hello ~
as request from forum PM.
im here for 2kds owo
[General]
seems i can't find the official source for this song.
Artist : 遠山明孝
Title : Piano Intro -Massive Mix-
im not sure if the title is correct.
[Salad]
00:14:342 (2) - i'd better to divide this into a 2 sliders in 1/2 length which the second slider is placed toward left. this way will make the jump to 00:15:199 (1) a bit smoother. more like this
http://puu.sh/cEOfW.jpg00:28:913 (1) - a 5% down on volume wont make any difference. to represent the music better, try to set the volume around 40% or 45%
00:46:056 (1,2,1) - lol i can catch them w/o using a dash. maybe you can move 00:46:484 (2) slightly to the right to create a small jump?
00:53:127 (5) - remove this circle. idk why but just remove this ;p
[Platter]
00:14:127 (5) - imo sounds better if you add clap on this note
00:22:056 (1,2,3) - these anti flow is somewhat annoying me due their distance is quite far. imo the slider (2) could be changed to a more vertically to reduce these difficultness.
00:23:983 (1,2,3) - same as above
00:25:913 (1) - you miss a strong beat on 00:26:127 which should be mapped just like your salad. anyway your pattern here is weird :3
01:07:270 (3) - x:384 could be a better spot imo
01:07:913 (4,5,1) - ah well im not against this 1/4 beat HDash in platter. they're only appear once so i think it's okay. but the flow throw me off on the 1st play because it's kinda unexpected. considering make the placement something like this plsplspls?
http://puu.sh/cETwU.jpg01:10:699 (4,5) - nonono. evil 1/4 little jump that follows nothing
01:13:270 (5) - i want this moved to x:480
01:15:842 (2,3) - not neccessary but i think (3) should have the repeat one. because it is just weird to see that (3) started on blue tick
01:17:342 (2,3) - same as above. also at least maybe find a different pattern from above
01:21:949 (5) - x:104 because i want this moved to x:104
01:24:627 (1,2,1,2) - come on you can make a better pattern than this. a combo 1/1 straight up slider is kinda boring to play even you put a HDash between them
fun factSey wrote:
01:21:949 (5,1) - This can be HDash as well to make it consistent with 01:08:234 (5,1). Wtf you suggest a 1/4 HDash in a Platter, that's unrankable Kuro, pls.
but you did at 01:08:234 (5,1) lol
[Rain]
00:43:699 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1) - aww those pattern looks kinda overdose-ish. or maybe this is just your style
01:09:092 (1,2) - slightly move (2) to the right. the current distance is way too far
01:10:270 (4) - again. at least 2 or 3 grid to the right
01:11:770 (4,5) - another hard jump after jump. and also a 2 HDash afterwards. what can be more harder than this \o/. pls move (5) 6 or 7 grid to the left to make a nice impact to catch these 2 HDashes afterwards
i would say the overall pattern is weird. yesyes i know its just your mapping style and that's why i hate my self for not touching any of it :3
aaaaaand that's all.
good luck