Kytoxid wrote:

[Lugia] Different hitcircle colours, intended? Yes.
[Lugia] 00:12:367 (4) - Reverse this slider? Nah, I like the jump. But I'll try to get a second opinion for it.
[Lugia] 00:15:988 (1) - This 2x BPM slider doesn't really make sense. Guess what, I agree. Let's change it.
[Lugia] 00:20:902 (9,1) - Space them out a bit more? (didn't like the overlapping stream before, but whatever. ) lol, I can't space them up farther. DS makes it go farther to the next slider (for the whole combo), while relocating it elsewhere doesn't really make sense for me. I just hid (1) in (9) so it wouldn't take up much distance. Sorry~
[Lugia] 00:24:005 (2,3,4) - Deceptive spacing. I think this is allowed, I wanna keep it that way.
[Lugia] 00:30:730 (1) - Might be better if you made this the same length as the previous one, and removed the 2 kicksliders, for consistency. TOLD YOU SO NOHITTER! HA!
[Lugia] 00:56:074 (1,2,3) - Very hard to read, don't put a 1/2 BPM slider followed by a bunch of identical-looking 1xBPM sliders. Lengthened and re-snapped. :3

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Ouch, that background is so low-res. =/
Why a red timing section to start kiai?
Cyndaquil and Lugia have different kiai than the others, take a look.

[Meganium] 00:49:867 (5) - Don't like this concealed slider.
[Meganium] 00:50:514 - Double timing section here.
[Lugia] Different hitcircle colours, intended?
[Lugia] 00:12:367 (4) - Reverse this slider?
[Lugia] 00:15:988 (1) - This 2x BPM slider doesn't really make sense.
[Lugia] 00:20:902 (9,1) - Space them out a bit more? (didn't like the overlapping stream before, but whatever. )
[Lugia] 00:24:005 (2,3,4) - Deceptive spacing.
[Lugia] 00:30:730 (1) - Might be better if you made this the same length as the previous one, and removed the 2 kicksliders, for consistency.
[Lugia] 00:56:074 (1,2,3) - Very hard to read, don't put a 1/2 BPM slider followed by a bunch of identical-looking 1xBPM sliders.
[Ho-oh] 00:20:126 (2,3,4) - Quite hard to read timing on this.
[Ho-oh] 00:25:557 (1) - Shorten this by a repeat (so it doesn't repeat), and then add a beat 1/4 before the next repeating slider sounds really cool.
[Ho-oh] 00:40:298 (1) - Don't think this fits quite well.
[Ho-oh] 00:49:867 (6) - Same thing about this concealed slider.
[Ho-oh] 00:52:712 (1) - Don't think this fits either. XD

Poke me after you've taken a look.

James2250 wrote:

is there meant to be an un-inherited timing section starting kiai? - The time signature resets there.
there is no reason for kiai times to be different across diff's, make them all the same - There's a break in Cyndaquil. You want to use kiai on a break? and in Lugia there will be no note to start kiai on there

Cyndaquil:
00:55:816 (5) - move to 00:55:557 done
00:56:074 (1) - start to 00:55:816 done
(make all the kiai times like this)

Croconaw:
00:55:816 (4) - move to 00:55:557 done
00:55:945 (1) - move to 00:55:816 done
00:58:919 (1,2,3,4) - center on grid viewtopic.php?f=29&t=21548

Meganium:
00:06:161 - add note no
00:06:290 (3) - move to 00:06:419 -it follows the lyrics
00:08:230 - add note no
00:08:359 (3) - move to 00:08:488 -it follows the lyrics
00:18:574 (1,2) - move up 3 tiny grids to mirror other combo done
00:22:712 (1,2) - move up 2 tiny grids to mirror other combo done
00:58:919 (1,2,3,4) - put on horizontal center line? viewtopic.php?f=29&t=21548

Lugia:
00:05:643 (3,4) - switch position of 3 and 4 viewtopic.php?f=61&t=23024
00:07:454 (2,3) - switch position of 2 and 3 viewtopic.php?f=61&t=23024
00:11:980 (3,4) - spacing..move 4 closer or turn it the other way around
00:16:635 (5) - move slider so it isnt under all the other notes
00:24:523 (3,4) - spacing
00:39:005 (1,2,3) - keep spacing equal
00:47:540 (1) - move to 00:47:281
00:48:574 (1) - move to 00:48:316
00:49:867 (1) - move to 00:49:350
00:49:350 (1) - move up
00:50:126 (1) - start at 00:49:867

Ho-oh:
00:06:290 (3) - move to 00:06:419 -it follows the lyrics
00:08:359 (3) - move to 00:08:488 -it follows the lyrics
00:20:126 (2,3,4) - spacing - they're properly spaced
00:29:954 (3) - add note no
00:34:092 (3) - ^ -no
00:43:661 (5,1) - align? - no

PM me after fixes and I will will re-pubble....

James2250 wrote:

Lugia:
00:05:643 (3,4) - switch position of 3 and 4 lol no.
00:07:454 (2,3) - switch position of 2 and 3 ^
00:11:980 (3,4) - spacing..move 4 closer or turn it the other way around ^
00:16:635 (5) - move slider so it isnt under all the other notes Reversed slider.
00:24:523 (3,4) - spacing I know right? No.
00:39:005 (1,2,3) - keep spacing equal Looks ugly, but still done.
00:47:540 (1) - move to 00:47:281 No.
00:48:574 (1) - move to 00:48:316 ^
00:49:867 (1) - move to 00:49:350 ^
00:49:350 (1) - move up I guess this is a typo. lol
00:50:126 (1) - start at 00:49:867 No.

1. Even if you have a video, some people use no video. So I suggest to change BG to higher quality.
2. Offset in first section feels too early.
3. Make kiai without breaks; Similar in all difficulties

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Cyndaquil:
Combo mod:
00:23:488 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:19:867 (4)? Moved new combo to 00:25:557 (1) -

Lugia:
Normal mod:
00:06:290 (6) and 00:08:359 (6) - bring down stack leniency 2 notches to make these 2 notes look better Done. :3
00:20:902 (9) - this is disorienting for me since there is a half note pause for this note in a slightly hard to read stream Added a note at the "half-note" pause. ^^

Derekku Chan wrote:

EDIT: I still see hidden notes on [Lugia], and although I can't officially pop a bubble, I'll leave this post here and pop the pubble. orz

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

All better now!

EDIT: Repair.

Ephemeral wrote:

The background is of pretty abominable quality.

Could you find a better one? I downloaded a DVDrip of a Pokemon Johto episode in the effort to find a better one and maybe improve the quality of the backing video you have now, but it's plastered with watermarks..

This is a pretty dumb thing to pop a bubble over, but the BG really is quite bad.

Everything else looks okay aside from that though.