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Michael Jackson - You Rock My World

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termerys
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termerys
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 10 มีนาคม 2553 at 0:44:19

Artist: Michael Jackson
Title: You Rock My World
Source: Invincible
Tags: chris tucker
BPM: 95
Filesize: 4118kb
Play Time: 03:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.76 stars, 373 notes)
  2. Normal (4.1 stars, 159 notes)
Download: Michael Jackson - You Rock My World
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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You rock my world, you know you did.
And everything i gonna give
My 2nd beatmap!!
(I changed rocky road into normal and earthquake into hard. :3)
I hope you like it
Thank you

Ps. in hard, i deleted the 2x bpm already (what a problem~) and deletes unuse part of the song to make it shorter
please download this song again

Ps.(2) beatmap in progess : Shizuka Itou ; Steppin' (Hayate no Gotoko OVA ed01)
Last edited by Gens , edited 75 times in total.
pete2528
412 posts
Joined March 2009
pete2528
:)
แจกดาวก่อน ^^

เออ
offset ยังไม่ตรงนะครับ
ผมว่าน่าจะ + เพิ่มไปอีก 40-50
ประมาณที่ 32,011

หลังๆโน้ทหลุดโลกมาก 555 สู้ๆนะ
champpanda
14 posts
Joined March 2009
champpanda
ให้โยนก้อโยน ~
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
~[Over all]~
- Set a perview point
- remoeve the "," out of your TAG
- Source: Add some Source like Album or something
- Slider Tick Rate: 2

~[Vibrate [short ver.]]~
All notes on this diff are too hard to read, Plz make this diff to be easy more this, and so many hidden note when playing not good at an Easy diff too
Plz lower the Slider Velocity
00:32:045 (1) - what!!?? O.o first note isn't snapped
00:40:219 (3) - fail
01:03:904 (9) - ^
01:07:377 (4) - ^
01:19:693 (3) - ^
01:27:272 (3,4, 6) - ^
01:35:167 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:14:325 (1) - sound finish

~[Earthquake!!]~
01:10:221 (1) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:11:169 (3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:36:432 (3,5) - hidden notes are not make a sense
01:38:958 (1) - ^
01:46:537 (3,5) - ^
01:49:063 (1) - ^
02:10:221 (9) - make it end at 02:10:537
02:37:063 (3,5) - hidden notes
02:39:590 (1) - ^
02:47:169 (3,5) - ^
02:49:695 (1) - ^
02:52:221 (3,1) - ^
02:14:325 (1) - sound finish
03:16:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - WTF, this past want a warning like 'x2' or something
03:35:011 (1) - 02:14:325 (1) - sound finish

At last It's a NICE SONG, star
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
termerys

orioncomet wrote:

~[Over all]~
- Set a perview point
- remoeve the "," out of your TAG
- Source: Add some Source like Album or something
- Slider Tick Rate: 2

~[Vibrate [short ver.]]~
All notes on this diff are too hard to read, Plz make this diff to be easy more this, and so many hidden note when playing not good at an Easy diff too
Plz lower the Slider Velocity
00:32:045 (1) - what!!?? O.o first note isn't snapped
00:40:219 (3) - fail
01:03:904 (9) - ^
01:07:377 (4) - ^
01:19:693 (3) - ^
01:27:272 (3,4, 6) - ^
01:35:167 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:14:325 (1) - sound finish

~[Earthquake!!]~
01:10:221 (1) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:11:169 (3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:36:432 (3,5) - hidden notes are not make a sense
01:38:958 (1) - ^
01:46:537 (3,5) - ^
01:49:063 (1) - ^
02:10:221 (9) - make it end at 02:10:537
02:37:063 (3,5) - hidden notes
02:39:590 (1) - ^
02:47:169 (3,5) - ^
02:49:695 (1) - ^
02:52:221 (3,1) - ^
02:14:325 (1) - sound finish
03:16:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - WTF, this past want a warning like 'x2' or something
03:35:011 (1) - 02:14:325 (1) - sound finish

At last It's a NICE SONG, star
All fixed, thanks for modding
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
Combo Mod :P

Vibrate [short ver.]
00:33:272 (5) - New Combo.
00:56:009 (2) - ^
00:57:272 (2) - ^
01:01:061 (5) - ^
01:08:325 (6) - ^
01:11:167 (4) - ^
01:17:482 (6) - ^
01:23:798 (5) - ^
01:30:114 (6) - ^
01:32:640 (5) - ^ (maybe?)
01:37:693 (3) - ^
01:42:746 (5) - ^
01:45:272 (3) - ^
01:47:798 (5) - ^
01:57:904 (5) - ^
02:13:061 (5) - ^

00:55:377 (1) - No New Combo.
00:56:956 (1) - ^
01:10:219 (1) - ^
01:18:746 (1) - ^
01:30:430 (1) - ^
01:33:904 (1) - ^
01:44:640 (1) - ^
01:56:009 (1) - ^
01:58:535 (1) - ^
02:13:377 (1) - ^
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8
Big Post, divided by 2.

Earthquake!!
00:53:958 (1) - No New Combo.
00:59:169 (1) - ^
01:10:221 (1) - ^
01:40:221 (1) - ^
01:44:011 (1) - ^
01:49:063 (1) - ^
01:55:379 (1) - ^
02:39:590 (1) - ^
02:49:695 (1) - ^


00:59:800 (5) - New Combo.
01:07:379 (6) - ^
01:11:169 (3) - ^
01:12:432 (7) - ^
01:42:748 (5) - ^
01:47:800 (5) - ^
02:38:327 (5) - ^
02:48:432 (5) - ^

03:11:484 (1) - Why is the reverse arrow on this backwards? Fix it. If it was intentional, change it. (Fix, change, same thing)
03:16:695 ~ End of Song - omg, X2 Speed, + Super fast sliders. Storyboard a "2X Speed Warning" or something, to warn the player.
Luvdic
2,113 posts
Joined July 2009
Luvdic
Overall:
- Set preview point in Timing -> Set Current Position as Preview. Pick a nice position for this.
- Consider shortening your mp3 file. Not everyone have uber internet to downlaod anything they want.


Vibrate:
- I really don't like the combination of so many overlapped objects and the low overall difficulty tick rate.
00:32:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This actually looks ugly with the stacking in the center...
00:55:693 - Add circle here?
01:05:798 - Add circle here?

Earthquake:

00:32:015 (1) - OBJECT ISN'T SNAPPED
03:16:221 - AHHH 2x sliders really caught me offguard when testing, id recommend to put some warning
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
- Volume is too high, set them below 60.
- Silence all sliderslide & slidertick.
- Add more hitsounds.
- BPM x2 parts make the map worse.


~Vibrate [short ver.]~ <<< change [ ] to ( )
Use soft-hitsounds.
01:17:482 (6) - new combo
01:20:640 (6,7) - wrong spacing

~Earthquake!!~
00:54:432 (1) - remove new combo
00:55:063 (2) - new combo
00:59:169 (5) - ^
00:59:800 (1) - remove new combo
01:00:116 (2) - new combo
02:59:011 (1,5) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)


+Star
Iluhiwizel
408 posts
Joined May 2009
Iluhiwizel
ไม่ค่อยจะชอบ x2 แหะ =w="

star
vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
vivere
Hello~

Vibrate (short ver.)

01:55:377 (1) -remove only this combo
01:55:377- would be nice if you change the timing to 01:56:009 (is where the fast part of the song)

02:13:061 (1,2)- remove new combo
02:14:325- the slider reaches the 02:16:219 (be better) ;) Oh... Needless to say, we must also move the timing: 02:15:628 to 02:16:219 not?
----------------------------------

[Earthquake!!]

02:41:800 (2,3,4)- from the circle number 2 would have to fall slightly to 4... I'll tell you because...
02:43:379 (1,2,3,4)- would move up the sliders down the number 1 circle number 2 up to 3 and lower 4, because 2,3,4 are very close and I have seen elsewhere that you have made separate

-----------------------------------
STAR!! xd

I hope you much Cirb ;)
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
termerys
^
^
Most of above had been fixed
Thanks for modding.
Matsuri_old
109 posts
Joined May 2009
Matsuri_old
+Star > w <

สู้เค้าน้อ
Estelle18
219 posts
Joined March 2009
Estelle18
ชั้นโดนบังคับมา -0-
Ana_Coppola
100 posts
Joined March 2009
Ana_Coppola
star ~~~MJ~~~~~~~~~forever~!
H1ko
367 posts
Joined December 2008
H1ko
^^
Onizuki
49 posts
Joined November 2009
Onizuki
Star!

ps. Hard is quite challenging for me -0-
taka1235
609 posts
Joined February 2009
taka1235
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
HaPPyViRuS_old
17 posts
Joined July 2009
HaPPyViRuS_old
อ่า มา Mod ให้น้องเติมเค้าหน่อย พี่ชอบ Hard นะ แต่ถ้า จะให้ลงลึก พี่เป้คงวิจารณ์ ไม่เป็น

แต่ถ้าเป็นพี่ Normal อยากให้ สไลด์ เร็วเท่ากันหมด

^ ^~ รับไป 10 กะโหลก

(คือ ชอบไมเคิล น่ะ)

:P :P :P :P :P :P :P
laikung0
60 posts
Joined February 2009
laikung0
u rocked my world, u know u did
and everything i’m gonna give
and there ain’t nothing we could find
someone like u to call mine
Thunderstorm
437 posts
Joined May 2009
Thunderstorm
Hi =)
Some suggestions
[Normal]
01:38:956 (2) - spacing?
Also, no hitsounds here =)
[Hard]
Nothing i can find, but you must add SB warning for x2 section
That's all. Good map, star
CrazySola
12 posts
Joined March 2009
CrazySola
ฮ้าๆ :D
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
Overall
offset in both diffs are different, make em the same
32,011 sounds good to me

Normal
looks great
maybe make a easy diff for this map, slider velocity is a bit high for this being the easiest diff

Hard
00:32:011 (1) - this not isn't snapped to the timeline, re-snap it
well that's it, map was pretty playable, and me likey.
speed ups at the end seem random, maybe just map it like the rest of the map, or add some storyboard to warn players for speed-ups.

Hey, Pm me on osu if ya see me, let's talk business
*star cause it's seems really possible for this to get ranked
gatenga
10 posts
Joined May 2009
gatenga
Star
safe_osu
82 posts
Joined September 2008
safe_osu
I think normal's quite hard, there are too much stack notes. but it's seem ok, there are stack in the same pattern.

have a star. I hope it'll get raked soon!
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
termerys
^
^
Thanks all above, most of the mod is fixed
thanks for star and i gave kudosu to who help me about the song
thank you
Noobita
597 posts
Joined June 2009
Noobita
Very nice! :)
Mismagius
9,267 posts
Joined July 2008
Mismagius
Normal
00:35:169 (3) - clap at start
00:37:695 (3) - ^
00:40:221 (3) - ^
00:42:748 (3) - ^
01:05:484 (1,2,3) - make like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3570
01:25:063 (4) - make the end stack with (1)
01:28:221 (4) - stack with (2)

Hard
00:40:221 (3,4) - not stacked correctly
01:11:642 (3,4) - align
01:12:590 (2,3) - ^
Warn the 2xBPM :/

Great map, star :D
WinnerLFC
3 posts
Joined April 2009
WinnerLFC
Star Star Star! :lol:
poypk
47 posts
Joined September 2009
poypk

Estelle18 wrote:

ชั้นโดนบังคับมา -0-
เค้าโดนล่อล่วงมา
แต่เต็มใจให้ลวง เพราะความรักทำให้คนตาบอด
อ๊วกส์.............น้ำเน่าเกิน
Cheedar
95 posts
Joined December 2008
Cheedar
Spacing mod D:
Well, do the repairs without grid snap and pressing ctrl. :D
*star*

[Normal]
Hm... Maybe you could make little hitcircles (Try 2nd tick) and increase Overall Difficulty (Try the middle tick). :D
00:57:906 (2) - Spacing
01:02:011 (2,3) - ^
01:03:274 (4) - ^
01:12:748 (2) - ^
01:15:590 (2) - ^
01:22:221 (2) - ^
01:23:484 (4) - ^
01:25:063 (4) - ^
01:31:063 (3) - ^
01:43:379 (2) - ^
01:53:484 (2) - ^
01:56:642 (7) - ^
02:03:274 (6) - ^
02:13:063 (5) - ^

[Hard]
00:36:432 (4) - Spacing
00:53:484 (1) - ^
00:58:221 (4) - ^
01:05:169 (1) - ^
01:06:116 (2) - ^
01:08:958 (1) - Align with 01:08:327 (4) middle
01:19:695 (4) - Spacing
01:22:221 (4) - ^
01:23:484 (8) - ^
01:24:116 (2) - ^
01:38:958 (1,2,3) - Did you try to do a triangule here?
02:12:432 (4) - Spacing
02:30:748 (5) - ^
03:24:116 (1) - ^
03:28:537 (7) - ^
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
termerys
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
otakumak
78 posts
Joined October 2009
otakumak
nice map ;)
+star
Cheedar
95 posts
Joined December 2008
Cheedar

termerys wrote:

Cheedar wrote:

Spacing mod D:
Well, do the repairs without grid snap and pressing ctrl. :D
*star*

[Normal]
Hm... Maybe you could make little hitcircles (Try 2nd tick) and increase Overall Difficulty (Try the middle tick). :D : ok fixed
00:57:906 (2) - Spacing
01:02:011 (2,3) - ^
01:03:274 (4) - ^
01:12:748 (2) - ^
01:15:590 (2) - ^
01:22:221 (2) - ^
01:23:484 (4) - ^
01:25:063 (4) - ^
01:31:063 (3) - ^
01:43:379 (2) - ^
01:53:484 (2) - ^
01:56:642 (7) - ^
02:03:274 (6) - ^
02:13:063 (5) - ^

[Hard]
00:36:432 (4) - Spacing
00:53:484 (1) - ^
00:58:221 (4) - ^
01:05:169 (1) - ^
01:06:116 (2) - ^
01:08:958 (1) - Align with 01:08:327 (4) middle : Fixed
01:19:695 (4) - Spacing
01:22:221 (4) - ^
01:23:484 (8) - ^
01:24:116 (2) - ^
01:38:958 (1,2,3) - Did you try to do a triangule here? : Yes
02:12:432 (4) - Spacing
02:30:748 (5) - ^
03:24:116 (1) - ^
03:28:537 (7) - ^
^
^
I already used distance snap, why it is still wrong in spacing?
It's problems with the align with hitcircles and sliders' end.
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
[General]
  1. Please delete osb.file since it's not used
  2. countdown in normal is used while in Hard is not, please unify them
  3. pop, michael jackson need not to add to tag since pop would add to Genre after ranked and michael jackson is inclued in artist
[Normal]
  1. hit volume seem loud, try 60 like DJPop said
  2. I feel it's lack of hitsound, try to find some custom sound if possible
  3. Easier diff. doesn't mean shorter, why not map it to end?
[Hard]
  1. 01:55:379 (3) - I don't think whistle fit here
  2. 03:16:221 2xBPM - I think this part need a note to show "it's 2xBPM", it comes unexcepted
  3. Still feel lack of hitsound
star
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
termerys

Breeze wrote:

[General]
  1. Please delete osb.file since it's not used : already
  2. countdown in normal is used while in Hard is not, please unify them : i make it the same
  3. pop, michael jackson need not to add to tag since pop would add to Genre after ranked and michael jackson is inclued in artist : oh i see
[Normal]
  1. hit volume seem loud, try 60 like DJPop said : Roger
  2. I feel it's lack of hitsound, try to find some custom sound if possible : I don't know how to put in the custom sound, but can i put whistle or clap inshead?
  3. Easier diff. doesn't mean shorter, why not map it to end? : ok I agree
[Hard]
  1. 01:55:379 (3) - I don't think whistle fit here : ok i agree
  2. 03:16:221 2xBPM - I think this part need a note to show "it's 2xBPM", it comes unexcepted : ok already put in (I'm already put it in, but it missing, i don't know why
  3. Still feel lack of hitsound : ok working on it
star
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
termerys
Thanks for mod, Cheedar
i'm done what u mod alredy
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
Star~

IRC Mod
[Normal]
(00:32:009 (1) - unsnapped)

Good~
Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke
Hi.

[Normal]

Cool, but it sounds poor without any hitsounds, try to use more hitclaps.


[Hard]

Looks fine!

Star.
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
termerys
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
Preview point on normal:115377
Preview point on hard: 114432 make sure they are the same
cut any of the mp3 you are not using
delete osb from folder and do full submit

Normal:
01:15:590 (2,4) - could be stacked slightly better (turn off grid snap)
01:18:748 (3) - move 1 tiny grid left and 1 tiny grid up to align with 2 and 4
01:56:011 (6) - new combo?
01:57:906 (1,2) - switch new combo
02:03:274 (6) - stack on top of 2

Hard:
01:03:906 (1,2,3) - stack these better (turn off grid snap)
01:07:063 (5) - stack on top of 2
03:17:484 (3) - stack above 1
03:17:169 (4,5) - stack better
03:29:169 (1,2,3) - move down 1 tiny grid
03:29:800 (4) - ^
03:30:432 (5,6,7,8) - ^

*star*
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
You still didn't delete osb.file, please delete it
SPOILER




Download: Michael Jackson - You Rock My World (termerys) [Hard].osu
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
termerys
um, i got the storyboard, so i can't delete it
so, now i'm working with .mp3 cutting and hit sound
i've finished James2250's modding
thanks for modding everyone
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
don't have time to check, but in case you don't know...

the .osb file is the storyboard file that applies to all difficulties. So if you only had storyboard for one diff, then delete .osb and full submit <-- This is important. If it does apply to all diffs, then keep it.

Note: Background doesn't count as storyboard unless you did stuff with it.
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
termerys
don't have time to check, but in case you don't know...

the .osb file is the storyboard file that applies to all difficulties. So if you only had storyboard for one diff, then delete .osb and full submit <-- This is important. If it does apply to all diffs, then keep it.

Note: Background doesn't count as storyboard unless you did stuff with it
ok, i get it, but when i delete it, and full submitted, it came out of nowhere.

= ="
how should i do?
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
you probably did something with the storyboard afterwards or something. when making difficulty specific storyboard, make sure you set the "Diff. Specific" box BEFORE you exit the design tab. Otherwise, the .osb will come back. Or that's how it goes for me anyway.

If that doesn't work, I dunno, you'll need to ask someone with more experience >.<
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
termerys

YGOkid8 wrote:

you probably did something with the storyboard afterwards or something. when making difficulty specific storyboard, make sure you set the "Diff. Specific" box BEFORE you exit the design tab. Otherwise, the .osb will come back. Or that's how it goes for me anyway.

If that doesn't work, I dunno, you'll need to ask someone with more experience >.<
ok i'll try it next week
thanks
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
[Normal]

-99% Acc exactly lol, I don't see problems.

[Hard]

-90% =/ the final part of the song is ugly i don't like that speed in the sliders, try to keep the distance of circles but slow down the sliders.


I don't like Michael Jackson <.< but still, good map

Good luck and my star :3
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
Offset +10 (32 021)
then Timing -> Resnap All Notes

The mp3 that you are using is longer than the mapped part. Please crop the unmapped part.

The 2x warning appears on [Normal] too. Please delete the .osb file from the general folder and do the full submission. It won't matter if you cut the mp3, but you should do this.

Resnap all of the timing sections (or at least kiai starts/ends), example: 02:15:590 - the end of the kiai section is not centrainly on the tick.

This map is generally not hitsounded. Please add some samples (especially in the middle of the map).

[Normal]

Increase HP Drain by 1 or 2 ticks.

01:15:590 (2) - Curve it prettier? :P
01:35:169 (1) - I highly recommend you to make this slider 1x speed too and start the 0,5x section here: 01:36:432. It follows the beat and is more intuitive.
[01:56:642] - Move the start of the kiai section to this point.
01:58:537 (6) - New combo.
02:13:379 (6) - Delete last 2 repeats. Read the advice below.
02:14:327 (1) - Move the spinner 1/1 back.


[Hard]

Resnap all of the timing sections (or at least kiai starts/ends), example: 02:15:590 - the end of the kiai section is not centrainly on the tick.
Ah, the 2x timing section has ruined this map. It would be good with no spacing changes.

01:14:011 (1) - Move this spinner 1/4 back and expand it by 1/4. It sounds better.
01:36:432 (3) - New combo.
[01:56:642] - Move the start of the kiai section to this point.
02:35:800 (1) - I highly recommend you to make this slider 1x speed too and start the 0,5x section here: 02:37:063. It follows the beat.
02:37:063 (3) - New combo.
02:47:169 (3) - ^
02:54:748 (1) - Move this spinner 1/4 back and expand it by 1/4. It sounds better.
[02:57:274] - Move the start of the kiai section to this point.
03:20:800 (2) - Delete.
03:29:800 (4) - Align it with (4).
03:30:432 (5) - New combo.

The 2x speed section in [Hard] is a bit messy, but the map is fine in general.
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