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Frostmourne

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Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2014-08-16T17:58:14+00:00

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Nich's Easy
00:47:958 (3) - clap กับ finish ที่หางเพื่อไม่ให้มันเสียงดังต่างกันจนเกินไปกับ slider ตัวถัดไป (คือตัวหลังมันทำให้รู้สึกว่าดังจนเกินเหตุเพราะตัวก่อนหน้าเบา ทั้งๆที่ตัวเพลงจริงๆมันไม่ได้เสียงต่างกันมาก)
01:24:227 (1) - NC นี้เอาออกได้ถ้าไม่จำเป็น แต่เก็บไว้ก็ไม่มีปัญหา

Normal
fine

Mochi's Hard
00:03:630 (1,2) - 00:05:868 (2,3) - 00:07:659 (2,3) - 00:08:779 (5,1) - can you please not make a jump with the very low slider velocity?
I am sure these are inappropriate in Hard diff. If you want to make jumps, make them on faster slider velocities in the chorus or somewhere that don't feel calm like this part.
00:22:212 (2) - what does this slider end for? It could work if you are mapping an Insane one but the Hard one should be the most simple.
Can you make something like this instead? like what you did on 00:25:794 (3,4) - 00:29:376 (3,4) -

SPOILER

Insane
Can this beatmap stay AR 8.0?
8.3 is too part, plus your diff has less jumps than Gu's Insane so it is distracting the whole calm parts in this diff.

Gu's Insane
AR 8.1-8.3? this AR 8.5 isn't fitting at all. It helps you read jumps but it fails to fit with the atmosphere of the song and feels it's forcing players to pay attention to this map overly and unnecessarily.
00:39:450 (1) - what is this? If you think following to the piano sound with 1/8 snapped is creative, it's ok for you to leave it as is. But to me, this is the most unexpected pattern and I can't find this appropriate to the music where it has vocal on 00:39:898

Good luck

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2014-08-16T23:08:30+00:00

In the fact i like high jump with low SV >< , changed some of them though.
Thank you !

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: HUE.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 48742
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Startear
TitleUnicode:Startear
Artist:Haruna Luna
ArtistUnicode:春奈るな
Creator:Fumika
Version:Mochi's Hard
Source:ソードアート・オンライン II
Tags:Netsukawa ending Sword Art Online II Phantom Bullet SAO Gun Gale Saku No_Gu NoGu Momochikun nich95 Nichiyouki 2nd season
BeatmapID:474826
BeatmapSetID:199531

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Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2014-08-17T03:05:04+00:00

Thank you for mod >w<

:3

osu file format v13

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Artist:Haruna Luna
ArtistUnicode:春奈るな
Creator:Fumika
Version:Nich's Easy
Source:ソードアート・オンライン II
Tags:Netsukawa ending Sword Art Online II Phantom Bullet SAO Gun Gale Saku No_Gu NoGu Momochikun nich95 Nichiyouki 2nd season
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Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2014-08-17T09:27:09+00:00

Updated, also change mp3 re-download plz !

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-08-17T12:31:54+00:00

as requested via in game here

General

you ninja'ed me about the title so this is clean now =w=

Easy

00:08:945 (1) - imo the curving on slider is too curvy here. the flow feel bit awkward here. how about smoother the slider something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1935973 ? it giving smoother flow here >_<
00:16:557 (2) - since the string/violin sound on the slider's tail is weak, how about remove the whistle here. imo the whistle here feel kinda loud. if you insist to keep whistle, reduce the volume instead
00:17:676 (1) - hmm just my taste, since i hear the music is so strong here, actually i prefer add finish here since i feel that whistle doesn't strong to emphasize the music
00:19:691 - i feel the 60% here is a little bit loud here. how about 50% here? imo it is the best volume for this part. if you agree with this, 00:34:019 - around 35% or 40% for this part
00:25:064 (3) - hmm just my taste, because the previous slider is kinda curvy here, imo suddenly do a kinda "straight" flow here feel a little bit plain. how about curve this slider slightly? i guess something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1935999
00:32:900 (4) - nazi, blanket it perfectly /runs , i guess around move the slider around 48,248 and the tail (after move the slider first) 176,220
00:37:659 (1) - hmm i don't really like the overlap here, how about make a little bit sliderart instead to avoid the overlap http://puu.sh/aTeFd/6cafe8f7b0.jpg ?
00:42:975 (2) - i don't know this is intentional or not but add whistle here for emphasize the loud piano here >_<
00:47:900 (3) - add aditional normal here. the default whistle feels too random here. the music on the this time actually same with 00:47:004 - (ignore the drum) so imo consistent for the hitsound is really needed here >_<
00:47:900 (3) - oh again for this slider lol , now for the tail. as i heard the musics for this tail with 00:48:572 - are same here so please make its become same. since i hearing here as inconsistency. kinda awkward :< (if from my taste, i would remove finish here since no cymbal at this time)
01:02:004 (2) - altho you hitsounded the 01:02:228 - with tick here. imo this still feel empty since the music on the whitetick is loud here while you mapped the red tick on 01:02:004 - which has weaker sound. map the whitetick with 1/2 slider or 1/2 repeat start from 01:02:004 - to emphasize the whitetick clearly
01:12:079 - remove clap tick on this time. the music doesn't has any kick drum
01:20:139 (3) - imo the circular flow works better here, just move the circle to 16,140
01:25:960 - the music is really dissapear to the end of spinner so 5% please :< , 10% feel still loud here

Normal

OD feel too low here. at least make OD same with the HP for better spread with diffs
Since Easy uses CS3 and the Hard uses CS4. imo CS 3,5 for Normal is the best here
00:00:437 (1) - imo the circle here is really random since the time just has vocal while the vocal is same with 00:00:885 - 00:01:333 - , so if you map the first vocal, imo you should map the other that vocals too
00:08:721 (1) - is the circle itentional here? since the circle just following vocal only here. imo for Normal diff no need to map this.
00:10:512 (1) - finish hear little bit random here since the string sound is going to dissapear. imo the sound is really weak and low here so no hitsound at this time works better imo
00:34:019 (1,2,3) - aa imo the 1/2 on this part this unnecessary since the red ticks just having vocals here. imo 1/2 on this diff too much too, i hope you can reduce 1/2 gaps here by change those sliders into 1/1 slider repeat
00:37:601 (1,2,3) - ^
00:43:422 (3,4,5) - imo the rhythm here kinda complex since you're mapping the music of 00:43:870 - that you aren't map that kind of sound mostly on the diff, i guess something like http://puu.sh/aW7Kq/b0bddc8ed9.jpg works better here
00:48:684 - unnecessary greenline /runs
00:51:706 (3) - i wonder why you map this one which has "normal" while the 00:51:258 - has a strong string sound here. imo remove the circle would be better here
00:58:646 (5) - i understand actually you're mapping the music here, but with the musics you are mapping most of the vocals too here. while 00:58:870 - you skip this time which has vocal, it sounds awkward here. i guess try 1/2 slider repeat instead here
01:02:452 (4,1) - well maybe NC'ing one object before kiai time is your style but imo that's look like unnecessary here. if want to emphasize the music on 01:02:452 - imo swap NC works better here
01:05:139 (2,3) - hmm long 1/2 pattern again imo. if i were you i would make this more simple. i guess just make 1/2 slider repeat start from 01:05:363 -
01:14:094 (2,3) - if you just map the violin sounds here, you can make this become easier with make this one become 1/1 slider
01:21:482 (2) - the slider here looks messy since it kinda different with previous slider, imo symmetrical would be better here http://puu.sh/aW8rE/09ba3e14d7.jpg
01:24:169 (1) - nazi, imo you can move the tail of slider slightly to rightward to make the slider's shape similar with next slider. ofc it looked nicer here. for the tail imo 420,204 works with fine
Our styles are really different here. so i don't want touch too much here. personally i don't like use smaller spacing for 1/2 since spacing 1,0x for 1/2 rhythm here is fine for me (as my thought at first), after i saw your rhythms i know why you're use smaller spacing lol. But i feel the 1/2 gaps here are too much here, might be just different our styles ww

Hard

00:07:825 (3) - nazi, imo sih slider shape e rada kurang melengkung krn previous slider e lek lengkung amat so jadinya kea gak rapi ngono. i would say tail 352,108, skalian tail e nunjuk next circle ben better flow
00:10:512 (1) - podo karo Normal
00:18:348 (4) - imo kan violin sound e jadi luwih keras nang kene. whistle tok kurang greget ngono.. err tambahen finish. kekuatan violin e yo mirip2 karo 00:17:676 - walau lebih lemah sih
00:19:691 (3) - NC soal e SV naik.. walau naik ga drastis sih tp yo, enakan NC .w.
00:22:601 (3) - taste doang sih tp aku luwih seneng lek tail e ngadep nang atas. kiro2 324,8. flow e luwih kroso
00:44:542 (5) - adoh e jump mu. reduce pelis. lek aku dadi kon, tak move 00:44:318 (4) - nang 360,204
00:47:676 (4) - kurang adoh, reduce spacing please. also 00:48:124 (5) - masa cymbal pke normal spacing. gak kerasa feel e disini
00:54:616 (3) - kinda disagree disini, vocal nya di 00:54:840 - kuat sih jadi repeat gak kasih feel kuat gtu.. hmm slider's head please for this time + little jump
00:59:094 (1) - sek2, piano keras nang kene mek di whistle, terus 01:00:885 (1) - piano e keras tp di finish.. consistency please :<
01:04:355 - pitch dari violin nya. malah aneh di skip disini ketika 01:04:131 - drum keras jg di map. imo map aja itu violin pitch nya
01:08:049 (1) - sampleset soft di whistle. buat emphasize vocal. also hindarin 1/2 whistle dengan suara yg sama. entah kenapa kedengaran gak enak

Insane

00:10:512 (1) - hmm just refered my taste but i prefer to normal spacing here something like move to 412,32 >_<
00:15:661 (4) - taste again, altho i saw the normal spacing 1,3x on next of this circle, i prefer do jumps for both previous and next of this circle by move the circle to 348,64
00:39:392 (4,1) - imo a little bit akward here when the loud piano is sounded on 00:39:392 (4) - and mapped it with normal spacing, 00:39:616 (1) - only has vocal and mapped by jump here. i guess the jump should be made on stanza here
00:59:542 (2) - would be cool if the pattern has a jump for 00:59:766 (3) - here. for it i guess move the circle 00:59:542 (2) - to 292,328
01:12:303 (3) - the red node here is making different here that i feel kinda akward, i would say to use curve slider only here. i guess something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1936286
01:20:587 (1,2) - i guess just a taste, i prefer to do something like http://puu.sh/aWaFL/df1f29866e.jpg for this time, since the bpm is low so much of 1/4 here is fine. also harder to play would be feel fun to play for Insane diff
So nazi here. Basically our flow taste and design are same here so i can't catch too much. Nice diff :3~

No_Gu

fine but 00:39:392 (1) - i kinda unsure with this. i know the 1/8 but the sound is really bad here. i guess don't rush to follow the string sound here. 1/1 slider works better

Good Luck ~
the song is nice ofc because Haruna Luna! <3

No_Gu

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Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2014-08-17T14:11:36+00:00

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Artist:Haruna Luna
ArtistUnicode:春奈るな
Creator:Fumika
Version:Gu's Insane
Source:ソードアート・オンライン II
Tags:Netsukawa ending Sword Art Online II Phantom Bullet SAO Gun Gale Saku No_Gu NoGu Momochikun nich95 Nichiyouki SAOII second 2nd season
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@Xinely: I use overlap here to have a hint that it's a 1/8 here,so no problem imo

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2014-08-17T14:33:02+00:00

Xinely wrote:
as requested via in game here

General
you ninja'ed me about the title so this is clean now =w= HUEHUEHUEHUEHUHEUHEUHEUHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUE

Normal
OD feel too low here. at least make OD same with the HP for better spread with diffs increase by .5
Since Easy uses CS3 and the Hard uses CS4. imo CS 3,5 for Normal is the best here nah, It would be way too big and I need to re-map orz
00:00:437 (1) - imo the circle here is really random since the time just has vocal while the vocal is same with 00:00:885 - 00:01:333 - , so if you map the first vocal, imo you should map the other that vocals too Its fine tho
00:08:721 (1) - is the circle itentional here? since the circle just following vocal only here. imo for Normal diff no need to map this. But It need for me ;_;
00:10:512 (1) - finish hear little bit random here since the string sound is going to dissapear. imo the sound is really weak and low here so no hitsound at this time works better imo Its whistle lmao
00:34:019 (1,2,3) - aa imo the 1/2 on this part this unnecessary since the red ticks just having vocals here. imo 1/2 on this diff too much too, i hope you can reduce 1/2 gaps here by change those sliders into 1/1 slider repeat but its more fun ;A;
00:37:601 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:43:422 (3,4,5) - imo the rhythm here kinda complex since you're mapping the music of 00:43:870 - that you aren't map that kind of sound mostly on the diff, i guess something like http://puu.sh/aW7Kq/b0bddc8ed9.jpg works better here nooooope
00:48:684 - unnecessary greenline /runs wat
00:51:706 (3) - i wonder why you map this one which has "normal" while the 00:51:258 - has a strong string sound here. imo remove the circle would be better here Its fine =w=
00:58:646 (5) - i understand actually you're mapping the music here, but with the musics you are mapping most of the vocals too here. while 00:58:870 - you skip this time which has vocal, it sounds awkward here. i guess try 1/2 slider repeat instead here nuuuuuu
01:02:452 (4,1) - well maybe NC'ing one object before kiai time is your style but imo that's look like unnecessary here. if want to emphasize the music on 01:02:452 - imo swap NC works better here keep this ;w;
01:05:139 (2,3) - hmm long 1/2 pattern again imo. if i were you i would make this more simple. i guess just make 1/2 slider repeat start from 01:05:363 - NOH
01:14:094 (2,3) - if you just map the violin sounds here, you can make this become easier with make this one become 1/1 slider ehhh
01:21:482 (2) - the slider here looks messy since it kinda different with previous slider, imo symmetrical would be better here ITS FLOWWWWWWWWhttp://puu.sh/aW8rE/09ba3e14d7.jpg
01:24:169 (1) - nazi, imo you can move the tail of slider slightly to rightward to make the slider's shape similar with next slider. ofc it looked nicer here. for the tail imo 420,204 works with fine NAZIIIII
Our styles are really different here. so i don't want touch too much here. personally i don't like use smaller spacing for 1/2 since spacing 1,0x for 1/2 rhythm here is fine for me (as my thought at first), after i saw your rhythms i know why you're use smaller spacing lol. But i feel the 1/2 gaps here are too much here, might be just different our styles ww hehehe

Insane
00:10:512 (1) - hmm just refered my taste but i prefer to normal spacing here something like move to 412,32 >_< nah
00:15:661 (4) - taste again, altho i saw the normal spacing 1,3x on next of this circle, i prefer do jumps for both previous and next of this circle by move the circle to 348,64 ^
00:39:392 (4,1) - imo a little bit akward here when the loud piano is sounded on 00:39:392 (4) - and mapped it with normal spacing, 00:39:616 (1) - only has vocal and mapped by jump here. i guess the jump should be made on stanza here Its really fun to play here ;A;
00:59:542 (2) - would be cool if the pattern has a jump for 00:59:766 (3) - here. for it i guess move the circle 00:59:542 (2) - to 292,328 ok
01:12:303 (3) - the red node here is making different here that i feel kinda akward, i would say to use curve slider only here. i guess something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1936286 style wwww
01:20:587 (1,2) - i guess just a taste, i prefer to do something like http://puu.sh/aWaFL/df1f29866e.jpg for this time, since the bpm is low so much of 1/4 here is fine. also harder to play would be feel fun to play for Insane diff nuuuuuuu
So nazi here. Basically our flow taste and design are same here so i can't catch too much. Nice diff :3~ BEST NAZI MAPPING HUEHUEHUE

Good Luck ~
the song is nice ofc because Haruna Luna! <3

Thanks for modding !

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2014-08-17T17:17:49+00:00

Nich's Easy:

00:32:900 (4) - Well the drum-clap seems not matching the song enough as 00:40:736. normal-clap would be the easy one, but you may keep if you want.
00:45:885 (3) - Sampleset-normal: are you sure? It sounds too loud. Rather it should be an addition-normal.

Normal:

00:21:482 (1,2) - Please make a smoother flow as you've done at the other same patterns. http://puu.sh/aWpoo/77e1fd1914.jpg
00:56:855 (1) - Consider setting the end as a soft whistle. A normal sampleset in a row was a little loud imo.

Mochi's Hard:

00:03:572 (1) - This is a beginning of your map, and it starts with a slow sv. And this jump feels too stressful because of that slow sv. It is true that in fact this isn't a large distance for players to aim, but the song is calm here, and the map is in a slow pace. Reducing the spacing won't be a bad selection this case.
00:13:870 (6) - 2 grids up perhaps for a better distance.
00:36:258 (2) - I don't think it's more important to place at the end of 00:34:691 (2) than maintaining the distance..
00:50:139 (4,1) - I think starting the combo from (4) fits more. How do you think?
01:04:467 (4,1) - ^

Insane:

00:08:945 (1,2) - The wiggling of the sliderball doesn't seem nice compared to the calm song. Whatever effect you intended, mind alleviating by a little?
00:28:870 (1) - Remove new combo. There was a similar pattern of your selected rhythm at 00:25:288 (4) and you can see the consistency was broken. Difference because of slider and note won't matter much here.
00:39:392 (4) - As Xinely, I felt a jump should have actually been made at here, where a new stanza begins, not 00:39:616 (1). But it seems its a little tricky to alter patterns here, so I wouldn't be sad if you decided not to change.
01:03:572 (1) - Consider removing NC? Not sure for here though.
01:07:601 (5) - I think the flow to this object could've been sharper, something like you done at 00:52:825 (5). Currently it feels a little too bland. Mind placing at (324,216)?

Gu's Insane:

00:39:392 (1,2) - The map is really nice, but I think this ruined the map partially... I won't ask you for a change since you seem to like your pattern and you were following an instrument with a distinct style, but just saying that I was sad.

Good luck~

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2014-08-17T17:27:20+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Normal:
00:21:482 (1,2) - Please make a smoother flow as you've done at the other same patterns. http://puu.sh/aWpoo/77e1fd1914.jpg Its fine tho
00:56:855 (1) - Consider setting the end as a soft whistle. A normal sampleset in a row was a little loud imo. nope, consistence with Insane diff
Insane:
00:08:945 (1,2) - The wiggling of the sliderball doesn't seem nice compared to the calm song. Whatever effect you intended, mind alleviating by a little? nah, It would be fine >_>
00:28:870 (1) - Remove new combo. There was a similar pattern of your selected rhythm at 00:25:288 (4) and you can see the consistency was broken. Difference because of slider and note won't matter much here. Its anti-jump as you can see by the spacing
00:39:392 (4) - As Xinely, I felt a jump should have actually been made at here, where a new stanza begins, not 00:39:616 (1). But it seems its a little tricky to alter patterns here, so I wouldn't be sad if you decided not to change. Ah fine fine fine, Fixed it
01:03:572 (1) - Consider removing NC? Not sure for here though. nope
01:07:601 (5) - I think the flow to this object could've been sharper, something like you done at 00:52:825 (5). Currently it feels a little too bland. Mind placing at (324,216)? what?
Gu's Insane:
00:39:392 (1,2) - The map is really nice, but I think this ruined the map partially... I won't ask you for a change since you seem to like your pattern and you were following an instrument with a distinct style, but just saying that I was sad.
No_Gu wrote:
@Xinely: I use overlap here to have a hint that it's a 1/8 here,so no problem imo
Good luck~

Thanks for modding!

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2014-08-19T19:03:05+00:00

Xinely wrote:
as requested via in game here

Hard
00:07:825 (3) - nazi, imo sih slider shape e rada kurang melengkung krn previous slider e lek lengkung amat so jadinya kea gak rapi ngono. i would say tail 352,108, skalian tail e nunjuk next circle ben better flow fine imo, can't see any different ><
00:10:512 (1) - podo karo Normal same as fumika's answer then ~
00:18:348 (4) - imo kan violin sound e jadi luwih keras nang kene. whistle tok kurang greget ngono.. err tambahen finish. kekuatan violin e yo mirip2 karo 00:17:676 - walau lebih lemah sih terlalu berisik ah
00:19:691 (3) - NC soal e SV naik.. walau naik ga drastis sih tp yo, enakan NC .w. nah..
00:22:601 (3) - taste doang sih tp aku luwih seneng lek tail e ngadep nang atas. kiro2 324,8. flow e luwih kroso ud bagus kok
00:44:542 (5) - adoh e jump mu. reduce pelis. lek aku dadi kon, tak move 00:44:318 (4) - nang 360,204 gak jauh" amat kok =3=
00:47:676 (4) - kurang adoh, reduce spacing please. also 00:48:124 (5) - masa cymbal pke normal spacing. gak kerasa feel e disini ud emphasize jump drum
00:54:616 (3) - kinda disagree disini, vocal nya di 00:54:840 - kuat sih jadi repeat gak kasih feel kuat gtu.. hmm slider's head please for this time + little jump player gak bakal recognize deh kyknya.. lagian ini part kn fokus 1/1 drum
00:59:094 (1) - sek2, piano keras nang kene mek di whistle, terus 01:00:885 (1) - piano e keras tp di finish.. consistency please :< soalnya ada 3/4 drum part disini dan vocal serasa lbih kuat jadi finish. gk kyk sbelum nya
01:04:355 - pitch dari violin nya. malah aneh di skip disini ketika 01:04:131 - drum keras jg di map. imo map aja itu violin pitch nya dunno how 2 fix
01:08:049 (1) - sampleset soft di whistle. buat emphasize vocal. also hindarin 1/2 whistle dengan suara yg sama. entah kenapa kedengaran gak enak Ya juga.. removed then

Good Luck ~
the song is nice ofc because Haruna Luna! <3

Sonnyc wrote:
Mochi's Hard:
00:03:572 (1) - This is a beginning of your map, and it starts with a slow sv. And this jump feels too stressful because of that slow sv. It is true that in fact this isn't a large distance for players to aim, but the song is calm here, and the map is in a slow pace. Reducing the spacing won't be a bad selection this case. Keeping this atm, that's not soo far imo
00:13:870 (6) - 2 grids up perhaps for a better distance. Ok
00:36:258 (2) - I don't think it's more important to place at the end of 00:34:691 (2) than maintaining the distance.. I don't get this lol
00:50:139 (4,1) - I think starting the combo from (4) fits more. How do you think? nah.. it's fit the pattern
01:04:467 (4,1) - ^

Good luck~

Thank you :3

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RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2014-08-22T12:15:45+00:00

Hi, Fumika~

[Normal]

00:08:497- I prefer to add a note to suit to vocal. suggetion~

[Insane]

00:48:348- remove normal hitsound
01:02:676- ^
01:25:960- I prefer to reduce hitsound's volume

[Nich's Easy]

00:17:676- normal clap?
00:32:228 (3,4) - bnalket correctly

[Mochi's Hard]

00:02:452 (2) - suggetion~
00:55:288 (4,1,2) - how about curved pattern instead of straight?
SPOILER
01:19:243- clap?

[Gu's Insane]

00:17:900- remove norma lhitsound
00:48:124 (7,1) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider
01:25:960 (1) - I prefer to reduce hotsound's volume

almost good! Sinon is so cute<3
~☆

~Good Luck~

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2014-08-23T11:02:25+00:00

Fixed smt

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2014-08-23T13:38:53+00:00

Thank you, fixed mostly >.<

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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Title:Startear -TV size ver.-
TitleUnicode:Startear -TV size ver.-
Artist:Haruna Luna
ArtistUnicode:春奈るな
Creator:Fumika
Version:Nich's Easy
Source:ソードアート・オンライン II
Tags:Netsukawa ending Sword Art Online II Phantom Bullet SAO Gun Gale Saku No_Gu NoGu Momochikun nich95 Nichiyouki SAOII second 2nd season
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Konei

2,959 posts

Joined March 2012

Konei 2014-08-23T18:37:10+00:00

Modding because of #modreqs.

[Nich's Easy]

In general, I would increase the volume by like 10% of the Sliderslide 3 when you use it so it fits with the hitclap naturally.
01:24:170 (1) - This NC is kinda unneeded, would be cool if you removed it since it looks really single.
Really, really awesome difficulty. Totally clean and nice rhythm!

[Normal]

00:48:796 (5) - Add a drum finish addition here to fit the enduring sound? If you do add it, add it on your other difficulties aswell please.
00:57:304 (2,3) - The phrase calls more for a Slider here in my opinion, how about changing those two into a Slider? Would also make the transition to the next Slider easier to play.
01:05:588 (3) - Delete the Slider and add a note to the white tick? This place just seems to full of notes to me if you look at the previous ones, so might be better to tone it down a bit.
This difficulty is also totally awesome.. Dunno what to say just really nice.

[Mochi's Hard]

00:36:483 (3) - Move this more to the right to create a nice square? It just looks weird like it currently is.
00:37:155 (4) - Might be a good idea to remove this note since you didn't fully follow the drums which makes this a bit confusing to follow.
00:59:991 (3,4) - The double is somewhat hard to get for a decent Hard player I guess, try to shorten this to an 1/2 Slider and make it a triple?
01:17:789 - How about adding a note here to follow the drums? Sounds good and keeps excitement up.

[Insane]

00:18:349 (2) - Just a suggestion but you could try ctrl + G here for a different flow. Just a suggestion as said, but I find it kinda cool.
00:48:125 (1) - Better remove the normal sampleset from the end as there are no drums to back it up.
00:49:244 (2,3,4) - How about decreasing the spacing a bit? I missread them as 1/2 first.
01:02:453 (1) - Same as for 00:48:125 (1) - .
Wow, nice one again!

[Gu's Insane]

00:52:826 (5) - How about ctrl + J on this Slider? Flows better to me but just a suggestion.
01:02:453 (1) - Make the end soft sampleset since there's no drum playing on the Slider's end?
01:24:170 (1) - You could reduce the volume by 20% or something on the end and add a finish with normal addition to follow the cymbals.
Awesome as always! I love your maps!

Really great mapset, has been a long time since I saw a mapset that good!
Take a star and good luck!

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2014-08-24T18:23:14+00:00

Change smt!

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Delis 2014-08-25T17:53:20+00:00

seems no need to wait for a week, throw some suggestions *no kudos*

[■ General]

in the source, this should have been better removed the space between ン and II, and then change II to Ⅱ. probably not unrank issue but would be better consistent with Guy and Umi's IGNITE.
1. ソードアート・オンラインⅡ copy this one to source.

[■ Gu's Insane]

00:12:024 (1,2) - can't you resnap them by 1/6 snap divisor? I had talked with Zero__wind and he suggested it and I agreed with that then. I tried to listen to the music and the sound was starting at 00:12:005 - so I don't think you needed to unsnap on propose.
SPOILER
00:38:498 - to be honest the normal sound on head feels out of place well probably just me.
00:54:393 (3) - I thought you don't wanna put a clap at the 1st circle of a triplet.
01:21:819 (5) - sampleset : auto must be better here...

[■ Insane]

00:00:438 (1,2,3) - can you decrease the volume by 10 - 25 for them, the whistles are kinda loud here since the song is too quiet. also I would add a whistle 00:00:886 (2) - it fits for me better.
00:19:692 (1) - I guess this didn't have a finish on head before, dunno but the finish doesn't follow any sound and doesn't fit with the kind of quiet part. I would suggest you to remove Normal diff as well. or at least decrease the volume a bit such as Nich's Easy, it sounds much better imo.
00:39:393 (1) - whistle for the piano?
01:07:938 (2) - I would change sampleset to normal if 01:07:826 (1) - has normal sampleset, it makes more comfortable to play the triplet. or 01:07:826 (1,2) - swap the normalset from (1) to (2)

[■ Mochi's Hard]

00:10:625 - unnecessary green line.
00:59:991 (3,4) - I still wonder why this is not a triplet
01:15:886 (4,5) - I don't like the usage of 3/4 in Hard, not a big deal though.

[■ Normal]

00:07:379 (1,2,3) - I guess this must be hard to read for Normal players, unstack by x1.0 (because 1/1) or something
00:19:692 (1) - I guess a bit nazi but you can place this properly by x1.0

[■ Nich's Easy]

01:02:005 (2) - normal finish on slider end? I feel it fits and there is in all diffs except yours. but you may free to ignore

to fumika : edited to add the General thing

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2014-08-26T04:51:12+00:00

SPOILER

Konei wrote:
[Gu's Insane]

00:52:826 (5) - How about ctrl + J on this Slider? Flows better to me but just a suggestion.hmm i prefer mine
01:02:453 (1) - Make the end soft sampleset since there's no drum playing on the Slider's end?have,though very slight
01:24:170 (1) - You could reduce the volume by 20% or something on the end and add a finish with normal addition to follow the cymbals.kkk
Awesome as always! I love your maps! www

SPOILER

Delis wrote:
[■ Gu's Insane]
00:12:024 (1,2) - can't you resnap them by 1/6 snap divisor? I had talked with Zero__wind and he suggested it and I agreed with that then. I tried to listen to the music and the sound was starting at 00:12:005 - so I don't think you needed to unsnap on propose. seems my mistake
00:38:498 - to be honest the normal sound on head feels out of place well probably just me.hmm..if you delete this note.you can hear a sound.but slight.hmmm turn down the volume a little
00:54:393 (3) - I thought you don't wanna put a clap at the 1st circle of a triplet.if you here clearly,you'll got it.drums in this song is quite a chaos
01:21:819 (5) - sampleset : auto must be better here...no base drum here

SPOILER

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Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2014-08-26T10:23:56+00:00

Fixed all except nazi mod, also I fixed for nich and Mochi give me his diff, He fixed only 00:10:625 - this (?) Updated!

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2014-08-26T10:49:55+00:00

Delis wrote:
seems no need to wait for a week, throw some suggestions *no kudos*

[■ Mochi's Hard]
00:10:625 - unnecessary green line. removed
00:59:991 (3,4) - I still wonder why this is not a triplet i want to keep the rhtyhm variation
01:15:886 (4,5) - I don't like the usage of 3/4 in Hard, not a big deal though. ~~~~

to fumika : edited to add the General thing

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-08-26T13:29:42+00:00

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Gu's Insane

00:11:035 (2,1) - the arrow is overlapped imo
01:18:349 (1) - remover nc, not that necessary here
fine

Insane

01:05:811 (6,1) - blanket maybe?
lol how to me maps like this ;w;

Mochi's Hard

00:07:155 (1,2) - blanket?
00:27:528 (2,3) - perfect this blanket
00:31:782 (4,2) - ^
01:24:170 (1,2,3) - ^
01:11:632 (1) - personally i prefer 3/4 slider to follow both vocal and drum beats here 0.0

Normal

01:17:453 (2,1) - perfect this blanket
01:19:692 (2,1) - ^

Nich's Easy

01:12:752 (2,3) - perfect this blanket

lolololol sao2 shinoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

good luck

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2014-08-26T16:29:05+00:00

Fixed, thank you for mods

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Title:Startear -TV size ver.-
TitleUnicode:Startear -TV size ver.-
Artist:Haruna Luna
ArtistUnicode:春奈るな
Creator:Fumika
Version:Nich's Easy
Source:ソードアート・オンラインII
Tags:Netsukawa ending Sword Art Online II Phantom Bullet SAO Gun Gale Saku No_Gu NoGu Momochikun nich95 Nichiyouki SAOII second 2nd season
BeatmapID:477415
BeatmapSetID:199531

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:1.5
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.92
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Fumika

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Topic Starter

Fumika 2014-08-26T22:08:11+00:00

FIXED FOR GU AND MOCHI TOO

Delis

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Joined May 2012

Delis 2014-08-26T22:43:06+00:00

!

BeatofIke

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Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-08-27T02:38:04+00:00

Checking this map soon. owo

Fumika

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Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2014-08-27T03:15:16+00:00

yay ><

beeboy123

183 posts

Joined June 2013

beeboy123 2014-08-27T16:54:58+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
Checking this map soon. owo

Hype is real

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-08-27T17:07:05+00:00

Looks good.
Map Qualified!

Fumika

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Joined November 2011

Topic Starter

Fumika 2014-08-27T17:09:02+00:00

Thanks! <3

wasonz

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Joined July 2013

wasonz 2014-08-27T17:09:27+00:00

Congratz ครับ ท่านพี่ Fumika

KSHR

Global Moderator

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Joined July 2010

KSHR 2014-08-27T17:26:10+00:00

Thanks for giving me "Quick Draw", Fumika chan and Startear. Gratz!

SPOILER

Konei

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Joined March 2012

Konei 2014-08-27T17:52:11+00:00

Nice map, really well done!

Wreath

435 posts

Joined February 2012

Wreath 2014-08-27T19:16:23+00:00

grats :>

Xiaolin

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Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2014-08-27T19:20:51+00:00

sinon ~ <3

gratz ~ o3o

- H i N a -

- H i N a - 2014-08-27T23:35:47+00:00

กำ แรงค์แล้วหลอ งั้นแมพเราคงจะไม่ได้แรงค์แล้วสินะ // ทำใจแปบ LoL~

Congratz~!

KantoKun

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Joined December 2011

KantoKun 2014-08-27T23:50:34+00:00

เย่!!~~~~~~ congratz >.<!!

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-08-28T03:41:03+00:00

Congratulations! Fumika senpai!

999 Posts, omg

Fumika

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Fumika 2014-08-28T05:26:26+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Congratulations! Fumika senpai!

999 Posts, omg

1,000 now omg

Rumia-

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Rumia- 2014-08-28T06:58:43+00:00

yayayyy gratzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2014-08-28T10:26:04+00:00

Fumika wrote:
IamKwaN wrote:
Congratulations! Fumika senpai!

999 Posts, omg
1,000 now omg

LOL

Shiro

Global Moderator

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Joined May 2009

Shiro 2014-09-01T21:36:27+00:00

Hello! Sorry but I have to unqualify this. The following issues have been raised:

General: Offset isn't -9, there is an anacrusis, it should be 1772, that fixes the stanza, removes the nonsensical negative offset, and is -10 from what there currently is

Normal
Spacing is fairly low and that makes the map rather clustered, it could be raised a bit

Gu's Insane
00:11:035 (2,1) - (1) is invinsible under (2)
00:35:811 (1) - extended for no reason, there is a clear vocal on the red tick right before
00:39:393 (1) - Extended to 1/8 really ? It's confusing and surprising, extend to 1/4 if the mapper really wants, but 1/8 doesn't work

Insane
00:08:946 (1,2) - these sliders are really ugly, why not make proper waves
comboing in general needs to be revised (please pm me in-game if you need assistance for that !)

Additionally:

Fumika wrote:
Fixed all except nazi mod, also I fixed for nich and Mochi give me his diff, He fixed only 00:10:625 - this (?) Updated!

This kind of reply is heavily frowned up. Please explain properly what you changed and what you didn't change, and why.

The map will be handled by BATs from this point on. Do not hesitate to come to me if you need any help or have any questions!

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Xinely wrote:

Sonnyc wrote:

No_Gu wrote:

Xinely wrote:

Sonnyc wrote:

Konei wrote:

Delis wrote:

Delis wrote:

Gu's Insane

Insane

Mochi's Hard

Normal

Nich's Easy

BeatofIke wrote:

IamKwaN wrote:

Fumika wrote:

IamKwaN wrote:

Fumika wrote:

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