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goreshit - tatu'd lolis (extended mix)

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Victoire
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on maandag 13 juli 2015 at 05:18:46

Artist: goreshit
Title: tatu'd lolis (extended mix)
Tags: breakcore lolicore marathon mlfaw my love feels all wrong
BPM: 176
Filesize: 11193kb
Play Time: 06:23
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  1. Victoire (5,49 stars, 1930 notes)


Download: goreshit - tatu'd lolis (extended mix)
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dude I want this approved.
hhjkl
just a suggestion:

01:35:118 (10,11,12,13) - I'd recommend you unstack these and all parts of the map like it. You could unstack them in the same way these ( 01:29:663 (1,2,3,4) - ) aren't stacked










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Topic Starter
Victoire

Endemic wrote:

just a suggestion:

01:35:118 (10,11,12,13) - I'd recommend you unstack these and all parts of the map like it. You could unstack them in the same way these ( 01:29:663 (1,2,3,4) - ) aren't stacked
Good tip, updated with this change. Thanks!

does this count as a mod I'm supposed to give kudosu for?
hhjkl

Antarus wrote:

does this count as a mod I'm supposed to give kudosu for?
It's not that big of a mod so i dunno
Topic Starter
Victoire
A friend of mine, Poofin, modded the map, but for some reason didn't decide to actually post it here and instead sent the mod as a txt. He'll hopefully post here after Christmas.

Poofin wrote:

00:17:561 (1,2,3,4) - why is this the only part mapped differently when the music is the same - Changed
00:35:288 (1,2,3,4) - same as above; it would make more sense to have this as the first or last of the set rather than ~3/4 in - Changed.
00:43:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 2-5 stays, 00:44:152 (no beat),00:44:237 (6,7,8,9). so in essence slider 4 notes, space, 4 notes, 10-12. -
I feel like that is more consistant with what you did the combo before because as of now you are mapping on differnt parts - Really not a fan of this. Having a 4-note stream in itself is generally against how I usually map (and how the rest of this map goes), and starting on a blue tick again also doesn't fit with anywhere else in the map.
01:01:198 (7,1) - i think the spinner comes in where is 7 is - Start of the spinner doesn't really matter, I don't think.
01:20:288 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i think this is personal but never been a fan of triplets that change spacings. looks off and not too sure about placement either cause of it - Changed.
01:22:163 (6,7,8) - not sure about sliders ending on the main beats like that nor do i think they are consistnat with 01:21:652 (1,2,3,4,5) - Changing this would make it stop fitting with the music.
01:25:658 (17) - i almost dont want this note here. cant really explain but its like you have two half triplets, one starting with the 5 slider and another at the 1 repeat slider - Yeah, I can see what you mean. Fixed.
01:28:555 (12,13) - doesnt this area also get a kai time? - Yes, it does, now ^^"
01:31:879 (6,7,8,9) - either all sliders or slider+note+slider+note - I don't like slider-note (x2), and I'm not sure how you'd want it to be all sliders.
01:33:073 (3,4,5,6) - maybe spaced slightly closer idk - Changed.
01:34:948 (9) - is right on top of 7 and at the end of 11. cluttered - Changed.
01:36:652 (3,4,5,6,7) - i think you can be more creative with this part. much potential such lack much wow - Also changed.
01:41:595 (4,5) - was kinda expecting another slider - I don't see any problem with this.
01:46:965 (4,5) - this is kinda far compared to the rest and in general - Removed the circle.
01:47:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - there is something here that is missing. possibly something before 6. listen slow search for inconsistancy - I don't see anything wrong here.
02:05:118 (9,1,2,3) - personally i think this is a little too spaced - Changed.
02:06:652 (4) - new combo here? then you can make it 6 and 6 - Changed some combos around here, not sure if it's helped this specifically, though.
02:31:027 (5,1) - end of 5 intrudes on next combo. - I'm sorry, what?
02:51:482 (1,2,3,4) - not a fan, kinda crude looking - Changed.
03:19:266 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - theres a lot in such little space. not big but just a observation - Only thing I changed was making the big slider fit the stream a little more :P
03:20:629 (3,4,5,6,7) - slighly obscures readablility - I made a change here, not sure if it's the right one.
03:48:925 (1,2,3,4) - once again not a fan of this syle. slighly deviates from your orignial design if that makes sense at all - Changed.
03:49:948 (7,8,9,10,1) - is the 8 being out of place intentional or not cause it looks off - Nothing here is out of place, I don't think. The 7 is somewhat more downwards to ease in the stream from the slider. The 8 is just the corner of the stream.
03:54:379 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - its a little too stacked, give it just a bit more space so that it doesnt look too stacked - Changed.
04:12:448 (5) - so lonely repeat slider seems lost. maybe end of the combo should have one too? - Changed.
04:22:675 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - aestetics - Fixed.
05:38:868 (6,1) - maybe make 6 a slider and 1 not? not sure about this one - Changed, turned 6 into a slider (but kept 1 as a slider too)


Extra Notes: Use auto+dt and watch your map. Anything that catches your eye, regardless of what it is, may need revision.
-aestetics, readablilty, patterens, flow, anything
Stormdro
Better late than never:
00:06:311 (7) – why is this the only different slider in the first part?
00:08:186 (2,3,4,5,6) – the jumps get bigger which seem to be unnecessary, but they don’t lead in as well as they could. I would suggest changing the angle of the sliders to lead in more or changing them to be curves instead so that it creates a more rounded circle, which I think is what they are trying to do?
00:12:788 (4,5,6) – the change in direction that these notes give seems a little too heavy, might want to ease in the change with 00:12:448 (2,3,4) – and make a gradual angle change that leads in to the direction change.
00:16:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – why is this part the only part with claps?
00:25:061 (5) – I think this note is too hidden under previous sliders, it would be easier to spot if it you moved it a bit more by moving it up or down, though this will require change in the other sliders.
00:28:129 (5) –I think that this slider should be the same as the others in that it ends on the red tick, it sounds out of place compared to the others.
Same for 00:39:038 (11) and 00:40:402 (6)
00:33:754 (7,8) – I think if the 7 seven slider had one reverse arrow it would sound better than having both the 7 and 8 sliders.
00:36:652 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – in this pattern why is the 5 slider the only one directing inwards?
00:55:913 (1,2,3,4) – I think that the 2 and 4 circles should be sliders instead, this gets rid of the problem of moving from blue ticks to red ticks and I think fits the rhythm more, as well as being more consistent with 00:56:936 (5,6,7,8)
00:40:402 (6) –I think if these were replaced with 2 ¼ sliders it would feel more in rhythm with the song.
01:23:442 (2,4) – I think replacing these with 2 ¼ sliders would also fit better, like at 00:55:913
01:32:391 (9) – I think this would work better as a slider and if 01:32:561 (1) was twice as long and with a reverse arrow instead of having 01:32:732 (2)
02:23:868 (8) – If this was twice as long it would go better with the voice if that’s what you want.
02:52:846 (1,2) – Replacing these with a slider or putting a circle before them would fit more, they sound out of place on their own, like you did with these 02:55:487 (1,2,3)
03:05:970 (5,6) –I think these should be the same as 03:08:698 (5,6) or the other way around. Maybe putting a slider on 03:09:038 (7) as well, similar to 02:52:846
03:53:698 (5) – Replacing this with 2 ¼ sliders would fit better with the song, even though there isn’t a voice over this part.
04:23:016 (1,2,3,4) –I think if these were 2 sliders instead it would fit better with what you’ve done before.
04:56:169 (2) –I think if this was 1/3 or its length and having the new 04:55:913 (1,2) repeat at 04:56:425
04:57:703 (5,6,7,8) –Something feels off about this part to me.
05:02:135 (9) –I think separating this into a circle and a slider would fit more.
05:16:879 (4) – I think having a slider fall on the blue tick in this would hit the rhythm more.
06:05:118 (1,2,3,4) and 06:16:027 (1,2,3,4) the lack of movement slows the map down a lot which I don’t think suits the rest of the map, maybe making them a little further apart?
Poofin
Reposting as suggested

00:17:561 (1,2,3,4) - why is this the only part mapped differently when the music is the same
00:35:288 (1,2,3,4) - same as above; it would make more sense to have this as the first or last of the set rather than ~3/4 in
00:43:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 2-5 stays, 00:44:152 (no beat),00:44:237 (6,7,8,9). so in essence slider 4 notes, space, 4 notes, 10-12.
I feel like that is more consistant with what you did the combo before because as of now you are mapping on differnt parts
01:01:198 (7,1) - i think the spinner comes in where is 7 is
01:20:288 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i think this is personal but never been a fan of triplets that change spacings. looks off and not too sure about placement either cause of it
01:22:163 (6,7,8) - not sure about sliders ending on the main beats like that nor do i think they are consistnat with 01:21:652 (1,2,3,4,5)
01:25:658 (17) - i almost dont want this note here. cant really explain but its like you have two half triplets, one starting with the 5 slider and another at the 1 repeat slider
01:28:555 (12,13) - doesnt this area also get a kai time?
01:31:879 (6,7,8,9) - either all sliders or slider+note+slider+note
01:33:073 (3,4,5,6) - maybe spaced slightly closer idk
01:34:948 (9) - is right on top of 7 and at the end of 11. cluttered
01:36:652 (3,4,5,6,7) - i think you can be more creative with this part. much potential such lack much wow
01:41:595 (4,5) - was kinda expecting another slider
01:46:965 (4,5) - this is kinda far compared to the rest and in general
01:47:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - there is something here that is missing. possibly something before 6. listen slow search for inconsistancy
02:05:118 (9,1,2,3) - personally i think this is a little too spaced
02:06:652 (4) - new combo here? then you can make it 6 and 6
02:31:027 (5,1) - end of 5 intrudes on next combo.
02:51:482 (1,2,3,4) - not a fan, kinda crude looking
03:19:266 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - theres a lot in such little space. not big but just a observation
03:20:629 (3,4,5,6,7) - slighly obscures readablility
03:48:925 (1,2,3,4) - once again not a fan of this syle. slighly deviates from your orignial design if that makes sense at all
03:49:948 (7,8,9,10,1) - is the 8 being out of place intentional or not cause it looks off
03:54:379 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - its a little too stacked, give it just a bit more space so that it doesnt look too stacked
04:12:448 (5) - so lonely repeat slider seems lost. maybe end of the combo should have one too?
04:22:675 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - aestetics
05:38:868 (6,1) - maybe make 6 a slider and 1 not? not sure about this one


Extra Notes: Use auto+dt and watch your map. Anything that catches your eye, regardless of what it is, may need revision.
-aestetics, readablilty, patterens, flow, anything
Topic Starter
Victoire

Stormdro wrote:

Better late than never:
00:06:311 (7) – why is this the only different slider in the first part? - Changed
00:08:186 (2,3,4,5,6) – the jumps get bigger which seem to be unnecessary, but they don’t lead in as well as they could. I would suggest changing the angle of the sliders to lead in more or changing them to be curves instead so that it creates a more rounded circle, which I think is what they are trying to do? - Curved the sliders and made them (hopefully) flow a little better.
00:12:788 (4,5,6) – the change in direction that these notes give seems a little too heavy, might want to ease in the change with 00:12:448 (2,3,4) – and make a gradual angle change that leads in to the direction change. - The change in direction of the last slider follows the reverse of flow leading into 00:13:129 (6) - , it should be fine.
00:16:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – why is this part the only part with claps? It's not, actually, but I do agree that they shouldn't be here.
00:25:061 (5) – I think this note is too hidden under previous sliders, it would be easier to spot if it you moved it a bit more by moving it up or down, though this will require change in the other sliders. - Fixed.
00:28:129 (5) –I think that this slider should be the same as the others in that it ends on the red tick, it sounds out of place compared to the others.
Same for 00:39:038 (11) and 00:40:402 (6) - I prefer how it is right now, because it provides a bit of variation, and follows the music more closely.
00:33:754 (7,8) – I think if the 7 seven slider had one reverse arrow it would sound better than having both the 7 and 8 sliders. Fixed.
00:36:652 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – in this pattern why is the 5 slider the only one directing inwards? To accomodate the change of flow after it.
00:55:913 (1,2,3,4) – I think that the 2 and 4 circles should be sliders instead, this gets rid of the problem of moving from blue ticks to red ticks and I think fits the rhythm more, as well as being more consistent with 00:56:936 (5,6,7,8) Changed, although not exactly what I think you had in mind
00:40:402 (6) –I think if these were replaced with 2 ¼ sliders it would feel more in rhythm with the song. - You addressed this earlier.
01:23:442 (2,4) – I think replacing these with 2 ¼ sliders would also fit better, like at 00:55:913 - Changed.
01:32:391 (9) – I think this would work better as a slider and if 01:32:561 (1) was twice as long and with a reverse arrow instead of having 01:32:732 (2) -Changed.
02:23:868 (8) – If this was twice as long it would go better with the voice if that’s what you want. I prefer how it is right now.
02:52:846 (1,2) – Replacing these with a slider or putting a circle before them would fit more, they sound out of place on their own, like you did with these 02:55:487 (1,2,3) Replaced them with a slider.
03:05:970 (5,6) –I think these should be the same as 03:08:698 (5,6) or the other way around. Maybe putting a slider on 03:09:038 (7) as well, similar to 02:52:846 - Changed the first one of these, not the second though.
03:53:698 (5) – Replacing this with 2 ¼ sliders would fit better with the song, even though there isn’t a voice over this part. - Changed.
04:23:016 (1,2,3,4) –I think if these were 2 sliders instead it would fit better with what you’ve done before. - Changed.
04:56:169 (2) –I think if this was 1/3 or its length and having the new 04:55:913 (1,2) repeat at 04:56:425 - I really don't know what you mean here.
04:57:703 (5,6,7,8) –Something feels off about this part to me. - I changed it a little bit, but this line is pretty vague.
05:02:135 (9) –I think separating this into a circle and a slider would fit more. - Changed.
05:16:879 (4) – I think having a slider fall on the blue tick in this would hit the rhythm more. - I'd rather leave this alone.
06:05:118 (1,2,3,4) and 06:16:027 (1,2,3,4) the lack of movement slows the map down a lot which I don’t think suits the rest of the map, maybe making them a little further apart? - Put them a little further apart.
Thanks for modding, Stormdro and Poofin (who reposted his mod so I could give him his deserved Kudosu, response reposted below)

Poofin wrote:

Reposting as suggested

00:17:561 (1,2,3,4) - why is this the only part mapped differently when the music is the same - Changed
00:35:288 (1,2,3,4) - same as above; it would make more sense to have this as the first or last of the set rather than ~3/4 in - Changed.
00:43:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 2-5 stays, 00:44:152 (no beat),00:44:237 (6,7,8,9). so in essence slider 4 notes, space, 4 notes, 10-12. -
I feel like that is more consistant with what you did the combo before because as of now you are mapping on differnt parts - Really not a fan of this. Having a 4-note stream in itself is generally against how I usually map (and how the rest of this map goes), and starting on a blue tick again also doesn't fit with anywhere else in the map.
01:01:198 (7,1) - i think the spinner comes in where is 7 is - Start of the spinner doesn't really matter, I don't think.
01:20:288 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i think this is personal but never been a fan of triplets that change spacings. looks off and not too sure about placement either cause of it - Changed.
01:22:163 (6,7,8) - not sure about sliders ending on the main beats like that nor do i think they are consistnat with 01:21:652 (1,2,3,4,5) - Changing this would make it stop fitting with the music.
01:25:658 (17) - i almost dont want this note here. cant really explain but its like you have two half triplets, one starting with the 5 slider and another at the 1 repeat slider - Yeah, I can see what you mean. Fixed.
01:28:555 (12,13) - doesnt this area also get a kai time? - Yes, it does, now ^^"
01:31:879 (6,7,8,9) - either all sliders or slider+note+slider+note - I don't like slider-note (x2), and I'm not sure how you'd want it to be all sliders.
01:33:073 (3,4,5,6) - maybe spaced slightly closer idk - Changed.
01:34:948 (9) - is right on top of 7 and at the end of 11. cluttered - Changed.
01:36:652 (3,4,5,6,7) - i think you can be more creative with this part. much potential such lack much wow - Also changed.
01:41:595 (4,5) - was kinda expecting another slider - I don't see any problem with this.
01:46:965 (4,5) - this is kinda far compared to the rest and in general - Removed the circle.
01:47:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - there is something here that is missing. possibly something before 6. listen slow search for inconsistancy - I don't see anything wrong here.
02:05:118 (9,1,2,3) - personally i think this is a little too spaced - Changed.
02:06:652 (4) - new combo here? then you can make it 6 and 6 - Changed some combos around here, not sure if it's helped this specifically, though.
02:31:027 (5,1) - end of 5 intrudes on next combo. - I'm sorry, what?
02:51:482 (1,2,3,4) - not a fan, kinda crude looking - Changed.
03:19:266 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - theres a lot in such little space. not big but just a observation - Only thing I changed was making the big slider fit the stream a little more :P
03:20:629 (3,4,5,6,7) - slighly obscures readablility - I made a change here, not sure if it's the right one.
03:48:925 (1,2,3,4) - once again not a fan of this syle. slighly deviates from your orignial design if that makes sense at all - Changed.
03:49:948 (7,8,9,10,1) - is the 8 being out of place intentional or not cause it looks off - Nothing here is out of place, I don't think. The 7 is somewhat more downwards to ease in the stream from the slider. The 8 is just the corner of the stream.
03:54:379 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - its a little too stacked, give it just a bit more space so that it doesnt look too stacked - Changed.
04:12:448 (5) - so lonely repeat slider seems lost. maybe end of the combo should have one too? - Changed.
04:22:675 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - aestetics - Fixed.
05:38:868 (6,1) - maybe make 6 a slider and 1 not? not sure about this one - Changed, turned 6 into a slider (but kept 1 as a slider too)


Extra Notes: Use auto+dt and watch your map. Anything that catches your eye, regardless of what it is, may need revision.
-aestetics, readablilty, patterens, flow, anything
Badis
This map is a masterpiece , hope its gonna get ranked !! ;w;
Alleria
Masterpiece.
-Faded-
Hi; sorry for the late mod, irl problems.

[General]
  1. You should add some tags, it's not very efficient just leaving the field empty. Add some words that relate to the song, but the words you add must not already be part of the metadata


[Victoire]
  1. 00:21:311 (7) - This kind of slider isn't rankable, since the red points are being manipulated to make the slider ball stop. This is not the intended purpose, so it is unrankable and should be changed.
  2. 00:21:737 (8) - Add an NC here, since it is on a downbeat. Your NC pattern on this part of the song is one NC per downbeat, so it doesn't make much sense not to have one here.
  3. 01:35:459 (11) - Again, add an NC like I mentioned above.
  4. 01:55:658 (12,1,2,3) - Nothing in the music can justify the change in spacing, which will throw off the player. For this reason, I think you should change it.
  5. 03:21:311 (7,2) - Autostacking doesn't take place here, so the poorly done stack doesn't look very pleasent. You should fix this if you can. Make sure that both ends are in the exact same location.
  6. 03:53:357 (3,4) - You should fix this blanket, it doesn't look very nice atm.
  7. 04:11:254 (4,5) - This spacing change doesn't make too much sense; nothing in the music can justify it because the music here is the same as the music at 04:10:743 (1,2) - , for example, which is spaced normally.
  8. 05:25:743 (3) - Slider can be improved. If you look closely, then you can see that the bump isn't even on both sides. The right side of it goes much further out than the left side, which looks poor. I suggest you fix this~
  9. 06:12:788 (6,7) - This pattern has two issues; (6)'s end is too close to the border of (7), and the blanket is done poorly. Both of these can degrade your map's aesthetics, so I suggest fixing these.


A very unique style that uses slider leiniency very well. This map has potentially, but aesthetics could use a bit of work imo. Great job on the hitsounding as well.

I shot a star, good luck!
Topic Starter
Victoire

[ Faded ] wrote:

Hi; sorry for the late mod, irl problems.

[General]
  1. You should add some tags, it's not very efficient just leaving the field empty. Add some words that relate to the song, but the words you add must not already be part of the metadata - I added some tags, dunno if they suffice though.


[Victoire]
  1. 00:21:311 (7) - This kind of slider isn't rankable, since the red points are being manipulated to make the slider ball stop. This is not the intended purpose, so it is unrankable and should be changed. - Fixed
  2. 00:21:737 (8) - Add an NC here, since it is on a downbeat. Your NC pattern on this part of the song is one NC per downbeat, so it doesn't make much sense not to have one here. - Fixed as well.
  3. 01:35:459 (11) - Again, add an NC like I mentioned above. - NC added on the slider before the one quoted.
  4. 01:55:658 (12,1,2,3) - Nothing in the music can justify the change in spacing, which will throw off the player. For this reason, I think you should change it. - Fixed
  5. 03:21:311 (7,2) - Autostacking doesn't take place here, so the poorly done stack doesn't look very pleasent. You should fix this if you can. Make sure that both ends are in the exact same location. - Yep, could and did fix.
  6. 03:53:357 (3,4) - You should fix this blanket, it doesn't look very nice atm. - Fixed.
  7. 04:11:254 (4,5) - This spacing change doesn't make too much sense; nothing in the music can justify it because the music here is the same as the music at 04:10:743 (1,2) - , for example, which is spaced normally. - This is fixed now too.
  8. 05:25:743 (3) - Slider can be improved. If you look closely, then you can see that the bump isn't even on both sides. The right side of it goes much further out than the left side, which looks poor. I suggest you fix this~ - So finicky, but fixed.
  9. 06:12:788 (6,7) - This pattern has two issues; (6)'s end is too close to the border of (7), and the blanket is done poorly. Both of these can degrade your map's aesthetics, so I suggest fixing these. - Aaand fixed.


A very unique style that uses slider leiniency very well. This map has potentially, but aesthetics could use a bit of work imo. Great job on the hitsounding as well.

I shot a star, good luck!
Thank you very much for modding and for the star!
An Yanyan
good maps
Keada
Hi there owo/
M4M :>

  • General

  1. Try to add some combo colours that fits with the background :> because these doesnt fit at all >.<
  2. You can disable this (unless youre planning on making a Storyboard, then uncheck this) :>
  • Victoire

  1. 00:03:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - you could use the same spacing on this whole stream, because the music doesnt build up here
  2. 00:41:936 (1,2,3) - these 3 notes doesnt look that good tbh (personal preference)
  3. 01:28:470 - this feels a bit weird, try placing a single 01:28:300 - and a triple 01:28:470 - it should be an important beat there and it doesnt fit on the end of a slider
  4. 02:06:396 (1,2,3) - try giving these more form, looks cluttered to me
  5. 03:19:266 (3,4,5,6,7) - this doesnt look good (personal preference) try giving it more form, like this
  6. 03:49:948 (7,8,9,10,1) - this stream does not feel good, try like this
  7. 03:53:698 (5) - have the same DS here as these two 03:53:357 (3,4) - around x:213 y:227 should be fine :>
  8. 04:14:664 (1,2,3) - try not to stack these with the singles before, makes it hard to read, space them out a little more
  9. 04:24:294 (11) - distance space this note between here 04:24:038 (10,1) - around x:458 y:163 should be fine :D
  10. 04:24:720 (2,3,4) - same with this
  11. 04:39:720 (5,6,7) - ^
  12. 04:41:084 (3,4,5) - ^
  13. 04:42:703 (4) - place at x:365 y:230
  14. 05:12:448 (4,5,6) - do like this instead
  15. 05:15:175 (4,5,6) - same as I said above, it loses flow tbh
  16. 05:29:067 (8,9,10,11) - recreate this stream, doesnt look good, you can try like this
  17. 05:42:448 (5,6,7) - its your choice, but I think it would fit better if you had the same DS as I said above
Topic Starter
Victoire

Keada wrote:

Hi there owo/
M4M :>

  • General

  1. Try to add some combo colours that fits with the background :> because these doesnt fit at all >.< - Woops, forgot colors were a thing.
  2. You can disable this (unless youre planning on making a Storyboard, then uncheck this) :> Done.
  • Victoire

  1. 00:03:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - you could use the same spacing on this whole stream, because the music doesnt build up here Changed.
  2. 00:41:936 (1,2,3) - these 3 notes doesnt look that good tbh (personal preference) Fixed.
  3. 01:28:470 - this feels a bit weird, try placing a single 01:28:300 - and a triple 01:28:470 - it should be an important beat there and it doesnt fit on the end of a slider Changed.
  4. 02:06:396 (1,2,3) - try giving these more form, looks cluttered to me Fixed.
  5. 03:19:266 (3,4,5,6,7) - this doesnt look good (personal preference) try giving it more form, like this Very slightly changed this to ensure perfect symmetry.
  6. 03:49:948 (7,8,9,10,1) - this stream does not feel good, try like this Changed.
  7. 03:53:698 (5) - have the same DS here as these two 03:53:357 (3,4) - around x:213 y:227 should be fine :> Fixed.
  8. 04:14:664 (1,2,3) - try not to stack these with the singles before, makes it hard to read, space them out a little more Fixed.
  9. 04:24:294 (11) - distance space this note between here 04:24:038 (10,1) - around x:458 y:163 should be fine :DThey aren't supposed to be evenly spaced there. I did move it a little to look nicer, and made it more consistent with the next stuff you mentioned.
  10. 04:24:720 (2,3,4) - same with this
  11. 04:39:720 (5,6,7) - ^
  12. 04:41:084 (3,4,5) - ^
  13. 04:42:703 (4) - place at x:365 y:230 Fixed.
  14. 05:12:448 (4,5,6) - do like this instead No. This (and the below) are both intentional, and I don't want to change them.
  15. 05:15:175 (4,5,6) - same as I said above, it loses flow tbh
  16. 05:29:067 (8,9,10,11) - recreate this stream, doesnt look good, you can try like this Fixed.
  17. 05:42:448 (5,6,7) - its your choice, but I think it would fit better if you had the same DS as I said above Changed.
Osuology
00:59:749 (7,1) - #Iloveweirdtriples.(A lot of triples are awkward, plz change.)
01:33:073 (2,3,4,5) - Weird pattern, make the 5 NC maybe?
02:55:487 (1,2,3,4) - This is one case of where the spacing for streams is unconsistent. You do this more in the song.
03:58:299 (8,1) - This jump is unnecessary
04:13:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Antijump all of a sudden?
04:19:777 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Ooh, nasty.
05:27:107 (1) - Do you think this is art?
05:39:209 (2) - This is awkward.
05:40:402 (9,10) - Why jump?

nice map tho!
Topic Starter
Victoire

Osuology wrote:

00:59:749 (7,1) - #Iloveweirdtriples.(A lot of triples are awkward, plz change.) Changed it a bit.
01:33:073 (2,3,4,5) - Weird pattern, make the 5 NC maybe? Not sure what's wrong with the pattern. Did make the 5 a NC though
02:55:487 (1,2,3,4) - This is one case of where the spacing for streams is unconsistent. You do this more in the song. This is on purpose, for emphasis.
03:58:299 (8,1) - This jump is unnecessary Switched around some sliders.
04:13:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Antijump all of a sudden? Yes. I don't think this is a problem, though.
04:19:777 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Ooh, nasty. How is this nasty? :(
05:27:107 (1) - Do you think this is art? It is now!
05:39:209 (2) - This is awkward. Made it a slider-triple.
05:40:402 (9,10) - Why jump? It's fun! Not much of a jump, anyways.

nice map tho!
Thanks for the mod!
Osuology

Antarus wrote:

Osuology wrote:

00:59:749 (7,1) - #Iloveweirdtriples.(A lot of triples are awkward, plz change.) Changed it a bit.
01:33:073 (2,3,4,5) - Weird pattern, make the 5 NC maybe? Not sure what's wrong with the pattern. Did make the 5 a NC thoughNot sure what I thought here now
02:55:487 (1,2,3,4) - This is one case of where the spacing for streams is unconsistent. You do this more in the song. This is on purpose, for emphasis.aha

04:13:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Antijump all of a sudden? Yes. I don't think this is a problem, though.It is very sudden tho
04:19:777 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Ooh, nasty. How is this nasty? :(the stream is changing distances while coming backwards, really weird


nice map tho!
Thanks for the mod!
happy30
00:30:771 (12,13,14) - this pattern is a bit hard to read. in all previous patterns you've got a jump between 00:30:771 (12,13) - in the rhythm, and the music very suggests so too. I actually thought the stream was 2 note shorter and I hit 00:31:027 (14) - too early, thinking this was the jump like in the previous patterns. I would suggest you to remove 00:30:771 (12) - or make 00:30:686 (11) - into a 1/4 slider, and still add the jump to 00:30:856 (13) - somewhere.

00:33:754 (7) - Make this a normal triple instead (might not follow the music, but plays a lot better,) or make it like 00:44:663 (10,11) -
00:41:595 (6) - I don't like a sliderend on this beat, the synth is pitched up here, and should therefore be clicked instead.

thats all
this map is too long man
Topic Starter
Victoire

happy30 wrote:

00:30:771 (12,13,14) - this pattern is a bit hard to read. in all previous patterns you've got a jump between 00:30:771 (12,13) - in the rhythm, and the music very suggests so too. I actually thought the stream was 2 note shorter and I hit 00:31:027 (14) - too early, thinking this was the jump like in the previous patterns. I would suggest you to remove 00:30:771 (12) - or make 00:30:686 (11) - into a 1/4 slider, and still add the jump to 00:30:856 (13) - somewhere. - Fixed, I think.

00:33:754 (7) - Make this a normal triple instead (might not follow the music, but plays a lot better,) or make it like 00:44:663 (10,11) - - Made it like 00:44:663 (10,11) - , seems best.
00:41:595 (6) - I don't like a sliderend on this beat, the synth is pitched up here, and should therefore be clicked instead. - Changed it up here, a bit.

thats all
this map is too long man
this map is the perfect length

Thanks for the mod :P
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