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AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-01-19T22:28:27+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年3月8日一 at 20:00:49

Artist: Ayumi Hamasaki
Title: Labyrinth
Tags: Breeze
BPM: 156
Filesize: 3959kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:

Breeze's Hard (4.4 stars, 155 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 288 notes)
Normal (2.89 stars, 107 notes)

Download: Ayumi Hamasaki - Labyrinth
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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~~07th Expansion - liberatedliberater~~

Ayumi Hamasaki - Labyrinth

Thanks for Breeze 's diff

Last edited by AngelHoney 2010-03-08T12:03:30+00:00, edited 65 times in total.

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-01-19T22:29:10+00:00

v2b

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v2b 2010-01-30T14:06:10+00:00

你这是好几首BGM的串烧啊...
而且串的很不连贯
你要是需要名字的话我一个个给你找

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-02-02T06:40:30+00:00

我只要一個整體名稱就行了>w<
(畢竟我沒准備做多個難度>_>

ZHAO YU

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ZHAO YU 2010-02-03T12:26:53+00:00

……好难……要我玩的话是死个透了……XP不过支持下……但感觉AH酱对于有些节奏的长短把我还不太好（只是说说而已）XP

maal

maal 2010-02-03T17:10:31+00:00

Hai.

00:54:211 (1,2,1,2) Follow the music, make the hitsounds lower.
01:57:640 (1) Instead of that, what about making a looong slow slider?
02:24:854 Warning sign of 2x bpm maybe?
03:07:925 (1) Hitsound?
03:08:354 (4) ^ Start of slider
03:08:782 (5) ^ End of slider
03:54:425 (15) New combo?
03:55:497 (1,2,3) Spacing? what are those jumps? o.o
05:52:282 Warning again?

I guess that's it

, Nice beatmap, get this one approved! Starred

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-02-03T17:25:45+00:00

emaal wrote:
Hai.

00:54:211 (1,2,1,2) Follow the music, make the hitsounds lower.fixed
01:57:640 (1) Instead of that, what about making a looong slow slider?
02:24:854 Warning sign of 2x bpm maybe? ill try to fix it
03:07:925 (1) Hitsound? fixed
03:08:354 (4) ^ Start of slider
03:08:782 (5) ^ End of slider
03:54:425 (15) New combo?
03:55:497 (1,2,3) Spacing? what are those jumps? o.o
05:52:282 Warning again? ill try to fix it

I guess that's it , Nice beatmap, get this one approved! Starred

Thank you very much :3

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-02-03T18:05:15+00:00

1000 note XD

v2b

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v2b 2010-02-04T06:28:48+00:00

Artist:zts
Title:liberatedliberater (看情况自己改大小写和空格吧)
另外offset似乎应该-15

Beuchi

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Beuchi 2010-02-04T06:48:40+00:00

Hi hi!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me

Let's go!!

~General~
- I would decrease Overall Difficulty a bit, there are places where Auto loses half of the lifebar oxo.
- Add a Source?
- 2nd combocolour is a bit hard to read sometimes, change it?
- Omg green sea of timing sections xDD

~Feast~
00:34:068 (1,1) - Weeeeelll... I'm not so sure about ninja spinners on approved maps, but those are a really evil and sudden combo breakers xDD
02:18:211 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think it would look better if there's a bit more of spacing between those triples~
02:42:640 (2,3) - Stack them? They look a bit ugly oxo
02:43:497 (2,3) - ^
02:44:354 (2,1) - ^
02:44:568 (1,2,3,4) - I'd rather make this a whole 1/8 stream, those sliders look like 1/4's when I played it oxo
03:06:318 (x) - Add a Break here :3
03:26:354 (3) - I actually thought that this sliders went to the other direction when I played it... Make it a bit more visible?
03:53:782 (10) - New Combo.
04:01:497 (1,1) - Same as the other two spinners... So sudden @A@
04:59:354 (3) - Make it a circle?
04:59:782 (3) - ^
05:55:497 (4) - Finish it on red tick, it sounds better :3

Cool map and song, have a *star* ^w^

LKs

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LKs 2010-02-04T15:28:50+00:00

awesome lol
我就看下面的时间指针艰难的穿过绿线群。。
试了一下水果

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-02-04T17:15:32+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Ex Boy

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Ex Boy 2010-02-05T11:09:28+00:00

……太长了……近5200W的总分……会变成app图的哟，挑个1000W左右的地方cut掉吧
关于spinners，一年前，那种超短的spinner还是让用的，不过现在已经不允许了，尽管很衬，但是，不行。可以考虑改成slider。
你的note下的很棒，节奏啊，排列啊，都很有意思。音效也很赞。
整体来说是个非常不错的map，继续加油！

LKs

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LKs 2010-02-05T12:06:07+00:00

Ex Boy wrote:
……太长了……近5200W的总分……会变成app图的哟，挑个1000W左右的地方cut掉吧

就是想做成app的吧？

Kytoxid

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Kytoxid 2010-02-06T06:11:58+00:00

The following timing sections are unnecessary : (yes, I took the time to look through all of them)

03:09:734 -
03:10:270 -
03:10:805 -
03:11:127 -
03:11:448 -
05:58:377 -

Falala~

00:26:342 (1,1) - Unfortunately, just because it's approved doesn't mean this is allowed.

01:14:128 (1,2,3) - Very unexpected.
02:19:698 (4) - Does not follow the music; listen at 25%.
02:23:127 (4) - ^
02:26:555 (4,5,6,7,8) - A bit mean, and doesn't follow music.
02:27:627 (1,2,1,2) - Curve them nicer?
02:30:091 (3,4,5,6) - Follow music.
02:33:412 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:35:984 (3,2,1,2,3) - ^
02:47:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ouch. This isn't even playable..
03:53:770 (1,1) - Same as before.

Very concerned about the spaced streams; although they're not unapproveable, but they're not very fun either, and seem just like added difficulty; especially the ones that aren't on a smooth path. Cool map in general though, starred!

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-02-07T03:39:51+00:00

All fixed~

Last edited by AngelHoney 2010-04-29T22:51:34+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Vanmonky

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Vanmonky 2010-02-07T12:40:11+00:00

As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Why don't you custom the clap hitsound instead of changing them to normal hitsound using timing point?
2. Feels like (insomnia, haaaa~♪, no lol) the offset is later or early.
3. I don't think this map will be success if approved. Make another diff or ask someone to make guest diff for your map. Do collab map! Sorry, no offense. I just say what I think.
4. Add warning SB for every 2x time.
5. Some jumps are extreme.
6. Some sections are overmapped.
7. I hate spacing change suddenly.

[Feast]
00:17:127 (2) - Change this to normal hitsound.
00:20:555 (2) - ^
00:23:985 (2) - ^
01:49:698 - Add note here.
03:12:841 (3,4) - I don't like the spacing of them.
05:47:413 (3) - Delete this slider.
05:50:556 (1) - Decrease one repeat.
05:54:270 (5,6) - Delete these notes.
06:56:770 (1) - I don't like the spacing.
06:56:984 (2,1) - There are two note in the same time. Delete one.
07:08:770 (1) - Add finish.

Star.

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-02-08T05:12:38+00:00

DJPop

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DJPop 2010-02-08T08:52:37+00:00

Artist: zts

~Feast~
01:00:413 (9,10,11) - intended?
01:43:056 (1,2,3,4) - wrong claps input
01:49:591 - unused timing section
04:51:841 (1) - remove new combo
06:43:805 (2) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)

+Star

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-02-08T09:02:47+00:00

All fixed~

soulfear

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soulfear 2010-02-08T18:14:51+00:00

+STAR

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2010-02-09T07:54:25+00:00

占位留名先^_^~

Edit:
00:59:984 (6,7,...11) 建议连用两个折返两次的1/6 slier~
01:03:841 (2,3,4) 觉得要么叠起来要么就放的能看出三个吧= =。。01:07:270同
01:06:413 (4,5) 换成一个折返一次的1/6slider
01:13:698 (1,2,3,1,2,3) 建议考虑1/6
后面倒是有不少4连6分音建议改一些成slider+circle。。。当然可能是我低估了触手们。。。
03:04:627 (2) 建议删掉

没什么可说的了。。。做的真漂亮~= =

Ex Boy

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Ex Boy 2010-02-10T05:10:32+00:00

如果目指APP的话就没办法了呢，刚刚好~ XD

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-02-10T08:30:08+00:00

(づ￣3￣)づ

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-02-10T09:16:09+00:00

NatsumeRin wrote:
占位留名先^_^~

Edit:
00:59:984 (6,7,...11) 建议连用两个折返两次的1/6 slier~
01:03:841 (2,3,4) 觉得要么叠起来要么就放的能看出三个吧= =。。01:07:270同
01:06:413 (4,5) 换成一个折返一次的1/6slider
01:13:698 (1,2,3,1,2,3) 建议考虑1/6
后面倒是有不少4连6分音建议改一些成slider+circle。。。当然可能是我低估了触手们。。。
03:04:627 (2) 建议删掉我找不到這個note... o(；△；)o

没什么可说的了。。。做的真漂亮~= =

其他的稍微改了下

至於1/6...很多沒改是怕太突然...

tsuka

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tsuka 2010-02-12T10:28:44+00:00

00:37:913 (1,2) - 这里开始突然变化的节奏是怎么回事我乐感很差看不出来并且重复的太多了

01:14:128 (1,2,3) - 01:07:270 (2,3,4) - 老实说我不喜欢类似的这种连打很恶心

04:57:841 (2,5,8,11) - 啊 newcombo

00:28:698 (11,20) - ^

老实说没必要那么多绿线如果是为了normal hit的话完全可以自定义音效

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-02-12T11:50:25+00:00

tsukamaete wrote:
00:37:913 (1,2) - 这里开始突然变化的节奏是怎么回事我乐感很差看不出来并且重复的太多了嗯

01:14:128 (1,2,3) - 01:07:270 (2,3,4) - 老实说我不喜欢类似的这种连打很恶心其實是4連..我就怕太噁心了..才3連了..= =

04:57:841 (2,5,8,11) - 啊 newcombo 嗯

00:28:698 (11,20) - ^ 我沒找到...;_;

老实说没必要那么多绿线如果是为了normal hit的话完全可以自定义音效其實除了nor的哨子聲..其他聲都有加進去..所以感覺會比較麻煩...而且一開始1分鐘就先嘗試各種綠線..感覺還行..所以覺得就這麼做下去了.

Thanks so much~

Hiiragi_kagami_old

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Hiiragi_kagami_old 2010-02-19T13:46:05+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-02-21T03:07:29+00:00

就是因為一開始做得太簡單了..(對於APP

所以才難點 D:

Lisa

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Lisa 2010-03-04T08:57:58+00:00

I love this map<3 Star

DJPop

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Here since the beginning

DJPop 2010-03-04T10:45:59+00:00

Time Signature: 3/4

~Normal~
00:24:387 (2) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)

~Insane~
00:13:810 (4) - move up & right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:30:733 (3) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
00:43:617 (11) - move up 1 grid (Lv2) OR 00:43:810 (12) - move down 1 grid (Lv2)
00:50:156 (9) - new combo
00:59:387 (9) - ^
01:08:617 (9) - ^
01:21:887 (6,7) - move right 1 grid (Lv2)
01:34:098 (1) - silence it

When I starred this song!? o_o"

EDIT:
PUBBLE!

subarasikibuta

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subarasikibuta 2010-03-04T17:37:05+00:00

yaya

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yaya 2010-03-05T19:29:14+00:00

irc moded
bubble

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-03-05T19:39:04+00:00

Thanks yaya :3

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-03-05T22:49:28+00:00

[Overall]

Change the black colour to another one or just remove it. It confuse a lot on some parts, especially on Insane difficulty.

All the difficulties are okay, but I think you should map an Hard too, because this is a relaxing song and it's better to have a relaxing hard here. <3

Insane anyway is too crazy and jumpy for a relaxing song like this, IMHO.

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-03-07T08:29:44+00:00

Fixed :3

and i will add Hard diff (Breeze) XD

Breeze

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Breeze 2010-03-08T07:11:49+00:00

finished

Download: Ayumi Hamasaki - Labyrinth (AngelHoney) [Breeze's Hard].osu