1. Deagle God (2,49 stars, 54 notes)
2. Newbie (1,15 stars, 36 notes)
3. Pub Hero (1,81 stars, 57 notes)

1. 00:15:615 (1) - Remove NC
2. 00:24:052 (1) - ^
3. 00:28:740 (1) - ^
4. 00:32:021 (2) - I feel like this curve is a bit too sharp, maybe make it less curvy or w/e
5. 00:31:084 (1) - Oh btw remove NC

1. 00:07:646 (6) - Maybe move this to 343:332 so that it is more inline with the whole pattern thing you have going on. Then adjust 00:08:584 (1) - 's spacing
2. 00:08:584 (1,2) - Check spacing
3. 00:10:459 (5,6) - Make this a perfect blanket. You can accomplish this by using 6's approach circle
4. 00:13:740 (1) - Make this curve less harsh
5. 00:15:615 (1,2) - Probably best to unstack these, you didn't have stacks pretty much anywhere else so players will be caught off card trying to read this. Plus the slow bpm will make it harder to read too
6. 00:30:615 (4) - Remove NC
7. 00:31:084 (5) - NC here

1. 00:22:646 (5,7) - Avoid 5's overlap with 7's slider track, or at least make it look intentional

Lust wrote:

1. 00:22:646 (5,7) - Avoid 5's overlap with 7's slider track, or at least make it look intentional

CDFA wrote:

Moo0000mves like Jaegermeister

This is actually a really hard map to mod since, knowing how the map plays, everything is done super articulately with the music that is a bit lacking in terms of rhythmic depth. So I'm going to be unbelievably nitpicky.

Hard:
00:15:615 (1,2) - This is the only pattern that's really not SUPER coherent . It's 2 curves, but they're not exactly connected like in the other patterns. Maybe change, but then (2) flows nicely into (3), so eh I tweaked them a bit. Should look much better now.

Normal:
00:11:396 (6) - Would like to see these parallel Donez.

Easy:
00:07:646 (3) - The way this slider is going, I'd want to flow more leftward, but i have to kind of jerk to the right (jerk in terms of an Easy mode player) Didn't quite catch this one. Hälp!
00:09:052 (4) - NC?
00:15:615 (5) - NC
00:24:052 (4) - NC
00:30:615 (6) - NC Having NCs in these spots would make combos indifferent than in other diffs. I'm thinking about it, but I need more opinions for these since those NCs has been targeted several times.

Yay ;w;.

long mlg maps are for scrubs
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inverness wrote:

scope cursor best cursor do not compare s1ck

cursor sprites could go up to 2048x2048, fyi
just incase you want to put the gun farther I'll think about it
how do you even spin with these cursorset wtf
also imo the 2 reticles in cursor.png just doesn't look good maybe try to erase them and see if that looks better there are two reticles because cursor and cursormiddle (cursormiddle being the gun) and without cursormiddle gun starts spinning like shit

the counter terrorist win sprite is kinda too big maybe scale it smaller? made it a bit smaller

try offset 4844 sounds better

scrub
HP4 ples it already is? :OOO
00:16:552 (6) - NC? sure
00:10:459 (5,1) - spacing is slightly a bit too close try to move (1) higher a bit I tried, but it may look a bit funky now
00:22:646 (3,4) - blanket pl0x http://puu.sh/aeUm3/ecc6d9b538.jpg Again, I tried but it may be ifsjdafioajga, very hard spot to do without fucking everything up - who invented that term anyway
00:31:084 (7) - NC k

pubic hero
00:16:084 (2,5) - blanket pls? got it... I think

SCRIM pleb
AR9 pls because fast sliders need more opinions on this, because we are talking about H4RD difficulty and not insane desu nee
00:23:584 (7) - could you please rotate -15deg that'll look 1007% cooler done
00:33:427 (7,8,9) - jump or something maybe?!?! for more variations yknow not 100% absolute sure, I'll check it if people agree with this

long mlg maps are for scrubs
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Kyubey wrote:

Hi, sorry, forgot to mod it yesterday.
since this map is pretty short, and there's almost nothing to mod, i'll do mostly nazi mod
[General]
those hitsounds are really too loud, reduce the volume please, i can't hear the music 100% -> 70%
maybe add counter strike to the tags? added
i don't know if it allowed to use 2 combo colors, but i think BATs will give the answer fun fact: colors are based off team colors (CT: blue T: red)
and hitsounds. yes i understand that they fits, but... without other hitsounds, only normal hits.. maybe add some different shots for claps? deagle does not have multiple shot sound files and it would be silly to hear AWP when you are firing a deagle
and i'd suggest to make volume fading on the spinner Is volume fading something where you add multiple timings with volume going lower and lower?
[easy]
you made NC's on every 2nd big white tick on the normal and hard, maybe do it here too? I seriously have no idea anymore about my combos due all these NC here suggestions, added one NC I spotted
00:04:834 (1) - not snapped fixd
00:06:250 (2,3) - how about making blanket? I am not sure if I can do that, my scrubiness is too high for this action (spacing is giving me trouble)
00:11:875 (1,2) - and here. and making 00:14:687 (4) - this curve ^, how2map
00:31:094 (1,2) - how about making flow like this?

SPOILER

kinda got it, the last slider is in pretty bad spot now tho IMO, also dem cat ears
[normal]
00:04:834 (1) - not snapped fixd
00:10:469 (5,6) - looks bad, how about good blanket? placed the 6 a bit better
00:21:719 (5) - and here too tweaked it a bit
00:23:594 (7,2) - this little overlap looks bad too I think I got it fixed
00:25:000 (3,4,5) - i would make blanket it with 00:25:937 (6) - this how do I blanket these hälp
00:27:344 (1,2,3) - straight snaped slider with placed circles like this looks like 2007 mapping, make it curve? oi, nothing wrong with 2007! fixed anyway
00:29:219 (5,6,7) - and i would curve this too for better flow donez
[hard]
00:04:834 (1) - unsnapped fixd
00:10:000 (2) - maybe make 3 cirles like 00:25:000 (2,3,4) - here? I'm mapping this based on the video, and no shot is being fired at 00:10:469
00:33:437 (7,8,9) - maybe stack them for better looking ending? jumps vs stacks... this will be a very tough choice to do

Maeglwn wrote:

hello

[General]

1. consider a 3rd combo color, probably gray or something like that because I understand the T/CT reference, but you really should have at least 3 in there, and gray would suit that I added the third combo color, but I am not sure if the gray I chose is that good
2. the mp3 quality probably could still be improved some (although the last one improved it a bunch) this feels SO muffled when listening to it, and I really love this song so if someone can give me high quality mp3 for this song, I'll use it
3. if you haven't already, make sure your diff names are rankable, I personally think they are, but BATs might not think so well, at least they are more rankable than the previous ones!
4. the "counter terrorists win" hitsound is EXTREMELY loud imo 70% -> 50% not sure if that is enough but will lower it more if needed

[Newbie]

1. 00:04:834 (1) - this is unsnapped fixd
2. 00:04:834 (1,2) - consider blanketing these 2, would look really good. if not, at least put them on the same y coordinate I am so fucking terrible at doing blankets with such low allowed space, so I just put them in the same y coordinate
3. 00:07:656 (3) - same thing here, blanketing off of 2 would look really nice in this case. you would just have to rotate the next few notes a bit how2map
4. 00:22:656 (3,4) - might as well just fully blanket this, cause you're basically there, just need to move it a bit would also make the flow to the next note better I tried, may look weird now
5. 00:25:000 (5,6) - flow is a bit awkward here - 5 says go to the right, 6 says screw that I'm down here and both sliders are making imaginary frowny faces I changed the direction of that repeat slider a bit, but not sure if it's way too high now
6. 00:34:375 - this beat feels really awkward not being mapped. like super awkward, I understand there's no deagle shot, but it would make the transition to the spinner one hell of a lot better consider it at least I'll think about it, but if I add anything in there it will not be a deagle shot. It just won't be. Possibly a reload sound?

[Public Hero]

1. would heavily suggest CS3 instead of 4 here cause it looks and plays like a normal, and the spacing between the notes as is with 4 looks really weird CS4 normals are super cool though!! But I prefer CS7 insanes
2. 00:04:834 (1) - this object is not snapped fixed
3. 00:15:625 (1,2) - this would feel better going the other way around, so 2 would be were 4 is, and 4 would be where 2 is. flow would be better this way and then, well, flip the slider around so it's going the other way fixed
4. 00:27:344 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - why not make these 2 consistent with each other? same beat as each other , you could even blanket the sliders off each other not sure if I can make the blanket, but at least I made those two look very similar
5. 00:34:375 - same from previous

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[Deagle God]

1. your SV to DS ratio is all over the place in this diff, but it's probably not a big a deal enough to warrant changing. up to you, idk. SV to DS ratio?
2. I also don't really agree with CS5, but then again, I never agree with CS5 hard diffs rarely are just 1/1s and 1/2s, so I believe CS5 is a good way to fix that problem
3. 00:04:834 (1) - this object is once again, not snapped ;D should be fixed now
4. 00:08:594 (1,2) - attempting to blanket these would make it look a lot better imo too far, can't do that
5. 00:22:656 (5,7) - this overlap can probably be avoided in some way fixed
6. 00:34:375 - same from previous

Pinball hockey, tennis, ping pong Play them Video Games

overall, pretty clean. the style I'm not that huge of a fan of, but this song is ridiculously good, and I'll get over the small circles and style for this to get ranked ;D good luck yo

1. not ncessary but you might as well add fragmovie to the tags
2. Nothing that bothers me but I am a bit afraid that some BAT might point out that one

   You must use hitsounds. Without these, things get way too monotonous as you are throwing away one of the main elements of variation present in mapping. You don't need to place them on every note (and are discouraged from doing so), but they must at least be frequently heard when playing.

   I don't really think it matters here since the map is A) short and B) the gunshots are the hitsounds but well ... knowing how there can be discussions about anything I mention it anyway lol. I don't consider the voice hitsound after the spinner as a real hitsound , like I said though. This shouldn't matter for this map anyway.
3. I could also question if this map is still in the wanted area for younger audience or if you have to mark this map as +18 (I don't care for that either, I mention it anyway)
4. The diff names are fine imo now. Newbie -> Hero -> God is an understandable pattern for progression imo.
5. Preview point is unsnapped in all diffs
6. 00:04:834 (1) - unsnapped, all diffs
7. 00:38:582 - unsnapped green line (those don't matter that much imo though)
8. 00:34:375 - I actually miss a note in all diffs here but I know that the current way of hitsounds don't really fit with this spot ...
9. I get +7ms offset for this map ... not too sure about that since I am no timing expert but it works for me.

1. A real Deagle God could play this CS 6 you know
2. 00:14:687 (7,8,9) - Dunno, I would prefer those three to have the same angle as 00:12:812 (2,3,4) -
3. 00:27:812 (2,3) - same goes for those two with 00:29:687 (6,7) - . I am sure you can argue that you do this because it would look to symmetrical or linear but I say that symmetry is kind of important when there isn't that much depth of rhythm in this mapset
4. Not too sure about the NCs. It would be more consistant when they all start on the downbeats.
   00:23:594 (7,1) - / 00:30:625 (1,2) - are the only ones where I would swap the NCs. I can see the reason for 00:30:625 (1,2) - (pattern wise) but 00:23:594 (7,1) - is debateable. I think the NC swap would be better here, because that Oh yeah kind of leads in the upcoming voice for 00:24:531 (1) - already instead of finishing the previous combo.

1. Why does this map have more new combos than Deagle God? I can understand why there are less in Newbie, due to the longer sliders and so on (even though I don't agree with that 100% either) but this diff should have just as many NCs as Deagle God. Consistency is always nice in a tidy mapset
   00:29:219 (1) - this is the new combo that is not in Deagle God. Debatable like everything else, since it is again pattern related. But if it is pattern related you could do the same in Deagle God too ... even though I don't agree with the overall lenght of all combos then in the map really anymore but eh, new combos are not that big of a deal for most people anyway
2. 00:23:594 (7,1) - you could swap the NC here but I see that it is pattern related instead of rhythm wise (which btw isn't a noticeable difference anyway)
3. 00:08:594 (1,2,3,4,5) - not worth mentioning really but eh. All patterns in the whole spread look very tidy and well designed but this one is a bit off in symmetry and design, because the (1,2,3,4) are not symmetrical and (5) is not in the middle of the four previous circles either. But you don't really notice that while playing anyway I guess (except the symmetry of (1,2,3,4).

1. I could probably again just talk about NCs here but I won't lol this diff is fine

bomber34 wrote:

[General]

1. not ncessary but you might as well add fragmovie to the tags
2. Nothing that bothers me but I am a bit afraid that some BAT might point out that one

   You must use hitsounds. Without these, things get way too monotonous as you are throwing away one of the main elements of variation present in mapping. You don't need to place them on every note (and are discouraged from doing so), but they must at least be frequently heard when playing.

   I don't really think it matters here since the map is A) short and B) the gunshots are the hitsounds but well ... knowing how there can be discussions about anything I mention it anyway lol. I don't consider the voice hitsound after the spinner as a real hitsound , like I said though. This shouldn't matter for this map anyway. I was suggested that a shell drop sfx could be added to support the deagle shots (slider ticks), but that brings a new problem; what about the non-sliders? Yeah, you could SB those, but then if you miss and don't fire, you can still hear the shell drop. aaaaaaaaaaa
3. I could also question if this map is still in the wanted area for younger audience or if you have to mark this map as +18 (I don't care for that either, I mention it anyway) doubt it
4. The diff names are fine imo now. Newbie -> Hero -> God is an understandable pattern for progression imo.
5. Preview point is unsnapped in all diffs Fixed
6. 00:04:834 (1) - unsnapped, all diffs I actually realized that I was working on the SPACING instead of SNAPPING when people said about it. I am a real retard. Fixed.
7. 00:38:582 - unsnapped green line (those don't matter that much imo though) Fixed
8. 00:34:375 - I actually miss a note in all diffs here but I know that the current way of hitsounds don't really fit with this spot ... as I said in Maeglwn's mod post, I will try and get some sort of reload sound in it (but does it fit?)
9. I get +7ms offset for this map ... not too sure about that since I am no timing expert but it works for me. Before I'll work on this, I need that better mp3.

[Deagle God]

1. A real Deagle God could play this CS 6 you know CS10 or nothing
2. 00:14:687 (7,8,9) - Dunno, I would prefer those three to have the same angle as 00:12:812 (2,3,4) - fixed
3. 00:27:812 (2,3) - same goes for those two with 00:29:687 (6,7) - . I am sure you can argue that you do this because it would look to symmetrical or linear but I say that symmetry is kind of important when there isn't that much depth of rhythm in this mapset fixed
4. Not too sure about the NCs. It would be more consistant when they all start on the downbeats.
   00:23:594 (7,1) - / 00:30:625 (1,2) - are the only ones where I would swap the NCs. I can see the reason for 00:30:625 (1,2) - (pattern wise) but 00:23:594 (7,1) - is debateable. I think the NC swap would be better here, because that Oh yeah kind of leads in the upcoming voice for 00:24:531 (1) - already instead of finishing the previous combo. fixed, COMBO RUMBBLEEEEEE

[Public Hero]

1. Why does this map have more new combos than Deagle God? I can understand why there are less in Newbie, due to the longer sliders and so on (even though I don't agree with that 100% either) but this diff should have just as many NCs as Deagle God. Consistency is always nice in a tidy mapset
   00:29:219 (1) - this is the new combo that is not in Deagle God. Debatable like everything else, since it is again pattern related. But if it is pattern related you could do the same in Deagle God too ... even though I don't agree with the overall lenght of all combos then in the map really anymore but eh, new combos are not that big of a deal for most people anyway fixed
2. 00:23:594 (7,1) - you could swap the NC here but I see that it is pattern related instead of rhythm wise (which btw isn't a noticeable difference anyway) fixed
3. 00:08:594 (1,2,3,4,5) - not worth mentioning really but eh. All patterns in the whole spread look very tidy and well designed but this one is a bit off in symmetry and design, because the (1,2,3,4) are not symmetrical and (5) is not in the middle of the four previous circles either. But you don't really notice that while playing anyway I guess (except the symmetry of (1,2,3,4). I see what you are going after this, but I think the current pattern is pretty cool already despite the lack of symmetry; but I moved 4 by few grids.

[Newbie]

1. I could probably again just talk about NCs here but I won't lol this diff is fine awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww yeahhhhhhhhhhh

Yeah sorry for this weird mod post. There isn't so much worthy to critic here so I got a bit nazi I guess :/ I really hope to see this mapset ranked because it managed to put a smile on my face. Take a star thanks for the star (and thanks for modding)

Garven wrote:

Did the mp3 change? I'm hitting super late. Try offset 4874.