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Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix)

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Roddie
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, June 26, 2010 at 9:35:18 PM

Artist: Jeremih
Title: Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix)
Tags: emaal Teara
BPM: 129
Filesize: 5741kb
Play Time: 02:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1 stars, 84 notes)
  2. emaal's Hard (4.43 stars, 426 notes)
  3. Normal (2.46 stars, 245 notes)
  4. Teara's Insane (4.81 stars, 554 notes)
Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This will be my 1st map.

Easy and Normal finished,

Many thanks to emaal and Teara for thier guest difficulties! ^^

Many Thanks to Louis Cyphre and SadKangaroo for Storyboard help! :D

Thanks to everyone for their support! ^^
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uranuss8600
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uranuss8600
:) star it
and wish u 'll finish it soon :3
gfbrd
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Joined May 2009
gfbrd
Bpm: 129
Offset: 10,272

You were afk so I will just post it here.
maal
maal
Helped over IRC
maal
maal
Okay, so I worked a little bit on it and looked at it. My thought is remap. I did some work, so you can see how it should be done.

Have this.

Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [Normal].osu
maal
maal
Lazy late night mod :O

Suggestions
Needed Stuff

~Easy~

00:25:620 (2) On timeline: Move one tick left.
00:31:085 Add a note
00:33:061 (2) On timeline: Move one tick left.
00:42:945 (Spinner) End at 00:46:434
00:50:387 (Spinner) End at 00:54:341
01:17:131 (notes) What about adding three notes, as he says "1,2,3"?
01:30:387 Map this part
02:01:434 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) On Timeline: Move those one tick right
02:04:922 Map this part

Yawn..
gfbrd
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gfbrd
General
-Set a preview point
-add a bg image
-needs a source
-needs another difficulty
-Try using Grid level 3, for better precision
-I think the overall difficulty should be lowered by 1 tick and hp drain rate should be lowered 2 ticks. Seems a bit hard for an easy difficulty

Easy
00:17:596 (1) Maybe you should move those notes somewhere else, putting it under that note might seem confusing for beginners.
00:25:620 (1,2,3,4) spacing and I think its better for that note to be moved on the white tick at 00:25:503.
00:28:759 (1) maybe put this on top of the slider instead?
00:31:550 (4) spacing
00:32:945 (2) move it on to the white tick, make sure to fix your spacing after.
01:28:294 (1) maybe stack this onto the slider?
01:36:434 (2) ^
02:08:759 (1,2,3) Maybe you should move these notes somewhere else, seems like its too close to the slider and probaly make beginners confused and mess up there.

Good luck :D
Roddie
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Roddie

emaal wrote:

Lazy late night mod :O

Suggestions
Needed Stuff

~Easy~

00:25:620 (2) On timeline: Move one tick left.
00:31:085 Add a note
00:33:061 (2) On timeline: Move one tick left.
00:42:945 (Spinner) End at 00:46:434
00:50:387 (Spinner) End at 00:54:341
01:17:131 (notes) What about adding three notes, as he says "1,2,3"?
01:30:387 Map this part
02:01:434 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) On Timeline: Move those one tick right
02:04:922 Map this part

Done

Yawn..
Thanks emaal :3
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Roddie
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gfbrd wrote:

General
-Set a preview point
-add a bg image
-needs a source
-needs another difficulty
-Try using Grid level 3, for better precision
-I think the overall difficulty should be lowered by 1 tick and hp drain rate should be lowered 2 ticks. Seems a bit hard for an easy difficulty

Easy
00:17:596 (1) Maybe you should move those notes somewhere else, putting it under that note might seem confusing for beginners.
00:25:620 (1,2,3,4) spacing and I think its better for that note to be moved on the white tick at 00:25:503.
00:28:759 (1) maybe put this on top of the slider instead?
00:31:550 (4) spacing
00:32:945 (2) move it on to the white tick, make sure to fix your spacing after.
01:28:294 (1) maybe stack this onto the slider?
01:36:434 (2) ^
02:08:759 (1,2,3) Maybe you should move these notes somewhere else, seems like its too close to the slider and probaly make beginners confused and mess up there.

Good luck :D

Done
Thanks, gf :3
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maal
maal
I thought I'd recheck this and look at the general, to see if you did as gfbrd told you to.

Suggestions
Needed

~General~

Still no preview point? Tell me if you need help.
You still need a background. What about this? http://www.jeremihmusic.com/images/wallpaper2_1024.jpg
Source, still needed.
Lower overall difficulty by 1, and HP drain by 2

I'll recheck when I feel like it, or when you PM me. :D
gfbrd
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gfbrd
General
-The bg image isn't showing for me. Try adding it again. Go to the design tab and insert back background.
-For the tags birthday is spelled incorrectly it is spelled birthday not birhtday.
-Set a preview point for normal and make sure it is exactly the same as the one in easy.

[url]Easy[/url]
00:25:038 (1,2,3) spacing
00:32:480 (1,2,3) ^
01:15:736 (5) Maybe you should move it somewhere else? I think beginnners might have a bit of trouble with doing those kinds of notes.
01:35:736 (1) line it up with 2
01:38:527 (4) ^

Normal
Use 1/4 beat snap divisr.
Oh man you need to move all the notes 1/4 tick back onto the white ticks.
00:15:813 (4) stack this onto 5 and 6?
00:23:256 (4,5,6) move 4 up 1 grid so that it aligns with 1 and move 5 and 6 under 4.
00:46:434 (1) you should either delete this note or move it somewhere else.
00:54:418 (1) spacing
00:58:992 (2) add a note?
01:30:232 (3,4,5) spacing
01:37:674 (2) ^
02:10:154 (4) add a note since you have it there on easy.
02:10:697 (1) new combo
02:12:015 (4) add a note since you have it there on easy.

Great improvement keep it up. :)
gfbrd
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gfbrd
Genreal
-Try Offset: 9798 and remove those extra timing sections. Remember to resnap :

Easy
00:25:038 (1,2,3) still some spacing problem there
00:31:085 (4) spacing
01:17:131 (1,2,3) how about putting these in the center of the map?
01:32:015 (1) Move up 1 grid to align with the slider from 01:29:224
01:35:736 (1) You should move that somewhere else, maybe 5 grids to the right or left?
01:38:527 (4) spacing, too close to (3), maybe 7 grids down?

Normal
00:14:341 (1,2,3) Move these 2 grids to the right to align with (4)
00:17:596 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Move all of these 1 grid down so that it aligns with the slider at 00:16:202
00:23:410 (5,6) Move 1 grid down so it it under (4).
00:27:364 - 00:28:294 Maybe you should map this part.
00:29:069 - 00:31:550 Notes are not snapped correctly, please resnap them.
00:29:069 (2) spacing
00:29:767 (4) slider is a little bit too long, probaly might need to remake it to match the ticks.
00:31:162 (7) ^
00:58:992 (2) move 1 grid up and 1 grid left to align with the slider.
01:37:596 (2) move 1 grid down to align with the slider.
02:04:573 (8,1) move 1 grid up and 2 grids left.

Still needs some work but good luck. ^^
Have a kudosu star.
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champpanda
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champpanda
ok ! your star :)
nice song hyb !! not worries about it x3
Roddie
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
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Teara
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Teara
to give you some ideas on to map a harder diff :3

also has a custom hitsound to mute sliders, just put custom override 1.


Edit *
and LOL

I meant that to give you a idea~ but fine, I guess I'll map it to full

Download: 12294 Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix).zip
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maal
maal
Rawr, Hai hybrid :D Hai Teara :D

Change offset to 10.205

loloollolololololol

Finished my diff lololololololol, the one that's the biggest is the one I just finished lololololo
lDownload: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [emaal's Birthday].osu Or this :D lolololol


Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [emaal's Birthday].osu
Ultimate
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Ultimate
Hello hybrid, Ultimate here (send by Emaal)

1st BPM: 129,000
1st Offset: 439

2nd BPM: 129,010
2nd Offset: 24.645

Call me when you've changed all the maps to this BPM and Offset.
Then i will time-check again.

Ultimate


EDIT: Here you go man, i adjusted all the bpm(s) and offset(s).
I also fixed all major errors. (This doesn't take away that it needs to be modded!)

Download: All adjusted diffs.zip

Please take a moment to look @ what i did to the file(s)! It's importent that you learn from this :P.
GL man =D
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maal
maal
Sorry dude, changes some minor mistakes.

Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [emaal's Birthday].osu
Teara
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Teara
Ok, mod this :3

Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [Teara's Birthday].osu
joseph
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Annime
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Annime
oh, i like this one ;3
Star! :3
nice work hyb! :B
[Strike]
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[Strike]
awesome map hyb :D Star ^^
Roddie
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animorph59 wrote:

awesome map hyb :D Star ^^

Annime wrote:

oh, i like this one ;3
Star! :3
nice work hyb! :B

alicely wrote:

nice map ;3
keep up the good work x3
Thanks, alicely, ani, and Annie!! :)
misa_old
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misa_old
GJ hyb >w<
star >w<
maal
maal
Dude! This is a goodbye gift from me :D MY FINISHED DIFFICULTY! Man? I'm gonna miss ya. Good luck with the college. Remember to come back :D

Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [emaal's Birthday].osu
Chacha17
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Chacha17
Tags: remove 'Birthday' because it's already in the title.

Easy:

00:15:787 (4) - I don't like how you silenced this one. The clap hitsound at the middle of the slider is useless.
00:26:040 (3) - how about making this slider symmetrical?
02:12:543 (1) - ^
00:29:760 (3) - spacing error?
01:14:873 (4) - move one grid to the left? so that it doesn't get overlapped by the previous beat?
01:25:570 (3) - remove this whistle please

Normal:
00:23:229 (6,7) - offscreen
00:43:015 (1,2,3,4) - why did spacing suddenly change here?
00:55:805 (5) - remove clap pls
00:57:665 (4) - ^
01:05:572 (1) - finish?
02:00:916 (1) - align this beat with 02:02:311 (4)
02:02:776 (5) - remove clap
02:04:637 (4) - ^
03:17:189 (5) - ^
03:17:189 (5) - finish?

emaal's
00:12:532 (11) - don't overlap this with the previous beat
00:17:648 (1) - why did spacing suddenly change here
01:36:732 (4,6,7,8) - spacing error?
01:49:638 (6) - move this 1/4 tick backward?
02:10:683 (8) - new combo?
02:37:192 (8) - align to previous beat?
03:28:816 (1,2,3,4,5) - make the spacing of the beats here consistent
03:30:677 (6) - finish?

Teara's
01:19:524 (5) - move one grid right?
03:48:233 (8,1) - spacing :<

How about making the other diff names relevant to the title? lol. just a suggestion

Here's ur gray star
mengjian1998
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mengjian1998
i think normal have some problem。but i dont know where part have problem.i feel rhythm is strange.
Roddie
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Roddie

Chacha17 wrote:

Tags: remove 'Birthday' because it's already in the title.

Easy:

00:15:787 (4) - I don't like how you silenced this one. The clap at the middle of the slider is useless. Done. Although i would like to remain the slider to be silenced
00:26:040 (3) - how about making this slider symmetrical? Done.
02:12:543 (1) - ^ Done.
00:29:760 (3) - spacing error? Moved 3, 4, and 5 by 1 grid.
01:14:873 (4) - move one grid to the left? so that it doesn't get overlapped by the previous beat? Done.
01:25:570 (3) - remove this whistle please Done.

Normal:
00:23:229 (6,7) - offscreen-Done. moved all the notes on the 1st verse down by 2 grids
00:43:015 (1,2,3,4) - why did spacing suddenly change here?-fixed
00:55:805 (5) - remove clap pls- Done.
00:57:665 (4) - ^ Done.
01:05:572 (1) - finish? Done.
02:00:916 (1) - align this beat with 02:02:311 (4)-I didn't see that :o. Thanks for mentioning.
02:02:776 (5) - remove clap Done.
02:04:637 (4) - ^ Done.
03:17:189 (5) - ^ Done.
03:17:189 (5) - finish? Done.

(I'm not touching those difficulties. Have to mention those to them.)

emaal's
00:12:532 (11) - don't overlap this with the previous beat
00:17:648 (1) - why did spacing suddenly change here
01:36:732 (4,6,7,8) - spacing error?
01:49:638 (6) - move this 1/4 tick backward?
02:10:683 (8) - new combo?
02:37:192 (8) - align to previous beat?
03:28:816 (1,2,3,4,5) - make the spacing of the beats here consistent
03:30:677 (6) - finish?

Teara's
01:19:524 (5) - move one grid right?
03:48:233 (8,1) - spacing :<

How about making the other diff names relevant to the title? lol. just a suggestion (I'm leaving it like that.)

Here's ur gray star


Thanks! :)
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yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh
Remove the source, this song does not need a source.

"Source: This field should generally only be included for Anime or Video Game songs, and occasionally for Novelty (Movies, TV, or Internet) songs. If the song is from an anime or video game, or is most famous for its use as a TV or movie theme, the title of that source goes here. Rock and Pop songs should generally leave the field blank: This is not to be used for things like album titles, and video games like Rock Band or Guitar Hero, which use already-popular songs, should not be named here."
Teara
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Teara
here you go.

Thanks for the mod.

Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [Teara's Insane].osu
maal
maal

Chacha17 wrote:

Tags: remove 'Birthday' because it's already in the title.

Easy:

00:15:787 (4) - I don't like how you silenced this one. The clap hitsound at the middle of the slider is useless.
00:26:040 (3) - how about making this slider symmetrical?
02:12:543 (1) - ^
00:29:760 (3) - spacing error?
01:14:873 (4) - move one grid to the left? so that it doesn't get overlapped by the previous beat?
01:25:570 (3) - remove this whistle please

Normal:
00:23:229 (6,7) - offscreen
00:43:015 (1,2,3,4) - why did spacing suddenly change here?
00:55:805 (5) - remove clap pls
00:57:665 (4) - ^
01:05:572 (1) - finish?
02:00:916 (1) - align this beat with 02:02:311 (4)
02:02:776 (5) - remove clap
02:04:637 (4) - ^
03:17:189 (5) - ^
03:17:189 (5) - finish?

emaal's
00:12:532 (11) - don't overlap this with the previous beat Fine.
00:17:648 (1) - why did spacing suddenly change here No u. I don't get it?
01:36:732 (4,6,7,8) - spacing error? No u. I don't get it?
01:49:638 (6) - move this 1/4 tick backward? Blaaargh Raaargh
02:10:683 (8) - new combo? Meh.
02:37:192 (8) - align to previous beat? Buh.
03:28:816 (1,2,3,4,5) - make the spacing of the beats here consistent MEEH!
03:30:677 (6) - finish? No u finish.

Teara's
01:19:524 (5) - move one grid right?
03:48:233 (8,1) - spacing :<

How about making the other diff names relevant to the title? lol. just a suggestion

Here's ur gray star
Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [emaal's Hard].osu
Suzumi Tamao
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Suzumi Tamao
he said "star it "
i do so
ZHSteven
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ZHSteven
good map~~ i hope it will have more fun in ctb~~~
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
star~~
Roddie
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Thank you yeahyeahyeahhh for the info.

Many thanks Luka, mengjian, Steve, and Rin! :)

Edit: Since its too late now...My map will be here for a month with no further update until I get back....

Thank you all for your support!

Edit: Back.
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Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
Hi sry for the delay o.o
I dont like the gray colour >.< confuse with that BG
removee .osb file

Teara's Insane
01:48:593 (2) - this isnt snapped... check with AImod to make sure all is snapped correctly
00:35:574 - add note?
00:40:108 (2) - i suggest to remove this note
00:41:968 (2) - ^
00:47:549 (2) - ^
00:49:410 (2) - ^
01:25:570 (4) - new combo?
01:38:593 (6,1) - too close together
01:47:080 (2) - i suggest to remove this note
01:48:941 (2) - ^ (there is a few more like this, i wont point it again, you get my point n.nU)
01:51:382 - i wish it would be a note here =(
02:48:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - waaa to long combo, split it >.<
03:49:280 (1) - silence spinner end??

emaal's Hard
Resnap all notes please
00:26:040 (4) - too far from prev circle
00:30:225 (1) - end spinner at 00:32:086
00:43:248 (1) - you could end this spinner at 00:46:503 and start 00:46:968 with the verse
01:37:895 (6,7,8,9,10) - use the higher grid level, so you dont get wrong spaced notes like this when placing diagonals
01:42:313 - start stream here
01:49:522 (6) - move 1/4 later
01:55:335 - add note
01:57:195 - ^
02:15:787 (5,6) - stack this 2
02:23:589 (7) - this slider should be from here: 02:23:472 to here: 02:23:705
02:30:216 (9,10,11,12) - wrong space, use distance snap here
03:00:795 (14,15) - keep it on the line
03:07:306 (3,4,5,6,7) - dont fits imo
03:15:329 (12,13) - stack?
03:30:212 (5,6) - too close together, stack it, or place it correctly with distance snap turn on

Normal & Easy
all good
maal
maal

Lizbeth wrote:

Hi sry for the delay o.o
I dont like the gray colour >.< confuse with that BG
removee .osb file

Teara's Insane
01:48:593 (2) - this isnt snapped... check with AImod to make sure all is snapped correctly
00:35:574 - add note?
00:40:108 (2) - i suggest to remove this note
00:41:968 (2) - ^
00:47:549 (2) - ^
00:49:410 (2) - ^
01:25:570 (4) - new combo?
01:38:593 (6,1) - too close together
01:47:080 (2) - i suggest to remove this note
01:48:941 (2) - ^ (there is a few more like this, i wont point it again, you get my point n.nU)
01:51:382 - i wish it would be a note here =(
02:48:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - waaa to long combo, split it >.<
03:49:280 (1) - silence spinner end??

emaal's Hard
Resnap all notes please
00:26:040 (4) - too far from prev circle Fixed
00:30:225 (1) - end spinner at 00:32:086 Fixed
00:43:248 (1) - you could end this spinner at 00:46:503 and start 00:46:968 with the verse Fixed
01:37:895 (6,7,8,9,10) - use the higher grid level, so you dont get wrong spaced notes like this when placing diagonals Huh?
01:42:313 - start stream here Fixed
01:49:522 (6) - move 1/4 later Fixed
01:55:335 - add note Fixed
01:57:195 - ^ Fixed
02:15:787 (5,6) - stack this 2 Fixed
02:23:589 (7) - this slider should be from here: 02:23:472 to here: 02:23:705 Fixed
02:30:216 (9,10,11,12) - wrong space, use distance snap here Fixed
03:00:795 (14,15) - keep it on the line Fixed
03:07:306 (3,4,5,6,7) - dont fits imo Fixed
03:15:329 (12,13) - stack? Fixed
03:30:212 (5,6) - too close together, stack it, or place it correctly with distance snap turn on Fixed

Normal & Easy
all good
Thanks for the mod ^^

Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [emaal's Hard].osu
Teara
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Teara
oh no, I totally forgot about this.

Check this space for my diff :<

Sorry!

Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [Teara's Insane].osu
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Roddie
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Teara wrote:

oh no, I totally forgot about this.

Check this space for my diff :<

Sorry!
-.-'

Its okay...
Don't worry about it.

Can you describe what you mean by "Check this space in my diff"?
Is it a spacing issue in your diff I must check?

You could have still update it anyway.
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maal
maal

hybrid579 wrote:

Teara wrote:

oh no, I totally forgot about this.

Check this space for my diff :<

Sorry!
-.-'

Its okay...
Don't worry about it.

Can you describe what you mean by "Check this space in my diff"?
Is it a spacing issue in your diff I must check?

You could have still update it anyway.
She means that the reply she just made, is a spot for her difficulty ;) I think o.o''
Diasios
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Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

  • • Delete the .sob file, then "full submission"
    • Offset: 440 (resnap all notes)
[Easy] (this is a normal imo)

  • • Spacing is partially wrong; Keep "Distance Snap" active and recheck it (don't make "jumps" in an Easy)
    • Add kiai
[Normal]

  • • Spacing is partially wrong; Keep "Distance Snap" active and recheck it

[emaal's Hard]

  • • Add kiai
    • 00:23:229 (6,7) - These sliders are ugly; do something different
    • 01:04:641 (7,8) - Spacing
    • 01:49:638 (6) - The end-slider is hidden: make it visible

[Teara's Insane]

  • • Add kiai
H1ko
367 posts
Joined December 2008
H1ko
sweeeet! ^_~
maal
maal
Meow~

Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [emaal's Hard].osu
Roddie
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Topic Starter
Roddie

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

  • • Delete the .sob file, then "full submission" Done.
    • Offset: 440 (resnap all notes) Its fine the way it is.
[Easy] (this is a normal imo)

  • • Spacing is partially wrong; Keep "Distance Snap" active and recheck it (don't make "jumps" in an Easy)Fixed.
    • Add kiai Done.
[Normal]

  • • Spacing is partially wrong; Keep "Distance Snap" active and recheck it Fixed.

[emaal's Hard]

  • • Add kiai
    • 00:23:229 (6,7) - These sliders are ugly; do something different
    • 01:04:641 (7,8) - Spacing
    • 01:49:638 (6) - The end-slider is hidden: make it visible

[Teara's Insane]

  • • Add kiai
Thanks for the mod! :D

Edit: Teara is not going to put kiai on her diff. Its going to be like that.
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
Teara's Insane
01:48:593 (2) - this isnt snapped... check with AImod to make sure all is snapped correctly

emaal's Hard
00:43:248 (1) - end spinner one beat earlier
00:46:968 - add a half beat slider, then add a repeat
01:32:779 (3,4) - this should have the same distance as (1,2)
01:48:359 (1,2,3,4,5) - should have the same distance between each other
01:53:940 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - here you use distance inconsistency correctly, cuz in 01:54:638 starts the "ah ah ah" of the chorus, so mark a difference is good that you change ditance. Also you add new combo. So the change is easy to read. inconsistency in spacing you be set like this one. (keep in mind that)
02:16:147 - add note
02:22:194 (4,5) - are too close together

Quick advice about distance. Go to this point on your map: 02:30:216

You have this situation


Now: if you look at this. You will see a image with a few example of what is a correct beat placement.

ok you have this situation


As you can see, you have place the circle in the map, as the incorret beat placement in the example.

Remember that distance in the Chart, should be proportional as timeline.
I hope you now can find all those distance problems on your map by yourself.
Or you can just use distance snap at the time of placing a circle.
maal
maal

Lizbeth wrote:

Teara's Insane
01:48:593 (2) - this isnt snapped... check with AImod to make sure all is snapped correctly

emaal's Hard
00:43:248 (1) - end spinner one beat earlier Huh? I don't think it fits.
00:46:968 - add a half beat slider, then add a repeat ^
01:32:779 (3,4) - this should have the same distance as (1,2) Fixed
01:48:359 (1,2,3,4,5) - should have the same distance between each other Fixed
01:53:940 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - here you use distance inconsistency correctly, cuz in 01:54:638 starts the "ah ah ah" of the chorus, so mark a difference is good that you change ditance. Also you add new combo. So the change is easy to read. inconsistency in spacing you be set like this one. (keep in mind that)
02:16:147 - add note Fixed
02:22:194 (4,5) - are too close together Fixed

Quick advice about distance. Go to this point on your map: 02:30:216

You have this situation


Now: if you look at this. You will see a image with a few example of what is a correct beat placement.

ok you have this situation


As you can see, you have place the circle in the map, as the incorret beat placement in the example.

Remember that distance in the Chart, should be proportional as timeline.
I hope you now can find all those distance problems on your map by yourself.
Or you can just use distance snap at the time of placing a circle.
Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [emaal's Hard].osu
Lizbeth
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Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
delete unused .osb file and fullsubmit please

Normal
oops i find distance problem here
00:48:829 (1) - is too close to prev slid
00:44:178 (5) - same here
03:07:888 (4) - stack correctle under slider end

Easy
this should be closer to prev circle

emaal's Hard
00:42:783 (7) - space this evenly, as the other in this combo plz
01:02:316 (1,2) - too close
01:48:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it would be cool if you let distance big as prev combo it this combo too
02:15:799 (5,6,7,8) - confusing pattern, how about it you stack 7,8?

Teara's Insane
Resnap all notes! -_-
maal
maal
Let this be the last one.

Download: Jeremih - Birthday Sex (Uptempo Mix) (hybrid579) [emaal's Hard].osu
Roddie
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Topic Starter
Roddie

Lizbeth wrote:

delete unused .osb file and fullsubmit please

Normal
oops i find distance problem here
00:48:829 (1) - is too close to prev slid
00:44:178 (5) - same here
03:07:888 (4) - stack correctle under slider end

Easy
this should be closer to prev circle

emaal's Hard
00:42:783 (7) - space this evenly, as the other in this combo plz
01:02:316 (1,2) - too close
01:48:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it would be cool if you let distance big as prev combo it this combo too
02:15:799 (5,6,7,8) - confusing pattern, how about it you stack 7,8?

Teara's Insane
Resnap all notes! -_-
Done.
Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
1,731 posts
Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
Sorry, I have problems with my conection these days, and I disconect during irc modding due to that. Anyway here's my modding.

Normal
01:39:057 (1) - end this in next white tick
02:23:472 (1,2) - place this using distance snap... you can notice it should be farther

Easy
00:19:508 (5) - end in white tick, after that you have to fix green line, place it in next red tick, so sound effect, dont mess up
00:22:532 (3) - place it in next white tick (remember to adjust distance)
00:27:435 (4) - this is the one i forget type, lol Should be closer to prev slider. Make it have the same distance as 00:25:110 (1,2)
01:17:199 (1,2,3) - is to close to prev object. you could place it at the botton of the chart
01:25:105 (2) - should be closer to (1). make it have the same distance as 01:25:105 (2,3)
02:08:822 (1) - is too far. also make it have the same distance as 02:08:822 (1,2)

emaal's Hard
03:15:794 (1) - separate this bit more plz
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