Thanks for the modsmallboat wrote:
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- Red words: Should be fixed.
- Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
- Black words : In my opinion.
[General]
- Estellia-'s Normal missed a " SliderBorder : 255,255,255 " this skin color,need to be fixed it. ok
- Cancel Widescreen Support in Lunatic diff,keep these consistent. ok
- Why not add some sliderslide to mute the slide voice ?
- Missed a element : reversearrow.png
[Hard][Insane]
- 01:00:895 (5) - Missed a NC here? (As like 01:44:976 (1) - this) to be consistent with 01:41:711 (5)
- 01:41:711 (5) - The same as above. vice versa
- 01:51:371 (4) - Downbeat voice is here,suggest use a NC easy to read there. because I use the stacks solely for 2/3 beats, I think it's fine
[Lunatic]
- 01:16:677 (4,5) - Maybe can use these notes do a symmetry? changed somewhat
- 01:51:371 (3) - Downbeat voice is here,suggest use a NC easy to read there. realised my combo pattern differed from the earlier part so I changed it to be the same now
- 00:24:024 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why this part jump are not in the same with 00:19:262 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? (Same tune),maybe you can make the (4) and (5) make jump only : It actually sounds different, hence there was more of a stop at 3 because of the difference
- 01:51:371 (5) - Downbeat voice is here,suggest use a NC easy to read there. I think it's still fine
- 01:57:902 (5) - Move to (99|197) make the DS consistent? shifted elsewhere
- 02:05:385 (3) - Feel this flow have bit weird,maybe can use a ctrl+g here? I don't think that would work out, I will keep this for now
- 02:07:289 (4) - Sounds like this sonud have a bit loud and noisy (I listen to the background music has no so loudly hs voice there),turn down a bit volume here? changed to 40% then
- 02:46:473 (4) - The same as above. ^
- 02:55:861 (3) - Feel this 1/3 note have bit far,suggest to place close a bit here? k
Thanks for the modPho wrote:
Kind of a late M4M, but I wanted you to check the other mods first before do one.
This feels so similar to play to the one you modded for me.
Trifle: Just small things you might want to consider. Blanket's are trifle for me as well.
Preference: Just my humble opinion on stuff.
Written in bold: Fix this up as soon as possible.
[General][Hard]
- 'Lunatic' diff still has widescreen support enabled, please fix.
- (I just hope the diff spreads fine between normal-hard-insane... since i got a similar one >.>)
- Check your hitcircle/hitcircleoverlay.jpg again. At the left-bottom of the circles, you can see that the overlay is slightly off. It's very minuscule, might be good to check it yourself. http://puu.sh/cAeL7/74aa29bc5b.jpg
Beatmap-specific:- 01:39:262 - This note has a strong accent, so I recommend you set a additional HS here (whistle-HS maybe)
- Nice HS and Skin btw.
Sorry, but I just can't see any major issue in changing the spacing, the 2 different spacings are consistent enough throughout the map, and they don't hinder too much the difficulty in hitting them. I only adjusted 1 of the blankets to make it better
- Spacing's kind of an issue here, as you switch between 1.0x and 1.4x (and several other DSes inbetween) at pure slider sections very often and it sometimes feels quite inconsistent. Check it out yourself again, I'll just point those out that i find kind of irritating. all the changes in spacing were intended, I also only used certain spacings at certain placeings, so that it isn't too confusing
Also, the DS between your slider sections is a bit shaky, so check on that again.- 00:25:793 (2) - Trifle: Add another red anchor (and a white one) to the slider so it fits more to the 'spooky' sound. http://puu.sh/cAg9g/9e257438f6.jpg I think it's fine, I wanted it to be more straght actually
- Slight spacing issues at the following places: 00:28:242 (1,2,3) - 00:59:262 (1,2,3) -
- 00:36:405 (1,2,3,4,1) - Hmm... I don't feel right about this. It sure adds some variation when you increase the DS at certain parts so the sliders don't overlap each other, but I don't feel like this section needs it.
There is like no increase in tension in the music, I'd just go with the regular 1.0xDS here. I don't see a reason why 1.0 should used here though- 00:47:017 (3,4) - Can try to blanket this if you want. other than the centre part, it spaces equally from the sl
- 00:49:466 (1,2,3,4) - Feels like this combo is 'weaker' than the one before at 00:47:834 (1,2,3,4) - , so I#d go with 1.0xDS here. same thing
- 00:54:364 (1,2,3,4) - Preference: Feels more like this should 1.4xDS like at 00:47:834 (1,2,3,4) - , for consistency.
- 01:00:078 (3,4) - Preference: I don't feel good with the DS change here. Space it 1.4x should be fine and makes it look more consistent: http://puu.sh/cAgWu/efd1e480f3.jpg
The same's at 01:06:609 (3,4,1) - .- 01:13:956 (1,2,3,4) - It would be great if you can put a little more effort into spacing these sliders more consistent. (at 1.5x DS)
This issue seems to be at every slider section in the kiai times.- 01:17:085 (1,2,3,4) - Preference: same as above (not much, but I'm pretty picky about this). Same with 01:23:616 (1,2,3,4) -
- 01:30:691 (2,3,4) - Wouldn't it make more sense to put the jump at 3-4? Would fit better to both the vocal and the bg instruments.
- 01:40:078 (1,2,3,4) - Consistent 1.0xDS spacing, like you did at 01:43:344 (1,2,3,4) - ?
- 01:47:425 (3,4) - You should space this 1.50xDS as well: http://puu.sh/cAhYq/cd65d1c526.jpg
- 02:05:793 (4,1,2) - Preference: Jump between 4-1 should be bigger, maybe same DS like between 02:06:201 (1,2) - ? it is already bigger than usual
- 02:21:303 (2,3) - Preference: Increase the distance to 2.5x just like you did at 02:27:834 (2,3) - : http://puu.sh/cAitt/c98f90b77c.jpg
[Insane][Lunatic]
- I really don't know about these various spacings, as I really don't feel comfortable with them (mostly differing DS between certain slider sections where I can't see an intention behind at, for example 01:17:085 (1,2,3,4) - ).
I don't want to point them all out as this would make this mod explode. The same goes for the Lunatic as well (sample: see 00:12:596 (3,4,5) - ).- 00:12:187 (1,2,3) - Trifle: why is this not symmetrical to the y-axis? ;-;
- 00:22:936 (6,3) - Try to arrange the sliders so that 6's sliderend is fully overlapped by 3 or both sliderend's are stacked for better aesthetics: http://puu.sh/cAj8D/0b82abf653.jpg or http://puu.sh/cAjay/1d0200f7b5.jpg
- 00:27:834 (6,1,2) - I don't really understand the higher DS between these sliders here, Better stick with the same 1.3x DS within the orange combo.
- 00:48:242 (2,5) - I don't feel like overlap works great here, try stacking with 2? http://puu.sh/cAk0W/d102f67167.jpg
- 00:59:126 (1) - Random NC here? This is the only 1-combo I've seen in your map, better delete it. The same for the Lunatic map. due to the stack, this is to distiguish the more complex time difference between them
- 01:03:752 (5,6) - Probably not intended to be blanketed, but it might be good to do so. shifted it slightly
- 01:27:289 - Sounds like you're following the vocal at this part, so adding a circlebeat here sounds reasonable. I rather start when the vocals do so too
- 01:22:527 (2,3) - Bow pattern here? I don't feel like the jump between 2-3 isnecessary at all.
- 01:24:160 (2,4) - Looks neat if you could arrange it such that both are symmetrical to y axis. both are already on level plane
- 02:27:425 (1,3) - Please arrange this such that they don't overlap anymore.
- 02:59:534 (5,6) - Preference: These 'jump after triples', I've only seen in your Lunatic map so far, and only once in this map. It actually works, but doesn't look really great.
Put in addtition that this is the only diff where 03:00:078 (1) - is actually a slider, and not a circle like in the other diffs, I recommend you something like: http://puu.sh/cAl5Y/fc2ed83a26.jpgThe maps are really great all in all, flow is neat in every map and I like the gimmicky jumps between triples and (damn singletap)streams in your hardest diff.
- 00:21:711 (1,3) - Imperfect stack perfect on my side
- 00:23:752 (2,3) - I'd rather combine them into a slider, fits much better imo. it's for the stop and star effect
- 00:39:670 (1) - Put at y:199 for perfect stack ok
- 00:43:616 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Use 0.6xDS as 0.5 feels too low imo, and make the shape better. Just an example: http://puu.sh/cAmLP/f3877718b5.jpg it's for a step effect, and the straight movements were intended
- 01:58:854 (3,1) - Try to avoid this overlap, this one looks kind of bad. avoided overlap
- Not much for this, I guess. I mentioned spacing stuff in your other diffs already.
I just wish for a bit more spacing consistency at your harder maps, even if no one seems to care about that anymore ...
Tl;dr: Mapset's great, but still needs finer tuning in my eyes. Good luck for the ranks!
Sorry I just couldn't really explain in words why I adjusted the spacing the way it is like this, I usually do it whenever hear a song and adjust according to what I feel with the song. As for the switching around with various spacing, I always try to do it consistently such that the switch itself becomes a consistency which makes it easier to recognise
@Estellia, code box next time man pls..