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Rurutia - Serenaito

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AngelHoney
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年2月28日 日 at 7:02:28

Artist: Rurutia
Title: Serenaito
Source: Karas
Tags: kytoxid
BPM: 152
Filesize: 5917kb
Play Time: 03:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.45 stars, 334 notes)
  2. Kytoxid's Hard (2.86 stars, 243 notes)
  3. Normal (2.31 stars, 113 notes)
Download: Rurutia - Serenaito
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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:3
Karas(anime) ED

Thx for Kytoxid 's diff/SB

Feb 23 : Changed the BG :3 and Deleted the SB o_Q
Last edited by AngelHoney , edited 25 times in total.
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
:) :)
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
[Normal]
fine.

[Hard]
00:37:193 (1) 不该这么远的= =
00:49:824 (1) ^
01:35:811 (6) 放远点吧= =。。现在这样会被误解为1/2的感觉。
02:22:785 (2,3,4,5) 听起来有些别扭但不知道怎么改。。
02:29:101 (3,4,5,6) ^
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
間距上再改了下 :) :)

thx for mod :3
Shulin
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Shulin
Normal:

00:06:995 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing feels a little to low here.
00:15:285 (3,4) - Stack?
00:57:522 (1,2,3,4) - Might look better as a stack or some sliders or a different pattern?
00:58:706 (4,5) - Maybe consider putting a slider for these notes?
01:16:469 (6) - Maybe place at the end of the slider?
01:22:785 (5) - New combo.
01:29:101 (7) - ^
01:38:574 (5) - ^

All minor suggestions, nice difficulty :)

Hard

00:18:443 (6) - Return hidden by hit300.
00:48:640 (6) - Small jump here like at 00:49:824 (1) - ?
01:08:772 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe spread these out a little more.
01:41:732 (6) - This might look better as a curve or like 03:00:679 (6) -

Some of the jumps were hard to catch at first but I FC'd on my 3rd try so not too much of an issue ^^

That's all, tell me when you have a few more mods and +8 SP and I can recheck :P

~ Star.
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney

Shulin wrote:

Normal:

00:06:995 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing feels a little to low here.
00:15:285 (3,4) - Stack?
00:57:522 (1,2,3,4) - Might look better as a stack or some sliders or a different pattern?
00:58:706 (4,5) - Maybe consider putting a slider for these notes?
01:16:469 (6) - Maybe place at the end of the slider?
01:22:785 (5) - New combo.
01:29:101 (7) - ^
01:38:574 (5) - ^

All minor suggestions, nice difficulty :)

Hard

00:18:443 (6) - Return hidden by hit300.
00:48:640 (6) - Small jump here like at 00:49:824 (1) - ?
01:08:772 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe spread these out a little more.
01:41:732 (6) - This might look better as a curve or like 03:00:679 (6) -

Some of the jumps were hard to catch at first but I FC'd on my 3rd try so not too much of an issue ^^

That's all, tell me when you have a few more mods and +8 SP and I can recheck :P (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ
~ Star.
Ohhh~Thanks so much :) :)
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: 12863 Rurutia - Serenaito.zip
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
Fixed <3
Breeze
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Breeze
a little mod on irc
nice map
star
I'm not sure whether the different note colour in this map is rankable :/
Last edited by Breeze , edited 1 time in total.
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
oh (*ﾟдﾟ*)b nice song !
James2250
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James2250
normal:
why not end the kiai time at the end of the spinner?

hard:
nazi--00:01:469 (3) - move 1 tiny grid right to mirror 1
nazi--00:08:179 (4,5) - move 1 tiny grid up to mirror 2
00:09:758 (6) - move to center?
*same kiai comment as normal*
02:48:048 (1) - I would start the kiai time on the slider
03:13:311 (6) - why not end kiai time here?

Is there a way to get rid of all of the black around the picture?
*star*
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
All Fixed :) :)

Thanks so much~Breeze Bakaru James2250 <3
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
Diff and a hitsound. :o

Download: kyto.zip
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
Thank you very much <3
arsrun
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arsrun
[NORMAL]
00：35：022(3) 这里是连音，似乎做成SL到00：35：416，（4）延后到00：35：829更加合适。
[Kyotosid]
作为OSU评定为NORMAL难度级别的图，加入好几串HARD难度以上级的连打真的不太合适。
[HARD]
01：44：890 SPINNER的精确开头应为01：44：799。
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
Oh. The SB was meant as just an idea for you to consider. XD Do you want me to actually do it properly?

(and do you have larger images?)

EDIT: Whatever, this is slightly cleaner.

Download: 12863 Rurutia - Serenaito.zip
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney

arsrun wrote:

[NORMAL]
00：35：022(3) 这里是连音，似乎做成SL到00：35：416，（4）延后到00：35：829更加合适。
[Kyotosid]
作为OSU评定为NORMAL难度级别的图，加入好几串HARD难度以上级的连打真的不太合适。
[HARD]
01：44：890 SPINNER的精确开头应为01：44：799。
Nor 和 Hard 都試過了...感覺改了以後反而不順了

至於Kyto的...他是想做成Hard的..但是不知怎麼的..都只有3星XD

thx for mod&star
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
All Fixed <3
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE
- General:
  • I think 2 seconds of Audio lead in fit better.
- Normal:
  • .Opinions:
    The chorus sounds great if you use Slidetick rate 2
- Kytoxid's Hard:
  • .Opinions:
    Ok
- Hard:
  • .Suggestions:
    Overall 8 fits so bad here. I like 6 the best here, anyway 7 should be good, too. Just don't use 8 only for making this hard.
    00:48:048 (5,6,7) - if you use overall 8 it's readable, but it's still a not-so-good change of spacing.
Ask me again after you fixed
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
All Fixed :3
Card N'FoRcE
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Ok, let's shoot a protobubble then ^^

I'm still unsure about 00:48:048 (5,6,7) in hard, but actually i can play it fine...
stenut
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stenut

Kytoxid wrote:

Oh. The SB was meant as just an idea for you to consider. XD Do you want me to actually do it properly?

(and do you have larger images?)

EDIT: Whatever, this is slightly cleaner.
snapped from BDrip
no idea where to get the night view...time? :?

Leorda
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Leorda
NI HAO!

[Normal]
00:09:364 (4) - Add a clap hitsound
00:10:943 (6) - Move it to the right place, overlapped by previous slider kinda looks bad
00:21:995 (4) - Add a clap hitsound at the start hitsound
00:25:153 (3) - Add a clap hitsound
00:29:101 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
00:31:074 (2) - Add a clap hitsound at 1st repeating slider
00:44:101 (3) - ^
00:47:258 (4) - ^
00:50:416 (4) - Add a finish hitsound at the start of slider
00:56:732 (5) - ^
00:59:495 (5) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
01:05:416 (4) - ^
01:15:679 (5) - Add a clap hitsound at the start hitsound
00:34:627 (2) - Add a clap hitsound
01:33:048 (2) - Add a clap hitsound at the start hitsound
01:34:627 (4) - ^

[Kytoxid's Hard]
00:06:206 (5) - Add a clap hitsound
00:18:443 (1) - Add a clap hitsound at repeating slider
00:25:153 (7) - Add a clap hitsound
00:31:469 (2) - ^
00:34:627 (2) - ^
00:38:574 (4) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
00:44:101 (3) - Add a clap hitsound
00:47:258 (2) - ^
00:50:416 (3) - Add a clap hitsound at the start of slider
00:56:140 (3) - Add a clap hitsound at 3rd repeating slider
01:02:258 (2) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
01:09:364 (6) - Add a clap hitsound
01:25:153 (3) - ^
01:28:311 (3) - ^
01:34:627 (5) - ^
01:37:785 (3) - ^
01:59:890 (3) - ^
02:03:048 (2) - ^
02:06:206 (4) - Add a clap hitsound at the start of slider
02:09:364 (8) - Add a clap hitsound
02:12:522 (3) - ^
02:15:679 (3) - Add a clap hitsound at the start of slider
02:18:837 (4) - ^
02:20:416 (1) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
02:25:153 (4) - Add a clap hitsound
02:31:469 (3) - Add a clap hitsound at the start of slider
02:37:785 (6) - Add a clap hitsound
02:53:574 (3) - ^
02:56:732 (3) - ^
03:03:048 (3) - ^

[Hard]
00:02:653 (5) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
00:08:968 (5) - ^
00:15:285 (5) - ^
00:18:443 (6) - ^
00:21:601 (5) - ^
00:31:469 (2) - Add a clap hitsound
00:34:627 (2) - ^
00:37:785 (4) - ^
00:38:772 (1) - ^
00:44:101 (2) - ^
00:47:258 (3) - ^
00:50:416 (4) - ^
00:56:732 (4) - ^
00:59:495 (5) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
01:05:416 (7) - ^
01:09:364 (6) - Add a clap hitsound
01:23:179 (7) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
01:59:890 (3) - Add a clap hitsound
02:03:048 (2) - ^
02:06:206 (4) - ^
02:09:364 (6) - Add a clap hitsound at the start of slider
02:12:522 (3) - Add a clap hitsound
02:15:679 (4) - ^
02:18:837 (4) - ^
02:21:206 (9) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
02:25:153 (4) - Add a clap hitsound
02:27:916 (11) - Add a clap hitsound at the end of slider
02:31:469 (3) - Add a clap hitsound
02:37:785 (4) - ^
02:40:943 (4) - Add a clap hitsound at the start of slider

Moe Moe AngelHoney
/me romantic hug and kiss with AngelHoney
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
Ohhh!Thanks for the kudos star and thanks for modding! I love you! Leorda >////<

All fixed (Wait Kyto 's respond... :P
Vanmonky
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Vanmonky
As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Lowercase all the tags.

[Normal]
-- Decrease slider tick rate to 1.
00:13:311 (1) - Reduce one 1/4 tick. Also, check the spacing of this slider.
00:38:574 (1) - Reduce one 1/4 tick.
00:40:153 (3) - I prefer a single note than slider here.
00:48:837 (2) - Reduce one 1/4 tick.
01:00:679 (1) - Make the slider on white tick. I mean, reduce it one tick.
01:05:416 (4) - ^
01:13:311 (2,3) - Reduce one 1/4 tick.

[Kytoxid's Hard]
-- Don't you feel the finish hitsound doesn't sound fit to the song?
-- Well, at the beginning of the song, I was like "Wow, this is a nice diff." But when I reached to the reff, I was like "WTF, what is this?!" Yes, the normal hitsound is not really fit, especially its whistle. Besides, the sound is too loud.
-- It'll be better if you silence the sliderslide.

[Hard]
-- Decrease slider tick rate to 1.
-- Silence the sliderslide.
00:19:232 (7) - It looks like 1/2 beat with (6). Move it farther.
00:48:640 (6) - No. Use distance snap.
01:44:890 (1) - Silence the end of spinner.
02:51:601 (7) - Hmm.. Use distance snap for this slider, please.
02:54:166 (6) - It doesn't sound fit. Reduce one 1/2 tick.
02:57:324 (6,7,8) - I don't like this section..
Star. I'm not popping the pubble.
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Lowercase all the tags.

[Normal]
-- Decrease slider tick rate to 1.
00:13:311 (1) - Reduce one 1/4 tick. Also, check the spacing of this slider.
00:38:574 (1) - Reduce one 1/4 tick.
00:40:153 (3) - I prefer a single note than slider here.
00:48:837 (2) - Reduce one 1/4 tick.
01:00:679 (1) - Make the slider on white tick. I mean, reduce it one tick.
01:05:416 (4) - ^
01:13:311 (2,3) - Reduce one 1/4 tick.

you fixed slider tick rate ,so it look wrong (maybe its bug ?) :? :?
(i think slider tick rate 2 its ok :) :)

[Kytoxid's Hard]
-- Don't you feel the finish hitsound doesn't sound fit to the song?
-- Well, at the beginning of the song, I was like "Wow, this is a nice diff." But when I reached to the reff, I was like "WTF, what is this?!" Yes, the normal hitsound is not really fit, especially its whistle. Besides, the sound is too loud.
-- It'll be better if you silence the sliderslide.

[Hard]
-- Decrease slider tick rate to 1.
-- Silence the sliderslide.
00:19:232 (7) - It looks like 1/2 beat with (6). Move it farther.
00:48:640 (6) - No. Use distance snap.
01:44:890 (1) - Silence the end of spinner.
02:51:601 (7) - Hmm.. Use distance snap for this slider, please.
02:54:166 (6) - It doesn't sound fit. Reduce one 1/2 tick.
02:57:324 (6,7,8) - I don't like this section..

Fixed :3
Thanks so much MoNky <3
Vanmonky
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Vanmonky
Slider tick rate 2 is redundant for the song in my opinion. Well, don't think about it furthermore. Just a suggestion lol.
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
haha :3

wow , you are MAT right now ?! (and your AVA is ....

:) :)
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Max size for the background is 1024x768
"karas01.jpg" is 1364x768. Fix please!

Everything else looks real good.

Edit: Bubbled after picture resize!
lxy
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lxy
月光石！RURUTIA！！！
yaya
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yaya
custom hitsound don't fit this music IMO
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
o_Q
Starrodkirby86
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Here since the beginning
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;w;
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
:D
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
Grat ^^~
AngelHoney
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:P
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