Harada Hitomi - Kyoumei No True Force · forum

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-08-01T03:11:44+00:00

M4M

Grey——Just some complaints.
Black——My personal suggestions.
Bold——Highly recommended.
Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[General]

4:3的视频不能超过800*600

[Awaken's Easy]

00:03:195 (3,4) - 白恶俗easy都要stack？建议是全改成2/1 slider，包括后面的
00:15:995 (1,2) - 删了
00:45:755 (1) - remove nc
01:11:996 (1,2) - blanket

[Normal]

00:08:315 (3) - 1/1 slider感觉节奏更好点
00:13:435 (3) - ^
00:25:915 (1) - 我觉得没必要用转盘带过这里啊
00:45:275 (2) - http://puu.sh/azGQk/537cab1263.jpg
00:54:396 (2,3) - 建议还是不要尾stack
01:07:356 (2,3,4) - ^
01:19:036 (5,1) - ^
01:14:876 (2,3) - ^

[Fycho's Hard]

00:09:275 (1) - 尾巴上的finish感觉不太合适吧
00:10:555 (1) - 00:11:835 (1) - 00:13:115 (1) - ^
01:08:316 (4) - ctrl+g?
01:29:596 (2) - 加个finish?

[wkyik's Insane]

00:04:635 (2,3,4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1878268
00:47:995 (4,5) - ctrl+g？
00:57:596 (3,4) - ctrl+g

[Death Dance]

01:08:956 (2,3) - 要我肯定ctrl+g =w=
01:29:276 (2) - 最后应该加速收尾，现在这个太没霸气

我摸图一般要打一遍的，不过板子的笔美丽暂时打不了了，感觉就摸得有点水了
不过看起来还是不错

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-08-01T04:02:29+00:00

update wkyik's Insane
m酱啊我看不懂那个红色的，如果我要保留720p视频那么我需要改啥o.o？

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2014-08-01T04:20:24+00:00

mod quote

[_Crystal] wrote:
[Awaken]
00:03:195 (3,4) - 这种是不是对于easy太难了? 00:04:955 (2,3) - 同样改了
00:23:355 (3) - 歪了吧尾巴钝点应该在172|96._.爷爷你为何这么吊
00:36:155 (2) - 钝点害死强迫症
01:14:556 (1) - 在484|64加个白色的钝点? (后面需要微调)k
01:27:836 (2,1) - spacing不统一改了

Hollow Wings wrote:
Awaken's Easy
00:03:195 (3,4) - easy别放stack啊，啥这都行？后同改了
00:21:755 (3,1) - 怀疑也是要被挑，easy都overlap你们比我还丧病hhh，后同我还是先保留hhh
00:44:955 (3,1,1,2,1) - nc还是按着常规来下比较好改了
不行了，我觉得我太善良了

Minakami Yuki wrote:
[Awaken's Easy]
00:03:195 (3,4) - 白恶俗easy都要stack？建议是全改成2/1 slider，包括后面的改了你直接说删note不就行了hhh
00:15:995 (1,2) - 删了保留看看
00:45:755 (1) - remove nc fixed
01:11:996 (1,2) - blanket fixed

aaa

osu file format v13

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ArtistUnicode:原田ひとみ
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Source:精霊使いの剣舞
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Last edited by Awaken 2014-08-01T04:21:42+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-08-01T04:20:59+00:00

[_Crystal] wrote:
Hi! ~~Satellite~~ Sellenite!

[General]
这BG ok吗?感觉有字在上面不好看打算换..可是找不到好bg
怎么感觉最后还没唱完就美丽了这是我完整版截出来的..TV版的音乐简直能听

[Death Dance]
太酷了爽
00:36:635 (4,1) - 这里我建议把它俩重叠,然后后面的作一些微调,因为这个难度都是整屏的跳,这样放以为是1/2 改了
00:45:595 (3,4) - ctrl+G flow更好的柑橘这里我是连续的三角跳..
00:59:996 (4) - 336|284 for better flow 拉远了些，比这个小点距离
01:06:236 (4) - ctrl+G ~~好酷啊~~ 这个就不改了..

[Normal]
00:18:555 (5,1) - blanket? 不是，直线来的
00:25:275 (3) - 建议尾巴的钝点在396|328,看起来更加舒服的柑橘改了
00:53:916 (1,2,3) - 这三个重叠不太好看一开始我是分开的更不好看的...
01:00:796 (4,5) - 包好,如果你想做包的话滑条不想弄太弯..
01:06:876 (1,2,3,4) - 同00:53:916 (1,2,3) 后面好像有提到，我再看看
01:14:396 (1,2,3) - ^ ^

Good luck!
~~这歌真是太酷了~~

谢摸

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-08-01T04:46:03+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
m4m
Death Dance
00:10:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - 位置不变，顺序改成13254
00:44:315 (2) - 角度转大点呗，01:19:996 (2) - 同，后同
在我的阴谋带动下新生代刷分图开始走向了大ds的路线，这图rank后挂壁一dtfc又是满眼乱晃的瞎rep，gg

Normal
00:03:355 (5,6) - 建议换成1/2滑条+note
00:41:595 (5,6,7,1) - 这节奏在normal里果然还是太难了
00:45:275 (2) - 这玩意肯定会被bat挑，建议改掉
红线放的好多，柑橘对normal来说有点过，稍微用点就好啦不然柑橘像hard

Extra和normal全都改了
这番和零之使魔有什么区别？能与使魔并论我都满足了...

good luck

Thanks modding~

Sellenite

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Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-08-01T04:59:25+00:00

TheForgotten5 wrote:
From your queue ~

[Death Dance]
00:09:755 (3) - Turn the slider like this for a much better flow fix

00:20:475 (6) - Move this slider above the (5), facing slightly downwards towards 7. This can give better flow. keep，I want make some counter flow
Picture Example:
00:38:075 (1) - Remove NC I change SV so it need NC..
01:01:596 (6) - The overlap here with 01:01:916 (1) seems a bit weird, consider moving these apart for better flow. on purpose

I'm not really that good at modding Easy and Normal diff nothing serious~

Anyways, good luck with your map!

thanks~

Koiyuki

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-08-01T05:14:42+00:00

分辨率改成800*600
格式工厂就能压

我看了下RC

背景视频的分辨率不能超过1280x720。并且避免将低分辨率的视频文件转换成高分辨率视频。这样视频文件才有一个合适的体积，不会占用太多osz文件大小。

那就没问题了不用改了

好无聊过段时间送你个GD for creator's words

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lgdry15

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lgdry15 2014-08-01T05:15:16+00:00

From m4m queue~
呼~刚摸完HW的图感觉精疲力尽啊厚厚厚。。。=w=

3, 2, 1, start!!
[白姐的EZ]
感觉对于easy来讲有点难了。。。是Normal？

~~这些slider。。。都改成1/2厚不厚啊。。。特别是前奏那个地方。。。听起来好怪啊。。。个人认为easy让玩家听出来是什么拍子就行了。。。~~ 白姐改完了？
而且 00:03:195 (3,4) 这种1/4的间隔。。。orz... 后面 00:04:955 (2,3) 、00:44:795 (2,3) 、00:49:916 (2,3) 。。。orz...
01:27:356 (1,2) 、01:28:316 (1,2) - 合到一个slider里吧。。。
[Normal]
00:45:275 (2) - 嗯。。。这么多repeat。。。感觉容易断额。。。个人比较喜欢很多1个repeat的slider在一起的那种。。。
00:53:916 (1,2,3) 、01:14:396 (1,2,3) - 看着有点乱，把它们的头分开吧。。。因为不像 01:06:876 (1,2,3,4) 有明显的重音
[飞球的Hard]
Hi, Fycho! Why are your maps so perfect?! Please teach me how to map... （泪奔泪奔泪奔。。。
[柚子的Insane]
看烟花啦~ （泪奔泪奔泪奔。。。
幸好我现在能打Insane了，要不然这么美丽的烟花可就错过了呀。。。orz... orz...

01:08:316 之后的烟花亮瞎我眼，啥都看不清啦~ （泪奔泪奔泪奔。。。

我喜欢这种flying cursor的风格，赞！！
[死亡之舞]
真是“死亡之舞”啊。。。水平有限。。。我太弱了，摸不了。。。抱歉。。。orz...

真的，说实话，我已经尽力了。。。再找的话就找茬了。。。orz... orz...
这图真的很赞！加油bia！

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-08-01T05:20:58+00:00

Minakami Yuki wrote:

M4M

Grey——Just some complaints.
Black——My personal suggestions.
Bold——Highly recommended.
Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you have to fix it.

[General]
4:3的视频不能超过800*600 好像说现在批准720p啊？

[Normal]
00:08:315 (3) - 1/1 slider感觉节奏更好点与前面那个滑条对应
00:13:435 (3) - ^ 拉长音
00:25:915 (1) - 我觉得没必要用转盘带过这里啊本来我这里是很多个滑条折返的orz..还是变个转盘简单些
00:45:275 (2) - http://puu.sh/azGQk/537cab1263.jpg 这个排版有些不好，不过我换了另一个简单的节奏
00:54:396 (2,3) - 建议还是不要尾stack
01:07:356 (2,3,4) - ^ 这个分开了，其他的stack分开后我不知道怎么排版..都不怎么好看
01:19:036 (5,1) - ^
01:14:876 (2,3) - ^

[Death Dance]
01:08:956 (2,3) - 要我肯定ctrl+g =w= =w=3比较重音，我来个递进
01:29:276 (2) - 最后应该加速收尾，现在这个太没霸气改为1.5了

我摸图一般要打一遍的，不过板子的笔美丽暂时打不了了，感觉就摸得有点水了没事，谢摸~
不过看起来还是不错

thanks~

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-08-01T05:24:41+00:00

柚子的75675和白恶俗的aaa我先updated了，短时间内太多摸了..
恶俗啊你那个缺了个视频的信息，我加了进去了

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Sellenite

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Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-08-01T05:28:13+00:00

lgdry15 wrote:
From m4m queue~
呼~刚摸完HW的图感觉精疲力尽啊厚厚厚。。。=w=

3, 2, 1, start!!
[Normal]
00:45:275 (2) - 嗯。。。这么多repeat。。。感觉容易断额。。。个人比较喜欢很多1个repeat的slider在一起的那种。。。改了
00:53:916 (1,2,3) 、01:14:396 (1,2,3) - 看着有点乱，把它们的头分开吧。。。因为不像 01:06:876 (1,2,3,4) 有明显的重音最后一个拉了出来，其他都因为排版问题暂时改不了...我可能要remap这段

[死亡之舞]
真是“死亡之舞”啊。。。水平有限。。。我太弱了，摸不了。。。抱歉。。。orz...

真的，说实话，我已经尽力了。。。再找的话就找茬了。。。orz... orz...
这图真的很赞！加油bia！

谢摸~

Sellenite

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Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-08-01T05:29:25+00:00

Minakami Yuki wrote:

分辨率改成800*600
格式工厂就能压

我看了下RC
背景视频的分辨率不能超过1280x720。并且避免将低分辨率的视频文件转换成高分辨率视频。这样视频文件才有一个合适的体积，不会占用太多osz文件大小。
那就没问题了不用改了 ok

好无聊过段时间送你个GD for creator's words 好啊，直接加进去也可以~

Sellenite

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Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-08-01T06:40:31+00:00

I deleted my normal cuz it is not good..

Rizia

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Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-08-01T07:29:19+00:00

好
改剩中間那個

65342

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Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-08-01T08:10:27+00:00

up了

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-08-01T12:40:36+00:00

Hey m4m

[Death Dance]
00:24:155 (8,9) - try ctrl+G 和前面一样的逆时针
00:53:916 (1) - ^
01:00:156 (5,1) - 1建议叠在外面些的地方而不是在滑条下
01:02:716 (4,1) - ^
01:11:996 (1,3,5) - 三个都分别ctrl+G一下
01:17:116 (1,2,3,4,5) - 为啥放弃clap
01:29:276 (2) - 可以拉猎奇滑条

大体说不了什么感觉排版不够整洁 00:12:155 (3,5) - 像这种不是刻意去叠的但是却半叠不叠的这种一多图就会显得乱
感觉顺的flow太少了很多都是突然一下改变了flow的正常方向打起来总会是不顺的

[wkyik]
00:06:715 (1,2,1,2,3) - 这样叠再空拍一下不适合作为段落的开始..可以用后面00:11:835 (1,2,3,4) - 这种节奏
00:26:075 (1,2) - 分开一些对于排版会更好些
00:51:516 (1) - 换个弯的方向和后面的圈保持flow(中间的白点右移点
01:09:276 (4) - 继续错开一点因为01:09:116 (3,1) - 这里是错开的
01:15:836 (1,3) - 相同问题

[Fycho]
00:31:995 (3) - try ctrl+G cool
00:47:675 - 可以填充这里的节奏更顺一些
00:51:196 (3) - 我觉得尾部上弯会好一些
00:52:476 (3) - 太挤了
00:56:636 (1) - 中间弄个点让滑条向上拱会好些能更好和前后的滑条形成flow
00:58:876 (2,3,1) - 太远了感觉 3的位置可以重新调调
01:04:156 (5,1) - 弧线上的变距挺不顺的

~~跳再敢大些吗lol~~

[Awaken]
00:44:795 (2,3) - ez还1/2重叠爷爷干脆去了1/2
00:47:355 (2) - 提前1/2结束
00:49:916 (2,3) - ..
00:56:636 (1,2,3) - 为何放弃clap
01:04:316 (1,2,1,2,3) - ^
01:08:156 (2,3,1) - 我觉得3的位置不正常
01:27:356 (1,2,1,2) - 1/2

我觉得把1/2 的点去掉 spread就会正常了现在百蛆的标识是N啊

美丽 GL

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-08-01T13:07:27+00:00

腸胃

[General]

Audio lead-in 加1000?

[Awaken's Easy] 這EZ感覺好難。

00:13:755 (3) - 刪掉這個? 留下前面的2我覺得玩得OK。 (EZ最好與spinner空個拍)
00:15:995 (1,2) - 對Easy而言，這兩個音有點趕，刪掉看看? (就從後面鼓點起頭也好)
00:48:315 (1) - 取消NC? (怎麼突然多了一個新的NC)
00:56:636 (1) - 尾端錯過finish?
01:19:036 (3) - 前面2個頭尾都有跟到vocal，只有這個尾沒有，換一個note?
01:27:356 (1,1) - 簡單一點，尾端的note就直接跟前面滑條並在一起?

[Fycho's Hard]

Nothing.

[wkyik's Insane]

00:26:075 (1) - 感覺12的overlap容易誤認成連打，放開一點到(125|354)左右位置?
00:27:035 (3) - (141|11)? (看後面也有這種類似的pattern)
00:57:116 (2) - 開頭finish?
01:04:796 (2) - ^

[Death Dance]

00:11:195 (4,5) - 用Ctrl+g比較好些。
00:12:955 (5) - 放這好像有點扭，用Ctrl+h?
00:15:195 (4) - 聽這音樂我覺得這能大跳，可以再放遠點 (弄到2.0~2.2x左右)
00:17:275 (3) - 用Ctrl+g比較好
00:26:715 (5) - 整齊一點，移到(331|155)左右位置?
00:26:875 (6) - ^ (489|189)?
00:46:875 (4) - 疊到00:47:195 (1) 上比較好讀這裡。

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-08-01T14:09:37+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
Hey m4m

[Death Dance]
00:24:155 (8,9) - try ctrl+G 和前面一样的逆时针改了
00:53:916 (1) - ^ 这个保留，ctrl+g之后变逆了
01:00:156 (5,1) - 1建议叠在外面些的地方而不是在滑条下故意的..
01:02:716 (4,1) - ^ ^
01:11:996 (1,3,5) - 三个都分别ctrl+G一下好
01:17:116 (1,2,3,4,5) - 为啥放弃clap 不好听啊..
01:29:276 (2) - 可以拉猎奇滑条想拉可是不会..

大体说不了什么感觉排版不够整洁 00:12:155 (3,5) - 像这种不是刻意去叠的但是却半叠不叠的这种一多图就会显得乱
感觉顺的flow太少了很多都是突然一下改变了flow的正常方向打起来总会是不顺的已经自摸好多次改过flow了..突然变向有很多是故意的，看看以后还有什么要改

美丽 GL

谢摸~

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-08-01T14:12:08+00:00

smallboat wrote:
腸胃船业

[Death Dance]

00:11:195 (4,5) - 用Ctrl+g比較好些。以前是ctrl+g，现在觉得现在的比较好
00:12:955 (5) - 放這好像有點扭，用Ctrl+h? 好
00:15:195 (4) - 聽這音樂我覺得這能大跳，可以再放遠點 (弄到2.0~2.2x左右) 这个就不跳了..
00:17:275 (3) - 用Ctrl+g比較好改了
00:26:715 (5) - 整齊一點，移到(331|155)左右位置? 好
00:26:875 (6) - ^ (489|189)? 这个保留
00:46:875 (4) - 疊到00:47:195 (1) 上比較好讀這裡。好

射射船业
那个leadin估计不用..离开始打已经有一段时间了

Last edited by Sellenite 2014-08-01T15:08:36+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-08-01T14:32:41+00:00

I change to another tittle..please re download..
sorry for my spelling mistake

Last edited by Sellenite 2014-08-01T16:28:22+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

sammy711

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sammy711 2014-08-01T15:29:34+00:00

sammy's Normal

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Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-08-01T15:55:14+00:00

sammy711 wrote:

sammy's Normal

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好难啊1111,改了下颜色title和视频，真的太难了..这可能有点难度

Fycho

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Fycho 2014-08-02T01:49:57+00:00

@[_Crystal], 这里是跟鼓点，如果叠那了就显得跟人声的调调而别扭了。
@Hollow Wings，反向有点难打，后面的没出界，fine
@TheForgotten5，That jump is 1/1 snap, totally fine; Also that nc is consistent with00:58:556 (1,2,3) - ,so no need to be removed
@Minakami Yuki, 我觉得finish很适合这，还有我漏传发了个音效，你redl下; ctrl+g的没改，为了保持flow方向，否则就乱了; finish加了
@yf_bmp, 第三点尾部我偏向于向上弯，向上拱那条我觉得直的也好，最后一点弧线编剧那是故意的，为了做难点，no comment = fixed

also ramdon things fixed.

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Sellenite

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Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-08-02T02:08:16+00:00

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Koiyuki

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-08-02T16:12:22+00:00

~~http://puu.sh/aBE85/00d3b50ec9.rar~~

http://puu.sh/aCoRR/4fe30ae820.rar
这是人玩的吗
音效改好了

Last edited by Koiyuki 2014-08-03T04:06:10+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-02T16:39:22+00:00

http://puu.sh/aBFJ0/8fa9252765.rar

Sellenite

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Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-08-02T17:07:28+00:00

谢谢~~都上传了

Minakami Yuki wrote:
http://puu.sh/aBE85/00d3b50ec9.rar
这是人玩的吗

打包，变成最高难度

IamKwaN wrote:
http://puu.sh/aBFJ0/8fa9252765.rar

君妈专业normal

XinCrin

2,846 posts

Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2014-08-03T04:12:56+00:00

Hi Sellenite M4M from your queue

Awaken's Easy

Maybe you could use some Whistles since music deserves it
00:09:275 (1) Following your hitsounds pattern , the Clap from the reverse arrow should be deleted. Since the Clap should be on 00:09:595 and not in the reverse arrow.
00:11:835 (1) Here too (Sounds bad :/)
00:15:995 (1) You should remove this note or at least move it closest to the spinner since it could be too hard to play for beginner. The BPM is high and beginner players will not have time to react to this
00:28:475 (1) Following your combo patterns , this NC is totally unnecessary since you place a NC each two downbeats. So , you should remove it!
00:44:795 (2,3) Stacked objets could be very hard to read for beginner players. You should unstack them for a better gameplay for beginnners.
00:49:916 (2,3) (^)
01:08:796 (3) The spacing with the previous slider are inconsistent. Fix the spacing using grid level 4 (View > Grid Level)

Pretty solid diff!

KwaN's Normal

Maybe you could use some Whistles since music deserves it
00:21:435 (5) Move the second sliderpoint to x:260 y:80 to improve the flow with (1), It gives a better transition.Example:
SPOILER
00:26:075 (4) I enjoy more this part removing a repetition from this slider and adding a circle on 00:26:875. It makes sense in my opinion
00:29:115 (5) You are using so many lineal sliders. So, What about to make it curved?. Plays fine in my opinion
SPOILER

Fycho's Hard

00:03:355 (2) This slider doesn't follow the music/vocals properly. Maybe you could replace this slider with a 1/2 slider and add a circle on 00:03:835(x).
SPOILER
00:14:395 (1) Maybe you could try making it as a curved slider. It gives a nice blanket with (3) and improve the flow too. Example:
SPOILER
00:21:115 (2,3) The current blanket doesn't flow very good. Could you try to make it in another way?

Extra

00:16:315 (5) Maybe you could put a NC here since there are a spacing change very noticeable and rhythm change
00:29:755 (2,3) The spacing between these two objects are very close compared to the rest of the map. Maybe you could increase the spacing , but it's up to you
00:34:875 (4) Maybe you could put a NC in this circle. It gives a better sense since here finishes this part
00:38:075 (1) This NC is totally unnecessary , I don't see any reason to have it. So , you should remove it!
01:04:796 (3) What about to CTRL+G here?. It improves the flow in my opinion
01:14:636 (2) This circle is totally unnecessary. If you don't want to believe , change the playback rate to 25 % and hear the music. You'll notice that there are not any sounds. In conclusion , you could remove it but it's up to you!

Distance Spacing is inconsistent in all ways, some patterns doesn't flow very well. Some jumps feels a bit exagerated , you have to get more mods to improve this diff

Extra and Dancing in Hell cares me a bit , but other diffs are okay. Good luck with your map!

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-03T07:21:28+00:00

XinCrin

KwaN's Normal

Maybe you could use some Whistles since music deserves it yeah, added
00:21:435 (5) Move the second sliderpoint to x:260 y:80 to improve the flow with (1), It gives a better transition. nice
00:26:075 (4) I enjoy more this part removing a repetition from this slider and adding a circle on 00:26:875. It makes sense in my opinion sounds nice too
00:29:115 (5) You are using so many lineal sliders. So, What about to make it curved?. change 00:31:675 (5,1) too

Thank you *o*

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Last edited by IamKwaN 2014-08-03T07:32:05+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-08-03T07:28:11+00:00

thanks！
updated

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2014-08-03T09:55:01+00:00

Hey! M4M from your modding queue.
I only modded the Easy, Normal and Hard. The rest is too hard for me. (Sorry

)
Well, here's my mod:

Awaken's Easy:
1) 00:21:755 and 00:22:075~ Don't like this overlapping part. Rather blanket the hitcircle. Like this:

Picture

2) 00:34:235~ Make this slider similar to this slider: 00:33:595 by straightening it also.
3) 00:44:795~ Too hard for Easy? Rather do this:

Picture

4) 00:49:916~ Same here.
5) 00:51:516~ Rather use this slider to blanket this slider: 00:50:876.

Picture

6) 01:01:116 and 01:01:756~ Don't overlap. Blanketing looks much better.

Picture

7) 01:08:796 and 01:09:436~ Again, rather blanket.
8) 01:27:836 and 01:28:796~ Too hard. Do this:

Picture

9) 01:29:276~ NC here?

KwaN's Normal:
1) Check AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A)~ One DS issue.
2) 00:16:315~ Not in-line with this slider: 00:15:675. Just move this slider a bit upward.
3) 00:43:835~ Make this slider similar to this slider: 00:42:555. Something like this:

Picture

4) 01:01:756~ Rather do this?

Picture

5) 01:10:716~ Definitely fix this; DS.
6) Preview point must be snapped.

Fycho's Hard:
1) 00:19:515~ Rather do this?

Picture

2) 00:20:795~ Stack this slider's tail on this slider: 00:19:195.
3) 00:43:355~ Stack this hitcircle on this slider: 00:41:915.
4) 00:44:155~ Stack this slider better on this slider's tail: 00:43:515.
5) 01:01:756~ Also stack this hitcircle on this slider: 01:00:156.
6) 01:17:596 and 01:18:076~ Blanket?

Picture

7) 01:21:916 and 01:23:196~ Stack.

Overall, awesome mapset.
Good Luck!

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-08-03T11:11:11+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
Hi Sellenite M4M from your queue

Extra

00:16:315 (5) Maybe you could put a NC here since there are a spacing change very noticeable and rhythm change add
00:29:755 (2,3) The spacing between these two objects are very close compared to the rest of the map. Maybe you could increase the spacing , but it's up to you let me for further think...
00:34:875 (4) Maybe you could put a NC in this circle. It gives a better sense since here finishes this part add
00:38:075 (1) This NC is totally unnecessary , I don't see any reason to have it. So , you should remove it! remove
01:04:796 (3) What about to CTRL+G here?. It improves the flow in my opinion fix
01:14:636 (2) This circle is totally unnecessary. If you don't want to believe , change the playback rate to 25 % and hear the music. You'll notice that there are not any sounds. In conclusion , you could remove it but it's up to you! remove
Distance Spacing is inconsistent in all ways, some patterns doesn't flow very well. Some jumps feels a bit exagerated , you have to get more mods to improve this diff yeah I know it..still need improve *.*

Extra and Dancing in Hell cares me a bit , but other diffs are okay. Good luck with your map!

thanks for modding

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-08-03T14:27:15+00:00

I will be busy in my real life for several days，my diff still need work hard
if have any mods here，hope gders catch your eyes with mods and check them
I will check my diff as soon as I am not busy！hope I will not delay to check
thank you all

jesse1412

1,457 posts

Joined January 2010

jesse1412 2014-08-03T16:31:09+00:00

[extra]

00:02:075 (2) - PLEASE MOVE THIS RIGHT, I WILL LOVE YOU MORE.
00:36:635 (4,1,2,3) - Move the 3 notes away from the first note.
00:39:515 (3,1) - Increase spacing

[true dance]

00:07:035 (2) - These sliders aim away from the next note and it makes them hard to 300.
00:08:315 (2) - ^
00:11:515 (6) - ^
00:26:075 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I personally love these but I know a lot of people who don't so take your pick.
01:19:036 (2,3,4) - I'm not sure how to fix it but this is INCREDIBLY hard to read and should be changed.

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,733 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2014-08-03T20:20:57+00:00

From the old mod request

General
- the video in KwaN's Normal is not added yet.

Awaken's Easy
00:14:395 (1,1) - this is too short. I suggest you use slider on 00:14:395 (1) - instead
and use spinner on around 00:15:995 (1,2) - instead. Spinner should sound ok with that part more than having very fast appearing notes like this.

SPOILER

00:47:355 (2) - try this by ending a slider earlier. It should sound better with the music. and fix the slider on 00:48:315 (1) - too (start at 00:48:155 (1) - instead)
00:37:435 (1) - why does this have 2 exact green lines on the same position? remove one

SPOILER

00:48:956 (1,2,3) - they are following differently in the set. It is following vocal on 00:49:916 (2,3) - so 00:50:876 (4) - must be placed at 00:50:716 to follow vocal as well, but it doesn't.
Follow this screenshot or make it simple like you did in the rest of this kiai.

SPOILER

KwaN's Normal
AR5 should play fine on this diff. You use kind of fast sliders which will be more appropriate with the higher AR.
00:13:915 (3,1) - this will sound better and I think it doesn't ruin what you want to make it play that much. The current 00:14:395 (1) - is off sounded at the tail.

SPOILER

01:10:076 (2,3) - what is this spacing?

Fycho's Hard
00:15:835 (2) - clap tail for more consistent sound like you set on 00:26:075 (2) -

wkyik's Insane
can you reduce AR to 8.4 ~ 8.7 please? AR 9 on this is too fast.
01:19:036 (1,2,3,1) - they suddenly go into 1/4 with similar spacings to the 1/2 spacings on other parts. This is shocking to be a jump. You should lower spacings in between them.

Extra
00:47:675 (1,2,3) - maybe spacings should be lowered to a short jump instead, and make this 00:48:155 (1,2,3,4,5) - less large jump?
I think it's too big jump for a part before the kiai starts like this.
01:09:756 (2,3) - swap rhythms here. It will follow vocal greatly with the jump that feels the same as 01:11:036 (1,2) -

SPOILER

01:14:716 (2,3,4) - same as above, you can adjust your notes' position as you want. The flow will be doing its job with this rhythm.

SPOILER

01:23:516 (1) - make this jump is better. fun and follow music

SPOILER

True Dance
00:06:715 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - confusing
00:26:075 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - not sure if something like this is rankable when some map like this was unranked due to 1/8 sliders that made in this fashion.
But if you want to keep them, can you lower spacings? like
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/149749 in Another diff
00:09:697 (1,2,3,4) -
It's already difficult enough to play on low spacings. Larger spacings in current way is too much for this map.
01:19:036 (2,3,4) - hard to read imo

Good luck

Gaia

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Joined May 2013

Gaia 2014-08-03T22:12:28+00:00

hi~
GD 好多 o_o 希望會講中文的我都有搞對還是你們都會講 O_O

[Awaken's Easy]
00:14:395 (1,1,2) - 對新手來說好像不夠時間反應, 把 (1) 拿掉比較好
00:24:635 (1,2) - 自覺得連兩 reverse 難度不適合 easy
00:48:155 (1) - 第一個note空著感覺怪怪的 http://puu.sh/aDrmm/4513b4e261.jpg
00:56:636 (1,2,3) - 這裡的hitsound比其他地方的clap小聲好多
00:59:196 (1) - finish 可大聲點
01:05:596 (2) - 01:08:156 (2) - 不疊有點怪

這diff玩起來好玩但有很多flow break 跟 overlap, 感覺不像 easy (我通常是從hard開始才會flow brean + overlap)

[KwaN's Normal]
00:08:795 (4) - 00:11:355 (3) - 00:13:915 (3) - listening to the music I'm finding this extra note is unneccessary and tbh is a bit hard for normal anyways
01:10:076 (2,3) - big jump in normal?? nono

yeah nice diff (y)

[Fycho's Hard]
00:19:195 (3) - 00:20:795 (1) - 疊?
00:41:915 (3) - 00:43:355 (4) - ^
01:00:156 (5) - 01:01:756 (1) - 01:02:396 (3) - ^
01:07:836 (3) - 在灣一點比較好看imo
01:21:916 (3) - 01:23:196 (3) - 疊
01:24:636 (4) - (276,176) o-o

sugoi sugoi

[wkyik's Insane]
00:14:395 (1,2,3) - 滑條尾沒對其
00:27:035 (3) - imo 這不該疊
00:36:955 (1,2,3,1) - 之前有個小pause 可能有人會早點, 放遠一點比較好?
01:08:316 (3,4,5) - 跳已經夠難了還加triple :s imo 把(4)去掉更好 (聽音樂好像也不合適?)
01:11:676 (5) - 01:12:796 (3) - 01:14:236 (6) - 疊?
01:19:276 (2,3,1) - 有點太遠

[Extra]
01:01:596 (6,1) - 01:02:716 (4,1) - 這種pattern個人不喜歡 :l
其實很不錯, 沒啥好說的
要pass是可以拉,但我就一堆miss

SPOILER

notsureifIshouldgivethereplayokfinehere

[True Dance]
00:02:875 (1,2) - 尾沒疊好 (x 不同)
00:08:315 (2) - 00:08:955 (4) - 從0.75x跳到1.5x SV 太大? 但是Extra 所以不確定 o-o

嗯很好玩但我pass不了因為 00:26:075 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 我很恨kicksliders但只是我拉, 其他人因該沒問題
還有你的stream形狀看起來蠻難的

ok good luck! had fun modding and watching this anime <3
how2star ok takie pls

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-08-04T04:04:39+00:00

jesus1412

jesus1412 wrote:
[true dance]

00:07:035 (2) - These sliders aim away from the next note and it makes them hard to 300.
00:08:315 (2) - ^
00:11:515 (6) - ^ That's fine, I have already let some players to play this~
00:26:075 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I personally love these but I know a lot of people who don't so take your pick. according to frosty's mod, change 1/8 to 1/16
01:19:036 (2,3,4) - I'm not sure how to fix it but this is INCREDIBLY hard to read and should be changed. Hmm, but I also have no idea now, currently keep it

frosty

Frostmourne wrote:
True Dance
00:06:715 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - confusing well
00:26:075 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - not sure if something like this is rankable when some map like this was unranked due to 1/8 sliders that made in this fashion.
But if you want to keep them, can you lower spacings? like
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/149749 in Another diff not lower spacing but change to 1/16 =w=
00:09:697 (1,2,3,4) -
It's already difficult enough to play on low spacings. Larger spacings in current way is too much for this map. it's fine imo and I have found some players to play this >.<
01:19:036 (2,3,4) - hard to read imo hmm, considering about how to change it...

Good luck

Gaia

Gaia wrote:
[True Dance]
00:02:875 (1,2) - 尾沒疊好 (x 不同) 就差1像素。。改了
00:08:315 (2) - 00:08:955 (4) - 從0.75x跳到1.5x SV 太大? 但是Extra 所以不確定 o-o fine

嗯很好玩但我pass不了因為 00:26:075 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 我很恨kicksliders但只是我拉, 其他人因該沒問題
還有你的stream形狀看起來蠻難的

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48075
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 4.499999

[Metadata]
Title:Kyoumei no True Force (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:共鳴のTrue Force (TV Size)
Artist:Harada Hitomi
ArtistUnicode:原田ひとみ
Creator:Sellenite
Version:True Dance
Source:精霊使いの剣舞
Tags:Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance Kamito Kazehaya Claire Rouge Fianna Ray Ordesia Ellis Fahrengart Rinslet Laurenfrost Terminus Est Restia Awaken Kawaiwkyik Fycho Minakami Yuki IamKwaN
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IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-08-04T06:11:45+00:00

-Nya-

KwaN's Normal:
1) Check AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A)~ One DS issue. yeah, my bad.
2) 00:16:315~ Not in-line with this slider: 00:15:675. Just move this slider a bit upward. no need to make them in-line
3) 00:43:835~ Make this slider similar to this slider: 00:42:555. I prefer mine.
4) 01:01:756~ Rather do this? nope
5) 01:10:716~ Definitely fix this; DS. fixed
6) Preview point must be snapped. It's snapped.

Frostmourne

KwaN's Normal
AR5 should play fine on this diff. You use kind of fast sliders which will be more appropriate with the higher AR. how about AR4.5?
00:13:915 (3,1) - this will sound better and I think it doesn't ruin what you want to make it play that much. The current 00:14:395 (1) - is off sounded at the tail. okie
01:10:076 (2,3) - what is this spacing? it's definitely my bad
Also added video.

Gaia

[KwaN's Normal]
00:08:795 (4) - 00:11:355 (3) - 00:13:915 (3) - listening to the music I'm finding this extra note is unneccessary and tbh is a bit hard for normal anyways not at all as u can see Easy doesn't look like an Easy but i have fixed the last one previously
01:10:076 (2,3) - big jump in normal?? nono my bad. i have said this three times omg
yeah nice diff (y) thanks (y)

Thank you all modders.

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TitleUnicode:共鳴のTrue Force (TV Size)
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Ciyus Miapah

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Ciyus Miapah 2014-08-04T09:56:58+00:00

whoa, this is my first R-Mod xD

[True dance]
gg map

im noob

00:07:035 (2) - try this one, cause the slider looks overlap i think http://puu.sh/aE7bD/96ad46e477.jpg
00:07:995 (1,2) - raise some distance in beetween this sliders (i prefer 4x) it will be better i think http://puu.sh/aE7dp/94356a0f3c.jpg
00:09:595 (2,3) - how about this, a far jumping trick http://puu.sh/aE7j5/5bbffd04de.jpg ( yea im just following like this 00:11:195 (3) - )
00:26:075 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - holy fuck, i think this is unrelated slider jump, cause 1/8 i think its bad for that jump, just use 1/16, it will be better
00:46:555 (2,3) - reduce distance in here pls, cause its so hard to hit with my mouse, try 4.25x or 4.30x jump
00:53:116 (5) - newcombo this, it have some straight stream pattern so its okay.
00:53:436 (9) - ^ same, i prefer some newcombo in white line or i think you can ignore NC 00:53:116 (5) - and NC this one
00:56:476 (7,1) - oh god.... how about like this in 00:56:636 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/aE7Tk/91f7ed8e12.jpg cause http://puu.sh/aE7Q9/382a5ad903.png
01:01:596 (5,6,7) - some excessive jump pls
01:13:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - try this one http://puu.sh/aE82S/57123f7a13.jpg
01:18:076 (5) - out of my monitor, its unrankable things i think http://puu.sh/aE84f/d30293cff4.jpg

[Extra]
its good, but i think some slider is hard to reach = slider break xD. this is my firstplay, but i think your map has good flow

ZZZZ

00:01:595 (1) - straight slider intro, and why sudden jump??, try this better i think http://puu.sh/aE8r3/290b1b52ef.jpg
00:36:955 (1,2,3) - i think its okay if you change this to stream, pay attention to sound please, it good sound for streaming
00:56:636 (1,2,3) - i call it thunder sliders http://puu.sh/aE8DK/909ad3b67d.jpg
01:05:916 (2,3,4) - lol, i think its so funny, you put 2 hitsound in 2 and 3 but no sound in 4? i think circle 2 should be swapped to 4 like this http://puu.sh/aE8LF/dd681c0841.jpg

btw why the kiai on each map is different???

okay see ya, i dont have much time again to eat salad xD

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-08-04T13:36:31+00:00

jesus1412 wrote:
[extra]

00:02:075 (2) - PLEASE MOVE THIS RIGHT, I WILL LOVE YOU MORE. CHANGED PATTERN NOW,I HAVED FELL IN LOVE WITH YOU
00:36:635 (4,1,2,3) - Move the 3 notes away from the first note. change pattern，too
00:39:515 (3,1) - Increase spacing done

thank you~~

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