1. Advanced (4.13 stars, 270 notes)
2. Beginner (2.22 stars, 180 notes)
3. Challenge (4.86 stars, 406 notes)

Dusty wrote:

<3 awesome song and map

3:05:888 - Kiai until 3:12:888? Sorry, I don't like KIAI now : (, it's eye-dazzling

[Easy]
2:15-2:40 - I think the break is too long, maybe add some SB or map some of the break? Emm...I have no idea what to add here...Someone who could suggest?

[Normal]
03:05:088 (3) - New Combo? Emm, why here new combo?

Sushi971 wrote:

Set a preview point on all diffs oops, I forget it, thanks

[Challenge]
01:33:588 (2,3) - symetry It's not symmetrical? emm...

this map is just <3

Breeze wrote:

Dusty wrote:

[Normal]
03:05:088 (3) - New Combo? Emm, why here new combo?

bmin11 wrote:

[Advance]
02:21:713 (5) - I'm not sure if this speed up would be acceptable for [Normal]. They are still newbies you know I made it no curves so that it has a slower speed o.o

Maybe add C - Pop for the tag? That's it! added
Anyway, awsome SB, skin, song, map. Just mainly perfect

DJPop wrote:

~Beginner~
02:15:338 - break time is too long imo Well...It seemed I should add something...

~Advance~
01:59:213 (4) - 1/3 snap awesome, fixed

~Challenge~
01:59:213 (4,5,6,7) - 1/3 snaps Fixed
02:54:588 (4) - new combo fixed


+Star

alvisto wrote:

Breezi sama~~~ Your map improve tremendously ! I am happy ! ^.^ It's very good. Some simple and quick mod.

CHALLENGE
00:23:088 (5,6,1) - Don't you think the whistles here are weird ? Coz other diffculties don't have this whistle. O.O You're right, use soft whistle instead
02:01:004 - I don't know why this part stephanie seems like singing cantonese here, lol. xD o.o I know few about cantonese...
03:23:088 (1) - Why not end the slider here 03:24:838 ? Just like Beginner oops, fixed

ADVANCED
is fine and fun !

Love the custom hitsound where there're a lot of drum during middle part of the song. Simple SB makes the map even more <3.

Remember to force default skin for all difficulties.

Star ~~

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO!

[General]
1) Mark the display storyboard in front of combo fire (Click song setup -> Storyboarding -> and check the box of Display storyboard in front of combo fire awesome, fixed
2) Because this song have a applause, how about you add a boo at fail? Add the boo sound and rename the file to failsound Great suggestion, If I could find one boo sound...I'll try to, thanks!

[Beginner]
00:26:088 (1) - Add 1 repeating slider OR add note at 00:26:588
00:27:088 (1) - Add 1 repeating slider OR add note at 00:27:588 I put it like this on purpose o.o I wanna use different notes mode
00:56:088 (1) - No new combo fixed
01:04:088 (1) - ^ fixed
01:33:838 (3) - Add a finish hitsound finish should appear at 01:34:088, I put no note there, just follow the lyric

[Advanced]
00:29:588 (1) - Add a finish hitsound at the end of slider
00:45:838 (3) - Add a finish hitsound
01:21:088 (SB) - You have to make a circle fade out like 01:20:338
02:51:088 (SB) - ^
02:59:088 (SB) - ^
03:07:088 (SB) - ^ awesome, Barbie lol Actually it's a trigger loop SB effect, just effect when hitclap works... I forgot some SB clap sound ;_;, you got that is absoluterly right! added now

[Challenge]
00:45:838 (3) - Add a finish hitsound
01:33:838 (3) - ^
02:51:088 (SB) - You have to make a circle fade out like 02:50:338

[Overall]
Storyboard are good, but you need some translation lyric, so anyone know what they mean I want to, but I don't know how to translate some sentence in this song My English sucks, as I can't translate it nicely, I prefer to no traslation, sorry

WOW! Nice MAP!
You must be follow the faculty of graphic desginer when you college! Actually I'm not, just interested in maming SB ; )
STAR

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- The title might look better like: "Meng Bu Luo (Dream Never End)" - with a space. Or perhaps just "Meng Bu Luo" with Dream Never End in tags? If you can't change without making a duplicate then just leave it as it is XD OK, fixed

Beginner:

02:51:088 (4) - New combo?
02:56:588 (3) - New combo.
02:59:088 (6) - ^ these 3 note above are not the end of lyric, so I keep them for now
03:05:088 (3) - ^ applied
03:07:088 (6) - ^
03:15:088 (3) - ^
03:18:088 (5) - ^? not end of lyric, too

A lot of new combo suggestions, but your combos got longer towards the end of the map (just compare the beginning to the end).

Advanced:

02:16:463 (2) - Too fast, it throws off the rhythm imo. It just fit the rhythm You could hear clearly by playback rate 25%, and when playing, players just need to hold mouse there, 1/8 sliders are too short, so I used 2xBPM 1/4 sliders : )
02:22:463 (6,7,8) - Stack under 5 or place direct above 5 so it's easier to hit? put it direct and fixed other notes

Challenge:

01:19:088 (6) - Minor spacing error. lol fixed, you're so careful
02:16:338 (4) - New combo? Still think it's too fast XD Emm, it's OK imo : P

Rest looks good to me, great job with the map and SB.

~ Star

kino77 wrote:

>w<~

Zekira wrote:

Offset: Just a quick -3 from current go fixed

[Beginner]
02:13:085 (3) - make it so that it appears at the almost exact middle of 1 and 2? Turn off Grid Snap if necessary, and fix the thing after this note if you'll do it fixed
03:09:335 (9,10) - seeing as how this is an Easy, maybe notes under a slider aren't really recommended... keep it for now, if one more modder complain about it, I'd change it

[Advanced]
01:42:338 (1,2,3) - oddly enough, move this 1/8 later and it'll sound spot on the vocals. Your choice though, but I really think it sounds better this way. lol correct, fixed
01:43:088 (4) - New Combo? fixed
01:51:338 (4) - New Combo (3) new comboed, it's the start of lyric
01:55:088 (5) - ^ fixed
02:50:838 (1) - What the random clap in the middle? Maybe reduce volume of that orz SB clap lol, it always sounds different to game playing clap
02:53:088 (5,1,2,1,2,3) - Odd new combo placement IMO
02:57:088 (4) - New Combo? applied
02:58:838 (1) - What the random clap in the middle? Maybe reduce volume of that orz
03:06:838 (5) - ^ I would rewrite them all by script

[Challenge]
I like this map.
01:42:338 (1) - suggestion: it would sound nicer if this thing had one repeat, mainly because the vocal here is like 'taktaktak', but the behavior of the 1 and 2 there is a bit odd. you're right, fixed
01:46:588 (6,3,3) - ...are these the reasons why you lowered the slider ticks? Get someone else's opinion as to whether these 2x sliders are okay or not... wait for more people to mod it
01:59:254 (4) - New Combo I think it's OK here, they and (1,2,3) are both notes with whistle
02:35:088 (Break) - I feel that something should be mapped on this part for more awesome Emm, keep it fo now, map here need 1/8 BSD or 2xBPM 1/4 sliders lol, it shouldn't be so hard cause whole map is not such hard.

Zekira wrote:

01:46:588 (6,3,3) - ...are these the reasons why you lowered the slider ticks? Get someone else's opinion as to whether these 2x sliders are okay or not...

alvisto wrote:

I try.... xD You better ask some english natural speaker later to correct some grammar mistakes and to modify it so that the lyric flows better. xD *orz*

SPOILER

淋過一場大雨
Drenched in a heavy rain

撞過銅牆鐵壁
Hit by obstacles

你　撐住　我　對我　說　沒有關係
You hold on to me and said it doesn't matter (orz) *想不到更好的了*

讓　我們並肩遠行　沿途栽種風景
Let us advance together, creating our own scenery

讓　你我　讓　夢想　ho　不落飛行
And let our dreams soar in the sky.

O.O O.O

向南一公里　看天空無邊際
Facing the south (1 kilometer应该不用翻译吧) with a borderless sky

雁鳥排整齊　為了生命而飛行
The eagles are soaring freely in groups O.O

歌頌這大地　多自由的聲音
praising the voice of freedom that exists in this mother earth O.O

闖一闖　再瘋狂　又怎樣
Let us break through it crazily O.O (no idea how to translate this)

everywhere we go　people want to know
　who we are where we come from

向遠方　不會停
We won't stop advancing forward

讓我們　翻個波浪前進　翻出痛快心情
Let us fight against the wave, fight for a happier feeling. (weird weird translation lol)

你　往上　我　往下　就　一直延續
You go forward, I walk backward, advancing non-stoply O.O

讓　未來是個問句　我們一路練習
Let the future be a question, and be a practice for us to find answers

讓　你我　讓　夢想　ho　不落飛行
And let your and my dreams never end. O.O

聽號角聲音　隨陽光又升起
Sound of horns emerges together with sunrise

音符踢踏踢　驕傲的頻率
Rhythmic notes are dancing proudly and happily

與你的默契　就像一個奇蹟
Sparks between you and me are just like a miracle happening

帶著夢繼續　不落地飛行
And we carry our dreams, continue our journey, and our dreams never end. O.O

翻译到不好。强力建议你找个老外把那些句子变得跟美。 xD

Skyripper wrote:

GREAT MAP!!! Amazing SB and Skin!

Notes: Combo color 1 and 3 look really similar while playing as do 2 and 5 (this might not be a problem since they are not "next" to each other). Also, all the finish stuff in my mod are just a suggestions I've decided to change pink colour to red

[Beginner]
01:33:835 (3) - finish finish should add at 01:34:085, no note there, and if add one there would be a little hard for beginner to read (it's not follow the lyric)
02:29:335 (5) - finish on the last beat:arrow: actually all my finish sound is follow finish in music, they mixed well, if add a signle finish without music finish, it souns a little wierd, sorry
02:53:085 (1,1) - finish on last beat for both 1's
03:01:085 (1,1) - ^
03:09:585 (8) - finish
03:10:585 (3) - ^

[Advanced]
00:24:835 (3) - finish on last beat
00:45:835 (3) - finish
finishes on all the same type of stuff
01:28:835 (6) - overlap with the 4 is a little weird looking changed

[Challenge]
same finish stuff
01:46:585 (6) - maybe SB a "WARNING FAST SLIDER!" type of thing into this difficutly
01:47:585 (3) - ^
01:48:585 (3) - ^
01:54:585 (6) - ^ Some players who had tested it said it's OK, so let me keep it for now, if one more modder said about that, I'd added
and so on
01:57:335 (3) - nudge a small grid over toward 2 fixed
02:51:085 - turn the volume down on this SB clap to match the actual mapped claps. done

starred!

Lissette wrote:

Challenge
use a SB warning for the change of velocity in sliders >.< done

Great map and SB, loving the song ^^

Star!

EDIT: i've just notice this lil' thing
Yanzi Sun - Meng Bu Luo(Dream Never End)
put a space after Luo fixed

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Will move mod post down here when I finish modding (you don't need to give me kds since I already got 1)

One more try at translating

SPOILER

向南一公里　看天空無邊際
Facing the southern sky, I realized that the sky is borderless I am assuming the 1km thing is more of a chinese way of saying the phrase rather than the way it is supposed to be expressed.

Yours is a lot better. xD Thanks !

闖一闖　再瘋狂　又怎樣
What is holding us back? Let us recklessly charge forward. I would use "So what?" in the beginning part of the line, but that is quite informal. Since I don't know the connotation of the line, please choose what you think works better. Also crazily just sounded weird in context, so check if my choice of words fit.

This is a whole lot 10x better. xD Lol. Thanks !

你　往上　我　往下　就　一直延續
You go forward, I walk backward, advancing continuously This felt sort of weird to me since ppl usually do not advance backward.

xD Do you have any better idea ? Coz I am at a loss at this one

讓　未來是個問句　我們一路練習
Let the future be a question for us to practice answering The previous phrasing was awkward, so I tried to fix it. Still, I think my phrasing sounds wordy, but I don't know how to fix it.

This flows definitely better~

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Will move mod post down here when I finish modding (you don't need to give me kds since I already got 1) Why not? You had helped me so many in translating the lyric, you deserve it

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Beginner]

02:42:835 (3,4) - Spacing. Too close. fixed

[Advanced]

01:42:397 (1,2,3) - Adjust this spacing. Looks a bit weird. fixed

Awesome map/sb.

S i R i R u wrote:

(*･x･)/ﾟ･:*:･｡☆Congratulations for ranked ~

heintsi wrote:

Does yanzi sun have other stuff like this? i mean lots of percussions in background, really rhythmic song.. I really love this piece. and map fits really good on it ..

-SiN- wrote:

i knew it.. i should have mod the SB



error cut.. common human error
there are other images that has the same cut.

btw. adding to my fave