emaal wrote:

Let this be the last one.

if you make a guest diff on a map... you have to be responsible of it. Know you r going to let hybrid to take care off is something else is wrong. If you can't handle the hard thing about modding-fixing, than back off from mapping.
omg

Ultimate wrote:

Eeh guys, me again ^^

I adjusted the second offset offset a little:

offset 2: 24.635

please let another MAT take a look @ this.
It seems ok to me, but i'm not sure if all of Emaal's spacing is 100% allowed.
i'm sorry for not being able to pubble this guys.
Keep on asking!

Lizbeth wrote:

emaal's Hard
you mess up something after fixing
03:15:794 (1,2,3) - should have the same distance between each other.

I have mod this several times, and still cant give you a proto-bubble. Here's what we gonna do to guarantee this map is flawless. Ask some other MAT to mod it, to get other opinions. Then I can recheck it again. Remember if you are going to fix something, check the entire map again, so nothing is mess up.

good luck!

Thanks, Ultimate and Lizbeth. I'll ask another MAT to check this.

Lizbeth wrote:

emaal wrote:

Let this be the last one.

if you make a guest diff on a map... you have to be responsible of it. Know you r going to let hybrid to take care off is something else is wrong. If you can't handle the hard thing about modding-fixing, than back off from mapping.
omg

Please, I don't want to start an argument, seriously now. I know that when you're mapping you have the responsibillaty of taking care for the beatmap/diff or whatever. I've tried this before and I didn't mean it like you got it. I meant it like that I thought it was finished, but no, it wasn't.

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • Remove countdown

[Easy] (this is a normal imo)

• • 00:35:806 (1) - Delete this circle 00:39:527 (1) and end this spinner here 00:39:517 (white tick)
  • 00:43:015 (1) - Delete this circle 00:46:968 (1) and end this spinner here 00:46:968 (white tick)
  • 01:49:987 (1) - Delete this circle 01:53:940 (1) and end this spinner here 01:53:940 (white tick)

[Normal]

• • 00:35:806 (1) - Delete this circle 00:39:527 (1) and end this spinner here 00:39:517 (white tick)
  • 01:05:572 (1) - End this spinner here 01:09:282 (white tick)

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • Remove countdown

[Easy] (this is a normal imo) Now its easy for real.

• • 00:35:806 (1) - Delete this circle 00:39:527 (1) and end this spinner here 00:39:517 (white tick)
  • 00:43:015 (1) - Delete this circle 00:46:968 (1) and end this spinner here 00:46:968 (white tick)
  • 01:49:987 (1) - Delete this circle 01:53:940 (1) and end this spinner here 01:53:940 (white tick)

All done.

[Normal]

• • 00:35:806 (1) - Delete this circle 00:39:527 (1) and end this spinner here 00:39:517 (white tick)
  • 01:05:572 (1) - End this spinner here 01:09:282 (white tick)

All done.

Thanks again, xxheroxx.

General:

-- Delete .osb file, full submit.

Easy:

-- Same comments about the volume here.
-- RESNAP.

00:18:113 (2) - Clap
00:54:632 - 01:13:003 -- 20 second break... okay, but this difficulty is already shorter than the rest. Map earlier?
01:19:524 (3,4) - Use a slider here.

Normal:

-- Lower hitsound volume slightly. Too loud, especially at the begging.

01:49:977 (1,2,3,4,5) - Where are the claps?
02:19:974 (5) - New combo.
02:23:462 (1) - Remove new combo.

Good.

emaal's Hard:

-- First offset is different to the others.
-- RESNAP.
-- Hitsound volume is too loud.
-- The overlaps on this difficulty don't look or play good... (opinion)
-- Why is the drain and OA turned up so high? -1 on both. (Especially OA imo it makes the map look better...)

00:25:100 (1,2,3) - Confusing overlap.
00:29:518 (2,3) - Looks bad, especially 3 since it hidden =.="
01:15:793 (11) - End is hidden... I'm presuming that was intentional.
01:33:466 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Oh god... why have everything so clustered?
01:42:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - These streams are out of sync with the rest of the difficulty really... returning sliders would probably be better imo.
01:46:372 (16,1) - Spacing.
01:55:790 (5) - New combo.
01:56:488 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:29:625 (8) - Move to white tick (02:29:741)
02:30:555 (10) - ^ (02:30:671)
02:57:181 (2) - New combo.
02:59:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Ehh... streams kinda out of sync etc.
03:06:250 (x) - Note?
03:06:482 (x) - ^
03:06:947 (2,3,4) - Rhythm isn't intuitive.


Teara's Insane:

-- Everything is unsnapped ~ make sure to resnap everything.
-- The spacing takes some getting used to.
-- Lots of new combo's here, a lot of them unnecessary imo.

00:39:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This was awkward to play imo, the triples kind of throw off the rhythm of the streams... idk just awkward =/ [The rhythm at 00:46:968 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - plays much better]
01:01:861 (1) - Clap end.
01:03:721 (1) - ^
01:20:909 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:08:822 (1,1) - Clap the ends.
02:18:812 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:19:509 (1) - ^
02:19:974 (2) - New combo here instead?
03:04:167 (7,1) - Spacing?
03:23:225 (1,1) - Clap ends.

Ehh... I don't really like the song, didn't test the timing thoroughly it seems okay though.

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Delete .osb file, full submit.

Easy:

-- Same comments about the volume here.
-- RESNAP.

00:18:113 (2) - Clap
00:54:632 - 01:13:003 -- 20 second break... okay, but this difficulty is already shorter than the rest. Map earlier?
01:19:524 (3,4) - Use a slider here.

Normal:

-- Lower hitsound volume slightly. Too loud, especially at the begging.

01:49:977 (1,2,3,4,5) - Where are the claps?
02:19:974 (5) - New combo.
02:23:462 (1) - Remove new combo.

Good.

emaal's Hard:

-- First offset is different to the others.
-- RESNAP.
-- Hitsound volume is too loud.
-- The overlaps on this difficulty don't look or play good... (opinion)
-- Why is the drain and OA turned up so high? -1 on both. (Especially OA imo it makes the map look better...)

00:25:100 (1,2,3) - Confusing overlap.
00:29:518 (2,3) - Looks bad, especially 3 since it hidden =.="
01:15:793 (11) - End is hidden... I'm presuming that was intentional.
01:33:466 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Oh god... why have everything so clustered?
01:42:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - These streams are out of sync with the rest of the difficulty really... returning sliders would probably be better imo.
01:46:372 (16,1) - Spacing.
01:55:790 (5) - New combo.
01:56:488 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:29:625 (8) - Move to white tick (02:29:741)
02:30:555 (10) - ^ (02:30:671)
02:57:181 (2) - New combo.
02:59:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Ehh... streams kinda out of sync etc.
03:06:250 (x) - Note?
03:06:482 (x) - ^
03:06:947 (2,3,4) - Rhythm isn't intuitive.


Teara's Insane:

-- Everything is unsnapped ~ make sure to resnap everything.
-- The spacing takes some getting used to.
-- Lots of new combo's here, a lot of them unnecessary imo.

00:39:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This was awkward to play imo, the triples kind of throw off the rhythm of the streams... idk just awkward =/ [The rhythm at 00:46:968 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - plays much better]
01:01:861 (1) - Clap end.
01:03:721 (1) - ^
01:20:909 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:08:822 (1,1) - Clap the ends.
02:18:812 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:19:509 (1) - ^
02:19:974 (2) - New combo here instead?
03:04:167 (7,1) - Spacing?
03:23:225 (1,1) - Clap ends.

Ehh... I don't really like the song, didn't test the timing thoroughly it seems okay though.

Did my changes

To any modder, please have look at this point: 01:44:628, in my difficulty.

Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [emaal's Hard].osu

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Delete .osb file, full submit. (OMG!! I keep doing that. Why is it coming back? >< )

Easy:

-- Same comments about the volume here. Done
-- RESNAP. Done

00:18:113 (2) - Clap
00:54:632 - 01:13:003 -- 20 second break... okay, but this difficulty is already shorter than the rest. Map earlier?
01:19:524 (3,4) - Use a slider here.

^Done

Normal:

-- Lower hitsound volume slightly. Too loud, especially at the begging. Done

01:49:977 (1,2,3,4,5) - Where are the claps?
02:19:974 (5) - New combo.
02:23:462 (1) - Remove new combo.

^Done

Good.

emaal's Hard:

-- First offset is different to the others.
-- RESNAP.
-- Hitsound volume is too loud.
-- The overlaps on this difficulty don't look or play good... (opinion)
-- Why is the drain and OA turned up so high? -1 on both. (Especially OA imo it makes the map look better...)

00:25:100 (1,2,3) - Confusing overlap.
00:29:518 (2,3) - Looks bad, especially 3 since it hidden =.="
01:15:793 (11) - End is hidden... I'm presuming that was intentional.
01:33:466 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Oh god... why have everything so clustered?
01:42:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - These streams are out of sync with the rest of the difficulty really... returning sliders would probably be better imo.
01:46:372 (16,1) - Spacing.
01:55:790 (5) - New combo.
01:56:488 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:29:625 (8) - Move to white tick (02:29:741)
02:30:555 (10) - ^ (02:30:671)
02:57:181 (2) - New combo.
02:59:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Ehh... streams kinda out of sync etc.
03:06:250 (x) - Note?
03:06:482 (x) - ^
03:06:947 (2,3,4) - Rhythm isn't intuitive.


Teara's Insane:

(Btw, Teara isn't here atm . So I'll take care of her diff. )

-- Everything is unsnapped ~ make sure to resnap everything. Done
-- The spacing takes some getting used to.
-- Lots of new combo's here, a lot of them unnecessary imo.

00:39:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This was awkward to play imo, the triples kind of throw off the rhythm of the streams... idk just awkward =/ [The rhythm at 00:46:968 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - plays much better] All fixed
01:01:861 (1) - Clap end.
01:03:721 (1) - ^
01:20:909 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:08:822 (1,1) - Clap the ends.
02:18:812 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:19:509 (1) - ^
02:19:974 (2) - New combo here instead?
03:04:167 (7,1) - Spacing?
03:23:225 (1,1) - Clap ends.

^Done

Ehh... I don't really like the song, didn't test the timing thoroughly it seems okay though.

Thanks, Shulin.

Ugh.

Easy;

00:27:425 (4) - Spacing.
01:20:909 (1) - ^

Normal;

00:25:565 (3) - 1/2 later.
00:34:401 (2) - This is ugly.
00:53:935 (1) - Delete.
02:00:906 (1) - ^
02:39:043 (1,2) - Make 2 a reflection of 1 or vice verca.
03:15:319 (1) - Delete.

Hard;

00:27:192 (5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing.
01:34:164 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
02:24:393 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
Same for most other combos.

Insane;

01:31:606 (7) - Caught me out, should be 1/2 beat earlier imo.

DiamondCrash wrote:

Ugh.

Easy;

00:27:425 (4) - Spacing.
01:20:909 (1) - ^

^Done

Normal;

00:25:565 (3) - 1/2 later.
00:34:401 (2) - This is ugly.
00:53:935 (1) - Delete.
02:00:906 (1) - ^
02:39:043 (1,2) - Make 2 a reflection of 1 or vice verca.
03:15:319 (1) - Delete.

^Done

Hard;

00:27:192 (5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing.
01:34:164 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
02:24:393 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
Same for most other combos.

(I'll ask emaal.)

(Edit: ^done)

Insane;

01:31:606 (7) - Caught me out, should be 1/2 beat earlier imo.


^Done

Thanks, DC!

Suggestion
Should
Must
[Teara's Insane]
This is awesome <3
[Normal]
00:23:462 - Circle
00:23:694 - Put slider to 00:24:635
01:31:141 - I don't think that this is rankable =/ use distance
01:46:489 - ^
02:22:765 - remove new combo
[Easy]
00:22:532 - This confused me. I think: Put slider to 00:22:997 (repeatable one time)
Time two minutes. It's good :3
[emaal's Hard]
01:41:838 - new combo
02:53:460 - SPAM

Delete osb. file XD
Nice work and song :3 Evil star from me :3

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Suggestion
Should
Must
[Teara's Insane]
This is awesome <3
[Normal]
00:23:462 - Circle
00:23:694 - Put slider to 00:24:635
01:31:141 - I don't think that this is rankable =/ use distance
01:46:489 - ^
02:22:765 - remove new combo

^Done

[Easy]
00:22:532 - This confused me. I think: Put slider to 00:22:997 (repeatable one time)
Time two minutes. It's good :3

^Its fine the way it is.

[emaal's Hard]
01:41:838 - new combo
02:53:460 - SPAM

^Done

Delete osb. file XD (*sigh* Again? =_=)
Nice work and song :3 Evil star from me :3

Thank you, Louis!

=o

[Easy]:
01:25:095 (2) - Move this upwards to fill in the gap?

[emaal's Hard]:
00:22:532 (3) - Suggestion: New combo? xD
01:46:954 (3,4,5,6) - All right, this spacing is just wonky. xp A random-like jump with (4) and then some 2x sliders... xD I know there's a speed up there, but from a player's perspective, that's unidenfitiable. Consider rearranging this pattern.
01:56:488 (4) - Why not a new combo here?
02:29:276 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - All right, cool pattern here...but the spacing just makes it hard to read such a thing. ;s

[Easy] and [Normal]'s max volume is so loud. x[

.

Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [emaal's Hard].osu

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

=o

[Easy]:
01:25:095 (2) - Move this upwards to fill in the gap?

^Done

[emaal's Hard]:
00:22:532 (3) - Suggestion: New combo? xD
01:46:954 (3,4,5,6) - All right, this spacing is just wonky. xp A random-like jump with (4) and then some 2x sliders... xD I know there's a speed up there, but from a player's perspective, that's unidenfitiable. Consider rearranging this pattern.
01:56:488 (4) - Why not a new combo here?
02:29:276 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - All right, cool pattern here...but the spacing just makes it hard to read such a thing. ;s

[Easy] and [Normal]'s max volume is so loud. x[

^Fixed

Thank you kirby!!

IRC Request Accepted


no major problems found but, yeah, some nazi modding :/
STAR!

also since you bribed me with some nice good chat together, expect something pink

Arusha Shuna wrote:

IRC Request Accepted

Easy
01:19:049 (2,3) - move 1 grid left
01:32:071 (1) - the reverse arrow direction is a little strange, do something? probably because of the extra slider point in the end, remove it

^Done

Normal
00:49:051 (2,3) - 1 grid down
01:32:071 (1) - the reverse arrow direction is a little strange, do something? probably because of the extra slider point in the end, remove it
02:16:254 (1) - 1 grid right


^Done


emaal's Hard
01:15:793 (11) - spacing
02:17:184 (1) - 1 grid right
02:23:114 (6) - spacing is a little bit strange
02:26:486 (10) - 1 grid left
02:26:718 (11) - 2 grid left
03:12:063 (2,3) - 1 grid left
03:15:551 (13) - move it to the next red tick?
03:16:249 (2) - 1 grid left
03:29:736 (4) - 1 grid right


^Done


Teara's Insane
02:41:833 (8) - 1 grid right the 1 griddown (level2 grid)
02:50:902 (1,5) - 1 grid down (level2 grid)
02:48:809 (2) - 1 grid up then 1 grid right (level2 grid)
02:49:740 (1,3) - 1 grid up (level2 grid)


^Done

no major problems found but, yeah, some nazi modding :/
STAR!

also since you bribed me with some nice good chat together, expect something pink

Thanks for the mod and kudosu star, Arusha!!!

Yo

[Easy]
00:13:462 (4,1) - Spacing error
00:26:030 (3) - Make it symetric??
02:12:533 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:12:532 (6) - Why this object is silence??
00:16:252 (6) - ^
00:19:973 (6) - ^
00:39:750 (1) - Delete this object?? It could be horrid if the object place here
00:59:516 (3) - New combo??
03:00:901 (B) - The breaks are too short, remove it??
03:07:994 (4) - Stack with 3 at the end is not stack, stack it?

[emaal's Hard]
00:19:741 (x) - Add note?
01:30:443 (6) - A little hidden
01:47:186 ~ 01:47:884 (T) - Add a 2x speed warning please
01:48:349 ~ 01:49:047 (T) - ^
02:42:996 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - The pattern looks weird~
02:59:971 (9) - New combo
03:06:947 (10) - Move 2 grid down??

[Teara's Insane]
01:44:977 (x) - Add note?

Not bad
STAR

Leorda wrote:

Yo

[Easy]
00:13:462 (4,1) - Spacing error
00:26:030 (3) - Make it symetric??
02:12:533 (1) - ^

^Done

[Normal]
00:12:532 (6) - Why this object is silence??
00:16:252 (6) - ^
00:19:973 (6) - ^

^I thought it could go with the music.
But now that I listen to it again, doesn't sound right now. Removed.

00:39:750 (1) - Delete this object?? It could be horrid if the object place here
00:59:516 (3) - New combo??
03:00:901 (B) - The breaks are too short, remove it??
03:07:994 (4) - Stack with 3 at the end is not stack, stack it?

^Done

[emaal's Hard]
00:19:741 (x) - Add note? (Don't think so. =/)
01:30:443 (6) - A little hidden Edit: Fixed
01:47:186 ~ 01:47:884 (T) - Add a 2x speed warning please
01:48:349 ~ 01:49:047 (T) - ^

Edit:^Added...

02:42:996 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - The pattern looks weird~ Edit: Fixed
02:59:971 (9) - New combo (Done)
03:06:947 (10) - Move 2 grid down?? (Done)


[Teara's Insane]
01:44:977 (x) - Add note?

^Done

Not bad
STAR

Thanks, Leorda!

Double Speed BG.

I PM you with Storyboard in emaals diff. check it please

Nice map.Good luck with it.

Irc modding.

So,there're fixes with SB in emaal's Hard.

Download: Fixes.rar

I fixed the Diff.Specific,added some movement and fading.I hope you'll like it.

Also,the filename changed to SB.png

So,what do you need?

1.You must have the latest version I worked at.I fully uploaded your beatmap near 30 mins ago,so I hope you didn't make some changes to it.

2.Delete Double Speed.png file from beatmap folder.

3.There are 2 files inside the attachment.Renamed SB pic and fixed difficulty.So paste them into beatmap folder and change emaal's Hard one.

4.Test it meticulously.If everything is fine,then you must do a Full Submission.

Also,you don't need to make any changes to other difficulties.There won't be the SB you used in emaal's Hard.

If you'll have some questions or troubles,pm me in-game,please.So,good luck.

SadKangaroo wrote:

So,there're fixes with SB in emaal's Hard.

[attachment=0:d26f1]Fixes.rar[/attachment:d26f1]

I fixed the Diff.Specific,added some movement and fading.I hope you'll like it.

Also,the filename changed to SB.png

So,what do you need?

1.You must have the latest version I worked at.I fully uploaded your beatmap near 30 mins ago,so I hope you didn't make some changes to it.

2.Delete Double Speed.png file from beatmap folder.

3.There are 2 files inside the attachment.Renamed SB pic and fixed difficulty.So paste them into beatmap folder and change emaal's Hard one.

4.Test it meticulously.If everything is fine,then you must do a Full Submission.

Also,you don't need to make any changes to other difficulties.There won't be the SB you used in emaal's Hard.

If you'll have some questions or troubles,pm me in-game,please.So,good luck.

Wow... It worked!!

Thank you so much, Sadkangaroo!!!

Oh well,good then.No problem.Feel free to ask,if need something.

[Overall]
Remove lead-in time on all difficulties.
Remove osb file.

[emaal]
01:29:746 (5) - Move farther from 4.
01:40:908 (9) - New combo.
01:47:186 (4) - ^
02:22:184 (4) - Move closer to 3.
02:30:671 (10,11,12) - Move 12 closer to 10. And maybe even make 10 a new combo.
03:06:947 (10,11,12) - What's up with this spacing? Make 03:07:296 (11) a new combo.
03:14:854 (11) - Stack on fading 6.
03:19:505 (10) - New combo.

[Teara]
00:48:131 (5,6,7,1) - Move all this closer to 4
01:47:651 (5,6,7,1) - ^ Worst thing I don't like is when streams are not evenly distanced.
01:49:512 (5,6,7) - ^
01:55:093 (5,6,7,1) - ^
01:56:604 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move closer to 1.
03:09:515 (5,6,7,1) - Move closer to 4.

Thanks ^^

Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [emaal's Hard].osu

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Overall]
Remove lead-in time on all difficulties. (Done)
Remove osb file. (No. It's there because there is a Storyboard effect on emaal's Hard.)

Thanks for the mod, Mafiamaster!

SB done in [emaal's Hard] is Diff Specific. So deleting the osb won't mess with the double speed warning.

Mafiamaster wrote:

SB done in [emaal's Hard] is Diff Specific. So deleting the osb won't mess with the double speed warning.

Okay, all set.

I would have been worried that the Storyboard won't work, but it works fine.

Awaiting for Teara to update her difficulty.

Edit: I updated Teara's Insane.

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
the first kiai should start at 00:39:517, second kiai 01:46:489. you need one more green line to start kiai. (current one has a tiny volume change.) Teara's diff should have the same kiai time as other diffs.
switch combo color2 and 3, will be easier for players to tell them.

[Easy]
00:27:425 (4,1) - spacing
02:03:232 (2,1,2) - spacing
02:12:533 (1) - finish at the end.
i noticed this diff has some tiny spacing changes (Distance Spacing 0.7x ~ 0.8x), maybe you need to check and make them the same?


[Normal]
still tiny spacing changes. better to fix them. example:01:37:652 (1,2,3,4), different from others.
00:29:750 (4) - clap at the start
01:33:001 (3,4,5) - 1 grid down.
02:08:812 (1) - finish?
02:40:903 (2,1,2) - spacing
03:02:064 (4,5) - turn off "grid snap" and replace them. 5 should be align with (1)
03:23:225 (1) - finish?
03:26:946 (1) - ^

[emall's Hard]
HP Drain Rate-1
00:22:997 (3,4,5) - what's this. can you find a better shape...
00:25:681 (2,3) - better to stack them
00:27:192 (5,6,7,8,9) - nazi spacing. means the spacing between each 2 notes are not equal.
01:26:955 (7) - need a better shape to let the end stack with (4), seems you want to do it.
01:33:466 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - nazi spacing
01:37:187 (5,6,7) - ^
02:17:184 (1) - 02:23:114 (6) make the hitsounds louder.
02:24:393 (1) - 02:31:136 (3) - ^
02:36:485 (5,6,7) - nazi spacing
02:42:996 (1,2,3,4) - ……^

[Teara's Insane]
HP-1
many tiny spacing problems but no biggie, grid level 3 will be better= =
00:12:997 (11,12) - left a bit (in the same line with (6) & (7)
00:24:392 (7,8) - down and right a bit to make this curve better.
00:34:634 (2,3,4) - nazi spacing
00:49:284 (3) - why not stack with (1)? and move the next (1) if you do so
01:37:885 (2,3,4) - nazi spacing again, copy & paste part lol
01:48:814 (3) - why not stack again XD
01:56:255 (3) - again..?
02:23:811 (1) - too long a spinner
03:10:668 (3) - again..?

Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [emaal's Hard].osu

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
the first kiai should start at 00:39:517, second kiai 01:46:489. you need one more green line to start kiai. (current one has a tiny volume change.) Teara's diff should have the same kiai time as other diffs.
switch combo color2 and 3, will be easier for players to tell them. (Fixed)

[Easy]
00:27:425 (4,1) - spacing (
02:03:232 (2,1,2) - spacing
02:12:533 (1) - finish at the end.
i noticed this diff has some tiny spacing changes (Distance Spacing 0.7x ~ 0.8x), maybe you need to check and make them the same?


^All fixed

[Normal]
still tiny spacing changes. better to fix them. example:01:37:652 (1,2,3,4), different from others.
00:29:750 (4) - clap at the start
01:33:001 (3,4,5) - 1 grid down.
02:08:812 (1) - finish?
02:40:903 (2,1,2) - spacing
03:02:064 (4,5) - turn off "grid snap" and replace them. 5 should be align with (1)
03:23:225 (1) - finish?
03:26:946 (1) - ^

^All fixed

[emall's Hard]
HP Drain Rate-1
00:22:997 (3,4,5) - what's this. can you find a better shape...
00:25:681 (2,3) - better to stack them
00:27:192 (5,6,7,8,9) - nazi spacing. means the spacing between each 2 notes are not equal.
01:26:955 (7) - need a better shape to let the end stack with (4), seems you want to do it.
01:33:466 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - nazi spacing
01:37:187 (5,6,7) - ^
02:17:184 (1) - 02:23:114 (6) make the hitsounds louder.
02:24:393 (1) - 02:31:136 (3) - ^
02:36:485 (5,6,7) - nazi spacing
02:42:996 (1,2,3,4) - ……^

[Teara's Insane]
HP-1
many tiny spacing problems but no biggie, grid level 3 will be better= =
00:12:997 (11,12) - left a bit (in the same line with (6) & (7)
00:24:392 (7,8) - down and right a bit to make this curve better.
00:34:634 (2,3,4) - nazi spacing
00:49:284 (3) - why not stack with (1)? and move the next (1) if you do so
01:37:885 (2,3,4) - nazi spacing again, copy & paste part lol
01:48:814 (3) - why not stack again XD
01:56:255 (3) - again..?
02:23:811 (1) - too long a spinner
03:10:668 (3) - again..?

Thank you so much, Rin!

Thanks Natsume

Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [Teara's Insane].osu

nice

Song Setup

Add Source (Album or something...)

[Easy]

00:22:532 (3) - Delete [ Feels confusing ]
00:22:764 (3) - Add circle here
02:05:557 (2) - Add a clap here

[Normal]

00:27:425 (5) - Add a clap on the repeat

[emaal's Hard]

Note - You used Level 2 grid didn't you? o_o" If not recheck the spacing and correct any mistakes you see

00:27:658 (7,8,9) - Incorrect Spacing compared to (5,6)
01:01:841 (8) - Add New Combo
01:02:306 (1) - Remove New Combo
02:20:905 (8) - Add New Combo
02:21:370 (1) - Remove New Combo
02:17:416 (2,3,4) - Incorrect Spacing compared to (1)
02:18:579 (7) - Incorrect Spacing compared to (5,6)
(other errors like this are in here but only fix them if you want to...its minor)

02:21:602 (4,5) - Incorrect Spacing compared to (2,3) [ There's a pattern there so if you find a way to fix this without changing it do it P= ]

[Teara's Insane]

Note - With level 2 grid the spacing for the streams isn't correct. I'd recommend at least using level 3 grid for the streams so its easier to follow.

01:03:701 (1) - Remove New Combo [Optional because its really fine as is but changing makes the combo better]
01:46:489 (1) - Personally I don't like how this is so far from the end of the stack...make it closer at least?
02:10:673 (1) - Remove New Combo [same reason as before]
03:25:086 (1) - ^

animask wrote:

Song Setup

Add Source (Album or something...) (It doesn't need a source.)
[Easy]

00:22:532 (3) - Delete [ Feels confusing ] (No, Sorry.)
00:22:764 (3) - Add circle here (^)
02:05:557 (2) - Add a clap here (Fixed.)

[Normal]

00:27:425 (5) - Add a clap on the repeat (Fixed.)

Thanks for the mod, animask!

Easy:
00:27:425 (4) - move one grid up and right.
02:06:487 (1) - maybe space it like this?

Normal:
01:01:841 (1,2) - 1: move up one grid. 2: stack with the beginning of this slider 00:59:516
01:21:839 (2) - left one grid

emaal's Hard:
00:12:532 (11) - Move one grid up and right.
00:25:681 (2,3) - Maybe stack those two?
01:26:955 (7) - stack the slider end with 4
02:41:833 (12) - one grid left.

Teara's Insane:
00:28:355 (7) - shouldn't this note be here?: 00:28:123; because it seems kind of out of place
Otherwise fine.

Pretty good map. Good luck with it hybrid^^ Star~

Rukarioman wrote:

Easy:
00:27:425 (4) - move one grid up and right. (Fixed.)
02:06:487 (1) - maybe space it like this? (No. Sorry)

SPOILER

Normal:
01:01:841 (1,2) - 1: move up one grid. 2: stack with the beginning of this slider 00:59:516
01:21:839 (2) - left one grid

^All Fixed.

emaal's Hard:
00:12:532 (11) - Move one grid up and right.
00:25:681 (2,3) - Maybe stack those two?
01:26:955 (7) - stack the slider end with 4
02:41:833 (12) - one grid left.

^All Fixed.

Teara's Insane:
00:28:355 (7) - shouldn't this note be here?: 00:28:123; because it seems kind of out of place
Otherwise fine.

Teara's got it

Pretty good map. Good luck with it hybrid^^ Star~

Thanks for the mod, Rukario!

Oh, also updated emaal's difficulty from animask's mod.

Update

Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [Teara's Insane].osu

o.o~ the song is better than I thought~
/me sees .osb, /me sees lots of "delete .osb" mods, /me palmfaces
Timing... plays fine

Easy-
01:17:189 (1) - not distance snapped, but okay...
Those longer sliders could look better, but no biggie
Good~

Normal-
01:18:119 - shift timing panel back
01:22:770 (3,4,5,6) - properly stack this please? D:
01:37:652 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing ._.;;
01:44:628 (3,1) - space this properly?
Good~

emaal's-
00:23:694 (5) - since you doubled the bpm, the spacing is doubled for this note too, fix spacing? ... eh, same goes for the other 2x sliders
00:29:750 (3) - missed a clap?
00:47:656 (1) - maybe extend this by one repeat (to add a the clap on the end..?)
01:40:908 (1,2,3) - not that I mind the spacing for 1 and 2 (or the anti jump), but... 3 is spaced properly... which is kinda odd looking... maybe just new combo 3...?
02:57:181 (1,2) - why is this jump so much farther compared to the rest of the combo? its okay, but I don't get it
And you don't have to 2x section the notes just to 2x the distance snap..
:( inconsistent spacing that distance snap says is correct but isn't cuz grid snap messes it up... examples - 02:25:788 (7,8), 02:28:578 (4,5,6,7) and 02:32:066 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) >.< distance snap says its okay
=.= could get a nazi clean up, but no biggie
I see two SB scripts, one is unused and blank, remove that and I suggest you start the storyboard warning some time during 01:44:628 (4)'s repeats, so its easier to read the warning...
Good

Teara's
00:44:517 (3) - clap at end of slider?
00:51:144 (4) - continue the clap pace till the break? (considering you did follow the pace on 00:43:703 (4) till next stream)
01:06:492 (5) - ^ (since you added claps on the sliders before) (for 5 and start of 13)
01:24:630 (1) - claaap?
01:34:629 (4,5,6) - totally random suggestion cuz I felt like it- new combo 4 and make this part jumps :D
01:38:815 - note please, finish the Herseys >,<
01:46:489 (1,2,3) - I don't like how this was spaced out from the stack when (1) was also a 1/4... maybe remove 01:46:372..? or ... stack.. this under... the long stack...?
01:51:488 (3) - clap at end?
01:58:116 (4) - same as 51:144 (I couldn't tell if you added claps or not cuz of music xD)
02:06:952 - ... match 00:59:981 (1,2,3,4,5)? or remove? or no change? (03:21:365 (1,2,3,4,5) too~)
02:13:463 (5) - same as 1:06:027
02:16:719 (1) - this clap sounds nice, but why is it the only clap here (in this section before spinner)? :X
02:52:995 (3) - clap?
03:05:901 (3) - clap @ end
03:12:528 (4) - same as 51:144 (it may be on purpose, but the claps fit well >_<)
Claps at end too... eh.. music would almost block it out, your choice..
Ahhhh streams could look better, use higher grid lvl for those? :S
Great!~ (sorry for huge ... mod?)

Hmm, yea, I wouldn't mind bubbling this

If I haven't fixed everything sorry.

Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [emaal's Hard].osu

Update

Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [Teara's Insane].osu

Post edit ._.

try this~

Download: stuff.rar

Shinxyn wrote:

o.o~ the song is better than I thought~
/me sees .osb, /me sees lots of "delete .osb" mods, /me palmfaces
Timing... plays fine

Easy-
01:17:189 (1) - not distance snapped, but okay...
Those longer sliders could look better, but no biggie
Good~

^All fixed.

Normal-
01:18:119 - shift timing panel back
01:22:770 (3,4,5,6) - properly stack this please? D:
01:37:652 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing ._.;;
01:44:628 (3,1) - space this properly?
Good~

^All fixed.


Hmm, yea, I wouldn't mind bubbling this

Thanks for the mod, Shinxyn.

Edit: SadKangaroo, don't worry about the Story board. Its okay.

okay then~
still some points that I could nazi, but they're playable...

let the next BAT decide :P

Terrible song, rankable map.

Thanks, Mark.

Happy Birthday to me~

Oh, I was afraid it would be unspecified. xD

Hmm...either Techno or Pop is fine.

Thanks for all your help, everyone!!

Happy Birthday Hybrid

Also grats on the ranked )

Gratz with first map ^_~
And Happy Birthday

Congratulations with the map hybrid, and happy birthday.

I knew this song D: Nice job.