Zero__wind wrote:

00:43:780 (3) - this jump feels kinda big, maybe move it to around (196,368)? no
00:48:622 (6) - change it into a 1/4 slider, or two circles? because I think the beat at 00:48:740 - is more important than 00:48:858 - fixed
00:52:166 (6) - clap sounds better here fixed
00:59:725 (1) - similar to above, better add clap here fixed
01:03:504 - ^ fixed
01:09:173 (1) - the rhythm here seems wrong, I think there's no beat at 01:09:233 - , but rather at 01:09:351 - . I mean this 1/8 slider should better be moved to 01:09:292 - and a circle could be added at 01:09:173 - instead like fixed
01:10:827 (5) - clap on head instead should fit the music better imo fixed
01:16:969 (4) - clap sounds better than whistle here fixed
01:17:559 (2,3) - maybe CTRL+G ? no
01:20:276 - clap sounds better here fixed
01:24:055 (2) - ^ fixed
01:31:969 - ^ fixed
01:53:229 (1,2) - spacing feels a bit too small, I misread it as 1/2 jump when testing. maybe use 1.5x spacing between 01:53:229 (1,2,3) - fixed
04:12:244 - I think clap would sound better at this point, and on 04:12:717 (4) - fixed
04:19:803 (2) - ^ fixed
04:22:284 (5,1) - don't really like this stack, I'd rather prefer to move smoothly instead. consider something like the pic below? fixed

sample

04:24:173 (5,2) - maybe move them together to (364,380)? it feels a bit weird to me to stack 04:24:055 (4,5) - together fixed
04:27:362 (2,1) - please try clap instead of whistle for them! it sounds much better than whistle spam fixed
05:00:551 (1,2,1) - this jump feels too big and forced for this part, there's no such big jump even in the kiais, so please use a smaller jump here. try moving 05:00:906 (2) - to around (368,104) fixed
05:05:630 (5,1) - same here. there's only 1/4 beat between 05:05:630 (5,1) - while the spacing inbetween is much bigger than the one between 05:05:984 (1,2) - where there's a 1/2-beat gap. try something like the pic below fixed

sample

Zero__wind wrote:

recheck, no kd

03:42:835 - since you mapped this part, your namecard(storyboard) should remain here, till 04:03:622 - I already fixed. Please try again redownload
03:50:394 (1,3) - consider shorten them by 1/4 beat. the jump is acceptable, but I'd say, not really good and intuitive in such a slow part. there are clear melody sounds at 03:50:866 - and 03:52:756 - so it won't be weird I see fixed

nothing else, good job

rui wrote:

03:42:835 - since you mapped this part, your namecard(storyboard) should remain here, till 04:03:622 - I already fixed. Please try again redownload