1. Another (5.66 stars, 456 notes)
2. Basic (1.01 stars, 55 notes)
3. Easy (1.3 stars, 83 notes)
4. Extra (7.04 stars, 711 notes)
5. Hard (3.35 stars, 278 notes)
6. LeiN-'s HD - 4Key (3.47 stars, 1029 notes)
7. LeiN-'s MX - 4Key (4.9 stars, 1508 notes)
8. NM - 4Key (1.69 stars, 396 notes)
9. Normal (2.19 stars, 172 notes)
10. wring's Insane (5.51 stars, 577 notes)
11. yongtw's Hyper (4.39 stars, 443 notes)

hutunohito wrote:

[NM]
HP7
00:07:430 (7430|3) - move to 1
00:21:724 - add
00:53:294 (53294|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1942266? no, not following that part in the song
01:28:006 (88006|2) - move to 1
01:49:839 (109839|2) - ^^

hutunohito wrote:

[HD]
rename LeiN-'s HD
00:37:430 (37430|3) - move to 1?
00:39:944 (39944|3) - ^
00:34:917 (34917|3) - ^
00:43:713 (43713|2) - move to 2
00:43:556 - add No
00:46:069 - ^ No
some points are same~
[MX]
rename LeiN-'s MX
00:02:718 (2718|3) - 1/4?(1/3,1/6,1/12 don't fit this dance music) No
00:07:195 - 00:07:352 - add 2
00:11:514 (11514|0,11514|1,11671|2) - 1/2? No
00:21:567 (21567|0,21567|1) - change short No
00:32:483 (32483|2) - move to 2 and 00:32:404 - add 3
00:32:876 (32876|2,33190|2) - change short No
01:15:912 - to 01:17:169 - why 1/6? for fun. if it pointed out again, I'll consider it to change.
01:29:577 (89577|0,89629|1,89682|2) - ^

Good Luck.

1. Move it to pending since you are actively looking for mods and stuff
2. There is no kiai time anywhere on your diffs, an exciting song like this should have it IMO

1. 00:53:294 (1) - Shorten this slider to 00:54:551 - and add a spinner starting 00:54:865 - here and end it 00:56:436 - here to fill in the gap and keep newer players engaged? Should be enough time proceeding to and from the newly placed spinner for beginners to react to. If you aren't going to do this at least remove the green lines
2. 01:00:834 (3,1) - Maybe make this a perfect blanket or something. Use 1's approach circle to help you out with this
3. 01:07:116 - Remove some of the green lines here since they aren't really needed

1. 00:09:944 (2,1) - Space out 1 from 2. 1's location seems a bit forced and it isn't consistent with the rest of the spacing you have laid out in the rest of the diff
2. 00:11:828 (2) - Bring the first anchor down a bit, so players can be more aware of the parallel between this and 00:13:713 (1) -
3. 00:38:216 (1) - This slider shape seems a bit forced and doesn't really conform to the style that persists throughout this diff. Maybe change it to a slider shape similar to 00:25:650 (1) -
4. 00:28:163 (1,2) - Maybe move 2 a little in closer to 1. The spacing here is a bit large in comparison to patterns like 00:23:137 (1,2) -
5. 00:29:420 (2,1) - Check the spacing here, 1 is shoved a little bit close to 2. You can maintain the parallel pattern here easily if you just move 1 over a bit, 340:326 works out fine
6. 00:35:703 (1,2) - Check the spacing here, 2 is shoved in a bit too close to 1
7. 00:41:357 (2,3) - I would be careful with a change in rhythm like this. Newer players would not be able to pick up this right away (even i messed up here because I was so accustomed to the current rhythm scheme). To alleviate this, I found that combining 00:40:729 (1,2) - in to one slider had enough momentum for me to be aware of the change in rhythm that was coming up.
8. 00:40:729 (1,2) - Check the spacing between these two objects. Usually you would have 1.2x ds, but here its a little noticeable that the spacing isn't consistent
9. 00:45:755 (1) - Remove this NC. The music doesn't really change much here and the HP drain isn't high enough to warrant a new combo
10. 00:50:781 (1) - ^
11. 00:55:101 (1) - I would move this spinner to 00:55:179 - to give enough time for newer players to react and respond to it
12. 01:29:734 (1,2) - Check the spacing here, 2 is shoved a bit too close to 1
13. 01:39:315 - Remove some of the green lines starting here, since they aren't really used for anything
14. 01:42:300 (1) - Remove NC for the same reason as 00:45:755 (1) -
15. 01:47:326 (1) - ^

1. 00:20:624 (1,2,3) - Make sure the spacing is even between these objects. There looks like there is a jump from 2 to 3 which could throw off a player
2. 00:30:048 (2,1) - I would curve 2 a bit more, so the added swing will have it flow more smoothly in to 1 and the following pattern. Be sure to maintain a perfect blanket while doing so to keep it neat
3. 00:44:184 (2) - I would start this slider and the sliders like this on 00:44:341 - (the red tick following) since this is the most prominent noise. This will make it easier for players to pick up the rhythm and respond to it
4. 01:40:729 (2) - ^ same for this section

1. 00:04:289 (1) - The curve at the end of this slider is a bit too harsh. I suggest you smoothen out or bring the slider end further away from the slider body to make the play a bit nicer similar to 00:09:315 (1) -
2. 00:33:190 (1,2,3) - I would space this anti-jump pattern out. From the previous section you gain a lot of momentum going forward. You kill this added speed with these circles, and since coming off of that players will be too hyped out to notice the slow down in play. Spacing it out would provide for smoother play and transition easier in to the next part
3. 01:02:090 (1) - Bring the first anchor out to make the beginning of the slider path more visible to the player. This will make it less cramped in play
4. 01:28:792 (2) - There is a lot of nice sounds to map out here in the music! Maybe replace this slider and try this rhythm out. Should bring a nice end and climax to this exciting section to the song
   

1. 00:08:294 - add a circle here to match the rhythm and maintain consistency with 00:09:315 (1,2,3) -
2. 00:34:760 - add a circle here. I thought 00:34:917 (6) - was the sound at this point and had a hard time reading it. This should make it easier to transition to that quicker pattern that followed
3. 00:37:273 - ^
4. 01:07:116 (1) - I really love the section starting here. All the streams played well and the hitsounds sounded great! Nice job here, I am impressed
5. 01:08:373 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe opt for a 1/2 anti-jump pattern here? The slider ends makes it a bit loud and doesn't have a nice effect with the music

1. 00:11:200 (11200|2,11200|1) - I suggest spreading these two out. The flow from the last pattern going forward will provide for smoother play. It will also be easier on the newer players, since having to press the two buttons dead in the center is a bit harder than the outside two coming forward
2. 00:18:111 (18111|1,18111|2) - ^
3. 00:33:190 (33190|2,33190|1) - ^
4. 00:34:760 (34760|0,34917|0) - Having quick bursts in succession in the same column is very tiring and harder to play. I suggest you move 00:34:917 (34917|0) - over 1 so that it flows better in to the next pattern. It also fits nicely with the music and plays a bit better and doesn't tire the player as much
5. 00:37:273 (37273|3,37430|3) - ^
6. 00:37:273 (37273|3,37430|3,71671|1,71828|2,71985|2,72143|3) - I think this would flow way better if you tried something like this
   
   SPOILER

   
   Fits well with the music too
7. 01:17:169 (77169|1,77169|2) - I would spread these two out for the same reason as before. Also having 01:17:169 (77169|2,77326|2) - in the same column makes it harder for players to hit the latter

Lust wrote:

[General]

1. Move it to pending since you are actively looking for mods and stuff no, it isn't finished. i'm awaiting an insane guest diff
2. There is no kiai time anywhere on your diffs, an exciting song like this should have it IMO it's a personal preference. also, i feel kiai time distracts players.

[Basic]
Can't really point out much in a diff like this

1. 00:53:294 (1) - Shorten this slider to 00:54:551 - and add a spinner starting 00:54:865 - here and end it 00:56:436 - here to fill in the gap and keep newer players engaged? Should be enough time proceeding to and from the newly placed spinner for beginners to react to. If you aren't going to do this at least remove the green lines no. i purposely left the spinner out due to the fact that no matter how i place it, it will either be too short or won't allow the player enough time to recover for the slider directly after it. also, i won't remove the green lines since it isn't noticeable while playing.
2. 01:00:834 (3,1) - Maybe make this a perfect blanket or something. Use 1's approach circle to help you out with this
3. 01:07:116 - Remove some of the green lines here since they aren't really needed no for same reason

[Easy]

1. 00:09:944 (2,1) - Space out 1 from 2. 1's location seems a bit forced and it isn't consistent with the rest of the spacing you have laid out in the rest of the diff
2. 00:11:828 (2) - Bring the first anchor down a bit, so players can be more aware of the parallel between this and 00:13:713 (1) -
3. 00:38:216 (1) - This slider shape seems a bit forced and doesn't really conform to the style that persists throughout this diff. Maybe change it to a slider shape similar to 00:25:650 (1) -
4. 00:28:163 (1,2) - Maybe move 2 a little in closer to 1. The spacing here is a bit large in comparison to patterns like 00:23:137 (1,2) - they are exactly the same spacing, if not off by a pixel or two
5. 00:29:420 (2,1) - Check the spacing here, 1 is shoved a little bit close to 2. You can maintain the parallel pattern here easily if you just move 1 over a bit, 340:326 works out fine
6. 00:35:703 (1,2) - Check the spacing here, 2 is shoved in a bit too close to 1
7. 00:41:357 (2,3) - I would be careful with a change in rhythm like this. Newer players would not be able to pick up this right away (even i messed up here because I was so accustomed to the current rhythm scheme). To alleviate this, I found that combining 00:40:729 (1,2) - in to one slider had enough momentum for me to be aware of the change in rhythm that was coming up.
8. 00:40:729 (1,2) - Check the spacing between these two objects. Usually you would have 1.2x ds, but here its a little noticeable that the spacing isn't consistent
9. 00:45:755 (1) - Remove this NC. The music doesn't really change much here and the HP drain isn't high enough to warrant a new combo i prefer this. also, it follows my combo patterns
10. 00:50:781 (1) - ^ ^
11. 00:55:101 (1) - I would move this spinner to 00:55:179 - to give enough time for newer players to react and respond to it
12. 01:29:734 (1,2) - Check the spacing here, 2 is shoved a bit too close to 1 this is the same distance spacing i have been using
13. 01:39:315 - Remove some of the green lines starting here, since they aren't really used for anything no for same reason
14. 01:42:300 (1) - Remove NC for the same reason as 00:45:755 (1) - no for same reason
15. 01:47:326 (1) - ^ ^

[Normal]
Lovely normal diff

1. 00:20:624 (1,2,3) - Make sure the spacing is even between these objects. There looks like there is a jump from 2 to 3 which could throw off a player it is
2. 00:30:048 (2,1) - I would curve 2 a bit more, so the added swing will have it flow more smoothly in to 1 and the following pattern. Be sure to maintain a perfect blanket while doing so to keep it neat no, i want to keep (2) uniform with the slider before it.
3. 00:44:184 (2) - I would start this slider and the sliders like this on 00:44:341 - (the red tick following) since this is the most prominent noise. This will make it easier for players to pick up the rhythm and respond to it i'm not following the piano with that slider. i'm following the "vibration" sound in the background. also, i want to keep the rhythm as simple as possible.
4. 01:40:729 (2) - ^ same for this section ^

[Hard]

1. 00:04:289 (1) - The curve at the end of this slider is a bit too harsh. I suggest you smoothen out or bring the slider end further away from the slider body to make the play a bit nicer similar to 00:09:315 (1) - i made it like this to follow the beats in the music.
2. 00:33:190 (1,2,3) - I would space this anti-jump pattern out. From the previous section you gain a lot of momentum going forward. You kill this added speed with these circles, and since coming off of that players will be too hyped out to notice the slow down in play. Spacing it out would provide for smoother play and transition easier in to the next part i made the change in pace/spacing drastic because the change in the music was drastic as well. i think this should be pretty easy to read too
3. 01:02:090 (1) - Bring the first anchor out to make the beginning of the slider path more visible to the player. This will make it less cramped in play
4. 01:28:792 (2) - There is a lot of nice sounds to map out here in the music! Maybe replace this slider and try this rhythm out. Should bring a nice end and climax to this exciting section to the song i did something else.
   

[NM]
Nice! Played really well for the most part

1. 00:11:200 (11200|2,11200|1) - I suggest spreading these two out. The flow from the last pattern going forward will provide for smoother play. It will also be easier on the newer players, since having to press the two buttons dead in the center is a bit harder than the outside two coming forward
2. 00:18:111 (18111|1,18111|2) - ^ no for this one. i want to keep them on the inner two keys to match 00:18:425 (18425|2,18739|1,19054|2) -
3. 00:33:190 (33190|2,33190|1) - ^ no. it matches the following pattern i use
4. 00:34:760 (34760|0,34917|0) - Having quick bursts in succession in the same column is very tiring and harder to play. I suggest you move 00:34:917 (34917|0) - over 1 so that it flows better in to the next pattern. It also fits nicely with the music and plays a bit better and doesn't tire the player as much
5. 00:37:273 (37273|3,37430|3) - ^
6. 00:37:273 (37273|3,37430|3,71671|1,71828|2,71985|2,72143|3) - I think this would flow way better if you tried something like this i prefer what i've done better.
   
   SPOILER

   
   Fits well with the music too
7. 01:17:169 (77169|1,77169|2) - I would spread these two out for the same reason as before. Also having 01:17:169 (77169|2,77326|2) - in the same column makes it harder for players to hit the latter this is the same exact pattern i used in the beginning of the song, so i'm going to keep it for consistency.

Lust wrote:

[yongtw's Hyper]

1. 00:08:294 - add a circle here to match the rhythm and maintain consistency with 00:09:315 (1,2,3) - maybe not, two reasons 1) the sliders form a jump here 2) this particular portion of the music occurs only once throughout the song so I guess a simple 'difficulty progression' is okay lol
2. 00:34:760 - add a circle here. I thought 00:34:917 (6) - was the sound at this point and had a hard time reading it. This should make it easier to transition to that quicker pattern that followed I nudged the first short slider closer to (5)/(6) so it's easier to make the transition
3. 00:37:273 - ^ dunno, I feel adding the circle actually makes it harder :/
4. 01:07:116 (1) - I really love the section starting here. All the streams played well and the hitsounds sounded great! Nice job here, I am impressed thanks!
5. 01:08:373 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe opt for a 1/2 anti-jump pattern here? The slider ends makes it a bit loud and doesn't have a nice effect with the music quite right here, fixed!

Sirade wrote:

NM
00:00:677 (677|2) - (?!) Move this to column 4 and add a note with clap hitsound on column 1.

01:17:326 (77326|2) - (?!) Move this to column 4 and add a note with clap hitsound on column 1, well... Copied from above, lol.

01:34:603 - (?) Add a note here, column 2 looks the best.

Otaku-kun123 wrote:

[Another]

00:05:232 (3) - Delete.
00:05:389 (4) - Delete.
00:05:232 - Put a circle to 00:05:310 - , and reverse it, so it sounds like a triple.
00:10:729 - Put a circle on the start of this 00:11:043 (1) - circle.
00:35:232 (1) - Delete.
00:35:389 (2) - Delete.
00:35:232 - Put a slider to 00:35:310 - and reverse it one time.
01:07:273 - Put a circle on 01:07:430 (3) -
01:07:588 (4) - Put a circle on 01:07:745 (1) -
01:08:530 (2) - Put a circle on 01:08:687 (3) -
01:08:844 - Put a circle on 01:09:001 (1) -
01:19:525 (2) - Move it the end of this 01:19:996 (2) - slider.

[Extra]

00:06:174 (1) - Distance snaping on 0,6
00:06:410 (2,3) - Distance snaping on 0,6
00:15:834 (3,4) - Distance Snaping on 1,0
00:16:462 (8,9) - Distance Snaping on 1,0
00:32:326 (4,5,6,1) - Distance Snaping on 1,0

End Comment:

Such a hard song, i hope the pro players can pass this ^^

Sirade wrote:

LeiN's MX
Looks good to me.
But quite unsure about this, just unsure, 00:02:718 (2718|3) - (???) Well... Not sure which one is better between 1/8 hold note or a normal note. Sampling

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

[LeiN-'s HD]
00:41:985 (41985|1,42300|1,42614|1) - No single sound, suggest change to LN

[LeiN-'s MX]
00:06:017 (6017|0) - Suggest move to column 4 since it is different sound with 00:06:095 - No
00:33:033 - Add a LN here and ends 00:32:915 - No
00:33:190 (33190|2) - normal note instead of LN
00:55:022 (55022|3) - Why LN for this note my taste
01:51:567 (111567|3) - ^

DE-CADE wrote:

[HD]

00:07:588 - I though this one is like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1971872 No

00:08:844 (8844|0,8844|1,9158|1,9158|0) - Why not move it to 34, to make it
easier than the jacks No

00:21:252 - Add to 1 No

00:38:216 - Add Note
00:40:729 - ^

01:12:143 (72143|3,72143|2) - I think ths one should be triple not these 01:12:300 (72300|1,72300|0,72300|3,72614|1,72614|3,72614|0) Mm....yes maybe.. but No. my taste. consider it again if it pointed out again

01:13:556 (73556|2,73870|2) - Same reason, Delete and then 01:13:556 (73556|3,73870|3) - Move this to col 3