Mika Nakashima - ORION · forum

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-02-09T11:24:04+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年5月15日 at 1:15:26

Artist: Mika Nakashima
Title: ORION
Source: Ryuusei no Kizuna
Tags: jamesleao orioncomet
BPM: 144
Filesize: 3797kb
Play Time: 02:02
Difficulties Available:

Believe (4.68 stars, 228 notes)
JL's Cry (3.69 stars, 177 notes)
Ploy's Love (0.38 stars, 54 notes)

Download: Mika Nakashima - ORION
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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18th Beatmap

-Staff-
Ploy's Love(Easy)>> orioncomet
JL'Cry(Normal) >> jamesleao
Believe(Hard) >> gdeath

Skin by orioncomet
Storyboard by gdeath

Last edited by gdeath 2010-05-15T16:22:53+00:00, edited 19 times in total.

JamesLeao

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JamesLeao 2010-02-19T18:26:17+00:00

Done

Download: Mika Nakashima - ORION (gdeath) [JL's].osu

dkey

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dkey 2010-02-20T14:22:35+00:00

Hard(Believe)有点吓着我了。。找节奏而已吧。。别学myst

圆size感觉设normal更好，空音OP也是，貌似<normal做出来的都是跳多，像happy30；
除了跳多钻研一下排列，gd酱加油-v-

James2250

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James2250 2010-02-20T19:38:03+00:00

I would make offset 1244 (don't forget to resnap all notes)
background has to be 1024x768 and below so resize it
put a 1 second lead-in time

JL:
could use some more hitsounds near the beginning
00:29:498 (1) - start at 00:29:602
01:25:956 (1) - start at 01:26:060
01:30:435 - break isnt really needed

believe:
seems slightly overmapped in a few places but its ok
01:15:827 (2) - move 1 tiny grid up to mirror 1
01:24:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - could use some hitsounds (and a more interesting pattern than just a straight line)

*star*

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-02-21T15:49:12+00:00

>satosid
All Fixed

>James2250
I got 1,257 about offset.
others are fixed.
thx for your modding : )

Sushi

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Sushi 2010-02-22T10:29:52+00:00

01:56:465 (x) From here, you may make the volume drop down slowly

No particular problem, except that i think that gdeath's is a little too much overmapped o3o

but this is my opinion ~

Nice one!

DeadAlready

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DeadAlready 2010-02-22T12:35:47+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-02-22T14:57:54+00:00

>Sushi971
not changed
thx mod : )

>quintitem
串都改了,这是我以前的一张老图，拿出来重谱了 D:

dkey

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dkey 2010-02-23T06:31:04+00:00

gdeath wrote:
>quintitem
串都改了,这是我以前的一张老图，拿出来重谱了 D:

还是串 D:
圆SIZE改Normal是想你改跳保守一点，然后改串为一些note叠打滑条等排列（连续2个3连的也要改），既然你懒的话，还是改回以前的圆SIZE，保留现在Jump的样式，否则就没了娱乐性。

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-02-24T18:07:01+00:00

go go gdeath (*ﾟдﾟ*)b

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-02-26T05:31:32+00:00

>satosid
Circle Size变回原先的设定lol

>S i R i R u
Yay~

arsrun

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arsrun 2010-02-26T20:26:16+00:00

流行之袢wowow 那背景图误导了我。。。
这部日剧还是相当不错滴。（中岛小姐还在里面客串了一把一当家二宫和也的FANS^ ^//）
结局也是相当的出人意料。。

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2010-02-27T02:41:57+00:00

(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Shulin

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Shulin 2010-02-27T15:43:54+00:00

General:

-- Offset 1248 [Current one starts on the wrong note]
-- BG is too big resize to 1024 x 768.

JL's Cryl:

00:26:039 (6) - Sounds better on white tick imo.
01:41:248 (9) - New combo.

Believe:

-- Imo the triple notes don't fit this slow song.

01:22:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This bit is too confusing, 01:22:704 (1) - is hidden and 01:22:913 (2) - could you lay this out better?
01:32:183 (2,3,4,5) - Sounds bad ;_; imo delete 01:32:183 (2,3) - and 01:32:600 (5) - and add a note at 01:32:704 up to you though ^^

Nice overall

~ Star

Lissette

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Lissette 2010-03-01T05:39:40+00:00

Shulin wrote:
-- Imo the triple notes don't fit this slow song.

totally agree, and no only the triple notes, also all 1/4 notes, imo

anyway here's my modding

I think there's should be an easier difficulty for beginners
and like Shulin said, resize BG ^^

Believe
1/4 notes don't fit >.<
01:58:329 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about if you gradually lower the volume for this combo

JL's Cry
01:41:038 (8) - new combo?
same suggestion as Believe at the end of the song

Star!

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-03-01T08:17:54+00:00

All Fixed!
Thanks for your helps

Diasios

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Diasios 2010-03-02T18:01:42+00:00

Offset: 1260 (resnap all notes)

01:58:331 (sb = Lyric/j-05.png): Add a "Fade" effect when the image appears

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-03-03T03:49:41+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
Offset: 1260 (resnap all notes)
i used Shulin's timing and Breeze recheck it for me.The current timing goes fine.
anyway,i'll find others to check it again

01:58:331 (sb = Lyric/j-05.png): Add a "Fade" effect when the image appears
"Fade of this SB was already added"

Thanks for your help but nothing changed

jyjdia

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jyjdia 2010-03-03T16:16:44+00:00

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-03-13T17:26:25+00:00

ME

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-03-14T11:03:10+00:00

lol

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-03-14T11:04:28+00:00

lag

Starrodkirby86

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Starrodkirby86 2010-03-19T03:46:03+00:00

Pretty map is pretty. :3

And so...let's see...

Great mapping overall, from both of you. Caught the atmosphere of this song. <3

You need to fix something though. Your BG.jpg is bigger than the maximum dimensions allowed. Please resize it to something smaller than 1024x768. Just go on Photoshop and then to Image > Image Resize... and set the width to 1024 pixels. XD Have Constrain Proportions checked too, so everything will be resized nicely. Or do your own magic ~

Mika Nakashima - ORION (gdeath).osb isn't needed, since your Storyboard seems to be within the .osu. Remove this file as well.

Here's something on the suggestion side...[JL's Cry] is pretty nice...but I have paranoia of it being a bit difficult.

It's mainly streams like 01:16:248 (7,8,9,10,11) - or 01:41:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - that makes me worried. XD Keep that in mind. If you have any argument why these work well, I'd like to hear them. ;p

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-03-20T23:49:59+00:00

All Fixed~

yaya

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yaya 2010-04-06T17:56:23+00:00

不要强加streams
跟音乐不合
3连打从红线开始
不要从白线，太生硬了。

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-04-08T15:18:36+00:00

If you don't mind I have 5 custom hitsounds and feel free to change name of mine diff, If you like

Download: orion easy.rar

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-04-10T07:03:34+00:00

@yaya

i'll change some patterns tomorrow
thanks for your suggestion ^^

@Poly

Sorry for my delay.
ready to update tomorrow

you have 5 custom hitsound files?xDD
pl0x attached the files and i'll add them
btw,may i use your hit skin?

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-04-10T08:17:38+00:00

gdeath wrote:
@Poly

Sorry for my delay.
ready to update tomorrow

you have 5 custom hitsound files?xDD
pl0x attached the files and i'll add them
kay, already on that post
btw,may i use your hit skin?
YES, SUER!! Why not >3<

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-04-11T23:39:07+00:00

Updated!

Sure

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Sure 2010-04-16T18:35:10+00:00

dkey

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dkey 2010-04-17T19:12:31+00:00

=.=到现在还是比较抗拒那个连打。。这歌节奏应该做悠闲点才是

arsrun

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arsrun 2010-04-29T13:18:23+00:00

satosid wrote:
=.=到现在还是比较抗拒那个连打。。这歌节奏应该做悠闲点才是

其实这歌没记错的话BPM不低0.0

Beatrice_old

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Beatrice_old 2010-05-02T10:34:35+00:00

oops

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-05-02T10:36:04+00:00

i'll change that stream and make it easier when i'm free ^.^

Edit: Finally Done.Time to get it ranked.

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-05-15T03:26:03+00:00

Go Go v>w<v

abalee

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abalee 2010-05-27T08:35:19+00:00

Believe:
01:08:123 (4,5,6,7) - : I think it should not have such circles placed here. one circle in 01:08:331 seems enough.

others are fine.

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-05-27T10:38:28+00:00

~~Just added some hitsounds >.<~~

kay, I think It's sound fine which now ~

Gens

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Gens 2010-05-27T23:08:02+00:00

Just saying that a proper approach circle must be added so it doesn't mess up with other skins. You can add the default one if you wish.

Also, offset seems a bit early, try +5?

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-05-29T03:16:07+00:00

abalee wrote:
Believe:
01:08:123 (4,5,6,7) - : I think it should not have such circles placed here. one circle in 01:08:331 seems enough.

others are fine.

我是八嘎。哈哈~
okay.fixed.

Gens wrote:
Just saying that a proper approach circle must be added so it doesn't mess up with other skins. You can add the default one if you wish.

Also, offset seems a bit early, try +5?

i appreciate that ignorethis and Angelhoney checked the timing for me.
the result is that we think +3ms is fine~

i can do nothing with regard to approach circle.
but i'll ask Ploy whether she could make a skin stuff more
if not,i'll catch others who dont care about this i guess XDDD
anyway.thanks for your modding.Gen!
thank you~

Edit : Finaly add a default one~

yaya

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yaya 2010-05-31T15:02:48+00:00

time tooo bbble

Gens

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Gens 2010-05-31T15:28:15+00:00

Would you look at that, yaya bubbled it before me. :p

Ranked.