0,0,"BG-pikachu.jpg",0,20

1. 00:39:192 (10,11,15) - Not sure why you decided to only include the lead-in note on (10,11) when (15) sounds the exact same. consider adding a note at 00:42:457 - Either d or k.
2. 00:49:804 (9) - Maybe remove this finish? It's in a string of 1/2 notes so this might be a bit hard to play. There isn't really any drums or vocals emphasizing this, even if it sounds nice.
3. 00:50:212 (10) - k?
4. 00:51:437 - add k? A bit empty since there is vocals here.
5. 00:57:151 (10) - move to 00:57:968 - to be more intune with the rhythm/vocals? (even if the vocals are offbeat)
6. 01:10:212 (16) - Delete this? lead-in notes are generally awkward to play (especially here), and I feel this is better without this note. It also gives more of a break that seems to be needed these days.

1. 00:16:743 (8,1) - Swap for d k instead? Feels a bit more natural because of the way the bass works up to a high note on (1)
2. 00:23:274 (12,13,14,15) - Wouldn't this work better for Futsuu if you removed all these notes to allow a break? You allow breaks for similar parts elsewhere, so it would make sense to allow the little break here.
3. Kiai #1 | This feels a bit underwhelming because the whole entire kiai lacks any 1/2 notes while you use plenty elsewhere outside of it. I feel like you should try to add some triple 1/2's to match the vocals. Consider adding one at 00:54:906 - (vocals) and 01:07:968 - to match it. Because you add one later on at 01:05:927 (12) - . You should add one at 00:52:865 - This should give at least enough variety to keep even Futsuu players from getting bored, and still not feel overwhelmed in the slightest.
4. 00:56:743 (13,14) - Consider removing these, or at least (14) | This would at least allow the map to have more variety in terms of spacing as everything here is just 1/1 spacing. Also so it's similar to 01:09:804 -'s spacing.

1. 00:04:294 - d? Following the vocals as much as you do, this 1/1 section feels like it could use more density.
2. 00:38:376 - k? Whenever I play this section is feels extremely empty. You've already given more than enough gaps (hopefully) by this time that you shouldn't have to have these big gaps. I'm suggesting a k here because it fits the vocals nicely. I'd also suggest moving 00:41:437 (85) - 1/2 ahead, but it is fine where it is if you don't want to.
3. 01:18:988 (196) - I'm not really fan of how this doesn't match up with anything in the music. Maybe consider deleting it? (note should start 1/4 later, but I have no idea if that's too hard for a muzu or not)

1. 01:19:192 (383) - d | Because it matches up with the drum kick of 01:18:784 (381) - it feels like a d

Lanturn wrote:

Hello. random mod here because I love Pokemon XY and this song. Just note that I do NOT normally mod Taiko, so treat this as a regular mod, not a BAT mod.

[General]
http://www.j-dz.com/artist/Jdeez/discography/SRCL-8570
http://youtu.be/jsY9BPJG4V4?t=59s
Artist: J☆Dee’Z with ピカチュウ
Romanized Artist: J*Dee'z with Pikachu | The star isn't a supported unicode letter, but we still include any that aren't accepted by using an asterisk.
Fixed

Source: ポケットモンスター エックスワイ (I kid you not. This is the title that TV Tokyo uses.) http://www.tv-tokyo.co.jp/anime/pokemon_xy/index2.html
ポケットモンスター ＸＹ could also be used, as they're both official (I'd use the first one though). エックスワイ is just X Y in Japanese.
Fixed (I use ポケットモンスター ＸＹ)

Tags: Ending TV Size 大谷育江 Ootani Ikue Pokemon Pocket Monsters Pokémon XY Kalos Nintendo Game Freak 3DS xtrem3x Neku okazaki
Ootani and the Japanese is Pikachu's voice actor, so she should be included in the tags. I added your tags at the end so you can happily copy/paste
Missing from your tags is Neku okazaki
Fixed

BG: Here's a BG without the watermark in the top right: http://puu.sh/cf4RI.jpg
Consider lowering it by about 20 so both the heads feel more included. The top pikachu is a bit cut off/
Under Events in the .osu files.

0,0,"BG-pikachu.jpg",0,20

Fixed and thanks for the bg!

Timing: The below needs to be fixed. Change the S into an N so you don't get a soft hit on the very first note.

Fixed

[Kantan]

1. 00:39:192 (10,11,15) - Not sure why you decided to only include the lead-in note on (10,11) when (15) sounds the exact same. consider adding a note at 00:42:457 - Either d or k.
2. 00:49:804 (9) - Maybe remove this finish? It's in a string of 1/2 notes so this might be a bit hard to play. There isn't really any drums or vocals emphasizing this, even if it sounds nice.
3. 00:50:212 (10) - k?
4. 00:51:437 - add k? A bit empty since there is vocals here.
5. 00:57:151 (10) - move to 00:57:968 - to be more intune with the rhythm/vocals? (even if the vocals are offbeat)
6. 01:10:212 (16) - Delete this? lead-in notes are generally awkward to play (especially here), and I feel this is better without this note. It also gives more of a break that seems to be needed these days.

I think there was an update or something in between this. not sure if you changed anything, but keep that in mind for the previous diff.
All applied

[Futsuu]
This one is pretty nice. I don't really have anything to say about it.

1. 00:16:743 (8,1) - Swap for d k instead? Feels a bit more natural because of the way the bass works up to a high note on (1)
2. 00:23:274 (12,13,14,15) - Wouldn't this work better for Futsuu if you removed all these notes to allow a break? You allow breaks for similar parts elsewhere, so it would make sense to allow the little break here.
3. Kiai #1 | This feels a bit underwhelming because the whole entire kiai lacks any 1/2 notes while you use plenty elsewhere outside of it. I feel like you should try to add some triple 1/2's to match the vocals. Consider adding one at 00:54:906 - (vocals) and 01:07:968 - to match it. Because you add one later on at 01:05:927 (12) - . You should add one at 00:52:865 - This should give at least enough variety to keep even Futsuu players from getting bored, and still not feel overwhelmed in the slightest.
4. 00:56:743 (13,14) - Consider removing these, or at least (14) | This would at least allow the map to have more variety in terms of spacing as everything here is just 1/1 spacing. Also so it's similar to 01:09:804 -'s spacing.

All applied

Good luck.

LNP- wrote:

[centre]Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map

Called from ♪ ichia7x's [AllMode] Modding Queue ♪

xtrem3x Oni

> 00:14:702 (57) - d << high sound
> 00:16:335 (65) - k << follow specific noise .....
> 00:29:192 (128) - d << ok (?)
> 00:37:763 - add d << a soft hit .. good XD

Pika Pika >w<
good luck!

LNP- wrote:

Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map

Called from ♪ ichia7x's [AllMode] Modding Queue ♪

d= don
k= kat
D= big don
K= big kat

Kantan

> 00:08:988 (13,14) - d k
> 00:42:457 (15) - d

Futsuu

> 00:35:927 (11,12) - k d
> 01:19:804 (20) - k

Muzukashii

> 00:02:865 (10) - k
> 00:23:070 (39) - k
> 00:58:988 (139) - k
> 01:19:804 (200) - k

All applied

Pika Pika >w< Pikachuu~
good luck!

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my mod requeue

[ xtrem3x Oni]
00:09:600 (35) - Delete << Questionable but change previous note to k00:10:416 (38,39) - ctrl+g <<< ctrl+g in 39,40 XD00:21:437 (90) - k << itsumo omoi? ... no ... itsumo Omoi (91)01:15:621 (363) - Add note k << ok (but questionable)

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my mod requeue

[ Kantan]

1. 00:03:682 (6) - D Fix
2. 00:31:845 (2) - move to 00:32:049 ??? nope
3. 00:33:886 (4) - move to 00:33:682 ??? ^
4. 00:48:172 (6) - move to 00:48:376 ^
5. 00:49:396 (8,10) - ctrl+g Fix

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:01:233 (2) - k Fix
2. 00:26:539 (18) - k Fix
3. 00:31:845 (2) - move to 00:32:049 nope
   if ^ Fixed 00:32:253 (3) - move to 00:32:661
4. 00:33:070 (4) - d Fix
5. 00:33:478 (5) - move to 00:33:682 nope, but I add a note in 00:34:294
   if ^ Fixed 00:33:886 (6) - move to 00:34:294

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:02:253 (7,8) - ctrl+g and 00:02:865 (10) - d nope
2. 00:07:355 (18,19) - ctrl+g nope, 00:07:763 (20,22) - ctrl+g nope and 00:08:172 (22,23) - k Fix
3. 00:26:743 (50,51) - ctrl+g and 00:27:151 (52,53) - ctrl+g Fix
4. 00:37:968 to 00:44:090 - I'm think you should have some a note Because your Futsuu is have note more than Muzukashii okay
5. 00:58:172 (135,136) - ctrl+g Fix

mingmichael wrote:

i want to mod this o3o

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


====================


[ Kantan]

General

☞ remove widescreen support! Fix

☞ change HP and OD to be 3. 2 is too low for Kantan Fix

Notes Structure

☞ patterns are well here, but consider to add more breaks (1/1 breaks or if possible more than 1/1 breaks) for the Kantan. but basically your usage of breaks are already enough, just needs a bit more only. the suggestions could be seen on the Notes box

Notes

• look the first part, from 00:00:417 - ~ 00:11:029 - . Kantan almost has a same pattern like Futsuu, see this one :


see? even Futsuu has denser pattern, but that basic pattern is same with 1/1 patterns. in here, i will try to improve the Futsuu later. next time, please manage the patterns properly. even they are different, but the basic one is still same, so they just look "easier" and "harder" only with the same basic

• no no no, remove finisher on 00:03:682 - . what is it for? you didn't use finisher in your another diffs Fix

• here, change 00:21:233 - to be kat and delete 00:22:049 - . you will see this kind of pattern from 00:20:008 - ~ 00:22:457 - : Fix

here i must say this. Kantan doesn't need any complicated patterns, i mean you can follow many kind of sounds like vocals/instruments, but we can ignore those vocals/instruments because sometime if we follow whole of those sounds it will just increase the difficulty of the patterns only and in this case, this diff is Kantan. we should map Kantan with the easy pattern with easy notes so all newbie taiko players will be able to play this

• this note can be with a don 00:24:498 - . IMO o o o is easier than o o o for Kantans Fix

• delete 00:28:580 - one. remember that we can ignore some vocals/instruments to avoid the dense patterns Fix

• this one would be perfect. change 00:31:845 - to be don and add a kat on 00:32:661 - and also a kat on 00:35:927 - . you will see the patterns will be much better with the easy and flow pattern : Fix


• delete this one 00:39:192 - . this note is actually just an additional note. and if you wanted to emphasize a don on 00:39:600 - with a kat on 00:39:192 - , it's not really useful and it just increases the difficulty of Kantan. just make the simple one for Kantan IMO Fix ;u;

• same here 00:40:825 - . it could be deleted Fix

• 00:42:457 - should be deleted. the reason is same like above Fix

• this 00:46:539 - could be added a note (don) there Fix

• from 00:47:763 - ~ 00:50:212 - , it try to give an easy pattern. look this :

with the same notes, this kind of pattern would be easier especially when the four 1/1 plets come out on 00:48:988 - ~ 00:50:212 - Fix

• move 00:51:437 - to 00:52:253 - and change to be don. the finisher just comes out on 00:51:029 - and it would be better to give a little break, so the players aren't stress to face another notes/patterns after the finisher comes out. so i just moved 00:51:437 - to 00:52:253 - for the solution
anyway it follows the vocal better Fix

• move 00:54:702 - to 00:55:519 - and change it to be kat. you should move this if you use my previous mod above ^ because this point and the previous point are same to follow the vocals Fix

• delete 00:56:743 - to make a break doesn't hurt your Kantan. actually i deleted it because there's not any particular sounds come out there, so why don't we use break? Fix

• delete 00:59:600 - please. don't make much 1/1 triplets from 00:57:559 - ~ 01:03:274 - Fix

• don would be great 01:12:661 - since 01:12:661 - and 01:12:253 - have a same tune for vocal which is low Fix

====================


[ Futsuu]

General

☞ remove widescreen support! Fix

Notes Structure

☞ nothing much to say, nice Futsuu :3 Thanks :3

Notes

• add notes (dons) on 00:00:825 - and 00:02:457 - . actually the reason is already writen down in the Kantan box (please see the Kantan's Notes again too see the explanation). actually i added them to make something different between Kantan and Futsuu. actually they have a similar pattern, so i try to make the Futsuu harder (actually it's not harder too because it's Futsuu pattern lol) Fix

• a note (don) again on 00:04:906 - please Fix

• and again, a note (don) on 00:07:151 - please. here you will meet a 1/2 triplet there and this triplet will follow the vocals nicely and well too (better than 1/1 notes only) Fix

• a kat on 00:08:172 - please. it's really unfortunate a break there Fix

• 00:08:580 - ~ 00:09:396 - , try to use o o o. you should apply this if you use my previous mod above ^ because these notes connect with the previous notes Fix

• delete 00:16:131 - please. useless, meaningless and just increasing a difficulty for futsuu for sudden 1/2 note there Fix

• make this pattern easier, 00:29:192 - ~ 00:29:600 - change to be o o o. IMO the pattern will be better too with o o and o o o Fix


• just a suggestion from 00:31:437 - ~ 00:36:335 - : Applied

IMO your current pattern is a bit unfortunate because your pattern could be improved a bit. but this is optional, you can choose

• a kat on 00:38:376 - would be better (just make a same note with 00:37:968 - ) Fix

• remove this one 00:41:641 - . actually this note doesn't follow any proper sounds there (and just give a break after the finisher comes out too) Fix

• delete this one 00:56:743 - , to keep the consistency like 01:09:804 - Fix

• delete this one 01:16:743 - . actually to give a break between the long 1/1 patterns Fix

• don here 01:18:784 - . the pitch has dropped down here Fix

• since the last notes are doublet, how about change 01:19:600 - to be kat? so they will have a same note which are kat. IMO the sounds which are given are nice too! Fix

====================


[ Muzukashii]

General

☞ remove widescreen support! Fix

Notes Structure

☞ remember about the spread diff. okay, let me give an example here :


they are Futsuu and Muzukashii from 00:18:376 - ~ 00:23:274 - . here you can see the huge gap between Futsuu and Muzukashii, don't you? Futsuu has simple and also many breaks, but Muzukashii contains full notes and some 1/2 breaks only. actually you should manage how to manage the spread diff between them so they gap isn't huge like that. i am going to give the suggestions on the Notes box later

Notes

• okay i know so bad that you wanted to follow the vocal on 00:07:151 - , didn't you? okay, it's nice~ but, consider here after the long break between 00:05:314 - ~ 00:07:151 - , i recommend you a lot to move 00:07:151 - to 00:06:947 - , so the first note (after the break done) is in the white strike, so it will make the players easier to catch the note again after the breaks (mostly Muzukashii players will not catch the notes properly when the notes don't come out on the white strikes, especially after breaks) Fix

• i think it will be much better to move 00:10:008 - to 00:10:825 - (it follows vocals better too!) Fix

• delete 00:13:682 - and 00:15:314 - . i don't get any reasons for the usage of 4-plets there Fix

• don here please 00:16:947 - , the pattern will be much easier IMO with o o o o o Fix

• 00:18:376 - ~ 00:23:070 - , the explanation has been written down on the Notes Structure box before. here, i am going to simplify your patterns (so the spread diff between Futsuu~Muzukashii isn't horrible again) Fix

anyway if you don't really like this, you can ignore this suggestion, BUT simplify it by yourself base on my suggestion

• delete 00:44:702 - and 00:44:804 - . spread diff again Fix

• 00:46:335 - and 00:46:437 - delete ^ Fix

• move 00:57:763 - to 00:57:559 - . it's same like the first point that i mentioned on the Notes box Fix

• 01:10:825 - move to 01:10:621 - . ^ Fix

• this is "must". add a don on 01:14:192 - and a kat on 01:15:008 - . if you don't, you will meet the same pattern like Futsuu. remember about the spread diff again Fix

• same 01:17:457 - and 01:18:274 - Fix

====================


i am going to mod Oni later when i am free Okay~ o3o)/

• [Kantan]

1. 00:00:417 (1) - k ? The pitch of the vocal is relatively higher, so k could fit well imo.
2. 00:01:641 (3,4) - swap these notes to d k ? The vocal pitch at 00:02:049 (4) - is apparently higher than that at 00:01:641 (3) -
3. 00:02:865 (5,6) - same as 00:00:417 (1) -
4. 00:04:906 (8) - d would be better since it has the same vocal pitch as 00:05:314 (9) -
5. 00:11:029 (16) - same as 00:00:417 (1) -
6. 00:26:539 (13) - k ? The vocal pitch is the same as 00:24:906 (11,12) -
7. 00:51:845 (2) - Again, k would be better for pattern consistency as 00:01:233 (2) -
8. 00:54:294 (6) - same as 00:03:682 (6) -
9. 00:55:519 (8) - same as 00:04:906 (8) -
10. 01:05:314 (9,10) - same as 00:01:641 (3,4) -
11. 01:06:539 (11) - try to make it consistent to 00:53:478 (5) -
12. 01:08:580 (14) - same as 00:04:906 (8) -

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:10:212 (21,22,23) - k d k would be better if you want to follow the vocal pitch.
2. 00:37:968 (15) - maybe K as you did in Kantan ?
3. 00:48:172 (9,10,11,12) - kd dk could fit the vocal pitch nicely.
4. 00:57:559 (15) - consider removing the finish sound here ? A bit overemphasized imo.
5. 00:59:600 (20,21) - similar to 00:10:212 (21,22,23) - , d k could match the vocal in a way better.
6. 01:07:763 (16,17,18,19) - dkk d could result in a smoother flow imo.

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:01:233 (4) - k ? The vocal pitch is higher than 00:01:029 (3) -
2. 00:02:049 (6) - k ? The vocal pitch is the same as 00:02:865 (10) - where you mapped as k.
3. 00:03:682 (11) - ^
4. 00:04:906 (15) - same as Kantan
5. From 00:18:376 to 00:23:070 - The patterns could be reformed like this in order to fit the vocal better: (cursor at 00:20:621 - )
6. 00:24:498 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47) - consider changing the 1/2 patterns to ddkkdkk dkddkdk ? This could follow the vocal pitch in a way better.
7. 00:28:172 (48,49) - swap these notes to k d ? The vocal pitch at 00:28:172 (48) - is higher than that at 00:28:376 (49) -
8. 00:31:845 (56,57,58,59) - kd dk would be better if you want to follow the vocal.
9. 00:35:927 (72,74) - swap these notes to k d ? Similar reason as 00:28:172 (48,49) -
10. 00:40:008 (84,85) - consider swapping these to d k ? The vocal at 00:40:212 (85) - has a higher pitch.
11. 00:44:498 (96) - I think you may have missed the finish sound here ?
12. 00:46:947 (105,106,107) - k d k would be great if you want to follow the vocal.
13. 00:49:396 (112,113,114,115) - d kkk would be better since the vocal at 00:49:600 (113) - has a higher pitch.
14. 00:55:519 (134) - same as 00:04:906 (15) -
15. 01:03:274 (151) - k would be much better for consistency as 01:01:641 (148) -
16. 01:19:804 (207) - A big kat here would be great.

• [xtrem3x Oni]

1. 00:02:253 (8,9,10,11) - consider changing it to kkd k ? This could follow the vocal in a way better.
2. 00:07:151 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - d k d k k d k d could result in a smoother flow while matching the vocal pitch nicely imo.
3. 00:09:396 (34) - maybe k for the relatively high-pitched vocal ?
4. 00:10:212 (37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - k d d k k d k ? Similar reason as 00:07:151 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) -
5. 00:20:212 (84,87) - swap these notes to k d to follow the drop in vocal pitch ?
6. 00:22:661 (97) - maybe k for the relatively high-pitched vocal ?
7. 00:26:845 (117) - The high-pitched vocal still lingers, so k would be better imo.
8. 00:32:457 (140,141) - d k could fit both the vocal and the snare sound there.
9. 00:35:723 (156) - maybe k for the relatively high-pitched vocal ?
10. 00:36:743 (160,162) - k ? Such a pattern could suitably follow the background instruments.
11. 00:37:968 (164) - D ? I could hear a stressed sound there.
12. 00:38:580 (168) - maybe k here ? The vocal is even higher-pitched than 00:38:376 (167) -
13. 00:41:845 (188,189) - k d would be better if you change ^
14. 00:48:172 (221,222) - Again, k d would be good if you want to follow the vocal pitch.
15. 00:50:212 (230) - K ? The vocal has the same pitch as 00:49:804 (229) -
16. 00:58:988 (277) - maybe k for the relatively high-pitched vocal ?
17. 01:02:763 (293) - Since the lyrics are identical, d would be better for consistency imo.
18. 01:10:825 (333,340) - I think changing these two notes to k could improve the flow of notes by a bit.
19. 01:13:886 (352) - maybe K for the prominent cymbal sound there ?
20. 01:16:335 (369) - d ? It has the same vocal pitch as 01:16:743 (371) -
21. 01:18:172 (379,380) - k d as you did at 01:17:355 (374,375) - ?

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested in my queue.

• [Kantan]

1. 00:00:417 (1) - k ? The pitch of the vocal is relatively higher, so k could fit well imo. nope
2. 00:01:641 (3,4) - swap these notes to d k ? The vocal pitch at 00:02:049 (4) - is apparently higher than that at 00:01:641 (3) - Fix
3. 00:02:865 (5,6) - same as 00:00:417 (1) - Fix
4. 00:04:906 (8) - d would be better since it has the same vocal pitch as 00:05:314 (9) - Fix
5. 00:11:029 (16) - same as 00:00:417 (1) - Fix
6. 00:26:539 (13) - k ? The vocal pitch is the same as 00:24:906 (11,12) - Fix
7. 00:51:845 (2) - Again, k would be better for pattern consistency as 00:01:233 (2) -
8. 00:54:294 (6) - same as 00:03:682 (6) - Fix
9. 00:55:519 (8) - same as 00:04:906 (8) - Fix
10. 01:05:314 (9,10) - same as 00:01:641 (3,4) - Fix
11. 01:06:539 (11) - try to make it consistent to 00:53:478 (5) - Fix
12. 01:08:580 (14) - same as 00:04:906 (8) - Fix

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:10:212 (21,22,23) - k d k would be better if you want to follow the vocal pitch. Fix and add a note in 00:10:825
2. 00:37:968 (15) - maybe K as you did in Kantan ? Fix
3. 00:48:172 (9,10,11,12) - kd dk could fit the vocal pitch nicely. Fix
4. 00:57:559 (15) - consider removing the finish sound here ? A bit overemphasized imo.
5. 00:59:600 (20,21) - similar to 00:10:212 (21,22,23) - , d k could match the vocal in a way better. Fix
6. 01:07:763 (16,17,18,19) - dkk d could result in a smoother flow imo. Fix

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:01:233 (4) - k ? The vocal pitch is higher than 00:01:029 (3) - Fix
2. 00:02:049 (6) - k ? The vocal pitch is the same as 00:02:865 (10) - where you mapped as k. Fix
3. 00:03:682 (11) - ^ Fix
4. 00:04:906 (15) - same as Kantan Fix
5. From 00:18:376 to 00:23:070 - The patterns could be reformed like this in order to fit the vocal better: (cursor at 00:20:621 - ) sorry, no change
6. 00:24:498 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47) - consider changing the 1/2 patterns to ddkkdkk dkddkdk ? This could follow the vocal pitch in a way better. Fix
7. 00:28:172 (48,49) - swap these notes to k d ? The vocal pitch at 00:28:172 (48) - is higher than that at 00:28:376 (49) - Fix
8. 00:31:845 (56,57,58,59) - kd dk would be better if you want to follow the vocal. Fix
9. 00:35:927 (72,74) - swap these notes to k d ? Similar reason as 00:28:172 (48,49) - Fix
10. 00:40:008 (84,85) - consider swapping these to d k ? The vocal at 00:40:212 (85) - has a higher pitch. Fix
11. 00:44:498 (96) - I think you may have missed the finish sound here ? Fix
12. 00:46:947 (105,106,107) - k d k would be great if you want to follow the vocal. Fix
13. 00:49:396 (112,113,114,115) - d kkk would be better since the vocal at 00:49:600 (113) - has a higher pitch. Fix
14. 00:55:519 (134) - same as 00:04:906 (15) - Fix
15. 01:03:274 (151) - k would be much better for consistency as 01:01:641 (148) - Fix
16. 01:19:804 (207) - A big kat here would be great. really? ok, Fix

That's all and good luck~

- Racoon - wrote:

Hi~ From my queue~

Kantan

00:15:110(2) - k? - Same tone about 00:13:478(1,3) hm, maybe Fix
01:12:661(4) - k? - High tone than 01:12:253(3) Fix

Futsuu

00:06:947(14) - Move to 00:07:559 - More suitable about song no change
00:11:029(23) - k? - Tone is being high Fix
00:35:110(11) - k? - High tone than 00:34:906(10) Fix
01:02:457(4,5,6) - ddk? - Same tone about 01:00:825(1,2,3) Fix
01:19:600(18) - d? - Low tone than 01:19:804(19) nope

Muzukashii

00:03:682(11) - k? - High tone than 00:04:090(12) Fix
00:57:559(136) - Move to 00:57:763 - More suitable about song sorry no change
01:03:274(151) - k? - Same tone about 01:00:825(146,147,148), High tone than 01:02:865(150) Fix
01:06:335(161) - k? - Tone is being high Fix
01:10:621(170) - Move to 01:10:825 - More suitable about song no change
01:19:090 - Add d? - ^ I don't know if I should put a note here, btw fix

Good Luck~

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested in my

queue.

[xtrem3x Oni]00:02:253 (8,9,10,11) - consider changing it to kkd k ? This could follow the vocal in a way better. <<< Ka- gayaku yo = kkk d (almost)
00:07:151 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - d k d k k d k d could result in a smoother flow while matching the vocal pitch nicely imo. <<< Pikapika no mira-i = d k d k d d k k (almost)
00:09:396 (34) - maybe k for the relatively high-pitched vocal ? << ok
00:10:212 (37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - k d d k k d k ? Similar reason as 00:07:151 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - Junbi wa okkē! = k d d k k k k (almost again XD)
00:20:212 (84,87) - swap these notes to k d to follow the drop in vocal pitch ? << ok
00:22:661 (97) - maybe k for the relatively high-pitched vocal ? << high pitched D: (ok)
00:26:845 (117) - The high-pitched vocal still lingers, so k would be better imo. << "shiteru no" = ok .-.
00:32:457 (140,141) - d k could fit both the vocal and the snare sound there. << ctrl+g ._. (ok)
00:35:723 (156) - maybe k for the relatively high-pitched vocal ? << also, change note 158 to k .-.
00:36:743 (160,162) - k ? Such a pattern could suitably follow the background instruments. <<< same sound with (don) form .-.
00:37:968 (164) - D ? I could hear a stressed sound there. <<< possible combined with note 184 ...
00:38:580 (168) - maybe k here ? The vocal is even higher-pitched than 00:38:376 (167) - << Possible (?)
00:41:845 (188,189) - k d would be better if you change ^ << ctrl+g (ok)
00:48:172 (221,222) - Again, k d would be good if you want to follow the vocal pitch. <<< Double k XD (ok)
00:50:212 (230) - K ? The vocal has the same pitch as 00:49:804 (229) - <<< correct with "pika" song, other K in 231 (ok)
00:58:988 (277) - maybe k for the relatively high-pitched vocal ? << relative?, is high .-. (ok)
01:02:763 (293) - Since the lyrics are identical, d would be better for consistency imo. << correct .-.
01:10:825 (333,340) - I think changing these two notes to k could improve the flow of notes by a bit. << possible (?)
01:13:886 (352) - maybe K for the prominent cymbal sound there ? << a little risky but Ok .-.
01:16:335 (369) - d ? It has the same vocal pitch as 01:16:743 (371) - << ok
01:18:172 (379,380) - k d as you did at 01:17:355 (374,375) - ? << ok That's all and good luck~

DakeDekaane wrote:

=w=
OHMAIGOSH OHMAIGOSH THE STAR IS HERE *dies*

Notas:
o - beat vacío.
x - cualquier nota.

[General]
Kantan y Futsuu -> SV 1.40 hai! owo7

[ Kantan]
00:00:417 - 00:11:437 - Esta parte esta mapeada de manera idéntica al kiai, aunque la canción es más calmada, así que vendría bien borrar algunas notas, al igual que unos movimientos de notas. Removiendo 00:01:233 (2,3,7,8,11,13) - se crea la densidad necesaria, después podrías hacer 00:03:682 (6) - un don ya que la voz es diferente aquí que en los kat anteriores, y 00:05:314 (9) - un kat para enfatizar las voces. Resultaría algo así.

00:11:437 (1) - Tal vez iniciar este spinner en 00:10:212 - , así cubrirías la frase por completo y dando más tiempo para completar el spinner (aunque requiera más hits, con el OD actual no es mucho problema).
00:24:090 (9) - Sería recomendable remover esta nota, así el pequeño break queda con las voces.
00:43:682 (16) - Un kat quedaría mejor aquí ya que es un tono similar a la nota anterior, si lo haces, cambia 00:44:498 (1) - a un don grande para marcar la diferencia entre las dos secciones.
00:51:029 (1,2) - Puedes cambiar estos a don (mantiendo la nota grande), así dejarás que los kat que vienen despues sean para las vocales más fuertes.
00:52:253 (3) - Te recomendaría mover esta nota a 00:53:070 - , complementa mejor la música con las voces.
00:54:294 (6,7) - Igual que 00:51:029 (1,2) -
00:55:927 (9) - Probablemente puedas usar un kat o un don grande para enfatizar las voces aquí. usé un kat
01:00:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Aunque no veo mal este patrón, los dos siendo ddk quedarían mejor con la música.
01:04:090 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Algo similar a lo que mencioné al inicio del kiai.
01:15:519 (3,7,8) - Pudieran quedar mejor como dons, la intensidad es muy similar a donde están los otros, y dejaría que el kat sea más único, al igual que las voces. Si lo haces, cambia 01:19:600 (10) - a kat por razones similares.

All fix~ O3O

[ Futsuu]
00:00:417 - 00:11:437 - Algo similar a lo que mencioné en el Kantan, removiendo 00:00:825 (2,4,9,14,15,17,23) - es suficiente.
00:24:498 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - Este patrón parece un poco largo, podrías remover 00:26:131 (16,17) - y añadir un don en 00:27:151 -
00:38:376 (16,17) - Podrías remover estas notas, no siento que sigan algo en particular, además que el break le añade suficiente énfasis a la nota grande.
00:41:641 (24) - ^
00:46:947 (6,7,8) - Podrías remover (7) y hacer las otras dos notas don, ya que tienen el mismo sonido que 00:46:131 (5) - .
00:49:396 (13,14,15) - Te recomendaría hacer las tres notas del mismo color, o usar D D K, la nota al final es más alta que las otras.
00:51:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Puedes probar d d k k ddd k en está parte, se siente algo raro al terminar en un don cuando podría ser mejor un kat para el enfasis.
00:55:519 (13,14) - ^Algo similar, d k en este caso. Y probablemente cambiar 00:54:294 (9) - a kat por la misma razón.
01:04:090 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Algo similar al patrón anterior.
01:07:355 (15,16,17,18,19,20) - ^ Aquí bastaria con hacer 01:08:988 (20) - un kat.
01:12:253 (5,6,7) - Elimina (7) ya que sería mejor incluir solo las voces principales en este patrón, y has (5) un kat para que siga el "happy" de las voces junto con el siguiente.

All fix, yes~

[ Muzukashii]
00:00:417 - 00:11:437 - Ya sabrás que diré aquí, solamente borrar 00:02:253 (7,21,27) - basta.
00:16:131 (9) - Probablemente hacer este un kat para añadir un poco de variedad al igual que este es un poco más fuerte.
00:20:416 (23) - Usa un kat aqui para complementar la parte de la batería.
00:26:131 (41,42,43,44,45,46,47) - Aquí te recomendaría usar d d k k d d k, así mantienes consistencia usando kats en los downbeats.
00:28:784 (51) - Un kat quedaría bien aquí.
00:34:804 (67) - Este triple se siente innecesario, ya que no hay nada que enfatizar o agregar.
00:35:519 (69,70,71,72,73) - Podrías hacer este d k d d k para tener consistencia con el patrón anterior.
00:36:743 (75,76,77,78) - Estas notas se sienten algo de más dado que estás mapeando más sobre las voces, así que no vendría mal removerlas.
00:41:233 (88) - No se te olvido un finish?
00:44:498 - 00:47:763 - Aqui convendría usar don en los ticks blancos para seguir mejor las percusiones, y tener kats en el resto, algo así. Adicionalmente, podrías hacer 00:47:763 (107) - una nota grande.

00:52:865 (124) - Siento que un kat complementaría mejor con el d d k k danterior.
00:54:294 (128,129,130,131) - Esta parte quedaría mejor como k ddd.
00:55:927 (135) - kat para enfatizar las voces.
00:58:580 (140) - Podrías mover esta nota a 00:57:763 - , va mejor con la parte que va "pika pika" o3o pikapi! o3o
01:05:723 (158,159,160,161,162) - Algo similar que en 00:52:865 (124) -
01:11:641 (174) - Algo similar a 00:58:580 (140) - , solo que está ves un d k d k d o k k d

All fix, senpai o3o

El estilo de mapeo no está mal, solo que hay veces que te enfocas demasiado en las voces que se pierde un poco del "flujo" que dan las percusiones en este tipo de canciones. okay ;w;

Sería todo de mi parte, no es un mal mapa, solo que requiere un poco de pulir los patrones y el ritmo, buena suerte.

DakeDekaane wrote:

=w=

[ Oni]

00:00:417 - 00:11:437 - Esta parte es algo calmada y por ello, los triples se sienten que están de más << es cierto, traté de hacerla algo dificil y llamativa pero no tomé en cuenta el hecho de que solo es un Lite Oni.

00:02:865 (12) - Tal vez sustituir este slider por una nota normal? No lo siento tan necesario. << me creerias que nisiquiera se por que se me ocurrio el slider? .... de hecho nunca le presté atencion pero veré que hago.

00:05:723 (22,23,24) - No creo que mapear los ecos sea una buena idea, una pausa queda muy bien aquí, si pudieras remover estas notas estaría bien. << intenté con bajarle el volumen gradualmente a las notas pero creo que borrarlas se me hace mejor idea (solo conservo las 2 D's)

00:10:008 (36) - Podrías remover esta nota también para que la pausa de 1/1 deje que el siguiente patrón empieze con las vocales más notables. << me parece bien y tambien a cambiar el D por K

00:11:233 (42) - ^Algo similar. << mi manía de hacer secuencial para no dejar tanto break .-.

00:17:763 (71,72,73,74) - Personalmente removería estas notas, ya que no se siente el cambio que hay entre secciones, al estar todo mapeado de corrido.<< dejarlo sin triple me sale que sobraria otra, dejarle solo 2 notas sonaría hueco, asi que tomaré esto en consideracion ._.

00:24:294 (104) - Algo similar a lo de remover la nota. <<< preferiria que siga la secuencia y el D que le sigue lo cambie a d

00:24:498 (105,107) - Aunque las voces sean fuertes, no creo que sea necesario ponerles una nota grande. <<< cambiado arriba

00:25:927 (112) - Remueve esta nota. << creo que si ._.

00:26:131 (112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - d k dkkd k d ? Complementaría mejor con el patrón anterior con las alternaciones. <<< la 3ra nota si la tomo bien, cambiar las 2 ultimas es dudoso ya que va asi .. "shi-tte-ru No", incluso pensaria cambiar las k por d pero se veria algo monótono (lo cual casi no me gusta), para que quede algo asi ... d k d ddd d k

00:27:763 (120) - Remueve esta nota. << es un sonido de beat, pero supongo que seria mejor borrarlo ._.

00:30:212 (131,132,133) - Similar que en 00:24:498 (105,107) - , aunque no hay voces esta vez, las notas grandes no se sienten muy bien ahi, ya que no hay nada para enfatizar, podrías intentar un[b]k d d d k

1. Plays fine to me.

1. 00:51:437 (2,3) - Ctrl+G? Helps to add variation after the start of kiai.
2. 00:58:172 -, 01:11:233 - Add claps for the vocal?
3. Good overall

1. 00:39:600 (75,76,77,78) -, 00:54:498 (123,124,125,126) - Instead of all red, try using blue after the stream (sorry if I don't know any taiko terms for these circles). Blue helps add variety IMO when transitioning out of the stream.

Project Railgun wrote:

Hi Cosmolade~
testing http://waa.ai/46ff (っ´▽`)っ

[Kantan]

1. Plays fine to me. yay~!

[Futsuu]

1. 00:51:437 (2,3) - Ctrl+G? Helps to add variation after the start of kiai. Fix
2. 00:58:172 -, 01:11:233 - Add claps for the vocal? Fix
3. Good overall

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:39:600 (75,76,77,78) -, 00:54:498 (123,124,125,126) - Instead of all red, try using blue after the stream (sorry if I don't know any taiko terms for these circles). Blue helps add variety IMO when transitioning out of the stream. Taiko circles (red or blue) depends and follow the rhythm more, and not necessary the variety xD not change this, but it's a good point, I will check it later~

Sorry if my taiko modding is poor, feel free to correct me <3 Don't worry, you are right xD

Rank soon~ aw~♥

mrdumpling64 wrote:

Hi!

Sorry I'm kind of busy at the moment, so I star twice.

Good luck.

1. 01:04:906 - add note here? i feel it is empty and also a bit inconsistent with 00:51:845 (2,3,4,5) -

1. 00:24:702 (35,42) - the gap between futsuu and muzu is a bit big, try to remove them
2. 01:15:723 (182) - how about remove this note, i think the flow will be better with 01:13:886 (173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - ,also it ca make the spread more even with futsuu

1. 00:04:702 (16) - move to 00:03:886 - and change to k would be better , because the vocal on 00:03:886 - is more powerful than 00:04:702 -
2. 00:05:723 (20) - highly recommend removing this note, in other diffs there is no notes here
3. 00:07:151 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - i know you follow the vocal here, but the structure is not good if there is no note on 00:06:947 - ,so i think you should add note on 00:06:947 - and amend 00:07:151 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - this pattern a bit
4. 00:11:845 - ~ 00:17:559 - this part could be improved imo, try this,it can be more consistent and the flow also better
5. 00:19:804 (76,78) - reverse them , would be more consistent and more fit the vocal
6. 00:21:437 (84,85) - ^also would be more consistent
7. 00:23:070 (92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105) - this pattern's relation is not really good with 00:26:131 (106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113) - ,try this
8. 00:28:172 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123) - this pattern's relation also not really good with former pattern, the former pattern you follow the vocal very well, but next pattern you doesn't follow the vocal well, try this
9. 00:30:212 (124) - remove, as you mapped on 00:27:763 -
10. 00:34:294 (140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151) - this pattern also has same problem, try this
11. 00:36:743 (152,153) - remove them, it will make the spread better with easier diffs
12. 00:37:968 - ~ 00:44:498 - compare with muzu, it is much denser, try to make it easier
13. 00:48:886 (215,216) - reverse and add d on 00:49:192 - , to follow the drum
14. 00:50:212 (221,222) - reverse and remove finish on 00:50:621 (222) - to make consistency with 00:47:355 (210,211) -
15. 00:52:253 (229) - change to d it can enhance the emphasize on 00:52:661 (230) -
16. 00:54:294 (238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253) - this pattern also could be improved like this
17. 00:58:784 (264,266) - reverse to make consistency with 00:51:029 (223,224,226,227,228) -
18. 01:01:437 (277,278) - reverse, to follow the vocal as you mapped on 00:59:600 (268,269,270) -
19. 01:03:070 (284,285) - ^
20. 01:02:049 (279) - change to k the vocal's pitch is same as 01:01:641 (278) -
21. 01:03:682 (286) - ^
22. 01:04:090 - ~ end ,some part also have similar problem as i said above.

qoot8123 wrote:

Hi , m4m as xtrem3x requested, and sorry for delay><

[ Oni]

General

remember to remove wide screen support << my error ._.

Notes

1. 00:04:702 (16) - move to 00:03:886 - and change to k would be better , because the vocal on 00:03:886 - is more powerful than 00:04:702 - <<< <<< correct ._.
2. 00:05:723 (20) - highly recommend removing this note, in other diffs there is no notes here <<< a bit enfasis (echo) but no have effect ._.
3. 00:07:151 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - i know you follow the vocal here, but the structure is not good if there is no note on 00:06:947 - ,so i think you should add note on 00:06:947 - and amend 00:07:151 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - this pattern a bit
4. 00:11:845 - ~ 00:17:559 - this part could be improved imo, try this,it can be more consistent and the flow also better <<< almost all XD
5. 00:19:804 (76,78) - reverse them , would be more consistent and more fit the vocal
6. 00:21:437 (84,85) - ^also would be more consistent
7. 00:23:070 (92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105) - this pattern's relation is not really good with 00:26:131 (106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113) - ,try this <<< is rare but good D:
8. 00:28:172 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123) - this pattern's relation also not really good with former pattern, the former pattern you follow the vocal very well, but next pattern you doesn't follow the vocal well, try this
9. 00:30:212 (124) - remove, as you mapped on 00:27:763 -
10. 00:34:294 (140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151) - this pattern also has same problem, try this
11. 00:36:743 (152,153) - remove them, it will make the spread better with easier diffs <<< my mania without breaks .-.
12. 00:37:968 - ~ 00:44:498 - compare with muzu, it is much denser, try to make it easier <<< I'll try something.
13. 00:48:886 (215,216) - reverse and add d on 00:49:192 - , to follow the drum
14. 00:50:212 (221,222) - reverse and remove finish on 00:50:621 (222) - to make consistency with 00:47:355 (210,211) -
15. 00:52:253 (229) - change to d it can enhance the emphasize on 00:52:661 (230) -
16. 00:54:294 (238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253) - this pattern also could be improved like this
17. 00:58:784 (264,266) - reverse to make consistency with 00:51:029 (223,224,226,227,228) -
18. 01:01:437 (277,278) - reverse, to follow the vocal as you mapped on 00:59:600 (268,269,270) -
19. 01:03:070 (284,285) - ^
20. 01:02:049 (279) - change to k the vocal's pitch is same as 01:01:641 (278) -
21. 01:03:682 (286) - ^
22. 01:04:090 - ~ end ,some part also have similar problem as i said above. <<< before 2nd kiai is very confuse between stream or 2 triples ._. (- 01:13:070 - 01:13:886 -)

kantan~muzu are fine, but Oni still has improvement, try find 2~3 good mod, and than call me back for recheck

qoot8123 wrote:

Hi , m4m as xtrem3x requested, and sorry for delay><


[ Kantan]

Notes

1. 01:04:906 - add note here? i feel it is empty and also a bit inconsistent with 00:51:845 (2,3,4,5) - Fix

[ Muzukashii]

Notes

1. 00:24:702 (35,42) - the gap between futsuu and muzu is a bit big, try to remove them Fix
2. 01:15:723 (182) - how about remove this note, i think the flow will be better with 01:13:886 (173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - ,also it ca make the spread more even with futsuu Fix

kantan~muzu are fine, but Oni still has improvement, try find 2~3 good mod, and than call me back for recheck Okay~ all fixed <3

00:34 XinCrin: mandame /np
00:34 Cosmolade: tv size
00:34 *Cosmolade is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/505094 J*Dee'Z with Pikachu - Peace Smile!]
00:35 XinCrin: a ver
00:35 XinCrin: veamos si al menos me sale algo lol
00:35 XinCrin: que opinas de IRC?
00:36 Cosmolade: uhm, claro
00:36 Cosmolade: aunque me enredo un poco
00:36 Cosmolade: xD
00:36 XinCrin: comenzemos con la muzu
00:36 *XinCrin is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/511206 J*Dee'Z with Pikachu - Peace Smile! [Muzukashii]]
00:37 Cosmolade: oko
00:37 Cosmolade: :3
00:37 XinCrin: 00:40:621 - Siento tremendamente que aqui falta un circle (Don) , ya que un beat muy alto
00:38 Cosmolade: listo
00:39 XinCrin: 00:49:600 (105,106,107) - El triplet no va muy bien aqui en mi opinion, ademas siendo una muzukashii , el "little overmapp" no encaja bien
00:39 XinCrin: considera remover (106)
00:40 XinCrin: 01:13:886 (171) - No estoy muy seguro si se puede poner un BIG DON antes de un triplet, en caso si se pueda me gustaría que hagas eso porque encaja con el realze de voz y además da un buen toque al comienzo de un kiai time
00:41 XinCrin: 01:19:804 (199) - Creo que como kat suena mejor, ya que está terminando en un tick rojo y no en un downbeat
00:41 XinCrin: eso sería todo para muzu
00:41 *XinCrin is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/505093 J*Dee'Z with Pikachu - Peace Smile! [Futsuu]]
00:42 XinCrin: 00:03:682 (6) - El don juega mejor porque la nota posterior y anterior son kats, So .. el playfield no anda muy bien mientras uno escucha los sonidos
00:43 Cosmolade: ok~
00:44 XinCrin: 01:07:763 (16) - Creo que kat suena mejor porque como hiciste anteriormente lo

1. We've added some notes at muzukashii diff
2. Changed some hitsounds too

XinCrin wrote:

IRC

00:34 XinCrin: mandame /np
00:34 Cosmolade: tv size
00:34 *Cosmolade is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/505094 J*Dee'Z with Pikachu - Peace Smile!]
00:35 XinCrin: a ver
00:35 XinCrin: veamos si al menos me sale algo lol
00:35 XinCrin: que opinas de IRC?
00:36 Cosmolade: uhm, claro
00:36 Cosmolade: aunque me enredo un poco
00:36 Cosmolade: xD
00:36 XinCrin: comenzemos con la muzu
00:36 *XinCrin is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/511206 J*Dee'Z with Pikachu - Peace Smile! [Muzukashii]]
00:37 Cosmolade: oko
00:37 Cosmolade: :3
00:37 XinCrin: 00:40:621 - Siento tremendamente que aqui falta un circle (Don) , ya que un beat muy alto
00:38 Cosmolade: listo
00:39 XinCrin: 00:49:600 (105,106,107) - El triplet no va muy bien aqui en mi opinion, ademas siendo una muzukashii , el "little overmapp" no encaja bien
00:39 XinCrin: considera remover (106)
00:40 XinCrin: 01:13:886 (171) - No estoy muy seguro si se puede poner un BIG DON antes de un triplet, en caso si se pueda me gustaría que hagas eso porque encaja con el realze de voz y además da un buen toque al comienzo de un kiai time
00:41 XinCrin: 01:19:804 (199) - Creo que como kat suena mejor, ya que está terminando en un tick rojo y no en un downbeat
00:41 XinCrin: eso sería todo para muzu
00:41 *XinCrin is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/505093 J*Dee'Z with Pikachu - Peace Smile! [Futsuu]]
00:42 XinCrin: 00:03:682 (6) - El don juega mejor porque la nota posterior y anterior son kats, So .. el playfield no anda muy bien mientras uno escucha los sonidos
00:43 Cosmolade: ok~
00:44 XinCrin: 01:07:763 (16) - Creo que kat suena mejor porque como hiciste anteriormente lo

1. We've added some notes at muzukashii diff
2. Changed some hitsounds too

Good luck with ranking o//

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is finish don note
4. K is finish kat note

1. 00:20:416 (4) - esta nota no deber韆 estar, me parece que sigues el vocal con esa nota pero en 00:20:008 - hay un instrumental al igual que en 00:23:274 -, a mi parecer se veria mejor siguiendo el instrumental ya que es kantan y tener ( 00:20:008 (3,4,5,6) - ) esos 4 juntos puede ser complicado para los novatos.
2. desde 00:31:437 - hasta 00:36:335 - me parece muy hardcore para ser kantan, yo te recomendaria que borres las notas que se encuentran en: 00:31:845 - 00:32:661 - 00:35:110 -
3. borra la nota que se encuentra en 00:53:070 - para que mantengas consistencia con 01:05:723 (9,10) -
4. 01:08:172 (12,13,14) - de los tres es ovio que el que tiene mayor fuerza es el que esta en 01:08:988 - entonces un Ctrl+G a los tres no le vendr韆 mal.
5. ^ y si es que aplicas el punto previo ^ , no te olvides de cambiar 01:07:355 - a d por consistencia en tus patrones previos.

1. Esta futsuu me gusta *-*/
   

1. 00:17:355 (14) - esta nota esta de m醩
2. 00:19:600 (20) - muevelo hacia 00:20:212 - a mi parecer sigue mejor la voz, but it's up to you
3. 00:41:641 (82) - esta sobrando y le quita el 閚fasis que le distes a 00:41:233 (81) -, dejalo solito como 00:37:968 (72) -
4. La nota que est� sobre 01:16:233 - deber韆s moverla hacia 01:15:723 - porque ya estas abusando de mucho triplet por todos lados xD, bajale un poquito el ritmo a esa parte y ver醩 que los triplets que siguen se sentir醤 mucho mejor al jugarlos.

1. 00:12:049 - que fue? ten韆s hambre y te comistes esa nota? :3 mant閚 la consistencia con 00:15:110 (50,51,52) -
2. 00:29:396 (116,117,118) - eh escuchado ese triplet 5 mil veces en diferentes velocidades, en testeos y no me convence ._. me parece que el triplet empieza un tick m醩 atr醩, mas o menos por 00:29:192 -
3. La nota que est� sobre 01:05:825 - deber韆 ir a la altura de 01:06:029 -, suena raro y no se siente bien a la hora de jugar D:
4. 01:07:865 - muevelo hacia 01:07:661 - ^ same as above

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Hi~~ mod requested via PM

[About]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is finish don note
4. K is finish kat note

[xtrem3x Oni] hey bro *-*/

1. 00:12:049 - que fue? ten韆s hambre y te comistes esa nota? :3 mant閚 la consistencia con 00:15:110 (50,51,52) - << puede que sea cierto, asi que agregue eso e hice un cambio ...
2. 00:29:396 (116,117,118) - eh escuchado ese triplet 5 mil veces en diferentes velocidades, en testeos y no me convence ._. me parece que el triplet empieza un tick m醩 atr醩, mas o menos por 00:29:192 - <<< pues lo intentaré asi aunque si tambien he tenido mis dudas en esa parte .-.
3. La nota que est� sobre 01:05:825 - deber韆 ir a la altura de 01:06:029 -, suena raro y no se siente bien a la hora de jugar D: <<< asi parece D:
4. 01:07:865 - muevelo hacia 01:07:661 - ^ same as above <<< igual y si .-.

Me encanta este mapa te dejo una estrellita

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Hi~~ mod requested via PM

[About]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is finish don note
4. K is finish kat note

[Kantan]

1. 00:20:416 (4) - esta nota no deber韆 estar, me parece que sigues el vocal con esa nota pero en 00:20:008 - hay un instrumental al igual que en 00:23:274 -, a mi parecer se veria mejor siguiendo el instrumental ya que es kantan y tener ( 00:20:008 (3,4,5,6) - ) esos 4 juntos puede ser complicado para los novatos.
2. desde 00:31:437 - hasta 00:36:335 - me parece muy hardcore para ser kantan, yo te recomendaria que borres las notas que se encuentran en: 00:31:845 - 00:32:661 - 00:35:110 -
3. borra la nota que se encuentra en 00:53:070 - para que mantengas consistencia con 01:05:723 (9,10) -
4. 01:08:172 (12,13,14) - de los tres es ovio que el que tiene mayor fuerza es el que esta en 01:08:988 - entonces un Ctrl+G a los tres no le vendr韆 mal.
5. ^ y si es que aplicas el punto previo ^ , no te olvides de cambiar 01:07:355 - a d por consistencia en tus patrones previos.
   
   Todo aplicado x'D

[Futsuu]

1. Esta futsuu me gusta *-*/
   
   Gracias *3*)/

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:17:355 (14) - esta nota esta de m醩
2. 00:19:600 (20) - muevelo hacia 00:20:212 - a mi parecer sigue mejor la voz, but it's up to you
3. 00:41:641 (82) - esta sobrando y le quita el 閚fasis que le distes a 00:41:233 (81) -, dejalo solito como 00:37:968 (72) -
4. La nota que est� sobre 01:16:233 - deber韆s moverla hacia 01:15:723 - porque ya estas abusando de mucho triplet por todos lados xD, bajale un poquito el ritmo a esa parte y ver醩 que los triplets que siguen se sentir醤 mucho mejor al jugarlos.
   
   Todo aplicado -3-

Me encanta este mapa te dejo una estrellita Muchas Gracias *>u<)/

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

• 
  
  Good?

• 
  
  01:02:461 - change to k? because,This kiai = 1/1-triplet is ddk only.so kdk is good? & 01:03:276 - probaly same sound. (option)

• 
  
  00:22:661 - add d.because,follow the vocal.
  
  00:23:275 - move to 00:23:072 - ^
  
  01:02:456 - same as Kantan.
  
  01:19:813 - add finish. same as Muzukashii,Oni

• 
  
  probably good now.but, I have other suggestion.If good pattern,change please.↓
  
  * 00:16:534 - add d & 00:16:729 - change to k & 00:16:949 - delete & 00:17:144 - change to d (2-2 2-4 pattern)
  
  00:35:519 (66,67,68,69,70) - dkddk → d kkd is good imo.
  
  01:16:233 - add k?
  
  01:19:095 - If dk is hard,change to kk

• 
  
  00:58:580 (250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257) - pattern change please.
  
  01:16:139 - move to 01:16:028 - more fit.

Charlotte wrote:

hi~ xtrem3x's req

[ about]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

[ General]

• 
  
  Good?

[ xtrem3x's Oni]

• 
  
  00:58:580 (250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257) - pattern change please. <<< fixed ... a bit .-.
  
  01:16:139 - move to 01:16:028 - more fit. <<<< O_O !!!

Good luck ></

Charlotte wrote:

hi~ xtrem3x's req yey~! <3

[ about]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

[ General]

• 
  
  Good? (｡ŏ_ŏ) ...

[ Kantan]

• 
  
  01:02:461 - change to k? because,This kiai = 1/1-triplet is ddk only.so kdk is good? & 01:03:276 - probaly same sound. (option) Fix

[ Futsuu]

• 
  
  00:22:661 - add d.because,follow the vocal. Fix
  
  00:23:275 - move to 00:23:072 - ^ Nope, sorry I give priority to the emphasis-parts
  
  01:02:456 - same as Kantan. Fix
  
  01:19:813 - add finish. same as Muzukashii,Oni Fix

[ Muzukashii]

• 
  
  probably good now.but, I have other suggestion.If good pattern,change please.↓
  
  * 00:16:534 - add d & 00:16:729 - change to k & 00:16:949 - delete & 00:17:144 - change to d (2-2 2-4 pattern) Oh, really good pattern! I will use it
  
  00:35:519 (66,67,68,69,70) - dkddk → d kkd is good imo. Fix
  
  01:16:233 - add k? previous mods say me If I put a note here was a abuse of triples, so I do not know .... btw Fix
  
  01:19:095 - If dk is hard,change to kk I know xD but is a muzu right? no change uwu

Good luck ></ YAY!

1. 00:19:192 (2) - try to move this note 00:17:559 - ,there is pretty obvious sounds here
2. 00:20:825 - add note here, to follow the beat sound
3. 00:35:519 - add note here, there is significant beat
4. 00:48:172 (7,9) - reverse these two notes, the vocal accent is pretty powerful on 00:49:396 (9) - ,so use d would be more suitable
5. 00:57:968 (10) - move to 00:59:600 - more fit the vocal and beat
6. 01:15:927 - add note here? other diffs is on the harder scale on this part.you may make this part a bit hard .

1. 00:32:049 (3,7) - try to remove them, the gap with kantan is a bit high, remove would be more even

1. 00:32:049 (54) - try to remove this note, would make the flow better
2. 01:14:702 (173,174,175,176) - change to d? it is almost same as 01:13:886 (169,170,171,172) - i think use don is enough
3. 01:17:151 (185,186,187,188) - change to k? the reason is same as above

1. 00:44:498 - ~00:47:355 - i think you can follow the beat like this
2. 00:53:682 - you can add a note here, to make the good flow with former part
3. 00:59:702 (255) - change to d and move to 00:59:498 - , it would be more fluent to play
4. 01:10:927 (308) - move to 01:10:519 - in order to make good connection with the pattern 01:08:988 (299,300,301) -
5. 01:15:723 (337,338,339,340,341,342) - i think use triple is enough like this
6. 01:17:253 (346) - move to 01:17:457 - and remove 01:17:865 (349) - to make consistency with 01:13:886 (328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335) -

qoot8123 wrote:

Recheck.

1. 00:44:498 - ~00:47:355 - i think you can follow the beat like this <<< My result ...
2. 00:53:682 - you can add a note here, to make the good flow with former part <<< d ...
3. 00:59:702 (255) - change to d and move to 00:59:498 - , it would be more fluent to play <<< also .. a change based in vocals .-.
4. 01:10:927 (308) - move to 01:10:519 - in order to make good connection with the pattern 01:08:988 (299,300,301) - <<< is rarely interesting but good .-.
5. 01:15:723 (337,338,339,340,341,342) - i think use triple is enough like this << that was what I had before from charlotte's mod ..... it is difficult to decide because the two modes look good 1.- in your mod follow beats and sounds, 2.- in charlotte's mod follow vocals sounds ...
6. 01:17:253 (346) - move to 01:17:457 - and remove 01:17:865 (349) - to make consistency with 01:13:886 (328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335) - <<< is correct .-.

Ya falta poco

qoot8123 wrote:

Recheck. yay!


[ Kantan]

1. 00:19:192 (2) - try to move this note 00:17:559 - ,there is pretty obvious sounds here
2. 00:20:825 - add note here, to follow the beat sound
3. 00:35:519 - add note here, there is significant beat
4. 00:48:172 (7,9) - reverse these two notes, the vocal accent is pretty powerful on 00:49:396 (9) - ,so use d would be more suitable
5. 00:57:968 (10) - move to 00:59:600 - more fit the vocal and beat
6. 01:15:927 - add note here? other diffs is on the harder scale on this part.you may make this part a bit hard .
   
   All fix

[ Futsuu]

Notes

1. 00:32:049 (3,7) - try to remove them, the gap with kantan is a bit high, remove would be more even Fix

[ Muzukashii]

Notes

1. 00:32:049 (54) - try to remove this note, would make the flow better
2. 01:14:702 (173,174,175,176) - change to d? it is almost same as 01:13:886 (169,170,171,172) - i think use don is enough
3. 01:17:151 (185,186,187,188) - change to k? the reason is same as above
   
   All fix

that's all from me . oni is much better than before. call me back then Aw <3

xtrem3x wrote:

un mod neechan ... en Tags faltan algunas cosas que quizas se le pasaron a Lanturn en aquel tiempo

Hirozaku Tanaka, PA-NON, Epic Records Japan Single, Pisumairu!

Ya falta poco

qoot8123 wrote:

sorry, i found some part's spread is a bit uneven between oni and muzu:

01:00:621 (261) - this note could be removed to make the gap more close <<< if follow vocals is correct .-.

00:35:314 (142) - ^ <<< same

00:39:090 (156) - ^ <<< same

01:10:621 (309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330) - this part should be less dense, example <<< less dense is correct but 01:13:070- to 01:13:682- not possible why have notable sound for a mini-stream then change kdddkkk -> kdkdkkk (for a progressive high vocal sound and drum sound)

00:59:192 (254,255,256,257,258,259) - consider to make this part less dense you may try to see the muzu's dense when you map. <<< deleting 00:59:396- and 00:59:498- (for starts in Pikachu! sound, is better imo)

qoot8123 wrote:

sorry, i found some part's spread is a bit uneven between oni and muzu:

muzu:

00:57:151 - could add note here to make the spread more close with oni Fix

01:10:212 - ^ Fix

01:12:661 - ~01:13:886 - could add some note to make the gap more close with oni Fix (add a d in 01:13:478 -)

01:00:825 (135,136,137,138,139,140,141) - could be more denser to make the spread more even, example
Fix


most of them are spread issue, oni's pattern is improved indeed but the gap between oni and muzu is a bit high on some parts ,try to take care of it, if you think you improve them, call me back again!

1. 00:20:825 (3) - Podrías remover esta nota para enfocarse un poco mejor en las voces, que es lo que parece que sigues.
2. 00:32:661 - Y añadir una nota aquí por la misma razón (y probablemente cambiar a kd k).
3. 00:42:457 (12) - Remover para tener consistencia con el patrón anterior?
4. 01:16:743 (6) - De igual manera esta, para tener consistencia con el patrón que sigue, y cambiar 01:17:151 (7,8) - a kat.

1. 00:23:274 (12) - Mover 1/2 beat antes para las voces?
2. 00:36:131 - Añadir un kat por la misma razón?
3. 00:40:825 (18) - Podrías cambiarlo a don, así la siguiente nota tendría un poco más de énfasis por el cambio de color.

1. 00:12:661 (1,2,3) - Sería mejor remover estas notas, y tal vez extender un poco el spinner, así las notas empiezan en un downbeat, que se sentiría un poco más natural.

1. 00:04:906 (17,18) - Siento que se jugaría mejor con los colores invertidos, ya que tienes una estructura algo similar en el patrón anterior.
2. 00:17:355 - Acá siento que te hace falta una nota para ese instrumento que estás siguiendo con las notas anteriores. De ser así, remueve 00:17:763 (64,65,66,67) - para dar una buena pausa.
3. 00:24:294 (95) - Remueve para tener consistencia con el siguiente patrón, donde la música es la misma.
4. 00:37:559 (147,148) - Estas notas ocultan le quitan un poco de "protagonismo" a la nota grande, que estaría mejor sola. En caso de que no quieras un break tan largo aquí, algo como un kat en 00:36:743 - y un don en el siguiente beat quedarían bien.
5. 01:05:314 (277) - No debería ser este un kat?
6. 01:13:070 (315,316,317,318,319,320,321) - Siento ddddkkd se sentiría un poco mejor al jugar, ya que tenemos que el sonido va creciendo lentamente. Alternativamente ddkdkdk o ddkdkkd quedarían mejor también.

DakeDekaane wrote:

[General]
Añade ポケモン (Pokémon) a los tags.
Agregado :3

[ Kantan]

1. 00:20:825 (3) - Podrías remover esta nota para enfocarse un poco mejor en las voces, que es lo que parece que sigues.
2. 00:32:661 - Y añadir una nota aquí por la misma razón (y probablemente cambiar a kd k).
3. 00:42:457 (12) - Remover para tener consistencia con el patrón anterior?
4. 01:16:743 (6) - De igual manera esta, para tener consistencia con el patrón que sigue, y cambiar 01:17:151 (7,8) - a kat.

All fix

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:23:274 (12) - Mover 1/2 beat antes para las voces?
2. 00:36:131 - Añadir un kat por la misma razón?
3. 00:40:825 (18) - Podrías cambiarlo a don, así la siguiente nota tendría un poco más de énfasis por el cambio de color.

All fix

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:12:661 (1,2,3) - Sería mejor remover estas notas, y tal vez extender un poco el spinner, así las notas empiezan en un downbeat, que se sentiría un poco más natural.

No me convence mucho el eliminar estas notas, siendo que el mismo qoot me dijo que hiciera "más dificil" el muzu (supuestamente la distancia entre el muzu y el oni es demasiada, de ahí deriva la razón del agregar notas) pero aún no lo tengo claro, si esas notas son necesarias o simplemente meh xD
Por ahora las eliminaré, veremos que dicen los siguientes mods uwu

=w=b o3o)/

DakeDekaane wrote:

[ Oni]

1. 00:04:906 (17,18) - Siento que se jugaría mejor con los colores invertidos, ya que tienes una estructura algo similar en el patrón anterior. <<< De hecho me lo cuestionaba bastante este punto así que aplicado ... claro, siendo d y K
   
   
2. 00:17:355 - Acá siento que te hace falta una nota para ese instrumento que estás siguiendo con las notas anteriores. De ser así, remueve 00:17:763 (64,65,66,67) - para dar una buena pausa. <<< Básicamente seguí combinando sonido y vocales y aquí el triple era mas enfocado al vocal pero a considerar que ya empezaría una nueva secuencia lo veo mejor como lo mencionas...
   
   
3. 00:24:294 (95) - Remueve para tener consistencia con el siguiente patrón, donde la música es la misma. <<< no me percapté de este errorcillo ._.
   
   
4. 00:37:559 (147,148) - Estas notas ocultan le quitan un poco de "protagonismo" a la nota grande, que estaría mejor sola. En caso de que no quieras un break tan largo aquí, algo como un kat en 00:36:743 - y un don en el siguiente beat quedarían bien. <<< Esta bien lo de rellenar el break, pero dejar la Big Don sola?, por mas que hago play y replay en esa sección me sale mas factible dejarla con notas ya que tiene sonidos de golpe muy notorios en los tiempos 00:37:559- y 00:37:763- (al menos que te hayas enfocado en el trasfondo donde curiosamente hace un bajón de sonido y supongo que seria como el break "ideal" para darle el protagonismo directo a iniciar una nueva secuencia con un Big Don), Tambien borré la nota que le sigue de la Big Don para enfatizar un buen mini-break y continuar la secuencia en orden...
   
   
5. 01:05:314 (277) - No debería ser este un kat? <<< Por vocal si .-.
   
   
6. 01:13:070 (315,316,317,318,319,320,321) - Siento ddddkkd se sentiría un poco mejor al jugar, ya que tenemos que el sonido va creciendo lentamente. Alternativamente ddkdkdk o ddkdkkd quedarían mejor también. <<< me parece mas factible la 2da opcion (ddkdkdk) ya que como mencionas el sonido de aumento gradual el meter notas azules alternadas seria mejor para enfatizar eso, inclusive intenté un ddkdkkk pero lo noté ligeramente vacio en las ultimas 3 notas.
   
   
   =w=b

1. 00:11:845 - Algo que siempre me he preguntado a pesar de que entiendo la intención. Por qué hay partes en las que sigues más el sintetizador que las percusiones y viceversa? Personalmente iría sobre el sintetizador, que es más notable.
2. 00:36:743 (143) - Pudieses remover esta nota, para dar el break necesario a las voces.
3. 00:56:947 (236) - De igual manera esta para aligerar este patrón (que es algo pesado comparado con el Muzukashii). Incluso pudieras remover 00:57:151 (237,238) - también.
4. 01:09:192 (294,297) - ^

1. 00:13:682 - Añade un don acá para acercarse un poco al Oni, que es un poco denso acá. También en 00:15:314 -
2. 00:36:335 (71) - No debería ser kat para las voces?
3. 00:40:212 (80) - Recomendaría borrar esta nota, este patrón es el único largo para esta sección de la música.

DakeDekaane wrote:

[
[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:13:682 - Añade un don acá para acercarse un poco al Oni, que es un poco denso acá. También en 00:15:314 -
2. 00:36:335 (71) - No debería ser kat para las voces?
3. 00:40:212 (80) - Recomendaría borrar esta nota, este patrón es el único largo para esta sección de la música.

No kds.

DakeDekaane wrote:

[ Oni]

1. 00:11:845 - Algo que siempre me he preguntado a pesar de que entiendo la intención. Por qué hay partes en las que sigues más el sintetizador que las percusiones y viceversa? Personalmente iría sobre el sintetizador, que es más notable. <<< Me confundí bastante con este punto pero ya al notar los pitidos (quité volumen a los efectos de sonido) si me percapté de esas cosas, a ver si con lo que hice se hace (notas al parejo con los pitidos del sintetizador y los espacios vacios son donde no suenan los golpes)
2. 00:36:743 (143) - Pudieses remover esta nota, para dar el break necesario a las voces. <<< Si nos vamos a vocals es cierto, lo hice para no dejar sin nota asignada al trasfondo .-.
3. 00:56:947 (236) - De igual manera esta para aligerar este patrón (que es algo pesado comparado con el Muzukashii). Incluso pudieras remover 00:57:151 (237,238) - también. <<< Hice unos arreglos ademas de que si borré algunas .-.
4. 01:09:192 (294,297) - ^ <<< Como que repetí la secuencia donde suena igual

Raiden wrote:

Felicidades B)