Estelle18 wrote:

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termerys wrote:

Cheedar wrote:

Spacing mod D:
Well, do the repairs without grid snap and pressing ctrl.
*star*

[Normal]
Hm... Maybe you could make little hitcircles (Try 2nd tick) and increase Overall Difficulty (Try the middle tick). : ok fixed
00:57:906 (2) - Spacing
01:02:011 (2,3) - ^
01:03:274 (4) - ^
01:12:748 (2) - ^
01:15:590 (2) - ^
01:22:221 (2) - ^
01:23:484 (4) - ^
01:25:063 (4) - ^
01:31:063 (3) - ^
01:43:379 (2) - ^
01:53:484 (2) - ^
01:56:642 (7) - ^
02:03:274 (6) - ^
02:13:063 (5) - ^

[Hard]
00:36:432 (4) - Spacing
00:53:484 (1) - ^
00:58:221 (4) - ^
01:05:169 (1) - ^
01:06:116 (2) - ^
01:08:958 (1) - Align with 01:08:327 (4) middle : Fixed
01:19:695 (4) - Spacing
01:22:221 (4) - ^
01:23:484 (8) - ^
01:24:116 (2) - ^
01:38:958 (1,2,3) - Did you try to do a triangule here? : Yes
02:12:432 (4) - Spacing
02:30:748 (5) - ^
03:24:116 (1) - ^
03:28:537 (7) - ^

^
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I already used distance snap, why it is still wrong in spacing?

1. Please delete osb.file since it's not used
2. countdown in normal is used while in Hard is not, please unify them
3. pop, michael jackson need not to add to tag since pop would add to Genre after ranked and michael jackson is inclued in artist

1. hit volume seem loud, try 60 like DJPop said
2. I feel it's lack of hitsound, try to find some custom sound if possible
3. Easier diff. doesn't mean shorter, why not map it to end?

1. 01:55:379 (3) - I don't think whistle fit here
2. 03:16:221 2xBPM - I think this part need a note to show "it's 2xBPM", it comes unexcepted
3. Still feel lack of hitsound

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. Please delete osb.file since it's not used : already
2. countdown in normal is used while in Hard is not, please unify them : i make it the same
3. pop, michael jackson need not to add to tag since pop would add to Genre after ranked and michael jackson is inclued in artist : oh i see

[Normal]

1. hit volume seem loud, try 60 like DJPop said : Roger
2. I feel it's lack of hitsound, try to find some custom sound if possible : I don't know how to put in the custom sound, but can i put whistle or clap inshead?
3. Easier diff. doesn't mean shorter, why not map it to end? : ok I agree

[Hard]

1. 01:55:379 (3) - I don't think whistle fit here : ok i agree
2. 03:16:221 2xBPM - I think this part need a note to show "it's 2xBPM", it comes unexcepted : ok already put in (I'm already put it in, but it missing, i don't know why
3. Still feel lack of hitsound : ok working on it

star

don't have time to check, but in case you don't know...

the .osb file is the storyboard file that applies to all difficulties. So if you only had storyboard for one diff, then delete .osb and full submit <-- This is important. If it does apply to all diffs, then keep it.

Note: Background doesn't count as storyboard unless you did stuff with it

YGOkid8 wrote:

you probably did something with the storyboard afterwards or something. when making difficulty specific storyboard, make sure you set the "Diff. Specific" box BEFORE you exit the design tab. Otherwise, the .osb will come back. Or that's how it goes for me anyway.

If that doesn't work, I dunno, you'll need to ask someone with more experience >.<

01:35:169 (1) - I highly recommend you to make this slider 1x speed too and start the 0,5x section here: 01:36:432. It follows the beat and is more intuitive.

02:35:800 (1) - I highly recommend you to make this slider 1x speed too and start the 0,5x section here: 02:37:063. It follows the beat.

fartownik wrote:

Offset +10 (32 021) i almost don't know the different, but it's better
then Timing -> Resnap All Notes done

The mp3 that you are using is longer than the mapped part. Please crop the unmapped part. It's a original one, so i don't want to crop it, it's not only that you download the song to play, but you still can listen and enjoy the song at once

The 2x warning appears on [Normal] too. Please delete the .osb file from the general folder and do the full submission. It won't matter if you cut the mp3, but you should do this. .osb deleted, .mp3 cutting^

Resnap all of the timing sections (or at least kiai starts/ends), example: 02:15:590 - the end of the kiai section is not centrainly on the tick. done

This map is generally not hitsounded. Please add some samples (especially in the middle of the map).will do

[Normal]

Increase HP Drain by 1 or 2 ticks. roger that

01:15:590 (2) - Curve it prettier? of corse!
01:35:169 (1) - I highly recommend you to make this slider 1x speed too and start the 0,5x section here: 01:36:432. It follows the beat and is more intuitive. WHY???
[01:56:642] - Move the start of the kiai section to this point. thanks
01:58:537 (6) - New combo. ok
02:13:379 (6) - Delete last 2 repeats. Read the advice below.
02:14:327 (1) - Move the spinner 1/1 back. ok


[Hard]

Resnap all of the timing sections (or at least kiai starts/ends), example: 02:15:590 - the end of the kiai section is not centrainly on the tick. done!
Ah, the 2x timing section has ruined this map. It would be good with no spacing changes. should i delete the 2x?

01:14:011 (1) - Move this spinner 1/4 back and expand it by 1/4. It sounds better. ok
01:36:432 (3) - New combo. ok
[01:56:642] - Move the start of the kiai section to this point. ok
02:35:800 (1) - I highly recommend you to make this slider 1x speed too and start the 0,5x section here: 02:37:063. It follows the beat. like i said on top
02:37:063 (3) - New combo. ok
02:47:169 (3) - ^ ^
02:54:748 (1) - Move this spinner 1/4 back and expand it by 1/4. It sounds better. actually, it's a original one, but vivere told me to do that (why should i do like him lol)
[02:57:274] - Move the start of the kiai section to this point. ok
03:20:800 (2) - Delete. Uninstall~~
03:29:800 (4) - Align it with (4).HOW?
03:30:432 (5) - New combo.ok

The 2x speed section in [Hard] is a bit messy, but the map is fine in general. Thanks for modded
+star +kudosu~

Lybydose wrote:

well, fartownik already said a lot of things I was going to post, but I'll confirm that you really should lolchange these things:

+8-9 offset i +10 offset =w=b

01:35:169 (1) - I highly recommend you to make this slider 1x speed too and start the 0,5x section here: 01:36:432. It follows the beat and is more intuitive. really?, i can play both of it >w<~

02:35:800 (1) - I highly recommend you to make this slider 1x speed too and start the 0,5x section here: 02:37:063. It follows the beat. ^

In addition to that, you REALLY should change the dark blue and dark grey combo colors. They are really hard to see against the background. Changed

Kiai is inconsistent between the two difficulties. Normal starts at 01:56:011, while Hard starts at 01:55:379. You should change normal so that it is the same as Hard. ok done

This song is really begging for more clap hitsound use. Hear the sound at 00:55:379? You should use claps to sync to that sound. For most of the song, the pattern will simply be a clap every 2 beats. In addition, the hitsounds are hard to hear. Increase the volume on the soft hitsounds for both difficulties. DJPop said that it's too loud, so, what should i do?

Hard:

01:57:590 (6) - I don't like the way this sounds. It seems like you are trying to follow the vocals, but the vocals are actually off-beat and don't really sync to the timeline. I think it sounds better if you just extend it 1/4.
02:07:695 (5) - ^
02:58:221 (6,7) - same as above, but you used circles here instead. I suggest adding a circle at 02:58:537 -
03:08:327 (6,7) - same, add circle at 03:08:642?

^ ok, i added more circles and sliders, hope that it will work with yours