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Ayumi Hamasaki - Labyrinth

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AngelHoney
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年3月8日 一 at 20:00:49

Artist: Ayumi Hamasaki
Title: Labyrinth
Tags: Breeze
BPM: 156
Filesize: 3959kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Breeze's Hard (4.4 stars, 155 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 288 notes)
  3. Normal (2.89 stars, 107 notes)
Download: Ayumi Hamasaki - Labyrinth
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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07th Expansion - liberatedliberater

Ayumi Hamasaki - Labyrinth

Thanks for Breeze 's diff
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
:) :)
v2b
你这是好几首BGM的串烧啊...
而且串的很不连贯
你要是需要名字的话我一个个给你找
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
我只要一個整體名稱就行了>w<
(畢竟我沒准備做多個難度>_>
ZHAO YU
……好难……要我玩的话是死个透了……XP不过支持下……但感觉AH酱对于有些节奏的长短把我还不太好(只是说说而已)XP
maal
Hai.


00:54:211 (1,2,1,2) Follow the music, make the hitsounds lower.
01:57:640 (1) Instead of that, what about making a looong slow slider?
02:24:854 Warning sign of 2x bpm maybe?
03:07:925 (1) Hitsound?
03:08:354 (4) ^ Start of slider
03:08:782 (5) ^ End of slider
03:54:425 (15) New combo?
03:55:497 (1,2,3) Spacing? what are those jumps? o.o
05:52:282 Warning again?

I guess that's it :D, Nice beatmap, get this one approved! Starred :D
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

emaal wrote:

Hai.


00:54:211 (1,2,1,2) Follow the music, make the hitsounds lower.fixed
01:57:640 (1) Instead of that, what about making a looong slow slider? :o :o
02:24:854 Warning sign of 2x bpm maybe? ill try to fix it
03:07:925 (1) Hitsound? fixed
03:08:354 (4) ^ Start of slider :o
03:08:782 (5) ^ End of slider :o
03:54:425 (15) New combo? :o
03:55:497 (1,2,3) Spacing? what are those jumps? o.o :o
05:52:282 Warning again? ill try to fix it

I guess that's it :D, Nice beatmap, get this one approved! Starred :D
Thank you very much :3
Cyril Scarlet
1000 note XD
v2b
Artist:zts
Title:liberatedliberater (看情况自己改大小写和空格吧)
另外offset似乎应该-15
Beuchi
Hi hi!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P

Let's go!!

~General~
- I would decrease Overall Difficulty a bit, there are places where Auto loses half of the lifebar oxo.
- Add a Source?
- 2nd combocolour is a bit hard to read sometimes, change it?
- Omg green sea of timing sections xDD

~Feast~
00:34:068 (1,1) - Weeeeelll... I'm not so sure about ninja spinners on approved maps, but those are a really evil and sudden combo breakers xDD
02:18:211 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think it would look better if there's a bit more of spacing between those triples~
02:42:640 (2,3) - Stack them? They look a bit ugly oxo
02:43:497 (2,3) - ^
02:44:354 (2,1) - ^
02:44:568 (1,2,3,4) - I'd rather make this a whole 1/8 stream, those sliders look like 1/4's when I played it oxo
03:06:318 (x) - Add a Break here :3
03:26:354 (3) - I actually thought that this sliders went to the other direction when I played it... Make it a bit more visible?
03:53:782 (10) - New Combo.
04:01:497 (1,1) - Same as the other two spinners... So sudden @A@
04:59:354 (3) - Make it a circle?
04:59:782 (3) - ^
05:55:497 (4) - Finish it on red tick, it sounds better :3

Cool map and song, have a *star* ^w^
LKs
awesome lol
我就看下面的时间指针艰难的穿过绿线群。。
试了一下水果

Topic Starter
AngelHoney
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Ex Boy
……太长了……近5200W的总分……会变成app图的哟,挑个1000W左右的地方cut掉吧
关于spinners,一年前,那种超短的spinner还是让用的,不过现在已经不允许了,尽管很衬,但是,不行。可以考虑改成slider。
你的note下的很棒,节奏啊,排列啊,都很有意思。音效也很赞。
整体来说是个非常不错的map,继续加油!
LKs

Ex Boy wrote:

……太长了……近5200W的总分……会变成app图的哟,挑个1000W左右的地方cut掉吧
就是想做成app的吧?
Kytoxid
The following timing sections are unnecessary : (yes, I took the time to look through all of them)

03:09:734 -
03:10:270 -
03:10:805 -
03:11:127 -
03:11:448 -
05:58:377 -

Falala~

00:26:342 (1,1) - Unfortunately, just because it's approved doesn't mean this is allowed. :(
01:14:128 (1,2,3) - Very unexpected.
02:19:698 (4) - Does not follow the music; listen at 25%.
02:23:127 (4) - ^
02:26:555 (4,5,6,7,8) - A bit mean, and doesn't follow music.
02:27:627 (1,2,1,2) - Curve them nicer?
02:30:091 (3,4,5,6) - Follow music.
02:33:412 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:35:984 (3,2,1,2,3) - ^
02:47:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ouch. This isn't even playable..
03:53:770 (1,1) - Same as before.

Very concerned about the spaced streams; although they're not unapproveable, but they're not very fun either, and seem just like added difficulty; especially the ones that aren't on a smooth path. Cool map in general though, starred!
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
All fixed~ :) :)
Vanmonky
As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Why don't you custom the clap hitsound instead of changing them to normal hitsound using timing point?
2. Feels like (insomnia, haaaa~♪, no lol) the offset is later or early.
3. I don't think this map will be success if approved. Make another diff or ask someone to make guest diff for your map. Do collab map! Sorry, no offense. I just say what I think.
4. Add warning SB for every 2x time.
5. Some jumps are extreme.
6. Some sections are overmapped.
7. I hate spacing change suddenly.

[Feast]
00:17:127 (2) - Change this to normal hitsound.
00:20:555 (2) - ^
00:23:985 (2) - ^
01:49:698 - Add note here.
03:12:841 (3,4) - I don't like the spacing of them.
05:47:413 (3) - Delete this slider.
05:50:556 (1) - Decrease one repeat.
05:54:270 (5,6) - Delete these notes.
06:56:770 (1) - I don't like the spacing.
06:56:984 (2,1) - There are two note in the same time. Delete one.
07:08:770 (1) - Add finish.
Star.
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
:) :)
DJPop
Artist: zts

~Feast~
01:00:413 (9,10,11) - intended?
01:43:056 (1,2,3,4) - wrong claps input
01:49:591 - unused timing section
04:51:841 (1) - remove new combo
06:43:805 (2) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)


+Star
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
All fixed~

:) :)
soulfear
+STAR
NatsumeRin
占位留名先^_^~

Edit:
00:59:984 (6,7,...11) 建议连用两个折返两次的1/6 slier~
01:03:841 (2,3,4) 觉得要么叠起来要么就放的能看出三个吧= =。。01:07:270同
01:06:413 (4,5) 换成一个折返一次的1/6slider
01:13:698 (1,2,3,1,2,3) 建议考虑1/6
后面倒是有不少4连6分音建议改一些成slider+circle。。。当然可能是我低估了触手们。。。
03:04:627 (2) 建议删掉

没什么可说的了。。。做的真漂亮~= =
Ex Boy
如果目指APP的话就没办法了呢,刚刚好~ XD
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
(づ ̄3 ̄)づ
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

NatsumeRin wrote:

占位留名先^_^~

Edit:
00:59:984 (6,7,...11) 建议连用两个折返两次的1/6 slier~
01:03:841 (2,3,4) 觉得要么叠起来要么就放的能看出三个吧= =。。01:07:270同
01:06:413 (4,5) 换成一个折返一次的1/6slider
01:13:698 (1,2,3,1,2,3) 建议考虑1/6
后面倒是有不少4连6分音建议改一些成slider+circle。。。当然可能是我低估了触手们。。。
03:04:627 (2) 建议删掉 我找不到這個note... o(;△;)o

没什么可说的了。。。做的真漂亮~= =
其他的稍微改了下

至於1/6...很多沒改是怕太突然...
tsuka
00:37:913 (1,2) - 这里开始突然变化的节奏是怎么回事 我乐感很差看不出来 并且重复的太多了

01:14:128 (1,2,3) - 01:07:270 (2,3,4) - 老实说我不喜欢类似的这种连打 很恶心

04:57:841 (2,5,8,11) - 啊 newcombo

00:28:698 (11,20) - ^

老实说没必要那么多绿线 如果是为了normal hit的话完全可以自定义音效
Topic Starter
AngelHoney

tsukamaete wrote:

00:37:913 (1,2) - 这里开始突然变化的节奏是怎么回事 我乐感很差看不出来 并且重复的太多了

01:14:128 (1,2,3) - 01:07:270 (2,3,4) - 老实说我不喜欢类似的这种连打 很恶心 其實是4連..我就怕太噁心了..才3連了..= =

04:57:841 (2,5,8,11) - 啊 newcombo

00:28:698 (11,20) - ^ 我沒找到...;_;

老实说没必要那么多绿线 如果是为了normal hit的话完全可以自定义音效 其實除了nor的哨子聲..其他聲都有加進去..所以感覺會比較麻煩...而且一開始1分鐘 就先嘗試各種綠線..感覺還行..所以覺得 就這麼做下去了.
Thanks so much~ :) :)
Hiiragi_kagami_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
就是因為一開始做得太簡單了..(對於APP

所以才難點 D:
Lisa
:P I love this map<3 Star
DJPop
Time Signature: 3/4


~Normal~
00:24:387 (2) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)

~Insane~
00:13:810 (4) - move up & right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:30:733 (3) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
00:43:617 (11) - move up 1 grid (Lv2) OR 00:43:810 (12) - move down 1 grid (Lv2)
00:50:156 (9) - new combo
00:59:387 (9) - ^
01:08:617 (9) - ^
01:21:887 (6,7) - move right 1 grid (Lv2)
01:34:098 (1) - silence it


When I starred this song!? o_o"


EDIT:
PUBBLE!
subarasikibuta
:)
yaya
irc moded
bubble
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
Thanks yaya :3
Andrea
[Overall]

Change the black colour to another one or just remove it. It confuse a lot on some parts, especially on Insane difficulty.

All the difficulties are okay, but I think you should map an Hard too, because this is a relaxing song and it's better to have a relaxing hard here. <3

Insane anyway is too crazy and jumpy for a relaxing song like this, IMHO.
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
Fixed :3

and i will add Hard diff (Breeze) XD
Breeze
Andrea
Little IRC Modding.

Bubbled~
abalee
Ranked...
Breeze
真快o.o
Cyril Scarlet
☆彡(ノ^^)ノCongratulationsヘ(^^ヘ)☆彡
Shulin
I was expecting an ayu song...

Secret should be in tags since its from that album
Topic Starter
AngelHoney
thanks XD

@shulin : yeah ...i forgot ..lol
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