Started with a quick after test-play modding and ended up posting it as a full-mod.
Changes:
[Nich's Easy]
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Best of luck!
Changes:
- General and metadata fixes
- Adjusted diff settings a bit
- A couple of flow/rhythm fixes
IRC log
20:47 -Bakari-: Netsukawaii!
20:47 Fumika: nani!!!
20:48 *-Bakari- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/478461 Haruna Luna - Startear]
20:48 Fumika: o.o
20:48 -Bakari-: Is there anything you'd like to change before I start?
20:48 Fumika: nope, I just upload w
20:49 -Bakari-: or we can do an IRC mod, and I'll mod the rest of the diffs in the thread
20:49 Fumika: sure
20:49 Fumika: :D
20:50 -Bakari-: Okay, are you allowed to change guest diff?
20:50 Fumika: just No_Gu's
20:52 -Bakari-: let me re-dl the map, just to make sure that I won't miss anything important :P
20:54 -Bakari-: Okay, let's start with general stuff
20:54 Fumika: ok
20:55 -Bakari-: add SAOII and second to the tags
20:55 Fumika: second season ?
20:55 -Bakari-: Yup
20:56 -Bakari-: You already have "2nd", why not add "second" as well?
20:56 Fumika: my bad lol
20:56 Fumika: added both
21:00 -Bakari-: Everything else looks nice in general, good job :3/
21:00 Fumika: :3/
21:01 -Bakari-: Okay, now [Normal]
21:02 -Bakari-: I would use HP 3,5 and OD 4
21:02 -Bakari-: this is a Normal diff and the song is quite intense, so, why not
21:02 Fumika: done
21:04 -Bakari-: 00:07:436 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - feels a bit agressive fo this part, I'd remove 00:08:555 (4) - to simplify the rhythm
21:05 Fumika: sooooo
21:05 Fumika: (4) NC ?
21:06 Fumika: and remove NC after that
21:06 -Bakari-: try to remove (4)
21:06 Fumika: and make it stack to the slider instead ?
21:06 Fumika: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1933250
21:06 Fumika: ?
21:06 -Bakari-: even [http://puu.sh/aUXWM.jpg this] way is fine
21:07 -Bakari-: you can move new combo, or leave it as it is.
21:07 Fumika: ok
21:07 Fumika: done
21:07 Fumika: ok
21:08 -Bakari-: 00:33:406 (5,1) - x1,5 DS here is a bit too much. the sudden spacing change feels weird, at least to me.
21:08 -Bakari-: I'd use x1.0 DS
21:08 -Bakari-: 00:35:421 (4,1) - same
21:08 -Bakari-: and so on for all the similar patterns
21:10 -Bakari-: oh, and you can move NC 00:31:615 (1,3) - from (1) to (3)
21:10 -Bakari-: it will fit better with the vocals, in my opinion
21:12 Fumika: ok
21:12 -Bakari-: 00:57:809 (1) - remove this new combo, it does not really fit here and makes your pattern look inconsistent
21:13 Fumika: btw, 1,5 is not that much, it would be fine for me
21:13 Fumika: ok remove NC
21:13 -Bakari-: 01:13:033 (4) - the main beat is on the red tick and it feels unstressd this way. remoce the slider and place just one circle at 01:13:256 - to emphasize the drum
21:14 -Bakari-: the thing about 1,5 is that there was x0,8 DS before.
21:14 -Bakari-: therefore, it feels like the distance is two times bigger, which may confuse some players
21:15 Fumika: Yea, but I reduce slider speed
21:15 Fumika: A little jump migh be fine for that imo
21:15 -Bakari-: 01:26:018 (1,1) - this diff can be played in mania, taiko and ctb
21:16 -Bakari-: and this will be too much for a Normal diff in these modes
21:16 Fumika: ?
21:16 -Bakari-: a sudden 1/4 in the end of the diff, which is purely overmapped does not really fit here.
21:16 Fumika: What about it o.o?
21:16 -Bakari-: start it on the red tick, at least
21:17 Fumika: ehhhh Dx
21:17 -Bakari-: so, it'll become playable in ALL modes, which is kinda cool
21:17 Fumika: but I want standard ;A;
21:17 -Bakari-: Yeah, but since you have no ctb/taiko/o!m diffs
21:18 Fumika: let me test
21:18 -Bakari-: just because you don't play special modes, doesn't mean that other people don't play it ;_;
21:19 Fumika: ah
21:20 Fumika: Then I will remove tha last note if its a problem
21:20 -Bakari-: yeah, that'd be great
21:21 -Bakari-: and I guess that's it. everything else seems neat and clean
21:21 Fumika: done
21:23 *-Bakari- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/473200 Haruna Luna - Startear [Insane]]
21:24 -Bakari-: 00:12:137 (1) - try to make this slider 1/8 shorter
21:24 -Bakari-: so, there will be 1/4 gap between this and the next slider
21:24 -Bakari-: which will make the diff much more playable
21:26 Fumika: I think this will be fine, cuz 1/8 is connect to the next note actually
21:26 Fumika: And If I make a gap between this, sound will be pretty weird lol
21:28 Fumika: nah, I want to keep this
21:30 -Bakari-: and that's pretty much it, let me check it two more times to make sure
21:31 Fumika: okie
21:31 -Bakari-: uh, yeah, 00:13:368 (4) - overmapped circle there
21:32 -Bakari-: 00:16:055 (2) - and there
21:32 Fumika: Why ??
21:33 -Bakari-: because there're no beats in music
21:35 Fumika: aw, Let me check this with BAT
21:36 -Bakari-: well, okay, leaving the overmapped beats up to BATs, then
21:36 Fumika: okay
21:36 *-Bakari- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/474679 Haruna Luna - Startear [Gu's Insane]]
21:39 -Bakari-: 00:36:540 (3,4) - these sliders are snappd to 1/6, which is different from 1/4 used before
21:39 -Bakari-: a new combo would warn players about rhythm changes and give some extra HP which may be quite useful
21:40 Fumika: ok
21:43 -Bakari-: AiBat is telling something about the unsnapped beats in this diff, check them, please
21:45 -Bakari-: 01:13:816 (3,5) - and overmapping stays up to BATs again, right?
21:45 Fumika: ok
21:47 -Bakari-: well, that's pretty much it.
21:47 Fumika: o.o
21:47 -Bakari-: I'll mod Easy and Hard soon, and post this veeeery short log
[Nich's Easy]
- Due to some 3/2 patterns I highly suggest setting OD to 1,5 or 1. It will make the diff more playable for beginners.
- 00:35:868 (3,1) - the overlap seems a bit out of your style and looks a bit untidy, in my opinion. I would recommend you to avoid it.
Nothing else to say, not a fun of 3/2 beats in easier diffs, but it was necessary, so it should be fine if you reduce OD. Anyway, the diff is quite nicely done, great job!
- 00:02:510 (2,1) - the fact that players will have to move their cursor 4 times faster that they did it before does not seem like a good idea in a calm part of the diff. Drop the DS here, please.
- 00:12:137 (1) - I would make this 1/8 shorter. As there is an 1/8 gap between sliders, it feels way too hard for a Hard diff.
- 01:00:271 - the vocals appar here (at the red tick), therefore, making the slider start here as well will fit much bettr with the song. Example
- 01:20:645 (1,2) - replacing these tow with a 3/4 slider would acually git better here. Give it a try and see if you like it or not.
That's pretty much it. Quite a nice diff.
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Best of luck!