1. Easy (1,31 stars, 110 notes)
2. Hard (3,09 stars, 349 notes)
3. Normal (1,97 stars, 202 notes)

1. forget disable Widescreen support in easy
2. there breaks, you not gonna active letterbox during breaks for all diff's ?

1. 00:42:074 (3) - dunno why you did whistle in begin, change to finish feel better also you pattern ho don't forget change auto to drum in additions you have done other diff's
2. 00:52:509 (3) - ^ same
3. 00:55:117 (1) - whistle in end ? feel better with follow melody IMO
4. 01:15:987 (1) - missing change auto to drum in addition (begin)
5. 01:18:596 (3) - ^ same
6. 02:12:074 (4) - whistle in begin, there melody + vocal fell better IMO
7. 02:13:378 (1) - add finish in begin

1. 00:08:161 (2) - could put New combo because this you style could fix consistency example 00:02:944 (1,2), 00:10:770 (1) and many more, so that mean could fix you pattern I know you don't wanna alone (1) but that slider 00:05:552 (1) is long and very calm song part, so this 00:08:161 (2) new combo
2. 00:15:987 (3) - New combo, same explain before
3. 00:31:639 (1) - Need remove new combo color, again pattern example 00:34:248 (1,2,3,4,5) and many more
4. 01:38:813 (2) - you sure wanna keep stack with 01:40:770 (4) ? sometime is hard read for this diff IMO

1. 00:19:248 (3) - whislte or finish in repeat slider
2. 00:31:639 (1) - remove whistle and add finish, also in addition change normal to drum

1. 00:04:737 (4) - Intentional or not, this can be improve blanket with 00:05:552 (1) http://puu.sh/cj2Uh/e033de04c8.jpg just improve your gameplay
2. 00:31:639 (1) - this slider need move place to x:508 y:208 and in end point need move to x:496 y:296, just better flow with 00:32:291 (2)
3. 00:39:465 (1) - this shape, in end point need grid 3 left, need perfect same shape with 00:38:813 (3)
4. 00:41:422 (3) - can grid more down, just little clean overlap with 00:39:465 (1), is not big problem, but well
5. 01:02:291 (4) - don't wanna good stack with 01:00:661 (2) ?
6. 01:02:291 (4,1) - still need improve blanket
7. 02:13:378 (3) - missing NC

1. 00:05:552 (1) - no whistle in end ? missing pattern I think
2. 00:08:161 (1) - ^ same
3. 00:57:726 (1) - I feel this need add finish for all (begin, repeat and end), melody + beat strong feel better a lot IMO example 01:08:161 (1,2,3) - you can hear very carefully that part melody and beat is same this part.

1. 00:34:248 (1,2,3) - I don't really flow this part, if you do CTRL+G in00:34:574 (2) that flow and jump would really good, you can see testplay IMO if you don't wanna jump or thing, then change this part you own, I don't really like flow this part sorry
2. 00:43:704 (1) - IMO this don't need put new combo if you make jump, just my opinion
3. 00:45:009 (2) - after that speed change, could put NC, so that I know is speed is change
4. 00:54:139 (1) - no need nc same explain before
5. 01:34:248 (1) - I don't know... this sometime get me nervous because this slider, still prefer add 1/2 repeat and note I mean http://puu.sh/cj5aS/ef9201b2db.jpg I don't have problem this, but get me nervous lol...
6. 01:45:824 (1) - Dunno why you put new combo, baka remove new combo
7. 02:41:422 (1) - remove new combo and 02:42:074 (3) - put nc like other diff's is better

Pereira006 wrote:

Hi !!!!! as request Hey! You were fast xD.

[General]

1. forget disable Widescreen support in easy Fixed.
2. there breaks, you not gonna active letterbox during breaks for all diff's ? I don't like how it looks with the letterbox, anyway I'll wait for more opinions.

[Normal] whoops.. I think this is not the Normal, this is the Hard hehe

Hitsound:

1. 00:42:074 (3) - dunno why you did whistle in begin, change to finish feel better also you pattern ho don't forget change auto to drum in additions you have done other diff's
2. 00:52:509 (3) - ^ same
3. 00:55:117 (1) - whistle in end ? feel better with follow melody IMO
4. 01:15:987 (1) - missing change auto to drum in addition (begin)
5. 01:18:596 (3) - ^ same
6. 02:12:074 (4) - whistle in begin, there melody + vocal fell better IMO
7. 02:13:378 (1) - add finish in begin Oh well.. Fixed all the hitsounding xD

nice, different pattern from other diff's

Gameplay:

1. 00:08:161 (2) - could put New combo because this you style could fix consistency example 00:02:944 (1,2), 00:10:770 (1) and many more, so that mean could fix you pattern I know you don't wanna alone (1) but that slider 00:05:552 (1) is long and very calm song part, so this 00:08:161 (2) new combo
2. 00:15:987 (3) - New combo, same explain before
3. 00:31:639 (1) - Need remove new combo color, again pattern example 00:34:248 (1,2,3,4,5) and many more Fixed all of this on my own.
4. 01:38:813 (2) - you sure wanna keep stack with 01:40:770 (4) ? sometime is hard read for this diff IMO I think newbies have enough time to read this, due to the extremley low BPM and AR.

00:02:944 at 00:34:248 need remapped NC there inconsistecy from you pattern I see what you mean :3

[Normal]

hitsound:

1. 00:19:248 (3) - whislte or finish in repeat slider It looks like I missed a finish in there
2. 00:31:639 (1) - remove whistle and add finish, also in addition change normal to drum Done!

very consistency

Gameplay:

1. 00:04:737 (4) - Intentional or not, this can be improve blanket with 00:05:552 (1) http://puu.sh/cj2Uh/e033de04c8.jpg just improve your gameplay I was not trying a blanketing here :/, it was not my intention at all, in addition I like how this flow (it doesn't flow weird nor anything), so I prefer to keep that as it is.
2. 00:31:639 (1) - this slider need move place to x:508 y:208 and in end point need move to x:496 y:296, just better flow with 00:32:291 (2) I prefer to keep it, the pattern looks neater right now, and I think the flow is not bad here.
3. 00:39:465 (1) - this shape, in end point need grid 3 left, need perfect same shape with 00:38:813 (3) Sure thing.
4. 00:41:422 (3) - can grid more down, just little clean overlap with 00:39:465 (1), is not big problem, but well Moved some grids.
5. 01:02:291 (4) - don't wanna good stack with 01:00:661 (2) ? It was not my intention, it doesn't affect the gameplay I think. I prefer to keep the spacing sincerely.
6. 01:02:291 (4,1) - still need improve blanket I was not trying a blanket
7. 02:13:378 (3) - missing NC Is not really necessary, I don't want to have just a ''two objects combo'' here.

[Hard]

hitsound:

1. 00:05:552 (1) - no whistle in end ? missing pattern I think Vocals are not acting and I'm following vocals with my whistle in this section.
2. 00:08:161 (1) - ^ same this one is different.
3. 00:57:726 (1) - I feel this need add finish for all (begin, repeat and end), melody + beat strong feel better a lot IMO example 01:08:161 (1,2,3) - you can hear very carefully that part melody and beat is same this part. Yeah.. I still think this one sound a little lower than the others, still I made it consistent. (in all difficulties.)

Gameplay:

1. 00:34:248 (1,2,3) - I don't really flow this part, if you do CTRL+G in00:34:574 (2) that flow and jump would really good, you can see testplay IMO if you don't wanna jump or thing, then change this part you own, I don't really like flow this part sorry Personally, I really like how this flow .. I'll wait for more opinions about it.
2. 00:43:704 (1) - IMO this don't need put new combo if you make jump, just my opinion It makes sense.. removed!
3. 00:45:009 (2) - after that speed change, could put NC, so that I know is speed is change I think is not really necessary, I think we can learn this pattern easy listening to the song and the effect that I tried with the stack.
4. 00:54:139 (1) - no need nc same explain before Fixed.
5. 01:34:248 (1) - I don't know... this sometime get me nervous because this slider, still prefer add 1/2 repeat and note I mean http://puu.sh/cj5aS/ef9201b2db.jpg I don't have problem this, but get me nervous lol... loool... I'll keep it for now because I think this is the best way to follow drums in this section.
6. 01:45:824 (1) - Dunno why you put new combo, baka remove new combo lol.. removed xD
7. 02:41:422 (1) - remove new combo and 02:42:074 (3) - put nc like other diff's is better Okas

[]
Gameplay is nice still sometime improve, hitsound is nice I know is different from other diff's but there some inconsistency because you are missing pattern with you style
Any question ask me so I can explain better (you know I always said this... LOL )
I wish good luck !!

OblivioN wrote:

sorry for late
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easy

1. 00:41:096 (2) - the slider should end at 00:41:748 - I don't think so, because I'm following the instrumental here.
2. 01:38:813 (2,4) - does the placement allowed in easy diff ? ;w; im not sure ,but its hard for newbie ;w; At least is readable, I think they won't have that much problems with this pattern.
3. 02:14:683 (2,3) - why the distance different from 02:23:813 (3,4) - ? ;w; Because the slider velocity is higher in one part and this affect the spacing a bit.

Normal

1. 02:18:270 (1,1) - many it's unrankable(?!) in normal , delete 02:20:552 (1) - I don't think this is unrankable, if you say due to the time between objects, the BPM is extremely low and this is so far ok for this difficulty.

Hard

1. 00:19:900 (5,6) - not beautiful,try this： yeah.. tried something similar.

im helpless in this map .don't give me kds since I've changed a thing, I have to give you kudos xDD..

Sakura wrote:

[General]
El primer break se siente fuera de lugar (todas las diffs), es bien corto y mappeable. Prefiero mantenerlo, le da un toque especial al cambio del rock/pop a la parte del rap (al menos en mi opinion).

[Hard]
00:18:270 (6,7,1) - El ritmo de la musica es mas bien como "tun tun tun" sin pausa por debajo, creo que una serie de anti-jumps o un stream de 3 notas quedaría mejor que un stack. Hmm.. Bueno, comprimi eso.
01:10:117 (6,1) - Se vería mejor si curvearas el 6 hacia arriba y el 1 hacia abajo. Me gusta mas recto
02:18:107 (4) - Agrega un finish? Ok, agregue un ''drum finish''

[Normal]
00:32:943 (3,1) - Stack ya que la musica para por un momento? Se siente mejor que tambien debería haber una pausa en el movimiento. Por lo general no uso stacks entre sliders, ademas siento que si seguis el movimiento le da un mejor toque. Lo que quiero decir, es que la parte del ''silencio'' ya esta representada mismo en el slider (3) y no seria del todo necesario representarlo despues porque ya paso ese momento.
02:18:270 (1,1) - Uh sorry pero en una Normal la nota que va despues de un spinner tiene que tener como minimo 2/1 intermedio.Hmm.. No se, el BPM es muy bajo, de todos modos lo cambio por ahora.

[Easy]
02:18:270 (1,1) - Uh lo siento mancuso pero en una Easy la nota que va despues de un spinner tiene que tener 4/1 intermadio como minimo. En este caso prefiero mantenerlo, empieza el kiai asi que algo tiene que haber ahi, reducir la longitud del slider no es una solucion ya que quedaria muy corto para esta dificultad, ademas yo creo que tenes que considerar el bajo BPM. Considerandolo una distancia de 4/1 es muy grande y el jugador tiene que esperar mucho para la siguiente nota, en cambio, con respecto al 2/1 el jugador tiene el tiempo suficiente para un pequeño descanso y para volver a empezar.

En cuanto a las notas despues de los spinners, en Easy empieza con 4/1 y se divide a la mitad en cada dificultad (2/1 para normal, 1/1 para Hard, Insane o para arriba lo que sea), Suerte /o/ (y yo ya estoy medio dormida) Deja de hacer mapas en los que no encuentro casi nada pls X_X lol

Kenezz wrote:

ohmygosh <3

1. Esta como muy lejos en cuanto a dificultad el normal del hard, no? easy es 1.31, el normal es 1.97 y hard es 3.09.
2. El volumen de la parte después del break de verdad (no el chiquitico :v) hasta antes del kiai del final, se oye un poco fuerte. Esto se nota más en el hard que es donde hay más notas. Creo que es mejor si le bajas un poco.
3. A esto le hace falta un SB sencillo o algo xD

1. 01:02:943 (3) - 01:13:378 (3) - Aunque para este sonido el slider con tantas repeticiones sí es una buena solución... no estoy muy de acuerdo con la forma recta... esto es porque hay otros sliders con un tamaño y forma similar de solo dos repeticiones, y si vienen acostumbrados a solo dos, puede confundir... me parece que haciendolo curvo (como 02:39:465 (3) - ) lo hace parecer un poco más notorio. O podías probar dandole otra forma, pero la cuestión es que ojalá no se viera parecido a los anteriores.
2. 01:47:291 (1,3) - stack xD
3. Very nice.

1. 00:08:161 (1) - (nazi) stack.
2. 01:00:661 (2,4) - mm.. stack?
3. no more xD

1. 00:03:922 (2,3) - 00:04:737 (4,5) - 00:09:139 (2,3) - nazi stack.. hay.. lol, son muchos y están por todo el mapa, dale una revizasa a eso mejor xD
2. 00:09:954 (4,5,6) - Este patrón lo sentí muy extraño al jugarlo, de verdad fue incómodo. Aunque intentabas variar, creo que un slider se siente mejor:
   
3. 01:34:248 (1) - Algo parecido al del easy... antes hay sliders con esa misma forma, so.. por favor, concidera ponerle otra forma que no sea la misma de los otros. Esto mejoraría la legibilidad.
4. 01:58:052 - podrías agregar una nota aquí (para terminar lo que canta el rapero xD).

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Hi Hola eru :p

[general]

1. Esta como muy lejos en cuanto a dificultad el normal del hard, no? easy es 1.31, el normal es 1.97 y hard es 3.09. Pero creo que el spread es correcto, si jugas todos los mapas la diferencia entre los mapas no es tal. Ademas, creo que esta bien que esta Hard sea un poquito mas dificil ya que es la mas dificil del mapa.
2. El volumen de la parte después del break de verdad (no el chiquitico :v) hasta antes del kiai del final, se oye un poco fuerte. Esto se nota más en el hard que es donde hay más notas. Creo que es mejor si le bajas un poco. Creo que tenes razon, lo baje un poco.
3. A esto le hace falta un SB sencillo o algo xD lol.. soy malo para esas cosas jaja

[Easy]

1. 01:02:943 (3) - 01:13:378 (3) - Aunque para este sonido el slider con tantas repeticiones sí es una buena solución... no estoy muy de acuerdo con la forma recta... esto es porque hay otros sliders con un tamaño y forma similar de solo dos repeticiones, y si vienen acostumbrados a solo dos, puede confundir... me parece que haciendolo curvo (como 02:39:465 (3) - ) lo hace parecer un poco más notorio. O podías probar dandole otra forma, pero la cuestión es que ojalá no se viera parecido a los anteriores. Sinceramente, esteticamente me gusta mas recto, en mi opinion no molesta mucho :/. Prefiero dejarlo asi por ahora.
2. 01:47:291 (1,3) - stack xD lol.. muy pequeño, pero bueno
3. Very nice.

[Normal]

1. 00:08:161 (1) - (nazi) stack. :o.. listo.
2. 01:00:661 (2,4) - mm.. stack? naa.. prefiero mantener el DS, ademas que no se nota durante el juego.
3. no more xD

[Hard]

1. 00:03:922 (2,3) - 00:04:737 (4,5) - 00:09:139 (2,3) - nazi stack.. hay.. lol, son muchos y están por todo el mapa, dale una revizasa a eso mejor xD Son algo menores, no los diferencias mientras jugas el mapa, arregle unos pocos nada mas :p
2. 00:09:954 (4,5,6) - Este patrón lo sentí muy extraño al jugarlo, de verdad fue incómodo. Aunque intentabas variar, creo que un slider se siente mejor: Creo que tenes razon, hecho.
   
3. 01:34:248 (1) - Algo parecido al del easy... antes hay sliders con esa misma forma, so.. por favor, concidera ponerle otra forma que no sea la misma de los otros. Esto mejoraría la legibilidad. Hmm.. lo dejare por ahora pero lo considerare.
4. 01:58:052 - podrías agregar una nota aquí (para terminar lo que canta el rapero xD). Ya veo, pero prefiero dejarlo donde estan remarcado los platillos

Good luck o/

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

1. A esto le hace falta un SB sencillo o algo xD

XinCrin wrote:

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

1. A esto le hace falta un SB sencillo o algo xD

I agree!

HabiHolic wrote:

From #modreqs

Easy

1. 00:13:378 - volume is -25~ 20%? i think this part is silent. sounds good for me, I'll keep it for now but I'll wait for more suggestions about it.
2. 00:23:813 - note add batter I prefer to keep this as it is. It provides a better transition between the rock/pop part and the rap part.
3. 01:15:009 - your this use greenline? yeah.. is increasing the volume in the following object, check it properly again.
4. 01:41:748 - flow is vocal. so add note here But I prefer to don't make this pattern that long because it is an easy after all. I think covering the places that I've covered is enough for this difficulty.

Normal

1. 00:23:813 - same Easy diff Same.
2. 00:30:335 (2,3) - Ctrl + g is batter rhythm It can be but I'm following the instrumental here and using off-beats in this way can be hard to read for average players.
3. 00:34:900 (2) - please made correct straight line Sorry xD.. Fixed.
   
   SPOILER

   

Hard

1. 00:23:813 - same Easy diff Same.
2. 01:05:226 (6) - Ctrl + G? Naa.. the flow will be weird and the music goes in a same pitch, is not necessary a jump nor anything here.

that all. Best of Luck~!

wcx19911123 wrote:

m4m here, sorry for the delay don't worry.

[Easy]
00:28:704 (3) - how about moving it up and left a bit? to make the curve 00:27:726 (2,3,4) - looks better that's true.. Fixed.
00:43:704 (5) - ^, this one should be right and down a bit Moved some grids.
01:44:030 (3) - how about changing it to a repeat slider with the same rhythm as 01:42:726 (2) - ? following the both vocal at 01:43:215 - and 01:44:520 - really make sense I prefer to don't overuse them in this difficulty, I think this 1/1 slider follow vocals in a good way and it'll be a simple thing for new players.

[Hard]
01:57:726 (1) - ctrl+h on this? stack doesn't fit the song imo Hmm.. I prefer the stack sincerely.
02:42:074 (1) - moving it to x:256 y:144? jump a bit larger but it would fit the song better imo is a quite large jump here, and it was not my intention :/. Sorry, but I'll keep it!

nothing to mod lol
good luck

Sonnyc wrote:

[Easy]
00:32:291 (2) - A grid up please. Done.
01:04:900 (4) - Personally this rhythm with 01:04:411 feels a little tricky for [Easy], but well nvm. Yeah, it's a bit tricky but it was the best way to simplify this pattern.
01:49:248 (3) - Is the added whistle at the head intended? Not really, it was supposed to be at the end of it xD. Fixed.

[Hard]
01:00:987 (3) - Flipping the curve vertically constructs a better flow. I've decided to keep this one as it is. I personally like how this flow/look this pattern, so yeah..

The storyboard is bright, and I'm pretty doubtful if the violet combo color is 100% readable. Some parts like 02:17:454 (2,3,4) in [Hard]. Testing the map, I've to agree with you. I made this violet darker, I think this is more readable now.

Kenezz wrote:

ohmygosh <3

CSLMVenezuela wrote:

hola mancu...
el mapa me gusta mucho, la cancion me la he estado tarareando toda la semana xD
una sugerencia para Xin. no creo necesario el objeto de "particle" en el primer kiai. En el segundo si pero no en el primero ya que eno es la mayor parte de intensidad. Las particulas son un añadimiento que se le agrega a las partes map intensas o emotivas/nostalgicas de la cancion. Entonces yo sugiero que le quites las particulas en el primer kiai :3

XinCrin wrote:

CSLMVenezuela wrote:

hola mancu...
el mapa me gusta mucho, la cancion me la he estado tarareando toda la semana xD
una sugerencia para Xin. no creo necesario el objeto de "particle" en el primer kiai. En el segundo si pero no en el primero ya que eno es la mayor parte de intensidad. Las particulas son un añadimiento que se le agrega a las partes map intensas o emotivas/nostalgicas de la cancion. Entonces yo sugiero que le quites las particulas en el primer kiai :3

Hmm nah, a mi me gustan como luces, ademas como lo dijiste en las partes de "intensidad" y siento que los Kiais son suficiente justificaciòn. Ademàs en el primer kiai las particulas son solo blancas y el segundo kiai las particulas intercalan el color entre rosado/azul.