ill mainly suggest to remove stuff :c.
- what i said in The Oni about spinners is important for this diff i think.
- 00:34:783 (28) - del ? to keep the part calm, + this d doesn't really follow the vocal.
- 00:44:348 (14) - ^, not needed.
- 00:47:926 (20) - ^.
- 00:51:305 (26) - ^.
About the kiai, i think you should do some changes. Like chose to use only xxx patterns or something like xx xxx xx xxx etc.
For example, add something at - 01:03:913 - or del - 01:07:392 (52) -, etc.
The 2nd solution might be better 'cause then you can also:
- del - 01:21:305 (74,78) -, change - 01:22:609 (77) - to k and add d at - 01:23:044 -.
- better del - 01:26:087 (82,84) - to emphasize the 2 K and keep the thing simple.
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'

Icing_wind wrote:

Taiko Mod

[General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[Nardo's Futsuu]

nardo你会讲中文的对吧，对吧。 么么哒。 看见你的图就有动力mod了

00:55:653 (82) - → https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2215577

01:02:826 (95) - change to d

good

[Muzukashii]

00:03:913 (8,9) - delete keep

00:08:153 (23) - delete fixed

00:09:892 (31) - delete fixed

00:23:044 (18,19) - kd fixed

00:27:718 (35) - delete keep

00:44:674 (28) - delete fixed

[Oni]

00:29:239 (64) - change to d keep

01:10:000 (158) - ↑ keep

01:17:283 (198) - ↑ keep

good map
good luck~

Thank you mod

Nofool wrote:

Hey' mod req via pm.
Im a bit late as usual ;_; sorry.

[Oni]

Not always sure if you follow the vocal or the instrumental but it plays okay so np.
- 00:13:913 - and - 01:27:392 - maybe start these spinner 1/2 earlier coul've been better, works for all diffs.
- 00:23:479 mm maybe try others pattern here instead of kkk kdkdk ? i think so something like ddk kkddk/ddk kkkdk could be a bit cooler to play and fit more then song, your kkk doesn't emphasize - 00:23:696 (34) - which sounds different/higher.
- del - 00:45:218 (43,44) - or only - 00:45:435 (44) -, to emphasize more - 00:45:653 (45) -?
- change - 01:10:870 (163) - to k and then del - 01:11:087 (164) - ? fits a bit more the song imo.

All fixed

[stu's Oni]

^ same comment,
- 00:35:218 maybe start the incoming spinner here tho ?
- 00:52:826 (54) del this, or add d at - 00:45:870 - and - 00:47:609 - ? for more consistency (first suggestion might be better).
- 01:01:305 start the kiai here ?_? the song goes high at this moment, not at - 01:00:870 -.
- 01:08:479 why nothing here but d at - 01:10:218 - :c ? maybe del that - 01:10:218 (147) - ?

[Muzukashii]

- 00:23:261 (19) - del and then add d at - 00:23:479 - ?
- 00:32:174 (53) - move to - 00:32:392 -, also del - 00:33:913 (58) - ? better follow exactly the vocal on this part imo.
- del - 00:39:022 (8,9) - and then add something at - 00:39:131 - ? what you did sounds a bit weird 'cause it doesn't fit what you did after at - 00:40:870 -.
- 00:48:261 - 00:52:174 - mm maybe you should try to focus more on the vocal for this part as you do on the 2 parts around. You could try to :
- move - 00:49:457 (45) - to - 00:49:566 - and add d at - 00:51:631 - ?
- 01:01:739 - c/p your kd dkdd kd dkkd here like you did at - 00:02:174 -, also del -01:05:000 (97) -.
- add d at - 01:06:739 -, change - 01:06:957 (106) - to k and move - 01:07:174 (107) - to - 01:07:392 - ? sounds cooler.
- if you applied the previous suggestion, also try to change - 01:08:696 (112) - to k and move - 01:08:913 (113) - to - 01:09:131 - ?
- in the same way, move - 01:10:653 (120) - to - 01:10:870 - and change it to k. well just like you did on the 2nd part of the kiai lol (i noticed it after).
- 01:15:435 (140,141,142) - this ddk should start at - 01:15:000 - :c. If you move it, keep a k at - 01:15:653 -.
- move - 01:21:087 (163) - to - 01:21:305 - ? if you applied the other similar suggestion.

Almost fixed

[Nardo's Futsuu]

hey Nardo o/
good diff following the vocal as usual é_è, at least the diff is not really homogeous tho (i mean there are some part with a lot of notes and some with almost nothing, vocal irregularities).
- 00:41:305 (47,49) - swap colors ?

[Kantan]

Maybe too much notes, ill mainly suggest to remove stuff :c.
- what i said in The Oni about spinners is important for this diff i think.
- 00:34:783 (28) - del ? to keep the part calm, + this d doesn't really follow the vocal.
- 00:44:348 (14) - ^, not needed.
- 00:47:926 (20) - ^.
- 00:51:305 (26) - ^.
About the kiai, i think you should do some changes. Like chose to use only xxx patterns or something like xx xxx xx xxx etc.
For example, add something at - 01:03:913 - or del - 01:07:392 (52) -, etc.
The 2nd solution might be better 'cause then you can also:
- del - 01:21:305 (74,78) -, change - 01:22:609 (77) - to k and add d at - 01:23:044 -.
- better del - 01:26:087 (82,84) - to emphasize the 2 K and keep the thing simple.

All fixed
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'

Thank you mod

Nofool wrote:

Hey' mod req via pm.
Im a bit late as usual ;_; sorry.

[Nardo's Futsuu]

hey Nardo o/ Hey Nofool~ o/
good diff following the vocal as usual é_è, at least the diff is not really homogeous tho (i mean there are some part with a lot of notes and some with almost nothing, vocal irregularities).
- 00:41:305 (47,49) - swap colors ? Since the vocal pattern here is similar to 00:39:566 (43,44,45,46) - but with a higher pitch, I prefer using the same constellation.
_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

Good luck'

Thanks for your mod~

Nofool wrote:

Hey' mod req via pm.
Im a bit late as usual ;_; sorry.

[stu's Oni]

^ same comment,
- 00:35:218 maybe start the incoming spinner here tho ?
- 00:52:826 (54) del this, or add d at - 00:45:870 - and - 00:47:609 - ? for more consistency (first suggestion might be better).
- 01:01:305 start the kiai here ?_? the song goes high at this moment, not at - 01:00:870 -.
- 01:08:479 why nothing here but d at - 01:10:218 - :c ? maybe del that - 01:10:218 (147) - ?

Good luck'

Thanks for the mod~
Here

Hey ^^ mod from pm req. First mod after being afk for forever \o/

That's all from me. Hope it helps and Good Luck ^^

Hi~mod request by pm >w<
im so sorry~oni i pass =w=

H i M E wrote:

Hi~mod request by pm >w<

Nardo's Futsuu

00:02:609 (3) - move 00:02:826 - ? I followed the piano more in the prelude.
00:13:044 (22) - move 00:13:261 - ? Retained for mapping both the vocal and the piano.

im so sorry~oni i pass =w=

Thanks for your mod~

H i M E wrote:

Hi~mod request by pm >w<

Kantan

00:07:826 (9) - try to move 00:08:044 - ? keep
00:09:566 (11,12,13) - follow 00:07:826 (9,10) - ? fixed
01:13:479 (57) - move 01:13:261 - ? keep
01:14:348 (59) - try to del ? keep

Nardo's Futsuu

00:02:609 (3) - move 00:02:826 - ?
00:13:044 (22) - move 00:13:261 - ?

Muzukashii

01:05:218 (96,97) - ctrl+g ? fixed

stu's Oni

don't have recommendations

Oni

don't have recommendations

im so sorry~oni i pass =w=

Thank you mod

snowball112 wrote:

Hey ^^ mod from pm req. First mod after being afk for forever \o/

Kantan

- Maybe use 1.2 sv instead of 1.4? Might look strange to have the same SV for all diffs in general.

- Delete 00:20:000 (5). Maybe delete 00:21:739 (8) as well.

- Maybe remove 00:29:131 (19) to get a longer break before the longer pattern of 00:30:000 (20,21,22,23,24)?

- Maybe change the spacing in 00:37:826 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13)? I think that it would be better to make it more similar or more spaced out that 00:45:653 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35). From 15 onwards you have the drums, and the part before feels calmer. From this, I would suggest:
- add a note at 00:36:522.
- remove 00:37:826 (2,3).
- remove 00:39:566 (5).
- remove 00:41:305 (8).

- Remove 00:56:522 (31) to put more emphasis on 00:56:087 (30) and 00:56:957 (32)?

- Maybe make it so that 00:38:696 (4) and 00:40:435 (7) are the same? The piano sound feels similar so it might be better to make these the same. Similarly, you could make 00:42:174 (10) and 00:43:913 (13) the same as well since they have a similar sound here as well. Maybe dd for 4 and 7 and kk for 10 and 13?

- 00:59:566 (36,37) dd and 01:00:435 (38) k? Might sound better. You only have vocals here, so it might be better to use fewer claps as these would not be supported by the instruments.

- Move 01:04:348 (44) to 01:03:913 (44)? There is a guitar sound here that might be good to map and it might be good to space things out a bit.

- There are strong beats in the music at 01:08:696 and 01:10:435 and 01:10:870 where you have not placed any notes. I suggest you:
- move 01:07:826 (49) to 01:07:392.
- move 01:09:566 (52) to 01:08:696.
- add a note at 01:10:435.
- move 01:11:305 (54) to 01:10:870.

- Maybe move either 01:14:783 (60) or 01:13:913 (58) to 01:13:044? It may play better this way. Moving 58 might be the better option.

- Maybe move 01:21:739 (70) to 01:21:305 (70)? Very optional though.

- Maybe add a note before the spinner at 01:26:957 (79)?

Almost fixed

Nardo's Futsuu

- I feel that you use a lot of notes in the calm part from 00:31:739 (28) to 00:45:653 (57). In my opinion you could:
- remove 00:33:261 (32)?
- move 00:35:000 (37) to 00:36:087 (38)?
- remove 00:40:218 (45)?
- remove 00:41:957 (49)?

- Maybe remove 00:46:305 (59) and 00:47:174 (62)? This part is similar to 00:52:609 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80) but the latter feels stronger in my opinion, so you could contrast the two parts by leaving out two notes in the first part.

- Maybe move 00:50:653 (70) to 00:50:435 (70)? I think the piano sound feels stronger here.

- Maybe move 01:04:348 (101) to 01:03:913? I feel like the instrument sound at 01:03:913 is stronger and the vocals at 01:04:783 (102) than at 01:04:348 (101) , so it might be better to leave a space at 01:04:348 (101).

- Maybe remove 01:14:566 (126) and make 01:14:348 (125,126,127,128) kkd? There are claps in the music at 01:14:348 (125) and 01:14:783 (127) and it might be good to space things out a bit after 01:13:044 (121,122,123,124).

Muzukashii

- I feel like a note is missing at 00:07:392 (21). Maybe add one.

The part 00:08:044 (23) until the spinner 00:13:913 (1) feels a bit strange in places. I would recommend that you:
- move 00:08:261 (23) to 00:08:913 (25).
- remove 00:09:783 (29).
- move 00:10:218 (31) to 00:10:653 (32).
- remove 00:11:957 (38).
I feel these changes make the map follow the instruments better.

All fixed

That's all from me. Hope it helps and Good Luck ^^

Thank you mod

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Hey ^^ mod from pm req. First mod after being afk for forever \o/

Nardo's Futsuu

- I feel that you use a lot of notes in the calm part from 00:31:739 (28) to 00:45:653 (57). In my opinion you could:
- remove 00:33:261 (32)? I followed the vocal there.
- move 00:35:000 (37) to 00:36:087 (38)? ^
- remove 00:40:218 (45)? ^
- remove 00:41:957 (49)? ^

- Maybe remove 00:46:305 (59) and 00:47:174 (62)? This part is similar to 00:52:609 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80) but the latter feels stronger in my opinion, so you could contrast the two parts by leaving out two notes in the first part. The two parts are nearly the same except the slightly increased volume in the latter part. I prefer keeping the current one for a more reasonable difficulty as Futsuu.

- Maybe move 00:50:653 (70) to 00:50:435 (70)? I think the piano sound feels stronger here. I followed the vocal there.

- Maybe move 01:04:348 (101) to 01:03:913? I feel like the instrument sound at 01:03:913 is stronger and the vocals at 01:04:783 (102) than at 01:04:348 (101) , so it might be better to leave a space at 01:04:348 (101). ^

- Maybe remove 01:14:566 (126) and make 01:14:348 (125,126,127,128) kkd? There are claps in the music at 01:14:348 (125) and 01:14:783 (127) and it might be good to space things out a bit after 01:13:044 (121,122,123,124). The current pattern could give a better impact before the 2nd part of the kiai.

That's all from me. Hope it helps and Good Luck ^^

Thanks for your mod~