Low wrote:

[General]
- for all the silent sliderslides, you must use this 44 byte blank.wav file: http://puu.sh/cG1Sh/91c958581a.wav

[Easy]
00:42:400 (5) - add a NC to follow your combo pattern.
00:43:900 (1) - remove the NC here; it's pointless.
00:46:150 (1) - remove the clap from the start of this slider and add one to the end of it.
01:11:650 (1) - add a finish at the end of this slider to follow the music.
01:25:900 (3) - making the curve of this slider less drastic would be better for an easy difficulty. try this

SPOILER

[Normal]
- deserves to be AR 5.3~5.5. it fits a lot better to me. 4.8 is way too slow for a difficulty like this.
01:39:400 (5) - finish.

[Rin's Insane]
00:55:900 (1,2) - kind of jarring to play on the first try; made me confused a little. i strongly suggest stacking (2) under (1).
00:56:743 (2) - same thing. this one is especially bad since the start of it is obscured by 00:56:556 (6).
01:33:025 (1,2,3,1) - very difficult to read as 1/3 if you've never heard the song before. i strongly suggest making these into a slider or two for easier readability.

[Expert]
01:09:025 (1,2,3,1) - difficult to read/play as 1/3 since you use similar spacing as 1/4 in the same diff. make this into a slider
01:33:025 (1,2,3,1) - same as above, but you could use two sliders.
01:39:400 - add a circle here. it feels very odd to play 01:39:025 (3,1) since it sounds like something's missing.

that's it

Low wrote:

bubbled

CDFA wrote:

My friend smoked weed and told me to mod this

Extra:
00:02:275 (3) - It kinda sucks how this goes back on itself. IT's all hard to see and stuff
00:23:462 (4) - The jump to (1) is way too big and it's really jerky since it goes in the opposite direction D:
00:52:056 (3,4) - You can avoid this overlap ;w;
01:47:275 (2) - This jump ;AAA;

Insane:
01:33:150 (1,1) - Remove NCs

Hard:
00:03:775 (2) - Overlaps pls
00:40:150 (1,2,3) - Try not to have this go back over itself
00:41:650 (1,2,3) - ^
00:43:150 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Normal:
00:55:525 (2) - You forgot the clap
00:57:400 - In fact you forgot a lot of claps here

I'm questioning the diff spread of this and hard. I'll get a QATs opinion

Easy:
Fine

I'll get back to you on what the QAT people say

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Gratz !
Btw.
Why isn't BMS the first source ? it should be it imo.
http://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cg ... 9&event=67

CDFA wrote:

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Gratz !
Btw.
Why isn't BMS the first source ? it should be it imo.
http://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cg ... 9&event=67

pls